Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Yug Purush]

All is well when and is well

Ye bhi thik hai

emotion se bharpur update yaar writer ji aapne to hame apne dost ki yaad dila di uska aur uske pariwar ka bhi kisi ne saalo pahle murder kar diya tha is update ko padkar fir se uski yaad aa gayi jise sayed hi ham kabhi bhule

Woww.. Never expected this type of connection with the story..thanx bhai

Wait nahi ho raha

Deta hu naa kuch der me fir

writer ji aap apni story ko kab continue karoge jo kab se aapne latka rakhi hai jara uspe bhi dheyan de lijiye

Usko gali do... Tab wo likhega

अपडेट सुबह पढ़ लिया पर दिमाग एक दम शून्य में आ गया अपडेट पढ़ कर इसलिए मैं कुछ नही लिख पाई...
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अथर्व का हाल बिन पानी मछली जैसा हो गया है अभी.... उसे अब भी यकीन नही हो रहा कि ये सब सच है... कोई भी होता तो यही फील कर पाता जो अथर्व कर रहा.... अफसोस सच का सामना तो करना ही पड़ेगा.... रंजन अब इस दुनिया को इस फरेबी दुनिया को इस मतलबी दुनिया को त्याग कर छोड़ कर हमेशा के लिए स्वर्ग में रहने चला गया...

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मन को काबू कर पाना बहुत मुश्किल होता है ऐसे समय मे, ना चाहते हुए भी हमारा दिमाग वही सोचने को मजबूर हो जाता है... और फिर खुद को दिलाशा देने के साथ साथ आँशु स्वत्: ही आंखों से निकल आते हैं...
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अथर्व स्कूल तो जाता है पर वँहा भी उसे सब कुछ रंजन की याद ही दिला रहे...
वक़्त आगे क्यों नही ले जाता इस परिस्थिति से...
मिनी अब क्विज का हिस्सा तो है पर क्या फर्क पड़ता है अब क्विज से ?

Yug Purush राइटर जी प्ल्ज़, इस दुख बारे पल से हमे शीघ्र अतिशिघ्र निकालिये, हम इसे सहन नही कर पा रहे
कृपा कीजिये ...

Itna kharab toh mujhe likhte samay nahi laga tha..jitna ab reviews padhkar lag rha hai

समय के साथ चीजें बदलती जायेंगी । वक्त बड़े से बड़े जख्म को अपने सिने में दफ़न किए आगे बढ़ते जायेगा । रह जायेगी तो बस कुछ यादें और कुछ निशानियां ।

Waqt ko waqt do..sab thik ho jaata hai.. Jaise ki present time me atharva hai..

Yug Purush saheb kya aapko nahi lagta ki ab atharva ke hath mein ek kulhadi de hi diya jaaye , taaki kulhadi se baaki sabhi kirdaaro par waar karke, sabhi kirdaaro ko ghayal karke, unka khoon bahake atharva apne gusse se, dukh dard se aur frustration se nijat paaye...

Be careful what you wish for... And wish granted...

nndhte pehly xp or ap yeh xforum tak aa pohoncha .. yar apky jesa writer iss poore foorum pe koi nae hae .. mere bus mein ho toh mein apko best writer of the world ka award de du .. Kiya likhte ho yar

Bas bhai aise comment padh ke toh active hoon..warna mere time ke siway ek do ko chhodkar sab apni life me busy ho chuke hai...

Yug Purush sir mere hisab se ye ab tak ka sab se best update hai
Sahi kaha aapne har vakti ke life ek baar ko ye moment aata jab wo rona chahta hai chikhna chahta hai par wo aisa kar nahi pata
You have awesome writing skills waiting for next update

Bhai baaki jabda bahut dard hai aise chillane me 2-3 din tak

Tareef samjho ya bejjati... Bas update regularly post kiya karo

Mujhse regular toh koyi hai hee nahi

Par sawal ab yahin hai ki akhir ranjan mara kis haramkhor kirdaar ne?

Tharki Jafar ne

Pagal karan naik ne

Micro mini ne :

botal chorni madhu ne

Veda ki dream girl Sunayana ne

Gupta ji ne

Ya phir bio wali lalchi aurat matlab us teacher ne

lage ki ranjan ke maarne ke piche in sabhi chindi chor kirdaaro ki mili bhagat hai
edited - waise is waqt atharva pura garam hai... kyun na atharva next update pe hi in kirdaaro kaam tamam kar de to kill tag sahi sabit ho jaye aur turu lob bhi

Socho yadi unhone maara hai milkar toh kyun..?? Kya karne waala tha ranjan aisa..jo usko maarna pad gaya

Jeevan mein kayi mahatvapoorn cheeje hone ke bajaay vyakti ke jeevan mein dosti sabase mulyavaan rishta hai. agar jindagi mein dost ki kami hai, to samajh lijiye ye jivan hi santusht purn nahi hai. Bilkul fiki si ho jaye ye jindagi... har kisi ko bure ya achchhe jeevan ki ghatanaon ko saajha karane, sukhad palo ka aanand lene aur jeevan ki Memorable ghatanaon ko saajha karane ke liye ek achhe aur sachhe dost ki aavashyakata hoti hai.
Sachha dost woh hai, jise koi bhi hamesha ke liye gehrayi se pasand kar sakate hai, bharosa kar sakte hai. Dost wo jo koi nahi kar sakta wo ek dost kar dikhata hai.....
ghum ka mahol, koi dukh ho ya tragedy... in sab paristithiyo se bahar nikalne mein kisi apne se zyada ek dost zyada kargar sabit hota hai.... to kabhi prerna banke hume apni jindagi mein har muskil ko paar kar aage badhne ko encourage karta hai...... koi na hai sath tera... door hsi manjil.... par ye fikar kyun, jab ye dost sath hai tere...
Jaise ranjan tha atharva aur guru veda ke liye..... aaj wo nahi raha... chala gaya kahi door Gagan ki aurr....
jo apne dost ko Khone ka dard apne andar hi andar chupaye baitha hai ya to ved samajh sakta hai ya wo jisne kabhi ek apna koi sachha dost khoya ho...
wo samanya roop se chal phir to raha hai, school bhi gaya par uske andar jo rah reh reh kar tufan uth raha hai, ushe bas wo hi mehsoos kar pa raha hai... ek ankahin bechaini si hai jise atharva bata nahi pa raha hai... uska antar mann ye maan'ne ko ab bhi taiyar nahi ki uska dost ranjan ab nahi raha... ushe lage ki abhi ranjan aake ushe Bhatti kehke pukarega...
Jaise rah rah kar uski aahat sunayi di ho ushe... in teeno ki dosti dekh ek gana yaad aaye..

Atharva, Guru veda and Ranjan

Atharva, Guru veda and Ranjan
Khair..... kaafi dilchasp aur emotions bharpur update tha
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

Itni mehnat review dene me
Gazab

Apun thoda sad hogya ye update padhne ke baad ..hota h aisa life me kai baar ...jab koi karibi durr ho jata h apne se too.

Mai kya likhun kuch samajh me nahi aa raha...
Xforum ki tumhari kahaniyon par ye mera pehla comment hai... Aur sach kahu to maine update dil tham kar darte darte padha...

Ek baar sarsari nazron se aur ekbaar dhyan se... Tum aj kal khoon kharaba jo karne par tule huye ho

Par update accha laga... Gazab flow hai tumhari writting me

Thanx Sasha! is username ka kya matlab...

itna wait karna pada ..
ranjan aur uske peeta ki hatya karne ke baad kahani padhne me dilchaspi badh gayi hai kuch jyada hi ,,
bas intejar hai ki kaatil kaun hai ,aur uska motive kya tha ..

bura to laga ranjan ke baare me jaankar ,..

Abhi kya... Abhi aage dekho

Halki fulki read ki hai...but 8th semester full read kiya hua hai...

Depth atmakami me hai bas aakhiri tak jhel lo...

Nivedita bapas aaye ki atharva ki life mai

Sanjana ko hi maar do waise bhi uska kuch kaam bacha nahi hai ab iss story me

Agree...

ba hu hu hu
had se zyada masoom reader hu fir bhi mujhe pe hi blaming karing ju logis

Atyachar masoom logo pe hee kiya jaata hai ab kuch bhi bura hoga ishtory me...blame sirf ek vyakti ko karenge...

Thats why i hate your stories you play with your readers feelings too much
You are too much brutal , violent and don't give a fuck to any character and that's why I love your stories
Gyaani bhai :chota heart:

request story se Jafar aur karan naik ka kissa khatam karne ke liye naa ki ranjan ka patta saaf karne ke liye...
Thik se check kar liya karo revos

Nishana chook gaya..

Iska simple jabab hai :- aap hi kahati thi na ki atharva aur sanjana ek ho ..aur unke bich ab aa RHA tha ranjan ...ab ranjan dost tha atharva ka to atharva kuchh Kar nhi sakta tha ranjan ka to sgp sir ne apne masoom se reader ke liye pilan banakar ranjan ko hi maar Diya...ab to khush ho Naina mam ranjan ko Marva ke ...ab ju ke aatma ko santushthi mil gayi na..kya Mila aisa karke aapko...aapne hi kaha tha ek baar ki sgp sir iss story me kill word hai to kiska khun bahega mujhe khun ki Nadiya dekhani hai...ye sab aapke unn masoom se Revo ke Karan ho rha hai...ranjan aur uske father ke maut ka jimmedar sirf tum sirf tum...

Sahi kaha bhai

Ek sawal hai aapse?
Bas uska jawab de dijiye....
ranjan ka kissa hi khatam kar diya story se hi..... iske badle aapko kya mila?

A to Z sabhi readers badhiya guess kar rahe the
.koyi bol rha tha sanjana, ab ranjan sath hogi to koyi ranjan ke quiz team me participate karne ko lekar bahut khush ho raha... Yaha mujhe mast mauka dikha Readers log ko shock dene ka waise ek hisab se dekha jaaye toh ranjan ke maut ke pichhe readers log hee jimmedar hai..main nahi main to sirf ek madhyam hoon

.riya jane ke bad bhi deevar ko gure ja raha hai hai khi aisa na ho ki deevar ke hi chhed kar de

Kabhi kabhi to aisa lagta hai ki mere update ka new version hai aapke reviews aur ye lines mere dimag me kyun nahi aayi

अब ई का नवा बवाल है।।

Its truth

Yug Purush bhau agle Update me us jafar ka safar bhi khatm kar do .... Ek dariyadil reader pe thodi mehebani kardo
Chahe eske badle me uske sath sanjana ,guru veda ,antarmukhi atharva ,riya rose ,
Nivedita rani sabko mar do.. kill them ..par jafar ko hell bhej do jha use 20 gante dhadhakti ke ag ke pass rakhe ... 2 gante garam tel me dubki lagaye ... 2 gante use nukili sword par sulaya jaye ....khane me jhwalamukhi ka lava /megma khilaya jaye ... Bs Etna bhla us jafar ke sath kar do

Bhai... Padhte raho..sampurn tripti hai aage ke updates me...

Apki har story me har baar hero ka dost yaar pela jata h ..jaise shivam me Vikas ka game baja dala tha aap ne..
8th semester aur atmakhami me kya hua batane ki zarurat hi nahi h..

The Ron wali me nahi pelaya tha
Anyway..sahi kaha... next story me main hero ka dost rahega hee nahi

रंजन की मौत की खबर और फिर उसके और उसके डैड की डेड बॉडी देखकर जैसा फिल अथर्व कर रहा है वैसा ही मुझे भी फिल हो रहा है ।

Bas wahi feel karane ke liye wo scene itn bada likha..taaki dimag ka frustration ache se readers log samajh sake.. Taaki aage abhi jo hoga.... Wo

par itni badi kisse dushmani thi ranjan yaa uske papa ki ,,,ki dono ko jaan se maar diya ...


aur kya unke kaatil pakde jayenge ???..

Sab pata chalega bidu... Mahol ko thoda aur bigadne toh do...

Ranjan ko wapas laiye Yug Purush saheb

Noice mam

The first meeting with Rajan was a bit different

Dont you get it...?? Everything is bit different about this story justwait for few more updates..

अपडेट 68

काश ये सब एक सपना ही होता...
क्या यंहा टाइम ट्रेवल करके उन्हें जीवित नही किया जा सकता
ऐसा भाग मत लिखा करो जँहा दर्द हो दिल मे,
माना वो स्टार्ट में थोड़ा लोफर टाइप किरदार था ( जो कि सब समझते थे पर वो नही था ) अंत मे वो बदल गया था
एक बढ़िया किरदार था रंजन
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Mind ke through time travel aur zinda hona ye Arman ke paas hai... Atharva ke paas ye shaktiya nahi hai

pad gayi kalejo ko thandak aapko Yug Purush
mushkuraiye, khush rahiye, hanshiye...

Yeh kya ho gaya...?

Welcome to goa, Singham

Hunk09...

ये एक मिस्ट्री हैं अब तक आखिर hunk09 है कौन ...!!!
ये प्राणी अपनी आइडेंटिटी को छुपाकर xforum पर घूमते देखा गया है...

ये खुद को एक लड़के के रूप में वँहा सबके सामने प्रस्तुत करता है जबकि वास्तविकता इससे विल्कुल अलग है,

मेरे सूत्रों के हवाले से वह एक सुंदर सुशील कन्या है जो लड़कों से परेशान होकर लड़के के नाम से xforum पर घूमती है...
और इस कन्या का असली नाम हनकिनी है...

इससे अधिक जानकारी के लिए आप हमें किसी गप सप थ्रेड पर msg कर सकते हैं...

धन्यवाद ।

Mujhe to pahle se shaq tha

Thoda ajib lga ye dekhkar ki es story par Naina ji and mashish bro ke post Yug Purush bhau se jyada hai ..... Alsi n kanjuus writer ...

Multiquote me aisa hota hai... Wo bhi kayi din ka ek sath pe karne pe... Mere post kam ho jaate hai... Lekin ek jamane me mere post sabse jyada the

nice update bro
bs ranjan ka marna dard de gya

Ranjan sahi me nhi raha

amazing update

Aakir Rajan pela gaya sath me uska bapu bhi...ab apne hero ke liye itna to banta hai ki uski bakchodi ke karan 3-4 bali to banti hi hai

Sab pele jayege

Mohit saheb ne bhi keh diya hai... ab to sab ke sab kirdaar giyo

Uski re entry ki kya jarurat...uski bhi aisi ki taisi kar deni chahiye wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se... kam se kam upor jake ranjan ko company dene Ki koshish karegi tabhi to maza aaye read karne mein

Naya ranajan mil gaya..
Race lagana aur nishana lagana alag alag baat hai, bhale hi ved ka nishana aacha ho but woh atharva se tej bhag nahi sakta ,
Ranjan aur uske baap ko kon behrahmi se mara hai , aage patah chalega...

Great Story Bro!!

superbb update bro

nice update ..ghar aakar atharva ko rona aa raha tha par wo akele me chupke se roya ,jab jaag gaya to usko laga ki kahi ye sab sapna to nahi par sab sach tha ..

jab koi khas ho jata hai life me to aise hota hai sabke saath ,koi sabke saamne roke apne dukh batata hai to koi akele me chupke se ..

school chala hi gaya atharva jaha ranjan ki kuch baate yaad aane lagi usko ..

ab mini competition me ranjan ki jagah le rahi hai par atharva ko isse koi farak nahi padta ..

kayi logo ko reply dena shayad bhool gaya hounga ya fir quote krte samay delete ho gaya hoga...uske liye sorry baki... Thank you everyone ​

 

[Naina]

Be careful what you wish for... And wish granted...

to wish puri kariye wo bhi jald se jald
Ab Waqt aa gaya hai atharva ke andar ke Haivaan jagane ka...
Maut ka tandav har update pe hona chahiye

Socho yadi unhone maara hai milkar toh kyun..?? Kya karne waala tha ranjan aisa..jo usko maarna pad gaya

dekhiye scene kuch tarah se create huyi ho ...
Jafar ko uske khabri se pata chal gaya ki kuch nahi balki bahot kuch hai Sanjana aur ranjan ke darmiyan
Ab apni saali Sanjana ko lekar over possessiveness rakhne wala Karan naik tak ye khabar Jafar ne pahuchane mein der na ki....ye Khabar sun gusse mein aag babula karan naik ne is baat ko lekar apni biwi Sunayana ko khadi khoti suna diya ho.... jisse Sunayana bhi gusse mein pagal si ho gayi ho ki us ranjan ki ye himmat
yahin pe ek aur important baat, dusman ka dusman dost hota hai... aur ye batane ki jarurat nahi ki madhu, mini, bio wali teacher kis kadar nafrat kare AVR group se...
Isse pehle karan naik koi kadam uthata, chalak lomdi Jafar ne ushe roka aur sabhi kirdaaro ke bich ek meeting fix ki .. Jafar ki hazri mein karan naik, Sunayana, mini, madhu aur bio wali lalchi aurat matlab wo teacher... insab ne milke ek khatarnak planning ki ho... planning AVR group ko todne ki... aur shikar hoga ranjan...
planning ko anjaam dene ke liye ye us raat ranjan ke dhave mein gaye.. phir backup planning ke tahat Jafar, mini, madhu aur bio wali teacher ko waha kahi andhere mein chupe rehne ko kah kar Sunayana aur karan naik samne se ranjan aur uske pita se mile aur dhamki dene lag gaye ki ranjan ko dur rahna chahiye Sanjana se... ab dono baap beta thehre garam dimag wale... dono ne unki baatein sunne ke bajaye ulta tu tu main main karne lag gaye Sunayana aur karan ke sath.... baat hatha payi tak pahunch gayi.... (gaur talab baat ye hai ki ye baat karan naik & team jaante the ki ye dono baap bete aisa hi kuch karenge).... ab backup planning aur original planning ki tahat kisi ninja ki tarah Jafar, mini, madhu aur bio wali teacher jo chupe huye the, andhere mein hi piche se hamla bol diya dono baap bete par ..... ab yun ki karan naik se leke mini tak sabhi had se zyada nafrat karte the AVR group se... aur usse bhi zyada iss baat par bhi khunnas hai ki ranjan unke jaani dusman atharva ka best friend hai... isliye sab ne milke ranjan aur uske pita ko jaan se maar diya...
Faida ek to AVR group tut gaya isi ke sath, dusra faida Atharva ka jo haal hai ye jag jahir hai
scene khatam

 

[Naina]

Socho yadi unhone maara hai milkar toh kyun..?? Kya karne waala tha ranjan aisa..jo usko maarna pad gaya

waise is story thread abhi teen teen thriller story likhne wale Writers hai harshit1890 Moon Light SANJU ( V. R. ), is story ko read kar rahe hai..
shayad ye teeno is murder mystery ko solve kar dein

 

[Sasha!]

Ye bhi thik hai

Woww.. Never expected this type of connection with the story..thanx bhai

Deta hu naa kuch der me fir

Usko gali do... Tab wo likhega

Itna kharab toh mujhe likhte samay nahi laga tha..jitna ab reviews padhkar lag rha hai


Waqt ko waqt do..sab thik ho jaata hai.. Jaise ki present time me atharva hai..

Be careful what you wish for... And wish granted...

Bas bhai aise comment padh ke toh active hoon..warna mere time ke siway ek do ko chhodkar sab apni life me busy ho chuke hai...

Bhai baaki jabda bahut dard hai aise chillane me 2-3 din tak

Mujhse regular toh koyi hai hee nahi

Socho yadi unhone maara hai milkar toh kyun..?? Kya karne waala tha ranjan aisa..jo usko maarna pad gaya

Itni mehnat review dene me
Gazab


Thanx Sasha! is username ka kya matlab...

Abhi kya... Abhi aage dekho

Depth atmakami me hai bas aakhiri tak jhel lo...



Agree...

Atyachar masoom logo pe hee kiya jaata hai ab kuch bhi bura hoga ishtory me...blame sirf ek vyakti ko karenge...




Nishana chook gaya..

Sahi kaha bhai

A to Z sabhi readers badhiya guess kar rahe the
.koyi bol rha tha sanjana, ab ranjan sath hogi to koyi ranjan ke quiz team me participate karne ko lekar bahut khush ho raha... Yaha mujhe mast mauka dikha Readers log ko shock dene ka waise ek hisab se dekha jaaye toh ranjan ke maut ke pichhe readers log hee jimmedar hai..main nahi main to sirf ek madhyam hoon

Kabhi kabhi to aisa lagta hai ki mere update ka new version hai aapke reviews aur ye lines mere dimag me kyun nahi aayi

Its truth

Bhai... Padhte raho..sampurn tripti hai aage ke updates me...

The Ron wali me nahi pelaya tha
Anyway..sahi kaha... next story me main hero ka dost rahega hee nahi

Bas wahi feel karane ke liye wo scene itn bada likha..taaki dimag ka frustration ache se readers log samajh sake.. Taaki aage abhi jo hoga.... Wo

Sab pata chalega bidu... Mahol ko thoda aur bigadne toh do...

Noice mam

Dont you get it...?? Everything is bit different about this story justwait for few more updates..

Mind ke through time travel aur zinda hona ye Arman ke paas hai... Atharva ke paas ye shaktiya nahi hai




Welcome to goa, Singham

Mujhe to pahle se shaq tha

Multiquote me aisa hota hai... Wo bhi kayi din ka ek sath pe karne pe... Mere post kam ho jaate hai... Lekin ek jamane me mere post sabse jyada the

kayi logo ko reply dena shayad bhool gaya hounga ya fir quote krte samay delete ho gaya hoga...uske liye sorry baki... Thank you everyone ​

Hello Gyan... Glad you replied... Mujhe spanish sikhne ka keedha chadha tha... La_Mujer ka matlab hai The Woman

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

to wish puri kariye wo bhi jald se jald
Ab Waqt aa gaya hai atharva ke andar ke Haivaan jagane ka...
Maut ka tandav har update pe hona chahiye

dekhiye scene kuch tarah se create huyi ho ...
Jafar ko uske khabri se pata chal gaya ki kuch nahi balki bahot kuch hai Sanjana aur ranjan ke darmiyan
Ab apni saali Sanjana ko lekar over possessiveness rakhne wala Karan naik tak ye khabar Jafar ne pahuchane mein der na ki....ye Khabar sun gusse mein aag babula karan naik ne is baat ko lekar apni biwi Sunayana ko khadi khoti suna diya ho.... jisse Sunayana bhi gusse mein pagal si ho gayi ho ki us ranjan ki ye himmat
yahin pe ek aur important baat, dusman ka dusman dost hota hai... aur ye batane ki jarurat nahi ki madhu, mini, bio wali teacher kis kadar nafrat kare AVR group se...
Isse pehle karan naik koi kadam uthata, chalak lomdi Jafar ne ushe roka aur sabhi kirdaaro ke bich ek meeting fix ki .. Jafar ki hazri mein karan naik, Sunayana, mini, madhu aur bio wali lalchi aurat matlab wo teacher... insab ne milke ek khatarnak planning ki ho... planning AVR group ko todne ki... aur shikar hoga ranjan...
planning ko anjaam dene ke liye ye us raat ranjan ke dhave mein gaye.. phir backup planning ke tahat Jafar, mini, madhu aur bio wali teacher ko waha kahi andhere mein chupe rehne ko kah kar Sunayana aur karan naik samne se ranjan aur uske pita se mile aur dhamki dene lag gaye ki ranjan ko dur rahna chahiye Sanjana se... ab dono baap beta thehre garam dimag wale... dono ne unki baatein sunne ke bajaye ulta tu tu main main karne lag gaye Sunayana aur karan ke sath.... baat hatha payi tak pahunch gayi.... (gaur talab baat ye hai ki ye baat karan naik & team jaante the ki ye dono baap bete aisa hi kuch karenge).... ab backup planning aur original planning ki tahat kisi ninja ki tarah Jafar, mini, madhu aur bio wali teacher jo chupe huye the, andhere mein hi piche se hamla bol diya dono baap bete par ..... ab yun ki karan naik se leke mini tak sabhi had se zyada nafrat karte the AVR group se... aur usse bhi zyada iss baat par bhi khunnas hai ki ranjan unke jaani dusman atharva ka best friend hai... isliye sab ne milke ranjan aur uske pita ko jaan se maar diya...
Faida ek to AVR group tut gaya isi ke sath, dusra faida Atharva ka jo haal hai ye jag jahir hai
scene khatam

वाह ! वाह ! क्या बात है । ग्रेट थियूरी ।
लेकिन एक बात याद रखियेगा इस बेचारे रंजन के मौत की उत्तरदाई आप ही हैं । ये ज्ञानी भाई ने अभी कुछ देर पहले कहा था ।

 

[Naina]

वाह ! वाह ! क्या बात है । ग्रेट थियूरी ।
लेकिन एक बात याद रखियेगा इस बेचारे रंजन के मौत की उत्तरदाई आप ही हैं । ये ज्ञानी भाई ने अभी कुछ देर पहले कहा था ।

ju ye nahi dekh pa rahe hai kya ki
ranjan aur khas kar uske pita kaise logo sath ladayi jhagda karta phirta tha... jaane kitne dusman honge.. unme se kisi ne maar diya hoga dono ko.... Ya phir wo dhava ki jagah.. us jagah par kisiki nazar hai shayad ab ye dono nahi rahe to wo jagah bhi lawarish... phir uspe kabza...
kya reader banenge aap... harshit1890 sahab ki thriller stories ko yun hi upor upor se padhte honge, isliye chupi huyi kadi ko, mystery ko dhund nahi pa rahe hai aur ulta mujh pe dosh jhad rahe hai

A to Z sabhi readers badhiya guess kar rahe the
.koyi bol rha tha sanjana, ab ranjan sath hogi to koyi ranjan ke quiz team me participate karne ko lekar bahut khush ho raha... Yaha mujhe mast mauka dikha Readers log ko shock dene ka

Point to be noted
Yug Purush saheb ne ranjan naam ke kirdaar ka kissa khatam isliye kiya story se hi kyunki readers ko shock dena chahte the
to ranjan ke sath jo hua uske liye jimmedar sirf aur sirf gyani sir hai

waise ek hisab se dekha jaaye toh ranjan ke maut ke pichhe readers log hee jimmedar hai..main nahi main to sirf ek madhyam hoon

Aur dekh liyo sabhi.. Yug Purush saheb to sabhi readers pe ilzaam lagane ke firak mein hai taaki khud ko masoom writer sabit kar sake

 

[Naina]

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[Moon Light]

waise is story thread abhi teen teen thriller story likhne wale Writers hai harshit1890 Moon Light SANJU ( V. R. ), is story ko read kar rahe hai..
shayad ye teeno is murder mystery ko solve kar dein

मर्डर मिस्ट्री उसकी पर्सनल मैटर की भी हो सकती है
क्योंकि एक दिन पहले ही तो पता लगा था किसी जमीन की रजिस्ट्री थी.... क्या था... ऐसा ही कुछ था जमीन से जुड़ा
वंही तो गए थे दोनों...!!

 

[The_Punisher]

मर्डर मिस्ट्री उसकी पर्सनल मैटर की भी हो सकती है
क्योंकि एक दिन पहले ही तो पता लगा था किसी जमीन की रजिस्ट्री थी.... क्या था... ऐसा ही कुछ था जमीन से जुड़ा
वंही तो गए थे दोनों...!!

Agree
Jameen ka hi mamla lag raha hai

 

[Yug Purush]

Update-70​

“it doesn’t fucking matter, Mini… because one day we are all gonna fucking die… No one is gonna remember this shitty quiz and those shitty people, who participated in it...”

Ye sunkar Mini ke muh se aage ek shabd nahi nikla , wo kuch aur bhi bolna chahti thi par mere last line ke baad uska muh fata ka fata rah gaya tha…


Is ghatna ne mujhe kya, mere school tak ko puri tarah hila diya tha… khulam khulla bhale hee koyi iski charcha nahi kar raha tha lekin sabke jehan me aaj Ranjan hee tha. Finally, Ranjan ko wo mil hee gaya jo wo chahta tha... Wo school me famous ho chuka tha aur sabke dil me bhi tha. Par Ranjan ke kaaran Ek ajeeb sa matam pure school me chhaya hua tha… aaj maine school me kisi ko haste hue nahi dekha… koyi kisi se hasi-mazak tak nahi kar raha tha… jiska jo kaam tha sabhi apne usi kaam me shaanti se lage hue the… teacher bina mann ke padhaye jaa rahe the aur students bina mann ke padhe jaa rahe the… aaj annual day competition ki sari practice radd kar di gayi thi ya fir koyi gaya hee nahi… sports waale bhi thandaye hue the... Hume school ke andar teen -teen ground tha,lekin waha aaj ek parinda tak tha... Shayad wo bhi shok mana rahe the..fir coach aur players toh bahut door ki baat hai... aaj koyi kahi bhi nahi gaya… pata nahi teacher iske bare me kuch baat kyun nahi kar rahe the…??? shayad wo mahol ko aur bigadna nahi chaahte the... Yaa fir Saxsena ji ne sakht aadesh diye honge unko...yaa fir Saxsena ji ko students ke parents ne.... I do not fucking know...


Ranjan ki maut ke baad School me tarah-tarah ki conspiracy theories banne lagi aur apne aap pure school me circulate hone lagi thi. Koyi kahta ki Ranjan ke dhabe me kuch saal pahle do logo ka qatl hua tha, jisme Ranjan ke baap ka hath tha aur usi ka badla in do ko markar liya gaya hai… kuch kah rahe the ki Ranjan ke baap ka kisi bade khandan ki shadi-shuda mahila se affair tha, isliye badla lene ke liye usi khandan ke logo ne Ranjan aur uske baap ki hatya karwayi thi. Aisi aur bhi kayi conspiracy theories un dino school me circulate ho rahi thi… har din ek nayi Conspiracy Theory sunne ko milti aur ladke jee-jaan laga dete the apni pasandeeda theory ko sach saabit karne ke liye… aur is tarah Ranjan ab.... school me padhne wale har students ki zindagi ka ek aham hissa aur kissa ban chuka tha… aisa kissa jise koyi puri zindagi bhar nahi bhula sakta tha…


Log mujhse bhi puchhte ki mujhe kya lagta hai…? kisne ki hogi Ranjan aur uske baap ki hatya…? Tab mere shaq ki sui sirf aur sirf ek shaks par aakar atak jati thi…. Jise main abhi apni aankho ke saamne khada dekh raha tha… school me chalne wali sabhi consiparcy theories bekar thi , bebuniyaad jiska kaaran ye tha ki wo sabhi Ranjan ke baap ke charo oor buni gayi thi… sabka manna tha ki Ranjan ke Papa ke kaaran Ranjan ki hatya hui hai... .lekin un dino mera aisa vichar tha ki Ranjan ke kaaran Ranjan ke papa ki hatya hui, naa ki Ranjan ke papa ke kaaran, Ranjan ki. isliye meri conspiracy theory Ranjan ke papa ke charo oor nahi balki Ranjan ke charo oor buni gayi thi. Ranjan ki maut ko do din ho chuke the aur do logo ko chhodkar sabhi normal bhi ho chuke the… ab fir se hasi-majak chalu ho chuka tha, ladke corridor me khelne koodne lage the …. Kuch log beech-beech me Ranjan ki baat toh karte par as a gossip…. Unhe maja aata Ranjan ke bare me mangadhat kahaniya banane me…. Ranjan ke baare me Tarah tarah ke jhooth bolne me... Jaise ki usne ek baar School ki do chhoti -chhoti ladkiyo ko jabardasti bathroom me pakad ke chod diya tha.. Jaise ki khud Ranjan ko ek Male Teacher ne bathroom me abuse kiya tha... Jiski vajah se Ranjan ke papa farsa lekar school me ghuse the...



Par Mere shaq ki sui jispar atki hui thi, wo is waqt thik mere 12’0 clock me apni class ke bahar Madhu aur Mini se baat kar raha tha… mujhe bio class se nikalti Riya bhi dikhayi di… Riya ko dekhte hee andar hee andar mujhe jhatka laga aur main jaha tha, wahi ruk gaya. usne mujhe ek pal ke liye dekha aur fir apna chehra dusari oor karke wo bhi Jafar ke group me Madhu aur Mini ke sath shamil ho gayi… main Jafar ko ghoore ja raha tha kyunki wo kisi bat par Riya ke kandhe par hath rakh-kar jor-jor se hase jaa raha tha… ab wo sab hans rahe the. mann toh kar raha tha ki main abhi jakar jaha jafar khada hai uske thik neeche ek bada sa patthar rakh du aur fir upar aakar Jafar ko neeche sar ke bal usi patthar par fek du, taaki jab wo neeche gire toh neeche rakhe patthar ke kaaran uske sar ke kharpachche udd jaye…. Apni class ke bahar khade-khade main ek bade patthar ki talaash bhi karne laga… jo mujhe school ke gate ke bahar jo medical store thi, uske baahar dikhayi diya…. Plan simple tha… wo patthar waha se uthakar yaha neeche rakhna hai aur fir Jafar ko upar se neeche dhakka dena hai… fir iska kaam tamam… police puchhegi toh bol dunga ki mujhe chakkar aa gaya tha... isliye Jafar par gir gaya aur anjane me use neeche gira diya…



Par iske liye mujhe ek din pahle se hee 2-3 baar chakkar khakar jhooth-mut ka girne ki acting karni padegi, taaki police ke saamne sabhi mere paksh me gawahi de… haan , ye sahi rahega… ek kaam karta hu… abhi chakkar khakar yaha dusari manzil se aankh band karke neeche gir jata hu… taki kal jab Jafar ka main khoon karu toh sabko ye accident hee lage aur sabko yakin bhi ho jaaye…. Ye perfect hai, aisa hee karna chahiye. Isliye.... Maine apni aankhe band ki aur railing par hath rakhkar, aankh band kiye uspar chadhne laga...


“Atharva ye dekh…. Ek mast shayari post ki hai Mira ne …”mera kandha pakad kar mere aankh ke thik saamne mobile ki screen laate hue Ved bola aur maine apni aankhe kholi...

Ved do din me hee normal ho chukka tha, ya fir acting kar raha tha mujhe nahi pata… maine kabhi puchha bhi nahi...

“aankh me ghused de, bsdk mobile… thoda peechhe kar…”pahle ki andaaz me maine kaha, kyunki acting main bhi normal hone ki kar raha tha… andar kya hai, kisi ko kya pata.

“tu ruk main hee padh ke sunata hu…
sarak gaya jab uske rukh se parda achanak….

Gaur farmayega…..

sarak gaya jab uske rukh se parda achanak,

farishte bhi kahne lage…ki.. kash hum insaan hote…”

“batao, ladki chodne ke liye ab farishte insaan ban ja rahe hai… waaah..”

“arey BC…”jor se haste hue Ved bola “kya tippani ki hai…”

“dekh ke be…tu neeche mat gir jana.. Neeche girne ka plan mera hai.."


Ved itna jor se hasa tha ki waha mauzood sabhi logo ki najre hum dono par aa tiki thi, aur sabhi Ved ko hasta dekh bahut jor se shocked ho gaye the… unhe mano yakin nahi ho raha tha ki ye bhi ho sakta hai. unhone toh Ranjan ki maut ke baad Atharva-Ved ke udas rahne ki hee kalpana ki hogi… aur jab kisi ki kalpana ke viprit kuch hota hai toh aashcharya toh hota hee hai… jo ki un sabko ho raha tha. Hum dono toh is philosophy ko follow kar rahe the, jisme kaha jata hai ki… haazaar gaam hone ke bwjood , khush hone ki acting karo, tum sach me khush ho jayoge… baki hum dono ke andar kya tha, kisi ko kya pata…. Atharva, Ved aur Ranjan …. AVR... Ye tikdi ab toot gayi thi. Jo rah-rah kar hume katne ko daudti thi…


Ved kabhi kabhi baat karne dauran achanak se beech me bol deta ki… chal, Ranjan ke dhaba chalte hai. aur fir bolne ke baad jab use ahsaas hota ki usne kya bol diya hai toh ekdum se chup ho jata… meri haalat bhi kuch aisi thi, kal jab school ke baad main aur Ved ghar jaa rhe the toh raaste me Karan Naik hume dikha… jise dekhte hee mere muh se apne aap nikal gaya ki…


"Ved, Ranjan ko call kar aur bol ki Joshi ko lekar aaaye… warna Karan Naik bahut maarega mujhe... Usko bol ki aake bacha le, yar..."

jiske baaad Ved ne apna mobile bhi nikal liya par fir jab use realize hua ki vastvikta kya hai toh usne silently mobile seedhe apne jeb me daal liya.


Ranjan ke marne se mano hum dono ki zindagi ka ek bahut bada hissa mar gaya tha… ab Ranjan ki aadat ho chuki thi hum dono ko… main aur Ved rahte toh din bhar sath hee the, lekin baat bahut kam karte the aur tabhi karte the, jab koyi solid reason, ya koyi solid joke humare paas ho… jis din humare paas ye solid reason ya solid joke hota toh thik hai , warna school ke baad Ved aise hee sidhe ghar chala jata aur main sidhe apne bistar par.... Jaha pade-pade puri raat Ranjan ki fb profile taakta rahta… purane messeges padhte rahta aur kayi baar hiii.. hello… messege bhi bhejta is ummid me ki shayad kabhi naa kabhi udhar se koyi reply aayega… lekin wo reply ab nahi aane wala tha aur naa hee kabhi aaya…


main ye accept kar chuka tha ki Ranjan ab mar chuka hai lekin accept karne ke bawjood main accept nahi kar pa raha tha, isliye kayi baar mujhe lagta ki Ranjan ke sare messege delete kar du, use unfirend kar du, block kar du, khud ki id block kar du…lekin ye option nahi tha. khud ko is duniya se block kar du… ye bhi option nahi tha. Ranjan ke purane messeges padhna, it brings back all the memories we had together, all that fun and I still laugh while reading them and it fucking hurts.


Ek aur chiz jo mujhe hurt karti thi, wo Riya… uski maa bimar thi , hospital me admit thi… lekin Ranjan ki maut ke baad naa toh main uski maa se milne kabhi ja paya aur na hee kabhi Riya se mila… bas school me kabhi-kabhi hum dono ek dusare ke aame-saamne aa jate… wo mujhe ignore kar deti aur main use… wo pareshan thi aur use support ki jaroorat thi. Par jiski khud ki buniyaad hil gayi ho wo kya kisi dusare ki buniyad banega…. Na maine puchha aur na hee kisi ne mujhe bataya ki Riya ki maa ki haalat ab kaisi hai…. Sanjana bhi apni hee life me busy thi, usne bhi Ranjan ki maut ke baad mujhse milne ki koshish nahi ki … na koyi messege , na koyi call… wo toh khair waise bhi meri duniya se bahut pahle hee jaa chuki thi… ab toh kayi din se maine use dekha tak nahi tha. mujhe ab pata tak nahi tha ki uski zindagi me kya chal raha hai aur naa hee maine ye janne ki koshish ki… us waqt hum sab apni-apni life me pareshan the.

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