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Yug Purush

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Nai, nai, nai.... yahan mamla kuch aur hi hai... :D

. are gaur se padhiye, kaise dono chipak ke baithi thi.... ho na ho gyani sir aage aane wale update jikar kare in dono ke darmiyan kya hai..... :D
Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye,
Mobile format hone ke baad dobara se naa likhaa jaaye :sigh2:
 

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Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye,
Mobile format hone ke baad dobara se naa likhaa jaaye :sigh2:
Naina ju ki story pr rooj 6 review degi..:D
Ab too likhnaa suru kr doo..bhai..

Ekk baar koi kaam khatam karne kee baad voo dubara karne kaa mann nahi karta samajh aata h..
Too tension Matt lo yaar..yahi too zindagi h..:cool:
 
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Kya tujhe ab ye dil bataye,
Mobile format hone ke baad dobara se naa likhaa jaaye :sigh2:
are dhett teri ki..... :doh:
Ab yahin hona baaki tha... btw ye to bahot bura hua :doh: ek masterpiece storyline ki aage kahani gayab :sigh2:
 
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Naina ju ki story pr rooj 6 review degi..:D
Ab too likhnaa suru kr doo..bhai..

Ekk baar koi kaam khatam karne kee baad voo dubara karne kaa mann nahi karta samajh aata h..
Too tension Matt lo yaar..yahi too zindagi h..:cool:
:slap: aage ki story gayab aur ju ko mazak sujh raga hai...
 

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“Good Morning Sir and very Good Morning my fellow students. As you all know, we Sansakar Valleians are one big family and we always help each other, no matter the cost or the situation. in past, whenever anyone needed any kind of help, We were always there for each other and i promise we will always be like this. Our one of the brightest student and a fantastic painter….”

“Sanjana ko leke fir se randi rona kar raha hai ye….”Ved ne beech me mujhse kaha..

“chup be… badhiya bol raha hai ye… sunne de…” maine Ved ko chup karaya aur pura concentration Jafar par focus किया

“So, Our one of the brightest student and a fantastic painter, who are also going to represent our school in upcoming painting competition"

"Ye toh Sanjana ka pichha chhod hee nahi raha.."main badbadaya

"And She is nobody else but.............… "

"Silky Sanjana..."maine mann hee mann wo naam pahle le liya, jo Jafar aage lene wala tha...

"She is nobody else but...."

"Bolega madarchod... Yaa desk pe khade hoke gol gol lund ghumau tab bolega"abki baar jab Ranjan ne pause liya toh Ved dabi aawaz me gurraya....

"She is nobody else but RIYA.... ROSE.."


"Madarchod... Mahtarichod.... Betichod... Bitiyachod.... Chachi-chod... Chacha-chod... Le uda ye Riya Rose ko bhi.."peechhe baithe baithe Ved Aashcharyachakit ho mere peeth me ek mukka maarkar budbudaya "bola thaa naa... Riya Rose sahi ladki nahi hai tere liye"

"Riya Rose...."main is jhatke seubar tak nahi paaya tha ki Jafar ne aage bola "her mother is admitted to the Vindhya hospital yesterday for kidney Stone treatment. Riya and her family Emotionally as well as economically need our support… therefore, it is my request to you, please donate as much as you can because tomorrow this could happen with anyone present in this class. That’s all… Thank you sir….”


Itna Bolkar Jafar sabse pahle Bulla ka hee chalaan kaatne uske paas gaya , Bulla ne apne shirt ki jeb me hath dala aur 500 ki ek patti nikal kar Jafar ko pakda diya… Jafar ne Bulla ka naam likha aur uske dwara donate kiye hue rupaye… iske baad usne wahi trick apnayi jo maine Sanjana ke donation me apnayi thi… usne bhi shuruat laadkiyo se ki … aur donation maagte waqt Sansakar Valley is a big family ka naara diye jaa raha tha… ab maths ki ladkiya bhale hee calculas jaise complicated topic padhi ho, lekin family ke naam par sabka dil paseej gaya aur sabne ‘we are Sanskar Valleians’ ka naara maarte hue donate karna shuru kar diya… aur donation lene ki ninja technique main pahle hee bata chuka hu ki jo bhi laundo se karwana ho , wo chiz ladkiyo se karwa lo… ladke jhak maar ke aayenge… toh same idhar bhi hua…


saale ne acha analyse kiya meri Atharva Neeti ko aur copy karke Riya ko impress karne chala hai.... Dialogue tak same rakha.. Sirf Sanjana ki jagah, Riya Rose ka naam daal diya aur bimari ka name change kar diya. Ye jaroor un do Madhu aur Mini ki karamat hogi... Sali burchattiya.


Jafar har ek ki desk ke paas jata, jo jitna paisa deta… uske naam ke saamne utna paisa likh kar aage wale ke paas hath faila leta…. Jafar ke paas meri tarah Ranjan nahi tha.. Jo laundo ko do-teen mukka pelkar jabardasti unse donation karwa le... Lekin mc ladkiyo ne fir bhi badh chadhkar hissa liya... Mira ne toh 2000 rs diya... Aur boli ki baaki main kal de dungi...


"Bhai, Mira call girl toh nahi ban gayi...? Warna itna paisa kaun deta hai... Dekh toh, Lawda Bulla tak sharma kar class se baahar nikal gaya... Ms. Robinhood hai Mira... Aamiro ka lawda lekar, garibo ko paisa deti hai" Ved bola "sala Mira aur Jafar ko ek sath dekhkar inka purana prem prasang yaad aa gaya...?? Waise, Atharva... Kya Mira ko pata hai ki uske Jafar ke sath breakup me hum dono ka hath tha..??"

"Nahi... Humne toh bas wo kiya jo us waqt hume sahi laga.. BC, apne dosto ke sath Mira ko share karne ka plan bana raha tha Jafar... Atharva Dev hawasi ho sakta hai, lekin haivan nahi... Waise bahut sahi game khela tha hum dono ne.. Aaj tak ise hawa nahi lagi "

"Game humne nahi tune khela tha jhoothi afwaah faila kar ki Jafar Mira ko apne dosto ke sath share karne waala hai.. Jabki aisa kuch thaa hee nahi... Sach toh ye tha ki wo Sanjana ko patane laga tha... Aur wo Sanjana ko naa pataye isliye tune Mira wali afwaah failayi school me taaki Sanjana usse set hee naa ho. Lekin tera daav yaha ulta pad gaya... Ye afwah failte hee Jafar ne Mira ko makkhi ki tarah nikal feka aurCompletely Sanjana ke peechhe lag gaya... Lekin idhar Mira bahut badnaam ho gayi... Is lihaaj se dekha jaaye toh game humne nahi Jafar ne khela tha.. BC ne Sanjana ko jo pata liya aur ab jab Sanjana se door hua......"

"Aaj tak samajh nahi aaya ki itni khatarnak afwaah failane ke baad bhi Sanjana, jafar se kaise set ho gayi...?? Kasam se main aaj tak suspence me hoon is baat ko lekar.."

"Sometimes, i think she did it on purpose... And deep down she always knew that you loved her... Ab Riya Rose ke sath bhi yahi karega Jafar... Dekh lena..."

" Riya Rose ko leke tension mat le.... Ranjan mujhe ashvasan de chuka hai ki.. Wo school ke kisi bhi ladko ko Riya se set hone nahi dega... "

"Chuda Jafar fir... Yadi Ranjan ne aisa bola hai toh...?? Yaa fir tune Ranjan ko manipulate karke aisa bulwaya..??"

"Galat log aksar dusro ko galat samjhte hai, unhe khud ki galti nahi dikhti... Jaise Mahabharat ke yuddh ka blame aaj bhi kuch log Shri Krishna pe thopte hai... Bas waise hee tu bhi har chij ke liye mujhe blame karna band kar... Kyunki is pure school me ekmatra main hee aisa ladka hoon, jisne Ranjan ko apne ghar bulaya hai... Tum logo ki toh himmat tak nahi hoti ki Ranjan ka naam tak le lo ghar me... Aur ye BC Riya ki maa ko achanak hua kya.. Thik toh ho gayi thi.. Aur ye mujhe pata kyun nahi..?? "


Isi bich Jafar donation lete -lete mere bench ki taraf badhne laga, Jafar ko apni oor aata dekh Ved ne apne dono pair desk par rakha aur full role me hath sar ke pichhe kar, sar peechhe wali desk se tika kar Jafar ko ghoorne laga...

"Atharva.. Donation de.."

“pahle batana tha , main paisa nahi laya..”jab Jafar mere saamne aaya toh maine kaha….

“koyi baat nahi… bahut badhiya” Jafar khushi -khushi copy me likhte hue kaha “Atharva Singh- Nil…. Riya kitna proud feel karegi ye dekhkar… photo kheech lunga is list ki main , Riya ko dikhane ke liye.. Waise jo donation nahi deta.. Main,Simply Uska naam hee nahi likhta list me.. Lekin tera jaroor likhunga aur jo list Riya ko oaise ke sath dunga.. Us list me sabse upar tera naam rahega... Bakayda bade bade zero ke sath... "

“kal de dunga na… aaj likh de…”

“koyi aur hota toh chalta , par tere liye nahi…. Saale, bhatti"

“ek kaam kar…. Ye le 300 aur Atharva ke naam se entry kar…”peechhe apna sar tikaye Ved ne apne shirt ki jeb se 100-100 ke 3 note nikal kar Jafar se bola… “aur mere naam ke aage nil likh de… Ved Sir ko ghanta farak nahi padta in sab chijo se... ”


Ved ne teen sau rupaye Jafar ki taraf neeche feka aur mujhe dekhkar aankh mara…. Jafar daant peesate hue mera naam likha aur Ved ka naam…. Jaisa ki usne kaha tha ki wo donation naa dene waalo ko simply list me mention hee nahi karta... Isliye usne Ved ko ignore marke aage badh gaga. Jafar toh waha se chala gaya par jaane se pahle mere kaan me kuch fussfusa kar gaya…


“tere karan Sanjana mujhse alag hui thi na, ab mere karan Riya tujhse alag hogi…. wo toh acha hua Riya ki maa Vindhya me admit hai yadi bychance Sanjay Gandhi me admit hoti toh fir dekhta tu… Sanjay Gandhi me peon se lekar doctor tak meri pahuch hai… mujhe gaand dhone ka saabun bechne wala kaha tha tune.. Sale, bhatti... Sanjay Gandhi me meri family se hee do surgeon hai, waha Riya ki sari arrangement main hee kar deta… shukar mana ki Riya ki maa Sanjay Gandhi me nahi balki Vindhya me hai. ab main Aisa bomb fodunga teri zindagi me ki tere sare armano ke chithade-chithade udd jayenge… ”


" good luck fighting both Deception King & Sexy Saahityakar aur meri koshish bhi yahi rahegi ki next time jab hum dono ki ladayi ho toh Joshi aur government school ke ladke shuruat se hee mauzood rahe.. Kya pelenge tujhe wo sab... Saale, Maar maar ke tere muh ko gand naa bana de toh kahna... Baaki teri family me se do surgeon hai hee... "maine sirf itna kaha aur muskura diya… kyunki smile karna hee best response hota hai , chahe aap fati me ho ya fir kisi fasaad me.. friend ke sath ho ya fir foe ke sath… bas muskura do aur saamne wali ki jal ke raakh ho jati hai... so maine bhi wahi kiya….

“kya bol raha tha tere kaan me… jo tu bhadak gaya”Jafar ke jaane ke baad Ved mujhse puchha…

“yeeeee…. Puch raha tha.. 4 point…”

“bata nahi toh abhiye apna 300 rupaye wapas le lunga…”

“kuch nahi bol raha tha ki tu use bahut pasand hai aur wo teri gand maarna chahta hai, aaj Lunch time me…. Isliye tujhe bathroom me milne ke liye bola hai…”

“ulta palta ke main hee pond mar lunga uski… waise ye Riya ki maa dobara kab admit ho gayi… tune bataya nahi…”

“main kya batata… mujhe khud hee nahi maloom.... baat-chit band hai…”
Kitni mst story chal rhi thi Puri rat 30 Update pad dale ESI lalsha me ki Riya atharva se ab PTI ki age Update me PTI ...par lawda jafar Riya ki uda le gya ....yar writer shab kya apko readers ke jajbaton ke sath khelne me mja ATA hai .... it's not good ...Nothing got out of Sanjana Atharva's hand ...par ab ye Riya ...this es unbearable, bhaishab ... mindfresh Karne ke liye pad rha tha par es Update se MINDFUCK ho gya ....Khair koi bat par ek bat kehna chahunga ....jafar ki ma ke bhosde me elephant Ka l.....
 
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Ek baar Arman ne college me ek ladke ko buri tarah maarne ke dauran jab hostel waalo ne use rokna chaha toh usne kaha tha ki " lawda, main bahut selfish banda hoon, duniyadari kaa kaam duniya par chhod deta hoon. Jab mere jeene -marne se logo ko koyi fark nahi padta to fir bhala mujhe kyun unke jeene -marne se koyi fark padne laga.. Isliye ise toh main marunga, marte dum tak maarunga.".



So once again, Time Travel... Jaha main Past ke future ki conversation ko Interceptor ki kamaan sambhale Past ke bhi Past me use kar raha hoon... Confused..?? I'm Too. aur mujhe pata hai ki aisa karna future ke dialogue ko past me use kar lena samay ke santulan ko bigadna hai, fir bhi maine ye kiya.. Kyunki main ye kar sakta hoon. Afterall, I AM THE FUCKING NARRATOR.


Isliye jab Riya & Sanjana ko ab mujhse koyi matlab nahi toh fir mujhe kyon unse matlab hone laga. Main baahar se khud toh normal behave karta lekin school ke teachers aur students ko normal behave karta dekh unpar bahut gussa karta... raah chalte logo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school me bench ke neeche zameen me chalti hui cheetiyo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school ke pillars, playground ko dekhkar gussa aata… copy, pen, bag, bench, chair, board, deewar, gate khidki, ped-paudhe…. Sabhi jeevit chizo se lekar, sabhi nirjeev chizo par mujhe gussa aata. Un dino sirf ek hee line mere dimag thi wo ye ki bhaad me jaye sab, gand maraye sab….


Rahi baat competition ki toh Mini aksar lunch me mere aur Ved ke paas aati, aadatan kayi sawal karti, jisme se jo bahut jyada important the… uska jawab Ved deta aur fir ignore maar deta… mujhse toh Mini kuch puchhati bhi nahi thi. Kyunki use maloom tha ki main koyi jawab nahi dene wala… fir wo chali jati… ek baar usne hume kaha ki Principal sir, cabin me hum dono ko bula rahe hai… jispar hum dono class me hee rahe. Isliye aaj fir Saxsena ne apne cabin me hume bulaya tha….. Madarchod….


“chal, Saxsena ki gand me bamboo kar ke aate hai…”Ved ne kaha

“is madarchod ko ab kya puchhna hai… sab toh 10-10 baar puchh liya…. Betichod”

" tu toh aaj kal mere type baat-baat pe gaali dene laga hai... Waise, Bio wali ki moti gand me chull hoga… usi ne bulwaya hoga Saxsena se”

“randi madarchod… chodari, burchatti… hagandi, gookhani~गू खानी iski dayi ko chod dalu… bhadwi... Iske chut me hath daal kar bacha dani kheench lunga”

“aisa kya.... chal fir…”

“kaha…”

“yahaaaaaa…. 10 points…”


Ved ko point chadhata dekh main halka sa muskuraya aur bola ki wo aage-aage jaye main moot ke thodi der me aata hu… jiske baad Ved ne suggestion diya ki Bio wali mam ka muh hote hue bathroom me kyun jaana...usi ke muh me moot dena…. Jise maine thukra diya aur fir se kaha ki… tu jaa, main thodi der me aata hu.
Ved ke jaane ke lagbhag 5 minute ke baad main Saxsena ke cabin me jaane ke liye apni class se nikla… Jafar apni class ke saamne khada tha. ye sach bhi tha ya nahi, par mujhe pata nahi aisa kyun lagta tha ki Ranjan ki maut se kisi ko yadi koyi fayda hua hai toh wo Jafar hai… kyunki Ranjan ke murder ke baad main use har dam sirf haste hue , muskurate hue dekhta aur logo ki hasi se mujhe un dino itni nafrat ho gayi thi ki jise bhi haste hue dekhta , mann karta ki unke muh me lund de du…. Literally….


Mujhe pakka yakin tha ki Jafar ne hee apne aadmiyo ke dwara Ranjan ko marwaya hai, fir jab Ranjan ke papa beech me aaye toh unhe bhi raaste se hata diya. Waise bhi Ranjan aur uske papa itne heavy the ki kisi ek aadmi ke bas ki baat nahi thi, kisi ek ko toh wahi dono zinda kaat dete… ye ek se adhik logo ka kaam tha isliye meri conspiracy theory ka main Villain ab bhi Jafar hee tha.


Apni conspiracy theory ko apne dimag me naye-naye aayam tak pahuchakar, Jafar ko ghoorte hue main uski taraf badh raha tha, jaha wo apne do dosto ke sath khada kisi baat par hans raha tha aur pichhale kuch dino ki tarah Riya Rose, Mini aur Madhu ke sath wahi uske paas khadi thi. jab main uske najdeek pahucha toh uski bhi nazar mujh par padi… mujhe ghoorta hua paakar usne bhi mujhe gusse se ghoorna chalu kar diya aur jab uske paas se gujra toh peechhe railing par apne dono hath rakhkar style me khade hote hue wo mujhse bola...

“ghoor kya raha hai be, maarega kya…”

“chal khol… abhi maarta hu”bolkar main aage badh gaya

“Mere ek jhapad me moot maarega tu… ab Chitranjan nahi hai, tujhe bachane ke liye…. Jiske dam pe uchak raha tha naa itne dino se wo toh gaya, isliye ab apni aukaat me rahna... Warna pura khandan khatam kar dunga tera...."

"Very good....."sunkar main muskuraya par andar hee andar puri taqat ke sath chillaya... Mere sharir ki ek -ek nash gusse se thar-thar kaanpne lagi

"Paagal ho gaya hai kya be.."wahi khade Jafar ke ek dost ne mujhe muskurate hue kaanpta dekh hairan hokar kaha


Riya.... Madhu aur Mini ke sath waha se door chali gayi thi... Lekin thi ab bhi wahi corridor me, jaha se wo pura nazara dekh sakti thi.

"Teri saari gundayi main wahi ghusa dunga, jaha se tu nikla hai... Waise teri maa ko dard bahut hoga... Jab main aisa karunga toh.." muskurate hue, gusse se kaanpte hue maine, Jafar se kaha

"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha.. Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."


Itna bolkar Jafar chup ho gaya … jiske baad main chup-chap waha se aage badh gaya aur kuch kadam ki doori par jaha seedhiya neeche jaane ke liye shuru hoti thi waha pahuchkar main ruka yaa mere kadam apne aap ruk gaye....? Mujhe nahi pata... Kyunki chalte -chalte mere dimag ne Jafar ke shabdo par gaur kiya ki Jafar ne abhi kya bola hai aur uska kya matlab hai..... Mere kaano me Jafar dwara kahi gayi aakhiri line bajne lagi aur mere dimag ne usi line ke base pe mujhe green signal de diya


"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha, Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."

Jafar ki is ek line ne meri conspiracy theory ko sahi saabit kar diya. Baaki gussa toh itne din se mere andar bhara hee hua tha, jise Jafar ki us ek line ne aur badha diya… Ranjan ke khoon hone ke baad maine raat-raat bhar jaag kar soch rakha tha ki yadi bychance kabhi Ranjan ka qatil mere saamne khada ho toh main uske sath kya karunga...?? Aur wo is waqt yahi mauzood tha, bilkul mere paas... Meri oor peeth kiye hue.


Seedhiyo ke paas khade rahkar maine apne jabde par pure sharir ka force apply kiya aur jor se silently chillaya par jab laga ki jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega toh silently chillana band kar diya, lekin mera dimag ghoom raha tha aur uske andar Jafar ke shabd bhi ghoom rahe the. Jiske baad mera sar bhi gusse me ghoomne laga aur fir ant me main bhi ghooma aur Jafar ki taraf badha…. Badha kya...sidhe dauda...


Jafar dusari taraf muda hua tha yani pahla prahar main jaise chahe waise kar sakta tha.. mujhe pata tha ki mere pahle prahar ke baad mere sath kya hoga… Wo bhi jab Jafar ke dost uske sath ho, upar se sab ke sab saale sports wale the, mere se jyada hatte-katte. Jafar ki taraf badhte hee main samajh gaya tha ki mere dwara prahar karte hee main bahut buri tarah maar khaane wala hoon. isliye main apne is pahle prahar ko hee aisa banana chahta thi Jafar ki khade-khade maiyya chud jaye… is ladayi me mere liye sirf ek plus point tha aur wo tha mera gussa.... Jo beet rahe har nano second ke sath badhta jaa raha tha. apne dahine hath ke kade ko dabate hue main Jafar ki taraf dauda aur kood kar pahle kohni se Jafar ke sar ke beecho-beech khopdi pe puri taqat se mara, taaki uska sar fat jaaye. Jafar mere maarte hee dono hatho se apna sar pakad kar buri tara cheekha... chillaya... Aur uski aawaz sunkar mujhe bahut hee achchha feel hua...


Kohni maarne ke turant baad main thoda peechhe hokar ek laat uske kamar par puri taqat se maara…. Jafar apne thik saamne jisse baat kar raha tha , mere laat maarne par wo dono thodi door tak aage ki oor ladkhadaye aur fir ladkhadate hue neeche gir gaye… Jafar neeche pade-pade chillate hue ab bhi apna sar dabaye jaa raha tha aur idhar main bhi ab apni kohni malne laga. Sala jab mujhe itna dard ho raha hai, toh use kitna ho raha hoga....


Mujhe toh laga tha ki maine Jafar ka khel khatm kar diya hai aur wo ab nahi uthega, lekin wo Apna sar dabate hue jald hee uth khada hua aur ab muskurate hue meri oor dekha.... Maano mujhse kah raha ho ki… yahi toh chahta tha main ki tu mujhse akele bhide sabke saamne aur fir ye uski jubaan par bhi aa gaya...


"Us din ki beijjati ka badla aaj lunga main... Jab inhi logo ke beech Ranjan ne tere kaaran mujhe maara tha... Uski aatma tadap uthegi teri pelayi dekhkar... " apna sar malte hue Jafar ne mere peechhe kisi ko aankho se ishara kiya...


Maine turant peechhe palat kar dekha, mere peechhe bahut ladke the aur kuch ladkiya bhi... ladke-ladkiya ab apni-apni class ke saamne khade ho gaye the is utsukta me ki ab aage kya hoga…. Jafar khada hua aur aur meri taraf teji se dauda, lekin maine toh physics padhi hui hai isliye Jafar ke impact ko kam karne ke liye maine apne sharir ka pura bal neeche transfer kar diya aur apne pairo ko majbooti ke sath zameen par dabaya… ki jaise hee ye aayage, isko jhuka kar iski peeth me kohni se fir maarunga


"Madarchhooo....." kisi ne achanak hee ek mukka mere jabde me mara, mujhe hawa tak nahi laga ki kisne maara aur kidhar se.


fir kisi aur ne turant usi waqt peechhe se meri gardan apne hath (forearm) se daboch li…. Meri gardan ko peechh se daboch kar wo log mujhe ghaseet kar aage Jafar ki oor le jaane lage aur jab Jafar daudkar mere paas aaya toh wo thoda ruka, apne hatho ko sahlaaya... Meri aankho me thodi der ke liye dekha aur fir apne dono hatho se mujhe gaaliya dete hue mere pet pe mukka maarne laga. bich -bich me jin do aur logo ne mujhe pakad rakha tha wo bhi kabhi mera baal pakad kar mere gaal par jhapad maarte toh kabhi -kabhi mere peeth par mukka jad dete aur maarne ke baad fir se mujhe pakad lete... Is dauran Jafar thoda pichhe khiska aur daudkar apne kandhe se mere seene me maara... Jafar ka majboot kandha mere seene me lagte hee Itna tej dard aur aisi ghabrahat hui us pal ki... Laga bas... Behan...chho..chod. ye mere is jiwan ka aakhiri samay hai, upar se pichhe se ek ladke ne gardan aur daba rakhi thi, jiske kaaran thik dhang se main saans tak nahi le paa raha tha.
Jafar ka impact itna tej tha ki mujhe pakdane wale ladke bhi kuch kadam peechhe kisak gaye… jiske baad mujhe pata chala ki mujhe do ladko ne nahi balki teen ladko ne peechhe se pakad rakha hai… Do logo ne mera ek-ek hath pakda hua tha aur ek mera gardan lagatar dabaye jaa raha tha, maano mera gala ghotkar maarne ka vichar ho uska…. Par ain waqt par mere dwara gardan idhar-udhar karne ke kaaran wo thik se meri gardan nahi daba paa raha tha.


Jafar mera baal pakadkar jor se kheencha aur fir mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhap di… Jafar ka hath mere gaal par padte hee main tamtama utha… maine aaj tak jitna khaya tha, jitna mere sharir me dam tha... utna pura jor laga diya , un teeno ki pakad se aazad hone ke liye… lekin siway unhe thoda sa idhar -udhar hilane ke main kuch nahi kar paya… Jafar ka jhapad padte hee meri aankho se usi samay aansu bhi nikale, ,kyunki jhapad padte hee mujhe achanak Ranjan ki yaad aa gayi thi

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Jab kahani padni start ki thi tab socha nhi tha ki , kahani Etna bda mod le legi I mean comedy se murder mystery tak ...pehle reading time main focus bs Riya sanjana atharva ved par hota tha , par enme we do ki or bilkul Dyna hat gya hai ( sanjana & Riya ) en dono ke bare me ab aisi thinking ban gai hai ki enhe bad jafar se pelvane ke liye hi create Kiya gya hai ....
1.... sanjana .... Puri samskar velly ko jafar ki kartuto ke bare me pta hai to fir inhe ye pta kya nhi chla jab ki gf bf banne se pehle Puri tehkikat Karti hai es hisab se jafar ke katnamo ke bare me esse sabse jyada maloom Hona Chahiye tha , esko kya samjhe ki sanjana ne sirf apni jism ki aag bujhne me liye jafar ki or rukh Kiya .... Jab jafar use khinckar atharva ke pass ye kehlvane ke liye leke Aya ki use dono me se ek ko chunna hai , es vakiye me usne sanjana se vahyyat tarike se bat ki , jafar ki bate sunkar ek chutiya bhi samajh Sakta hai ki sanjana Uske liye kya mayne rakhti hai fir bhi usne jafar Ka hi paks liya ....jafar me Uske sath break up time Jo bhi harkat ki uski vo swam jimmedar thi ....agar vo jafar ke sath or jyada relationship me rehti to vo apne dosto se sath bhi share Kar data tha jaisa usne Meera ke sath bhi Kar Sakta .....

Riya ....ek number ki selfish or ghatiya kism ki ladki Jise sirf or sirf fully attention Chahiye ...Uske atharva se vo attention Leni chahi or atharva ne Di bhi par usme Kuch Kami aaii to 1.05 inch l...vale jafar ki or rukh Kar liya ...ese bs sympathy Chahiye ese bs apna dukh dard dikhta hai Baki hathi ke bhosde me jaye ...jab ye pareshani me thi to atharva ne eska sath par jab atharva thoda bahut depression Ka shikar hua to bat tak ki lawdi Kam se kam apni chuchi hi muhh me de deti ....

Khair I never thought ki Ranjan ki jindagi Ka Safar es trah khatam ho Jayega means unexpected and imaginable tha +++ itni brutally type marna sath hi Uske father ko bhi ...ye Jo Kuch bhi achanak hua sach me Soch se pre tha ...Jaise jafar ne atharva ke jate vakt kha esse to yhi Lagta hai Ranjan Ka khoon ESI ne nhi Kiya par usnki mentality Dekh Kar Lagta nhi ki usne aisa Kiya because ek 12 ladka Etna cruel type murder Karke ke bundas reh Sakta hai + aise hint bhi De Sakta hai ki Mano khoon usi ne Kiya ho , par asal me aisa hai nhi .... Ab tak ye to samajh hi gya hu ki apki kahani me age Ka anuman lagana ya raaz se parda uthana means deewar par sar marna , esliye better yhi hai ki Update ke madhyam se hi sach janu ....
Well ..I can't discribe atharva agony in my words... Ved ke dvara Ranjan ki mout ki khabar se lakar next day school Jane tak us bich ki atharva ki mansik sthiti harday vidarak thi just like Uske dvara antarmann me Rona , Ranjan ke sath bitaye memorable moments yad Karna ya FB massage yad Karna ya fir jafar ke dvara Ranjan ko lakar bolna or us par Bina parinam ki chinta kiye jafar se bhid Jana ....
Agar bat kre jafar ki to mene jitni stories ya movies dekhi usme bhi main villain se jitni nafrat nhi ki jitni nafrat mujhe es jafar name ke cherecter se hai means ese kya sochkar create Kiya gya ( Riya or sanjana ko pelvane ke liye ) jab bhi eska Update me jikr hota hai lowda dimag ki maiya chod jati hai .... Me Chahta hu ki jafar name Ka disgusting cherecter Ka pta story se hamesha ke saf ho jaye to kahani ko read me 1000000 guna jyada mja ayega ( agar Ranjan ki murder mystery jafar se link hai to fir thik hai par agar usme eska koi role nhi hai to jaldi se killed that fuching bloody bustard maiya chod do eski ....bahut Mann Kar rha enhe galiya dene Ka par nhi dunga ) ....

Karan Naik ..... Lawda ye hai koun , mujhe to abhi mysterious person Lagta hai , jafar Jo ek ameer bap ki oulad hai unhe bhi pel Diya agar ye chota mota admi hota to jafar Kuch to jarur karta eske sath .... Sanjana ki mayushi ke pich ek bahut bdi vajah ye ho Sakta hai Kaisa sanjana ke reaction + atharva ke ek bat kehne par jafar ko pel dena ...agar Esme sanjana ke sath galat Kiya to sanjana use jarur ujaghar Karti par nhi ki sayad use Karan Naik ke bare me pta ho ( sayad tabhi vo Karan Naik ke kehne par ya Uske intention ko samajhte hue usne atharva se duri bna li ho ) ....
Or esne to sunaina mam ko hi mahino tak tadipar Kar Diya aisa Karke Puri samskar velly Ke students Armano par Pani ferkar un sabka Jani dushman ban gya ....
End last biology Vali mam + mini + Madhu + jafar en sabki ma bhosde me cactus Ke ek darzan plant lgava do ....
 
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Meri aankho me kya, mujhe aisa dekh waha mauzood kuch ladkiyo ke aankho me bhi aansu aa gaye aur kuch ruwasi hokar apne class ke andar tak chali gayi… ladke jo iska virodh karne aage aaye the use Jafar ke dosto ne jo is ladayi ka hissa nahi the, unhone dhamki dekar ladayi shant karane aaye ladko ko door hee rok diya tha.. Sath me wo is par bhi nazar rakh rahe the ki kahi se koyi jaakar kisi teacher ko inform naa kar de. Yaani neeche jaane ke jo do entrance the..waha Jafar ke dost pahredar bankar khade the...

“maar madarchod ko… ruk kyun gaya ” jo vyakti mera gardan daba rakha tha wo Jafar par chillaya


Jiske baad Jafar ne ek aur jhapad mere gaal par mara aur fir uske baad lagatar bina ruke mere gaal ko laal karta gaya… har baar jab Jafar ki paancho ungaliya mere gaal par padti, main puri taqat laga deta khud ko un teeno se chhudane ki lekin sirf unko hila pata tha… is baar bhi jab Jafar ne ek aur baar mere gaal par kaskar ek jhapad chipkaya toh maine aaj tak jitna khaya piya tha, sab milakar gand ka pura jor laga diya aur un teeno ko apne sath ghaseet-te hue ek kadam aage khiskaya…. Lekin khud ko fir bhi nahi chhuda paya… mere ek kadam aage badhne par Jafar thoda peechhe gaya aur jaise hee mujhe jhapad maarne ke liye usne apna hath uthaya maine apna muh khol kar Jafar ke hath ko kaatne ke liye apni gardan ko thoda sa ghumaya…..


Jafar ka hath is baar mere gaal par nahi balki mere naak aur mere muh me pada... Lekin is beech uski jo do ungali mere daant par padi, unko maine turant daanto ke beech fasaya aur apni puri taqat lagakar daanto se dabaya.... Jafar apni do ungali mere muh me fasaye wahi khade-khade chhatpatane laga…. Wahi kudne laga…


“madarchod.madarchod.chhod madarchod... Chhod de re madarchod.”Jafar wahi kikiyane laga aur peechhe se uske dosto ne mujhe maarna shuru kar diya, mera gala aur majbooti se dabana shuru kar diya jiske kaaran majbooran mujhe Jafar ki ungali chhodni padi….


Jafar apni un do ungaliyo ko jise maine daanto se kat-te hue buri tarah chabaya tha, un par kabhi fook maarta toh kabhi fook maarke jor -jor se jhadakta, jisse khoon ki kuch boonde bhi uski ungaliyo se neeche tiles par chhitak jaati. Mujhe apne jeebh par bhi kuch taste hua, shayad wo jafar ki ungaliyo se nikla hua khoon tha... Is dauran mujhe pakadne wale ladke teen me se kam hokar do ho gaye the, kyunki ladayi me ab khoon ka aagman ho chuka tha,jisse shayad ek ladka dar gaya aur peechhe se hee kahi khisak liya. Jafar ko apne karib hee apni ungaliya dabate dekh maine apne shoulder ko mujhe pakade rahne wale dono ladke ke hatho me aur achche se fansaya, taaki neeche naa giru. Wo dono bhi badhiya mere shoulder ko jakadte gage aur jab mere shoulders ekdum thik dhang se fans gaye toh main Jafar ki taraf hawa me kudkar apna pair ghumaya jo seedhe jakar ungali dabaye hue Jafar ke sar se hote hue uske jabde me laga.



“maa chuda rahe ho tum dono… bhosdi walo…”thobde me laat khakar Jafar apne dosto par chillaya… main jaanta tha ki Jafar ab pahle se aur jyada mujhe maarega aur wo mere karib na aaye isliye main ab lagatar kudne laga… wo dono mujhe itna badhiya pakad ke rakhe the ki… mujhe koyi pareshani hee nahi ho rahi thi…


“side se maar madarchod ko…”usi bich un dono me se ek ne Jafar se kaha

“ghuma bhatti ki gand ko…”



wo dono mujhe sarkate hue tedha karne lage taki main kood kar bhi Jafar ko laat na maar saku… par aisa karke wo teeno jaha se neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya shuru hoti thi thi mujhe usi oor khiskane lage ….Jafar kinare se mujhe maarne ke liye aaya… jab se wo teesra meri gardan chhodkar bhaga tha, mujhe thodi chhoot mil gayi thi, warna pahle toh main hilta bhi tha toh meri gardan wo apne hath se dabane lagta.


Jab hum sab seedhiyo ke paas aa gaye toh main fir se ek baar kooda aur kud kar apne dono pair se Jafar ke kamar ko pakad liya aur pura jor lagakar khud ko peeche ki oor khud ko dhakela… jo do ladke mujhe peechhe se pakad kar khde the wo thoda peechhe hue lekin peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi ki wo peechhe ho sake… peechhe toh seedhiya thi….


Isliye Pahle wo dono seedhiyo par ulta sar ke bal gire , fir unke upar main aur mere baad Jafar… hum sab seedhiya par ghisate hue neeche gire…. Neeche se upar jaane ke liye seedhiya jo banayi gayi thi wo do part me divided thi… thodi door ke baad ek flat jagah thi jaha se seedhiyo ko turn dekar neeche ki oor moda gaya tha aur usi ke bich me wo flat jagah tha. Hum sab upar se seedhiyo par girte hue us flat jagah par aakar atke… jin do ne mujhe pahle pakad rakha tha wo buri tarah seedhiyo se gire the… neeche girte samay main, most of the time unke upar hee tha, jiske kaaran most of the time.. Mujhe kuch feel hee nahi hua. fir baad me jab wo seedhiyo par ghisat-te hue, girte hue idhar udhar hone lage tab mera sar aur peeth seedhiya ke sampark me aaya, jiske kaaran meri peeth aur sar me jalan ho rahi thi… Jafar toh audhe muh gira tha seedhiyo par aur waise hee neeche tak seedhiyo se takrate hue sarka tha. Uska sar mere pair ke thik paas flat jagah par aakar ruka aur baki sharir seedhiya par hee slope me tha… wo dono hath aur dono taang pasare audha padha hua hanf raha tha…. dard se karah raha tha


“teri maa ka bhosda...mahtarichod… ”Jafar ke sar me kaske ek laat markar main bola…


Lekin Jafar tas se mas naa hua, wo waisa hee pada raha... Jiske baad maine dusri baar kaskar ek laat uske sar par maara. Chhati chhilne aur sar upar se lekar yaha tak kayi seedhiyo se takrane ke kaaran shayad Jafar me khade hone ki taqat nahi bachi thi. Maine ek baar aur ek laat uske sar par maara, jisse ek pal ke liye uska sharir seedhiyo par kuch upar chadha par agle pal fir neeche khisak gaya. Ladke-ladkiya ab seedhi ke upar jhund banakar hume dekh rahe the… do-char log neeche bhi daude hume uthane ke liye , lekin unke pahuchne se pahle main uth kar baith gaya


"Maa-behan ki chut pyaari hai toh chhuna mat koyi... Maaaadharchodo.. jab main maar kha raha tha toh apni behan chodne gaye the... Ab koyi aage aaya rokne ke liye... Toh.. Inko chhod kar main sabse pahle use hee maarunga aur maarne ke baad Gand me lund daal dunga.......... Literally...."chillate hue maine seedhiyo ki taraf badh rahe ladko se kaha... Jiske baad jo jaha tha, wo wahi rook gaya


Main apni jagah se utha aur baal pakad kar jafar
ko railings ki bich me jo gap rahta hai usi me ghusane laga... Madarchod ko yaha se seedhe neeche fekunga, taaki sar ke bal gire aur mar jaaye... Yaha se sar ke bal girega toh sar foot jayega iska, bheja baahar aa jayega. Marega madarchod ye aaj...... Ghus behanchod.


Maine jafar ka baal kheechte hue railings ke beech usko kheencha Lekin Jafar railings ke bich se paar hee nahi ho raha tha.. Maine uski gardan pakad ke bhi aage dhakela, lekin uske kandhe fir se railings ke bich atak gaye...

"Madarchod........" gusse se main fir chillaya.
maine uske tirachhe pairo ko sidha kiya,is dauran uski peeth ko apne laat se kachara bhi aur fir se use pairo ki taraf se dhakel kar railings ke bich se paar karane ki koshish karne laga... Plan toh railing ke upar se sidhe neeche fekne ka tha mera,lekin mujhme utni taqat nahi bachi thi ki main,Jafar ke bhari-bharkam sharir ko utha saku.


Abki baar bhi Jafar ka kandha fir se atak gaya,isliye ab uske pichhwade par laat maar maarkar main Jafar ko andar ghusane laga... Main gusse me us waqt bhool hee gaya tha ki gap kitna kam hai aur Jafar ka sharir kitna bada... Aur jab mujhe samajh aaya toh uska baal pakad kar use seedhiyo se neeche ghaseeta. . Wo mari hui haalat me apne hath se mera hath chhudane ki koshish karte hue chillaya… uske dost neeche pade-pade sirf apna sharir malte hue flat jagah par daanye baaye ho rahe the.


Maine Jafar ko kheenchkar uske dosto ke bagal me litaya aur jaise usne kuch der pahle mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhapi thi, maine bhi uske gaal par paancho ungaliyo chhua kar ek jhapad maara... fir ek aur.. Fir ek aur... Uske baad ek aur… aur fir uske baad ek aur... jab Jafar ne dono hatho se apna chehra dhak liya toh main wahi uske paas kuch der baithkar haafne laga aur fir jab wapas thodi si jaan mere sharir me aayi toh uske hath me mukka maarne laga, jiske baad usne apne gaal se apna hath hataya aur main fir se use jhapad maarne laga …. Meri peeth aur gardan ka nichle hisse me seedhiyo par ghisatne ke kaaran tej jalan ho rahi thi lekin main Jafar ko maarne me itna magan tha ki mujhe uska anubhav hote hue bhi anubhaav nahi ho raha tha… main kabhi Jafar ke chehre par mukka marta toh kabhi chhati par… fir jab maarte hue mera gussa aur tej ho jata toh uska baal pakad kar uska sar wahi farsh par jor patak deta…. Jaisa ki main pahle bhi bata chuka hu, mujhe gussa nahi aata lekin jab aata hai tab main dayi chod deta hu. Fir saamne koyi bhi ho aur nateeja kuch bhi ho.



wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke karan... Karan...? Karan nahi... Karan toh madarchod hai... Kaaran. Wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke kaaran mere andar itni taqat nahi thi, warna jis hisab se main Jafaar ka sar farsh me patak raha tha , uska sar tahas-nahas ho jaana chahiye tha, use on the spot mar jaana chahiye tha… jo ladke hume uthane aaye the wo meri is harqat ke baad ab aur peechhe hatne lage… ladkiya toh sari rote hue apne -apne class me dubak gayi thi. Baaki ladke.. Wo ab Jafar ke sar se nikalne wale khoon se sane hue farsh ki taraf aana hee nahi chaahte the isliye wo bas pichhe hokar tamasha dekhne lage…. Koyi inform karne bhi nahi gaya, shayad ab Jafar ke sar se rista hua khoon farsh par failta dekh..sabki gand choke ho gayi thi... Koyi kuch karne,bolne laayak hee nahi bacha tha shayad.


“Ranjan ko tune hee marwaya na re mahtarichod….…”kahte hue maine abki baar Jafar ki chhati me kohni marne ka socha taki sale ki pasliya toot jaaye… mar hee jaaye ye bhosdiwala aaj.


kamal hai...? Maine ye pahle kyun nahi socha.... Koyi baat nahi.. Abhi tod deta hoon. Maine apni dono kohni se Jafar ki pasliya todne ke liye apna dono hath upar uthaya.......


...... ki tabhi Jafar ke jo dost waha bagal me pade-pade aankh band kiye apna sharir sahla rahe the… unme se ek ne mujhe peechhe ki oor dhakka maara, Jafar ko maarne ke chakkar me main ekdum kinaare par tha aur dhakka lagte hee main peechhe hua... Par peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi, peechhe toh seedhiya tha...





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Maiya chod di atharva ne jafar ki ...vahhh Bhai tarif ke sabd nhi mere pass , billions view vale song bhi ek bar sunne ke bad dubara nhi sunta par es Update ki recording kerke 5 bar suna bhaishab mja as gya , sala aisa lag rha Mano sab Kuch ankho ke samne slow motion me live telecast ho rha ho ... ekdum natural fight thi ....par es bich vo lawda ved kha gayab ho gya ( sayad meera ki jhante ki counting Kar rha ho ) ....par afsos es incident me atharva ko bhi kafi chot aaii or last vala scan dekhkar lag rha hai ki sayad uski chot me ijafa bhi ho Sakta hai
 
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