Romance Three Girls of My Life

[mashish]

Waiting for next

 

[harshit1890]

At Last Yug Purush Main finally kahani ke sath-sath aa hi gaya...

Update - 80

Gyani bhai .... for this update... I am completely speechless.. after reading it... not just because ki aise hone ki umeed thi aur padne ko wahi mila balki jis tarah apne likha hai uski wajah se. Apne teen visuals dikhaye aur teeno ke teeno itne satik baithaye hain apne kahani ke mafik ki bhai kya hi kahun... sachi mein ek pal ke liye jo hua uska gussa sardarji par aur ek taraf jo ranjan chahta tha ki uska baap proud karega vo nahi ho saka uska dukh laga... matlab hum cha rahe hain na ki vo kissa bhul kar kahani ke aage flow mein reh jaye to bhi nahi reh paa rahe jis tarah apne vo likh likh kar hamara dil bhed diya ki nahi salalon padhho aur samjho us dukh ko.. aur yakeen mano aap safal ho gaye usme...

Itna deep visual karaya hai na apne... pure update mein chahe vo pehle ranjan ka sarkatta ho dhabbe mein aur wahan vo answer de raha ho jiske baad sabse bhari scene to uske baapu ka tha jo sofe par baitha tailya baja raha tha.. maaa kasam.. sala rongte khade ho gayebhai vo scene padh kar..itna bhari scene likha tha vo... uske alawajo baad mein hua aur last mein jo atharva nekara uska kaand to hoa hi lekin jo kaha vo ek para sala dil ko chu gaya... likh to koi bhi detaha bhai... soch bhi koi leta hoga.. parjisleel se aap soch kar likhte ho uska koi jawab hi nahi hota... uske nikat bhi koi nahi hota...

Is chapter ka title jitna gehra tha use jada is chapter ki kahani thi jo dimag se nahi nikal rahi... Sardarji ka balon ke sathhawa mein lehrate hue anaankhein fodna.. ye sab sochna aur usko itne satik tarah se likhna.. matlab lajawab... abhi tak puri kahani padte hue aisa laga ki kahani ladkiyun meinkho jayegi kyun ki wahi title hai.. lekin apne is padav ke baad kahani ka rukh completely badal diya.. matlab ise badia koi dimagi chot nahi ho sakti hai jo apne di hai...Atharva looks like atharva now... ab ye phase ko ap kaise start karke end karoge ye aap jano lekin jo aap dikha rahe ho ya dikhana cha rahe ho vo humeek dum sahi samajh aa raha hai..

Tussi great se bhi uppar ho gyani bhai.. seriously....

 

[harshit1890]

ab jaldi jaldi kahani chapne chalu kar do bhai... ab aaapan sab padh dala hai... waiting

 

[Naina]

Update-79
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Riya, bio wali mam ke sath baithi baat kar rahi thi…. Hall me baithne ka intezaam bade systematic dhang se kiya gaya tha… pahle school wise… fir class wise… jise jaha-jaha baithna tha waha school ka board laga hua tha… isliye itne bheed me bhi Riya ko dhoondhane me mujhe asani nahi hui… mera matlab mushqil nahi hui… main is chah me ki wo mujhe ek bar dekhkar pahle ki tarah muskura de, main uski oor dekhta raha… lekin usne meri taraf apni nazar tak nahi firayi, atleast tab tak toh nahi , jab tak main use dekh raha tha…. isliye uske muskurane ki baat dharti se surya ke barabar door thi

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are Yug Purush sahab ye ho kya raha hai
dekha aapne.. kaise competition ke dauran riya rose aur bio wali miss chipak kar baithe aankho mein aakhein daale baatein kar rahi thi.... dona ka chehra itne Karib ki....
jaise saans mein riya ki saans mile to bio wali miss ko saans aayi....
dono aise chipke the ki
Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo bio wali miss jo uske paas aayi ..

dono apach mein hi yun busy ki atharva ko bhi Dari kinar kar diya

 

[Naina]

ab jaldi jaldi kahani chapne chalu kar do bhai... ab aaapan sab padh dala hai... waiting

Boi wali miss aur riya rose ke bich kuch alag chemistry suru huyi gayi hai ..
Jaise ho romantic agan ...
Baaki un ki mehnat aur lagan...
Shayad aage chalke dekhne mile
un dono ka Milan....

 

[Naina]

At Last Yug Purush Main finally kahani ke sath-sath aa hi gaya...

Update - 80

Gyani bhai .... for this update... I am completely speechless.. after reading it... not just because ki aise hone ki umeed thi aur padne ko wahi mila balki jis tarah apne likha hai uski wajah se. Apne teen visuals dikhaye aur teeno ke teeno itne satik baithaye hain apne kahani ke mafik ki bhai kya hi kahun... sachi mein ek pal ke liye jo hua uska gussa sardarji par aur ek taraf jo ranjan chahta tha ki uska baap proud karega vo nahi ho saka uska dukh laga... matlab hum cha rahe hain na ki vo kissa bhul kar kahani ke aage flow mein reh jaye to bhi nahi reh paa rahe jis tarah apne vo likh likh kar hamara dil bhed diya ki nahi salalon padhho aur samjho us dukh ko.. aur yakeen mano aap safal ho gaye usme...

Itna deep visual karaya hai na apne... pure update mein chahe vo pehle ranjan ka sarkatta ho dhabbe mein aur wahan vo answer de raha ho jiske baad sabse bhari scene to uske baapu ka tha jo sofe par baitha tailya baja raha tha.. maaa kasam.. sala rongte khade ho gayebhai vo scene padh kar..itna bhari scene likha tha vo... uske alawajo baad mein hua aur last mein jo atharva nekara uska kaand to hoa hi lekin jo kaha vo ek para sala dil ko chu gaya... likh to koi bhi detaha bhai... soch bhi koi leta hoga.. parjisleel se aap soch kar likhte ho uska koi jawab hi nahi hota... uske nikat bhi koi nahi hota...

Is chapter ka title jitna gehra tha use jada is chapter ki kahani thi jo dimag se nahi nikal rahi... Sardarji ka balon ke sathhawa mein lehrate hue anaankhein fodna.. ye sab sochna aur usko itne satik tarah se likhna.. matlab lajawab... abhi tak puri kahani padte hue aisa laga ki kahani ladkiyun meinkho jayegi kyun ki wahi title hai.. lekin apne is padav ke baad kahani ka rukh completely badal diya.. matlab ise badia koi dimagi chot nahi ho sakti hai jo apne di hai...Atharva looks like atharva now... ab ye phase ko ap kaise start karke end karoge ye aap jano lekin jo aap dikha rahe ho ya dikhana cha rahe ho vo humeek dum sahi samajh aa raha hai..

Tussi great se bhi uppar ho gyani bhai.. seriously....

Waise aaruhi aur atharva ki jodi bole to superhit hai ..
A se naam suru hoye... Khayalat bhi same... study bhi....
upar se dono hallucinations ki duniya mein jeene wale

 

[Naina]

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are Yug Purush sahab ye ho kya raha hai
dekha aapne.. kaise competition ke dauran riya rose aur bio wali miss chipak kar baithe aankho mein aakhein daale baatein kar rahi thi.... dona ka chehra itne Karib ki....
jaise saans mein riya ki saans mile to bio wali miss ko saans aayi....
dono aise chipke the ki
Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo bio wali miss jo uske paas aayi ..

dono apach mein hi yun busy ki atharva ko bhi Dari kinar kar diya

Kingfisher & SANJU ( V. R. ) ju logis ki ray hai is mamle mein

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Kingfisher & SANJU ( V. R. ) ju logis ki ray hai is mamle mein

Bio wali mis.chugli kar rahi thi Riya se. Atharva ke pichhe bahut dino se padi thi na ! Esiliye to Riya Atharva se nafrat karne lagi.

 

[Agasthya]

Waise aaruhi aur atharva ki jodi bole to superhit hai ..
A se naam suru hoye... Khayalat bhi same... study bhi....
upar se dono hallucinations ki duniya mein jeene wale

Ye aarushi bhi thi kya iss update me koi..
Mujhe too nahi dikhi..

 

[Naina]

Bio wali mis.chugli kar rahi thi Riya se. Atharva ke pichhe bahut dino se padi thi na ! Esiliye to Riya Atharva se nafrat karne lagi.

Nai, nai, nai.... yahan mamla kuch aur hi hai...

. are gaur se padhiye, kaise dono chipak ke baithi thi.... ho na ho gyani sir aage aane wale update jikar kare in dono ke darmiyan kya hai.....