Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[Jamesleon]

bhai maza agay khami
Padhkar
Amezing skil he bhai apke likhne
Ki
Bus ese hi likhte jaiye
???

 

[rgcrazyboy]

ek or update pls kuch samaj main na aaya.

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

anuj ka arth hota hai chhota bhai



main bata raha hun.. dhyan se padhne ka ... sachi ki tarah lagi... ghar ke log scaf me bhi pahchan kar lete hain .. haan burkhe ki baat alag hai

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

iska aaj vawishya khatre me kyon najar aa raha hai mujhe... aane wala update dekh lena MR. Aarav ji

kal dekhunga abhi to apun lavni aur aarav ka scene dekhing

 

[Naina]

fear se chalaki.
usko to main dekha he luga.
par aap bacha ke nikal ne ke liye nainu ke kandhe par banduk rakha kar kyu chala rahe hai.

Isme kamdev ji bhi involve hai
nat me

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

are wo nam south ki ek movie se copy mari hai ... bauni ka dusra shabd hai bhutki .. itna pasand aa ya update ... waise acha vishleshan kar lete hain aap .. aap ko to koi kahani shuru karni chahiye yahan

apun bas read karing..
story likhne ka kam tum hi sambhalo

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

ji sir kosis karunga aise hi update dene ki .. lekin sir kya story ke lineup aur build up ke liye .. kuch idhar udahr ke update dal sakta hun kya

kidhar ke update

 

[Arv313]

Bahut hi awal darje ka update diya he bhai. Jaha pehle bhag me aapne ek ma bete ke emotions dikhaye wahi sinha ji ki life ke bhi wo gumgeen lamhe humare samne le aaye jise sun kar humari bhi aankhe dab daba gayi. Wahi dusare bhag me aapne emi apasyu sinha sahab aur arav ke beech baat cheet se thodi si comedy lane ki safal koshish ki. Lekin pub me bahar aur fir ander jo hua wo bahut mast tha. Aur last me aapne ye kya kaand karwane ka socha he. Apasyu pee kar talli tha aur subah sachi use nimbu pani deti he wo bhi towel me jabki usake kapde idhar udhar faile hue the.

Waiting 4 next update

bhai ji aapnE to mere mann ki baat kah di ye last line wali ki kya apsayu raat me madira ke nashe me kahi sanchi ke sath next step tak to nhi ghum aaya.

Adbhut prashansniya update bhai ji achchha laga padkar
Waiting for the next update.

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

ha ha ha .... chalo koi na ... isi bahane pari ko to yad kar loge ... ... waise Rg to roj hi yad karta hai bus kahta nahi likh deta hai .... indirectly

arre chhota sa jhalak banata hai na re anuj .. ab ek godfather chahiye tha aur .. baat jab main godfather ki karta to log fir theory banate .. "lagta hai godfather hi hai sab ke piche"... aur mujhe is kirdar ke ore kisi ka dhyan nahi bhatkana tha ... timeline match the dono ke story ka .. aur surwat bhi ek hi jagah ki hai ... so ye story me aa gaye ... ye karan tha ...

rg pari ko na bhulne wala hai..

 

[-:AARAV143:-]

je to bawala ho gaya hai ek hi kiss me ... bhawishya khare me dalne ki tayari purjoron par hai ... taiyar rahiye babu ji

hum na bhi sambhal paye to tum to ho hi sambhal lena