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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

Aapke hisab se story ki lead lady kise hona chahiye

  • Monica

    Votes: 19 76.0%
  • Rashmi

    Votes: 12 48.0%
  • Sheetal

    Votes: 7 28.0%

  • Total voters
    25
  • Poll closed .

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"aur isi ke saath ohm's law...."

Physics ka class chal raha tha aur saare students gaur se padh rahe the.aur notes le rahe the

"Wo dekh wo raha yug"ek student ne kaha aur paper ka rocket bana uthkar yug ke upar maar diya

Yug ne us paper ko uthaya aur usko haath me hi daba liya aur mudkar dekha

"Ha ha dekh kaise dekh raha...."baat halal me atak gayi.ek bhayavah chehra dikha us ladke ko yug ke chehre ki jagah.peela pad gaya wo aur chupchap baith gaya

Na kisi se batchit na hasna aur na hi apne dosto se milna
Yug ne aaj apne baal ko saamne ki aur kar diya.aankhen baalon se dhaki hui.shirt ke button khule hue aur cuffs chade hue
School ke bahar a gaya yug

Rashmi ka dil zoro se dhadak raha tha.yug uski aur hi a raha tha

"Yug...tum..y y yahan.??"rashmi ka chehra yug ko dekh laal ho gaya tha

"Hi rashmi"yug bola aur upar se neeche tak rashmi ko dekhne laga
Rashmi ke skirt kaafi chote the.yug ki aankhen wahi atak gayi

Rashmi sharma ke laal ho rahi thi.uska dil zoro se dhadak raha tha.

Tabhi yug ka phone baj utha

"Hello??"yug ne phone uthaya aur rashmi ki dekh kar shararat ke saath muskuraya

"Sasuka bol raha hoon.yug us mask ke baare me baat karni thi.koi problem to nahi ho rahi hai na usse??"sasuka ne poochha

"Problem??wo kya hota hai.acha bore mat kijiye bye"yug ne phone rakh diya aur ek flying kiss rashmi ko dekar cycle chala kar apne ghar pohuncha

Udhar sasuka soch me pad gaya

"Kya soch me doobe hue ho??"master yani red clan ke master ne poochha

"Master lagta hai yug...."sasuka chup ho gaya

"Poori baat"master bola

"Uske paas master ahru ka m mask h hai shayad"sasuka nazrein jhukakar bola

"Kya???ye mujhe ab bata rahe ho??utho abhi"master uthkar khada ho gaya

"Kya hua master??"sasuka ne poochha

"Abhi ke abhi india jaana hai "master bola aur hakka bakka dikh rahe sasuka ko lekar chalne laga

"Waise mask ke baare me thoda bohut suna hai master,wo master ahru..."sasuka bolte bolte master ko dekhkar ruk gaya

"Mask of death"master bola

"Kya??"sasuka uchal pada

"Kai sadiyon pehle hamare hi clan ki sthapna jisne ki"master bola

"Yani jisne red clan ko janm diya"sasuka bola

"Bilkul aur us ninja ne hi red clan ka ek gaon basaya tha.uske pass kai shaktiyan thi.aur use darr tha ki shaktiyan kisi galat haathon ne na chali jaaye."master bolte bolte ruk gaya

"Usne apne meditation ko ek mask ka roop de diya.aur is mask ko generation ke bad generation ko pass kiya gaya.jisne bhi ye mask pehna uske paas apar shaktiyan thi.aur unhone us mask ko control kar bade se bade ninja ko haraya.har ek ninja ise apne shishya ko deta jo fir ek samay ke baad apne shishya ko deta tha.aise hi ek ke baad ek hote hue master ahru ke paas pohuncha ye mask"master bola

"Samjha lekin fir to is mask se koi problem nahi hona chahiye us bacche ko"sasuka bola

"Mask ki taqat agar us ladke se zyada hui,ya agar us ladke ne us mask par kaabu nahi paya to wo mask us ladke par kaabu pa lega,aur us ladke me dabi hui uski saari negative character ko saamne layega,sahi waqt par nahi roka gaya to wo waisa ban jayega jaisa wo nahi banna chahta "master bola

"Jaldi kijiye fir "sasuka bola aur car ki speed badha di

"Ek baat aur boli hai sasuka"master bola

"Boliye master"sasuka bola

"Ye mera akhiri mission hoga,jald se jald tumhe naya master dhoondna hoga"master aankhen band karte hue bola

Sasuka master ko dekhne laga.uske dimag me bohut kuch chal raha tha
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"Sab kuch to le liya ,tum logo ko kuch lena hai shiksha??yug??"poly bolu

Mahine ka pehla din tha aur poly apne bachhon ke saath mall me aayi hui thi.

"List ka saara saman to le liya"plot ne ek baar fir chek kiya.yug chup chap idhar udhar dekh raha tha aur kuch bole bina wo aur shiksha kaafi door a gaye the.aur mall ke bahar a gaye the.halka sa sunsaan tha jagah bas do ladke khade the

"Wo dekh kya maal hai,ekdum tight"ek ladka shiksha ko dekh kar bole.

Yug wahan gaya aur ek ka collar pakad kar bola
"Kiske baare me bol raha tha??"

"Abey hat jaanta nahi mai koun...."

DHADDDDDDD

yug ke ek punch ne us ladke ko udakar door fenk diya aur wo wahi behosh ho gaya

Doosre ladke ko koi mauka milta isse pehle hi

THADDDD

ek kick ne use bhi behoshi ke duniya me pohuncha diya

"Bhaiyya kya hua??"shikha awaz sunkar daudkar aayi

"Hua ye ki aise chote kapde pehenkar apni nabhi aur pair ki numaish karegi to ye aise hi maar khate rahenge,sharm bech khayi hai ya pocket money kam pad rahe hai to apna jism bhi bech aati hai"yug bola

"BHAIYAAAAAA"gurraya shiksha.aur rote hue yug ko dekhne lagi.aaj tak yug ne itne kadwe bol kabhi nahi bola.chi ghinn aati hai usse ab
Shiksha apna chehra dhakte hue bhag gayi poly ke paas

Yug ko koi fark nahi pada.tabhi use door se esha dikhai di jo ek ladke ke saaththi

"Hi esha"yug esha ke paas jakar bola

"Hi yug"esha boli.pata tha use ki yug ne bartein aur uske chamcho ki kaise dhulai ki
Tab se yug ke aas paas ghoom rahi thi.aaj mauka mila use

"Ekdum hot lag rahi ho"bol yug ne apna haath esha ke kamar me rakh diya

"Abe o ye meri gf hai" uske saath wala ladka bola

Yug ne uska collar pakar utha diya zameen se

"Choro use yug uff mai kehti hoon choro use"esha boli

Yug ne use chor diya aur esha ke chehre ko pakda aur

Muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

Ek kiss jad diya aur chala gaya.esha roti rahi.us ladke ne esha ko sambhala

"You will pay for this you bastard"esha ke saath wala ladka bola

Zabardast update

To Yug pr mask jadoo charrh gaya ab dekna hai k kese is se bahir niklta hai
 

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Monica se milne yug ja raha tha.monica ne bulaya tha kuch kaam tha

Tabhi use sadak kinare ek bheed dikhi.yug bheed ke paas gaya aur usne bheed ke beech me ek laash dekhi uske aaspaas uski biwi aur jachhe ro rahe the

"Ro mat maa wo nahi aayega.use sirf apna matlab poora karna tha" ek bacche ne ro rahe apni maa se kaha

"Chup,wo ayega.zaroor ayega aur hame nyay dilayega samjha"rote hue uski maa boli

Yug ko koi fark nahi pada.wo Monica se milne chala gaya

"Ab kya karne aaye ho tum"Monica sahil ko dekh boli

"Maafi mangne.dekho Monica hamare beech break up to ho gaya lekin kuch problems ki wajah se ek doosre se nafrat karne lage hai.isliye mai ye sab khatam kar dosti ka haath badhana chahta hoon"sahil bol apna haath aage badha diya

Kuch sochte hue Monica ne bhi sahil ka haath pakad kar haath milaya
Aur dono hasne lage.monica ne ghadi dekhi yug ke aane ka waqt ho gaya tha lekin wo aaya nahi

Yug to pehle se aaya hua tha lekin sahil ko waha dekha ruk gaya tha
Ye sab dekh
yug ko dhakka laga.lekin kyun use nahi pata.monica se kuch alag hi lagav tha use shayad.

"Are yug idhar aao na"sahil ne hanskar awaz lagai to Monica bhi chaunk gayi
Yug chupchap saamne aaya peeche se

"Ek pic lo na hamari"bol sahil Monica ko apne Kareeb laya aur apna mobile yug ke haath me diya

"Costly mobile hai samjhe,chalo isko aise karke aise dabao thik hai??"bol sahil Monica ko pakadkar pose me a gaya.monica uncomfortable feel karne lagi thi

"Yug wo mai...."Monica ne bolna chaha

"Koi baat nahi Monica bura photographer nahi hoon"bol yug ne jhat jhat do teen photo kheecha

"Aap logo ko aapka reunion mubarak ho"bol yug wapas apne ghar ki aur a gaya

Sab ke sab matlabi hai is duniya me.emotions aur bonding ka koi matlab nahi hai.yug ke soch ke saath usne dekha nahi ki uske aankhon ke neeche dark circles pad rahe the.aankhen laal ho rahi thi

Kamre me pohunchkar usne apne kapde badle kisi se baatein nahi ki.mask poori tarah se kaala ho chuka tha aur us kaale mask ko pehenkar yug chal pada fir se lekin
Aaj wo apne mission ke liye nahi balki apne maksad ke liye ja raha tha

"Acha to chalta hoon.kaafi der ho gayi hai Monica"sahil bola

Monica chup thi.yug ka aise jaana use thik nahi laga.lekin pata nahi kyun yug ko rok nahi paayi.

"Are park ke ye saare lights ko kya hua achanak bujh gaye??"sahil bola

Monica ko bhe ajeeb laga.aise kaise saare lights off ho gaye ek saath??are koi to andhere me Khada hai
Monica ke sochte sochte achanak ...

DHADDDDDDD

"akkk........"muh se khoon nikal gaya tha sahil ka aur uska sharir udkar park me bachhon ka jhoola se takraya...

THANNNNNNNNNN

aur niche girte hi shant ho gaya.
Monica ke apna pose le liya

"Aaj tum mere hathon se nahi bachoge hatyare??"Monica bol uthi

"Jo ladki chaar paanch ko ek saath ghumati hai wo hatyara keh rahi hai very funny "yug bola.
Mask ka aakar fir badalne laga aur uske do singh nikal aaye
Monica halka sa ghabra rahi thi

"Kisne roka hai a jao"yug bola aur chup chap khada ho gaya

Monica daudkar aayi aur usne vaar kiye

THAKK THAKK THAKK

yug ne rokne ki koshish nahi ki aur na hi Monica ke vaar ka koi asar hua

"Ho gaya??....ab meri bari........ninja skill 10 punch"yug ne aankhen band ki aur ....

Swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh swooshhhhhhhh
THUPPPPPPPPPPPPP

"Ahhhh"Monica ke muh se khoon nikal gaya aur wo baith gayi.bijli se tez un vaaro ko rokne me kamyab nahi ho paayi

"Tum jaisi ladki ka is duniya se chale jaana hi behtar hai"bol yug ne apna hockey stick ko hawa.me uthaya.monica ne apni aankhen band kar di

Lekin....lekin ......hockey stick hawa me hi atki rahi.....yug use apni aur kheechne laga lekin nakamyab raha

"Ruk jao"ek kadak awaz ne yug ko palatne par majboor kar diya.ek vriddh khade the saath me sasuka tha.vriddh ne ishara karte hi sasuka Monica ke paas gaya aur sahara dekar uthaya use

"Ladki ko kahi surakshit jagah le jao"vriddh bola

"Ninja skill .....earth style mud wall......"bol yug ne aankhen band ki ....

GRRRDDDDDDDDDD

Achanak ek mitti ki diwar charo aur se khadi ho gayi sasuka aur Monica ke
Sasuka chaunka.earth style???yani mitti????ise to bade bade ninja use karte the red clan ke.ye shakti is ladke me kahan se a gayi???

"Bacche is mask ko apne chehre se utaar fenko"vriddh bola

"Oh nahi dadaji abhi abhi to pehenna shuru kiya hai.agar nikalwana hi hai to khud nikalo ye mask mere muh se"yug bola aur khada ho gaya ladne

Monica ko kuch bhi samajh nahi a raha tha us par wo apne hosh bhi dheere dheere khone lagi

Sooperb update bro
 

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"red clan is kamzor yug se aage nahi badhega,red clan ko aage badhana hai to is yug ko taqatwar banna hoga"yug bola

"Nahi red clan ko aage badhne ke liye yug chahiye ,ye wala yug nahi"master pose lete hue bola

"Huh dekhte hai"bol yug ne bhi pose le liya

"Ninja skill lotus power"master bola
Aur unke hathon se kuch lotus ke phool nikle jo yug ki aur muh karke tezi se ghoomne lage aur lotus ke pankhudi yug ki aur badhne lage

"Huh ninja skill ....earth style mud wall"yug ke aisa bolte hi dharti fadkar ek diwar khadi ho gayi aur lotus ki pankhudi us diwar me ghans gayi

""Ninja style.......10 kicks"yug ka sharir hawa me ghoomar aur ek ke baad ek karke 10 kick master par barsaye usne

Lekin master ne sab rok liya

"100 kicks"yug ke nafrat bhari aankhon se master ki aur dekhkar bola aur is baar aur tezi se kicks padhne lage master ko

"1000 kicks"yug ki tezi badhti ja rahi thi master ko rokana mushkil ho raha tha ek do baar seh bhi liya unhone

"Yug us mask ke control se niklo"sasuka cheekha utha jo behosh Monica ko thame hue tha

Control??kaisa control??bachpan me hi jiske maa baap guzar jaate hai,bachpan se hi jis par zulm par zulm hota aaya hai
Aaj ek ladki ne bhi dhoka de diya

Mask ke saath saath yug ke kapdo me bhi badlaav a raha tha.uska jeans aur t shirt aur jacket sab kuch gayab hokar poori tarah laal kapdo me change hi gaya

"Earth style .......earth coffin"ek thandi awaz me yug ne kaha

Master ki aankhen badi badi ho gayi......earth cofffin???
Ye ladka ?????

Yug ne apne haatho ko khol diya.aur master ke chaaro aur mitti ka ek sakht roop gherkar ek coffin ka roop le liya

"Ab ye mutthi band karega aur fir sab khatam"master ne aankhen band ki sab khatam

"Ninja skill.....fire style dragon breath"aag ki lapten yug ki aur badhne lagi

"Earth style ....... shield"yug ko charo aur mitti ke gher liya aur aag se bach gaya yug.usne mudkar dekha usi ke umra ka ek shaks khada hai.red clan ka tattoo hai uske gale ke paas
Yani ek aur ninja a gaya is ladai me

"Master aap thik to hai??"ninja ne poochha

"Tumhe kaid se nikle kuch hi din hue hai aur tum is ladai me a gaye??kisse poochhate"master ne us shaks se poochha

"Ek ninja ka pehle kaam apne clan aur apne master ki raksha karna ,ye wahi karne aaya hai "yug bola aur master aur us shaks se ladne ko taiyar ho gaya
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"Yani kaid se bachkar ye ladka red clan me wapas a gaya"kubda bola

"Lagta to aisa hi hai,yahi khatam kar de use??"kaala shaks bola

"Nahi master ne use zinda rakhne ko bola hai,waise mai is ladai ko dekh maze le raha hoon"kubda bola

"Lagta hai jeet jayenge??"kaala shaks bola

"Lagta to nahi hai zyada der tikenge??"kubda ye sab dekhte hue bola

"Hmm lekin hame kya??"kaala shaks bola

"Dimag hai ya ghar chodd aaye ho"kubda bola

"S sorry"sar jhukakar kaala shaks bola

"Ye jo bhi ho sabko harakar agar dark clan ke peeche pad gaya to problem hogi"kubda bola

"To kya abhi chale jaaye ??ladne??"kaala shaks bola

"Nahi pehle dekhte hai ki ladai kab tak aur kis taraf jaati hai"kubda bola

Y
Mask wala ek taraf aur ek taraf wo ninja aur master
Ladai aur interesting hone wali hai.shayad dark clan ko bhi is ladai me na chahte hue shamil hona padega.kubda sochne laga
Earth style ....... shield

Sooperb update bro
 

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"fire style fire balls"us ninja ne haath se ishara kiya aur aag ke gole nikalkar yug ki aur aane lage

"Ninja skill......earth supreme shield"yug bola aur zameen ka ek tukda dharti se alag hoka yug ko lekar hawa me uthkar tairne laga

Aage ka gola yug tak pahunche se pehle hi zameen se ek haath uthkar use rok deta hai

"Mujhse jeetna namumkin hai ,apni haar maan lo..."yug ke bolte bolte master ne shuriken yug ki aur uchal di

"Hah master bhi laga hua hai abhi tak"yug ne hawa me.hi shuriken rok liya lekin

THAPPPPPPPPPPP

aankhen band kar yug ne apne haath se us ninja ka punch rok liya

"Huh yahi mai chahta tha"ninja bola aur isse pehle yug kuch samajh paata us ninja ka haath laal hone laga aur dheere dheere aag me badalne laga

Yug ka haath bhi mitti me badalne laga .lekin. Tabhi

"Ninja skills.....lotus explosion"master ke haath se kuch lotus yug ki aur lapke yug muskuraya

DHADDDDD

us ninja ko door fenk diya apne vaar se aur un lotus ko hawa me hi rok diya apne haath ke ek ishare se.aur ek chukti bajate hi

Saare ke saare lotus us ninja par barsane lage

BHADAMMMM BHADAMMMM BHADAAAAAAMMM

ninja chitak kar door ja gira.aur buri tarah se ghayal ho gaya.lekin uthkar jaise taise khada ho gaya

"CHENNNN"us ninja ki aur dekhkar master bol pade

"Lagta hai is ladai me thodi bohut madad karni hogi red clan ki,kya kehte ho ??"kubda door se dekhte hue bola

"Aapke dimag me kya chal raha hai aap hi jaane.lekin bohut dino baad ladne ka mauka mila hai ise mai jaane nahi doonga"kaala shaks bola aur uchal kar ladai ke maidan me a gaya

"Ohho ek aur Ajnabee maidan me ???kya baat hai,sab ek saath maroge ya ek ek karke"yug bola

Master bhi us kaale shaks ko dekhkar chaunk pada

"Is ladai me dark clan ko aane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi wo bhi khud zabooza ko aana pada??"master ne us kaale shaks se poochha

"Aam khao ped na gino"zabuza bola

"Ninja skill........earth punch"yug bol pada aur mitti ka ek haath zabuza ki aur badha

"Bachhon ka khel.......ninja skill .......water shield"zabuza ke bolte hi paani ki ek diwar se mitti ka ek punch takraya aur wahi ruk gaya

"Ninja skill...... Water kunai..."zabuza ke bolte hi paani kai chote chaku me change ho gayi aur yug ke samajhne se pehle hi

KHACH KHACH KHACH KHACH KHACH KHACH

chalni ho gayi yug ki body.yug samajh hi nahi paaya itni tezi se ye sab hua.kaise??
Itna taqatwar hai kya ye ninja

Yug ke haath zameen par gaye.
"Earth style......earth burial"yug ke bolte hi zabuza ke pair jad ho gaye.mityi uske poore sharir par chadhne lagi thi.aur isse pehle kuch kar paata mitti uske gardan tak pahunch gayi thi

"Ha ha ab dekh kaise tujhe maarta.......... AAHHHHHHH"yug cheekh utha.kyunki master ka haath uske chehre par tha.
Wo aankhen band karke kuch keh rahe the
Mask yug ke chehre se nikal rakha tha.lekin aise jaise chipka hua ho

"Master ye le..."yug ke haath master ke seene me lag gaya

"AKKKKKK......"master ke.muh se khoon nikal pada paani ki tarah.lekin mask par unhone apni pakad rakhi hui thi

"Ninja skill fire .........blast"Chen ba aur haath se aag ka ek blast yug ko laga aur ise dhakke se mask se alag hokar door ja gira yug aur wahi behosh ho gaya

Master zameen par gira hua tha.chen wahi gaya.saath me zabuza jo ki yug ke behosh hone ke baad aazad ho gaya tha mitti ki kaid se wo bhi a chuka tha.sasuka bhi daudkar aaya
Master mar chuke the
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RED CLAN KE EK KHUFIA JAGAH PAR
baarish zoro se ho rahi thi aur master ke samadhi par phool chadha rahe the saare ninja ek ke baad ek karke

Sasuka aur saare ro rahe the.yug bhi.agar nahi ro raha tha to wo tha Chen
Yug ki baari aayi phool chadhane ki to...

"Ruko ladke tumhari wajah se master ki jaan gayi.kis himmat ke saath phool chadha rahe ho tum??"ek ninja bola

"Bilkul sahi pata nahi ye hamare clan me aaya hi kaise"doosra ninja bola

"Mai to kehta hoon aaj isko yahi khatam kar dete hai"bol ek aur ninja ne yug par hamla kiya ...

THAPPPPP

haath beech me hi rok liya Chen ne.haath uthane wala ninja chaunk pada

"Chen tum is ladke ko bacha rahe ho kyun??"ninja ne poochha

"Kyunki wo red clan ka hissa hai"Chen bola aur aage nikal gaya

"Yug ki koi galti nahi hai.ye sab us mask ke karan hua jo yug ne pehna hua tha.isliye meri guzarish hai ki sab ise maar kar de"sasuka ne baat sambhalne ke liye kaha

Sab ne sasuka ki baat maan to li lekin yug ko abhi bhi nafrat ki nazron se dekhne lage

"Ab hame ek naya master dhoondna hi hoga.aur is mission ke liye mai aur yug saath jayenge"sasuka bola

"Aur saath me Chen bhi jayega sasuka.is ladke par ham bharosa nahi kar sakte"ek vriddh ne paas aakar bola

Yug sar jhukakar hi khada raha.aaj tak kabhi kisi ka shayad hi bhala kiya hoga usne.aaj uske chalte is ache insaan ko marna pada

"Koi baat nahi .teri raksha karne mai hamesha taiyyar rahunga"Chen ke kataksh bhare awaz ne yug ko hila diya

Master ki kabr aur dekhkar usne ek shapath liya
Ki aaj ke baad apne aapko itna taqatwar banayega ki uski wajah se kisi ko marna na pade

Zabardast update bro.

To akhir kamyaab ho gaye Yug ka mask hata hi diya pr master ki mout ho gayi isme .
 

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"shiksha??"yug ne siksha ke kamre me ghuste hi awaz lagai

Siksha kuch nahi boli.us din mall me yug ke jo bezzati bhare bol bole the tab se yug se filhal baatchit band tha

Siksha ke kuch na bolne ke bawjood yug kamre ke ander aaya
Siksha kuch likh rahi thi.yug ko dekh ke bhi andekha kar apna kaam karti rahi

"Jaanta hoon jaane anjane me hurt kiya hai maine,isliye aaj wada karta hoon kabhi hurt nahi karunga tujhe,ho sake to maaf kar dena sis"bol yug kamre se bahar nikal gaya
Siksha ne likhna band kar diya aur sochne lagi,yug jaisa bhola bhala iladka aisi badtameezi se kaise baatein kar sakta hai

Yug wahan se nikalkar Monica ke ghar ki aur badh chala
Monica bhi shayad yug ko expect kar rahi thi.isliye jaise hi yug ne darwaza knock kiya usne jhat se darwaza khola

"Dekho yug i can explain wo us shaam ko mai aur sahil...."Monica ne baatein karte karte yug ko dekha.use koi interest nahi tha Monica ki baatein sunna

"Dekho Monica tum aur sahil kya kar rahe ho mujhe isme koi interest nahi hai.sahil ko tum mujhse pehle jaanti thi.aur tumhara close hai wo.mujhe tumne kuch hi dino se jaana hai isliye mera koi haq nahi banta ki mai tum par apna adhikar jamaun"yug bolta gaya

Monica chup thi.yug ke baaton ka kya jawab de do he ja rahi thi

"Meri dosti jaisi hi rahegi jaisi pehle thi.lekin usse aage nahi badhegi"bol yug ne ghadi dekha aur uthkar chala gaya Monica ko hakka bakka chodkar

"Kya baat hai yahan bulaya hum logo ko?"shubham bol utha

"Treat de raha hai kya hame??"jyoti ne shubham ke kandhe par haath rakhkar bola

Rashmi bhi aayi thi lekin chup thi

"Tum kuch nahi bolegi??"yug ne poochha
Rashmi ka chehra laal ho gaya tha yug ko dekhkar
Mature ho raha tha yug.shayad

"Waise mai thoda kaam se ja raha hoon,kai dino tak wapas nahi aaunga"yug ne bola to sab ek doosre ka muh dekhte rahe

"Samajh me nahi aaya"jyoti ne kaha

"Matlab tu kahan ja raha hai kyun ja raha hai.poori baat to bata"shubham bola

"Kaam hai yaar"bol yug jaane lag

"Yug??"rashmi dheere se boli

"Bolo rashmi"yug bola

"Kuch nahi"bol rashmi chup ho gayi

"Ok guys chalta hoon bye"bol yug chala gaya apne ghar
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"Hmm mask abhi bhi hai tum logo ke paas??"dark clan ka master phone par tha zabuza ke saath

"Ji master"zabuza bola

"Yani wo ladka yug hi tha"master bola

"Ji"zabuza bola

"Aur rashmi use ........uff ab rashmi par bhi nazar hai uski??"master ne poochha

"Nazar rakho us ladke aur rashmi par"master bola

"Lekin aapne bola tha kaam hone ke baad wapas aa jaane ke liye"zabuza bola

"Nahi filhal wahi raho aur nazar rakho meri beti par"master bola

"Aap kahe to uda de us ladke ko??"zabuza ne poochha

"Filhal nahi,aage dekhenge"master bola

"Waise master ye mask hamne pehenne ki koshish ki thi.lekin itni asardar nahi thi.pata nahi kyun???"zabuza bola

"Mask abhi tak sirf yug ko accept kar raha hai.isliye apni shakti aur de raha hai."master bola

"Fir is mask ka kya kare??hamare to kisi kaam ka nahi"zabuza bola

"Nahi.bina iske yug lachar hai.mask ho apne paas hi rakho aur aaye waqt le aana "master bola

"Ji"zabuza bola.aur phone rakh diya

"Tumne ye to bataya nahi ki master ki beti yug se bohut zyada hi pyaar karne lagi hai??"zabuza ke bagal me baitha kubda bola

Zabuza chup tha.rashmi ka pyaar yug ke prati har din badh raha tha

"Fir wo ladki koun thi jo park me behosh thi??"zabuza ne poochha

"Pata nahi,ye pyaar vyapar koi khalaji ka khel nahi hai,chalo chai peete hai "kubda bola aur dono nikal gaye
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Subah ke chaar baje the aur yug nikal gaya tha.
Poly aur harish ko ek jhooti kahani batakar

Uske peeche ek Saaya laga hua tha.jaise hi yug ne peeche mudkar dekha wo Saaya chup gaya

Yug ne charo aur dekha aur aage badh gaya

Rashmi ne rahat ki saans li.ek to chup chupkar yug ka peecha karna

Wow ek thrilling experience rahega.rashmi sochkar khush hone lagi
Samajh me nahi aaya

Bohat hi zabardast update bro
 

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"waise hum ja kahan se rahe hai?"yug ne poochha

"Abhi tak pata nahi ise?? strange,aur aap isko mission me le ja rahe the??"muskura utha Chen

Yug gusse se kaamp utha.chen ki badtameezi badhti ja rahi thi
Sasuka bechara fans chuka tha dono ke beech

"Waise hum chal kidhar rahe hai??"yug ne poochha

"Hyderabad"sasuka bola

"India??lekin mujhe laga hum china ya japan jayenge"yug bola

"Kyun china aur japan kyun??"Chen ne poochha

"Martial arts ki shuruaat wahi se hui hai na??"yug bola

"Galat,martial arts ki shuruaat india se hui hai,yahan ke ek rajkumar ne boudhh dharm ko apnaya aur china chala gaya.wahan usne wahan ke boudd monastery ko martial arts ka gyaan diya.self defence ke liye,wo sab baad me
Suna hai Goutam buddha aur bodhisatv dono khud martial arts jaante the"sasuka bola

"Kya ??buddha ji khud Martial arts jaante....ohho mera dimag itna sab nahi le payega"yug bola

"Lekin ab jo naya master is clan ka leader banega,wo kya iske layak hai ??"Chen ne poochha

"Pata nahi chen.abhi wo kahan hai aur kya kar rahi hai wo hame bhi nahi pata.bas ek tip mili thi ki wo hyderabad me milegi,bas isliye ja rahe hai"sasuka bola

Ye sab sun rashmi saham gayi.yug red clan ka member??yani dushman clan ka hissa hai???au wo isi yug se pyaar kar baithi???
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"Madam ye jagah khatre se khali nahi"ek ladki koi 40 varshiya aurat se bol rahi thi

"Relax rachel nothing will happen"bol wo aurat jhoom rahi thi Disco me

"Madam raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur is tarah is night clubs me rehna thik nahi,ek bhi ladki nahi hai hum dono ke alawa"rachel bol uthi

"Fuuuu mai kisi se nahi darti rachel.aane do sabko
Dekh lenge"aurat bol uthi

"P please madam"rachel bol uthi

"Ok baba ok chalo"bol wo aurat aur rachel disco theque ke bahar a gaye
Bahar sunsaan tha sab.aur sunsaan sadak par do shaks ko dekh kar sahan gayi rachel

"Omg ek legendary ninja se milkar bohut acha laga "ek ladki ki awaz ne us aurat ko serious bana diya

"Mia????d dark clan se hai ye to"rachel ka muh khula reh gaya

"Mai itni famous hoon??"mia boli aur apne saath ladke ko dekhne lagi
Ladke ka muh poora dhaka hua tha aankhen safed thi

"Kya chahiye tum dono ko??"us aurat ne poochha

"Chahiye bas itna ki aap jaisi hai waisi rahe,red clan wale aayenge aapke paas aapko leader banane.baniyega mat"ladka bola

Aurat ne dekha dono ninja ko.dono top grade ke ninja hai
Inse ulajhna matlab mout ko dawat dena.

"Maine abhi decide nahi kiya hai"aurat boli

"Decide karna to wahi karna jo humne kaha hai"mia boli
Aur chali gayi.

"Jo wo keh rahe hai wahi karna padega na madam??"rachel boli
Jawab me aurat kuch nahi boli.bas dono ko jaate hue dekhne lagi
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Monica apne khayalon me khoyi hui thi

"Kya hua mon??aajkal tera wo dost dikhai nahi de raha hai??"manjeet bola

"Wo bhaiyya wo.... actually..."Monica ko samajh me nahi a raha tha kya bole

"Samajh gaya,yani tune sahil ko chuna yug ke badle"manjeet bola

"Aisa nahi hai bhaiya dono ache dost hai mere.yug ko bura laga ki mai sahil ke saath dosti ka haath badha rahi hoon isliye ...."bolte bolte ruk gayi Monica

"Pata hai Monica,us ladke me mujhe sabse achi uski honesty lagi.aaj tak kabhi tujhse favour nahi liye usne.ek acha ladka hai yug.aur itni achi uski soch hai.sahil.ka to pata nahi lekin yug ko khokar tune kya khoya,wo tujhe jald pata chalega"bol manjeet uth gaya aur apne kamre me chala gaya

"Waise do din ho gaye hai abhi tak usne phone tak nahi kiya hai"Monica sochne lagi
Shandaar update bro
 

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"aapko pata bhi hai tyson?? rashmi un teeno ka peecha kar rahi hai"zabooza bola ek shaks ko

"Usse kya fark padta hai zabooza?"tyson bola

"Matlab??"zabooza samjha nahi

"Uska bhai hoon mai,usse lakh guna behtar hoon,waisi kamzor ladki kisi ka peecha kar kya kar legi"tyson muskurate hue bola

"Pata hai lekin apni dadaji ko di kasam ki wajah se....."zabooza bola

"Kya kasam??hah zabooza rashmi kamzor thi,kamzor hai aur kamzor rahegi.wo kya ukhad legi kisi ka,use bachane ke liye khud yug ko aana pada tha"tyson bola

"Pata hai,lekin kya master ko pata hai.ki unki beti ko maarne ke liye mia aur IAK ko kisne bheja tha"ek kutil muskurahat ke saath zabooza chala gaya

"Zabooza master ke marne ke baad unka clan ko mai chalaunga aur koi nahi.sirf mai"aankhen Neeli hoti gayi tyson ke aur charo aur thand badhne laga
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Rashmi chup chup kar yug ko dekh rahi thi.
Hyderabad me a gayi thi yug ke peeche peeche.aankhen band ki usne

"Soch liya rashmi??"jishnu ne kaha tha

"Haan,lekin promise karo tum yug ko kuch nahi karoge,use nahi sataoge aur pareshan nahi karoge"rashmi boli

"Acha promise,lekin ab to paas a jao darling"jishnu ne rashmi ka haath pakadte hue bola

"No touching jishnu,jab tak mai ye nahi dekh leti ki tum kitne sachhe ho tab tak no physical contact"rashmi boli

Aur aise hi rashmi aur jishnu ka rishta chal pada tha.
Rashmi ne jishnu se rishta joda yug ki wajah se

us raat jab yug ne rashmi ko bachaya tha tab sabse zyada rashmi khush hui thi,yug apne pairon me jo khada ho gaya tha
Yug ke baare me to sab kuch jaan liya,lekin apne baare me kuch nahi bataya.kya batati??

Idhar red clan ke naye master ko khojne ke liye Chen akele ek jagah chala gaya jabaki sasuka aur yug doosri jagah the.rashmi bhi doosre jagah gayi thi yug ke peeche peeche

"Yug tum ruko mai gaadi ka bandobast karke aaya.yahan jungle kaafi khatarnak hai.yahi rehna aur apna khayal rakhna"bol sasuka chala gaya
Aur rashmi yug ko dekh rahi thi.kaafi dubla ho gaya hai yug.thik se khata nahi hoga,apne sehat par dhyan nahi deta hoga.gadha kahi ka.agar uska bas chale to wo.....
Rashmi sihar uthi. dark clan ki halchal mehsoos hui use

"Wah jise khoj rahe the wo aakhir mil hi gaya"yug ke saamne ek ninja khada tha

"Bill,ye tumhari mout ka naam hai,itna jaan lo"ninja muskurate hue bola

Yug foorti ke saath daudkar ek ghoomta hua kick maar baitha us ninja par

THADDDDDD

Ninja ka chehra ek taraf ghoom gaya.aur usne apna chehra fir yug ke saamne kiya aur muskurane laga

Yug fir daudkar saamne aaya aur ek punch maara

THAAAAKKKKKKK
Roka apne haath se us ninja ne,lekin yug ne fir apne pair chala diye us ninja ke chehre par

THAKKKKKK

Ninja ne fir rok liya uske baar ko

"Suna hai tu master ahru ka mask pehenta tha??master ahru ko aur koi nahi mila kya apna mask dene ke liye??kam se kam.us ladke Chen ko to de hi sakte the"ninja muskurate hue bola

"Ab mai tujhe apni Power dikhata hoon"bol ninja ne pose liya yug ke saamne aur rashmi chaunk uthi
Ye ye ye to wahi ninja hai...

"Ninja skill ........beast power elephant stomp....."bol ninja ka sharir hawa me udd chala aur tezi se yug ke upar aane laga.yug hil bhi nahi pa raha tha us jagah se
Ninja ke sharir ke aaspaas yug ne ek haathi ka sharir dekha aur us ninja ka pair haathi ke pair jaisa ho gaya

THAMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

ninja ka pair yug ke sar par laga

"Akkkkkkkk........."muh se khoon nikla yug ke aur wahi baith gaya wo

"Beta ye to sirf trailer hai abhi to bohut kuch sehna hai,yahan tu marega wahan Chen ko mia thokegi,tum dono ki laash sasuka le jayega wapas ha ha ha"ninja ne fir pose liya aur yug apni poori shakti ek karke uth khada hua

"Ha ha dum hai tujhme,lekin kitna wo dekhenge.........beast power tiger claw"bol bijli ki tarah ninja yug ki aur udd chala aur uska haath ne sher ke panje ka roop le liya

KHACHHHHHHHHHHHH

"Ugghhhhh"yug samajh gaya ki uske bas ka nahi tha use ninja se ladne lekin shayad ab der ho gayi hai.usne aankhen band kar li,uska sharir udd chala aur...

THADDDDDD

"YUGGGGGGGGGG"daudkar rashmi yug ke paas pohunch gayi.poora chehra laal ho chuka tha.left side ke gaal ka chamda utar chuka tha.maans dikh rahe the.dhadkane dheere dheeme band ho rahi thi

"Yug aankhen kholo yug,mai kuch nahi hone doongi tumhe please yug please"roye ja rahi thi

' Are ye to rashmi hai.master ki beti clan ki kamzori kadi,hat yahan se warna tera bhi yahi haal hoga"ninja fir position lete hue bola

"Please please ek baar uth jao yug please"bol rashmi ne yug ke seene me apna sar rakh aur chaunk gayi.achanak uske aankhon ke charo taraf barf jamne laga ,usne apne aankhen band kar li aur kaafi der baad apni aankhen kholi to wo neele rang ki thi.
Uske muh se halke se nikla

"Ninja skills.............ice dragon power"
Aur aaspaas thand badhne lagi
Shandaar update bro
 

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THAKKKKK

door ja gira yug ka sharir

"bohut dino baad mere banaye hue is empire ko barbaad kiya tune, mujhe pata tha ki koi aisa aayega jo mujhe takkar de sake. Lekin wo tujh jaisa ek. Mamooli ladka hoga wo pata nahi tha" yoshodo bola

Yug uthne ja raha tha lekin uth nahi pa raha tha
Mask ki poori taqat bhi samay ke Saamne kuch nahi thi

"mere ek ek elite ko tune ya haraya ya fir maar diya apne tarike se" yoshodo bola

DHADD

Ek punch ne yug ko fir door chitak diya aur khoon se lathpath uske sharir ko lagbhag bejan sa bana diya

"tujhe kisi ninja skill se nahi balki apne skill se marunga Taaki poora badla le Saku" yoshodo bola

"waise tujhe maine ek baat nahi batayi. Marne se pehle wo Jaan Le" yoshodo bola

Yug ne yoshodo ki aur dekha. Wo aasman ki aur dekhkar bola
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Flashback

IGO PROVINCE Japan
16th century

Red clan
Master haath jod kar khada tha aur aasman se Ek vishalkay danav use dekh raha tha

"dhanyawad" Master ne haath jod kar kaha

"ye amrit koi nahi piyega tumne wada kiya hai" rakshas bola aur wo amrit ka chota sa kalash master ko saump diya

"ji" master bola

"lekin agar aisa galti se hua to mujhe kisi ko bhejna hoga use khatam karne ke liye jo wo paap karega" rakshas fir bola

"ji" master fir Haan bola

"khush raho, aur is poore vishwa me shanti shthapit karo" rakshas bola aur aasman me gayab ho gaya

Usi Marit kalash ko piya tha yoshodo ne. Aur peete hi amar ho gaya. Lekin poora amrit nahi rakha tha master ne
Kuch amrit bacahakar rakhi thi jo yug ne piya tha
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Yoshodo ne apni kahani khatam ki

"ab dekhta hoon ki tujhe koun bachata hai" yoshodo bola aur tabhi

FASSSS BHAKKKKKKK

khulte hue lava me yug ka aadha sharir tha

"AAAHHHHHHHH" yug cheekh utha.

"Ab apne ant ka dheere dheere wait kar" yoshodo bola

Yug ki aankhen band hone lagi hamesha ke liye.....

"yug utho??" ek awaz aayi mask se

"ab kya hai?? Ab kuch nahi bacha" yug bola

"ye mai Keh rahi hoon jo pehle bhi tumse baat karti aayi thi aur tumne samjha mask baat kar raha hai tumse, mai wahi hoon jo tumhe gufa me le gayi thi, wo scooty wali" ladki boli
Yug ki aankhen band ho chuki thi

"apne taqat ko pehchano yug. Tum hamesha se taqatwar the. Lekin insan ke roop me hone ki wajah se apne taqat se anjan rahe, ye mask ki koi taqat nahi hai. Taqat tumme hi hai apne dimag par zor do aur apne rakshas pravritti ko jagao" ladki boli

Achanak aasman me badal ghane hote gaye aur kaale bhi

Yoshodo ne peeche mudkar dekha yug ka sharir apne aap hawa me tairne laga
Uska aadha sharir chamak raha tha

"AHHH" Yoshodo ne halka sa cheekh liya kyunki uske sharir apne aap kar rahe the
Aur ret ka bankar yug se jud rahe the

"AHH AHHHHHHHHHHH" katna jaari tha aur tezi se yug ka sharir yoshodo se poora ho raha tha

Dheere dheere yoshodo ka sharir aadha reh gaya tha

Yug ka sharir poora laal ho chuka tha.

"ninja skills time stop" yoshodo bola lekin fir bhi yug uski aur aata raha

"yoshodo, mai khud samay hoon" yug bola

Isse pehle yoshodo kuch samajh paata

"sand coffin" yug bola aur yoshodo ka aadha sharir ret ke bhare ek coffin me kaid hokar reh gaya aur usme se khoon nikalne laga

"poora amrit nikalne ke baad teri Jaan jayegi yoshodo" yug bola

Dheere dheere khoon nikalna band ho gaya aur ret ka coffin ret bankar hawa me udd gaya aur chod gaya yoshodo ki haddiyan

Aur usi ke saath yug ka sharir bhi dhamm se dharti me gir gaya

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Sasuka ne pehle hi sabko dark clan ke adde se chalaki se nikal liya tha

Prakash apne team ke saath jab oohuncha usjo laash tak nahi mili. Khoon ka ek dhabba tak nahi tha wahan

Uske liye wahan karne ke liye kuch bacha nahi tha

Asha news anchor ban gayi thi ur prakash se Shaadi kar rahi thi

Shiksha chup chupkar milti thi mickey se, lekin fir poly aur harsh ke razamandi se dono ka rishta aage badh raha hai

Yug ke sharir ka neeche ka hissa poori tarike se thik ho gaya tha
Lekin ab uske sharir se Saara amrit bahar nikal chuka tha.

"monica ka kuch pata chala??" yug ne apne hospital ke bed me lete hue bola

"nahi master" Diana boli

"master" yug has diya, ninja war me kai ninjas shaheed hue the
Dark clan ne surrender kiya jab yoshodo khatam hua aur red clan ko join kiya dark clan ne
Aur zabouza ko waha ka clan leader kiya gaya

Red clan me Rachel ne elaan kar diya ki yug ke thik hone par bas ek saal ke baad wo clan leader ke pad se hat jayegi

white clan ne bhi join kiya red clan ko. Sheetal ko clan leader banaya gaya

Eagle clan ko promise ke mutabik red clan ka sabse close clan bana diya vaya
Mickey uska clan leader bana raha

Snake clan ko revive kiya gaya aur uska lead sasuka ne apne oopar le liya

Yug yoshodo ko khatam karne ke baad Lori ne uska ilaaj kiya aur use thik kiya. Fir use hospital rakha gaya

Yug hospital me admit tha
Prakash, asha, harsh, poly aur shiksha lagatar milne aate the usse

"monica ka pata laga rahe hai. Jitni jaldi ho sake utni waise..." bolte hue diana ruk gayi

"waise??..." yug ne poocha

"yug rashmi ka to tumko pata hi hai" chen is baar bola

"Haan, uski kurbani ki wajah se hi Herbert maara gaya" yug dukhi hokar bola

"lekin kya tumhe pata hai ki rashmi ka ek beta bhi tha??" chen ne poocha

"kya??" chaunk gaya yug

"Haan yug aur rashmi ke bete ke piya tum ho" is baar Rachel aate hue boli

Yug ko yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha

"jab tum Lori madam ko dhoonde sasuka aur chen ke saath gaye the, tab tumhe rashmi ne bachaya tha. Lori madam aakar tumhe bacha liya aur chali gayi. Lekin raat ko tumhari garmi badhti ja rahi thi. Aur use rokne ke liye rashmi ne apna jism de diya tha tumhe, kyunki pata na chale ki rashmi pregnant hai usne red caln join karke mujhe sab kuch bata diya aur wada liya ki uske jeete ji kisi ko na pata chale ye baat"rachel boli

Yug sunn tha uske aankhon se aansu ruk nahi rahe the

"game jald se jald monica ko dhoondna hoga aur hamara agla waris wapas laana hoga yug, tumhare baad red clan ko sambhalega tumhara beta" chen bola

"aur wo jald se jald dhoondna hoga tumhe yug" is baar kaale kapde me wo ladki boli jo scooty me yug se kai baar takrayi thi

"hi, mera Naam aren hai" ladki muskurate hue sabse boli

In sabse door train ke ek compartment me monica ek chote se bachhe ko apne God me liye ja rahi thi
Rashmi ka wada liya tha usne. Apne bete ko in sab khoon kharabe se door le Jaana. Aur ek aam insan banana na ki ek ninja
Wahi karegi wo
Ab se yug aur uske parivar wale uske liye mar chuke hai, ab se wo ek maa hai
Is bachhe ki maa
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KAILASH MANSAROVAR
aakash aur disha khush the aaj unke bete ka namkaran tha

"boliye guruji" aakash ne apne guru se poocha

Guru muskuraye aur us bachhe ke sar par haath rakha
Lekin unki muskurahat gayab ho rahi thi aur dheere dheere darr unke chehre par dikh raha tha

"mahapralay" guruji door jaate hue bola

"ye kya bol rahe hai guruji" disha apne bete ke sar par haath ferte hue boli

"mahavinash" guruji fir bole

Akash ne guruji ko pranam kiya. Guruji shant hue

"beta tumhare bete ke saath ek kundli takra rahi hai. Jo isi ki tarah shaktishali hai wo Jab is kundli se takrayegi tab dono saman shaktiyon se takrakar duniya ka kya haal hoga wo sochte hi sugar utha" guruji bole

"wo shakti koun hai guruji??" aakash ne poocha

"wo shakti bhi tumhare bete ki tarah hi bada hai aur wo ek din tumhare bete se zaroor takrayegi" bol guruji chale gaye

Disha bulati rahi guruji ko lekin guruji ruke nahi

Aakash uthkar khada hua aur apne bete ko god me lekar Waqt Ka intezar karne laga

------------------------THE END-------------------------------
(aakash ke baare me janne ke liye padhein AJNABEE)

Bohat hi zabardast update bro.

Ye kya Monica Reshmi aur Yug k bete ko legaye wo b Reshmi k kehne pr aapne pyaar se door .

Aur ab Aakash Beach mai agaya aur uska beta Jo guru g ne bataya to lagta hai Aakash aur Yug ka beta ab akhri ladhai ladhenge .

Next part ka intezaar rahe GA.
 

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Boht hi zabardast awesome interesting story thi Maza a gia

Bro Sach a very nice story
I hope 3rd part bhi ho ga
 
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