Romance Three Girls of My Life

[harshit1890]

Update - 40

Hot choclate.... Tabse mein soch raha tha ki is chapter ka ant kaisa hoga.. Kya chapter ka naam riya walle scene par tha laga tha wahin hoga.. lekin is update ne meri vo confusion dur kar di.. aur ek chiz jo mein kehna chahunga vo ye hai ki Gyani bhai.. aap sun sun kar bore ho gaye hoge lekin mein keh keh kar nahi hua... Aap kahani nahi bana rahe ho.. aap ek feeling de rahe ho humlogon ko aur ye dikha rahe ho ki aap jo sochte ho wahan tak hum kyun nahi soch paate.. Hot choclate is the most common chapter name you have given to any chapter in ur story.. but uske piche jo ek beautiful kahani apne likhi hai na uski feeling bilkul alag hai...

Last time mujhe sanjana par gussa aya ki usne aisa kyun kaha lekin ab laga ki ladki ke man mein kya hai... Atharva is not similar to armaan but he is shit as armaan in love.. Aap kahani mein vo meaning dete ho jo shayad apke har chapter/parts ko perfectly define karta hai.. ki apne ispar likhna chaha... ye samjhana cha aur actually mein wahi likha aur wahi samjha gaya... Bahut muskil hota hai ki jo writer samjhana cha raha ho vo samajh aa jaye.. wo feeling understand karna hi mushkil hota hai isliye kehte hain ki samjhane wale ki galti hoti hai, samjhne wale ki nahi aur apke case mein aap vo kami kabhi chhodte hi nahi...

It is the best end of this chapter aur mein ise jada kuch keh nahi paa raha hu... Apne jis andaaaz mein likha hai.. jo jahan hona chahie apne uska roop badal kar ek alag aur behtar andar de diya jo ki apne aap mein hi bemissaal hai... Mein apki har kahani ko yaad rakhta aya hun.. aur ye kahani mjhe hamesha isliye yaad rahegi kyun ki is kahani mein ek aisi love story hai.. jo sab kuch theek hone ke baad bhi adhuri hai.. I don''t know or can't predict the end but ... ye kahani bhi ab ek jagah le legi life mein... yakeen mano aap.. Mein apne future mein agar bache hue mere to apki 8th semester se lekar Atamkami aur 3 girls of my life jarur padwaunga... Absolutely... amazing bhai...

 

[harshit1890]

Lagta hai aapke aage likhne se pehle apun... real time achieve kar lega... waaoo...

 

[mashish]

Waiting

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 41

Garib gang se mujhe laga tha ki kuch ladai hone wali hai.. par asal mein ladai to competition ki nikli jo ki kahani ka ek hot topic ban baitha hai... acha hai school mein aise competition dekhna aur padne mein bada maza ata hai aur apko bolne ki jarurat nahi hai ki aapne use likhna kaise hai... gaaand faad har bar ki tarah Pehle mujhe laga tha ki competition skip karoge aap lekin ab to aisa hype bana diya na bhai apne... ab mujhe pura competition padne ko mile mein to bas yahi chahta hun... Maza aya jis tarah apne shot-cut mein sab samjha diya aur bio wallon ka kissa sunaya vo itna uchal rahe hain bol do bina physics ke bio nahi ho sakti to itna uchale na... kyun ki agar physics nahi hoti to gravity ka pata nahi chalta aur gravity ka pata nahi hota to bio walle karname kaise hote... friction ke bare mein kahan se malum hota Khair principal aur school staff bas izzat ke piche mare rehte hain ye katai sach baat hai... har schul student ke sath hota tha mere sath bhi ho chuka hai..ye nahi kar sakata ise mat lo fir jhantein jala di thi mene sabki Abhi to ranjan pilayega ya nahi pata nahi lekin jo excitment mein lakar apne kahani ko roka is update mein katai.. jo roz padh rahe honge unse intezar kaise hua hoga pata nahi.. mujhse to hota nahi bhai... ultimate bemisaal har baar ki tarah...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 42

Bhai yahan to apne khel hi badal dala...pehle do sawal ka jawab na dene par main samajh gaya ki yahi hona tha lekin baad ke do sawalon ka jawab dene par hila dala re ranjan ne.. don't judge the book by its cover.. ye dialog apne adhe update mein kya satik baithaya hai... Ye teacher logon ko guru kaha jata tha ek waqt par fir ye sab badal gaye.. aaj kal adhe se jada ka yahi haal hai, kuch to ache hote hain hamare tym bhi the par ye bachon ke chattu aur favorite banane walle kaise hote hain apne uch koti ka varnan dete hue hume ye samjha diya... Matlab itna reality de dalte ho aap kahani mein ki sala lagta hi nahi mein kahin padh raha hun aisa lag raha hai mein sala isi skul mein padh raha hun aur meri knowledge mein hi hai ye sb... Apratim se bhi uppar bhai... Bio wali teacher bahut chalu hai.. jaffar kuch pakka deta hai inhe ye salle uske piche pagal hai... aur bhai bilkul na rkhna mini ko aisa attitude lekar zindagi mein itni badi thokar khayegi na ye... Bhai bada hi interesting update tha.... atharva kya kehne wala hai ye apne is update ke akhri mein chhod diya.. par har line ke baad aisa lag rah tha ki sala update nahi likh rahe ho aap.. ek incident likh rahe ho vo bhi ek dum real life se juda.. maza hi aa gaya is update ko padne ke baad... ye wala chapter mujhe lag raha hai aisa hi hai.... bhai.. hatts off to your writing and again kya soch soch kar likhte ho aap... gazab...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 43

Kisi mahan vyakti ne kaha hai ki abhmaan sabse bada hota hai...aur apne ek dum sahi tarah se is rambanndh ka istemal karte hue saxena ji ke dimag mein goal kar diya Lekin mein bazooka ka intezar kar raha tha par vo aya hi nahi... uske pehle mini aa gayi aur jaise apne may i come in ka vishleshad diya na bhai sahi mein hanste hanste baithe baithe lait gaya mein... ahahahaha....

may I come in sir….”apne chut ke aage apna dahina hath karke Mini ne andar aane ki permission maangi.

Bhai... gazab... gazab.... Ye best vishleshad tha andar ki permission ko dikhane ka...

Fir uske baad jaffar to side role ka gunda hai.. vo mere ko ek dum third class villian lag raha tha par jab aaj usne atharva ko samjhaya use proof ho gaya... Matlab aapne ye sabit kara hi diya.. ladka indirectly dhamki de rela hai hero ko par bhool gaya hi vo hero nahi hai fir bhi abhi hero hi hai.. to baja dega... Bhai gazab aap kahani ko itne amazing tarike se modte ho idhar se udhar.. matlab har baar excitment si bani rhti hai ki ab kya hoga.. ab kya hoga.. yar ye apki writing hi hai.. jo aisa kar sakti hai... kamal ho bhai.. bemisaal...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 44

Ye school walli intensitty.... aur ladkiun ko lekar gunda-gardi.. ladka ladki ki possivness.. ye sala...drama rehta hai skul mein.. apunich baki side role ki tarah spectator ban kar rehta tha apne tym par lekin bhai apne intensity full on set kar rakhi hai.. ye to mein samajh gaya tha ki vo atharva ke pas lakar hi sanjana ko khada karega par apne intensity aisi banai ki kya ho raha hai ye nahi lag raha.. jaffar chipkata to nahi chanta sanjana ko varna pakkka ladki hath se jati aur vo launda jab tk lega nahi tb tak raipta dega nahi

Par kuch highlights hai is update ke jispar tavzo dena chahunga

Waise bhi differentitation ka ek formula fek ke marunga naa toh tera puri Bio prajati differentiate ho jayegi, aise chhote-chhote tukdo me ki chil

Agar koi mujhe aise maths sikhata to maa kasam... sikh hi jata... Bahut hi umda... line thi bhai

naa rahega gand, naa hoga bawasir... Matlab naa rahega baans, na bajegi basuri.

Are bhai bhai bhai maa kasam.... hansa hansa kar ye admi kisi din maar dalega mujh jaise halke dil walle insan ko

Bhai dialouge bazzi mein apka koi jawab nahi aur na hi apke aage koi hai aur na aapke piche.. aap itni aage ho ki sala line mein lagne wala abhi tak line wali jagah mein pahuncha hi nahi hai... Always be a legend sir...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 45

Gyani bhai.... Outstanding... Marvellous.. Standing Ovation... for this story.... and specially for this update.. Ye update abhi tak ka ki kahani ka sabse tod update tha.. bhai.. kya nahi tha isme? Sab kuch... chutiape se lekar sanjana ki bevkufi se lekar uski samjhdari sab kuch ek hi set.. mein all done... Bhai mein apki jitni tarif karun utni shayad kam padh jaye... Bhai... Mindblow kar diya apne.. sahi mein.. Kahan se shuru karu aur kahan par khatam karun kuch samajh nahi aaa raha... Jahan sanjana ko ek jhakte mein bevkud dikhaya ki vo gali kha kar bhi jafar ke piche thi jo ladkiyan aksar karti hai aur dusri uski samjhdari jo vo atharva ka plan samajh gayi thi.. matlab sab kuch aisa tha mano pre-planned ho aur fir baad mein kiya dhakama... Mira wala... usne to bhai parkache uda diye dimag ke.. Maths ki goti gottte tod kar honi thi is baat par aisa laga jaise sala ye kya hua ? aisa khatarnak twist mrela apne bhai.. kasam... se Atmkami ke twist ki yaad aa gayi.. sala har time ek banda itne alag style se kaise twist de dala hai aur vo bhi baton baton mein.. na hi koi planning na koi plotting... Bas action... ek jhatke mein.. kaam tamam....

Atharva ne jo planning ki thi vo sirf wahi janta tha aur jis andaz mein apne likha na bhai that shows you are the DECEPTION KING... EK taraf atharva ko pareshan dikhaya ye lage ki ye sab bas flow ka hissa hai lekin baad mein hum sab ko deception ke andhere mein fenk kar gate band kar diya aur khud lage aap nachne... :dance: Bhai ... it was absolute ... world class writing....

Chapter ka naam the garib gang.. start aisi hui ki competiion par hogi aur mei wahi umeed lagaye baitha tha... lekin apne to mere level ko aise toda jise akal ek baar fir ayi ki aapke level tak to soch nahi sakte... trio ka matlab ye climax scene tha jise khud Atharva ne banaya aur ved, ranjan ko involve kar liya, aisa master minded bande ko ved aur ranjan ke idea ki kya jarurat? Kya vo un dono ke sath bhi to deception deception nahi khel raha.... Bhai sach mein is logic ko batane ke liye mere pas shabad kam padh jaye... lekin aapki is kahani mein jhatke kam nahi padh rahe...

Gyani bhai so far the best DECEPTION of this story.. first time apne is kahani mein decieve kiya hai is tarah se hume aur ye akhri nahi hai mujhe malum hai.... Thank you so much for this awesome writing guruji...

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 46

Are bhai... bhai.. bhai... bhai.. bhai... isee aage kya bolna hai kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha.. Apki narration bhai top notch hai yaar... sahi mein.. matlab ek line padte hue dusri line mein kya ho jaye yahi chiz koi anuman nahi laga sakta.. Is update mein itne highlight the ki ek ek ko quote bhi nahi kar sakta...

Sabse pehle to vo ganna bhai maan gaye apko.. what a remix you have given to the amazing song.... ek engineeer hi aisa kar sakta hai.. Itna badiya apne tune ke sath lyrics banaya tha na bhai sahi mein mera dil kar raha tha apko khade hokar salute karun... par kiya nahi

Uske baad Ved ki ek aur sad story lekin vo sad nahi thi balki aisa likha na apne sahi mein maza aa gaya... sanajana aur riya ki entry par atharva ka palatna ki vo dukhi hai aur uske baad jab use malum hua ki painting ki baat hai to usne fir ved ko sach bhi bata dia ye choti choti chiz aap hi soch kar likhte ho bas... mene kahin pada hi nahi aisa aur na hi socha hai.. It was marvellous bhai.. matlab aap aisi stories par apne badshaahat hassil kar rakhi hai... maza aa gaya aur end mein jo fansaya aur bich mein jo time travel likh kar sirf ek baat kahi vo to main highlight tha update ka.. ise badia aur behtarin kuch nahi ho sakta aur na hi hoga jo mein ab padh raha hun aisa har baar kehta hun aur ap har baar kuch le atte ho Ab kya karu.. jo padta hu sala lagta hai ise acha kya hoga aap use beat kar dete ho kya kre banda fir kahan jakar sochee...

Awesome se bhi uppar tha bhai... maza aa gayaa....

 

[harshit1890]

Update - 47

Ab mein thak gaya hun bhai ek hi baat keh keh kar.. kahan se laun nayi baat :banghead2: Bhai matalab itna satik kaise likh sakteho? Starting se lekar end tak ek dum satik kahin kuch jada nahi kahin kuch kam nahi koi altu faltu ka roz chapata nahi bas satik ek dum sidhi baat aur kya dhoya hai atharva ko...maza aa gaya bhale hi vo ved ki taraf se ho ya fir sanjana ki taraf se... Itna sahi apne ved ki taraf se dialouge dilwaya hai ki pure update ka meaning de diya ki ved ne kyun sath nahi dia... Vo atharva se chahta tha ki choose kare jo ki usne kiya... Ye baat to mujhe pehle se hi malum hai ki atharva chutiya hai aur usne sanjana ke hint nahi samjhe islye vo jafar ke pass gayi aur abhi tak atharva nahi samajh paya khair uski galti nahi us tym koi nahi samjhta until unless ladki khud se na bole aur ladki khud se kaha bolti hai ye to fact hai

Gyani bhai it was purely a gold of a update... matlab maza aa gaya.. mere pas samay kam hai lekin ruka nahi jaa raha aur yahan tak padh baitha kyun ki ek ke baad ek aise update aa rahe hain jo chhodne ka man nahi kar rah.... na jane kaise... kaise real time par log wait kr gaye sala mujhse to hota hi nahi... thodi khushi bhi hai is baat ki ek sath padne ko mil raha hai Par bhai... sach mein aapne to kamal hi kar diya is kahani mein... 8 semester ke baad agar skul/college life ke uppar koi kahani likhi gayi ya yaad rakhi jayegi to wo yahi hogi.. kyun ki iske aas pass bhi is genre mein koi kahani nahi hai ... a legend is writing legendary story aagin