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another suspense
Very nice update tha bhai geart
bohat hi acha update tha.
Beatrice ko kafi importance mil rahi hai, dekhna ye hai k ab wo zinda bach sakey gi ya nhi. Suhani ko to hum dekh hi chuke hain present mein lekin shyd abhi tak Beatrice ka zikar nahi hua. Suhani Beatrice se chhoti thi to mujy 50-50 chances lag rhe hain. varsha Beatrice k sath itni zeyada attached kese hai? is piche mujhy kuch aur reason bhi lagta hai.
clan leader jo k avinash ki bua thi us ki beti ka kya hua. I think us ka bhi abhi tak koi zikar nahi hua.
last update ko maine gor se read nahi kiya qk flashback feels boring to me. jis wajah se ankush k character ko understand nhi kar saka. ab lagta hai previous update ko dubara se read krna pare ga sirf is character ko smajhne k liye. ankush ka present mein zikar hua hai? Literally Ankush's character is making me curious. __thukra k mera pyaar, mera inteqaam dekhegi__ wala koi scene nah kiya ho ankush ne. Let's see kya hua tha
jurwa bache aur bete ki death ho gai. ye to bohat bara twist ageya. lekin mujhy lagta hai k beta bach jaye ga avinash shyd apni powers ka use kar k bcha le apne bete ko. lekin beti (urvi aur arav jurwa hain i forget) agar nahi to phir ye urvi to nahi ho sakti. as i remember urvi arav se chhoti hai.
138 babies with spirit wo abhi kahan par hain. spirit clan ko khatam karne ki koshish ki gai thi to kya wo bache survive kar sake? agar mujhy sahi se yaad hai to arav k parents bhi abhi powers ka use nhi kar rhe the k koi unhe detect nah kar le Am I right?
keep writing
waiting for the next update
Bhai update ko ekdum suspense par khatam kiya hai ab agle update ka besabri se intezar rahega
nice update
Lovely and shocking update
Nice update
Avinash's son died, then who is Aarav? Then Avinash somehow brought Aarav back to life, but how was this possible?
NICE UPDATE.
WAITING![]()
Nice n fantastic
Bhai log jaldi se login karke like kardo latest update ko barna salty bhai baad mae late update dega
Super update hai Bhai
Bohat accha kafi kuch pata chala is flashback update me. Aur yah kia mara hua baccha. Means Arav?
Very Nice Fantastic Update Bhai
Nice update
nice update
Superb update
Chlo bhai ..lagata hai urvi aur aarav aa gaye is duniya me.....lekin aate hi inki dadi ne bahut hi bura khabar sunaya.....
To agar Avinash ka beta mar chuka tha to...Aarav jinda kaise hai??
Ye mera guess ya bakchodi hai.....chuki ye sab log SOUL CLAN k hai....to inke pass koi na koi tarika hoga marte hue logo ko thik kar dena....ya aisa hi koi aur technique....
Bus bhai ab is se aage ki kahani tum hi batao...kab..kyu ...kaise???
Nice update
What a wonderful twist![]()
Har bar ki tarah superb update dia hai bhai...next update ka besabri se intejar rahega....
Slow smooth but intersting update
Lekin k words ne dimag ghuma diya
"Ladka mar gya hai "
Awesome update
Super update bro
Abhi tak avinash 1% bhi galat nazar nahi aaya agr aage kuchh misunderstanding ki wajah se ho bhi jaaye to koi fark nahi padta ........lekin ye dhakkan ankush kuchh jyda hi bol gya isko nhi pata ki samne kon h!!
Great update. The suspense is slowly unfolding.
Kayi baate clear huyi.
1. Versha Soul Clan ke Elder 2 ki beti hai aur apni clan ke liye puri tarah se dedicated hai. Weh research kar rahi thi ki Qi holder aur normal insaan se paida huye bacche bach jaye jisase jo tabahi Soul Clan wale apni sankhya badhane ke liye kar rahe thy, weh ruk jaaye.
2. Clan ki bhalayi ke liye usne na chahte huye bhi apne hi pita ke murderer Avinash se shadi kar li.
3. Ab aata hai asli bomb. Varsha ke twins huye aur ladka mara hua tha. 'The Corpse', 'The boy who was supposed to die', ab lagta hai ki yeh sab raaz khulne wale hain.
4. Urvi ke uper koi dot nahi hai, yeh samajh nahi aaya. Kya yeh wahi Urvi hai ya koi aur... lekin system ne to clearly bataya tha ki yeh Aarav ki twin sister hai... Suspense...
Suspense se bhara update
1. Idhar ye clear hua ki varsha spirit clan se hi ha or use bhi pata ha ki avinash or dusron ne milkar jinme khud varsha ke dad bhi shamil the un sab ne milkar sare clan ko khatm kar diya ha varsha ko dukh to hua but wo bhi janti thi ausa hoga wo uska ilaj dhund rahi thi but ab tak fail rahi
2. Kher idhar varsha or ankush ek dusre ko pyar karte the but avinash ke sath varsha ki ek tarah se contract marriage hui ha beatrix ir suhani bhi alag alag clan ke bachhe han jinse varsha ko bahut lagav ha or unka survise karna bhi kathin ha but present me suhani ek dam thik thak ha magar beatrix ka kuchh pata nahi ha kya wo survive kar bhi payi ya nahi but ek bat ha ankush is shadi se naraj tha khaskar avinash se to uski avinash ke prati nafrat dekhte han kya gul khilati ha mujhe lagta ha ankush to nirmal insan hi ha wo kya hi kar lega avinash ka but who dont know
3. Kher idhar ek bat ha jo avinash ke dad ha bharat unhone ek ladki ko god me uthaya hua ha or wo spirit clan se ha to mujhe lagta ha ki wo akash ki bivi sanvi hogi kyonki wo bhi spirit clan se hi thi
4. Ek bat avinash ne varsha ko clan ke records access karne ki permission de di thi but ek locker ki bat kahi thi ki use sirf arya hi access kar sakta ha uske maa bap bhi access nahi kar sakte lagta ha us locker me bahut se raj chhipe han but mujhe lagta ha use abhi tak khola nahi gaya ha use lagta ha apna arav arya hi kholega
5. Idhar last me varsha ne twins ko janm diya ek ladka or ek ladki jo ki sab jante hi ha kon ha urvi or arav but urvi to bach gayi but idhar ladka mara hua paida hua ha ab dekhte han ki ladka bachata kaise ha mujhe to lagta ha beatrix ki soul se soul binding ke dwara ladke yani arav ko bacha kiya gaya ha kyonki beatrix to waise bhi mar jati isliye arav me itni asadharan power ha
Guys ju logo ko update nahi chahiye kya...?
To khud lekh le na yahan kya kr rha he? Tere ko agr dusre wreter psnd he to un ki story he prh na yahan hmara mood kyu khrb kr rha he?Wo bnda lekh rha he ye kafi nhi he kya?
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Bht kml ka update thaab lgta he raz khulne wle he
ap aese he lekhte rho aur pgl logo ki bato pr dhyan nhi dena
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Excellent update bhai![]()
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Abhi tak to Avinash ke behaviour se aisa kuch nahi laga, jaise Versha usko villain ki tarah bata rahi thi. Usne jo bhi kiya, Clan ke liye kiya aur Elders ke decision ka palan kiya.
Uska Versha ke prati dedication, aur Qi holder bacchon ki madad karna bhi use abhi tak ek accha vyakti dikha raha hai.
Bass ek baat hai ki usne Versh ko apni Qi badhane ke liye mana kyon kiya.
Uss ek locker me kya hai jise Avinash ne Versha ko kholne se mana kiya tha.
Beatrice shayad Fire Clan se hai aur Suhani Light Clan se. To Versha keval Soul Clan ke liye hi nahi balki sab Qi user aur normal logon ke bacchon ko bachane ki koshish kar rahi hai. To keval Soul Clan ke logon ko hi yeh problem kyon aayi ki unki sankhya ghat rahi thi, aur clans ko kyon nai aayi.
Awesome update and nice story
Nice update
Awesome update bhai
No Problem![]()
Ok, get well soon.
okay broNo problem
Amazing update and nice story
kafi confusing update hai.
NICE UPDATE
Waiting for next update
Loved update and excellent story
awesome update bro
Pratiksha rahegi
Waiting for update
Waiting for update
Update please Bhai![]()
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Shi hai
Koi baat nhi h bhai aap rest kro update kl d dena besak hum wait kr lenge
Koi naa, we will wait![]()
No brother thanks u think about us before u but health more important then anything so take rest hoep u get well soon we will wait for the update no issue
कोई ना,
जब मर्जी हो तब छाप देना।
प्रतीक्षा करेंगे।
Pls take care of your health, dear bro. Story can wait. T.C. Regards.
Ohhh thand rakho bhai...
Story ka chakkar m apni health k saath pange lene ki zaroorat nhi hai...
Abhi rest karo...
Jab better feel karo to update bhi de dena pr pehle rest and proper medication...
Koi baat nahi bhai...
Take ur time
Take some rest update ka kya hai aaj nhi kal ho jayega Lekin sehat bahut zaruri hai apna khayal rakho
Intezar ker lete bhai update ka aap health par dhayan do
Mai ek Kahani dhundra hun jisme ek husband wife ek apartment me rehta hai , aur ek aadmi bhi usi apartment me rehta hai aur apartment ke log use muh nahi lagta. But ek baar wife usse ulajh jati hai but wo uske sex kar leta hai aur fir wife ko sex addict ho jati h.
Kisi ko name pata ho please tell me ?
Thanks
take your time bro we'll wait
get well soon![]()
Update Bhai kab tak do ge
Waiting for update
Nice Update. ye jo mara hua bachcha paida hua hai wo kaun hai .kya avinash usko jinda karega.
abhi tak avinash ki buri chhabi dikhai nahi di to varsha ne aarav se aisa kyu kaha ki avinash bura insan hai .
Waiting for next update brother
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Bahut jabardast update tha bhai![]()
Bhai subah uthte hi khaali pet paani piya bahut saari fir washroom jao koi bimari nahi hogi ...pet safa har rog dafa ....take care waiting for the update
प्रतीक्षा है
No issue bro health first
Aree bhai aaj kal stomach pain ko halke mein mat lo
aram karo bindas
jab sab shi hojay tab update dene ka
Awesome update and nice story
Bhai aaj to update aayega na
Le lo bhai Jitna rest Lena Ho Le Lo Mast free hokar likho damdaar likho Lekin is Itihaas ko jald se jald nipta do ...Jaanta hun Itihaas bhi Kuchh Na Kuchh samete Hue hoga...
Lekin main thoda Itihaas napasand Insan hun just kidding bhai...
Bus jaldi se theek ho jao aur updates ki jhadi laga do....
Ok boss
Waiting
12 baj gye bhai abhi bhi intazar h
Update 86 has been posted Guys!!!
