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Hahaha thankoo mujhe credit dene ke liyeExcellent fantastic bemissal shandar update
Woho kia Milan tha dono bahi behno ka ek dhol peet Rahi thi wo bhi Punjabi shalwar qameez Mai l love it
Or dosra bhagra dal raha tha
Wo bhi dono ansouo k sath
Kamal ka combination dikhaya h
In ki ye khati methi nok jhok tu trar Maza a gia
Salute kerne ko dil kerta h in ko
Lakin sab se pehle haq to ap ka h nain bahi Jo ese cherecter Create kia h is liye thora sa salute ap ko bhi bnta h kahi esa na ho ap dil chota or kuch or bra na kr jao
To Mai kaha tha ha comments pass kr raha tha k sia or som badhiya se bike nikale kia bike h Yar to bike nikal k full to dashing bn k makan dekhne pohnch gay Jo Mishra chicha ne dia tha
Lakin mane is orat ka lahja theek na lagy h ewain phiki si muskan dene ka MATLAB 12:55 pe bta dena mujhe
Ha to sia ko 3 numono ki yad away h jis Mai apun bhi shamil howy h wese Mai khud ki tareef to nahi kerta ,pr kabhi Kisi ko pta na ho to bta do 3 idiots Mai hm bhi hain,wo bhi kuch km na hain yahoooo
Oh sorry Mai bhi kuch ziyada overreact kr jata ho
Ha to akhir sia or som nukad wali chay ki dukan pe pohnch gay kia Hollywood k biker ki trha helmet utara h dono ne
Wese som ko kese pta k sia k 3no pagal yaha nahi h
Or ye kia kand kr dia anjane Mai hi I think k viyas pit na jay som se ye to dekhne Wala sacne create kiy ho babua
To kia Mai ab kl tk ka intizaar Kro mujhe se na ho ga laly ittu sa Mera dil h ab to kuch acha na lage
... Baki uss aurat ka fika reaction se 2-4 update taiyar honge ... Isliye 12:55 jane dijiye aur jab wo aayega tab samjh lijiyega... Baki to abhi update aa raha hai... So dekh lijiyega kya hua... Koi badi deal hai kya... Oh haan kafi cute comment tha.... Shandaar .. padh kar maza type aa gaya
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Thankooo soo much abhi bhai
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Hahahaha ... Ohhh I seee ... Koi nahi abhi to free ho gaye na.... Main to firki na le raha tha bus fikrmand tha... Aap ko dekh kar achha laga...
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Glati se ho gaya
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Itna darna bhi sahi nhi hai Nainu bhaya se
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Areeee wo code delete ho ngayj abhi bhai aapnne to gajab hi samikha kar diye ... King bhai kahun ghabra na jaye
Thankoo so much king bro
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Net bahut hi slow hai Krish bhai warna aadha ghanta pahle update aa jata.. bus 2 minute dijiye.. agle page par update
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Action reaction rulers hmmm science padai jaa rahi haiUpdate:-37
Sia call disconnect kar ne ke baad samay dekhi. Dil me umang poore jore par. Khushi jo sambhale na sambhle. Phone kar ke Som se aane ka waqt puchhi. Lagbhag 1 se dedh ghantey. Samay kaate na kate. Dhire-dhire intzar me bitaye waqt ke sath kab Sia ki aankh lag gayi usse pata hi nahi chala.
Nind jab khuli ghadi me subah ke 8 baje the. Sia chaun kar jagi. Apne sar par ek haat marti… "Yaar ye nind kahan se aa gayi"… Phone uthayi call lagayi… "Kahan hai"
Som:- Intzar me... Fatafat ready ho kar call back kar..
Sia:- Yesss Boss !! Bus 10 minute Som main fatak se ready ho kar aayi... Tab tak mat aana..
Som:- Hahaha... Haan main janta hun. Ab ja na...
Sia jhatpat taiyar ho kar cottage ke bahar aayi. Som ko thik 5 minute baad entry lene ka bol kar, video conferencing ke jariye sabko jod dee aur mobile ko adjust kar ke rakh dee...
5'07 ke hight ki beautiful attrective girl in patiyala suit. Aankhon me shandar chashma aur aage tangi thi badi thi dhol. 6'1 fit hight ka jataon wala munda in laal patani kurta salwar. Aankhon me chashma aur bhroom bhroom karta apni nayi sexy bike Indian Scout se chala aa raha. Jaise hi pahle jhalak Som ki mili...
"Dhann.. trannn trannn, dhann dhannn" ke punjabi dhol sound beat bajne lage. Sia jhum kar punjabi dhol bajane lagi. Som bike laga kar bhangda karte aage badha... Wo dhol bajati rahi Som bhangda karta raha... Fir to jo hi hooting pahle Sia ne kee. Fir to baad me jo hi hooting Som ne kiya. Dhol bajte rahe hooting hota raha bhangda karte rahe aur ek dusre ko dekh kar aankhon me aanshu aur mujh par pyari si hansi ke sath apni khushi ko jatate rahe...
Uss campus ke sare naukar ikattha the. Kuchh prani Nirbhaya ke ghar ke, holidays me nanihal gaye the. Subah-subah wo bhi pahunche the. Bichare-bichari thik se settle bhi nahi huye aur milne ki itni gram'joshi sun kar bungalow se bahar aa kar dekhne lage. Aadhe ghante ye dono apne milne ki khushi ka izhar karte rahe aur anth me dhol ka closing beat baja issi ke sath Sia apne mobile ko collect karti Som ke kandhe par hath dalti... "Hmmmm ladka bada ho gaya hai. Pursom... Kaisa hai"..
Som, Sia ke naak pakad kar hilate... "Bhukh lagi hai, khuch pakana aaya ki nahi"..
Sia:- Kya khayega bol. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhega kisi dildar dost se pala para tha…
Som:- Bade bhai ko tu tadak.. laga dun tujhe ek chatakkkk..
Sia:- Aay haay chhode tuk bandi... Kis se sikh kar aa raha...
Dono baat karte cottage ke ander pahunch gaye. Sia dhol nikal kar ek kinare rakhti, Som ke gale lag kar poora bhinchti... "Som bahut galat kiya tune maa, pitaji aur Diksha ke sath. Tu yahin tha na fir kyon nahi unse mila. Itna kathor dil kyun ho gaya"…
Som:- Kabhi-kabhi chijon ko samjhne ke liye space dena padta hai Sia. Diksha, Mishrayan aur Mishra ji ke pass ek lambe arse tak nahi gayi. Beti hai wo uski Sia. Dono (Mishra dampatti) bole bhale na, lekin tu samjh rahi hai na...
Sia, Som se alag hoti ek chamet rakh kar deti... "Faltu ke bahane mere pass mat bana. Maa, pitaji ke pass Diksha thi isliye distrub nahi kiya, jhoota kahin ka. Aur jhoote ka emotion to dekho..."
Som, hasnte huye Sia ke gale me apna hath fansa kar uske gardan ko dabocha... "Bus kar nani, kitna baat pakdegi. Ab to aa gaya na. Achha ye bata madam ko tumhe kya favour kar diya tha"..
Sia:- Tune apni baat batayi jo main apni baat bataun...
Som:- Ziddi kahin ki...
Sia:- Nautanki kahin ka... Chal ab bata ki Diksha se dur kyon tha. Maa, Pitaji ne kya bigada tha...
Som:- 4 Sal main US me tha...
Sia:- Jhutha kahin ka... Kitna jhuth bolega... Irritate mat kar.…
Som:- Achha iss baar sach-sach batata hun. Main desh aur duniya braman par tha. Main tere graduation ceremony me bhi aaya tha...
Sia:- Aaya aur mila bhi nahi…
Som:- Nahi mila kyonki main 1, 2 minute ka milna nahi chahta tha. Main tum dono ko ek perfect gape dena chahta tha taki tum akele bhi kuchh ho. Humari zindgi ek dusre ke bina bhi hai... Dur rah kar bhi hum utne hi attach rah sakte the, bus iss wajah se ye gape liya tha...
Sia:- Samajh me aa rahi hai teri baten lekin ab bhi satisfaction nahi de raha...
Som:- Bus karegi aur batayegi madam ko kya favour kee thi...
Sia:- Mujhe aa rahi hai nind. Jaldi se naha dho kar aa. Kuchh khate hain fir mast ek nind aur uska baad aaram se baith kar baaten karenge..
Som:- Nahi batayi na tumne madam ko kya favour kiya tha?
Sia:- Two of my Sweeto juniors ne mujh se kaha, Sia didi, Ankit sir (Youngest scientist) ke liye achha nahi lag raha. Wo Jugnu didi se true love karte hain lekin Som sir ne Ankit sir ko maara iss wajah se Ankit sir ka pyar adhura rah gaya. Ab mere cutee Som ke wajah se kisi ka pyar adhura rah jaye bhala kaise hone deti. Fir maine hi madam se poora discuss karne ke baad uss Devanshu ka patta saaf karwa diya.. Madam ne tabhi mujhe thank you boli thi... Bus fir kya jhat se oppertunity cash kar lee.
Som:- Kaun juniors the...
Sia:- Meera and Neeraj. Infact Neeraj to Lucknow me hi hai but ab tak uss se contact nahi ho paya...
Som:- Aur wo tumhare yahan ke 3 naye dost...
Sia:- Tu mujh se inquiry kar raha hai. Chhi chhi... Typical bhai... Ab to pata bhi lagane jayega. Unhe pitne ki planning bhi chal rahi hogi... Chhi... Chhii.. chhii.. kaisi ho gayi teri soch Som....
Som:- Siaaaa..
Sia:- Ja na naha dho kar aa. Mujhe nind lagi hai. Abhi behoshi me mil rahi hun bhai. Hosh me milenge. Please... Please... Please...
Kismat connection. Haan shayad ya nahi bhi. Ek aapke writer nain ke kah dene se kya hota hai, feel bhi to hona chahiye. Zindgi me kab, kahan, kaun, kaise aap se emotionally jud jaye kise pata. Aur un patron ke judne se, ek dusre ke ander paraspar kitna badlav mehsus karte hain wo to ek romanchit rahashya hai. Duniya ki sabse badi sajis yani ki conspiracy to Jivan hai, jo kis mod par aap ko kitna chaunka de wo kise pata.
Jivan ke rahasya ki gutthi ko suljhane ke liye humare pass kuchh nahi hota, siway ek kaam ke aur wo hai apni ore se kosis hote rahni chahiye. Duniya ko motivate karne se achha hai hum khud ko motivate karte rahen, kyunki main pahle hi bata chuka hun ki jivan khud ek sajis hai to jab aap ke liye sajisen chal rahi ho fir hatash hona, toot jana, aur toot kar apne bhavna ko gusse me jahir karna ye aam baat ho jati hai.
Chahaten itni honi chahiye ki kosisen nakamyab bhi ho to chehre par khushi aur santusti ki bhavna bani rahe, na socha hua parinaam aaya to kya apni kosis to kiye. Pana ya khona to bhavishya hai jo ki apne aap me hamesa rashaya ke sath romanch lata hai. Bole to mystery with thrill ka ehsas karwata hai, haan lekin usse mehsus karne ke liye aur paar pane ke liye bhi kosisen jari rahni chahiye.
Ek ghar... Har kisi ka apna ek pata hota hai. Jinka apna koi sthayi pata nahi, unse janiye ki ghar ki kimat kya hoti hai. Haan lekin Som aur Sia ke pass sthayi pate ki samsya nahi thi balki zindgi aise bikhdi thi ki usse samjhne me hi waqt lag gaya.
Som ki ikchha thi ki wo Chandigarh apne paitrik ghar ko sthayi pata banaye, lekin Sia, Som ko bade pyar se manaati, Lucknow me hi settle hone bol di. Wo iss shahar ko chhod kar nahi jana chahti thi.
Som ne to kuchh din pahle Diksha ki shadi me apne sthayi pate ke liye commitment kiya tha lekin Sia ki baten aur chehre par aayi dhimi ghabrahat kuchh aur hi kahani bayan kar gayi. Som hanste huye kah diya... "England se Bharat wapas aane ke pahle hi sara mamla settle kar ke lauti thi na"..
Sia, muskurati hui "haan" me sar hila kar Som ko apne sath makan ka kaam dekhne sath chalne ke liye kahne lagi... Som, Sia ki utsukta ko naa nahi kah saka aur na hi uski ikchha ko taal paya. Dono, Nirbhay ke ghar se poore biker look me nikle. Sia apni laal Indian Scout motercycle par aur Som apni kaali Indian Scout par.
Dono ek amiron ke ilaake se nikal kar dusre amiron ke ilake me pahunch rahe the. Kafi khubsoorat society bani hui thi, jahan ek kinare se Bungalow bane huye the aur sadak ke thik uss paar multi storey buildings me society basi hui thi. Kafi reserve ilaaka lag raha tha.
Sia apni bike uss ilake ke ek under-construction makan ke pass rok kar khadi hui. Som bhi uske sath aa kar khada hua... "Som ye apna ghar hoga. Apna sthayi pata"…
Som, Sia ko kinare se bhinchte... "Thanks.. ye Mishra aur Mishrayan ji ne... Sorry, ye ghar maa pitaji ne to gift nahi kiya na?"..
Sia:- Ye plot Diksha ke naam thi. Dad ne Diksha ko Chandigarh wala plot de diya aur badle me ye le liya... Complete evaluation ke baad wahan ke plot ki kimat jyada nikli isliye yahan ke poore counstruction ka kharch unhone hi utha liya..
Som:- Hmmm !!! Kaisa makan banwa rahe hain wo to dikhayi hi nahi aab tak...
Sia, poora makan complete hone ke baad ki tasveer dikha di. Dono boundry ke bahar khade ho kar hi kalpnao me apne makan ko dekh rahe the... Tabhi wahan ek mahila pahunchi aur dono ka dhyan bhang karti... "Tum dono kaun ho?"
Som aur Sia thode aaschrya se unhe dekhne lage.… "Main aap ke sawal ka matlab nahi samjhi? Kya koi yahan khada nahi ho sakta?"
Mahila:- Anjaan log jab kisi khali plot ko aise dekhe to ek baar jaankari leni banti hai
Sia:- Chinta na kare iss plot ke hum owner hain..
Mahila:- Kya???
Som:- Malik hai hum iss ghar ke.
Wah mahila fiki pratikriya deti... "Oh.. Main Gungun Shrivastava hun. Sadak ke uss paar ka makan mera hai.
(Som ka ghar exact aise counstruction hone wala hai. Jahan Som ka makan hai wo ek chaurahe ka nirman karti hai. Samjhne ke lihaj se 4 section me ilake ko baant diya gaya hai.
Section A aur B bhi sadak ke 2 kinaron par hain lekin ye 1 hi row me bane makan hai. Jabki Housing colony C aur D ke section me hai. Chaurahe ke 3k row me thik chaurahe par ek ore Som to dusri ore Gungun ka makan tha)..
Sia:- Haan maine aap ko aate dekha tha. Maaf kijiyega hum jarra counstruction dekh le.
Sia apni baat kah kar Som ke sath boundery ke ander gayi. Sia thodi chinta jahir karti... "Som uss aurta ne aisa fika responce kyun diya."
Som:- Kab..
Sia:- Jab usse pata chala ki hum owner hain..
Som:- Charo ore dekh nahi rahi. Jamin ka ye prati tukda tha wo bhi chaurahe se laga hua. Ho sakta hai uski najar ho iss plot par ho.
Sia:- Chhod usko.. kaisa laga makan...
Sia ban rahe makan ke bare me poora batane lagi. Kisi bacchi ki tarah chahak rahi thi. Khush'numa sa apne ander wo mehsus kar rahi thi. Som wahin bani sidhiyon par baith kar Sia ki tasveeren lene laga, aur Sia apni khushiyan jahir kar rahi thi...
Sia:- Kya photo khinch raha hai Som... Bata na koi kamra apne hisab se desine karwana hai...
Som:- Nahi main deewaron ko desine karwaunga... Uss par humare bahut se happy momemts kis tasveeren bani hongi...
Sia:- Oh no...
Som:- Kya hua?
Sia:- Happy moment se yaad aaya, teen log tumhare pass ho na to moment hamesa happy hi rahta hai. Vyas, Asif aur Riaz... Haan hasane ke kram me bhul jate hain ki kya bol gaye lekin koi na, itni imaturity jachti hai...
Som:- Haan to chalo unki bhi tasveer le lete hain. Duniya me aise hi logon ki to jaroorat hai...
Sia:- Chalo chalte hain...
Aaj to jaise Sia ke khushiyon ke pankh lage the. Dono bhai bahan ho gaye bike par sawar, aur chal diye nukkad tak. Dono ki motercycle bilkul parellel chali aa rahi thi. Ek ladki biker ko dur se hi dekh kar laundon ke dil ke taar jhanjhana jate. Ab Gf me kaun nahi Sia jaisi hi-fi model chahta ho.
Jaise hi bike nukkad ke chay ki dukan par ruki, wahan maujood sabhi ladke kabhi bike to kabhi helmet helmet utarti ladki ko dekhne lage. Najren thami si aur jaise hi baal ko jhatakte Sia ne helmet hataya... Sabhi ladke apne sathi se dhime-dhime baaten karne lage.
Jo ladkon ka dhyan ab tak kewal Sia par tha, jaise hi Som ne apna helmet nikal kar baal ko teji se sameta aur teji ke sath poore bal ko gol baandh kar wo jatayen banaya... Ladkon ki najren khinch gai. Sitam itna kam tha jo agle hi pal Som aur Sia jaise hi sath huye..
Fir to ladke kabhi ek hi model ke 2 alag rang ke stylish bike aur 2 stylish biker ko sath dekh kar wahan to alag hi rumour aapas se batiyane lage... Som ek jhalak charo ore dekhte... "Naah inme se koi nahi tumhara dost. Phone kar ke bula lo na"…
Sia:- Som tumhe kaise pata inme se koi mera dost nahi. Ye bhi to ho sakta hai tumhe dekh kar samjhne ki kosis kar raha ho ki kaun mere sath hai?
Som:- Sun liya maine logic. Chalo abhi phone karo...
Canteen ke uss propose ke baad Sia sidha mumbai nikal gayi thi aur laut kar jab aayi to Diksha ki shadi me online present thi. Iss wajah se Sia, Vyas ka haal hi nahi le payi, jo usse pata hota ki teeno apna mobile guma liye hain. Sia teeno ke number try karti nukkad se kuchh duri par nikal gayi. Kuchh der kosis ki lekin teeno me se kisi ka number nahi laga. Contact na ho pane ki sithiti me Sia muh latkaye palat kar jaise hi chay ke dukan ke ore dekhi, uska dimag hi sann rah gaya.
Darasal Som dono hath me chay le kar Sia ko dekh raha tha. Itne me hi chay ki dukan par paise de kar ek ladka muda, jiska dhakka Som ko pichhe se laga. Uss dhakke ka natija yah hua ki samne se aa rahe Vyas ke upar chay gir gaya aur pratikriya me Vyas ne Som ko itna tej dhakka diya ki Som bench se takra kar poora aniyantrit ho kar niche jamin par ludhak gaya. Aur ye poori ghatna Sia ke najron ke samne ghat rahi thi...
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