Romance Three Girls of My Life

[harshit1890]

Update - 57

"लौंडी काहे लौंडे से, तू क्या रोंदे मोहि,
एक दिन ऐसा आएगा, मै चोदुँगी तोहि..."

अर्थात.. सेक्सी साहित्यकार यहाँ पर कहते है कि.. अथर्व नपुंसक है और रिया रोज के साथ सेक्स करने मे असमर्थ है.तत्पश्चात... रिया रोज, डिलडो लगाकर अथर्व कि गांड मारने का सोच रही है...”

Bhai kahan se latte ho matlb kahan se... yar ... kabhi kabhi lagta hai apse tution le lun... bahut kuch sikhna hai.. matlb ye sab ulta ped par latak jaun to nahi soch sakta.. maza hi aa gaya.... Update kafi bada tha.. aur bahut detailed mein tha.. matlab competition walle par koi reaction nahi diya lekin... jo main concept tha.. uspar apne full focus rakhte hue ek dum.. atyant aram se likha hai.. is baar kahani mein is chiz ka maza alag level par hai.. har chiz detailed clean... plus clinical ho rahi hai.. jisme sab aage jakar clean bowled honge... kafi din baad ana hua thread par... par maza aa gaya.. Ye trio mein atharva marega... aur tabhich iski ye halat hogi.. ek ke piche na rehne par aisa hi hota hai Par aapne jo VED ka character banaya hai na.. ye combo hai.. kahani ka... matlab enternainment + suspense... isliye kyu ki vo sirf bich mein ata hai kahani ke andar aur apne jalwe bikhar jata hai.. lekin purn roop se ghapla lag raha hai mujhe... par manna padega apki creation ko.. har bar koi ek naya pan hota hai.. VED bhi waisa hi hai.. ek number bhai.. aap ke likhne ka istlye itna gazab hai na... ki har chiz aisi lagti hai.. bc kya likh raha hai banda... soch hi ultimate level par pahunch jati hai... great pajjiiii

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 58

Aree bhai... end mein atte atte sala... apun ek dum romanch se bhar gaya... agar ye koi physical abuse hai... to yahan jagega Atharva ka pyar.. style of a love istory.. par mujhe lagta nahi aisa hoga lekin gazab maza aya.. bich mein jo apne mazak mazak mein baatein likhi na bhai.. ego ki wajah se baat nahi hoti... etc.. aur bahut si line aisi thi.. jo ki ek dum true thi bhai.. Aur atharva riya ki khubsurti se pyar karta hai... par dil uska sanjana par hi hai.. varna vo baat karne samne se nahi ata.. sala dosti badi pyari chizz hai.. baad mein sab kharab ho jata aur kuch log kharab kar dete.. aap na ek kahani ki feel bana kar hume de rahe ho gyani bhai... matlab... its a beautiful mind fucker story.. sach mein.. abhi simple hai.. dikh simple rahi hai.. par hai simple nahi.. ye baat bilkul sahi sabit hogi aage jakar.. kab ye nahi pata par filal.. update ka ant.. bahut zordar tha bhai... aap dimag pakad kar baithe ho.. sala soch hi nahi patte ki acha aisa hoga agle update mein ya ye ho sakta hai... brilliant.. sirji..

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 59

Isliye kehta hun apko.. ki aap mahagyani ho aur hum tuchye manushye.. hum kya soch rahe the.. aur yahan kya hi hua.. mana ki sanjana ki wajah se kand hua.. lekin kya kaand likha hai bhai apne.. matlab mere pas shabd kam padh jaye usko define karne mein.. jaisa apne kaand dala hai... ek ek para.. maa kasam.. ankhon ke samne chal raha tha.. aur uspar ek ek action.. words se.. jo apne kiye hai.. aur ek ek character ko manage karte hue jo jo apne likha main gurantee se keh sakta hun koi intni perfectly combo karke jod kar nahi likh sakta... Starting se lekar end tak.. jo sama bandha hai na.. abhi tak ka by far the most dramatic update tha ye.. sab kuch hua isme.. ek dum perfectly plan of action ke tehat apne pichle update mein base banaya aur is baar usko execute kar diya.. sirji mahan se bhi uppar sthar hai apke likhne ka.. matlab abhi bhi review likhte time na meri ankhon ke aage hai vo ek ek scene.. ATharva ka gali galoz karte hue lalkarna.. riya ka wahan ana.. exactly wahi hona jo lag raha tha ki ho sakta hai riya ka bhadkana... lekin jo epic bana vo tha ranjan ka jawab dena.. kya khub kaha likha apne... life ka goal set ho to 1-1 number kya ukhad lega.. bhai... matlab gazab.. aap sirf kahani nahi likh rahe aap uske sath na ek sikh de rahe ho apne andaz mein.. Main cha kar bhi shabdon mein bayan nahi kar paa raha ki apne kitna behtarin likha hai isme... Apse behtar shayad hi koi is kahani ko is andaz mein likh sakta hai, chutiapya bahut hota hai aisi kahani mein.. lekin jis tarah apne pakad bana kar sab planned likha hai na.. uska koi jawab nahi hai.. aur apke pas ek alag level ki writing skills hai jo padte time apko apni hi dunia mein le jata hai.. no flaw.. in any of the line.. maza aa gya.. gyani bhai.. Main kasam se agar writer banna hota aur aap guru hote to apka shishye banne ke liye apse jarur tution leta.. you are awesome.. guruji...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 60

"Chutologist ke sath -sath Boobologist hai naa tu bsdk..... Jo boobs chus ke ilaaj kar dega.. "

are bhai... kahan se laa rahe ho ye.. kal ko Gandulogist bhi ayega... Bada hi ajeeb sa mahol bana diya update ne.. kehne ko bahut kuch hai par kuch mil bhi nahi raha.. par gazab tha... ranjan ka ye gussa lazmi tha.. aur atharva ka gussa karne ke baad gand fatna ek dum sahi tha.. admi gusse mein bahut kuch bhul jata hai aur ladkiyan na sab bhool jati hai lekin launde ka gussa aur apne sasural ki burai nahi bhulti.. janam jatt super power hai inme ye.. bad mein pachta rahe hain to kya karegi kismat... matlab apne jo jo likha na gusse se lekar pachtawe tak ek dum... satik human ki sachai hai.. aisa hi hota hai aur apne ek dum bakhubi darshaya hai.. Maza ayega.. ab aage jane mien ... apratim bhai... kahani bahut hi interesting modh par le aaye ho aap jahan ab kuch bahut jaldi interesting hone wala ha .... Great pajjii.... great....

 

[Naina]

Lagta hain aaj update nahi aayega shayad .. Bad, Bhery Bhery bad, feeling sad
wo hota hai na gaon mein..... jaise Bijli chali jaati hai, log intezaar karte rahte ki ab aayegi kab aayegi... lekin electricity wapas aati hi nahi.... thik waise update bhi nahi aaya

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 61

Are bhai... standing ovation for this update.... Matlab... aap apni hi party ki gand faddne mein mahir ho... kahani ka side villian to bhag niklaa... hamare teeno launde pakde gaye.. lekin sahi hai riya rose ke baap wali entry jo karani thi.. jaruri tha.. sala kahani mein jo mirch masala aur dialog dale ho na aap.. bhai vo jaan hai kahani ki.. asal mein VED heart hai kahani ka.. baki sab ko jod rakha hai usne... extraordnary update tha.. kyun ki back to back unpexpected turn diye ho aap... aur yakin mano aap aise hi kar sakte ho.... pilai mein bachaya bhi aur end mein pakdwaya bhi.. har koi hota to hero ko bacha leta ya fir pitta nahi peet deta lekin yahan sab normal chal raha hai jo aksar hota hai... concept bemisal.. reality se juda hua.. school time bahut hota tha ye sab... aur apne us yug ki kahani jo dauhrai hai apne andaz mein uske kya hi kehna... mujhe padte hue lag raha tha bc main bhi unme se ek hun.. ya fir koi audience jo sab dekh rahi hai.. itni padarshita tha padte waqt aur aisa jadu sirf aap hi likh sakte ho bhai.. fabulous update tha bhai... jitna jitna kahani aage badh rahi hai utni bechaini use padne ki badhti jaa rahi hai... matlab... mazedar... bemissall... dhamall.. gyani bhai

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 62

ISe kete hai kalakar ki barabari har koi nahi kar sakta.. aap is kahani ke kalakar ho sirji.. vo bhi apratim.. ye sab batein piche review mein likhna chahta tha lekin wahan reh gaya aur jab scene nahi badla pichle update se is wale mei to isme likh diye Hum log kahani mein aage jo likhna hota hai vo present ke likhne ke baad sochte hai... par aap kahani ka end soch kar uske aage 4 update baad kya likhoge uske hissab se likhte ho.. tbhi aap har chiz ko ek ek karke set aur jodte hue aage badte ho jo itni perfectly koi nahi kar pata bhai... matlab main ye sochta hun.. ki kahan intrduction hoga kirdaro ka aur aap puri tarah se bandh dete ho pehle hi sab kuch... jaise abhi next chapter Big bang hai aur apne abhi se uska jikar ched diya... ye kala sirf aap mein hai.. mujhe nahi lagta mene kabhi kisi writer ke bheetar is kala ko dekha hai... uske baad aap har chiz ko finish karne ka style jante ho.. kaise baat ko close karna hai.. jo ki har koi ache se nahi kar sakta lekin aap bahut behtarin tarike se karte ho.. Riya ke bapu ka naam bada khatrnak rakhe ho vaise.. kahan se socha.. Khair... gyani bhai... yakeen mano man hi nahi karta ek update padne ke baad ruk kar next padne ka.. lagta hai ek sath hi padta jaun.. itna maza aa raha hai lekin agar mene aisa kiya to mujhe review mein kya kya likhna hai vo yaad nahi rehta.. isliye man ko samjhana padta hai... bahut hi interesting.... ho rahi hai kahani ab bhai... tussi bahut hi gazab writer ho bhai sahi mein...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 63

Bhai jitni baar baithta hu utni baar update padne ke baad standing ovation dene ka man karta hai... is update mein kuch aisa hi hua... maa kasam bata raha hun... jab jab apki kahani padta hun.. muskan aise felhi hoti hai.. jaise kisi laundiya ne keh diya ho galle lagjaa ... sala use jada khushi milti hai is kahani ko padne mien.. bhai.. kya likh rahe ho yaar.. kasam se sala dil ke hazar tukde kar ke har kahani ke har update par ek ek tukda baitha deta hu... Is update mein apne end tak hansa... sad auur vo mixx feeling ke sath ye samajh aya ki hum launde sahi mein dard chupane ke liye kuch bhi chutiya harkat karte hain aur apne use har hadh tak sahi sabit kiya hai...

"Fir.. Lawwwddddoooveeee... Love..... Fir Kisliye "

“tumne meri painting ka concept Sanjana ko kyun bataya, usne same to same meri jaisi painting banayi hai… jisme uski maa hospital me admit hai aur meri jagah wo apne maa ke saamne baithi hui hai…”

“kyaaaa……..”Ranjan peechhe se bola….

“kyaaaa…”maine bhi Ranjan ko copy kiya aur hum dono ko aisa karte dekh Ved bhi ek oor se aate hue chillaya “kyaaaaaaaaaaa……”


“coincidence hoga Riya… afterall artist wala dimag tera bhi hai, uska bhi hai… tum dono ki maa bhi hospital me admit thi…tum dono ko hee main like bhi karta hu…... Mera kahne ka matlab tha ki ye sab coincidence bhi toh ho sakta hai… ”

Kaha tha mene bhai... ye painting baval karegi.. aur sala wahich hua.. jaisa umeed thi ki ranjan bak dega.. egjactly wahi.. lekin ye apna hero se kya bulwa diya bhai.. :roffol: ye ATHARVA apna vo prani hai jisne muh mein dalle rasgulle nahi khaye... Bhai kya joda hai apne.. sab kuch mila kar.. kahan mein competition ke intezar mein tha. kahan apne to kahani ko wahan se lane se pehle jabardast hi kahani ko modh diya.. bhai..

“don’t ever talk to me and this time I really mean it… Atharva… sale, kutte…”

Bhai koi jawb nahi.. matlab... koi bhi nahi... itni cute ladki ke muh se ye gali... ghayal ho gaya ATHRVA yahan... bas sanjana se true lobe karta hai aur riya ko pana chahta hai.. par riya sanjana ke hi tarah ATHARVA se true lobe karta hai bhai... apne jo ye connection dikhaya hai usme apne ek chiz ka mujhe badi khatak rahi hai... kuch DECEPTION ho raha hai idhar.. kyun ki narrator ATHARVA hai to gadbad lag rahi hai.. ho sakta hai jo ye sab ho raha ho waisa hua hi nahi ho... Kya pata riya ki jagah sanjana ho.. aisa feeling aa rela hai.. lekin bhai.. ATHARVA chhodo aap hi humo decieve kar rahe ho.. gazab gyani bhai.. gazab...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 64

:claps1: :claps1: A fine end of the chapter.. jabki is update mein jada naya nahi hua lekin.. VED is ved... koi badal nahi sakta use.. he is a gem of a kirdar.... rajshri jaisa tha na.. jo 8th semester ka ek unique kirdar banaya tha apne.. VED ko aapne use bhi kahin jada unique aur best kirdar hai.. apart from the main kirdar... Purre update mein jo ek sach tha vo..

"Disappointed..?"

"Yep... And the worst thing is i dont even know the meaning of disappointment... Yet i am."

".when you work hard for something and expect too much but at the end don't get it... You feel sad... Right..??"

"Of course "

"Well, that's the disoppointment... Mate. It Happenend with my whole life... Happening now... But Now i'm used to it.. It feels bad, hurts so much... But now i know how to handle it... And Bhatti, Always Remember one thing, no matter how fucked up your life becomes... Life is not about being sad , mad or fad over someone or something. Make the most of it because no one knows what will happen next, so………. have fun….”aankh maarte hue Ranjan bola

A reaity touched with everyone in this life.. har koi disappoint hota hai.. aur kai baar hota hai.. par jis tarah se ranjan ne kaha.. jo ki apka hi kamal hai.. bhale hi kirdar aag ho.. par story create karne wala to ek hi banda hai na.. like westworld.. bhai..bahut hi khub likh rahe ho... sirf 6 update aur .... iske baad main kahani ke present mein aa jaunga... .. Gyani bhai.. its an honor reading you..

 

[mashish]

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