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संजना की हालत देखी नही जा रही...😢😢😢
कितना दुख है उसकी जिंदगी में...!!!

वंही रिया अभी सबसे ज्यादा खुश इंसान नजर आ रही धरती पर 😁😁

नैक साहेब तो बड़ा गुस्से में थे... वैसे इस गुस्से का अथर्व को फायदा हुआ चाहिए क्योंकि संजना उसपर शक कर रही थी कि उसने बताया है जफर के बारे में नैक को, पर अब शायद उसे लगे अथर्व ने नही बताया होगा... क्योंकि नैक अब भी उससे गुस्सा है...

btw सुनैना मैम कंहा हैं :huh:
उनका जिक्र तो आना ही बंद हो गया,
न वो घर पर होती हैं न हॉस्पिटल में ??
 

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kya ab bhi aap keh sakte hai ki ye story front pe honi chahiye staff ho aap agar aap hi sahi galat nahi dekh sakte to sorry Aakash bhai aage kuch kehne ko nahi raha agar bura lga ho to dil se maafi chota bhai samjh kar maaf karna
Bhai tu gravity dekh leta fir to suside kar leta ki iss movie ko kaise Oscar mil gaya... Uss se achha to Aashiqui 2 ko award mil jata...

Dost meri baat mano pahle padhne ka dayra badhao.... "Loner" ek aisi kahani thi jo chand 40 se 50 story ke bich participate hone wali kahani nahi thi...

Among 1000 of super best quality stories "Loner" position will remain same...
 

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Looking at Sanjana, I feel as if she knows the truth and due to Karan, she is tied up and unable to live freely. so she is behaving like this and that Karan picked up and threw Atharva, in front of Sanjana, Did he correct because i didn't like it. If we look at it, then again there is a difference of thinking and there is nothing, often a person adapts himself according to the situation and Atharva is doing and have to do because there is no other option. Well, if things were easy to understand, I would have understood everything by now.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
🖤🖤🖤
 
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“kya bol rahi hai…”Sanjana ki taraf hath dikhakar haste hue maine kaha “mujhe kya lena dena Jafar aur tere se…”

“sach me…”

“aur nahi toh kya…”

“toh fir school me jo chocolate tujhe Riya ko bahut pahle de dena chahiye tha… wo lunch me mujhe dekhkar, mujhe kyun dene aa raha tha…? aur fir jab waha nahi de paya toh abhi yaha kyun aaya hai…? bimar toh Riya ki maa bhi thi, fir uske liye donation campaign kyun nahi chalaya… tune.…”

“good idea…. Mujhe kyun nahi sujha ye… anyway, kaun si painting bana rahi hai..?”

“tu jaa Atharva…. Aish kar, you deserve it…”

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Jab Sanjana ne dobara kaha toh maine dimag lagaya... uske expression , tone ko analyse karne ki koshish ki.. lekin kuch bhi palle nahi pada. Isliye maine time travel karne ka socha... Remember that trick ...? jo maine Clash of Canvas ke result ke time use ki thi... jab Riya aur Sanjana mere sar par tandav karte hue kiski painting better hai , ye puch rahi thi... tab apun ne time travel karke bataya tha ki kaise Jafar ke kaaran ye situation paida hui...? bas same concept. Mera matlab past ke Future me hone wale ek incident ko past ke present me bayan karna... lekin sab kuch rahega past me hee... Afterall I'm The fucking Narrator, so let's begin.

Past’s Future

“Ranjan.... dekh yar, main apni badayi nahi kar raha, matlab ek tarike se kar raha hoon.. par ye khud ki badayi karne se jyada ek sawal hai... main bahut brilliant hoon , fate-hal intelligent hoon. Ye mujhe pata hai ... fir bhi kabhi-kabhi saamne wale ki normal baat ya expression bhi mujhe samajh nahi aati.. main unka haanv-bhaav etc. kuch nahi samajh paata aur jo mann me aata hoon bol ke nikal leta hoon, jis-se log hurt ho jaate hai... fir mujhe chutiya –vutiya kahte hai ki main chutiya tha.. warna wo pat jaati, mere sath ye hota, wo hota... aisa kuch-kuch taana maarte hai... shuru me sirf Ved kahta tha.. lekin ab Riya Rose ka mere prati bartaav dekh kar lag raha hai ki... ye sach me sach hai..”

“well, tu chahe kitna bhi intelligent kyun naa ho.. kitna bhi brilliant kyun naa ho, kitne bhi tikdam kyun naa laga le.. tera IQ level 200, 300 hee kyun naa paar kar jaaye... hai toh tu 18 saal ka hee naa. Abhi se thodi sab samajh me aayega. Feelings aur experience toh umra aur situation ke sath-sath hee aayegi... tension mat le, sab thik ho jayega...... ek din....”muskurate hue Ranjan ne kaha... wo us waqt kyun muskuraya.... ? main aaj tak suspence me hoon...



Past’s Present

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Pata nahi kya kahna chahti thi wo... is baar bhi samajh nahi aaya. Fir se repeat karne ko bolu kya..? nope.. aise me toh beijjati ho jayegi. Ek kaam karta hoon koyi random sa dialogue maar deta hoon... bas yahi sochkar conversation ko aage badhate hue maine kaha...

“ Sanjana, you should often talk about yourself.. . about your problems… it makes things easier”

“ and why should i…? I mean.. just look around. Nobody gives a damn about anyone , everyone is too busy in their lives… just look at yourself…. You’re too busy in your melodrama thaaaaat”

“that… ?”Silky ke sentence khatam karne se pahle hee main bol pada... kyunki mere random dialogue ko usne kuch jyada hee seriously le liya tha ... isliye use beech me rokna toh banta tha.

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“tujhe mana kiya tha na mere ghar me aane se…”mujhe peechhe se sirf itna hee sunayi diya aur uske agle hee pal maine khud ko jameen me pada hua paaya. Kisi ne mujhe ekdum achanak jor se utha kar patka tha yaa fir feka tha... behenchod kasam se dimag fry ho gaya tha us waqt.. matlab ek pal main Sanjana se uske saamne khade hokar baat kar raha tha aur agle hee pal aise jameen me leta hua dard se karah raha tha.. what the fuck did just happen...?

Kuch samay laga mujhe sab samajhne me ki Sanjana ke saamne se achanak adrishya hokar main jameen ki dhool kyun khaane laga tha....Mujhe toh laga tha ki ab main aur Karan Naik ek dusare ko achchhi tarah se jaante hai, samajhte hai aur humara concept bilkul clear hai… atleast mera toh clear hee tha. Lekin Karan Naik ka concept clear nahi tha. Mera matlab… kya jaroorat thi us behan ke lawde ko mujhse aise bartaav karne ki… sale ne itni jor se utha ke feka tha ki jab pichhwade ke bal main neeche gira toh kuch der dard ke maare uth hee nahi paya….

“tere ko na… main aakhiri baar bol raha hu, yadi agli baar mere ghar ke aas-paas bhi bhatka naa toh , jaha milega na … wahi zameen khan ke zinda gaad dunga… tere maa-baap tak zindagi bhar isi soch me rhenge ki tere sath hua kya..”

“sorry … aainda aisa nahi hoga…”((ruk madarchod, thoda aur bada hone de… fir teri maa chodta hu... par teri maa toh budhi ho gayi hogi, nope.. plan cancel.. teri behan chodunga. ))

Iske baad mere muh se ek shabd nahi nikla, main waha se utha aur apna pichhwada sahlate hue, langdate hue.... wapas apne ghar ki taraf chal diya… kyunki dard ke kaaran abki main Karan Naik ko patthar maar kar bhag bhi nahi sakta tha . isliye meri bhalayi isi me thi ki.. shanti se.. chup-chap waha se nikal loon....

“tujhe ek baar me samajh nahi aata kya, Sanjana… ab dekh kya rahi hai use… chal andar… aise ladke sirf aur sirf ladkiyo ka istemaal karna jaante hai... ”

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Us din ke baad main Sanjana ke ghar kabhi nahi gaya yaha tak ki us-se baat karna bhi band kar diya… pata nahi kyun… par maine kar diya. Karan Naik ko toh us samay main kuch nahi kar sakta tha , isiliye shayad khunnas me maine Sanjana ko hee ignore karna shuru kar diya tha. Waise bhi us samay main Riya ke peechhe is kadar pad gaya tha ki Sanjana kuch khas mere khayalo me thi bhi nahi. un dino aur us ghatna ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi.... isliye maine apna main focus Riya Rose par kendrit kiya kyunki ekmatra wahi toh aisi ladki thi, pure school me.... jo bindas kisi se bina darkar rahti thi. Waise, Pahle Sanjana bhi isi category me aati thi par jab se Karan Naik humare mohalle me rahne aaya tha, wo ab fearless nahi rahi thi. Ya fir kahu ki Riya meri zindgi me is kadar bas chuki thi ki.... kisi dusari ladki ke liye mere dil me ab koyi jagah hee nahi bachi thi. Rahi sahi kasar Ved ke one girl at a time waale gyan aur Karan Naik ke us harkat ne puri kar di. par Mere sath Aisa hoga... matlab main Riya Rose ko lekar itna pagal ho jaunga ... ye Riya ko pahli baar dekh kar bilkul bhi nahi laga tha par ab sach yahi tha… wo toh bas gol wali hat pahne bio class ke bahar khadi thi jab main us-se first time baat karne gaya tha...... tab kisne socha tha ki itna kuch hoga aur itna kuch abhi aage hona baaki hai....

“kiske bare me soch rahe ho…..”jab park me Riya ke sath baithe-baithe main Sanjana ke khayalo me hee khoya raha toh mujhe wapas haqiqat se waqif karate hue Riya puchhi…

“bas wo quiz ke bare soch raha tha… jab hum jeetenge toh kya moment hoga wo.. pure hall me taaliya baj uthegi….”

“aur yadi haar gaye toh…?”

“tab pure hall me gaaliya sunayi degi…no problem.. I think I’m beyond that”

“chocolate…..?”dairy milk ka ek packet meri taraf badhate hue Riya boli...

“mere liye…? Oh teri....ye kaise mumkin hai... pahle toh aisa nahi dekha maine kahi...”

“kya nahi dekha...”

“ Ek ladki ka ladke ko chocolate dena matlab ulti ganga bahne jaisa hai…”

“ganga seedhi bahe ya ulti… tumhe us-se kya… tumhe toh sirf dubki lagana hai…”chocolate ka packet mere hath me pakda kar Riya muskurayi….

“ye double meaning tha kya… ya fir triple meaning...? I’m bit confused ...”

“aur nahi toh kya.. tumhe kya laga sirf tum hee baato ko gol-gol ghuma sakte ho...? mujhe bhi aata hai baate banana…”beanie apne sar me daalte hue Riya boli... uske beanie nikalte hee meri nazar uske laal hote hue nose aur chकicks par gayi... aur mera mann kiya ki main jabran use pakad kar jabardasti kiss kar loon... is it right to do that even if she is not ready ...? or not..? am I losing my mind...? Where is Ved..? I need you, man...

“tumhare gharwale mere bare me jaante hai..? tumhare papa goli toh nahi maarne wale na mujhe…”
" तु जा अथर्व , ऐश कर ! " संजना के इन शब्दों से उसकी फ्रस्ट्रेशन झलकती थी । निराशा और दर्द झलकती थी ।
जा अथर्व , रिया के साथ खुश रह । उसके बोलने का शायद यही मतलब था । अथर्व अठारह साल का होनहार और बेफिक्र नौजवान है । उसे अपनी काबिलियत पर भरोसा है, किसी भी बात को कई एंगल से सोचने की कला है पर कुछ चीजें ऐसी है जिनमें वो शून्य के बराबर है ।
संजना और रिया रोज भी तो लगभग उसी के उम्र की होगी । जब वो दोनों इन मामलों में परिपक्व दिखाई देती है तो अथर्व क्यों नहीं ?

खैर ! संजना के घर उसके साथ जो कुछ हुआ वो बहुत ही गलत था । अथर्व के जगह कोई और भी होता तो वही करता जो उसने किया । करन नाईक की हरकतें बहुत ही घटिया थी पर संजना को कम से कम इसका प्रतिरोध करना चाहिए था ।
शायद यही वजह थी जो वो संजना से दुर होते चला गया ।
अब देखना है कि रिया के साथ ऐसा क्या घटा जिससे वो भी अथर्व के लाइफ से दूर हो गई ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।
 
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nice update ..sanjana ne jaane ko kaha to atharva past present ka koi formula use karne laga jo samajh hi nahi aaya 🤣🤣...
karan naik ne to uthake patak diya 🤣 .par ek baat achchi ki atharva ne ki patthar maarke nahi bhaga warna aur maar padti .. aur shayad isi wajah se sanjana se dur rehne laga atharva 🤔.

riya rose bhi baato ko gol gol ghumake keh sakti hai🤔.
aur ab atharva ki priority riya hi hai ..
 

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“kya bol rahi hai…”Sanjana ki taraf hath dikhakar haste hue maine kaha “mujhe kya lena dena Jafar aur tere se…”

“sach me…”

“aur nahi toh kya…”

“toh fir school me jo chocolate tujhe Riya ko bahut pahle de dena chahiye tha… wo lunch me mujhe dekhkar, mujhe kyun dene aa raha tha…? aur fir jab waha nahi de paya toh abhi yaha kyun aaya hai…? bimar toh Riya ki maa bhi thi, fir uske liye donation campaign kyun nahi chalaya… tune.…”

“good idea…. Mujhe kyun nahi sujha ye… anyway, kaun si painting bana rahi hai..?”

“tu jaa Atharva…. Aish kar, you deserve it…”

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Jab Sanjana ne dobara kaha toh maine dimag lagaya... uske expression , tone ko analyse karne ki koshish ki.. lekin kuch bhi palle nahi pada. Isliye maine time travel karne ka socha... Remember that trick ...? jo maine Clash of Canvas ke result ke time use ki thi... jab Riya aur Sanjana mere sar par tandav karte hue kiski painting better hai , ye puch rahi thi... tab apun ne time travel karke bataya tha ki kaise Jafar ke kaaran ye situation paida hui...? bas same concept. Mera matlab past ke Future me hone wale ek incident ko past ke present me bayan karna... lekin sab kuch rahega past me hee... Afterall I'm The fucking Narrator, so let's begin.

Past’s Future

“Ranjan.... dekh yar, main apni badayi nahi kar raha, matlab ek tarike se kar raha hoon.. par ye khud ki badayi karne se jyada ek sawal hai... main bahut brilliant hoon , fate-hal intelligent hoon. Ye mujhe pata hai ... fir bhi kabhi-kabhi saamne wale ki normal baat ya expression bhi mujhe samajh nahi aati.. main unka haanv-bhaav etc. kuch nahi samajh paata aur jo mann me aata hoon bol ke nikal leta hoon, jis-se log hurt ho jaate hai... fir mujhe chutiya –vutiya kahte hai ki main chutiya tha.. warna wo pat jaati, mere sath ye hota, wo hota... aisa kuch-kuch taana maarte hai... shuru me sirf Ved kahta tha.. lekin ab Riya Rose ka mere prati bartaav dekh kar lag raha hai ki... ye sach me sach hai..”

“well, tu chahe kitna bhi intelligent kyun naa ho.. kitna bhi brilliant kyun naa ho, kitne bhi tikdam kyun naa laga le.. tera IQ level 200, 300 hee kyun naa paar kar jaaye... hai toh tu 18 saal ka hee naa. Abhi se thodi sab samajh me aayega. Feelings aur experience toh umra aur situation ke sath-sath hee aayegi... tension mat le, sab thik ho jayega...... ek din....”muskurate hue Ranjan ne kaha... wo us waqt kyun muskuraya.... ? main aaj tak suspence me hoon...



Past’s Present

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Pata nahi kya kahna chahti thi wo... is baar bhi samajh nahi aaya. Fir se repeat karne ko bolu kya..? nope.. aise me toh beijjati ho jayegi. Ek kaam karta hoon koyi random sa dialogue maar deta hoon... bas yahi sochkar conversation ko aage badhate hue maine kaha...

“ Sanjana, you should often talk about yourself.. . about your problems… it makes things easier”

“ and why should i…? I mean.. just look around. Nobody gives a damn about anyone , everyone is too busy in their lives… just look at yourself…. You’re too busy in your melodrama thaaaaat”

“that… ?”Silky ke sentence khatam karne se pahle hee main bol pada... kyunki mere random dialogue ko usne kuch jyada hee seriously le liya tha ... isliye use beech me rokna toh banta tha.
Ooooo..... to ye baat hai.....
tajurba nahi hai abhi uske paas ... to aisa bolna chahiye na atharva ko.. kham kha baato ko jelebi ki tarah ghuma ghuma ke bol raha hai :D
Haan ranjan ne thik kaha ki Feelings aur experience toh umra aur situation ke sath-sath hee aayegi... :D
“tujhe mana kiya tha na mere ghar me aane se…”mujhe peechhe se sirf itna hee sunayi diya aur uske agle hee pal maine khud ko jameen me pada hua paaya. Kisi ne mujhe ekdum achanak jor se utha kar patka tha yaa fir feka tha... behenchod kasam se dimag fry ho gaya tha us waqt.. matlab ek pal main Sanjana se uske saamne khade hokar baat kar raha tha aur agle hee pal aise jameen me leta hua dard se karah raha tha.. what the fuck did just happen...?

Kuch samay laga mujhe sab samajhne me ki Sanjana ke saamne se achanak adrishya hokar main jameen ki dhool kyun khaane laga tha....Mujhe toh laga tha ki ab main aur Karan Naik ek dusare ko achchhi tarah se jaante hai, samajhte hai aur humara concept bilkul clear hai… atleast mera toh clear hee tha. Lekin Karan Naik ka concept clear nahi tha. Mera matlab… kya jaroorat thi us behan ke lawde ko mujhse aise bartaav karne ki… sale ne itni jor se utha ke feka tha ki jab pichhwade ke bal main neeche gira toh kuch der dard ke maare uth hee nahi paya….

“tere ko na… main aakhiri baar bol raha hu, yadi agli baar mere ghar ke aas-paas bhi bhatka naa toh , jaha milega na … wahi zameen khan ke zinda gaad dunga… tere maa-baap tak zindagi bhar isi soch me rhenge ki tere sath hua kya..”

“sorry … aainda aisa nahi hoga…”((ruk madarchod, thoda aur bada hone de… fir teri maa chodta hu... par teri maa toh budhi ho gayi hogi, nope.. plan cancel.. teri behan chodunga. ))

Iske baad mere muh se ek shabd nahi nikla, main waha se utha aur apna pichhwada sahlate hue, langdate hue.... wapas apne ghar ki taraf chal diya… kyunki dard ke kaaran abki main Karan Naik ko patthar maar kar bhag bhi nahi sakta tha . isliye meri bhalayi isi me thi ki.. shanti se.. chup-chap waha se nikal loon....

“tujhe ek baar me samajh nahi aata kya, Sanjana… ab dekh kya rahi hai use… chal andar… aise ladke sirf aur sirf ladkiyo ka istemaal karna jaante hai... ”

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ye to hona hi tha.... :dazed:
Lekin lekin lekin
tere maa-baap tak zindagi bhar isi soch me rhenge ki tere sath hua kya..”
Baaki sab to thik hai lekin karan naik ne ye bolke galti kar di... maa baap pe nahi jana chahiye tha ushe.... ek to karan naik thehra bhikhmanga...upar se Sanjana ke ghar, ghar jamayi ban ke baitha hai.. ab thodi si bhi ghairat, laj sharam bachi hai to is ghar jamayi karan naik ko chhullu bhar pani mein dub kar mar jaana chahiye :D

aur dusri baat agar us din atharva patthar maarke us naik ka sar fod deta to aaj ye din dekhne ko nahi milta ushe :D

Us din ke baad main Sanjana ke ghar kabhi nahi gaya yaha tak ki us-se baat karna bhi band kar diya… pata nahi kyun… par maine kar diya. Karan Naik ko toh us samay main kuch nahi kar sakta tha , isiliye shayad khunnas me maine Sanjana ko hee ignore karna shuru kar diya tha. Waise bhi us samay main Riya ke peechhe is kadar pad gaya tha ki Sanjana kuch khas mere khayalo me thi bhi nahi. un dino aur us ghatna ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi.... isliye maine apna main focus Riya Rose par kendrit kiya kyunki ekmatra wahi toh aisi ladki thi, pure school me.... jo bindas kisi se bina darkar rahti thi. Waise, Pahle Sanjana bhi isi category me aati thi par jab se Karan Naik humare mohalle me rahne aaya tha, wo ab fearless nahi rahi thi. Ya fir kahu ki Riya meri zindgi me is kadar bas chuki thi ki.... kisi dusari ladki ke liye mere dil me ab koyi jagah hee nahi bachi thi. Rahi sahi kasar Ved ke one girl at a time waale gyan aur Karan Naik ke us harkat ne puri kar di. par Mere sath Aisa hoga... matlab main Riya Rose ko lekar itna pagal ho jaunga ... ye Riya ko pahli baar dekh kar bilkul bhi nahi laga tha par ab sach yahi tha… wo toh bas gol wali hat pahne bio class ke bahar khadi thi jab main us-se first time baat karne gaya tha...... tab kisne socha tha ki itna kuch hoga aur itna kuch abhi aage hona baaki hai....

“kiske bare me soch rahe ho…..”jab park me Riya ke sath baithe-baithe main Sanjana ke khayalo me hee khoya raha toh mujhe wapas haqiqat se waqif karate hue Riya puchhi…

“bas wo quiz ke bare soch raha tha… jab hum jeetenge toh kya moment hoga wo.. pure hall me taaliya baj uthegi….”

“aur yadi haar gaye toh…?”

“tab pure hall me gaaliya sunayi degi…no problem.. I think I’m beyond that”

“chocolate…..?”dairy milk ka ek packet meri taraf badhate hue Riya boli...

“mere liye…? Oh teri....ye kaise mumkin hai... pahle toh aisa nahi dekha maine kahi...”

“kya nahi dekha...”

“ Ek ladki ka ladke ko chocolate dena matlab ulti ganga bahne jaisa hai…”

“ganga seedhi bahe ya ulti… tumhe us-se kya… tumhe toh sirf dubki lagana hai…”chocolate ka packet mere hath me pakda kar Riya muskurayi….

“ye double meaning tha kya… ya fir triple meaning...? I’m bit confused ...”

“aur nahi toh kya.. tumhe kya laga sirf tum hee baato ko gol-gol ghuma sakte ho...? mujhe bhi aata hai baate banana…”beanie apne sar me daalte hue Riya boli... uske beanie nikalte hee meri nazar uske laal hote hue nose aur chicks par gayi... aur mera mann kiya ki main jabran use pakad kar jabardasti kiss kar loon... is it right to do that even if she is not ready ...? or not..? am I losing my mind...? Where is Ved..? I need you, man...

“tumhare gharwale mere bare me jaante hai..? tumhare papa goli toh nahi maarne wale na mujhe…”
Baaki sab baad mein... pehle atharva ko abhi ke abhi jaake guru veda se milna chahiye.... aur uske dwara diye gaye mahan ideas ko follow karna chahiye... :approve:... pehli baat guru veda dwara dikhaye gaye raahein muskil jarur hai par atharva ko manjil jarur milegi... aur akhiri baat bhi yahin hai :D
Btw jo reality hai ushe hi kahani roop mein dikha rahe hai..na kam na zyada.. bilkul perfect tarike se . :bow: :bow:
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir :applause: :applause:
 
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The_Punisher

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Naina baki sab toh thik hai par ye karan naik bhikhmanga kabse ban gaya :hmm:
jahan tak mujhe yaad hai sanjana ke maa ke hospital ka sara kharcha wohi karta hai aur issi liye sanjana bhi usse dar dar kar reheti hai
Correct me if I'm wrong 😊
 

Naina

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Naina baki sab toh thik hai par ye karan naik bhikhmanga kabse ban gaya :hmm:
jahan tak mujhe yaad hai sanjana ke maa ke hospital ka sara kharcha wohi karta hai aur issi liye sanjana bhi usse dar dar kar reheti hai
Correct me if I'm wrong 😊

abhi nahi hai to kya hua, Atharva ushe bana dega guru veda aur ranjan ke sath milke :chop: wrong ko ab right karega atharva..... upor se ghar jamayi bhi to hai wo karan naik :chop: hope atharva uska patta hi saaf kar de is story se hi :D
 
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