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Thodi der se hee sahi par Sanjana ke ghar ka darwaja khula aur Sanjana ne hee khola... wo shayad mere darwaja peetne ke style se jaan gayi thi ki dwar par is samay swayam Atharva Dev khade hai... waise bhi uske ghar ka darwaja mere aalawa aaj tak shayad hee kisi aur ne jor-jor se peeta ho... wo andar se hee boli...

“Atharva, tu kyun aaya hai. us din hee seedhiyo ke paas kah diya tha naa ki mere ghar kabhi mat aana...”

“kab kaha tha...? mujhe yaad nahi aur jab yaad nahi toh yaad kaise rakhunga aur jab yaad nahi rakhunga toh uske according kaam kaise karunga...”

Aur mere itnaa bolne ke kuch der baad darwaje ka halka sa.. ekdum halka sa , jitney me se uski gardan baahar nikal jaaye ... sirf utna hee darwaja khula aur Sanjana ne apni gardan baahar ki...

“kya chahiye tujhe...”

“main tum logo ki tarah swarthi nahi hoon ki jab kuch chahiye ho, tabhi kisi ke paas jaunga... ye toh tum jaise tuchch logo ka swabhav hai. hum Atharva hai.. Atharva Dev... samast dev hamari Vandana karte hai..... Devo ke dev ~Atharva Dev”

“tu yaha mere saamne apni sirf tareef karne aaya hai...?”darwaja pura kholte hue wo boli

“aur nahi toh... tujhe kya laga ki mujhe teri yaad aa rahi thi, isliye yaha aaya... ? lol... pahle ki baat alag thi, par abhi apun ki life me Riya Rose hai... waise ... tere honth uske honth ki tarah pink kyun nahi hai...?”

“great talk, Atharva... Really, Great Talk... BYE..”daant peeste hue Sanjana boli aur darwaja mere muh pe de maarne ke liye usne jaise hee apna hath darwaje ki taraf kiya........ maine apna agla daav khel diya. Wo kya hai ki sab kuch planning ke according hona chahiye.



Sanjana darwaja ukhad ke mere muh pe maarne ki kriya karti, uske pahle hee maine uske baad hone wali apni pratikriya de di... bole toh... Newton ke third law waale action ke pahle hee reaction.... matlab Sanjana jo karti , fir uske baad main jo karta .. wo maine pahle hee kar diya aur aisa karke Sanjana jo karne waali uska astitva hee mita diya... bole toh Newton ke third law me action ke without hee reaction ka apne aap paida hona.... Got it..? Nope...? ok... maan lo ki ek deewar ko main Jafar samajh ke mukke pe mukka maarta hoon, jiske baad mere hath me zakhm ke nishan aa jate hai... ye toh hui normal action-reaction. Par kya ho yadi main deewar me mukka naa maru , lekin fir bhi wo zakhm mere hath me aa jaye...?? yep.. itni deep level ki planning rahti hai apni.. But How is this even possible... I mean reaction without action...? AM I A GOD....? :shy:

Sanjana mujhe dekh gusse se daarwaja band karti uske pahle hee maine wo kar diya jo main uske darwaja band karne ke baad karne waala tha aur is tarah se maine Sanjana ke darwaja band karne waale incident ko ekdum se remove kar diya.

“hey silky... wo, school me chocolate nahi de paya tha na.. toh yaha dene aaya hu…”Sanjana ko dekh muskurate hue maine apne jeb se chocolate nikala aur uski oor badha diya...

Ab Sanajan ka jo hath thodi der pahle mere muh par darwaja band karne waala tha , wahi hath ab chocolate lene ke liye aage badh raha tha... Told Ya, Bitches... I just removed that incident. par fir bhi wo school ke mafiq udas thi...? par kyun..? chocolate main use de toh raha hoon, fir kyun udas hai...?shayad Jafar waale incident ko lekar udas hogi... Sanjana apna hath aage mere hath ki oor dheere-dheere badhane lagi , maine jyada dhyan toh nahi diya us waqt... par jab chocolate lene ke liye uska dahina hath, mere hath ki taraf badh raha tha toh uska hath halka-halka kaanp raha tha... shayad khushi se...? shayad use bhi khushi ka bukhar ho gaya ho... jaise mujhe hua tha kuch dino pahle, jab Vindhya Hospital ke baahar Riya Rose ne mujhe hot chocolate ke liye invite kiya tha.

Par wo toh udas thi, fir use khushi ka bukhar kaise ho sakta hai....? mujhe uspar gaur karna chahiye tha. anyway, Chocolate use dene ke baad maine uska hath pakad liya aur bola...

“Silky, chehre ka rang kyun utra hua hai... bimar hai kya...?”

Sanjana bimar hai ya nahi ye check karne ke liye main use ghoorne laga aur mujhe aisa ghoorta dekh wo muskurane lagi, wo muskura toh rahi thi, par uski muskan me wo school wali udasi ab bhi maujood thi. Wo udas bhale thi par atleast wo muskura toh rahi thi, yehi badi baat thi aur is se bhi badi baat ki wo mujhe dekh kar muskura rahi thi… Fuck Me. Why Was I that dumb.

“normal toh hai tera body temperature…. Matlab sab thik hai”uska hath chhodte hue maine kaha “fir tera chehra utra hua kyun hai...”

“normal hu toh normal hee rahega na… dumb-dumb”

“normal hai toh fir udas kyun hai aur yadi udas hai toh fir normal kyun hai... normal people udas nahi hote aur udas people normal nahi hote... actually, mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main kya bole jaa raha hoon. tu pakka Aunty ji ko lekar pareshan hai…? ab samjha... Ya fir Jafar ko lekar….? Ya fir study ko lekar...? ya fir painting completion ko lekar...? ya fir....firrr”bolte –bolte main sochne laga ki aur kya reason ho sakta hai Sanjana ki pareshani ka.

“tu jaa, Jiju aate hee honge… dukan se…”

“kaun…? Karan Naik…? Wo bidu hai apun ka ab… dekha nahi kaise mere kahne matra se hee usne kal ....kalll... kal ho naa ho... Naina... jo hai sama, jee bhar jiyo. Mast gaana hai... tu bata tujhe kya hua…”

“tu jaa... I’m just tired….”

“then sleep… ya main lori sunau… 2009 chal raha hai aur aaj kal net me sab available hai…”

“sleeping can’t heal my tiredness… Atharva”darwaje ke bahar gamle me lage ek phool ko dekhte hue Sanjana boli, jiske baad meri nazar bhi uski nazar ka pichha karte hue us phul tak jaa pahuchi

“wo toh murjha gaya , use kyun dekh rahi hai.. thoda aage dekh.. ekdum fresh fresh maal hai..”maine kaha

“wowww...”wo fir muskurayi aur is baar uski muskan me udasi aur bhi jyada gahra gayi.. matlab mera bheja khisak gaya uske wowww kahne ke baad waala reaction dekh kar...

Jafar se itna pyar karti hai ye..? ki is kadar udas ho jayegi... sab saala meri vazah se hua hai aur aaj jab Interceptor ki kamaan sambhale hue sochta hoon toh sach me aisa lagta hai ki... wo sab meri hee galti thi.

“I’m Sorry...Sanjana..”

“why did you say sorry...”

“I.. don’t ...... know... ”aankhe chhoti-chhoti karke, kandhe uchaka kar maine kaha... mujhe naa toh us waqt kuch samajh aaya ki maine sorry kyun kaha aur naa hee kuch sujha ki ab iske aage kya bolu...

Par ye bolne ke baad jab Sanjana ne meri taraf dekha toh uske us chehre ko main aaj tak nahi bhool paya… bada ajeeb sa mila-jula expression tha Sanjana ke chehre pe… matlab wo jo rahta hai na… gusse wala… matlab frustration wala… ek minute… explain karta hoon... maan lo koyi aadmi udas ho, kisi chiz se gussa ho aur kisi chiz se dara hua bhi ho… in teeno ko yadi ek sath combine kar diya jaye toh jo final expression banega… waisa hee expression Sanjana ka bhi us samay tha. matlab koyi bata nahi sakta ki .. wo mujjhse gussa hai ya fir mere kaaran dukhi hai…. khair main ise khushi ka bukhar hee manta raha.

“Jafar ke bare me tune bataya tha na jiju ko…?” itni der me pahli baar meri aankho me aankhe daalkar Sanjana puchhi… aur idhar main ab bhi sochne me laga hua tha ki Sanjana mere kaaran udas hai ya fir gussa...?


P.S.-1 : Riya , Jafar se baat kyun ki.. itne pyaar se...? usne baat hee kaha ki..? Jafar ne kaha hi riya,.. riya ne kaha .. hi Jafar... murder thodi kiya hai Jafar ki.. uske Hi ka reply nahi degi Riya... :D

P.S.-2 : Jafar ko Naik ji ne pela fir bhi wo school kyun aaya... ab Naik ne Jafar ko rassi me baandh kar toh maara nahi hoga aur naa hee gang bulaya raha hoga . ki Jafar bhag naa sake.. par haan Naik ke changul se chhootne me time lag gaya hoga .. tab tak... do teen mukkan.. do teen laat. chalta hai.

P.S.-3 : Atharva, ne darwaje par laat klyun maara.. without reason... ? You, really asking me this question :D ek dialogue is update hai... Karan Naik toh bidu hai apna aB :lol:
Update aur sawalo ke jawab ek saath ballay

Waise to ye update parh ker pura sar chakra gaya ek line ko 3 baar repeat ker ke parha hai pura update lekin phir bhi utna sahi se na samajh saka really a great update much appreciated work dailouge to funny hote he hai lekin jis tarha ki situtaion create ker ke ap dailouge use karte ho mind blowing bohat mushkil hota hai funny storie me emotions dikhana lekin ap us me bhi kamal kar gye





Aur mere itnaa bolne ke kuch der baad darwaje ka halka sa.. ekdum halka sa , jitney me se uski gardan baahar nikal jaaye ... sirf utna hee darwaja khula aur Sanjana ne apni gardan baahar ki...

“kya chahiye tujhe...”
Nahi matlab kia... sawayam atharva dev se pucha ja raha hai kia chahiye itna dushsahas karne ki himmat



“Silky, chehre ka rang kyun utra hua hai... bimar hai kya...?”
Feelings to bohat strong hai Silky ke liye Atharva ke dil me bus show nahi karwa pata theek se atharva
“kaun…? Karan Naik…? Wo bidu hai apun ka ab… dekha nahi kaise mere kahne matra se hee usne kal ....kalll... kal ho naa ho... Naina... jo hai sama, jee bhar jiyo. Mast gaana hai... tu bata tujhe kya hua…”
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“wo toh murjha gaya , use kyun dekh rahi hai.. thoda aage dekh.. ekdum fresh fresh maal hai..”maine kaha
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Sanjana darwaja ukhad ke mere muh pe maarne ki kriya karti, uske pahle hee maine uske baad hone wali apni pratikriya de di... bole toh... Newton ke third law waale action ke pahle hee reaction.... matlab Sanjana jo karti , fir uske baad main jo karta .. wo maine pahle hee kar diya aur aisa karke Sanjana jo karne waali uska astitva hee mita diya... bole toh Newton ke third law me action ke without hee reaction ka apne aap paida hona.... Got it..? Nope...? ok... maan lo ki ek deewar ko main Jafar samajh ke mukke pe mukka maarta hoon, jiske baad mere hath me zakhm ke nishan aa jate hai... ye toh hui normal action-reaction. Par kya ho yadi main deewar me mukka naa maru , lekin fir bhi wo zakhm mere hath me aa jaye...?? yep.. itni deep level ki planning rahti hai apni.. But How is this even possible... I mean reaction without action...? AM I A GOD....? :shy:

Sanjana mujhe dekh gusse se daarwaja band karti uske pahle hee maine wo kar diya jo main uske darwaja band karne ke baad karne waala tha aur is tarah se maine Sanjana ke darwaja band karne waale incident ko ekdum se remove kar diya.
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“Jafar ke bare me tune bataya tha na jiju ko…?” itni der me pahli baar meri aankho me aankhe daalkar Sanjana puchhi… aur idhar main ab bhi sochne me laga hua tha ki Sanjana mere kaaran udas hai ya fir gussa...?
Khatam Tata bye bye .
 
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“Jafar ke bare me tune bataya tha na jiju ko…?” itni der me pahli baar meri aankho me aankhe daalkar Sanjana puchhi… aur idhar main ab bhi sochne me laga hua tha ki Sanjana mere kaaran udas hai ya fir gussa...?

“kya bol rahi hai…”Sanjana ki taraf hath dikhakar haste hue maine kaha “mujhe kya lena dena Jafar aur tere se…”

“sach me…”

“aur nahi toh kya…”

“toh fir school me jo chocolate tujhe Riya ko bahut pahle de dena chahiye tha… wo lunch me mujhe dekhkar, mujhe kyun dene aa raha tha…? aur fir jab waha nahi de paya toh abhi yaha kyun aaya hai…? bimar toh Riya ki maa bhi thi, fir uske liye donation campaign kyun nahi chalaya… tune.…”

“good idea…. Mujhe kyun nahi sujha ye… anyway, kaun si painting bana rahi hai..?”

“tu jaa Atharva…. Aish kar, you deserve it…”

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Jab Sanjana ne dobara kaha toh maine dimag lagaya... uske expression , tone ko analyse karne ki koshish ki.. lekin kuch bhi palle nahi pada. Isliye maine time travel karne ka socha... Remember that trick ...? jo maine Clash of Canvas ke result ke time use ki thi... jab Riya aur Sanjana mere sar par tandav karte hue kiski painting better hai , ye puch rahi thi... tab apun ne time travel karke bataya tha ki kaise Jafar ke kaaran ye situation paida hui...? bas same concept. Mera matlab past ke Future me hone wale ek incident ko past ke present me bayan karna... lekin sab kuch rahega past me hee... Afterall I'm The fucking Narrator, so let's begin.

Past’s Future

“Ranjan.... dekh yar, main apni badayi nahi kar raha, matlab ek tarike se kar raha hoon.. par ye khud ki badayi karne se jyada ek sawal hai... main bahut brilliant hoon , fate-hal intelligent hoon. Ye mujhe pata hai ... fir bhi kabhi-kabhi saamne wale ki normal baat ya expression bhi mujhe samajh nahi aati.. main unka haanv-bhaav etc. kuch nahi samajh paata aur jo mann me aata hoon bol ke nikal leta hoon, jis-se log hurt ho jaate hai... fir mujhe chutiya –vutiya kahte hai ki main chutiya tha.. warna wo pat jaati, mere sath ye hota, wo hota... aisa kuch-kuch taana maarte hai... shuru me sirf Ved kahta tha.. lekin ab Riya Rose ka mere prati bartaav dekh kar lag raha hai ki... ye sach me sach hai..”

“well, tu chahe kitna bhi intelligent kyun naa ho.. kitna bhi brilliant kyun naa ho, kitne bhi tikdam kyun naa laga le.. tera IQ level 200, 300 hee kyun naa paar kar jaaye... hai toh tu 18 saal ka hee naa. Abhi se thodi sab samajh me aayega. Feelings aur experience toh umra aur situation ke sath-sath hee aayegi... tension mat le, sab thik ho jayega...... ek din....”muskurate hue Ranjan ne kaha... wo us waqt kyun muskuraya.... ? main aaj tak suspence me hoon...



Past’s Present

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Pata nahi kya kahna chahti thi wo... is baar bhi samajh nahi aaya. Fir se repeat karne ko bolu kya..? nope.. aise me toh beijjati ho jayegi. Ek kaam karta hoon koyi random sa dialogue maar deta hoon... bas yahi sochkar conversation ko aage badhate hue maine kaha...

“ Sanjana, you should often talk about yourself.. . about your problems… it makes things easier”

“ and why should i…? I mean.. just look around. Nobody gives a damn about anyone , everyone is too busy in their lives… just look at yourself…. You’re too busy in your melodrama thaaaaat”

“that… ?”Silky ke sentence khatam karne se pahle hee main bol pada... kyunki mere random dialogue ko usne kuch jyada hee seriously le liya tha ... isliye use beech me rokna toh banta tha.

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“tujhe mana kiya tha na mere ghar me aane se…”mujhe peechhe se sirf itna hee sunayi diya aur uske agle hee pal maine khud ko jameen me pada hua paaya. Kisi ne mujhe ekdum achanak jor se utha kar patka tha yaa fir feka tha... behenchod kasam se dimag fry ho gaya tha us waqt.. matlab ek pal main Sanjana se uske saamne khade hokar baat kar raha tha aur agle hee pal aise jameen me leta hua dard se karah raha tha.. what the fuck did just happen...?

Kuch samay laga mujhe sab samajhne me ki Sanjana ke saamne se achanak adrishya hokar main jameen ki dhool kyun khaane laga tha....Mujhe toh laga tha ki ab main aur Karan Naik ek dusare ko achchhi tarah se jaante hai, samajhte hai aur humara concept bilkul clear hai… atleast mera toh clear hee tha. Lekin Karan Naik ka concept clear nahi tha. Mera matlab… kya jaroorat thi us behan ke lawde ko mujhse aise bartaav karne ki… sale ne itni jor se utha ke feka tha ki jab pichhwade ke bal main neeche gira toh kuch der dard ke maare uth hee nahi paya….

“tere ko na… main aakhiri baar bol raha hu, yadi agli baar mere ghar ke aas-paas bhi bhatka naa toh , jaha milega na … wahi zameen khan ke zinda gaad dunga… tere maa-baap tak zindagi bhar isi soch me rhenge ki tere sath hua kya..”

“sorry … aainda aisa nahi hoga…”((ruk madarchod, thoda aur bada hone de… fir teri maa chodta hu... par teri maa toh budhi ho gayi hogi, nope.. plan cancel.. teri behan chodunga. ))

Iske baad mere muh se ek shabd nahi nikla, main waha se utha aur apna pichhwada sahlate hue, langdate hue.... wapas apne ghar ki taraf chal diya… kyunki dard ke kaaran abki main Karan Naik ko patthar maar kar bhag bhi nahi sakta tha . isliye meri bhalayi isi me thi ki.. shanti se.. chup-chap waha se nikal loon....

“tujhe ek baar me samajh nahi aata kya, Sanjana… ab dekh kya rahi hai use… chal andar… aise ladke sirf aur sirf ladkiyo ka istemaal karna jaante hai... ”

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Us din ke baad main Sanjana ke ghar kabhi nahi gaya yaha tak ki us-se baat karna bhi band kar diya… pata nahi kyun… par maine kar diya. Karan Naik ko toh us samay main kuch nahi kar sakta tha , isiliye shayad khunnas me maine Sanjana ko hee ignore karna shuru kar diya tha. Waise bhi us samay main Riya ke peechhe is kadar pad gaya tha ki Sanjana kuch khas mere khayalo me thi bhi nahi. un dino aur us ghatna ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi.... isliye maine apna main focus Riya Rose par kendrit kiya kyunki ekmatra wahi toh aisi ladki thi, pure school me.... jo bindas kisi se bina darkar rahti thi. Waise, Pahle Sanjana bhi isi category me aati thi par jab se Karan Naik humare mohalle me rahne aaya tha, wo ab fearless nahi rahi thi. Ya fir kahu ki Riya meri zindgi me is kadar bas chuki thi ki.... kisi dusari ladki ke liye mere dil me ab koyi jagah hee nahi bachi thi. Rahi sahi kasar Ved ke one girl at a time waale gyan aur Karan Naik ke us harkat ne puri kar di. par Mere sath Aisa hoga... matlab main Riya Rose ko lekar itna pagal ho jaunga ... ye Riya ko pahli baar dekh kar bilkul bhi nahi laga tha par ab sach yahi tha… wo toh bas gol wali hat pahne bio class ke bahar khadi thi jab main us-se first time baat karne gaya tha...... tab kisne socha tha ki itna kuch hoga aur itna kuch abhi aage hona baaki hai....

“kiske bare me soch rahe ho…..”jab park me Riya ke sath baithe-baithe main Sanjana ke khayalo me hee khoya raha toh mujhe wapas haqiqat se waqif karate hue Riya puchhi…

“bas wo quiz ke bare soch raha tha… jab hum jeetenge toh kya moment hoga wo.. pure hall me taaliya baj uthegi….”

“aur yadi haar gaye toh…?”

“tab pure hall me gaaliya sunayi degi…no problem.. I think I’m beyond that”

“chocolate…..?”dairy milk ka ek packet meri taraf badhate hue Riya boli...

“mere liye…? Oh teri....ye kaise mumkin hai... pahle toh aisa nahi dekha maine kahi...”

“kya nahi dekha...”

“ Ek ladki ka ladke ko chocolate dena matlab ulti ganga bahne jaisa hai…”

“ganga seedhi bahe ya ulti… tumhe us-se kya… tumhe toh sirf dubki lagana hai…”chocolate ka packet mere hath me pakda kar Riya muskurayi….

“ye double meaning tha kya… ya fir triple meaning...? I’m bit confused ...”

“aur nahi toh kya.. tumhe kya laga sirf tum hee baato ko gol-gol ghuma sakte ho...? mujhe bhi aata hai baate banana…”beanie apne sar me daalte hue Riya boli... uske beanie nikalte hee meri nazar uske laal hote hue nose aur chicks par gayi... aur mera mann kiya ki main jabran use pakad kar jabardasti kiss kar loon... is it right to do that even if she is not ready ...? or not..? am I losing my mind...? Where is Ved..? I need you, man...

“tumhare gharwale mere bare me jaante hai..? tumhare papa goli toh nahi maarne wale na mujhe…”
 

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Itna chhota update aur usme bhi ye past future wala chutiyapa :mad2:
Aur ye lawde Karan naik ki problem kya hai kudh toh sahi maal set kar liya hai lekin dusro ki kushi dekhi nahi jati
To iss wajah se Sanjana Atharva ke life se chali gayi lagta hai
Kair lagta hai Atharva aur riya ki love life ki shurwat ho chuki hai dekhte hai agey kya hota hai
:waiting: for the next update
 

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Khair jivan ka satya hai ki ek jagah se dusri jagah jane ke liye ek ko chodna padta hai ya kuch pane ke liye kuch khona padta hai wo same consept yaha hai sanjana wale matter ne par samjh nahi aa raha jaisa ki story me bataya hai uss hisab se Atharva ko samjhana cahiye tha sanjana ke issare itna dumb nahi ho sakta hai wo khair jo bhi ho at last me pata chal hi jayega aur ye jo harkat thi Jafar ke bare wali ye full to snitching thi wo itna matlabi kaise ho sakta hai yaar
 
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Thodi der se hee sahi par Sanjana ke ghar ka darwaja khula aur Sanjana ne hee khola... wo shayad mere darwaja peetne ke style se jaan gayi thi ki dwar par is samay swayam Atharva Dev khade hai... waise bhi uske ghar ka darwaja mere aalawa aaj tak shayad hee kisi aur ne jor-jor se peeta ho... wo andar se hee boli...

“Atharva, tu kyun aaya hai. us din hee seedhiyo ke paas kah diya tha naa ki mere ghar kabhi mat aana...”

“kab kaha tha...? mujhe yaad nahi aur jab yaad nahi toh yaad kaise rakhunga aur jab yaad nahi rakhunga toh uske according kaam kaise karunga...”

Aur mere itnaa bolne ke kuch der baad darwaje ka halka sa.. ekdum halka sa , jitney me se uski gardan baahar nikal jaaye ... sirf utna hee darwaja khula aur Sanjana ne apni gardan baahar ki...

“kya chahiye tujhe...”

“main tum logo ki tarah swarthi nahi hoon ki jab kuch chahiye ho, tabhi kisi ke paas jaunga... ye toh tum jaise tuchch logo ka swabhav hai. hum Atharva hai.. Atharva Dev... samast dev hamari Vandana karte hai..... Devo ke dev ~Atharva Dev”

“tu yaha mere saamne apni sirf tareef karne aaya hai...?”darwaja pura kholte hue wo boli

“aur nahi toh... tujhe kya laga ki mujhe teri yaad aa rahi thi, isliye yaha aaya... ? lol... pahle ki baat alag thi, par abhi apun ki life me Riya Rose hai... waise ... tere honth uske honth ki tarah pink kyun nahi hai...?”

“great talk, Atharva... Really, Great Talk... BYE..”daant peeste hue Sanjana boli aur darwaja mere muh pe de maarne ke liye usne jaise hee apna hath darwaje ki taraf kiya........ maine apna agla daav khel diya. Wo kya hai ki sab kuch planning ke according hona chahiye.



Sanjana darwaja ukhad ke mere muh pe maarne ki kriya karti, uske pahle hee maine uske baad hone wali apni pratikriya de di... bole toh... Newton ke third law waale action ke pahle hee reaction.... matlab Sanjana jo karti , fir uske baad main jo karta .. wo maine pahle hee kar diya aur aisa karke Sanjana jo karne waali uska astitva hee mita diya... bole toh Newton ke third law me action ke without hee reaction ka apne aap paida hona.... Got it..? Nope...? ok... maan lo ki ek deewar ko main Jafar samajh ke mukke pe mukka maarta hoon, jiske baad mere hath me zakhm ke nishan aa jate hai... ye toh hui normal action-reaction. Par kya ho yadi main deewar me mukka naa maru , lekin fir bhi wo zakhm mere hath me aa jaye...?? yep.. itni deep level ki planning rahti hai apni.. But How is this even possible... I mean reaction without action...? AM I A GOD....? :shy:

Sanjana mujhe dekh gusse se daarwaja band karti uske pahle hee maine wo kar diya jo main uske darwaja band karne ke baad karne waala tha aur is tarah se maine Sanjana ke darwaja band karne waale incident ko ekdum se remove kar diya.

“hey silky... wo, school me chocolate nahi de paya tha na.. toh yaha dene aaya hu…”Sanjana ko dekh muskurate hue maine apne jeb se chocolate nikala aur uski oor badha diya...

Ab Sanajan ka jo hath thodi der pahle mere muh par darwaja band karne waala tha , wahi hath ab chocolate lene ke liye aage badh raha tha... Told Ya, Bitches... I just removed that incident. par fir bhi wo school ke mafiq udas thi...? par kyun..? chocolate main use de toh raha hoon, fir kyun udas hai...?shayad Jafar waale incident ko lekar udas hogi... Sanjana apna hath aage mere hath ki oor dheere-dheere badhane lagi , maine jyada dhyan toh nahi diya us waqt... par jab chocolate lene ke liye uska dahina hath, mere hath ki taraf badh raha tha toh uska hath halka-halka kaanp raha tha... shayad khushi se...? shayad use bhi khushi ka bukhar ho gaya ho... jaise mujhe hua tha kuch dino pahle, jab Vindhya Hospital ke baahar Riya Rose ne mujhe hot chocolate ke liye invite kiya tha.

Par wo toh udas thi, fir use khushi ka bukhar kaise ho sakta hai....? mujhe uspar gaur karna chahiye tha. anyway, Chocolate use dene ke baad maine uska hath pakad liya aur bola...

“Silky, chehre ka rang kyun utra hua hai... bimar hai kya...?”

Sanjana bimar hai ya nahi ye check karne ke liye main use ghoorne laga aur mujhe aisa ghoorta dekh wo muskurane lagi, wo muskura toh rahi thi, par uski muskan me wo school wali udasi ab bhi maujood thi. Wo udas bhale thi par atleast wo muskura toh rahi thi, yehi badi baat thi aur is se bhi badi baat ki wo mujhe dekh kar muskura rahi thi… Fuck Me. Why Was I that dumb.

“normal toh hai tera body temperature…. Matlab sab thik hai”uska hath chhodte hue maine kaha “fir tera chehra utra hua kyun hai...”

“normal hu toh normal hee rahega na… dumb-dumb”

“normal hai toh fir udas kyun hai aur yadi udas hai toh fir normal kyun hai... normal people udas nahi hote aur udas people normal nahi hote... actually, mujhe samajh nahi aa raha ki main kya bole jaa raha hoon. tu pakka Aunty ji ko lekar pareshan hai…? ab samjha... Ya fir Jafar ko lekar….? Ya fir study ko lekar...? ya fir painting completion ko lekar...? ya fir....firrr”bolte –bolte main sochne laga ki aur kya reason ho sakta hai Sanjana ki pareshani ka.

“tu jaa, Jiju aate hee honge… dukan se…”

“kaun…? Karan Naik…? Wo bidu hai apun ka ab… dekha nahi kaise mere kahne matra se hee usne kal ....kalll... kal ho naa ho... Naina... jo hai sama, jee bhar jiyo. Mast gaana hai... tu bata tujhe kya hua…”

“tu jaa... I’m just tired….”

“then sleep… ya main lori sunau… 2009 chal raha hai aur aaj kal net me sab available hai…”

“sleeping can’t heal my tiredness… Atharva”darwaje ke bahar gamle me lage ek phool ko dekhte hue Sanjana boli, jiske baad meri nazar bhi uski nazar ka pichha karte hue us phul tak jaa pahuchi

“wo toh murjha gaya , use kyun dekh rahi hai.. thoda aage dekh.. ekdum fresh fresh maal hai..”maine kaha

“wowww...”wo fir muskurayi aur is baar uski muskan me udasi aur bhi jyada gahra gayi.. matlab mera bheja khisak gaya uske wowww kahne ke baad waala reaction dekh kar...

Jafar se itna pyar karti hai ye..? ki is kadar udas ho jayegi... sab saala meri vazah se hua hai aur aaj jab Interceptor ki kamaan sambhale hue sochta hoon toh sach me aisa lagta hai ki... wo sab meri hee galti thi.

“I’m Sorry...Sanjana..”

“why did you say sorry...”

“I.. don’t ...... know... ”aankhe chhoti-chhoti karke, kandhe uchaka kar maine kaha... mujhe naa toh us waqt kuch samajh aaya ki maine sorry kyun kaha aur naa hee kuch sujha ki ab iske aage kya bolu...

Par ye bolne ke baad jab Sanjana ne meri taraf dekha toh uske us chehre ko main aaj tak nahi bhool paya… bada ajeeb sa mila-jula expression tha Sanjana ke chehre pe… matlab wo jo rahta hai na… gusse wala… matlab frustration wala… ek minute… explain karta hoon... maan lo koyi aadmi udas ho, kisi chiz se gussa ho aur kisi chiz se dara hua bhi ho… in teeno ko yadi ek sath combine kar diya jaye toh jo final expression banega… waisa hee expression Sanjana ka bhi us samay tha. matlab koyi bata nahi sakta ki .. wo mujjhse gussa hai ya fir mere kaaran dukhi hai…. khair main ise khushi ka bukhar hee manta raha.

“Jafar ke bare me tune bataya tha na jiju ko…?” itni der me pahli baar meri aankho me aankhe daalkar Sanjana puchhi… aur idhar main ab bhi sochne me laga hua tha ki Sanjana mere kaaran udas hai ya fir gussa...?


P.S.-1 : Riya , Jafar se baat kyun ki.. itne pyaar se...? usne baat hee kaha ki..? Jafar ne kaha hi riya,.. riya ne kaha .. hi Jafar... murder thodi kiya hai Jafar ki.. uske Hi ka reply nahi degi Riya... :D

P.S.-2 : Jafar ko Naik ji ne pela fir bhi wo school kyun aaya... ab Naik ne Jafar ko rassi me baandh kar toh maara nahi hoga aur naa hee gang bulaya raha hoga . ki Jafar bhag naa sake.. par haan Naik ke changul se chhootne me time lag gaya hoga .. tab tak... do teen mukkan.. do teen laat. chalta hai.

P.S.-3 : Atharva, ne darwaje par laat klyun maara.. without reason... ? You, really asking me this question :D ek dialogue is update hai... Karan Naik toh bidu hai apna aB :lol:
Fantanstic update bhai...👌👍
 

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“kya bol rahi hai…”Sanjana ki taraf hath dikhakar haste hue maine kaha “mujhe kya lena dena Jafar aur tere se…”

“sach me…”

“aur nahi toh kya…”

“toh fir school me jo chocolate tujhe Riya ko bahut pahle de dena chahiye tha… wo lunch me mujhe dekhkar, mujhe kyun dene aa raha tha…? aur fir jab waha nahi de paya toh abhi yaha kyun aaya hai…? bimar toh Riya ki maa bhi thi, fir uske liye donation campaign kyun nahi chalaya… tune.…”

“good idea…. Mujhe kyun nahi sujha ye… anyway, kaun si painting bana rahi hai..?”

“tu jaa Atharva…. Aish kar, you deserve it…”

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Jab Sanjana ne dobara kaha toh maine dimag lagaya... uske expression , tone ko analyse karne ki koshish ki.. lekin kuch bhi palle nahi pada. Isliye maine time travel karne ka socha... Remember that trick ...? jo maine Clash of Canvas ke result ke time use ki thi... jab Riya aur Sanjana mere sar par tandav karte hue kiski painting better hai , ye puch rahi thi... tab apun ne time travel karke bataya tha ki kaise Jafar ke kaaran ye situation paida hui...? bas same concept. Mera matlab past ke Future me hone wale ek incident ko past ke present me bayan karna... lekin sab kuch rahega past me hee... Afterall I'm The fucking Narrator, so let's begin.

Past’s Future

“Ranjan.... dekh yar, main apni badayi nahi kar raha, matlab ek tarike se kar raha hoon.. par ye khud ki badayi karne se jyada ek sawal hai... main bahut brilliant hoon , fate-hal intelligent hoon. Ye mujhe pata hai ... fir bhi kabhi-kabhi saamne wale ki normal baat ya expression bhi mujhe samajh nahi aati.. main unka haanv-bhaav etc. kuch nahi samajh paata aur jo mann me aata hoon bol ke nikal leta hoon, jis-se log hurt ho jaate hai... fir mujhe chutiya –vutiya kahte hai ki main chutiya tha.. warna wo pat jaati, mere sath ye hota, wo hota... aisa kuch-kuch taana maarte hai... shuru me sirf Ved kahta tha.. lekin ab Riya Rose ka mere prati bartaav dekh kar lag raha hai ki... ye sach me sach hai..”

“well, tu chahe kitna bhi intelligent kyun naa ho.. kitna bhi brilliant kyun naa ho, kitne bhi tikdam kyun naa laga le.. tera IQ level 200, 300 hee kyun naa paar kar jaaye... hai toh tu 18 saal ka hee naa. Abhi se thodi sab samajh me aayega. Feelings aur experience toh umra aur situation ke sath-sath hee aayegi... tension mat le, sab thik ho jayega...... ek din....”muskurate hue Ranjan ne kaha... wo us waqt kyun muskuraya.... ? main aaj tak suspence me hoon...



Past’s Present

“ye double meaning tha kya..? ya fir triple meaning ..? main kuch samjha nahi.. ek baar fir se bol toh..”

“Tu jaa Atharva... Aish kar...”

Pata nahi kya kahna chahti thi wo... is baar bhi samajh nahi aaya. Fir se repeat karne ko bolu kya..? nope.. aise me toh beijjati ho jayegi. Ek kaam karta hoon koyi random sa dialogue maar deta hoon... bas yahi sochkar conversation ko aage badhate hue maine kaha...

“ Sanjana, you should often talk about yourself.. . about your problems… it makes things easier”

“ and why should i…? I mean.. just look around. Nobody gives a damn about anyone , everyone is too busy in their lives… just look at yourself…. You’re too busy in your melodrama thaaaaat”

“that… ?”Silky ke sentence khatam karne se pahle hee main bol pada... kyunki mere random dialogue ko usne kuch jyada hee seriously le liya tha ... isliye use beech me rokna toh banta tha.

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“tujhe mana kiya tha na mere ghar me aane se…”mujhe peechhe se sirf itna hee sunayi diya aur uske agle hee pal maine khud ko jameen me pada hua paaya. Kisi ne mujhe ekdum achanak jor se utha kar patka tha yaa fir feka tha... behenchod kasam se dimag fry ho gaya tha us waqt.. matlab ek pal main Sanjana se uske saamne khade hokar baat kar raha tha aur agle hee pal aise jameen me leta hua dard se karah raha tha.. what the fuck did just happen...?

Kuch samay laga mujhe sab samajhne me ki Sanjana ke saamne se achanak adrishya hokar main jameen ki dhool kyun khaane laga tha....Mujhe toh laga tha ki ab main aur Karan Naik ek dusare ko achchhi tarah se jaante hai, samajhte hai aur humara concept bilkul clear hai… atleast mera toh clear hee tha. Lekin Karan Naik ka concept clear nahi tha. Mera matlab… kya jaroorat thi us behan ke lawde ko mujhse aise bartaav karne ki… sale ne itni jor se utha ke feka tha ki jab pichhwade ke bal main neeche gira toh kuch der dard ke maare uth hee nahi paya….

“tere ko na… main aakhiri baar bol raha hu, yadi agli baar mere ghar ke aas-paas bhi bhatka naa toh , jaha milega na … wahi zameen khan ke zinda gaad dunga… tere maa-baap tak zindagi bhar isi soch me rhenge ki tere sath hua kya..”

“sorry … aainda aisa nahi hoga…”((ruk madarchod, thoda aur bada hone de… fir teri maa chodta hu... par teri maa toh budhi ho gayi hogi, nope.. plan cancel.. teri behan chodunga. ))

Iske baad mere muh se ek shabd nahi nikla, main waha se utha aur apna pichhwada sahlate hue, langdate hue.... wapas apne ghar ki taraf chal diya… kyunki dard ke kaaran abki main Karan Naik ko patthar maar kar bhag bhi nahi sakta tha . isliye meri bhalayi isi me thi ki.. shanti se.. chup-chap waha se nikal loon....

“tujhe ek baar me samajh nahi aata kya, Sanjana… ab dekh kya rahi hai use… chal andar… aise ladke sirf aur sirf ladkiyo ka istemaal karna jaante hai... ”

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Us din ke baad main Sanjana ke ghar kabhi nahi gaya yaha tak ki us-se baat karna bhi band kar diya… pata nahi kyun… par maine kar diya. Karan Naik ko toh us samay main kuch nahi kar sakta tha , isiliye shayad khunnas me maine Sanjana ko hee ignore karna shuru kar diya tha. Waise bhi us samay main Riya ke peechhe is kadar pad gaya tha ki Sanjana kuch khas mere khayalo me thi bhi nahi. un dino aur us ghatna ke baad toh bilkul bhi nahi.... isliye maine apna main focus Riya Rose par kendrit kiya kyunki ekmatra wahi toh aisi ladki thi, pure school me.... jo bindas kisi se bina darkar rahti thi. Waise, Pahle Sanjana bhi isi category me aati thi par jab se Karan Naik humare mohalle me rahne aaya tha, wo ab fearless nahi rahi thi. Ya fir kahu ki Riya meri zindgi me is kadar bas chuki thi ki.... kisi dusari ladki ke liye mere dil me ab koyi jagah hee nahi bachi thi. Rahi sahi kasar Ved ke one girl at a time waale gyan aur Karan Naik ke us harkat ne puri kar di. par Mere sath Aisa hoga... matlab main Riya Rose ko lekar itna pagal ho jaunga ... ye Riya ko pahli baar dekh kar bilkul bhi nahi laga tha par ab sach yahi tha… wo toh bas gol wali hat pahne bio class ke bahar khadi thi jab main us-se first time baat karne gaya tha...... tab kisne socha tha ki itna kuch hoga aur itna kuch abhi aage hona baaki hai....

“kiske bare me soch rahe ho…..”jab park me Riya ke sath baithe-baithe main Sanjana ke khayalo me hee khoya raha toh mujhe wapas haqiqat se waqif karate hue Riya puchhi…

“bas wo quiz ke bare soch raha tha… jab hum jeetenge toh kya moment hoga wo.. pure hall me taaliya baj uthegi….”

“aur yadi haar gaye toh…?”

“tab pure hall me gaaliya sunayi degi…no problem.. I think I’m beyond that”

“chocolate…..?”dairy milk ka ek packet meri taraf badhate hue Riya boli...

“mere liye…? Oh teri....ye kaise mumkin hai... pahle toh aisa nahi dekha maine kahi...”

“kya nahi dekha...”

“ Ek ladki ka ladke ko chocolate dena matlab ulti ganga bahne jaisa hai…”

“ganga seedhi bahe ya ulti… tumhe us-se kya… tumhe toh sirf dubki lagana hai…”chocolate ka packet mere hath me pakda kar Riya muskurayi….

“ye double meaning tha kya… ya fir triple meaning...? I’m bit confused ...”

“aur nahi toh kya.. tumhe kya laga sirf tum hee baato ko gol-gol ghuma sakte ho...? mujhe bhi aata hai baate banana…”beanie apne sar me daalte hue Riya boli... uske beanie nikalte hee meri nazar uske laal hote hue nose aur chicks par gayi... aur mera mann kiya ki main jabran use pakad kar jabardasti kiss kar loon... is it right to do that even if she is not ready ...? or not..? am I losing my mind...? Where is Ved..? I need you, man...

“tumhare gharwale mere bare me jaante hai..? tumhare papa goli toh nahi maarne wale na mujhe…”
Great update....
 
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