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Year ~ 2001

Aaj Ved school nahi aaya tha, isliye chhutti ke baad main akele hee school se nikla... Aur us ghar ke saamne ruka jaha aksar school se ghar laut-te waqt main un dino ruka karta tha... Maine zameen se patthar uthaya aur nishana lagakar patthar uchhal diya...

"Ved toh ek baar me maar leta hai... Mujhe teen-chaar baar patthar fekna padta hai.. Jabki 100 meter ki race me do -do baar use haraya hoon... Lagta hai Ved ka nishana mujhse jyada sahi hai."jab pahla patthar nishane par nahi laga toh zameen se dusara patthar uthate hue maine socha...

"Kya kar raha hai... Tu yaha..."

Jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me padi main jhuke jhuke hee kaanp utha ki kahi meri chori pakdi toh nahi gayi... Yadi isne pakad liya toh pakad ke bahut maarega... Isliye, Aawaz sunte hee meri nas -nas me dar is kadar baitha ki pant me hee mera moot nikal gaya.. Halka sa.... Halka sa matlab.. Do-teen boond.. Jyada nahi. Jyada bhi nikal jaata yadi school se nikalte waqt main bathroom me urine donation nahi kiya hota toh..., warna aaj toh pura pant gila hona pakka tha... Par ab kya karu....?? Isne toh pakad liya...
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"Ek kaam karta hoon... Yahi patthar sidhe iski aankh me de maarunga aur fir bhag jaunga..."sohte hue dheere -dheere dar ke aagosh me doobte hue main upar uthne laga aur jab pura khada hokar aawaz maarne waale ko dekha toh.....

"Tu... Kya kar raha hai... Yaha..."usne fir se kaha


Saamne mere jitna hee bada ek ladka khada tha, uski dress bhi mere dress ki tarah thi... Yaani ye hoo naa ho mere school ka hee ladka hai... Par isko kabhi dekha nahi...??? Shayad section alag hoga aur alag area me rahta hoga....

"Atharva... Naam hai tera..?."mujhe ghupp shant khada dekh us ladke ne mujhse fir se sawal kiya

"Tu mujhe kaise jaanta hai...?? Kahi tune hee toh kal mera naya wala pen aur copy nahi churaya..?? Waise mera pahla shaq abhi bhi Ved par hai.."


Mere itna bolte hee wo hasne laga aur apna hath aur aage meri taraf badhate hue kaha...

"Tu topper hai class kaa.. Tujhe kaise nahi jaanunga.. Aur humari class bhi same hai, bas section alag hai... Par tu yaha kar kya raha hai..??"

"Abhi batata hoon.. Mera Matlab..... dikhata hoon.." Kahte hue maine zameen se ek aur patthar uthaya aur jor se sadak ke us paar bane cement sheet ki chhat wale ghar ki oor feka...

Abki baar patthar bada bhi tha aur mera nishana bhi sateek tha. Patthar sidhe jaakar cement ki sheet se takraya aur jordar aawaz hui... Aawaz hote hee pahle main bhaga aur fir mere peechhe -peechhe wo ladka....

"Hum bhag kyun rahe hai.."bhagte hue hee usne mujhse pucha...

"Ye bhi puchhne ki baat hai... Kya teri Mommy ne tujhe nahi bataga ye sab ki... Ki dusro ke ghar ki doorbell baja ke yaa patthar fek ke bhagna buri baat hai..?"

"Nahi.. Meri maa bahut pahle gujar chuki hai.. Jab main chhota tha. Toh kya mummy log ye sab bhi sikhati hai...??"

"Mommy Sab kuch sikhati hai... Sone se pahle pisab karne se lekar padhayi tak.. Sab kuch... Teri Mommy nahi hai naa.. Isliye tujhe nahi pata... "

"Waise mera naam Chitranjan hai... "Bhagte hue hee usne ek baar fir se apna hath meri taraf badhaya..

"Main Atharva Singh Bhattacharya" finally usse hath milate hue maine kaha " aur Chitranjan bada odd sa lagta hai.. Ranjan rakh le apna naam... Ekdum satak se muh se nikalta hai..

Okii.. "

"Okiii..."

Ye pahla mauka tha jab main Ranjan se mila tha aur baat karu last time ki toh....????

“chup.. gali-wali mat dena… mammi-papa yahi hai…”khidki kholte hee Maine dheere se Ved ko bola…

“Ranjan kaaaaa.... kisi ne.... gala..... kaat diya Kal raat….”


Aksar kayi baar hamare saamne aisi situation aati hai jab humara dimag ekdum achanak se shunya ho jaata hai, kuch pal ke liye kuch bhi sochne aur samajhne ki shakti maano khatm si ho jaati hai... Is samay mere sath bhi yahi ho raha tha... Matlab behanchod ek pal ko main samjha hee nahi ki maine kya suna... Ye Ranjan kaun hai, ye gale ka katna kya hota hai, saamne khada ladka kaun hai... Main khud kaun hoon...? Mere kaano me toh sirf chand shabd pade jinhe sunkar mujhe aisa prateet hua maano kisi ne bijli ke taar mere dono kaan me ghusa kar jordar jhatka diya ho.. Main andar hee andar upar se lekar neeche tak hil gaya.. Lekin baahar se ekdum shant aise khada tha..maano koyi murti ho.


Wo shabd sunte hee main Ved ko ektak niharne laga... bina kuch bole, bina kuch mahsoos kiye. bahut der tak main bina palak jhapkaye sirf Ved ko dekhta raha… dekh toh main Ved ko raha tha par mera dimag mujhe Ved nahi dikha raha tha aur na hee uske peechhe ka mere ghar ki boundary… meri chetna is samay shayad antheen chetnao me lupt ho gayi thi … mujhe kuch bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha… jaise hee wo shabd mere kaano me pade, mere dimag ne jaise baahri duniya se pura naata hee tod diya, kuch pal ke liye… na toh mujhe baahri duniya ka kuch dikhayi de raha tha aur na hee kuch sunayi de raha tha…. jabki kitchen me cooker ki seeti baj rahi thi, jiska abhas mujhe baad me hua….
Mujhe is samay sirf do chize mahsoor ho rahi thi… ek toh jab main saans leta aur jab saans chhodta…. Saans lene ke baad sharir ke andar kaun-kaun se ang kya-kya kaam karte hai, mujhe wo sab mahsoos ho raha tha…. mujhe sabki halki-halki aawaz sunayi de rahi thi…. Ya fir mera dimag ye imagine kar raha tha...? Main bahut der tak aise hee raha aur jab Ved ne mujhe bike me sath chalne ke liye kaha toh main boot banker uski aagya ka palan karte hue apne ghar se nikla… chalne par mere sharir ke har ek nash ke movement tak ka abhash mujhe is waqt ho raha tha…. main aise hee chalte gaya aur aise hee bina kuch bole , Ved ke peechhe uski bike par baith gaya…. Kuch door chalne ke baad meri indriya jab wapas apne-apne vazood me aane lagi tab mujhe samajh aaane laga ki Ved ne kya kaha hai aur iska kya matlab hai… aur kyun mere mobile me subah itne missed call the aur kyun Ved ke horn maarte hee mere mammi-papa achanak mere kamre me aa gaye the…. Lekin ab bhi main puri tarah se samanya avastha me nahi aa paaya tha… isliye mere dimag ke kuch taar ab bhi hile hue the…


Main shant Ved ke peechhe uski bike me dono hath baandhkar baitha hua tha kyunki mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki is situation me shaant baithne ke aalawa main kya karu…? Kya sochu…? Kya mahsoos karu…? Main bas jaldi se jaldi waha pahuchna chahta tha … kyunki aisa ho hee nahi sakta hai… aise achanak kaise kuch ho sakta hai…? Pakka daru peekar koyi normal accident ya maar-peet hui hogi thabe me aur ye chutiye duniyawale bol rahe hai ki Ranjan mar gaya. Mujhe us samay apni us baat par pakka yakin tha aur beet-te samay ke sath mera yakin aur pakka hota jata… Ved kuch bol bhi nahi raha tha, jis-se mujhe ahsaas hua ki shayad der raat tak jaagne ki vazah se ya kam sone ki vazah se mera dimag mera sath chhod diya hai aur maine galti se galat sun liya hai… mujhe ispar ab aur bhi jyada yakin ho gaya tha ki maine hee galat suna hai, isliye main roya tak nahi, aansu ki ek boond tak meri aankho se nahi giri. Ek shabd main aksar suna karta tha , Deniel … jiska perfect matlab mujhe us din samajh aaya... Kyunki main us waqt khud deniel ki condition me tha aur aaj bhi hoon... Mujhe yahi lagta hai ki aaj jab bike main Ranjan ke dhabe ke baahar khadi karunga toh khushi -khushi Ranjan apne dhabe se nikal kar humara swagat karega... Fir hum teeno milke AVR Group ke school days ko daru peete hue yaad karenge... Par sach ye nahi tha... Aur naa hee us din ki meri soch,jab main Ved ke peechhe hath baandhe bike me baitha hua tha... Jiska andaza mujhe tab hua,jab main Ranjan ke dhabe ke paas pahucha…



Waha bahut bheed thi. Is waqt waha itne log the ki un sabko control karne ke liye police ki do van khadi hui thi. Jis kaaran humne bike Ranjan ke dhabe se bahut door khadi kar di... Taaki nikalte samay koyi dikkat naa ho aur fir bike se utarkar bina ek-dusare se kuch bole… jidhar bheed jyada hote ja rahi thi us taraf chal pade… yani Ranjan ke dhabe ki taraf… kuch dhakka-mukki bhi hui, lekin mujhe kuch mahsoos nahi hua , mujhe us samay aise laga jaise doctor log chira-fadi karne se pahle dard naa ho iske liye jo dawai humari chamdi par thopte hai… bas wahi mere pure sharir me pot di gayi ho… waha itni dhakka mukki ho rahi thi lekin fir bhi mujhe kuch feel hee nahi ho raha tha.. main bas dhakke me kabhi idhar feka jata toh kabhi udhar aur fir thodi der baad dhabe ki oor badhne lagta….



Aur fir wo waqt bhi aaya... Jab finally main waha pahucha , jaha thabe ke saamne thoda dahini oor jaha sab log khana khane ke bad hath -muh dhote the… waha do log audhe pade hue the… gardan un dono ki kati hui thi bas fark itna tha ki ek ki gardan peechhe wali chamdi se halki judi hui thi aur dusare ka sirf waha dhad tha… us dhad ka sar waha se thodi door tha, jise police wale usi waqt ek safed colour ki badi si polythene me bhar rahe the… wo dono dead body khoon me sani hui thi aur sath me us zameen ke kuch hisse bhi jaha dono dead bodies padi hui thi. Chehra pahchan-ne ke liye maine apne dimag par jor dala tab meri nazar zameen me kuch spots pe jame hue khoon par padi aur waha ab goo khane wali, madarchod makkhiya bhinbhina rahi hai. Mera vash chalta toh Ranjan ka khoon chusne wali ek -ek makkhi ka gala ghot kar maar deta.

Dhabe ki chhat par aur aasman me badsurat kauuo ka jhund bhi mauzood tha jo bhosdiwale is firak me the ki kab hum log waha se jaye aur unhe unka bhojan-paani mil sake… mera vash chalta toh madarchodo ko dono hath se pakad kar pankh faad deta.... Par main waha stabdh khada yahi soch raha tha ki in dono me se Ranjan ki body kaun si hai… aur ye dusara vyakti kaun hai… jiski height wagerah sab Ranjan ki tarah hai…

“y..ye…dusara ka..kau..kaun…”main haklaya

“ek thabe ka malik hai aur dusra usi ka launda… ”waha mauzood logo me se kisi ek ne mere sawal ka jawab diya

Ye sunte hee main apne hatho se apna sir dabane laga, jor -jor se apna matha malne laga aur khud ko insane hone se bachane ke liye insanely beech-beech me apne sar ke baal ko bhi noch raha tha taki mera dimag fir se shunn na pade… use aabhas hote rahe uske wazood ka… mere wazood ka. Pahle toh un do bodies ko dekhkar main nahi jan paaya ki unme se Ranjan ki body kaun si hai aur Ranjan ke baap ki body kaun si hai, par jab maine thoda gaur se un dono bodies ko aur dekha tab pata chala ki Ranjan ki body wo thi jiska sar uske dhad se ekdum alag thodi door pada hua tha aur police walo ne abhi-abhi polythene me bhara tha aur Ranjan ke papa ka sar, gardan ki halki si chamdi ke dhad se jude rahne ke kaaran ab bhi wahi tha… par unka sar pura 360° ghuma hua tha… baki puri tarah sar kaatne ki koshish uske baap ki bhi ki gayi thi, par kisi karan vash unka sar puri tarah kata nahi tha. main aur Ved waha tab tak rahe jab tak ki unki body waha padi rahi aur fir jab ambulance me bharkar unki body ko hospital le jaya gaya toh hum dono bhi ambulance ke peechhe-peechhe hospital pahuche… Ranjan ke dhabe ke paas bheed jyada thi, par area kafi khula hua tha , isliye police aasani se bheed ko control kar le rahi thi lekin hospital me bheed ko control karne me police ko problem hone lagi...


Kyunki hospital pahuchne tak lagbhag school ke sabhi ghar me ye khabar pahuch gayi thi aur lagbhag sabhi students dheere-dheere hospital pahuch rahe the… kuch ke toh maa-baap bhi waha apne launde-laundiyo ke sath mauzood the… jinme se main bhi ek tha… mere bhi papa hospital aa gaye the… shayad mujhe lene ke liye aur baad me jab unhone mujhe ghar chalne ke liye kaha toh confirm ho gaya ki wo mujhe lene ke liye hee aaye the. Hospital ke bahar students ki itni bheed dekhkar ek pal ke liye maine socha ki…… madarchodo, tum sabki maa ka bhosda... ab yaha kya maa chudane aaye ho… jab tak zinda tha wo, betichodo kisi ne seedhe muh baat tak nahi ki us-se… tum sabki maa ka bhosda maaru, mahtarichodo…. Lawde me gaya land of white tiger... Sab bakchod log hai, is shehar me.... Yadi main kal Riya se milne gaya hota toh laut-te waqt jaroor Ranjan ke dhabe pe jaata aur shayad ye sab hota hee nahi..... Shayad......?



P.S. Interceptor chalane ke dauran jaha bhi Atharva & Ved ne Ranjan ki baat ki hai, waha sirf uske dhabe ka jikra hua hoga... Naa ki khud Ranjan ka ki... Wo jinda hai etc.etc. aur Atharva ke interceptor kharidne ki vazah bhi yahi hai kyunki wo bullet Ranjan ki fav. Thi
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Naya ranajan mil gaya..
Race lagana aur nishana lagana alag alag baat hai, bhale hi ved ka nishana aacha ho but woh atharva se tej bhag nahi sakta ,
Ranjan aur uske baap ko kon behrahmi se mara hai , aage patah chalega...
 

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Uski re entry ki kya jarurat...uski bhi aisi ki taisi kar deni chahiye wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se... kam se kam upor jake ranjan ko company dene Ki koshish karegi :D tabhi to maza aaye read karne mein :D
Nivedita ayegi Atharva ke piche :D
 

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Hospital ke bahar students ki itni bheed dekhkar ek pal ke liye maine socha ki…… madarchodo, tum sabki maa ka bhosda... ab yaha kya maa chudane aaye ho… jab tak zinda tha wo, betichodo kisi ne seedhe muh baat tak nahi ki us-se… tum sabki maa ka bhosda maaru, mahtarichodo…. Lawde me gaya land of white tiger... Sab bakchod log hai, is shehar me.... Yadi main kal Riya se milne gaya hota toh laut-te waqt jaroor Ranjan ke dhabe pe jaata aur shayad ye sab hota hee nahi..... Shayad......?


“Atharva , naha kar nashta kar le… thoda achcha feel karega…”jab main apne papa ke sath ghar pahucha toh meri maa mujhse boli… jise ansuna karke main seedhe apne room me chala gaya aur mere peechhe-peechhe Ved bhi mere kamre me aaya. Main kisi se koyi baat kiye bina seedhe apne bistar par rajayi sar se oodhkar let gaya…


Aksar life me aise moments aate hai jab hum itne frustrate ho jaate hai ki gala faad kar jor se chillane ka mann karta hai... Lekin chilla nahi sakte...is situation me Yadi chillaye toh bhi insane aur yadi naa chillaye toh bhi insane ban jayenge... Aisa moment abhi tak nahi aaya life me ..?? Koyi baat nahi... Aage aayega, Be asured. Tab us waqt bina awaz nikale chillane yaa rone ki trick bahut kaam aati hai … bina aawaz kiye gusse me andar hee andar chillana, ye main bahut 18 saal ki umra me hee sikh gaya tha, jab us din dhabe me maine, Ranjan ka kata hua sar polythene me jaate hue dekha tha... Us din Der-saber main apne ghar lauta toh sahi.. Par shayad hospital se wo Atharva nahi lauta tha..jo ki waha gaya tha.. Kuch toh tha.. Jo shayad Ranjan ke dhabe me rah gaya tha yaa fir hospital me... Par iske badle maine jo sikha wo ye ki kaise ekdum shant hokar bina jara si bhi aawaj ke andar hee andar gala faad kar chillaya jaata hai... Taaki aas-paas ke logo ko zara sa bhi aabhas naa ho ki.. Wo tumhe shant hee samjhenge lekin unhe iska tumhare andar kabhi naa thamne waale toofan ka zara bhi andaza nahi hoga. Lekin chillana toh padega hee,bhale hee silently... Taaki mere dimag ki nashe gusse se fat naa jaaye ya fir gusse me main khud apna chehra naa noch daalu... Naakhun bhi nahi kata 7-8 dino se Riya Rose ke chakkar me...


Isliye rajayi oddhkar maine apna muh thoda sa khola, taaki saans le saku.. Kyunki naak se saans lene me mujhe ghutan ho rahi thi aur jabdo par apni puri taqat lagakar bina kisi aawaz ke chillaya , jisse kuch hee seconds me mera jabda dard karne laga aur jab main iske baad bhi nahi ruka toh laga ki mera jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega… par is dauran mere mu se ek awaz tak nahi nikli lekin jab main silently chilla raha tha toh mera pura sharir vibrate karne laga tha…. Mujhe gusse se kaanpta dekh Ved ne kayi baar mera nam pukara jiska maine jawab bhi diya lekin Ved ko shayad meri aawaz sunayi nahi di thi ki maine silently bina kisi aawaz ke Ved ko aawaz di thi…. Isliye mujhe nahi pata ki Ved waha mere kamre me kab tak raha , kab tak main jaagtaa raha , kab main so gaya aur kab raat hui…. Kab meri neend khuli , ab jab neend khul gayi hai toh abhi time kya hai, din hai ya raat… dopahar hai ya sham… jo hua wo sach me hua ya ek sapna tha. abhi main sapne me hee hu ya haqiqaat me ? kyunki abhi room ki puri lights off thi , khidkiya bhi band thi aur mera dimag bhi sahi se kaam nahi kar raha tha… isliye andaz lagana mushqil ho raha tha…… ki... Kya hua..? Aur ab aage kya hone wala hai...?


In sabhi sawalo ke jawab ke liye Maine bistar par andhere me hee hath idhar-udhar mara…. Par mujhe mera wo astra nahi mila jo mujhe is uljhan se ek second me baahar nikal sakta tha.. main andajan andhere me apne itne saal ka experience ka upyog karte hue apne room ke gate ko khola , jisse bahar jal rahe bulb ki kuch roshani mere room ke andar aayi aur halka-halka mujhe mere room ke andar rakhi hui chije dikhne lagi… jisme mujhe mera mobile charge par laga hua dikhayi diya… main jaldi se apne mobile ki oor lapka aur charger se nikal kar confirm karne laga ki sach kya hai… maine call details check kiya, jo missed call pahle the, wo ab bhi the… fir jaise hee fb khola…. Toh Mujhe samajh aa gaya ki ye sab sach hai aur main ek baar fir apne jabde par pura jor lagakar silently chillaya….. Lekin abki baar jyada der tak nahi chilla paya kyunki mera jabda is baar turant dard dene laga aur mere naa chaahte hue bhi...apne aap automatically mera muh band hone laga... Jiske baad main fir se so gaya....



Dobara jab main sokar utha toh fir mujhe wahi doubt hua ki kya sach hai aur kya jhooth..?? Kya jo ghata..wo wakayi me ghata yaa fir mahaj mera ek bhram tha... Ye check marne ke liye maine fir se mobile me missed calls check ki...


Madarchod... Is baar bhi Sab sach tha. Mujhe andaza ho chala tha ki yadi main aise hee apne room me raha toh har aadhe ghante me meri neend khulegi aur har baar main aise hee kya sach hai aur kya jhooth waale sawal khud se karunga aur finally pagal ho jaunga.. Isliye maine next day school jaane ka socha aur subah 6 baje hee School jaane ke liye taiyar ho gaya.. Taiyar kya hua, sirf school dress tang liya apne body pe.. Mujhe ab bhi thodi thodi ummid thi ki school jaunga toh shayad mujhe Ranjan waha bio class ke saamne biology ki book liye khada hua dikhe aur mujhe dekhte hee apne papa ko quiz competition me invite krne ki baat kare...


Isliye insane se sane hone ke liye main Next day School gaya... Aaj lagbhag aadha school gayab tha.. Ya fir us se bhi jyada. School me aisa mahol tha jaise Ranjan aur uske papa ki body kal nahi balki aaj abhi mili ho… aur waha dhabe me nahi balki school ke andar mili ho… prayer bhi cancel kar diya gaya tha shayad, mujhe thik se yaad nahi .. main school late pahucha tha… akele… Ved mujhe lene aaya tha par maine mana kar diya tha par fir pata nahi mujhe kya hua main school aa gaya tha…


Jab main school me ghusa , jab main seedhiyo se upar chadh raha tha aur jab seedhiyo se chadhkar corridor me chal raha tha toh jo mujhe dekhte, wo mujhe hee dekhte rahte aur aapas me kuch kaana-fusi karne lagte… jiska karan shayad ye tha ki Ranjan ka ekmatra ya kahu ki domatra dost.. main aur Ved hee the aur jaisa ki kisi ke marne par log us marne wale shaks ke gharwalo ko attention dete hai, waisi attention mujhe mil rahi thi… waha corridor me mauzood har ek shaks mujhe dekh raha tha, ghoor raha tha… mujhe dekhkar aapas me baat kar rahe the… jaise jab koyi mar jata hai toh log uske gharwalo ke bare me baat karte hai. aur main….? Mera sar toh ekdum straight tha lekin meri nazre zameen par tirachhi pad rahi thi aur main neeche dekhte hue aage badh raha tha. Wo toh is school me itne saal ke experience ke karan bina saamne dekhe hue bhi main ekdum perfect apne class ki taraf badha jaa raha tha, warna kayi baar girta.… mujhe pura ek-ek minor details ka anubhav tha ki kaha se kaise aur kitna mudna hai… kaha ladke khade rahte hai, kaha ladkiya group banakar hihihi karti hai.. isliye main bina saamne dekhe bina kisi se takraye apne class me pahucha….


Ved was always the strong one, isliye wo puri tarah control me tha… main chupchap apni class me aakar sabse peechhe baith gaya aur apne desk par apne hatho se apna sar pakad kar baitha raha… main kuch soch nahi raha tha.. kuch bhi nahi. Main bas aise hee shant baitha raha… main kabhi zameen se deewar par chadnewali cheetiyo ko dekhta rahta to toh kuch der neeche pade kisi ke napkin ko… kuch der white board ki taraf maine ghoora toh kuch der ke liye gate se jo suryadev ki kirane class ke andar aa rahi thi un kirno ko…. Mera dimag shayad un kirno me fir se shunya hone laga tha…


“Atharva , do pen rakha hai kya…”kisi ne kinare se mujhe aawaz di…

“madarchod… tere ko pen chahiye…. Main du tere ko pen… yahi khade khadr maa chodunga teri..."Ved ne us ladke se kaha aur jor se dhakka diya, jiske baad wo ladka peechhe bench se jaa takraya…. Shayad... Jiski aawaz mere kaano me padi


Ab class me kisi aur ke paas koyi topic hee nahi tha siway Ranjan ke… sab usi par kana-fusi kiye ja rahe the… kuch dheere-dheere apne tak hee simit rakh rahe the toh kuch ki aawaz mere kaano me pad rahi thi… isi beech ek ne jab Ranjan ka naam liya toh mere saamne Ranjan se judi kayi chize ubhar kar saamne lagi….

“Bhatti, we are like the white tigers and Rewa is the land of white tigers… You, Ved and I … we are bonded together… we cant be happy on another place… hum chaahe jaha bhi rah le.. Ek din khushiyo ki talaash me wapas yaha aana hee padega”

“Bhatti, Mere bhai... apna life ka funda ekdum clear hai… wo saamne bullet dekh raha hai… INTERCEPTOR… mujhe bhi waisi hee ek chahiye, khud ka ek medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki…. Life set hai apni…. Fir tum dono mere medical store me condoms kharidne aana.. Josh wali mehangi mehangi goli bhi free me dunga tum dono ko... .”

“Sorry Bhatti, yar... Main Rewa chhodkar nahi jaa sakta, kyunki yaha ki mitti rag-rag me basi hai mere… 12th ke baad jaroor pharma complete karne mujhe jaana pade , par main laut kar yahi aaunga… kyunki rewa ke aalawa kahi aur survive nahi kar sakta….”

“Bhatti, yadi main quiz team me select ho gaya toh… mere papa ko bhi bulaunga competition me.... unhe kitna proud feel hoga… mujhe yaha pure school ke saamne baitha dekh… maa kasam maja aa jayega… thank you bhai, iske liye…. Aur wo kya moment hoga jab hum jeetenge toh… wo taaliyo ki gadgadahat… jo gunjegi pure hall me… wooohoooo…”

“Atharva, Life is too short to be Mad, Sad and fad......…”


“Atharva….”kisi ne mera naam pukar kar mujhe hilaya.. Aur mujhe laga shayad Ranjan wapas aa gaya hai... jiske turant baad main apne daye-baye dekhne lagaa… lekin waha koyi nahi tha…

lekin kisi ne toh mera naam abhi liyaa tha aur mujhe pakad kar hilaayaa bhi thaa… shaayad mujhse hee galti ho gayi ho… isliye main teen-char baar aur apne daye baye dekhne laga….


“Atharva….”abki baar jab kisi ne mera naam liya toh maine turant sound wave ko follow kiya aur follow kiya… jiske karan maine apne thik saamne dekha , Mini mere saamne khadi thi… aur use main apne daye-baye dhoondh rahaa tha… par is dauran mujhe saamne khadi Mini kyun nahi dikhi... Kya main andha ho raha hoon...?

“Atharva….?”jab Mini ko saamne dekhkar bhi maine kuch nahi bola toh wo mera naam ek aur baar pukari… jiske baad me main fir kuch nahi bola

“kaam bata…”jab maine chuppi barkaarar rakhi toh Ved peechhe se puchha…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kal call kiya tha aur unhi ke jariye mujhe pata chala ki Ranjan ke sath kya hua hai… I’m sorry, Atharva…”

“haan chal… ab nikal…”Ved fir se mere badle bola…

Ye yadi koyi normal situation hoti toh Ved ke aisa bolne par Mini , seedhe Ved ke upar kood padti lekin aaj… wo chup rahi aur aage boli…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kaha tha kal ki.... Ranjan ki jagah mujhe step-up karna hai Quiz team me… mujhe pata hai ki tum mere favour me kabhi nahi the… isliye main tumse puchhne aayi hu, yadi tumhe koyi problem ho toh…?”

“ok..”

“kya…”

“I said ok…”

“thank you, Atharva…”

Jispar main Mini ki taraf dekha aur dekh kar bola…

“it doesn’t fucking matter, Mini… because one day we are all gonna fucking die… No one is gonna remember this shitty quiz and those shitty people who participated in it... And that's the truth... Now, ....Get the fuck out of here... Please..."



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P.S. समुन्दर का शिकारी -1: सम्राट मार्टिन कि सल्तनत....चालु करू क्या...??? लास्ट वाले से 50 % चेंज्ड है और ending भी चेंज कर दूंगा... Bada man kar rha bc fantasy story likhne ka :shy: :p: poster👇👇



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“Atharva , naha kar nashta kar le… thoda achcha feel karega…”jab main apne papa ke sath ghar pahucha toh meri maa mujhse boli… jise ansuna karke main seedhe apne room me chala gaya aur mere peechhe-peechhe Ved bhi mere kamre me aaya. Main kisi se koyi baat kiye bina seedhe apne bistar par rajayi sar se oodhkar let gaya…


Aksar life me aise moments aate hai jab hum itne frustrate ho jaate hai ki gala faad kar jor se chillane ka mann karta hai... Lekin chilla nahi sakte...is situation me Yadi chillaye toh bhi insane aur yadi naa chillaye toh bhi insane ban jayenge... Aisa moment abhi tak nahi aaya life me ..?? Koyi baat nahi... Aage aayega, Be asured. Tab us waqt bina awaz nikale chillane yaa rone ki trick bahut kaam aati hai … bina aawaz kiye gusse me andar hee andar chillana, ye main bahut 18 saal ki umra me hee sikh gaya tha, jab us din dhabe me maine, Ranjan ka kata hua sar polythene me jaate hue dekha tha... Us din Der-saber main apne ghar lauta toh sahi.. Par shayad hospital se wo Atharva nahi lauta tha..jo ki waha gaya tha.. Kuch toh tha.. Jo shayad Ranjan ke dhabe me rah gaya tha yaa fir hospital me... Par iske badle maine jo sikha wo ye ki kaise ekdum shant hokar bina jara si bhi aawaj ke andar hee andar gala faad kar chillaya jaata hai... Taaki aas-paas ke logo ko zara sa bhi aabhas naa ho ki.. Wo tumhe shant hee samjhenge lekin unhe iska tumhare andar kabhi naa thamne waale toofan ka zara bhi andaza nahi hoga. Lekin chillana toh padega hee,bhale hee silently... Taaki mere dimag ki nashe gusse se fat naa jaaye ya fir gusse me main khud apna chehra naa noch daalu... Naakhun bhi nahi kata 7-8 dino se Riya Rose ke chakkar me...


Isliye rajayi oddhkar maine apna muh thoda sa khola, taaki saans le saku.. Kyunki naak se saans lene me mujhe ghutan ho rahi thi aur jabdo par apni puri taqat lagakar bina kisi aawaz ke chillaya , jisse kuch hee seconds me mera jabda dard karne laga aur jab main iske baad bhi nahi ruka toh laga ki mera jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega… par is dauran mere mu se ek awaz tak nahi nikli lekin jab main silently chilla raha tha toh mera pura sharir vibrate karne laga tha…. Mujhe gusse se kaanpta dekh Ved ne kayi baar mera nam pukara jiska maine jawab bhi diya lekin Ved ko shayad meri aawaz sunayi nahi di thi ki maine silently bina kisi aawaz ke Ved ko aawaz di thi…. Isliye mujhe nahi pata ki Ved waha mere kamre me kab tak raha , kab tak main jaagtaa raha , kab main so gaya aur kab raat hui…. Kab meri neend khuli , ab jab neend khul gayi hai toh abhi time kya hai, din hai ya raat… dopahar hai ya sham… jo hua wo sach me hua ya ek sapna tha. abhi main sapne me hee hu ya haqiqaat me ? kyunki abhi room ki puri lights off thi , khidkiya bhi band thi aur mera dimag bhi sahi se kaam nahi kar raha tha… isliye andaz lagana mushqil ho raha tha…… ki... Kya hua..? Aur ab aage kya hone wala hai...?


In sabhi sawalo ke jawab ke liye Maine bistar par andhere me hee hath idhar-udhar mara…. Par mujhe mera wo astra nahi mila jo mujhe is uljhan se ek second me baahar nikal sakta tha.. main andajan andhere me apne itne saal ka experience ka upyog karte hue apne room ke gate ko khola , jisse bahar jal rahe bulb ki kuch roshani mere room ke andar aayi aur halka-halka mujhe mere room ke andar rakhi hui chije dikhne lagi… jisme mujhe mera mobile charge par laga hua dikhayi diya… main jaldi se apne mobile ki oor lapka aur charger se nikal kar confirm karne laga ki sach kya hai… maine call details check kiya, jo missed call pahle the, wo ab bhi the… fir jaise hee fb khola…. Toh Mujhe samajh aa gaya ki ye sab sach hai aur main ek baar fir apne jabde par pura jor lagakar silently chillaya….. Lekin abki baar jyada der tak nahi chilla paya kyunki mera jabda is baar turant dard dene laga aur mere naa chaahte hue bhi...apne aap automatically mera muh band hone laga... Jiske baad main fir se so gaya....



Dobara jab main sokar utha toh fir mujhe wahi doubt hua ki kya sach hai aur kya jhooth..?? Kya jo ghata..wo wakayi me ghata yaa fir mahaj mera ek bhram tha... Ye check marne ke liye maine fir se mobile me missed calls check ki...


Madarchod... Is baar bhi Sab sach tha. Mujhe andaza ho chala tha ki yadi main aise hee apne room me raha toh har aadhe ghante me meri neend khulegi aur har baar main aise hee kya sach hai aur kya jhooth waale sawal khud se karunga aur finally pagal ho jaunga.. Isliye maine next day school jaane ka socha aur subah 6 baje hee School jaane ke liye taiyar ho gaya.. Taiyar kya hua, sirf school dress tang liya apne body pe.. Mujhe ab bhi thodi thodi ummid thi ki school jaunga toh shayad mujhe Ranjan waha bio class ke saamne biology ki book liye khada hua dikhe aur mujhe dekhte hee apne papa ko quiz competition me invite krne ki baat kare...


Isliye insane se sane hone ke liye main Next day School gaya... Aaj lagbhag aadha school gayab tha.. Ya fir us se bhi jyada. School me aisa mahol tha jaise Ranjan aur uske papa ki body kal nahi balki aaj abhi mili ho… aur waha dhabe me nahi balki school ke andar mili ho… prayer bhi cancel kar diya gaya tha shayad, mujhe thik se yaad nahi .. main school late pahucha tha… akele… Ved mujhe lene aaya tha par maine mana kar diya tha par fir pata nahi mujhe kya hua main school aa gaya tha…


Jab main school me ghusa , jab main seedhiyo se upar chadh raha tha aur jab seedhiyo se chadhkar corridor me chal raha tha toh jo mujhe dekhte, wo mujhe hee dekhte rahte aur aapas me kuch kaana-fusi karne lagte… jiska karan shayad ye tha ki Ranjan ka ekmatra ya kahu ki domatra dost.. main aur Ved hee the aur jaisa ki kisi ke marne par log us marne wale shaks ke gharwalo ko attention dete hai, waisi attention mujhe mil rahi thi… waha corridor me mauzood har ek shaks mujhe dekh raha tha, ghoor raha tha… mujhe dekhkar aapas me baat kar rahe the… jaise jab koyi mar jata hai toh log uske gharwalo ke bare me baat karte hai. aur main….? Mera sar toh ekdum straight tha lekin meri nazre zameen par tirachhi pad rahi thi aur main neeche dekhte hue aage badh raha tha. Wo toh is school me itne saal ke experience ke karan bina saamne dekhe hue bhi main ekdum perfect apne class ki taraf badha jaa raha tha, warna kayi baar girta.… mujhe pura ek-ek minor details ka anubhav tha ki kaha se kaise aur kitna mudna hai… kaha ladke khade rahte hai, kaha ladkiya group banakar hihihi karti hai.. isliye main bina saamne dekhe bina kisi se takraye apne class me pahucha….


Ved was always the strong one, isliye wo puri tarah control me tha… main chupchap apni class me aakar sabse peechhe baith gaya aur apne desk par apne hatho se apna sar pakad kar baitha raha… main kuch soch nahi raha tha.. kuch bhi nahi. Main bas aise hee shant baitha raha… main kabhi zameen se deewar par chadnewali cheetiyo ko dekhta rahta to toh kuch der neeche pade kisi ke napkin ko… kuch der white board ki taraf maine ghoora toh kuch der ke liye gate se jo suryadev ki kirane class ke andar aa rahi thi un kirno ko…. Mera dimag shayad un kirno me fir se shunya hone laga tha…


“Atharva , do pen rakha hai kya…”kisi ne kinare se mujhe aawaz di…

“madarchod… tere ko pen chahiye…. Main du tere ko pen… yahi khade khadr maa chodunga teri..."Ved ne us ladke se kaha aur jor se dhakka diya, jiske baad wo ladka peechhe bench se jaa takraya…. Shayad... Jiski aawaz mere kaano me padi


Ab class me kisi aur ke paas koyi topic hee nahi tha siway Ranjan ke… sab usi par kana-fusi kiye ja rahe the… kuch dheere-dheere apne tak hee simit rakh rahe the toh kuch ki aawaz mere kaano me pad rahi thi… isi beech ek ne jab Ranjan ka naam liya toh mere saamne Ranjan se judi kayi chize ubhar kar saamne lagi….

“Bhatti, we are like the white tigers and Rewa is the land of white tigers… You, Ved and I … we are bonded together… we cant be happy on another place… hum chaahe jaha bhi rah le.. Ek din khushiyo ki talaash me wapas yaha aana hee padega”

“Bhatti, Mere bhai... apna life ka funda ekdum clear hai… wo saamne bullet dekh raha hai… INTERCEPTOR… mujhe bhi waisi hee ek chahiye, khud ka ek medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki…. Life set hai apni…. Fir tum dono mere medical store me condoms kharidne aana.. Josh wali mehangi mehangi goli bhi free me dunga tum dono ko... .”

“Sorry Bhatti, yar... Main Rewa chhodkar nahi jaa sakta, kyunki yaha ki mitti rag-rag me basi hai mere… 12th ke baad jaroor pharma complete karne mujhe jaana pade , par main laut kar yahi aaunga… kyunki rewa ke aalawa kahi aur survive nahi kar sakta….”

“Bhatti, yadi main quiz team me select ho gaya toh… mere papa ko bhi bulaunga competition me.... unhe kitna proud feel hoga… mujhe yaha pure school ke saamne baitha dekh… maa kasam maja aa jayega… thank you bhai, iske liye…. Aur wo kya moment hoga jab hum jeetenge toh… wo taaliyo ki gadgadahat… jo gunjegi pure hall me… wooohoooo…”

“Atharva, Life is too short to be Mad, Sad and fad......…”


“Atharva….”kisi ne mera naam pukar kar mujhe hilaya.. Aur mujhe laga shayad Ranjan wapas aa gaya hai... jiske turant baad main apne daye-baye dekhne lagaa… lekin waha koyi nahi tha…

lekin kisi ne toh mera naam abhi liyaa tha aur mujhe pakad kar hilaayaa bhi thaa… shaayad mujhse hee galti ho gayi ho… isliye main teen-char baar aur apne daye baye dekhne laga….


“Atharva….”abki baar jab kisi ne mera naam liya toh maine turant sound wave ko follow kiya aur follow kiya… jiske karan maine apne thik saamne dekha , Mini mere saamne khadi thi… aur use main apne daye-baye dhoondh rahaa tha… par is dauran mujhe saamne khadi Mini kyun nahi dikhi... Kya main andha ho raha hoon...?

“Atharva….?”jab Mini ko saamne dekhkar bhi maine kuch nahi bola toh wo mera naam ek aur baar pukari… jiske baad me main fir kuch nahi bola

“kaam bata…”jab maine chuppi barkaarar rakhi toh Ved peechhe se puchha…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kal call kiya tha aur unhi ke jariye mujhe pata chala ki Ranjan ke sath kya hua hai… I’m sorry, Atharva…”

“haan chal… ab nikal…”Ved fir se mere badle bola…

Ye yadi koyi normal situation hoti toh Ved ke aisa bolne par Mini , seedhe Ved ke upar kood padti lekin aaj… wo chup rahi aur aage boli…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kaha tha kal ki.... Ranjan ki jagah mujhe step-up karna hai Quiz team me… mujhe pata hai ki tum mere favour me kabhi nahi the… isliye main tumse puchhne aayi hu, yadi tumhe koyi problem ho toh…?”

“ok..”

“kya…”

“I said ok…”

“thank you, Atharva…”

Jispar main Mini ki taraf dekha aur dekh kar bola…

“it doesn’t fucking matter, Mini… because one day we are all gonna fucking die… No one is gonna remember this shitty quiz and those shitty people who participated in it... And that's the truth... Now, ....Get the fuck out of here... Please..."



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P.S. समुन्दर का शिकारी -1: सम्राट मार्टिन कि सल्तनत....चालु करू क्या...??? लास्ट वाले से 50 % चेंज्ड है और ending भी चेंज कर दूंगा... Bada man kar rha bc fantasy story likhne ka :shy: :p: poster👇👇



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Aree bhai ye bhi koi puchne ki baat h.. Yaar chalu too karo story..
Apun too always tayar raheta h aap ki story padhnee ke liye..bas suru kar do bhai..

Apun thoda sad hogya ye update padhne ke baad ..hota h aisa life me kai baar ...jab koi karibi durr ho jata h apne se too...
Atharva ka abhi hangover period chal raha h ...
Apun samajh sakta h ...
Yaar agar Ranjan ko marna hi tha too bhai competition khatam hone ke baad hi maar dete ..
Khaire aap ne joo kiya kuch soach kar hi kiya hoga..
Ekk swal thaa apna ye flashback kitna aur lamba chalega bhai...
Aur kya ranjan ke murderer pela jayengee...
Aur apne ko aisi feeling aarahi h Atharva competition me har jayega...
Aur mini betrayed kar degi dono ko ...
Kuch bhi kaho apne ved bhai sakth launde h itni aasani se nahi tutne wale h...
Umeed h Atharva theek ho jayega..
Kul mila kar bhadiya update bhai..
Intezar rahega next update kaa..
 
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Mai kya likhun kuch samajh me nahi aa raha...
Xforum ki tumhari kahaniyon par ye mera pehla comment hai... Aur sach kahu to maine update dil tham kar darte darte padha...

Ek baar sarsari nazron se aur ekbaar dhyan se... Tum aj kal khoon kharaba jo karne par tule huye ho :redface:

Par update accha laga... Gazab flow hai tumhari writting me :applause:
are ma'am.... Reality-based + Heavy comedy + thrill +suspense +pure romance se bharpur story... totally mood refreshing...
entertainment, entertainment and entertainment... :check:
 

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Jeevan mein kayi mahatvapoorn cheeje hone ke bajaay vyakti ke jeevan mein dosti sabase mulyavaan rishta hai. agar jindagi mein dost ki kami hai, to samajh lijiye ye jivan hi santusht purn nahi hai. Bilkul fiki si ho jaye ye jindagi... har kisi ko bure ya achchhe jeevan ki ghatanaon ko saajha karane, sukhad palo ka aanand lene aur jeevan ki Memorable ghatanaon ko saajha karane ke liye ek achhe aur sachhe dost ki aavashyakata hoti hai.
Sachha dost woh hai, jise koi bhi hamesha ke liye gehrayi se pasand kar sakate hai, bharosa kar sakte hai. Dost wo jo koi nahi kar sakta wo ek dost kar dikhata hai.....
ghum ka mahol, koi dukh ho ya tragedy... in sab paristithiyo se bahar nikalne mein kisi apne se zyada ek dost zyada kargar sabit hota hai.... to kabhi prerna banke hume apni jindagi mein har muskil ko paar kar aage badhne ko encourage karta hai...... koi na hai sath tera... door hsi manjil.... par ye fikar kyun, jab ye dost sath hai tere...
Jaise ranjan tha atharva aur guru veda ke liye..... aaj wo nahi raha... chala gaya kahi door Gagan ki aurr....
jo apne dost ko Khone ka dard apne andar hi andar chupaye baitha hai ya to ved samajh sakta hai ya wo jisne kabhi ek apna koi sachha dost khoya ho...
wo samanya roop se chal phir to raha hai, school bhi gaya par uske andar jo rah reh reh kar tufan uth raha hai, ushe bas wo hi mehsoos kar pa raha hai... ek ankahin bechaini si hai jise atharva bata nahi pa raha hai... uska antar mann ye maan'ne ko ab bhi taiyar nahi ki uska dost ranjan ab nahi raha... ushe lage ki abhi ranjan aake ushe Bhatti kehke pukarega...
Jaise rah rah kar uski aahat sunayi di ho ushe... in teeno ki dosti dekh ek gana yaad aaye..

Atharva, Guru veda and Ranjan
Atharva, Guru veda and Ranjan
Khair..... kaafi dilchasp aur emotions bharpur update tha
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir :yourock: :yourock:
 
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