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Fantasy AJNABEE 2-THE RISING(Completed)

Aapke hisab se story ki lead lady kise hona chahiye

  • Monica

    Votes: 19 76.0%
  • Rashmi

    Votes: 12 48.0%
  • Sheetal

    Votes: 7 28.0%

  • Total voters
    25
  • Poll closed .

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"ridiculous prakash,ye bakwas karne ke liye mujhe yahan bulaya tha??"asha gusse se bol padi

"Samajhne ki koshish karo asha .yug ka japan me jaana aur fir uske behaviour me change aana ,har vaardaat uski aur hi ishara karti hai"prakash bola

"Dekho prakash yug ko mai bachpan se dekhte a rahi hoon.ek bechara sa hai hamesha pitkar aata tha school se,aur wo Achanak khooni ban gaya ??kya logic hai ye??mujhe laga aaj hum aapas me kuch time guzarenge.lekin tumhare dil me ye ut patang cheezein chal rahi wo mujhe pata nahi tha"asha boli

"Dekho asha maine bohut investigate kiya hai is mamle me,tabhi bol raha hoon.yug hi wo hathiyara hai jo sabko maar raha hai"prakash bola

"Seriously??mai ja rahi hoon prakash mere paas bakwas ka time nahi hai"asha uthte hue boli

"Asha mera yakeen mano yug hi wo.."

"Bas prakash,mere parivar ke baare me kuch aur nahi sun sakti,pakka saboot hai tumhare paas??"asha ne demand kiya

"Uhh??....umm....wo..."prakash sakte me a gaya
Pakka saboot hi to nahi hai uske paas

"Bye prakash"bol asha tezi se chali gayi aur prakash use rokne ke liye kuch kar hi nahi paya
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"Jab bhi jaata hai apna huliya bigaad kar aata hai"poly yug ko nashta dete hue boli

"Maa kuch nahi hua mujhe"yug ne samjhana chaha

"Bas yug ab aur nahi,aaj ek mahine tu sirf school aur ghar aaya jaaya karega,baaki kahi bhi nahi jayega"poly boli

"Ok maa wahi karunga"yug bola aur khaane par concentrate karne laga

"Maa wo jayega,jhoot bol raha hai "shiksha kuch likhte likhte ruk kar poly ko boli

"Oh??ye baat hai.kha mere sar ki kasam ki tu nahi jayega??"poly ne yug ka haath apne sar par rakha

Damn yug fans gaya tha.harish muskurate hue chai pee rahe the aur newspaper padh rahe the

"Didi ek ladki aayi hai kehti hai yug se milna hai"ghar ki naukrani ne poly se kaha us waqt

"Ladki??KOUN ladki??"poly ne poochha

"Koi rashmi naam hai uska"naukrani boli

"Uhhu...uhhu..."khaansne laga yug

"Ha ha ha"shiksha zor zor se hansne lagi

"Hmm wahi ladki jo hospital me aayi thi"poly ne poochha

"Haan wahi"yug dheere se bola

Aur kya rashmi ander aate hi sabko hi hello karne lagi

"Waise beta acha kiya jo a gayi yahan,suna tum hostel me rehti ho.beech beech me a jaya karo.acha lagta hai"poly boli

"Wah bhaiya Wah ek saath do do gf??kya baat hai??"shiksha ne aankh maarte hue yug ke kaan me bola

Poly ne zor dekar rashmi ko nashta karwaya aur fir yug ke saath school bhej diya

Dono chupchap ja rahe the
Yug ne hi chuppi todi

"Rashmi pata hai tum kamaal ki ladi thi kal.mai to sapne me bhi itna powerful nahi ban sakta lekin tumhara level hi doosra tha"yug bola
Aur rashmi yug ko dekhti rahi

Bachpan se sirf taane sunti a rahi thi,yahi usne apni niyati sochkar bardasht karti ja rahi thi
Lekin aaj yug ne hi tareef ki uski

"Tum ek kamaal ki wife material ho rashmi"yug bola

"K k kya???w w w wife??"rashmi ka dil dhak dhak dhak karta ja raha tha
Chehra laal ho gaya.saansein fookne lagi

"Haan jo bhi tumse shaadi karega uski life set"yug fir bola

Clap clap clap
Taliyan bajane ki awaz se dono usi disha me mude

"Wah yug ji Wah shaadi ka plan bhi kar liya ??"Monica boli

"Rashmi tum jao mai aata hoon"yug bola aur rashmi ek baar Monica ko dekhkar chali gayi

"Monica mujhe laga tha ki hum ek doosre ke life me interfere nahi karenge"yug bola

"Haan kyun nahi abhi interfere karne wali jo a gayi hai life me??"Monica boli

"To usse tumhe kya Monica??"yug ne poochha

Monica ke paas iska koi jawab nahi tha
Gussa aur dukh saath me majboori ghoorne lagi yug ko Monica

"Mai chalta hoon"yug bola

"Mai baat kar rahi hoon na "Monica ne yug ke kameez ko kheenchte hue kaha

Yug ne dekha Monica ke aankhon me aansu the

"Dekho Monica hum sirf ek achhe dost bankar reh sakte hai,iske aage kuch nahi .bye"yug bol school ki aur chala gaya

"Mai bhi tumhare sar se rashmi ka bhoot utarkar hi rahungi"Monica boli
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"Chen ,mark,jise,wan......aajse promote kiye jaate ho"sasuka bola

"Sasuka ji kya mai ye jimmedari nibha paungi??"rachel boli

"Sab thik hoga"sasuka bola

"Waise yug kaisa hai"rachel ne poochha

"Thik hai,waise master kya aap yug ke mask ke baare me pata kar sakti hai??"sasuka bola

"Try karungi,waise mask yug se hi kyun juda hua hai??"rachel ne poochha

"Pata nahi, lekin aapka kehna sahi hai.kyunki agar mask yug se juda na hota to ab tak log use use karna shuru kar dete"sasuka bola

"Aage ka raasta yug ko hi tay karna hoga"rachel boli
Sir ji index to do bhut parishan ho gya hu update do n d kr index hota toh abhi tak kahaniy finesh / samapt ho jatai
 

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Ajnababee apki kahani bohot badiya thi or yeh ajnabee 2 or bi badiya.bohot badiya lekhni hai apki swaraj bhai.
Mind-blowing kahani
 
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread



Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3000 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Yug seedha class se nikal kar bahar gaya
Mickey, jerry, prakash aur Bartein khade the.

"tumne pata hai na kya karna hai aage?" yug bola

"wo sab to thik hai lekin jishnu ka replacement koun hoga cricket match me??" Jerry ne poocha

"mere khayal se jerry sahi Keh raha hai, tumhe jaana chahiye cricket team me kya pata is baar hum cup jeet le" Mickey bola

"wo dekhenge, lekin pehle tum log pata karo ki school me koun koun nasha karta hai" yug bola

Sar hilakar sab chale gaye, door se sab kuch rashmi dekh rahi thi.
Yug. Jab uske Maa Baap chale gaye tab is school me aaya tha.
Pehle to rashmi se achi dosti thi. Lekin dheere dheere yug badal sa gaya. Ander hi Ander ghutne laga
Is ladke me koi burai nahi hai. Kisi ladki ki aur gandi nazar se nhi dekhta, koi nasha nahi karta. Aur na hi awaragardi karta hai
Pata nahi kab dil me utar gaya tha yug. Lekin isse pehle ki Baat aage badh paati wo darinda jishnu uski zindagi me a gaya.lekin kal raat jab wo mask pehne aaya to jis tarike se usne Naam lekar bulaya usse pakka ho gaya tha ki yahi yug hai. Aankh band karke bhi yug ko pehchaan le rashmi
Tabhi uska phone baj utha

"ladki tere paise Baaki hai. Agar Jaan se haath nahi dhona chahti to aaj raat new garage center a jaana" phone cut Jaata hai

Rashmi ki rooh kaamp uthti hai ye sunkar.nashe me itna doob gayi ki pata hi nahi chala ki kab andhere me doob rahi thi

Idhar yug seedha shubham ke Paas gaya
"Kaisa hai shubham??" yug ne poocha

"are yug ye kaisa sawal hai. Har roz to milta hoon. Fir aaj ye sawal?" shubham bola

"yahi to har roz milta hoon aur har roz naye roop me dekhta hoon tujhe" yug bola

"kya?" shubham bola

"kuch nahi chal cricket me player kam hai. Apne school ke naak ka sawaal hai" yug bola
Such sochkar shubham chala gaya

Wapas aate hue yug ko awaz su ai di ek gali me. Apne cycle ko lekar yug jab gali me gaya to dekhta hai ki sikhsha ke baal pakadkar ek ladki kheench rahi hai aur do 2 ladke aur do ladkiyan has rahe the

"chal apne loser bhai ko bula, dekhte hai kaise bacha paata hai apne behna ko??" ladka bola

"saali ke baal aur zor se kheench sheetal" doosra ladka bola

"tum logo ke ye mazaal??" peeche se yug ki awaz aayi to sab chaunk gaye, sikhsha bhi chaunk gayi

Isse pehle koi kuch samajh paata. Yug ne bijli ki raftaar se daud lagai aur

DHADDDDDDD

jump ke Saath ghutne se ek ladke ke sar par de maara yug ne
Fir ulta ghoomkar apne daaye pair ko hawa me uchala aur...

THAKKKKKKKK

door ja gira doosra ladka

"next??" yug ne kaha aur isse pehle sheetal kuch samajh laati yug ne uske baal pakadkar apne bohut Paas le aaya

Sheetal pathar ban gayi thi. Yug ke hont uske hont ke Ekdum Paas the.

"next time aisa hona nahi chahiye" yug bola. Aur achanak use mehsoos hua ki sheetal ke kitne Paas Hai wo. Jhat se door hat gaya yug

"tum logo ki kaise wat lagati hoon dekh lena. Tum sab gaye ab aur....." sikha bolti ja rahi thi

"sikha chalo" yug bola

"ab dekhna ek ek ko kaise bajati hoon mai aur..."

"MAINE KAHA CHALO" daant lagai yug ne. Halka sa chaunk padi sikhsha. Aajtak kabhi itni oonchi awaz me Baat nahi kiya tha yug ne. Dono bhai behen chale gaye waha se

"kkun tha ye jallad??" apna sar pakadkar pehla Ladk bola

"Baap re Baap uski behen ko ab mai Maa maanunga" doosra ladka bola

"interesting" sheetal muskurate hue bola

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"sir aap bohut khush lag rahe hai" constable kishan ne commissioner se poocha

"jab mujrimo ko aise marta dekhta hoon tab maza aata hai kishan" commissioner bola

"may i come in sir" inspector raj patil Ander dakhil hua

"bolo raj" commissioner bola

"sir case tricky hai, do khoon Ur ek abhi tak critical condition me hai, koun ho sakta hai?" raj ne poocha

"wahi to pata karna hai raj, lekin jo kaam police ko karna chahiye wo ek khooni kar raha hai, kya kahoge" commissioner bola

"kanoon samvidbhan ke anusaar chalta hai sir, kisi ko hak nahi hai ki wo jo marzi kare" bol raj salute maarkar chala gaya

Press aur media ka pressure badh raha tha. Aur is area ka sabse jaanbaaz policewala raj ko case diya tha commissioner ne
Ab jald se jald suljha le to acha hai
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NEW GARAGE CENTER
"AAH AAH AAH YESS YESS Oh GOD OH OH"

"abey itne zor zor se karega to behosh ho jayegi mac" table par baitha hua ladka bola

"honey choro na mujh par concentrate karo" uske bagal me ladki boli

"Saab ek ladki aayi hai aur kehti hai aap ne bulaya hai" ek 80 saal ka Buddha bola

"aane do saali ko aaj uske Saath bhi wahi hoga jo mac ke Saath wali ladki ka ho raha hai ha ha ha" honey bola

Rashmi school uniform me hi ander a gayi

"oh kya mast Maal hai Yaar, chal ladki shuru ho ja, agar paise laayit hai to chukakar chala ja, warna kapde khol" honey bola

"m mere Paas abhi itne paise. Ahi hai. Jab aaye ge tab De doongi"rashmi boli

" yani paise nahi hai, chal kapde khol"bol ho ey rashmi kepaas gaya aur uske kapde kholne laga
Dheere dheere rashmi ke shirt, skirt khol diye honey ne

"wow Sirf black bra aur black panty me hai. Ise bhi khol de" honey bola
Aur sab hasne lage

"please" bol rashmi rone lagi

THAK THAK THAK

"darwaza kisne knock kiya?? Ja ravi dekh a" honey bola

Kuch der baad ravi aaya ek lifafa lekar

"mera Naam hai is lifafe me au
r kala powder hai isme" honey bola

"y y yani wo a raha hai" Buddha aadmi bola

"koun??" ravi ne poocha

"uska Naam lena bhi ashubh hai" Buddha bola

"chutiye bolega bhi??" honey ne buddhe ka collar pakadkar bola

"n n ninja" Buddha bola

"ha ha ninja ho ya finja aaj to wo mere haathon marega" honey bola. Tabhi light chali gayi
Kya Bhai is story me to apne bhi movie ki line chipka di anyway update was awesome 👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
 

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<center><b></br> We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum </b> </br>
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<b>Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai. </b></br>
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<b>Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, <b style="color:blue;">jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye</b><b> (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — <a href="https://charactercounttool.com/">Characters Tool)</b></a> . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai. </b></br>
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<b>Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge. </br>
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Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de. </br>
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<b style="color:blue;">Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega</b> is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega. </br>
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Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain. </b></br>
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<b><br>Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — <a href="https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2024-chit-chat-discussion-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.126696/"><b>Chit Chat Thread </b></a></br>
<br>Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — <a href="https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2024-reviews-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.127424/"><b>Review Thread </b></a></br>
<br>Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — <a href="https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2024-rules-queries-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.127000/"><b>Rules & Queries Thread </b></a></br>
<br>Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — <a href="https://xforum.live/threads/%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2024-entry-thread-%E2%98%85%E2%98%86%E2%98%85.127421/"><b>Entry Thread </b></a></br></b>

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<td><b>Winner</td>
<td><b>4000 Rupees + <img src="https://i.ibb.co/yd1GHDB/4-1596536993l-removebg-preview.png" width="25px"> Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)</td>
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<td><b>1st Runner-Up</td>
<td><b>1500 Rupees + <img src="https://i.ibb.co/NSKRQ4h/15-1596536597l.png" width="25px"> Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)</td>
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<td><b>2nd Runner-UP</td>
<td><b>1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)</td>
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<td><b>3rd Runner-UP</td>
<td><b>750 Rupees + 1000 Likes</td>
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<td><b>Best Supporting Reader</td>
<td><b>750 Rupees + <img src="https://i.ibb.co/8xmLTmS/16-1596537025l.png" width="25px"> Award + 1000 Likes</td>
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<td><b>Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof</td>
<td><b>200 Likes for each report</td>
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