Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Aakash.]

How you write so well, there are very few writers whose story touches my heart. You write amazingly, mixing anger, love and jokes. Sometimes I don't even understand what to write, means overall I like everything.
Something similar happens when we don't care about anything, sometimes I wonder what happens later that everything changes. Well remember from Bulla, we had a teacher in school too, he punished me a lot.
Ever since it is revealed that Sanjana has a boyfriend, he has stopped paying attention, all do the same. Poor Atharva tells everything what was in his heart, but Sanjana is unable to understand what he can do.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[Yug Purush]

Ye atharva aur ved ki dosti to ek ideal dosti hai bhai aaj ki duniya me......ek dusre ka saath har chij me dete hai.....aur ek dusre ki bajane me tule rehte hai hamesha......
Inka har ek conversation padhne me ek andruni khushi milti hai aur smile apne aap nikal jati hai......
8th sem me Arman Arun aur yaha Atharva- Ved ......dosti ki aisi behtarin jodis ka creation aap hi kr skte ho bhai....
School me dusre din bhi atharva ki phati padi hai sanjana se ... Kahi dikh jaye to pel na de
Aise dost jo apna mobile dede...milte kaha hai bhai.....ye to apna Ved haijiska sabkuch bada hai.....
Sanjana ke dar se lunch me bhi bahar nhi nikla gaya........
Ye to Riya rose thi jiske naam se ved ne chutiya banaya aur akhir apne jagah se atharva uth gya.......
Bahar achhe se sanjana ke piche se nikalne ka chance tha.....but apne bhattu ke g me alag hi chul machi rehti hai......
Chhed diya laundi ko....fir bhagna pada....caps me TU RUKK kehte hi sanjana ka chida hua chehra samne aa rha tha....
Firse Riya Rose se samna hone ja rha hai.....ab to aur maja aayega

Exotic atoms nahi dekh paaya riya ke chakkar me.. Thanks bhai. Maine aj tak jitni bhi story likhi usme ek jodi raht

nice update ..ved sir to raat ko 3 baje video dekhkar mooth maar rahe the wo bhi sadak ke kinare ..aur ye ved ka net kaise chal raha hai ..lagta hai usne pehle hi kuch jugaad kar liya aur atharva ko nahi bataya ..

maa bahut chalakh hai hero ki ..barabar fasaya painting ke baare me puchhkar ..
par ye sunayana mam ke ghar jaane ke liye itne sawaal ..baaju me hi to rehti hai mam ..

Rat ke 10 baje hai.. Isliye itne sawal....

nice update ..maa ko sach batake aa gaya bahar ..par ye khudko cool dikhane ke chakkar me sanjana ke mobile ki waat laga di .
ab kya sanjana aise hi chhod degi atharva ko 12000 ke mobile ke liye ..
waise jhooth kitna bolta hai ki ved nahi sanjana best friend hai ..

Deception technique aur ek line use kiya tha ekat update pahle ki.. jafar gandfad rahis hai... Toh samajh jao ki

nice update ..ye kya sanjana ne mobile ke paise nahi maange ,,kamaal ho gaya ..aise padosi har kisiko nahi milte .

aur ab atharva chidha bhi raha hai sanjana ko ..
ved to wakai me tharki hai har baat pant ko haath lagane ki firaak me rehta hai ..

waise dosti bahut achchi hai dono ki ,,atharva ne sab sach bata diya mobile ke baare me .

Ab usko nahi batayega to kise batayega

SuperB update

Mohit sir...

For New Most Awaiting dhaga ,Maafi chahunga itni der se aane ke liye

bhai...

Fabulous update bhai
Silky sanjana se catch catch khelne ke chakkar bechari ka 12000 ka mobile ke lag gaye
Ab kya kar sakte hai jo aya hai usko jana hi hai
But jo phat rahi thi atharva ki Silky se ki kahi hath lag gaya to wo uske laga degi but ye bhi thehra bada dhit admi jate jate usko ched kar hi gaya
Ab riya rose dikh gayi pata nahi yaha konsi bakchodi karega ab

Riya ka baap police me hai

you write so well, there are very few writers whose story touches my heart. You write amazingly, mixing anger, love and jokes. Sometimes I don't even understand what to write,

Ari

क्या बेहतरीन कामेडी है इस अपडेट में । कोई बनावटी नहीं । कोई फुहड़ता नहीं । टोटल रियलिटी । हंसने पर मजबूर कर देने वाला ।
नैना जी ने सही कहा इस फोरम के रीडर्स को ये अपडेट तो जरूर पढ़ना चाहिए ।
अथर्व का अपने मां के साथ कन्वर्सेशन.... उसके बाद संजना के साथ मोबाइल वाला इभेंट..... क्या कहूं ! नि: शब्द !
आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ! जगमग जगमग अपडेट !
और ज्ञानी भाई ! आप पार्ट टाइम नहीं बल्कि बहुत ही उम्दा और ऊंचे स्तर के राइटर हो ।

Thank you

matlab kya hai iska.. matlab is ved ko na mili toh ladki mein duniya bhar ke buri lakshan hai.. aur joh ishe bhaav de jaise Sunayana mam jaise devi ho iske liye.. unko leke ek galat shabd bhi koi bol de toh bardast ke bahar hai uske liye .
aur dekho toh dost ka sar foota.. fikar karne ki jagah kya bol raha hai ki sunne mein maza aayega

Yahi to pyar hai

joh bhi ho par raat ko toh saaf saaf hi toh bol diya ki "woh mara to sanjana vidhwa ho jayegi '..
Itna bhi kya dar dar ke jeena.. aise choti moti ghatanaye toh ghati rahti hai life mein

Agar sanjana ne dil pe le liya toh usko bol du kya dil pe mat le muh me le

Oh ho oh ho kya baat hai akhir Kar phir se nazro ke samne aa hi gayi riya rose..
Khair... btw nibedita bahot baad mein aayi uski life mein..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

Nivedita baad me aayi kyun wo ek kahawat hai na.. Kuch.. Ki doodh ka jala bhi... Bas wahi maan lo.

Chut ke chakkar me gaya lawnda

Lawde lag gaye

Mast shuruwat story ki

waise ye sirf ek din ki wapasi to nahi?
anyway... Thanks. For your motivating lines

Yeh kya abhi update nahi aaya..
waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

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thanks a lot friends ​

 

[Aakash.]

Agar sanjana ne dil pe le liya toh usko bol du kya dil pe mat le muh me le

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Chapter- 5: Friend Request

Update-11​

Dusare din Sanjana ke dar se main school thoda deri se... jab prayer-vrayer khatm hua, tab pahucha… teacher ne main gate me late aane ke liye mujhe chamkaya aur main chamak kar seedhe class me pahucha…. Warna Sanjana prayer hall me hee chamka deti, wo bhi sabke saamne + Jafar bhi rahta udhar toh thoda aur power me hoti wo... isliye...

“tu toh aaj nahi aane wala tha… aur tera mobile kyun band hai…”apni jagah par main abhi thik se pahucha bhi nahi tha ki Ved puchh pada

“ghoom gaya… mera mobile…”jaha Sanjana ne kal cup fek ke maara tha , us jagah mathe ko sahlate hue maine kaha “pasar jaa yahi pura, lawde... khisak udhar…”

“Sunayana mam ne hum dono ko sath baithne ke liye mana kiya hai…”

“Sunayana mam ki maa ki… chal khisak…”

“izzat se baat kar… waise Sunayana mam ki maa bhi maal hogi, tune dekha hai uski maa ko...?”

“ dimag kharab mat kar… ”

“kaun pela tere ko subah-subah…? Narayan Singh ne…?”thoda khisak kar mujhe jagah dete hue Ved ne puchha

“papa ki toh night shift hai… yar”

“fir kisne… bata na... maza aayega sunne me…”

“andhere me deewar se takra gaya tha…”

“kyaaa…”

“raat ko apne ghar ki chhat se Sunayana mam ki chhat me kudne ki koshish kar raha tha… next time helmet pahan ke kudunga”

“Sanjana ke peechhe ab bhi pada hai tu…? Mujhe toh laga tha ki usko ab tu dil se behan maanta hoga… Jafar se set toh hai”

“Sanjana toh Jafar se sirf set hai… par Sunayana mam ki toh shadi ho chuki hai… toh kya behan maan liya tune…?”

“achchha toh Sanjana ne dildo fek ke seedhe sar me mara hai.. isiliye seedhe tere sar par asar hua hai aur tu kuch bhi bol raha hai…”

“wo toh cup fek ke mara tha…”jiske baad maine kal raat ki puri kahani Ved ko sunayi…

“mere se maang leta….”

“de fir….”apni jholi failate hue I mean.. apne hath failete hue maine maine uska mobile maanga

“abhiiiii….? Pela jayenge…”

“Riya Rose dikhi kya…?”

“hao…”

“de fir apna mobile…. Friend request bhejunga use…”

“koyi fayda nahi… kal raat use facebook me dhoondh liya… ghanta nahi mili…”

“Riya Rose Jabalpur… dalkar search kiya…?”

“hao… sab search kar liya. Riya Rose Jabalpur... Riya Rose Rewa... Riya Rose Sanskar Valley.... ”

“chal chhod , usi se puchh lunga…”

“chhinar hogi… isiliye id nahi banayi hai ya fir deactivate kar di hogi…”

“she is beautiful , ok . Don’t bad comment her… Fuck you I do… Limit you stay…. all girls fake…..she is reel queen”

“bas-bas pura samajh gaya…. Aur ab chup, bulla aa gaya attenedance lene”



Khauff tha Bulla ka pure school me... koyi baat kar le toh hath me book pakadkar dan-dana ke question puchhta aur fir man-bana ke mast maarta tha. even 12th class walo ko bhi. isliye chup hona pada... sab Sunayana mam thodi hee the, jo muskura kar sirf warning dekar chhod de. Kal raat ki ghatna ab bhi mere dimag me ghoom rahi thi… thoda-thoda mujhe ab aabhas hone laga tha ki main kuch jyada hee bol gaya Sanjana ko... especially wo vidhwa ho jaane wali line. Mujhe wo nahi kahna chahiye tha. shayad...?

humare class teacher Bulla , actually uska naam kuch aur tha.. wo toh ladko ne uska name Bulla rakh diya tha. toh bulla ke aane ke baad main apne hee jagah baitha raha, ekdum shant. Chup-chap. Kisi se koyi baat nahi, koyi ulool-julool harkat nahi Aur meri ye sthiti lunch hone par bhi rahi... main lunch hone par aaj har roj ki tarah class se bahar nahi balki apni jagah par hee baitha raha... kyunki mujhe dar tha ki bahar jate hee Sanjana mera khoon kar degi , wo toh bas isi taak me hogi ki kab main class se bahar niklu aur kab wo mera raktpaan kare.

lekin meri class mere liye bilkul safe the... yaha, yaani humari class me wo nahi aa sakti thi.. kyunki mathematics ke ladke pure school me sabse jyada tharki the aur Sanjana ye baat jaanti thi. Upar se yaha use Ved bhi milta aur un dono ki baat bilkul band thi. Isiliye main yaha safe tha…. waise ajeeb hai ki Ved ne mere kaaran, meri haalat dekh kar Sanjana se gussa ho baat karna band kiya tha , lekin meri baat-chit ab bhi Sanjana se jaari thi... bas pahle ki tarah use main utna bhaav nahi deta. Isiliye aaye din wo mujhe kahte rahti hai ki... main ab bahut bhaav khane laga hoon... ghamandi ho gaya hoon etc.etc. par iska mukhya kaaran naa toh usne kabhi janne ki koshish ki aur naa hee kabhi maine bataane ki koshish ki... bas gadi chal rahi thi toh hum dono chala rahe the, jaise-taise... anyway....

Ab jab main lunch me class se bahar nahi gaya toh Ved bhi class me hee idhar-udhar mandara raha tha, kabhi kisi ke paas jaata aur fir jabran us-se ladayi karke… gali-wali dekar… kisi dusare ke paas pahuch jata aur waha bhi aisa hee karta.. matlab wahi gali-galauch. is dauran wo kuch minutes ke liye ek-do baar bahar bhi gaya aur fir bahar bhi kisi se bahas karke andar aaya….

“kya chutiya log hai be is duniya me… common sense bhi common nahi hai, inki maa ko chod dalu…”khidki ke paas khade hokar neeche jaane wali ladkiyo ko dekhte hue Ved bola…. “abey wo dekh, Riya Rose…”

“kahaaaa….”ye naam sunte hee main turant khade hokar khidki ki taraf bhaga”kaha hai Riyaa...”

“yahaaaaaaaaaa…..”apne dono hath lund ki taraf dikhate hue Ved bola “ 1 point..”

“kya gandu aadmi hai yar tu…”bolkar main wapas jaane laga

“aaj match khelne chalega…”

“ FIFA 10 khelte hai na… aaja ghar par… main jaa raha paani peene… tu chalega..?”

“ja… ja… Sanjana apne class ke bahar hee dildo leke baithi isi taak me hai ki kab tu bahar nikle... aur abki dildo fek ke sar pe nahi maaregi, balki seedhe………”

“ it is time to use one of my deception technique….”roomal nikalkar muh baandhte hue maine kaha aur fir apni class se bahar nikla…


Sanjana apne class ke bahar chup-chap khadi thi, uske ird-gird usi ki class ki teen-char ladkiya bhi thi. Wo sab railing ke paas khade hokar neeche ground me khelte-kudte, vicharan karte vibhinna prakar ke ladko ki prajatiyo ko dekhne me magan thi aur yahi mere liye sahi mauka tha… kyunki wo sab toh railing se chipki hui thi aur unke peechhe pura corridor khali tha... unki taraf badhte hue ekat baar mera dhyan railing se beech-beech me touch hote unke kamar ke nichale bhag par bhi gaya... unme se ek toh beeche-beech me apne kamar ke nichle bhaag ko railing se ragad bhi rahi thi. khair, maine jald hee apna dhyan unke kamar ke us nichle bhag se hataya aur aage badha.

Main dheere-dheere ek kinare chalte hue aage badha. Class se nikalte waqt mera shuruati plan Sanjana ke peechhe se chup-chap nikal jaane ka tha. lekin jab main waha uske paas pahucha toh mere dimag ne , mere shuruati plan ne ekdum... achanak se... U-turn le liya aur maine Sanjana ko chhedne ko socha… main chahta toh bade aaram se waha se nikal sakta tha, par pata nahi kyun… mera mann kiya ki main Sanjana ko chidhau…. Maine roomal neeche gardan ki taraf khiskaya aur peechhe se Sanjana ko prempurvak aawaz di…

“Silky Sanjana…”

“hmm…”wo peechhe mudi

“aur kaisa hai tera nawa mobile, mast kaam kar raha hai na…? main kya bolta hoon, main abhi neeche jaa raha hoon aur jab main yaha se thik neeche aa jaun toh tu apna naya mobile neeche fek kar mujhe dena... fir main upar fekunga... mast catch-catch khelenge... kal ki tarah”

“TU RUKKK….”

“bewkoof samjha hai kya apni tarah, jo yaha rukunga… ”turant waha se bhagte hue maine kaha….

Bhagti toh Sanjana bhi mere peechhe, par jab mujhe bhagta dekh sabki nazar mujhpe padne lagi toh embarrassed hone ke khayal se usne apna ye vichar tyaag diya aur gusse se mujhe sirf bhagte hue dekhti rahi… yadi use jalane ka yahi kaam maine School ke baahar kiya hota ya fir yaha is waqt sirf hum do hee hote toh dauda leti wo mujhe aur uske hath me jo kuch bhi aata... jaise itt, patthar wo sab mujhpar fek ke maarti... jise main catch karke use fir uksaata.

Daudte hue main arts, commerce, bio ki class se hote hue seedhiyo se neeche utarne laga aur jab kuch hee seedhiya bachi toh wahi haafte hue, lambi-lambi saans lete hue seedhiyo par ek kinaare baith gaya.

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“ye kaun baitha hai…”

“yeee.. ye Atharva hai, Mathematics ka….”

Apna naam sunte hee main ekdum tankar baith gaya… bole toh ekdum straight. kaha tha na maine, ki... yaha aisa koyi nahi hai, jo mujhe na jaanta ho… Nursery se ek hee school me padhne ka yahi fayda hai.

Kuch ladkiyo ka group shayad seedhiyo se neeche aa raha tha aur mujhe baitha dekh unme se kisi ne aapas me mere bare me puchha aur unme se hee kisi dusari ladki ne uska jawab diya. Pahle toh baithe-baithe pose dene ke chakkar me main peechhe nahi muda... matlab lagna chahiye ki ladke me attitude hai.. matlab unko sun ke bhi main unsuna karta raha aur intezaar karne laga ki ab wo aayengi.. ab waha pahuchengi... ab mujhe paar karke apne peechhe ke bade-bade exotic atoms ke darshan karayengi... lekin pata nahi kaha rah gayi wo sab... bas aawaz hee rahi thi , itni der se... isliye aakhir me majbooran mujhe hee peechhe mudna pada aur jaise hee main peechhe muda toh ek pal ke liye meri aankh chodiya ..chaundiya..? chaundhiya ... ye sahi hai. toh jaise hee main peechhe muda , un ladkiyo ke samuh ko dekh ek pal ke liye meri aankhen chaundhiya gayi kyunki ladkiyo ke us samuh me Riya Rose bhi thi … ek pal ke liye uske saundarya aur chehre ki hansi aur chamak ne mujhse kuch bhi samajhne aur dekhne ki Shakti maano chheen li thi. ab muijhe samajh aa chuka tha ki kisne thodi der pahle sawal kiya tha.. ki... ye kaun baitha hai...

ये तो सच में बड़ा ही खुराफाती लड़का है अथर्व..... संजना को परेशान करने का एक भी मौका नहीं छोड़ता है ।
लेकिन उसकी हरकतें प्यारी भी लगती है ।
स्कूल और कॉलेज में अक्सर लड़के आपस में अपने टीचर के नाम को बिगाड़ कर दुसरे नाम से पुकारते हैं ...बुल्ला ! क्लास टीचर ।
संजना से बात नहीं बनी तो अब रिया रोज के पीछे पड़ा है । जरूर इसके साथ भी कुछ न कुछ शरारती हरकतें करेगा और फिर से यहां भी उसका दिल टुटेगा ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।

 

[Yug Purush]

Update -12​

isliye aakhir me majbooran mujhe hee peechhe mudna pada aur jaise hee main peechhe muda toh ek pal ke liye meri aankh chodiya ..chaundiya..? chaundhiya ... ye sahi hai. toh jaise hee main peechhe muda , un ladkiyo ke samuh ko dekh ek pal ke liye meri aankh chaundhiya gayi kyunki ladkiyo ke us samuh me Riya Rose bhi thi … ek pal ke liye uske saundarya aur chehre ki hansi ne mujhse kuch bhi samajhne aur dekhne ki Shakti maano chheen li thi. ab muijhe samajh aa chuka tha ki kisne thodi der pahle sawal kiya tha.. ki ye kaun baitha hai...

Riya aaj bhi same to same kal ki tarah dikh rahi thi, matlab waise hee baal, wahi chamakte hue gaal aur kal ki hee tarah mere pure antarman ko madhosh kar deni waali uski khaal. bas antar sirf itna tha ki... aaj uske sar par wo gol topi nahi thi… maine apna gardan dheere-dheere ek oor jhukaya aur saamne se aati ladkiyo ko muskurate hue dekhta raha aur bas dekhta raha… jis par wo sab bhi muskurayi aur aapas me ek-dusare ko tali dekar, dhakka dekar , aapas me khusur-fusur karte hue hasne lagi…. Wo sab jab mere paas pahuchi, jab mere paas se gujri toh siway Riya ke un sabne mera naam lekar mujhse yaha aise baithne ka karan puchha… par maine sab ko ignore kiya matlab lagna chahiye ki ladke me attitude hai aur ektak sirf Riya ki taraf dekhta raha…. Riya ko dekhne me main itna magan ho gaya tha ki Riya ke jaane ke baad bhi main usi taraf deewar ko bahut der tak dekhta raha, jis oor se wo kuch der pahli aayi thi. yahi maankar ki Riya ab bhi wahi khadi hai … aur jab lunch khatm hone ki bell baji , tab mujhe hosh aaya...

“arey...MC”Main waha se utha aur jaldbaji me jaha RO laga tha , us oor bhaga…

Hamara school bahut lamba tha... matlab main gate ke baad ek playground , fir do manjila imarat, jiski upari manjil me 11th & 12th waalo ki class lagti thi... ye sab, yaani wo graund aur ye do manjila imarat thoda high elevation me tha , baki structure ke muqabale .... jin seedhiyo se abhi utarkar main yaha baitha tha , waha se kuch doori tak flat surface hone ke baad fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya bani hui thi... jo is do manjila imarat ke peechhe bane ek aur ground se jodne ka kaam karta tha aur ground ke charo oor waha bhi classes lagti thi aur un classes ke beecho-beech R.O. laga hua tha... ab jaha R.O. tha, waha se fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi aur fir bada sa ground aur uske baad fir uske chaaro taraf classes. 3500 launde-laundiya aise hee thodi padhte the. itna bada aur bhayankar school hone ke bawjood school do shift me chalta tha... taaki pure students sama jaaye. Seedhiyo se neeche utarkar main dusare waale ground me aaya aur dusare waale ground se thodi door me maujood R.O ke paas pahucha... waise ek R.O. upar bhi laga tha, par wo sirf teachers ke use ke liye tha ya fir jab ye waala kharab ho jaaye tab humare liye.... aur ek sabse neeche. Par waha tak jaane me aur fir paani peekar itni seedhiya chadhne me band baj jaati thi. Isliye ye Ground-2 ke paas wala R.O. humare liye better option tha + sabse jyada ladkiya bhi isi me aati thi toh ise best bhi kah sakte hai.

R.O. ke paas is waqt kafi bheed jama thi… jiska ek kaaran lunch time ka khatm hona bhi tha aur sab apni-apni tanki full karke, bottles me paani bharkar class me baithna chahte the… main wahi thodi door me rakhi ek bench me baith gaya, jaha humare school ka ek peon bhi aksar free hone par baitha karta tha… ya fir ye kahu ki students paani ke liye aapas me naa lad le… isliye bhi wo baitha karta tha. sahi suna... paani ke liye lad naa le. Jo haal bhavishya me paani ko lekar puri manav prajati ka hone wala hai, uski ek chhoti si jhalak aksar do-teen din me hume wahi dekhne ko mil jaati thi.


“aur bhaiya, kya haal chal….”mere wahi bench me baithne par wo peon mujhse puchha

“bas badhiya bhaiya… apun rapchik… ”

“ye... sar pe chot kaise lagi…”

“gir gaya tha, kal raaaaaaat meeee…”bolte hue aakhiri ke do shabdo ko maine thoda lamba kheencha aur fir ekdum se ruk gaya… kyunki jo jhund mujhe kuch der pahle seedhiyo ke paas mila tha , wo bhi yahi tha…. Yani Riya Rose bhi yahi thi aur is bheed me paani ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi…

“ye lunch time khatm hote hee sabko pyaas kyun lagti hai… ye bhi ek mystery hai… ab mujhe hee dekh lo…”peon ki taraf aankh maarkar maine ek ishara kiya… waise bhi ab jo main karne waala tha wo main ek-do baar already kar chuka tha….

Maine jaise hee aankh maari, peon thoda ghabra saa gaya... main bhi ghabrata yadi uski jagah hota toh... par, hakikat me main, main tha aur wo..wo... naa toh wo meri jagah tha aur naa hee main uski... isliye...


“ bhaiya, principal sir ne toh mana kiya tha na aapko ki… kisi ko RO ka paani nahi peene dena hai….”waha jami bheed ki taraf chillakar main bola

“mujhe toh kisi ne kuch nahi kaha…”

“arey kya baat kar rahe ho... jis tank ka paani is R.O. me aata hai, usme saanp mara hua mila tha subah….wo bhi sada hua... yuckkk... pata nahi ye janne ke baad bhi ye log kaise paani pee le rahe”abki baar main thoda aur tez aawaz me bola “ Isliye Principal sir ne sabke class me information pahuchwayi thi ki sabhi students upar staff ke liye jo RO laga hai, waha se tank ki safai hone tak paani piye”

“kya bola… saaaaanppp…”saanp ka naam sunte hee waha ikattha hui bheed me se ek ne mujhse puchha... uski haalat aisi thi, jaise saanp ne sach me use das liya ho.

“haan.. saanp.... wo bhi kariya wala….”

Saanp ka naam sunte hee waha mauzood do-teen ladkiya turant ochhar di aur ladke khanste hue paani apne andar se bahar karne lage… kuchh toh turant apne muh me ungali daalkar ulti karne ka prayaas bhi karne lage…. Is dauran RO ekdum khali ho gaya tha, studentes side ho chuke the aur main turant apni jagah se uthakar Riya ke hath se bottle chheena aur RO se paani bharne laga…

“par ye paani kharab hai…”Riya aise mayoos hokar boli, jaise use bahut joro ki bhookh lagi ho aur ration ki line me ghanto lagne ke bawjood bhi ration na milne par ek aam insaan ki hoti hai… matlab wo sach me bahut pyasi thi....

“sab sahi hai, Riya… wo toh bheed ko kam karna tha… isliye…”bottle bharte hue main dheere se bola aur fir jab bottle bhar gayi toh aaa karke matlab upar-upar se Riya ke bottle se paani peene laga

“areyyy… I always drink from that bottle…”mayoos aur aashcharya ke sath Riya mujhse boli...

“so what….no problem”main ek pal ke liye ruka aur fir se paani peene laga.

Meri pyaas bujh chuki thi par fir bhi main paani piye jaa raha tha taaki kuch pal aur aise waha khada rah saku... use dekh saku aur wo mujhe dekh sake...

“ with my lips touching that bottle…”

“WhAaAaAAAaaaaaAAAAAaaaaAaAaAAaaaaaaaAt….????????????”

“you shouldn’t have used that bottle, it’s used one…”fir se mayoos hote hue Riya boli



iske baad maine kuch nahi kaha aur chup-chap RO se full bottle bharkar Riya ko pakdaya… uski saheliyo ko toh jaise bhari maza aa raha tha in sabme… wo sab khilkhila ke hanse padi thi aur main… apna muh lekar waha se chup-chap khisak liya…

Kaha facebook id magne gaya tha aur kaha abbbbb……… ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai….



Main chup-chap class me aaya aur physics ke pure class me chup-chap hee raha…. Aaj toh Sunayana mam ko dekhkar bhi main excited nahi hua aur Sanjana ka jo mobile foda tha, use bhi main lagbhag bhool chuka tha… mere dimag me is waqt sirf aur sirf Riya ke shabd gunj rahe the… ye thi toh chhoti si baat , par ye kand mere sath hua tha aur mujhe pura school jaanta tha, isliye ye kand bhi kal tak pura school jaan jayega… aur fir meri hooting hogi.…. Nursery se ek hee school me padhne ka yahi nuksaan hai.

Inhi sab me main itna kho gaya ki Sunayana kab chali gayi aur next class me Bhagwan Das Gupta ji kab langdate-langdate chemistry ki class lene aa gaye hume pata hee nahi chala…. Yani.... mujhe pata nahi chala….

Bhagwan das ji, apni tarah ke eklaute teacher the… matlab antique piece. wo the toh param gyani, par dimag thoda khiska hua tha… kabhi bhi kuch bhi puchh lete the aur apne class ki alag se attendance register banaya hua tha. pure desh me shayad hee us samay aisa koyi school raha hoga jaha 5th class me students attendance dete rahe honge.. par humne diya hai. wo bhi har roj. hum bhale hee 12th me pahuch gaye the, par yadi unka dimag satakta toh wo pel bhi dete the… fir chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki….



“tu khade ho, bhains jaise sharir wale…”ek ladke ko ungali dikha kar unhone kaha

jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me gunji , main apne khayalo se wapas aaya…. Ye confirm karne ke liye ki kahi mujhe toh khada hone ke liye nahi bola hai, Gupta ji ne...? kya pata kisi ne shikayat kar di ho ki Saanp waale kaand ki. Par wo ladka main tha.. Gupta ji ne mujhe bhains nahi kaha tha...

“present sir…”khade hote hue wo ladka bola

“attendance nahi le raha main… chal ek sawal ka jawab de…”

“chuda, beta aaj ye… ” daant dikhate hue Ved fusfusaya…

 

[Badshah Khan]

Great bhai
Riya ki pyaas ab shayad ache se bhuj gayi hogi
BC kya tarika hai pani bharne ka sabko hata kar
Ab gupta ji class mai achuke hai dekhte hai ye kitne bade wale antique piece hai
Keep writing
Keep posting

 

[Aakash.]

Riya is very beautiful, Our hero has gone mad and is lost in thoughts. By the way, Atharva jokes excessively and today he fooled everyone. I would have enjoyed it more if Gupta Ji beat Atharva.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[harshit1890]

Update 5 - Riya rose

Gyani bhai ultimate, bole to ek dum ultimate fadu update the. Aisa lag raha tha jaise mein vakai mein 2009 ke kisi school mein hun. Vaise to skul time mei kabhi kisi laundiya se baat nahi ki lekin aisa lag raha tha mein ATHARVAA ke sath hi khadela hun. Kya describe mara hai apne Riya ko lekar maza aa gaya. EK number ka screenplay tha pura bhai. start se lekar end tak jo sama bandha purane dino ki yaad aa gayi. Atharva ved ke bich batein fir ved ka bich mein aa jana skul ke harami launde na khud pata patte the aur jiski patt rhi hoti thi use chedte the sab flashback ki tarh samne aa gaya... Ek number update the gyani bhai ye wala...Maza hi aa gaya....

Awesome awesome awesome bilady awesome writing bhai..... Reading nxt....

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 6

Bhai ..... Bhai ... Bhai... Bhai.... Ky likh rahe ho ye... Meko laga tha update 5 awesome thajo ki actually mein tha lekin isne to sabhi hadein paar kar di gyani bhai Mein pure update mein hansa hun aur itna sirf tab hansa tha jab 8th semester padh raha tha sahi mein apka koi jawab comparison nahi hai. Infact apke as pas tak koi nahi hai jo is tarah ki lehkhan ko pesh kar sakta hai. Sahi mein aap number one se bhi uppar koi number hai to le lo... This update by far is the best one sirf isliye nahi ki kyun ki likha bahut acha gaya hai balki isliye ki iska jo humor apne pakda hai sach mein mujhe aisa laga ki mein us humor mein kahin kho gaya hun, from the start till the end it was magnificent, totally out of the box aap kabhi kabhi lekar atte ho jaise is kahani mein aap naya pan lekar aye aur use shlok ke uppar apne bayan kiya hai.

“जिसने चूत ना चखिया, चख के लिया ना चाट l

बिन दही का दही बड़ा, क्या जाने सम्भोग ललाट ll”

“kya bake jaa raha hai...”jab main bahar se daudkar andar aaya toh Ved apne aap me mantra-mugdh aankhe band kiye hue kuch chut-chaat kar raha tha....

“भावार्थ : सेक्सी साहित्यकार यहाँ पर सेक्स के दौरान चूत चाटने के महत्व पर प्रकाश डाल रहे है.”

mei pura update quote kar deta lekin kya kya kahunga unpar vo samajh nahi paunga par ye jo apne nayapan laye ho ye apne aap mein likhne men bahut dimag chahie jo aapne itni badiya tarah se lagaya hai ki kya kehna....

Gyani bhai mein is update ko tukdon mein bant kar bataun to kya farak padta hai aap to jante hi ho kya likha hai lekin fir bhi kahunga Apne jis tarah se sunayana mam ko describe kiya, ved ka answer dena, wahan ka reaction aurkhud atharva ka question puchna usscene mein ultimate bhai.. Ek ek chiz ultimate likhi hai apne... Ise kehte hain ek perfect story aur perfect update, neat and clear starting se lekar end tak.... Maza aa gaya gyani bhai... u r out of this world bhai... Apko to book likhni chahie sahi mein.... sala market hila degi... thanks for giving us such a amazing amazing story once again... U r bilady awesome awesome awesome awesome bhai

Reading next.....

 

[Moon Light]

Update 10 & 11

Esaa Kau Kartaa Hai
Phone Todne Ke Bad Usko Satana..

Wese Ek Honhar Student Ke saare Gud dikh rhe Athava me

Bina school Life Me masti kiye agar pass huye to kya Pass Hona

Riya Rose Ke Liye Sanp Tank me Sanp Btaakr bheed ko htakar uski bottle bharna aur Peena
Aur fir pataa lgnaa ki ye single use ke liye h


Kitna funny likhoge

Note : - Busy hu Fir bhi pad rhi taki pichhe naa rh jau