Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Naina]

 

[Naina]

Update-71​

Ek baar Arman ne college me ek ladke ko buri tarah maarne ke dauran jab hostel waalo ne use rokna chaha toh usne kaha tha ki " lawda, main bahut selfish banda hoon, duniyadari kaa kaam duniya par chhod deta hoon. Jab mere jeene -marne se logo ko koyi fark nahi padta to fir bhala mujhe kyun unke jeene -marne se koyi fark padne laga.. Isliye ise toh main marunga, marte dum tak maarunga.".



So once again, Time Travel... Jaha main Past ke future ki conversation ko Interceptor ki kamaan sambhale Past ke bhi Past me use kar raha hoon... Confused..?? I'm Too. aur mujhe pata hai ki aisa karna future ke dialogue ko past me use kar lena samay ke santulan ko bigadna hai, fir bhi maine ye kiya.. Kyunki main ye kar sakta hoon. Afterall, I AM THE FUCKING NARRATOR.


Isliye jab Riya & Sanjana ko ab mujhse koyi matlab nahi toh fir mujhe kyon unse matlab hone laga. Main baahar se khud toh normal behave karta lekin school ke teachers aur students ko normal behave karta dekh unpar bahut gussa karta... raah chalte logo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school me bench ke neeche zameen me chalti hui cheetiyo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school ke pillars, playground ko dekhkar gussa aata… copy, pen, bag, bench, chair, board, deewar, gate khidki, ped-paudhe…. Sabhi jeevit chizo se lekar, sabhi nirjeev chizo par mujhe gussa aata. Un dino sirf ek hee line mere dimag thi wo ye ki bhaad me jaye sab, gand maraye sab….


Rahi baat competition ki toh Mini aksar lunch me mere aur Ved ke paas aati, aadatan kayi sawal karti, jisme se jo bahut jyada important the… uska jawab Ved deta aur fir ignore maar deta… mujhse toh Mini kuch puchhati bhi nahi thi. Kyunki use maloom tha ki main koyi jawab nahi dene wala… fir wo chali jati… ek baar usne hume kaha ki Principal sir, cabin me hum dono ko bula rahe hai… jispar hum dono class me hee rahe. Isliye aaj fir Saxsena ne apne cabin me hume bulaya tha….. Madarchod….


“chal, Saxsena ki gand me bamboo kar ke aate hai…”Ved ne kaha

“is madarchod ko ab kya puchhna hai… sab toh 10-10 baar puchh liya…. Betichod”

" tu toh aaj kal mere type baat-baat pe gaali dene laga hai... Waise, Bio wali ki moti gand me chull hoga… usi ne bulwaya hoga Saxsena se”

“randi madarchod… chodari, burchatti… hagandi, gookhani~गू खानी iski dayi ko chod dalu… bhadwi... Iske chut me hath daal kar bacha dani kheench lunga”

“aisa kya.... chal fir…”

“kaha…”

“yahaaaaaa…. 10 points…”


Ved ko point chadhata dekh main halka sa muskuraya aur bola ki wo aage-aage jaye main moot ke thodi der me aata hu… jiske baad Ved ne suggestion diya ki Bio wali mam ka muh hote hue bathroom me kyun jaana...usi ke muh me moot dena…. Jise maine thukra diya aur fir se kaha ki… tu jaa, main thodi der me aata hu.
Ved ke jaane ke lagbhag 5 minute ke baad main Saxsena ke cabin me jaane ke liye apni class se nikla… Jafar apni class ke saamne khada tha. ye sach bhi tha ya nahi, par mujhe pata nahi aisa kyun lagta tha ki Ranjan ki maut se kisi ko yadi koyi fayda hua hai toh wo Jafar hai… kyunki Ranjan ke murder ke baad main use har dam sirf haste hue , muskurate hue dekhta aur logo ki hasi se mujhe un dino itni nafrat ho gayi thi ki jise bhi haste hue dekhta , mann karta ki unke muh me lund de du…. Literally….


Mujhe pakka yakin tha ki Jafar ne hee apne aadmiyo ke dwara Ranjan ko marwaya hai, fir jab Ranjan ke papa beech me aaye toh unhe bhi raaste se hata diya. Waise bhi Ranjan aur uske papa itne heavy the ki kisi ek aadmi ke bas ki baat nahi thi, kisi ek ko toh wahi dono zinda kaat dete… ye ek se adhik logo ka kaam tha isliye meri conspiracy theory ka main Villain ab bhi Jafar hee tha.


Apni conspiracy theory ko apne dimag me naye-naye aayam tak pahuchakar, Jafar ko ghoorte hue main uski taraf badh raha tha, jaha wo apne do dosto ke sath khada kisi baat par hans raha tha aur pichhale kuch dino ki tarah Riya Rose, Mini aur Madhu ke sath wahi uske paas khadi thi. jab main uske najdeek pahucha toh uski bhi nazar mujh par padi… mujhe ghoorta hua paakar usne bhi mujhe gusse se ghoorna chalu kar diya aur jab uske paas se gujra toh peechhe railing par apne dono hath rakhkar style me khade hote hue wo mujhse bola...

“ghoor kya raha hai be, maarega kya…”

“chal khol… abhi maarta hu”bolkar main aage badh gaya

“Mere ek jhapad me moot maarega tu… ab Chitranjan nahi hai, tujhe bachane ke liye…. Jiske dam pe uchak raha tha naa itne dino se wo toh gaya, isliye ab apni aukaat me rahna... Warna pura khandan khatam kar dunga tera...."

"Very good....."sunkar main muskuraya par andar hee andar puri taqat ke sath chillaya... Mere sharir ki ek -ek nash gusse se thar-thar kaanpne lagi

"Paagal ho gaya hai kya be.."wahi khade Jafar ke ek dost ne mujhe muskurate hue kaanpta dekh hairan hokar kaha


Riya.... Madhu aur Mini ke sath waha se door chali gayi thi... Lekin thi ab bhi wahi corridor me, jaha se wo pura nazara dekh sakti thi.

"Teri saari gundayi main wahi ghusa dunga, jaha se tu nikla hai... Waise teri maa ko dard bahut hoga... Jab main aisa karunga toh.." muskurate hue, gusse se kaanpte hue maine, Jafar se kaha

"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha.. Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."


Itna bolkar Jafar chup ho gaya … jiske baad main chup-chap waha se aage badh gaya aur kuch kadam ki doori par jaha seedhiya neeche jaane ke liye shuru hoti thi waha pahuchkar main ruka yaa mere kadam apne aap ruk gaye....? Mujhe nahi pata... Kyunki chalte -chalte mere dimag ne Jafar ke shabdo par gaur kiya ki Jafar ne abhi kya bola hai aur uska kya matlab hai..... Mere kaano me Jafar dwara kahi gayi aakhiri line bajne lagi aur mere dimag ne usi line ke base pe mujhe green signal de diya


"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha, Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."

Jafar ki is ek line ne meri conspiracy theory ko sahi saabit kar diya. Baaki gussa toh itne din se mere andar bhara hee hua tha, jise Jafar ki us ek line ne aur badha diya… Ranjan ke khoon hone ke baad maine raat-raat bhar jaag kar soch rakha tha ki yadi bychance kabhi Ranjan ka qatil mere saamne khada ho toh main uske sath kya karunga...?? Aur wo is waqt yahi mauzood tha, bilkul mere paas... Meri oor peeth kiye hue.


Seedhiyo ke paas khade rahkar maine apne jabde par pure sharir ka force apply kiya aur jor se silently chillaya par jab laga ki jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega toh silently chillana band kar diya, lekin mera dimag ghoom raha tha aur uske andar Jafar ke shabd bhi ghoom rahe the. Jiske baad mera sar bhi gusse me ghoomne laga aur fir ant me main bhi ghooma aur Jafar ki taraf badha…. Badha kya...sidhe dauda...


Jafar dusari taraf muda hua tha yani pahla prahar main jaise chahe waise kar sakta tha.. mujhe pata tha ki mere pahle prahar ke baad mere sath kya hoga… Wo bhi jab Jafar ke dost uske sath ho, upar se sab ke sab saale sports wale the, mere se jyada hatte-katte. Jafar ki taraf badhte hee main samajh gaya tha ki mere dwara prahar karte hee main bahut buri tarah maar khaane wala hoon. isliye main apne is pahle prahar ko hee aisa banana chahta thi Jafar ki khade-khade maiyya chud jaye… is ladayi me mere liye sirf ek plus point tha aur wo tha mera gussa.... Jo beet rahe har nano second ke sath badhta jaa raha tha. apne dahine hath ke kade ko dabate hue main Jafar ki taraf dauda aur kood kar pahle kohni se Jafar ke sar ke beecho-beech khopdi pe puri taqat se mara, taaki uska sar fat jaaye. Jafar mere maarte hee dono hatho se apna sar pakad kar buri tara cheekha... chillaya... Aur uski aawaz sunkar mujhe bahut hee achchha feel hua...


Kohni maarne ke turant baad main thoda peechhe hokar ek laat uske kamar par puri taqat se maara…. Jafar apne thik saamne jisse baat kar raha tha , mere laat maarne par wo dono thodi door tak aage ki oor ladkhadaye aur fir ladkhadate hue neeche gir gaye… Jafar neeche pade-pade chillate hue ab bhi apna sar dabaye jaa raha tha aur idhar main bhi ab apni kohni malne laga. Sala jab mujhe itna dard ho raha hai, toh use kitna ho raha hoga....


Mujhe toh laga tha ki maine Jafar ka khel khatm kar diya hai aur wo ab nahi uthega, lekin wo Apna sar dabate hue jald hee uth khada hua aur ab muskurate hue meri oor dekha.... Maano mujhse kah raha ho ki… yahi toh chahta tha main ki tu mujhse akele bhide sabke saamne aur fir ye uski jubaan par bhi aa gaya...


"Us din ki beijjati ka badla aaj lunga main... Jab inhi logo ke beech Ranjan ne tere kaaran mujhe maara tha... Uski aatma tadap uthegi teri pelayi dekhkar... " apna sar malte hue Jafar ne mere peechhe kisi ko aankho se ishara kiya...


Maine turant peechhe palat kar dekha, mere peechhe bahut ladke the aur kuch ladkiya bhi... ladke-ladkiya ab apni-apni class ke saamne khade ho gaye the is utsukta me ki ab aage kya hoga…. Jafar khada hua aur aur meri taraf teji se dauda, lekin maine toh physics padhi hui hai isliye Jafar ke impact ko kam karne ke liye maine apne sharir ka pura bal neeche transfer kar diya aur apne pairo ko majbooti ke sath zameen par dabaya… ki jaise hee ye aayage, isko jhuka kar iski peeth me kohni se fir maarunga


"Madarchhooo....." kisi ne achanak hee ek mukka mere jabde me mara, mujhe hawa tak nahi laga ki kisne maara aur kidhar se.


fir kisi aur ne turant usi waqt peechhe se meri gardan apne hath (forearm) se daboch li…. Meri gardan ko peechh se daboch kar wo log mujhe ghaseet kar aage Jafar ki oor le jaane lage aur jab Jafar daudkar mere paas aaya toh wo thoda ruka, apne hatho ko sahlaaya... Meri aankho me thodi der ke liye dekha aur fir apne dono hatho se mujhe gaaliya dete hue mere pet pe mukka maarne laga. bich -bich me jin do aur logo ne mujhe pakad rakha tha wo bhi kabhi mera baal pakad kar mere gaal par jhapad maarte toh kabhi -kabhi mere peeth par mukka jad dete aur maarne ke baad fir se mujhe pakad lete... Is dauran Jafar thoda pichhe khiska aur daudkar apne kandhe se mere seene me maara... Jafar ka majboot kandha mere seene me lagte hee Itna tej dard aur aisi ghabrahat hui us pal ki... Laga bas... Behan...chho..chod. ye mere is jiwan ka aakhiri samay hai, upar se pichhe se ek ladke ne gardan aur daba rakhi thi, jiske kaaran thik dhang se main saans tak nahi le paa raha tha.
Jafar ka impact itna tej tha ki mujhe pakdane wale ladke bhi kuch kadam peechhe kisak gaye… jiske baad mujhe pata chala ki mujhe do ladko ne nahi balki teen ladko ne peechhe se pakad rakha hai… Do logo ne mera ek-ek hath pakda hua tha aur ek mera gardan lagatar dabaye jaa raha tha, maano mera gala ghotkar maarne ka vichar ho uska…. Par ain waqt par mere dwara gardan idhar-udhar karne ke kaaran wo thik se meri gardan nahi daba paa raha tha.


Jafar mera baal pakadkar jor se kheencha aur fir mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhap di… Jafar ka hath mere gaal par padte hee main tamtama utha… maine aaj tak jitna khaya tha, jitna mere sharir me dam tha... utna pura jor laga diya , un teeno ki pakad se aazad hone ke liye… lekin siway unhe thoda sa idhar -udhar hilane ke main kuch nahi kar paya… Jafar ka jhapad padte hee meri aankho se usi samay aansu bhi nikale, ,kyunki jhapad padte hee mujhe achanak Ranjan ki yaad aa gayi thi

1) ranjan ki maut ne kaafi gehri chhot pahunchayi hai atharva ke dilo dimag pe... khas kar ranjan ki maut ek murder tha, is baat ko lekar gussa hai wo ki uske dost ko maara kisne... itna frustrated ho Chuka hai ki ab baat baat par gussa karne laga hai wo.... har cheej pe gussa aaye ushe.. yahan tak ki kisi insaan hansta hua dekhe to uspar bhi gussa aaye,
sach mein atharva jis daud se gujar raha hai, aisa daud kisike bhi jindagi mein na aaye...
lekin yahin pe ek galti kar raha hai atharva lagtar.... uska gussa hona... Gussa pehle soch samajh aur vichar shaktiyo ko khatam karta hai... phir khatam karta hai insaan ko.... gusse mein uthaye gaye kadam ka natiza hanikarak ke sath sath kabhi kabhi kaafi khaufnaak ho sakte hai... isliye aise situation mein khud ko sambhaal na chahiye... thande dimag se soch vichar karna chahiye... kyunki jaane wala to chala gaya... jo paas hai ushe to samet le aur aage ki jindagi ke baare soche...

2) saxsena ne na bulaya ho... ye Jafar ne hi koi chaal chali ho... kya pata..

3) ranjan ki maut ke turant agle din ya uske agle din agar Jafar apni planning ko anjam deta to shayad school ke baaki ke kayi sare students sympathy ke taur par atharva ka sath dete... ab jab wo ghatana ko huye kayi din bit chuke hai... sabhi normal ho chuke hai, ab koi sympathy nahi dikhne wala, balki maja lene hi wala hai atharva ko maar khata hua dekh (bahot se students shayad atharva ko pasand nahi karte the shayad)
ab Jafar jaanta tha ki atharva ko sabak sikhane ka aur Badla lene ka yehi sahi mauka hai,upor se wo akela tha.. isliye jaan bujh kar aisi baatein kahi jisse atharva ka gussa satve asmaan chu jaye aur natiza sabke samne hai...
gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki mini jo atharva ke paas har roz jaati thi competition ke mamle mein baat chit karne, kya pata wo isliye jaati ho uske paas taaki Jafar ko pata chalta rahe atharva ke mood ke bare mein...

..............
Kayi baatein samne aayi hai..
Actually pehle pahal jab bhi read karte waqt riya jab bhi kahani mein bhumika nibhane aayi... to lage ki ye kirdaar sanjana jaisi nahi hai... kaafi suljhi huyi hai... kayi mamlo mein sanjana se best hai... lekin ab...... ye to unme se nikli.. jahan paisa wala dekha nahi waha.... banne chali gayi...koi swabhiman, koi self-respect hi nahi hai isme to .. really is jaisi **,,, **,,, negative kirdaar shayad hi koi ho.... isse to achhi wo bio wali teacher hai, kam se kam dusmani bhi kayde se nibhati hai...

Jafar.......... iske baare mein kya hi kahu...
Kayarta ki pehchaan hai ye kirdaar.... Agar kal ko Jafar sabke samne dinge haake ki kaise usne atharva ki buri tarah pitaayi ki to shayad main wo first reader jishe hanshi aaye ispe.... iski kayarata se bhari kahani pe..
planning karke, mini dwara bulake kayi ladko ke sath milke us ek akele par hamla kiya.... shabbash, bahot khub... Taaaliya bajti rehni chahiye iske liye to..
abhi tak to meri nazar mein ye Jafar mahaz ek badjat negative kirdaar tha..
Lekin ab...
ek gande naali ke kide se zyada ye Jafar aur kuch bhi nahi,
kirdaar Jafar.... fakir ki jholi mein jane kiska kounsa dana.. ye baat bilkul fit baithe is Jafar pe...
Khair... barish ke mausom mein aise kide naali se bahar nikal aate hai sar uthake... lekin usko wapas laut kar gatar naali mein hi jana hai... wohi uski aukat hai aur niyati bhi.... Jafar jaise naali ke kide ka bhi yahin haal hoga aaj nahi to kal... Waqt waqt ki baat hai.. aaj waqt uska hai kal kisi aur ka hoga... aur Jafar jaise kirdaar jo apni ghamand mein chur hoke zyada uncha udne ki koshish karte hai utna hi tezi se niche bhi girta hai...kabhi na mitne wale gehre jakhm bhi milte hai...
Atharva..... actually is kirdaar ke prati ab bas sahanubhuti ke atirikt aur kuch bhi nahi hai... par dukh is situation ko lekar hai jab iske mom dad ko malum hoga ki atharva ke sath kya hua school mein... ek laute santan ke sath aisa hota dekh unke dil pe kya bitegi yahi soch ke dil mein ek huq si uthe...

Well...... realistic emotions jo ek bahot kathin vishay hai... Kaafi muskil hota hai samproon roop mein prakashit, byakt ya prakat karna bhi .. chaahe likhit story mein ho kirdaaro ke bhumika ya film mein abhinay........ lekin gyani sir is mamle mein mahir hai.. har pehlu ko dhyan mein rakhte hai
fantasy ho ya thriller ho ya tragedy ho ya phir romantic topic ko kayi baar soch vichar kar lete hai gyani sir ki kis tarah se pesh ki jaye taaki readers us topic ko padhte waqt unko real si lage... wo acceptable ho... aur padhne mein maza bhi aaye... aur entertaining bhi ho...
aur readers kirdaar aur kahani ke sath bhavnatmak roop mein bhi jude..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Yug Purush sahab

 

[Naina]

Yug Purush dekha aapne....
Nischal ko agar ranjan ki jagah story pe entry kara dete aap to kisiki mazal thi jo chu bhi sake atharva ko..
ab bhi waqt hai.. shayad nischal aur Hella aa jaye story pe to jinda jala de Jafar ko sath hi riya mini madhu, karan naik ko bhi na rahegi baans na bajegi bansuri... kissa hi khatam hamesha hamesha ke liye
Khair intezaar agle update ke liye

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

romanchak update ..atharva ko ab har cheej ko dekhkar gussa aa jata hai ..
principal ke bulane par ved chala gaya par atharva aur jafar ka saamna ho gaya ,jafar ab ranjan ke naa hone se darr nahi raha atharva se ,par uski baato se aise laga ki usne hi ranjan ko maara ya marwaya hai .
aur ye baat dimaag me aate hi atharva ne jafar ko maarna start kar diya par jafar uth khada hua aur usko dosto ne atharva ko pakad liya ,,ab buri halat kar di hai atharva ki ,3 log pakdenge to kaise ladh sakta hai atharva ..

jafar ko ab koi saja de sakta hai to wo atharva hi hai par jafar ke saamne wo tik nahi payega .

 

[ragish7357]

superbb update bro

 

[11 ster fan]

Yug Purush dekha aapne....
Nischal ko agar ranjan ki jagah story pe entry kara dete aap to kisiki mazal thi jo chu bhi sake atharva ko..
ab bhi waqt hai.. shayad nischal aur Hella aa jaye story pe to jinda jala de Jafar ko sath hi riya mini madhu, karan naik ko bhi na rahegi baans na bajegi bansuri... kissa hi khatam hamesha hamesha ke liye
Khair intezaar agle update ke liye

Guru ved ko aap underestimate Kar rhi hai aap...wo akele sabki Baja sakta hai..bina harmonium aur tabala ke...so trust Kare aap ved par...

 

[Aakash.]

lawda, main bahut selfish banda hoon, duniyadari kaa kaam duniya par chhod deta hoon. Jab mere jeene -marne se logo ko koyi fark nahi padta to fir bhala mujhe kyun unke jeene -marne se koyi fark padne laga.. Isliye ise toh main marunga, marte dum tak maarunga.".

I AM THE FUCKING NARRATOR.

I don't know that while reading the story I am not feeling and enjoying like before and Atharv is also upset, Well, now than before, I don't care about the competition, if not, that's fine.

randi madarchod… chodari, burchatti… hagandi, gookhani~गू खानी iski dayi ko chod dalu… bhadwi... Iske chut me hath daal kar bacha dani kheench lunga”

We don't have any proof but maybe he is the murderer, it's hard to say anything and I feel the same way but who knows? All this is happening after Rajan's death, to be honest I am happy after a long time because Athrav was beating Zafar but in the end I felt very bad, why are you doing this to the Hero of the story.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[The_Punisher]

Waiting for next update

 

[Yug Purush]

Waiting for next update

Athrav was beating Zafar but in the end I felt very bad, why are you doing this to the Hero of the story.

I m fulfilling all ur wishes... U wanted to see atharva punched...naina wanted murder...

superbb update bro

Thanks Raggu

jafar ko ab koi saja de sakta hai to wo atharva hi hai par jafar ke saamne wo tik nahi payega .

Ekdum se dil tod diya bhai ju ne ye kahke

1) ranjan ki maut ne kaafi gehri chhot pahunchayi hai atharva ke dilo dimag pe... khas kar ranjan ki maut ek murder tha, is baat ko lekar gussa hai wo ki uske dost ko maara kisne... itna frustrated ho Chuka hai ki ab baat baat par gussa karne laga hai wo.... har cheej pe gussa aaye ushe.. yahan tak ki kisi insaan hansta hua dekhe to uspar bhi gussa aaye,
sach mein atharva jis daud se gujar raha hai, aisa daud kisike bhi jindagi mein na aaye...
lekin yahin pe ek galti kar raha hai atharva lagtar.... uska gussa hona... Gussa pehle soch samajh aur vichar shaktiyo ko khatam karta hai... phir khatam karta hai insaan ko.... gusse mein uthaye gaye kadam ka natiza hanikarak ke sath sath kabhi kabhi kaafi khaufnaak ho sakte hai... isliye aise situation mein khud ko sambhaal na chahiye... thande dimag se soch vichar karna chahiye... kyunki jaane wala to chala gaya... jo paas hai ushe to samet le aur aage ki jindagi ke baare soche...

2) saxsena ne na bulaya ho... ye Jafar ne hi koi chaal chali ho... kya pata..

3) ranjan ki maut ke turant agle din ya uske agle din agar Jafar apni planning ko anjam deta to shayad school ke baaki ke kayi sare students sympathy ke taur par atharva ka sath dete... ab jab wo ghatana ko huye kayi din bit chuke hai... sabhi normal ho chuke hai, ab koi sympathy nahi dikhne wala, balki maja lene hi wala hai atharva ko maar khata hua dekh (bahot se students shayad atharva ko pasand nahi karte the shayad)
ab Jafar jaanta tha ki atharva ko sabak sikhane ka aur Badla lene ka yehi sahi mauka hai,upor se wo akela tha.. isliye jaan bujh kar aisi baatein kahi jisse atharva ka gussa satve asmaan chu jaye aur natiza sabke samne hai...
gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki mini jo atharva ke paas har roz jaati thi competition ke mamle mein baat chit karne, kya pata wo isliye jaati ho uske paas taaki Jafar ko pata chalta rahe atharva ke mood ke bare mein...

..............
Kayi baatein samne aayi hai..
Actually pehle pahal jab bhi read karte waqt riya jab bhi kahani mein bhumika nibhane aayi... to lage ki ye kirdaar sanjana jaisi nahi hai... kaafi suljhi huyi hai... kayi mamlo mein sanjana se best hai... lekin ab...... ye to unme se nikli.. jahan paisa wala dekha nahi waha.... banne chali gayi...koi swabhiman, koi self-respect hi nahi hai isme to .. really is jaisi **,,, **,,, negative kirdaar shayad hi koi ho.... isse to achhi wo bio wali teacher hai, kam se kam dusmani bhi kayde se nibhati hai...

Jafar.......... iske baare mein kya hi kahu...
Kayarta ki pehchaan hai ye kirdaar.... Agar kal ko Jafar sabke samne dinge haake ki kaise usne atharva ki buri tarah pitaayi ki to shayad main wo first reader jishe hanshi aaye ispe.... iski kayarata se bhari kahani pe..
planning karke, mini dwara bulake kayi ladko ke sath milke us ek akele par hamla kiya.... shabbash, bahot khub... Taaaliya bajti rehni chahiye iske liye to..
abhi tak to meri nazar mein ye Jafar mahaz ek badjat negative kirdaar tha..
Lekin ab...
ek gande naali ke kide se zyada ye Jafar aur kuch bhi nahi,
kirdaar Jafar.... fakir ki jholi mein jane kiska kounsa dana.. ye baat bilkul fit baithe is Jafar pe...
Khair... barish ke mausom mein aise kide naali se bahar nikal aate hai sar uthake... lekin usko wapas laut kar gatar naali mein hi jana hai... wohi uski aukat hai aur niyati bhi.... Jafar jaise naali ke kide ka bhi yahin haal hoga aaj nahi to kal... Waqt waqt ki baat hai.. aaj waqt uska hai kal kisi aur ka hoga... aur Jafar jaise kirdaar jo apni ghamand mein chur hoke zyada uncha udne ki koshish karte hai utna hi tezi se niche bhi girta hai...kabhi na mitne wale gehre jakhm bhi milte hai...
Atharva..... actually is kirdaar ke prati ab bas sahanubhuti ke atirikt aur kuch bhi nahi hai... par dukh is situation ko lekar hai jab iske mom dad ko malum hoga ki atharva ke sath kya hua school mein... ek laute santan ke sath aisa hota dekh unke dil pe kya bitegi yahi soch ke dil mein ek huq si uthe...

Well...... realistic emotions jo ek bahot kathin vishay hai... Kaafi muskil hota hai samproon roop mein prakashit, byakt ya prakat karna bhi .. chaahe likhit story mein ho kirdaaro ke bhumika ya film mein abhinay........ lekin gyani sir is mamle mein mahir hai.. har pehlu ko dhyan mein rakhte hai
fantasy ho ya thriller ho ya tragedy ho ya phir romantic topic ko kayi baar soch vichar kar lete hai gyani sir ki kis tarah se pesh ki jaye taaki readers us topic ko padhte waqt unko real si lage... wo acceptable ho... aur padhne mein maza bhi aaye... aur entertaining bhi ho...
aur readers kirdaar aur kahani ke sath bhavnatmak roop mein bhi jude..

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Yug Purush sahab

Woww... Itni nafrat.... Jafar ke prati gusse aur atharva ke prati sahanubhuti ko kya rapchik type se bataya hai... Ekdum back to back do baar padha main ye review... Reader samaj ko Villain se nafrat ho jaye aur hero se mohabbat bas yahi success hai...

aage ki update read karne se pehle....

Yug Purush dekh lijiye.... raaz se parda hat chuka hai... ye raha wo culprit.. ye Jafar... indirectly kubool kar liya ki is Jafar ne hi maara hai ranjan aur uske pita ko......

Toh fir kya kare ab?

Atharva ki pelai dekh ke Maja aaya...but ved abhi jinda hai jafar bsdk wo itna pel dega ki tujhe apne hi lulli se dar lagane lagega...aur agar ved na pel paya iss jhantu ko to ved bawali gaand sabit ho jayega...so wait and watch ...ved is coming...

yadi aa gaya to bhajiya tal dega inki

Iss sentence se to ye lagata hai ki ranjan ke maut ka khulasa hoga aage aur usme jafar kahi dur dur Tak nhi hoga....

Kyu..??Jafar ke gunde nahi maar sakte aadhi raat ko?

ye harshit sir ke review dekhke aisa lagta hai ki update hi aa gaya hai .
dekhna padta hai ki kisne post kiya hai .

Baki maja aata hai padhne me update samajh ke padh liya karo..mast explain krte hai

Bhai koi jawb nahi.. matlab... koi bhi nahi... itni cute ladki ke muh se ye gali... ghayal ho gaya ATHRVA yahan...

Ab mujhe bhi kharab lag rha hai atharva ke liye ye padhke riya rose ne saale kutte jab kaha toh ekdum se kya beeti hogi uspe...

.. Riya ke bapu ka naam bada khatrnak rakhe ho vaise.. kahan se socha.. Khair... gyani bhai...

Mera office me senior tha ek... Usi ke naam pe rakh diya

Lagta hain aaj update nahi aayega shayad .. Bad, Bhery Bhery bad, feeling sad
wo hota hai na gaon mein..... jaise Bijli chali jaati hai, log intezaar karte rahte ki ab aayegi kab aayegi... lekin electricity wapas aati hi nahi.... thik waise update bhi nahi aaya

Aaj kal bijli jyada kadak rahi hai is thread me..sambhal kar... Kabhi bhi jhatka lak sakta hai

No flaw.. in any of the line.. maza aa gya.. gyani bhai.. Main kasam se agar writer banna hota aur aap guru hote to apka shishye banne ke liye apse jarur tution leta.. you are awesome.. guruji...

Thanx hariya bhai mood fresh kr diya aur josh alag se bhar diya...lag raha agla update abhiyech de du..bina edit vdit ke....

kya khub kaha likha apne... life ka goal set ho to 1-1 number kya ukhad lega.. bhai... matlab gazab.. aap sirf kahani nahi likh rahe aap uske sath na ek sikh de rahe ho apne andaz mein..

The Rogue Philosopher yaad aaya kuch?

Bhai kahan se latte ho matlb kahan se... yar ... kabhi kabhi lagta hai apse tution le lun... bahut kuch sikhna hai.. matlb ye sab ulta ped par latak jaun to nahi soch sakta.. maza hi aa gaya....

Drunk n drive, earphones, frustration.... you know the drill

Yha to update dedo...

Yaha bhi de diya, waha bhi de diya

ek baat khatak rahi hai, aur wo yeh ki kya atharva ke mom dad ko ehsaas nahi ya mehsoos nahi kar pa rahe hai atharva ki manodasha ko, uski bechaini aur ghabrahat ko... un dono ko hi pata hai ab ranjan nahi raha aur yeh bhi pata hai ki unke bete ka khas dost tha ranjan....

He is the Deception King... Baahar se dekh ke nahi maloom chalega ki andar kya hai.upar se Ranjan se dosti chhipi hui thi..sirf ek do baar to aaya tha ranjan, Rajan banke... Maa baap ko kya pata teeno ne milke school me kya gul khilaya hai.

Riya aur sanjana bhi marni chahiye

Par uske pahle ek baar..........

Shayad karan naik aur Jafar ki maut ke sath ye flashback khatam ho...

Best ending

ushe ye to nahi hua ki jaake us villain Jafar ko jaan se maar de... kaatil ko kya khak dhundega wo

Apna J.B. Kujur bidu hai naa..wo kis din kaam aayega... Yadi is story me ek cheenti hai to uska bhi imp role hai

Agar atharva Kajal series stories padhe to shayad is dukh, gham se bahar nikal aaye,,, kyun kirdaar Kajal ushe kisiko bhi yaad karne ya rakhne ki kabil nahi chhodegi

Kabhi Kajal, Kabhi Nischal, kabhi hella fir ek din bologi wonder woman, black widow, iron man...

Jinke dost kam aur dushman jyada hote hai unka ek bhi dost khho jana bohot ghum de jata hai...

Kitni bhi koshish kar lo zindegi sahaj nahi ho pati...

Ab Ranjan ke katil ka kuch pata lagao tabhi shanti milegi Atharva ko

rebhenge time

Ye saala jafar riya ko bhi le gaya kya? BUrchatta kahi ka..

Yahi aag chahiye bhai readers ke seene me...

Pata nahi dono me se koi Atharva ki life me wapas ayegi ya nahi lekin na aye to hi behtar

Epic..

रिया का जफर के ग्रुप के साथ होना जिसमे फिलहाल मिनी और मधु भी हैं.... मुझे नही लगता ये बात ज्यादा सोचने वाली है... रिया की न अथर्व से दुश्मनी थी न जफर से... और जब अथर्व से थोड़ी नोकझोंक हुई तो ऐसा भी तो हो सकता है कि रिया अथर्व को जलाने के लिए जफर के साथ रह रही पर उसके नेचर के हिसाब से नही लगता वो कुछ गलत प्लान भी कर पाए अथर्व के लिए....

Ju shuru se Riya ke favour me rahi ho waise kaha thik hai ki..jafar se to kabhi riya ki dushmani thi hee nahi..wo pahle bhi hii..hello karte the... Good one

आखिर किसने और क्यों मारा रंजन और उसके डैड को ?

करण नाईक ने ?
जफर ने ?
जोशी ने ?
किसी स्कूल के ही लड़का-लड़की ने ?
किसी टीचर ने ?
जमीनी विवाद की वजह से ?
रंजन के डैड के किसी पुराने दुश्मनी की वजह से ?

Joshi kaa naam kyun liya aapne waise uska role hai abhi aage

Gif bhi bana diya story ke liye wowww mam.. die hard fan ho lagta hain

Ye to ban ho gayi .
Noice... thanx

.. uske antar mann ki soch ne to usko kaise saza di jaye uski planning bhi kar li thi...
Baakiyo se hat ke Atharva ke mutabik ranjan ke chalte uske pita bhi maare gaye...
yaha pe do hi reason nazar aaye... ek to dhave wali jagah ko lekar koi jhagda..

Yadi dhabe wali jameen ko lekar maut hogi to fir wo toh ranjan ke papa ke kaaran hee hua naa... fir to atharva ki theory sarasar galat saabit ho jayegi

Amrish puri kaise bhi ho sabki leni hai chahe age ki ho ya piche ki bc page number koun puchta hai bhla had kardi esme to eska ek hi makshad hai or vo hai

Wo answer bata ke answer ka question bhi puchhta hai aage padho to

Update ..14

Ye kya tha par jo bhi tha mst tha ...medam ko aisa ullu banaya ko vo as a ullu .. rat ko bhi nhi soch sakti mujhe to lagta hai ki atharva ke swal ka jabab rat bhar dhundhti rehegi ... school ho ya koi or jagah sidiya eska manpasand place hai ... Haha yha to sach me lol ho gai apne aap ko mister india samaj rha tha par use nhi pta ki samne mogembo hai ...lagta hai bachpan me esme chor police ka khel nhi khela hai tabhi etni asani se pakada gya ...agar thi phone the great veda ka hota to vo bharat ki 130 karor population ki aankho ke samne se bina bhnaak pde gayab kar deta par ye piddu har kam me mat kha hi jata hai ..

Bhai tumhare update padhne ki speed toh mere update dene ke speed se bhi kam hai

Sajna, Riya, Mini, Madhu, what should I say now, is the situation like this or have you done everything intentionally, don't know.

Mujh par shaq karna matlab bhagwan pe shaq karna..main to matra ek madhyam hu

Apne ko aise double standard wale log bilkul pasand nahi aur ye riya ko dekh kar pata nahi kyon nafrat sii ho rahi h apne ko ...
Multi universe se Arman ko wapas laoo aur riya ke baap ka encounter karwa doo ...
Tab pata chalega kisi khash ke jane ke baad kaisa lagta h sali chinnar..

Mast plan hai lemme contact 2.0 usi ke paas memory hai Arman ki.. Usko atharva wale me transfer karwa deta hu

Update

Wo bhi itni jaldi




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Kaha tha naa mujhse jyada regular koyi hai hee nahi pure xf me

to wish puri kariye wo bhi jald se jald
Ab Waqt aa gaya hai atharva ke andar ke Haivaan jagane ka...
Maut ka tandav har update pe hona chahiye

Happy now?

waise is story thread abhi teen teen thriller story likhne wale Writers hai harshit1890 Moon Light SANJU ( V. R. ), is story ko read kar rahe hai..
shayad ye teeno is murder mystery ko solve kar dein

Isme mystery jaisa kya..ekdum open and shut case hai...

Hello Gyan... Glad you replied... Mujhe spanish sikhne ka keedha chadha tha... La_Mujer ka matlab hai The Woman

Toh fir spanish sikh gayi ya nahi??

वाह ! वाह ! क्या बात है । ग्रेट थियूरी ।
लेकिन एक बात याद रखियेगा इस बेचारे रंजन के मौत की उत्तरदाई आप ही हैं । ये ज्ञानी भाई ने अभी कुछ देर पहले कहा था ।

ju ye nahi dekh pa rahe hai kya ki
ranjan aur khas kar uske pita kaise logo sath ladayi jhagda karta phirta tha... jaane kitne dusman honge.. unme se kisi ne maar diya hoga dono ko.... Ya phir wo dhava ki jagah.. us jagah par kisiki nazar hai shayad ab ye dono nahi rahe

Kill tag kill tag karke kaun pahle din se kisi ko marwana chah rha tha ?

मर्डर मिस्ट्री उसकी पर्सनल मैटर की भी हो सकती है
क्योंकि एक दिन पहले ही तो पता लगा था किसी जमीन की रजिस्ट्री थी.... क्या था... ऐसा ही कुछ था जमीन से जुड़ा
वंही तो गए थे दोनों...!!

Agree
Jameen ka hi mamla lag raha hai

nice update
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nice update ..ranjan ki maut ko lekar saare students bahut si bewajah ki baate bana rahe hai .
atharva ka shak sirf jafar ke upar hai aur usne jafar ko maarne ki planning bhi kar li thi par ved ne aakar usko rok diya .

riya bhi ab jafar ki team me ho gayi hai ..
aise ghatiya logo se dur hi rehna chahiye ,koi bhi baat karne nahi aaya atharva se ,,

ek khas dost ko khone par aisa hi hota hai jaise atharva ,ved ke saath ho raha hai ..

Thanks a Lot friends.... ​

 

[Sasha!]

rebhenge time

सादा जीवन, तुच्छ विचार