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समय के साथ चीजें बदलती जायेंगी । वक्त बड़े से बड़े जख्म को अपने सिने में दफ़न किए आगे बढ़ते जायेगा । रह जायेगी तो बस कुछ यादें और कुछ निशानियां ।
अथर्व की जो इमोशन है वो बिल्कुल सही है । अच्छे और भावुक लोगों की यही पहचान है । चेतन अवस्था में रहते हुए भी अचेतन अवस्था में पहुंच जाना उसके भावुकता का प्रमाण है ।
" बिना आवाज किए हुए गुस्से में अंदर ही अंदर चिल्लाना " - वो दुखी है । क्रोधित है । फ्रस्ट्रेशन का शिकार है । अपने आप पर गुस्सा आ रहा है । दिल अंदर ही अंदर रूदन कर रहा है ।

रंजन की कही पुरानी बातें रह रह कर याद आ रही है ।
और हम सभी पाठक उसके गमों को महसूस भी कर रहे हैं ।
हम सभी भी रंजन की मौत से काफी दुखी हैं ।

अथर्व के लिए चंद पंक्तियां -
मुश्किलें कितनी भी हो बस मुस्कराते रहो ,
रख के भरोसा खुद पे कदम बढ़ाते रहो ।
सफर जिंदगी में चुनौतियां तो आती रहेंगी ,
हंस के समस्याओं को गले से लगाते रहो ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत और इमोशनल अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।
 

KEKIUS MAXIMUS

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nice update ..ghar aakar atharva ko rona aa raha tha par wo akele me chupke se roya ,jab jaag gaya to usko laga ki kahi ye sab sapna to nahi par sab sach tha ..

jab koi khas ho jata hai life me to aise hota hai sabke saath ,koi sabke saamne roke apne dukh batata hai to koi akele me chupke se ..

school chala hi gaya atharva jaha ranjan ki kuch baate yaad aane lagi usko ..

ab mini competition me ranjan ki jagah le rahi hai par atharva ko isse koi farak nahi padta ..
 

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Nice Update...
अपडेट सुबह पढ़ लिया पर दिमाग एक दम शून्य में आ गया अपडेट पढ़ कर इसलिए मैं कुछ नही लिख पाई...😢😢
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अथर्व का हाल बिन पानी मछली जैसा हो गया है अभी.... उसे अब भी यकीन नही हो रहा कि ये सब सच है... कोई भी होता तो यही फील कर पाता जो अथर्व कर रहा.... अफसोस सच का सामना तो करना ही पड़ेगा.... रंजन अब इस दुनिया को इस फरेबी दुनिया को इस मतलबी दुनिया को त्याग कर छोड़ कर हमेशा के लिए स्वर्ग में रहने चला गया...😢😢😢
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मन को काबू कर पाना बहुत मुश्किल होता है ऐसे समय मे, ना चाहते हुए भी हमारा दिमाग वही सोचने को मजबूर हो जाता है... और फिर खुद को दिलाशा देने के साथ साथ आँशु स्वत्: ही आंखों से निकल आते हैं...
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अथर्व स्कूल तो जाता है पर वँहा भी उसे सब कुछ रंजन की याद ही दिला रहे...😢😢
वक़्त आगे क्यों नही ले जाता इस परिस्थिति से...
मिनी अब क्विज का हिस्सा तो है पर क्या फर्क पड़ता है अब क्विज से ?

Yug Purush राइटर जी प्ल्ज़, इस दुख बारे पल से हमे शीघ्र अतिशिघ्र निकालिये, हम इसे सहन नही कर पा रहे 😢😢
कृपा कीजिये ...
 

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“Atharva , naha kar nashta kar le… thoda achcha feel karega…”jab main apne papa ke sath ghar pahucha toh meri maa mujhse boli… jise ansuna karke main seedhe apne room me chala gaya aur mere peechhe-peechhe Ved bhi mere kamre me aaya. Main kisi se koyi baat kiye bina seedhe apne bistar par rajayi sar se oodhkar let gaya…


Aksar life me aise moments aate hai jab hum itne frustrate ho jaate hai ki gala faad kar jor se chillane ka mann karta hai... Lekin chilla nahi sakte...is situation me Yadi chillaye toh bhi insane aur yadi naa chillaye toh bhi insane ban jayenge... Aisa moment abhi tak nahi aaya life me ..?? Koyi baat nahi... Aage aayega, Be asured. Tab us waqt bina awaz nikale chillane yaa rone ki trick bahut kaam aati hai … bina aawaz kiye gusse me andar hee andar chillana, ye main bahut 18 saal ki umra me hee sikh gaya tha, jab us din dhabe me maine, Ranjan ka kata hua sar polythene me jaate hue dekha tha... Us din Der-saber main apne ghar lauta toh sahi.. Par shayad hospital se wo Atharva nahi lauta tha..jo ki waha gaya tha.. Kuch toh tha.. Jo shayad Ranjan ke dhabe me rah gaya tha yaa fir hospital me... Par iske badle maine jo sikha wo ye ki kaise ekdum shant hokar bina jara si bhi aawaj ke andar hee andar gala faad kar chillaya jaata hai... Taaki aas-paas ke logo ko zara sa bhi aabhas naa ho ki.. Wo tumhe shant hee samjhenge lekin unhe iska tumhare andar kabhi naa thamne waale toofan ka zara bhi andaza nahi hoga. Lekin chillana toh padega hee,bhale hee silently... Taaki mere dimag ki nashe gusse se fat naa jaaye ya fir gusse me main khud apna chehra naa noch daalu... Naakhun bhi nahi kata 7-8 dino se Riya Rose ke chakkar me...


Isliye rajayi oddhkar maine apna muh thoda sa khola, taaki saans le saku.. Kyunki naak se saans lene me mujhe ghutan ho rahi thi aur jabdo par apni puri taqat lagakar bina kisi aawaz ke chillaya , jisse kuch hee seconds me mera jabda dard karne laga aur jab main iske baad bhi nahi ruka toh laga ki mera jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega… par is dauran mere mu se ek awaz tak nahi nikli lekin jab main silently chilla raha tha toh mera pura sharir vibrate karne laga tha…. Mujhe gusse se kaanpta dekh Ved ne kayi baar mera nam pukara jiska maine jawab bhi diya lekin Ved ko shayad meri aawaz sunayi nahi di thi ki maine silently bina kisi aawaz ke Ved ko aawaz di thi…. Isliye mujhe nahi pata ki Ved waha mere kamre me kab tak raha , kab tak main jaagtaa raha , kab main so gaya aur kab raat hui…. Kab meri neend khuli , ab jab neend khul gayi hai toh abhi time kya hai, din hai ya raat… dopahar hai ya sham… jo hua wo sach me hua ya ek sapna tha. abhi main sapne me hee hu ya haqiqaat me ? kyunki abhi room ki puri lights off thi , khidkiya bhi band thi aur mera dimag bhi sahi se kaam nahi kar raha tha… isliye andaz lagana mushqil ho raha tha…… ki... Kya hua..? Aur ab aage kya hone wala hai...?


In sabhi sawalo ke jawab ke liye Maine bistar par andhere me hee hath idhar-udhar mara…. Par mujhe mera wo astra nahi mila jo mujhe is uljhan se ek second me baahar nikal sakta tha.. main andajan andhere me apne itne saal ka experience ka upyog karte hue apne room ke gate ko khola , jisse bahar jal rahe bulb ki kuch roshani mere room ke andar aayi aur halka-halka mujhe mere room ke andar rakhi hui chije dikhne lagi… jisme mujhe mera mobile charge par laga hua dikhayi diya… main jaldi se apne mobile ki oor lapka aur charger se nikal kar confirm karne laga ki sach kya hai… maine call details check kiya, jo missed call pahle the, wo ab bhi the… fir jaise hee fb khola…. Toh Mujhe samajh aa gaya ki ye sab sach hai aur main ek baar fir apne jabde par pura jor lagakar silently chillaya….. Lekin abki baar jyada der tak nahi chilla paya kyunki mera jabda is baar turant dard dene laga aur mere naa chaahte hue bhi...apne aap automatically mera muh band hone laga... Jiske baad main fir se so gaya....



Dobara jab main sokar utha toh fir mujhe wahi doubt hua ki kya sach hai aur kya jhooth..?? Kya jo ghata..wo wakayi me ghata yaa fir mahaj mera ek bhram tha... Ye check marne ke liye maine fir se mobile me missed calls check ki...


Madarchod... Is baar bhi Sab sach tha. Mujhe andaza ho chala tha ki yadi main aise hee apne room me raha toh har aadhe ghante me meri neend khulegi aur har baar main aise hee kya sach hai aur kya jhooth waale sawal khud se karunga aur finally pagal ho jaunga.. Isliye maine next day school jaane ka socha aur subah 6 baje hee School jaane ke liye taiyar ho gaya.. Taiyar kya hua, sirf school dress tang liya apne body pe.. Mujhe ab bhi thodi thodi ummid thi ki school jaunga toh shayad mujhe Ranjan waha bio class ke saamne biology ki book liye khada hua dikhe aur mujhe dekhte hee apne papa ko quiz competition me invite krne ki baat kare...


Isliye insane se sane hone ke liye main Next day School gaya... Aaj lagbhag aadha school gayab tha.. Ya fir us se bhi jyada. School me aisa mahol tha jaise Ranjan aur uske papa ki body kal nahi balki aaj abhi mili ho… aur waha dhabe me nahi balki school ke andar mili ho… prayer bhi cancel kar diya gaya tha shayad, mujhe thik se yaad nahi .. main school late pahucha tha… akele… Ved mujhe lene aaya tha par maine mana kar diya tha par fir pata nahi mujhe kya hua main school aa gaya tha…


Jab main school me ghusa , jab main seedhiyo se upar chadh raha tha aur jab seedhiyo se chadhkar corridor me chal raha tha toh jo mujhe dekhte, wo mujhe hee dekhte rahte aur aapas me kuch kaana-fusi karne lagte… jiska karan shayad ye tha ki Ranjan ka ekmatra ya kahu ki domatra dost.. main aur Ved hee the aur jaisa ki kisi ke marne par log us marne wale shaks ke gharwalo ko attention dete hai, waisi attention mujhe mil rahi thi… waha corridor me mauzood har ek shaks mujhe dekh raha tha, ghoor raha tha… mujhe dekhkar aapas me baat kar rahe the… jaise jab koyi mar jata hai toh log uske gharwalo ke bare me baat karte hai. aur main….? Mera sar toh ekdum straight tha lekin meri nazre zameen par tirachhi pad rahi thi aur main neeche dekhte hue aage badh raha tha. Wo toh is school me itne saal ke experience ke karan bina saamne dekhe hue bhi main ekdum perfect apne class ki taraf badha jaa raha tha, warna kayi baar girta.… mujhe pura ek-ek minor details ka anubhav tha ki kaha se kaise aur kitna mudna hai… kaha ladke khade rahte hai, kaha ladkiya group banakar hihihi karti hai.. isliye main bina saamne dekhe bina kisi se takraye apne class me pahucha….


Ved was always the strong one, isliye wo puri tarah control me tha… main chupchap apni class me aakar sabse peechhe baith gaya aur apne desk par apne hatho se apna sar pakad kar baitha raha… main kuch soch nahi raha tha.. kuch bhi nahi. Main bas aise hee shant baitha raha… main kabhi zameen se deewar par chadnewali cheetiyo ko dekhta rahta to toh kuch der neeche pade kisi ke napkin ko… kuch der white board ki taraf maine ghoora toh kuch der ke liye gate se jo suryadev ki kirane class ke andar aa rahi thi un kirno ko…. Mera dimag shayad un kirno me fir se shunya hone laga tha…


“Atharva , do pen rakha hai kya…”kisi ne kinare se mujhe aawaz di…

“madarchod… tere ko pen chahiye…. Main du tere ko pen… yahi khade khadr maa chodunga teri..."Ved ne us ladke se kaha aur jor se dhakka diya, jiske baad wo ladka peechhe bench se jaa takraya…. Shayad... Jiski aawaz mere kaano me padi


Ab class me kisi aur ke paas koyi topic hee nahi tha siway Ranjan ke… sab usi par kana-fusi kiye ja rahe the… kuch dheere-dheere apne tak hee simit rakh rahe the toh kuch ki aawaz mere kaano me pad rahi thi… isi beech ek ne jab Ranjan ka naam liya toh mere saamne Ranjan se judi kayi chize ubhar kar saamne lagi….

“Bhatti, we are like the white tigers and Rewa is the land of white tigers… You, Ved and I … we are bonded together… we cant be happy on another place… hum chaahe jaha bhi rah le.. Ek din khushiyo ki talaash me wapas yaha aana hee padega”

“Bhatti, Mere bhai... apna life ka funda ekdum clear hai… wo saamne bullet dekh raha hai… INTERCEPTOR… mujhe bhi waisi hee ek chahiye, khud ka ek medical store aur Sanjana jaisi ladki…. Life set hai apni…. Fir tum dono mere medical store me condoms kharidne aana.. Josh wali mehangi mehangi goli bhi free me dunga tum dono ko... .”

“Sorry Bhatti, yar... Main Rewa chhodkar nahi jaa sakta, kyunki yaha ki mitti rag-rag me basi hai mere… 12th ke baad jaroor pharma complete karne mujhe jaana pade , par main laut kar yahi aaunga… kyunki rewa ke aalawa kahi aur survive nahi kar sakta….”

“Bhatti, yadi main quiz team me select ho gaya toh… mere papa ko bhi bulaunga competition me.... unhe kitna proud feel hoga… mujhe yaha pure school ke saamne baitha dekh… maa kasam maja aa jayega… thank you bhai, iske liye…. Aur wo kya moment hoga jab hum jeetenge toh… wo taaliyo ki gadgadahat… jo gunjegi pure hall me… wooohoooo…”

“Atharva, Life is too short to be Mad, Sad and fad......…”


“Atharva….”kisi ne mera naam pukar kar mujhe hilaya.. Aur mujhe laga shayad Ranjan wapas aa gaya hai... jiske turant baad main apne daye-baye dekhne lagaa… lekin waha koyi nahi tha…

lekin kisi ne toh mera naam abhi liyaa tha aur mujhe pakad kar hilaayaa bhi thaa… shaayad mujhse hee galti ho gayi ho… isliye main teen-char baar aur apne daye baye dekhne laga….


“Atharva….”abki baar jab kisi ne mera naam liya toh maine turant sound wave ko follow kiya aur follow kiya… jiske karan maine apne thik saamne dekha , Mini mere saamne khadi thi… aur use main apne daye-baye dhoondh rahaa tha… par is dauran mujhe saamne khadi Mini kyun nahi dikhi... Kya main andha ho raha hoon...?

“Atharva….?”jab Mini ko saamne dekhkar bhi maine kuch nahi bola toh wo mera naam ek aur baar pukari… jiske baad me main fir kuch nahi bola

“kaam bata…”jab maine chuppi barkaarar rakhi toh Ved peechhe se puchha…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kal call kiya tha aur unhi ke jariye mujhe pata chala ki Ranjan ke sath kya hua hai… I’m sorry, Atharva…”

“haan chal… ab nikal…”Ved fir se mere badle bola…

Ye yadi koyi normal situation hoti toh Ved ke aisa bolne par Mini , seedhe Ved ke upar kood padti lekin aaj… wo chup rahi aur aage boli…

“Principal sir ne mujhe kaha tha kal ki.... Ranjan ki jagah mujhe step-up karna hai Quiz team me… mujhe pata hai ki tum mere favour me kabhi nahi the… isliye main tumse puchhne aayi hu, yadi tumhe koyi problem ho toh…?”

“ok..”

“kya…”

“I said ok…”

“thank you, Atharva…”

Jispar main Mini ki taraf dekha aur dekh kar bola…

“it doesn’t fucking matter, Mini… because one day we are all gonna fucking die… No one is gonna remember this shitty quiz and those shitty people who participated in it... And that's the truth... Now, ....Get the fuck out of here... Please..."



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P.S. समुन्दर का शिकारी -1: सम्राट मार्टिन कि सल्तनत....चालु करू क्या...??? लास्ट वाले से 50 % चेंज्ड है और ending भी चेंज कर दूंगा... Bada man kar rha bc fantasy story likhne ka :shy: :p: poster👇👇



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emotion se bharpur update yaar writer ji aapne to hame apne dost ki yaad dila di uska aur uske pariwar ka bhi kisi ne saalo pahle murder kar diya tha is update ko padkar fir se uski yaad aa gayi jise sayed hi ham kabhi bhule
 

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After Rajan's death, I don't feel like writing a review, I still want to ask the question, why? What is happening with Atharva happens to everyone, it is difficult to bear so our mind starts speculating strangely, which gives us some comfort, I am quite disturb with these two updates. Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
🖤🖤🖤
 

Yug Purush

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:shocking: ye kya likh diya be mtlb ek sath wakt jazbaat halat aur pata nahi kya

Jaan pahchan wala lag rela h bidu tu :huh:

Jan kar bura lga ki jafar ka safar age bhi jari rahega ...par usse bhi jyada khusi ye jankar hue ki vo negative role me rehega or uske sath fight bhi dekhne ko milegi

Thankx for Information bhai

Bina villain ke hero ki value km nhi ho jayegi???

ye ranjan ka kisne game bja diya?

Any guess??

kya ranjan ke baare me koi sapna dekh raha hai atharva 🤔🤔🤔.

Bure Sapne me ishtory ko ghumana ATMAKAMI me tha.. Aur jis astra ka upyog main ek baar kr leta hu dusari baar upyog nahi karta... :cool2:🤣😜



atharva game me busy ho gaya hospital me jaane ki jagah ...

Game nhi web seriee... Prison Break

Lo ji sir mundvaya nhi ki ole girne lage ..vaise apni mummy ko hi uulu bane par lag gya par ese ye pta hona chahiye ki es ullu ko Etna bda gadha esi ne bnaya

Gajab line use karte ho bhai😋😜

Sometimes it seems that my review doesn't even match your story, okay, let's see. I feel very bad now.

😁😁

" जिंदगी का सफर , है ये कैसा सफ़र ।

कोई समझा नहीं , कोई जाना नहीं ।। "

Ek aur gaana hai...

जिंदगी कैसी ये पहेली हाय...

कभी ये हँसाए, कभी ये रुलाये...

बड़े बुजुर्गो की मौत को फिर भी हम बर्दाश्त कर लेते हैं लेकिन बच्चों और जवान लड़कों की असमय मौत बर्दाश्त के बाहर हो जाती है । सबसे ज्यादा दुःख की घडी उनके लिए होती है जो अपनी संतान को इतनी कम उम्र में खो देते हैं ।

काश ! भगवान ने ऐसा नियम बनाया होता कि मां बाप से पहले संतान की मौत न हो ।

Ye ekdum sahi baat bole ho... +1

अगर ये ख्वाब नही तो फिर आखिर अथर्व के जाने से कैसे ये सब होने से रुक सकता था... ये जानने के लिए मैं उत्सुक हूँ...

Nahi bataunga :beee:

Yug Purush saheb ab jab ek kirdaar mar chuka hai to kyun na uske badle ek naya dumdaar kirdaar story pe entry ho.. Jaise ki Nischal :D

Super power wale kirdaro ka yaha kya kaam🤣

)Atharva ko hospital jaane nahi diya gyani sir ne balki ghar baith ke movie dekhne ko majbur kiya bichare ko.. jiske chalte unke chahite kirdaar Jafar mauka mile riya ki aur paas jaane ke liye..

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Flow-flow me padhne ke chakkar me maine zayada socha nahi...

Par ye kand hoga ... ye to dimaag me aaya hi nahi tha...

Aur sab readers guess kar rahe the ki ranjan quiz competition me participate karega aur uske papa bada khush honge :laugh: ekdum se kapd ho gaya..nahi?? 🤣

Jafer ko shayad rangun jail me bhejne ka woqt aa gaya jo Ranjan ke sath aishi tuchi harkat kar gaya v riya rose ko sheeshe me utaar raha hai bina pani ke

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Pura suspence toh bina padhe jaan liya..ab kahe ka right🤣🤣🤣

Apne ko aisa lag raha h bilkul same too same seen hone wala h riya aur Sanjana ke sath.

Unka bhi gala katwaoge kya bhai :eek:

Mc es jafar ne mere pure mud ki aisi ki taisi kar di kuch bhi kho yar atharva is a good gay

Jis story me mood ki aisi taisi naa ho wo fir kaisi story :p:

Shi kha ek neck dil banda hai gandhi bate bhi aise bolta hai ki jaise koi budget pesh kar rha ho tharki sala

Adbbut lines bhai :superb:

Dekhte hai ab kya mukaam aata hai sahib

Sukhe patte ko ishq hua hai bahti hawa se

Sukhe patte to murjhaye hue the hee... Hawa bhi murjha jayegi :devil: aage mujhe story to likhne do

Atharva aur sanjana ke sath kuch bhi bura nahi hona chahiye

Bas yahi dhamki padh ke ranjan ko maarna pada, warna sanjana marne wali thi... Ju r responsible for his death :angrysad:

लगता है नेविल भाई आज रूकने वाले नहीं है । कल सुबह से हम साथ साथ ही पढ़ेंगे । इसीलिए ज्ञानी भाई भी आपके पुरा पढ़ने का इंतजार कर रहे हैं । :D

Do din me khatm kr diya tha unhone :D :bow:

Bhai ki bdi popularity hai school me... Jab koi eski gand marega to ye bolega ki bhai thoda chikna kar do taki gusne me asani ho ... beshram londa

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ye lo ji 500 se hi rahis ban gya .. style se to bilgats .bejos or mark jukaarbarg ka dada lagta hai

Saal 2009 me hometown me ek school ke ladke ke liye 500 bahut hote the..jo daru, beedi nahi fukta tha.. Atleast mere liye to tha hee :ड़
Vaise kya us bavli loundiya silky Milky kilky sanjana ki tarah miss riya rose 🌹 ka to kisi ke sath chakkar nhi hai na kyo

Nazar laga diya riya rose pr bhi :sigh:

.aaj se mere liye ye story ...two girls of my life ....hogi ...ye three girl's tabhi hogi jab us jafar ka safar hamesha hamesha ke liye khatam ho jayega

इस कसेप्ट पे यदि title रखा जाये तो करंट टाइम पे title..zero girl of my life hota :p:

Kaafi dino baad aaj samay mila, or fir aapki story ho or nahi padh Pau to fir kya he matlab...........well, abhi 2 update padhe and.......It is absolutely wonderful as always........and apne hero or ved ki chemistry kuch bakchod dosto ki yaad dilati hai......

or upar se ye shayarii....... hilarious 😅



“चुदती चुत देख के , दिया गांड रोये l



दो पोन्दन के बीच में , ये लंड ना पेल जाये ll”

वेलकम, ओल्ड फ्रेंड :cheers:
Dhaanshu update bhai
Beshkimti update bhai
Julmi update bandhu
Chitchor update dost
Mantermugdh si karti update dost
Amazing update bhai
Laajwaab update dost
Parsanshniye update dost
Amulye update bhai
Fantastic update bhai
Superbb update bro
amazing update
Yeh ranjan kya sachme mara hai , sapna to nahi hai na.. agla update me patah chalega
shayad ranjan ke baare me sapna hi hona chahiye 🤔🤔🤔.
properly read kar liya karo yaar har ek pehlu ko... warna baad mein suspense mein hi ya confusion mein rah jaoge...
Maan lete hai hum readers ki USPAR HAMLA HUA THA...

Par WO jinda hai... isliye zyada tension na lo :D
Yaar ye wala update padhne ke baad aisa lag raha h jaise ankhon ke saamne puri film chal rahi h...
Ekk baar ko ye update Padhne ke baad apun blank ho gya ..sala review kya du yahi soach raha tha..
Update 67 padhne ke baad apne ko laga Ranjan ko thodi Modi injury 🤕..hogi aur vo hospital me hoga aisa apun ne soachaa tha..
Apki har story me har baar hero ka dost yaar pela jata h ..jaise shivam me Vikas ka game baja dala tha aap ne..
8th semester aur atmakhami me kya hua batane ki zarurat hi nahi h..
Apne ko aisa ku lag raha h Atharva sapna dekh raha h..aur vo aane wale 2-4 update me neend se uthh jayega..
Apne Sayed ekk post me reply dete huye kaha tha 2 kannd hone ke baad teeno dost phir milenge..
Apne ko yaad h ..
Apne ko aisi hi story pasand h jaha reader guess kar ke chalte h ki ye hoga story me ..aur ho kuch aur hi jata h..
Kamal dhamal bemisaal update ...bhai..
Agla update jaldi do ab wait nahi ho raha ..bilkul excited ho gya apun ye wala update padhne ke baad..story Bhaut rapchik chal rali h..
Intezaar rahega next update ka


As Always, Thank You Everyone and Keep It Up :cheers:
 

Kingfisher

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इस कसेप्ट पे यदि title रखा जाये तो करंट टाइम पे title..zero girl of my life hota :p:
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