Romance Three Girls of My Life

[LightingEel]

abhi nahi hai to kya hua, Atharva ushe bana dega guru veda aur ranjan ke sath milke wrong ko ab right karega atharva..... upor se ghar jamayi bhi to hai wo karan naik hope atharva uska patta hi saaf kar de is story se hi

Aap ne thik kaha miss par Atharva ko toda aur bhari hona padega karan naik ke aur Jafar ke liye ab dekhte hai kaise handle karega Atharva.

 

[ragish7357]

Congrats for 100 pages sgp sir

 

[Moon Light]

For 100 Pages... ​

 

[The_Punisher]

for 100 pages
Iss khushi mai aaj 2 update chhap dallo

 

[Moon Light]

sippy अपडेट....

 

[Yug Purush]

for 100 pages
Iss khushi mai aaj 2 update chhap dallo

Ek hee update ko 2 baar padhne ka... Latest technology hai, is thread se baahar nahi jaani chahiye

abhi nahi hai to kya hua, Atharva ushe bana dega guru veda aur ranjan ke sath milke wrong ko ab right karega atharva..... upor se ghar jamayi bhi to hai wo karan naik hope atharva uska patta hi saaf kar de is story se hi

Naina baki sab toh thik hai par ye karan naik bhikhmanga kabse ban gaya
jahan tak mujhe yaad hai sanjana ke maa ke hospital ka sara kharcha wohi karta hai aur issi liye sanjana bhi usse dar dar kar reheti hai
Correct me if I'm wrong

Dusara sense tha bhikmanga kahne ka... Shayad...

" तु जा अथर्व , ऐश कर ! " संजना के इन शब्दों से उसकी फ्रस्ट्रेशन झलकती थी । निराशा और दर्द झलकती थी ।
जा अथर्व , रिया के साथ खुश रह । उसके बोलने का शायद यही मतलब था । अथर्व अठारह साल का होनहार और बेफिक्र नौजवान है । उसे अपनी काबिलियत पर भरोसा है, किसी भी बात को कई एंगल से सोचने की कला है पर कुछ चीजें ऐसी है जिनमें वो शून्य के बराबर है ।
संजना और रिया रोज भी तो लगभग उसी के उम्र की होगी । जब वो दोनों इन मामलों में परिपक्व दिखाई देती है तो अथर्व क्यों नहीं ?

Sab ek hee chij me maahir nahi ho sakte.. Atharva kuch aur karne me maahir hai aur Sanajana kisi aur field me.. Aur Riya bhi jyada samajh dar nahi hai.. Warna ek baar daru pikar atharva ke call karne se kitna bhayankar naraj hui thi

Bhai tu gravity dekh leta fir to suside kar leta ki iss movie ko kaise Oscar mil gaya... Uss se achha to Aashiqui 2 ko award mil jata...

Dost meri baat mano pahle padhne ka dayra badhao.... "Loner" ek aisi kahani thi jo chand 40 se 50 story ke bich participate hone wali kahani nahi thi...

Among 1000 of super best quality stories "Loner" position will remain same...

Thanks bhai, bahut badi baat kah di

संजना की हालत देखी नही जा रही...
कितना दुख है उसकी जिंदगी में...!!!

वंही रिया अभी सबसे ज्यादा खुश इंसान नजर आ रही धरती पर

नैक साहेब तो बड़ा गुस्से में थे... वैसे इस गुस्से का अथर्व को फायदा हुआ चाहिए क्योंकि संजना उसपर शक कर रही थी कि उसने बताया है जफर के बारे में नैक को, पर अब शायद उसे लगे अथर्व ने नही बताया होगा... क्योंकि नैक अब भी उससे गुस्सा है...

btw सुनैना मैम कंहा हैं
उनका जिक्र तो आना ही बंद हो गया,
न वो घर पर होती हैं न हॉस्पिटल में ??

Dukh jaruri hai.. Kyn pahle propose nahi ki bhatti ko

yahich to Yug Purush bhai ka kamal hai....................................

Ju apna kamal kab dikhaoge

Khair jivan ka satya hai ki ek jagah se dusri jagah jane ke liye ek ko chodna padta hai ya kuch pane ke liye kuch khona padta hai wo same consept yaha hai sanjana wale matter ne par samjh nahi aa raha jaisa ki story me bataya hai uss hisab se Atharva ko samjhana cahiye tha sanjana ke issare itna dumb nahi ho sakta hai wo khair jo bhi ho at last me pata chal hi jayega aur ye jo harkat thi Jafar ke bare wali ye full to snitching thi wo itna matlabi kaise ho sakta hai yaar

Next update me time travel karke thoda try kiya hai ki aisa kyun hua

Itna chhota update aur usme bhi ye past future wala chutiyapa
Aur ye lawde Karan naik ki problem kya hai kudh toh sahi maal set kar liya hai lekin dusro ki kushi dekhi nahi jati
To iss wajah se Sanjana Atharva ke life se chali gayi lagta hai
Kair lagta hai Atharva aur riya ki love life ki shurwat ho chuki hai dekhte hai agey kya hota hai
for the next update

Still I got ur review.. I see this as a win..

Feelings to bohat strong hai Silky ke liye Atharva ke dil me bus show nahi karwa pata theek se atharva

Fir silky ko krna chahiye naa

Waise to ye update parh ker pura sar chakra gaya ek line ko 3 baar repeat ker ke parha hai pura update lekin phir bhi utna sahi se na samajh saka really a great update much appreciated work dailouge to funny hote he hai lekin jis tarha ki situtaion create ker ke ap dailouge use karte ho mind blowing bohat mushkil hota hai funny storie me emotions dikhana lekin ap us me bhi kamal kar gye

Bas jaha lagta hai scene comedy se thoda emotional ho sakta hai.. Main dialogue pel deta hoon.. Warna kahi aur to mauka hee nahi lagta.

इस अपडेट के अनुसार भी संजना के चेहरे के भाव वही कह रहे हैं जो मैं शुरू से कहता आया हूं । उदासी , गुस्सा और डर का मिश्रण है उसके भावों में ।
शायद उदासी अथर्व के लिए है जो वो उसे समझ नहीं पा रहा है । गुस्सा भी उसी के लिए है क्योंकि वो बिल्कुल अनाड़ी जैसे व्यवहार कर रहा है । डर जीजा के प्रति है क्योंकि वो और उसकी मां अपनी बहन और जीजा पर आश्रित है और इसके अलावा जीजा का रवैया भी थोड़ा तानासाही जैसा है ।

Kya explain kiya hai

P.S. 1 & P.S. 2 तो लगता है मेरे लिए था और P.S. 3 नैना जी के लिए ।

Wo kya hai ki kayi readers replies wagerah miss kr dete hai.. Lekin sawal unke man me bhi rahte isliye P. s. Bana ke daal diya.. Wo kya hai concept clear rahna chahiye

jaan se maar hi de to accha hi hota na.. faida to sanjana aur atharva ka hi hota sanjana aur atharva ka rasta saaf

Ye baat sahi hai... Aadhi tension hee door ho jati fir

nice update ..to sanjana hi thi ghar pe aur darwaja pitne ki style se wo samajh gayi ki atharva hi aaya hai ..

sanjana kuch jyada hi udaas hai aisa lagta hai .

sanjana darwaja band karti usse pehle apni theory istemal karke wo scene badal diya chocolate dekar .

atharva ke mooh se nikalte huye bach gaya ki usne hi jafar ke baare me tip di thi karan ko ..
par sanjana ne guess kar hi liya ..

Jaroor ju ne chugli ki hogi aur sanjana ko bata diya

अभिइच शुरू हुआ है चक्रव्यूह बातों का...
और सबके रिएक्शन बता रहे हैं कितना ध्यान से पढ़ते हैं सब
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खुशी खुशी में इंसान अक्सर सच बोल ही देता है,
फिर उसे बाद कि परवाह नही होती
यंही फंस गया अथर्व और संजना समझ भी गयी

अथर्व तो गयो...

Khushi khushi me nahi.. Atharva hamesha sach bolta hai... par mann me

well sanjana ka gussa aur dukh .... kyun atharva sanjana ki feelings ko samajh nahi pa raha hai...

Iska jawab time travel karke maine de diya hai, i think

sach bhi yahi hai

Wo tareef thi ki dimag ghuma diya..

kya ab bhi aap keh sakte hai ki ye story front pe honi chahiye staff ho aap agar aap hi sahi galat nahi dekh sakte to sorry Aakash bhai aage kuch kehne ko nahi raha agar bura lga ho to dil se maafi chota bhai samjh kar maaf karna

Front page story hone ke liye. Jise koyi koyi log sticky thread bhi kahte hai... 2 chij karna jaroori hai.
1. Donation... Paisa feko, tamasha dekho.. Sticky ho jayega thread.
2. Contest... Jeeto.. Usme award ke taur par ek thread ko front page me chipka diya jaata hai.. Is story ko isi liye sticky kiya gaya hai kyunki meri ek story contest jeet gayi thi. Bas yahi kahani hai aut yahi kaaran.

This story is slowly getting difficult or my mind is not working at par, what was happening? Sanjana's guess is quite right, what will Atharva do now?

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Difficult abhi nahi next chapter se hoga :tease:

Woh toh Atmakami padh rakhi hai, Or thoda physics premi hum bhi isiliye asani se samajh aa gya yeh update warna dimag ke L lag jate.

Khatarnaak Update bhidu

thanks bhai

Meri mati Mari gayi thi Jo Maine socha ki update ko ek baar me samajh lunga but ab apne ko lagata hai ki iss update ko samjhane ke liye pichhala update + comments + 2 baar current update padunga tab samjh aayega...plzzz pray for my brain

Ekdum IAS exam ke level ki mehnat kara ke chhodunga, dont worry

Aur ek bar phirse update pdhna padega
Update ko samj ne ke liye

Ab kya karu raha nahi gaya.. Log asni se samajh jaa rahe the ishtory

Par aap ye bhool rahe ki udhar wo jallad karan neik bhi hai

Wo to bidu h apna

अथर्व स्कूल लाइफ में प्यार के मामले में दो नावों पर सवार था । और दो नावों पर सवार होने वाले अकसर डुब ही जाते हैं ।

Wo to hai.. Par yaha kisi ne dhakka bhi diya hai

एक ही सब्जेक्ट पर वो भी लगातार तीन पीरियड और उपर से टीचर गुप्ता जी हो तो माथा सनकेगा ही । लेकिन लगा इस बार तीन तीन पीरियड लेने के बावजूद भी किसी स्टूडेंट्स पर उनकी गाज गिरी नहीं । जो कि अचंभित बात है ।

Ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi... Acha din maan lo. Students ka.

Bohat khub bhayia ji sach me

Ye kya jhol hai mujhe to laga tha Riya apni side hai kuch din pehle he to oata chala tha ke atharva ke liye iss ne jafar se muh mari ki thi lekin ab to scene he bilkul ulte hai ulti jamuna beh rahi hai





Jafar ka kameena pan aur Atharva ki jalan dono detected lagta hai safai se kuta gaya hai jafar akhir ankh itni sundar jo ho gayi hai

Ved apna shareef hai Good boy hai wo bhabhi ke saamne to aise shabdo ka paryog nahi kare ga aur ye kaise ilzano ki umeed lagaye baitha hai Atharva agar ved ilzam lagaye ga to bare ilzam lagaye ga aise chindi ilzam nahi

Ye kya be guru ji ke aise shauk bhi hai

Iss situation per ek gana “Dushman na kare dost ne wo kaam kia hai” lyrics galat ho to theek ker lena to akhir dukhti rag dabayi ja chuki hai clap please


To finally deception king ki chal kamyab ho gayi Wah


Gupta ji ki to lag gayi Ab unhe dua karni chahiye ke atharva ko ye vardan na mile

Baato ki baat ye ek din sanjana ke ghar ja gate tore ga aur koi achi umeed nahi hai iss se

Review dene ke liye itni mehnat... thanx bhai.. Memes wer perfect

buri baat... apne teacher ke liye aisi dua nahi mangte

Aao kabhi gupta ji ki class me... Toh malum chale

are ye kirdaar to kaafi masoom aur bholi hai... aur dilchasp bhi

Masoom toh Ved bhi hai

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Karan naik jafar ko pela hai dam lagakar.....kahi atharva ka bhi wahi haal na ho jaye ab darwaja pitne ke liye...
Waiting for next update

Latest update padh ke baat karo...

Kya baat hai jafar ki to thhuk gyi lekin khud ki kyo thukwane chal diya sanjana k ghar

Ichchha purn

Aur gyani bhai... main bhi aunga... is bar bahut late ho gaya... :

Apun samajh sakta.. Khud bahut lafda hai zindagi me...

Instead of being happy, our hero is thinking about money, greedy.

Aur gyani bhai... main bhi aunga... is bar bahut late ho gaya... :

Apun samajh sakta.. Khud bahut lafda hai zindagi me...

Ise to padha hi jyega bs isliye shuru nhi ki ye wali ki ju goli baaz aadmi ho men kahi apan padhte 2 beech me phuche or ju gyab ho jao or apan chutiya ki dhal waiting ka tag lgate rhe atamkami ki dhal
Btw A loner ko padh kr shivam ki yaad aa gyi bhut din huye sci-fi or magic type story padhe socha shivam padh kr ye ichchha puri ho jye waise bhi technology bhut aage ja chuki hai to ise time ka shivam ka part jyada hi alag or unique hoga kyuki technology ko dekhte huye soch bhi bhut develop ho gyi hai 2013 wali bhi mast thi pr 21 wali kis level ki hogi uska bs andaza hi lgaya ja skta hai atamkami ko sochkar isliye uske liye kaha
Kya kahte to harshit1890 bhai shivam 3 aani chahiye na

Main mudda wo nahi.. Main mudda ye hai ki mujhe khud wo story padhne padegi.. Wo bhi dono part aur us time apun 19 saal ka tha.. Kya kya likh diya pata nahi kayi jagah to pure update me ek space tak nahi diya.. Maano essay likh rha hu.. jitni mehnt udhar utne me ~A Loner part -2 naa likh du.. Mars mission ko leke

ab ye soch raha hai ki karan dost hai uska par jis tarah darwaja peet raha hai sanjana ke ghar ka kahi aisa naa ho ki karan naik ka gussa ab atharva ko bhi jhelna pade ..

aur ab ye kaunsi trick istemaal karke sanjana ke dimaag se apne baare me na sochne ki baat nikalne ka socha hai atharva ne

Ye latest technology hai.. Is thread se baahar nahi jaani chahiye

मैं तो अपने आप को खुशकिस्मत मानता हूं कि मैं आप की कहानी पढ़ रहा हूं । इतना बढ़िया और वो भी हिंग्लिश में कौन लिखता है !

लेकिन इस सीन को क्या गजब का लिखा है ज्ञानी भाई आपने ! एक बड़ा सा ट्रक , संकरा रास्ता और ट्रक को ऐसेे तिरछा करके बीचोबीच रोकना कि कोई भी गाड़ी कहीं से भी निकल न पाए । जैसा रियेक्सन वेद का ट्रक ड्राइवर के उपर था , वैसा ही हमें भी होता है ।
और उस वक्त तो सच में बहुत मजा आया जब दोनों ने अपनी बाईक की होर्न बजा बजा कर स्कूटी पर बैठी हुई लड़की को परेशान किया ।

Thanks.. Wo actually real me ghata mere sath january me.. Even dialogues tak. Sach me truck wale ko gadi rok kar gariyaya gaya hai.. Bas us samay interceptor nahi balki four wheelers tha

SuperB wala Update

Nice update bro

याद नहीं है क्या ! संजना के घर जब जब वो गया ऐसे ही प्रेम से , शराफत से , इज्जत से दरवाजे पर दस्तक देता है ।
रिमेंबर दिस ..... ही इज किंग आफ डिसेप्शन ।

Behatrin update bro

Bhai apki pahle hi 4 story padh rakhi hai is wajah se ye update jhel gaya new readers k to laude lag honge bheje me

Kathai.... Jaher....

Fantanstic update bhai...

Great update....

behatrin update bro

person

Yep

Nice update

Aap ne thik kaha miss par Atharva ko toda aur bhari hona padega karan naik ke aur Jafar ke liye ab dekhte hai kaise handle karega Atharva.

Congrats for 100 pages sgp sir

For 100 Pages... ​

सबको लेफ्ट साइड से थैंक यू... अगला update जल्द देने कि महान कृपा करूँगा

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for completed pages Gyani bhai.

 

[Yug Purush]

Update-56​

“aur nahi toh kya.. tumhe kya laga sirf tum hee baato ko gol-gol ghuma sakte ho...? mujhe bhi aata hai baate banana…”beanie apne sar me daalte hue Riya boli... uske beanie nikalte hee meri nazar uske laal hote hue nose aur chicks par gayi... aur mera mann kiya ki main jabran use pakad kar jabardasti kiss kar loon... is it right to do that even if she is not ready ...? or not..? am I losing my mind...? Where is Ved..? I need you, man...

“tumhare gharwale mere bare me jaante hai..? tumhare papa goli toh nahi maarne wale na mujhe…”apne sabhi mansik paristhitiyo ko door karke finally maine Riya Rose par concentrate kiya aur ek normal sa sawal puchha. kyunki andar se kitna bhi chuda hua hoon , baahar se toh cool dikhana hee tha.

“kyun aisa kya hai..? jo papa goli marenge tumhe…”

“indian tradition hai ye… upar se Police Inspector hai tumhare papa.. toh gun-van jugad karne ka bhi lafda nahi hai... aise ek pal me bandook nikalenge aur hachak se 6 ki 6 goli mere andar”

Ye kahte hue Riya Rose ke papa kis tarah se mujhe goli maarenge , main wo karke use dikhane laga aur goli khane ke baad main bahaduri se kaise neeche girkar mar jaunga, maine wo bhi karke dikhaya. Matlab Oscar winning performance tha wo.

“achchha… yadi ye tradition hai tab toh apne culture ko follow karna hee padega…”bolte-bolte Riya achanak hans padi..

“kya hua...”

“wo saamne aadmi dekh rahe ho… ? wo humare Jabalpur wale school ke sports teacher ki tarah ekdum dikhte hai”

“uski yaad kaise aa gayi is waqt....?”

“ tumhe pata hai, mere na… jabalpur wale school ke sports teacher alag hee English bolte the… humlog apne school ke principal ko father bolte the… ek baar jab wo round me the toh sports wale teacher ne kaha tha ki … Father had just passed away in the corridor…”

“cool…”

“ek baar examanitation hall me sports wale teacher ki duty lagi toh bole… give me a red pen of any colour…”bolkar Riya khilkhila kar hasne lagi aur haste hue ek mukka mere seene pe maar aur diya…

“hahaha….. very funny”chhati sahlate hue maine kaha “humare wale ne kaha tha ki…. I want to meet your father, mother and parents…”

“sachhi…?”fir se ek mukka seene me pelte hue Riya has padi…aur fir apni hasi rok kar boli “ek baar humare sports teacher ne sabko ground me bola ki… stand in a straight circle…. Lol…”

“hahaha… ayiiiii…”ek aur mukka jab mere seene me pada toh sahlate hue main bola “ye toh wahi baat ho gayi… umar akmal, mother from another brother…”

Abki baar Riya aisi hasi ki jiski koyi had nahi, wo bench pakad-pakad ke hase jaa rahi thi aur mujhe pakka yakin hai ki us din yadi wo bench nahi pakadti toh haste-haste jaroor neeche gir jaati aur idhar main khud ko taiyar kar raha tha , uske agle mukke ke liye... jitna jor-jor se wo hasti utne jor se hee mukka maarti. Isliye mujhe abki dar bhi lag raha tha ki.. is baar kahi pura taqat laga ke naa maar de.. waise, isko dikhta nahi kya... ki.... mujhe dard ho raha hai iske mukke se...? Sanjana hoti toh shayad samajh jaati... abhi mera dimag khiska aur ekat mukka maar diya seene me iske exotic atoms par toh ashleel bol degi mujhe... Khair, Riya ne agla mukka mara par abki baar maine apne dono hatho se ise rok liya… Mazak hai kya... pyaar apni jagah, dard apni jagah.

Riya Rose, ek toh waise hee thandi me uska naak laal ho jata tha upar se aise non-stop hasne ke karan abki uska pura chehra hee laal ho gaya tha. Riya aise hee bench ke kinare ko pakad kar hasti rahi aur waha thodi doore me mauzood logo ki najar jab hum par padne lagi toh maine Riya ko shant karane ka socha aur uska gaal pakad kar kheench diya.

“dekh ke… mar mat jaana”

Maine Riya ka gaal kheencha aur fir gaal kheenchkar uske gaal ko sahlaane bhi laga main uske jis gaal ko sahla raha tha Riya ne us taraf apna sar kandhe ki taraf jhukaya aur mere hath ko apne gaal aur kandhe ke beech daba diya…

“tum pahle kyun nahi aayi Sanskar Valley me…?”use aisa karte dekh maine puchha

“yadi pahle aayi hoti toh tum school ki baki ladkiyo ki tarah mujhe bhi friendzone kar dete na, isliye…”

“ye kisne kaha…”

“sabhi ladkiya kahti hai… kuch toh tumhe gay bhi kahti hai”

“wait.. what... gay... ? toh ye sochti hai school ki ladkiya mere baare me….”

tabhi Riya ka mobile ekdum se baja... mujhe toh uske mobile ka ringtone bhi aaj tak yaad hai. mobile bajte hee wo boli....

“papa ka phone hai….ek minute, chup rahna…”Riya ne call receive kiya, usne kya baat kiya , kis topic par baat kiyaa .. mujhe naahi pata.. wo bas huu.. haan karti rahi aur fir thodi der ke baad call disconnect karke meri oor palti...

“sorry, Atharva… papa ka call hai. mujhe jaana hoga… ”

“ok… waise bhi papa ka call kabhi miss nahi karna chahiye..”aankh maar kar maine kaha aur mujhe aisa karte dekh Riya chauk gayi… par kyunki wo jaldi me thi isliye wo mujhe kuch bol nahi payi…. Par wo mere aankh maarne se chaunki kyun...? us din raat me jab use ghar tak maine use chhoda tha tab bhi toh aankh maara tha maine...? raat ke kaaran dikha nahi hoga sahayd us din.....

Riya ke jaane ke baad main kuch der aur us park me baitha raha. Idhar-udhar dekhta raha… idhar-udhar ki baate sochta raha. Main bahut khush tha un dino… Riya aur mera rishta us level tak nahi pahucha tha , lekin uski shuruat ho chuki thi, par ek chiz jo main nahi jaanta tha wo ye ki… mere aur Riya ke beech relation shuru nahi ho raha tha balki khatm ho raha tha. Jo ab jab bhi main ateet me jhakta hoon toh mujhe samajh aata hai.

Uske agle din school me wo hua Jiska main sadiyo se intezaar kar raha tha aur aaj finally ye ho raha tha. Par ab mujhe iski jyada parwaah nahi thi. Na hee mujhpar iska kuch khas asar ho raha tha. Pata nahi kyun, par yahi toh main chahta tha. Aur un dino mere har sawalo aur uljhano ki tarah is uljhan ka bhi sirf ek hee jawab tha aur wo jawab tha.... Riya Rose. Aur ye Ranjan, ye lawda kaha rah gaya… lunch ho gaya aur aaya nahi abhi tak…. Saxsena bhi neeche intejaar kar raha hoga , iska.

“it’s done…. It’s over…”Ranjan lunch me botony ki book liye jaise hee humare class me ghusa toh gate ke paas se hee wo khushi se cheekha… uski khushi ka thikana nahi tha.

Use aise khush dekh-kar maine aur Ved ne …infact waha class me mauzood sabhi ladke-ladkiyo ne yahi socha ki shayad Ranjana ko finally green signal mil gaya hai principal ki taraf se quiz team me shaamil hone ke liye. Pahle-pahal toh maine bhi yahi socha aur fir apne ghadi me time dekhkar maine jab timing match ki toh paaya ki itni jaldi toh ye possible hee nahi hai kyunki abhi just 5-10 minute pahle lunch hua hai aur itni jaldi Ranjan principal office me jakar, questions ke answer dekar, wapas mere class me wapas aa jaye, ye toh karib –karib namumkin hai. kyunki 5 minute toh normally aane-jaane me hee lag jate hai…..

“it’s done…. It’s over…”Ranjan humare paas aakar ek aur baar bola bola aur khushi –khushi me Ved ki taraf botony ki book fek diya “catch kar be ….”

“kya done… kya over…”

“it’s done, man…. It’s over…”aankh band karke apne lambe-lambe baalo ko dono hath se peechhe karte hue Ranjan bola…

“wahi toh puchh rahe hai… kya hua done aur kya hua over…”

“yeee hua done … aur yeeee hua over… 2-2 points tum dono par, bahut point chahdate ho pure school par…”

“wo toh thik hai.. Ranjan. Par hua kya..?”

“Jafar aur Sanjana ka break-up ho gaya…”

“kyaaa…..”Ved ne botony ka jo book catch kiya tha, ye sunte hee book uske hath se neeche gir gayi… jise uthakar wapas desk par rakhte hue Ved ne fir se puchha “kyaaaa….”

“yaaaaa…..”

 

[Aakash.]

I have to agree, Atharva handles many things at once and the person in front has no doubt what he is thinking at the time By the way, our hero also specializes in lying, totally different. One punch for every laugh... Honesty, I cannot tolerate Atharva's happiness.

“yadi pahle aayi hoti toh tum school ki baki ladkiyo ki tarah mujhe bhi friendzone kar dete na, isliye…”
This line has the same meaning that I am thinking...

You said that the relationship had not started it was ending, what it means and why you write like this, my heart gets depressed. Rajan is probably happy because he likes Sanjana and now his path is clear after the breakup with Zafar.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[A.D Rock]

Ladkiya apni middle finger ka naam Atharva rakhe aisa atharva ka sapna tha....pr yaha to sb usko gay samjhti hai..