Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)

[Rahul0087@]

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[Rahul0087@]

Badhiya update tha wesa shyad surya ny senoy ko na mara ho hosakta hy woh senoy ki hi karistani ho ab dekhty hy k Surya us ane wale nae Immortal ko kesa khatam krta hy

Baise ho sakta hai ki senoy kisi tarah se Bach gya ho. To aage jarur kahi na kahi apni ungli jarur ghusedega. And Baki us unknown ka Kya seen hai ye bhi us update me thoda to pata chal hi jayega....


Dekhte hai aage Kya hota hai.....



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[Rahul0087@]

Gajabyaar.....

Sahi kahun to aaj ke update m bas :pic: ki kami lagi...
Warnawarna update kamaal ka tha....
Aur kabhi-2 lagta h ki harry he dusra immortal h....

Baise Bhai pic to daal du me lekin Kya hai na ki jisprakar ka imagination Mera hota hai. Baisi Kya usse milti julti pic mujhe milti hi nahi hai. Isliye me usme jyada time barbaad nahi karta dhundne me. Baki Harry KE liye to aapne Jo baat kahi hai. Vo to mujhe bhi lagta hai ki isme bahut sachhai hai. Hamesha kisi na kisi musibat me fasata hi rehta hai Surya ko. Baki dekhte hai aage Kya hota hai..........



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[Akil]

UPDATE 53










Me us disha me bad gaya jaha Harry ne use dekha tha. Thodi hi der me main baha pahuch gya. Ab Harry ne jise dekha tha. Vo dheere dheere aage bad raha tha. Or me uske peeche peeche chal raha tha. Ki agar ye bakai me bahi hai to kuch Ulta seedha jarur karega. Then me use pakad lunga. Isliye me chhipte chhipate usi KE peechhe chalne laga. Vo bhi baar baar peechhe dekh raha tha. Sayad use bhi mere hone ka aabhas ho raha tha. Lekin use me dikha nahi raha tha. Vo kafi der Tak bhatakta raha lekin use koi nahi dikha jisse vo bhi frustrated hone laga Tha. Jisse Mera doubt bhi pakka hota ja raha tha ki yahi hai sayad vo.kafi der Tak jab usne kuch nhi Kiya to me bhi boor hone laga ki ye kuch karega bhi ya nahi. Akhir kaar vo ek chhote se Ghar ke Bahar ruka and uske gate ko knock Karne laga.kafi der Tak vo knock karta raha. Then kisi ne darwaja khola.ab mujhe bad intjaar tha ki ye bakai me bahi hai to kuch to karega hi. Ya fir ye isi ka Ghar hoga to seedha andar Chala jayega. Meri najar usper bani Hui thi. Darwaja kisi aurat ne khola tha. Or pehla doubt clear ho gya ki ye iska Ghar nhi hai kyuki dono bahi khade hoke bate karne lage the.tabhi pata nahi usne Kya Kiya usne us aurat ko ek hath se uper utha liya. And vo kuch karne laga. Then Maine dekha ki kisi prakar ki energy us aurat SE nikal Kar seedhe us aadmi me Jane lagi. Me confirm ho gya ki yahi hai vo. Me duadta hua gya or speed se hi usko ek tagda punch Diya jisse vo aurat neeche gir padi. Or sayad vo behosh ho gyi thi. Lekin jinda thi. Or vo aadmi thoda door jhatka khake gir gya tha. Vo jaldi hi sambhala or khada hua. And usne mujhe dekha and Maine use.




Unknown- Kon ho tum or mere or mere sikar ke beech aane ka Matlab.





Main- Teri mout hu me. Bas itna hi kafi hai Tere liye. Ab tu Bata ki Kon hai tu. Or ye masoomo ko Kyu maar raha hai.or aaye kaha se ho.






Unknown- sale mere bare me janne ki Badi jaldi hai tumhe.




Main- ab Kya karu mere pass faltu ka time nahi hai. Isliye Jo bhi hai jaldi batado. Verna baad me koi mouka nahi milega.




Unknown- time to mere pass bhi nahi hai faltu ka. Samjha Bache. Ab chal koi na vo aurat na sahi tu hi Mera sikar banega.




Main- Jara bana ke to dikha.




Maine abhi itna hi bola tha ki. Usne bahut hi jaldi react karte hue apne hato SE koi energy type mujh per chhod di. And me sayad iske liye ready tha. Maine bhi jaldi hi react Kiya and side ho gya. And vo energy seedhi Jake usi Ghar ki deewar per lagi. Jisse baha per ek bada sa chhed ho gya




Main samaj gya ki iske sath yaha ladna Matlab or logo ki jaan ko khatre me dalna hoga. Isiliye isko haha SE kahi sunsan me Le Jana hoga.




Unknown- ohhho Kya baat hai bahut hi fast ho tum to. Ab Maja aayega. Teri energy to mere bahut kaam ayegi.





Main- aayegi to lekin pehle Meri energy leke to Bata.




Maine abhi itna hi bola tha ki pata nhi jab mujhe ek jabardast punch laga.and me thoda door Jake gira.or thodi door Tak ghisat ta hua gya.




Unknown- fast ho lekin mujhse jyada nhi.bache.




Main jaldi khada hua or uski taraf full speed se bhaga and same vo bhi Meri hi taraf bhaga full speed se. Ham dono kisi or ko to dikh hi nahi rahe honge. Ye baat confirm thi. Jaise hi vo mere karib aaya. Usne ek punch banaya and us punch me bahut hi jyada energy mujhe dikh rahi thi. Lekin jaise hi usne mujhe marna chaha me jaldi se neeche slide Karne laga and uske pairo per Maine apne pairo se baar kardiya. Jisse vo jhuka and Maine turant hi uske main point per ek or jabardast punch jad Diya. Vo use pakad Kar baith gya. Maine der na karte hue uske thobde per ek kick maardi.jisse vo bhi slide karta hua thoda door ja pahucha. And Maine usi ki taraf fir se doud lagai and usi KE seene per jump karke gira. And uske thobde ko punching beg bana Diya. Itne speed se punch mare ki sale ki halat kharab hone lagi.



Me abhi use Marne me hi busy tha. Ki pata nhi usne kab mujhe ek jabardast punch mara mere pet me. And me fir se udta hua 20 ft. Door Jake gira. And mere pet me bhi kafi damage ho gya tha. Me abhi sambhalta usse pehle hi usne Mera hi tarika mujhper aajma Diya. Yani ki dushman ko sambhalne ka mouka hi nahi Dene Wala. Or usne fir se apne hatho SE bhayankar energy ko nikala or mujhper chhodne laga.and Meri halat kharab hone lagi.vo energy bahut hi jyada powerful lag rahi thi. Usne mere pore suit ko jagah jagah SE faad kr rakh Diya. And jaha suit tha baha to kuch nahi lekin jaha suit nahi tha baha per mere body per vo energy kafi damage karne lagi.and vo bhi Sala band hone ka naam hi nahi Le raha tha. Me thoda behosh as hota ja raha tha. Meri aankhe band so hone lagi thi. Us energy se. Tabhi mere lences ne apna Kamal dikhaya or meri body ko auto mode per leliya. Then mere reflexes kafi tez ho gye. And unhone mujhe speed se us energy se door hata Diya. Lekin usne foran hi Meri jagah per fir se baar Kiya lekin is baar me ready tha. Yani ki mere lences ready the. Unhone mujhe fir se bacha liya. Usne isi prakar Kai baar mujhper hamla Kiya lekin har baar lences ne mujhe bacha liya. And or jab Tak ye sab chalta raha tab Tak me fir se recover hone laga. And karib 1 min. Me thoda normal day hogya. Or Meri body fir se mere control me aagyi. Or ab Mera para bhi Chad sa gya tha. Isliye Maine doud lagana suru Kiya or thodi hi der me main bahut hi tez speed se doudne laga. Lekin me kahi bhag nahi raha tha balki usi aadmi ke Charo taraf gol gol chakkar laga raha tha. Mere lagatar doudne se Meri energy mere handgloves me aayi or Maine doudte hue hi lagatar usper vo energy ko fekna suru Kiya. Ab Meri energy ki baat karu to seedhi seedhi aasman ki bijli keh sakte ho aaplog. Jo agar kisi insan per gir Jaye to vo bhi rakh ban jata hai.lekin is sale per to koi khas asar hi nahi ho raha tha. Maine usper Kai baar energy ko feka or use laga bhi lekin use keval ek chhota sa jhatka hi lagta.jab mujhe laga ki isko jyada Fark nhi pad raha hai. To Maine apni energy ko apne punch me store Kiya or speed se hi uske thobde per ek jabardast punch jad Diya. Jisse vo uchhal Kar ek deewar se ja laga. And jasie hi vo deewar me laga baise hi Maine apni sari energy ko ek sath uske uper chhod Diya. Jaise usne abhi mere uper Kiya tha. Or jaise hi Meri energy use lagi. Maine Jo dekha vo kafi khatarnak tha mere liye. Kyuki Meri energy use nuksan nahi pahucha rahi thi. Balki uski takat ko or bada rahi thi. Or mere dekhte hi vo Hawa me udne type laga and Meri energy uske pori body ko or bhi jyada takat pradan Kar rahi thi. Ab mujhe bakai me nahi pata tha ki me ab Kya karu. Fir bhi Maine foran hi usko energy Dena band Kiya and speed se baisa hi ek or punch bana Kar use Marne KE liye aage bada. Lekin sale ne abki baar mujhe pakad liya. And Kya pakda.





Unknown- thanks Bache tune to mujhe or bhi takatbar bana Diya. Kya baat hai. Beta ab samaj me sahi gya hoga ki me Kya chhez hu. Beta Teri Kya is dunia me koi bhi energy Mera kuch nahi bigad sakti. Kyuki me sabhi energy ko sokh leta hu apne andar. Samjhe. Fir chahe vo kisi ki life energy ho ya fir koi or energy. Or ab me baise hi Teri sari energy ko sokh lunga apne andar. Baise hai tu Kamal ka. Lekin mujhse jyada nahi.


Me uski pakad me hi tha fir bhi Maine bola.


Main- Abe tu hai Kya sale. Or kaha se aaya hai.





Unknown- chal theek hai tujhe Bata hi deta hu. Mera naam hai. KAAL.


or me aaya hu isi Earth se lekin Meri timeline alag hai. Me aaya hu. 2100 se. Or tujhe ye bhi Bata deta hu ki me aaya Kyu hu. Kyuki tu to baise bhi Marne Wala hai.


To sun me aaya hu is pore earth ko Nast karne.maine 2100 ko pori tarah se Nast Kar Diya hai.ab baha per kuch bhi nahi bacha tha. Isiliye me peeche ki time line me travel karne laga Taki jaise hi yaha per yaha per sab ka ant hoga. Baise hi Baki time line apne AAP hi mit jayegi.





Main- lekin ye sab karna Kyu chahte ho. Isse tumhe Kya milega.





Kaal- mujhe bas badla chahiye is pori manav jati se. Or vo me lekar hi rahunga. Ab isse jyada tujhe kuch nahi batane Wala. Ab Marne ko ready hoja.





Ye kehke usne Meri energy ko sokhna start Kiya. Or me dheere dheere bebas sa hone laga.lekin me itni aasani se to nahi mar sakta tha ye Tay tha. Isiliye maine ek baar or apni energy ko store karna start Kiya apne hatho me. And Mera pora sarir kisi bhatti ki tarah garm hone laga. And Meri leyaers bhi kafi bad gyi. And use koi fark hi nahi pad raha tha. Vo mast Meri energy ko sokhna me laga hua tha.


Tabhi Maine ek jabardast punch uski Dadi me Mara or punch itna bhayanak tha ki Sala 20 ft. Tak uper ko Chala gya and dhadam se neeche aake gira. And me bhi uski pakad se aajad ho gya and bahi per gir gya.and ab sayad mere me himmat hi nahi bachi thi aage kuch bhi karne ki.and vo bhi us punch se thoda damage ho gya tha. Lekin itna nahi ki fir se khada na ho sake. Vo fir se khada hua and Meri taraf aage ko badne laga. Maine apni himmat ko fir se joda or khada hogya.




Kaal- bahut jaan hai tujhme. Mujhe kafi Maja aaraha hai. Tujhe marne me. Aisi hi sakte jaan ko Marne me bahut hi jyada Maja aata hai mujhe.





Main- Maja to mujhe bhi bahut aata hai. Teri jaisi satkeli khopdi ko Marne me. Ab dekh tu Mera jalwa.




Maine apni sword ko active Kiya lekin abhi nikali nahi. Or uski taraf fir se bad gya. And vo bhi Meri taraf badne laga jaise hi me uske pass pahucha Maine apni sword ko nikala and jaise hi usne apna hath aage ko Kiya mujhe Marne KE liye. Maine uski kalai per takwar ki Chala Diya. Or ye jhatka use bhi kafi bhari pada kyuki uski kalai ek alag jagah per Jake giri.or me ek jagah per doudte hue ruk gya.and mudke uski taraf dekha. To vo is waqt thoda dard me tha.





Kaal- ye tune theek nahi Kiya.



Ye kehke usne apne dusre hath se mere uper fir se energy ko chhodna start Kar diya. Or Maine uski energy me aage apni sword ko kardiya. Or sari energy usi takwar me samane lagi and kuch usse reflect hoke dusri disa me Jane lagi. To mujhe ek idea aaya. Maine apne aaju baju me dekha to mujhe ek badiya sa lohe ki dhal type ek bada sa kuch dikha Jo ek deewar per Tika hua rakha hua tha. Maine apni takwar ka reflect us taraf ko Kiya to jaise hi vo energy us lohe ki dhal se takrai. Or jaisa Maine Socha tha baisa fir kuch nahi hua kyuki vo dhal to us energy se bahi KE bahi pighal gyi.me samaj gya ki aise kaam nahi banega. To Maine apni talwar ko aage karke usi ki taraf fir se badne laga. And vo peeche ko hone laga.maine thodi speed ka Sahara liya uske ekdam SE karib aagya. And jaise hi uske karib ko hua vo energy Meri takwar SE reflect hoke seedhi usi ko lagne lagi. And ab Mera idea kaam Kar gya. Kyuki usi ki energy usko bhari nuksan pahuchane lagi. Jisse usne turant hi energy ko fekna band Kar Diya. And apne Kate hue hath se mujhe dhakka Diya jisse me thode peeche ko ho gya. Or jaise hi sambhal Kar Maine use dekha to vo baha nahi tha. Maine use Charo taraf dekha speed se bhag Kar dekha lekin vo ekdam SE gayab sa ho gya.




Main- Sala bhag gya.




Harry- sir aap theek to hai.




Main- pata nahi yaar me theek hu bhi ya nahi.filhal to hotel chalte hai bahi check karenge.




Harry- ok sir. Chaliye.




Maine fir se doud lagai lekin Meri speed bahut hi Kam so ho gyi thi. Me jyada tez nahi Doud pa raha tha. Lekin theek thi Jo bhi thi. Me aise hi aaram aaram se badte hue hotel Tak pahuch hi gya. And apne suit ko bapis se watch me fit karke main fir se normal kapdo me aagya. Lekin halat fir bhi kharab thi. Me hotel me anadar gya and dheere dheere apne room me pahuch hi gya. And baha pahuch Kar seedha gir gya apne bed per. And jaise hi gira baise hi Meri aankhe band ho gyi and uske baad to mujhe kuch yaad bhi nahi raha ki Kya hua hai.











To be countinue………..

Toh woh unknown earth ka hi hai ek alag timeline se bole toh future se hai
Waise lagta toh nahin ke jo senoy maara gaya hai woh asli hoga.....
Us unknown urf kaal ne toh surya ki hi khatiya khadi kar di aur woh bhi buri tarah se ab dekhte hain aage aage kya kya hona hai
Kaal kyon prithvi ko khatm karne par tula hai kis baat ka badla chahiye use?

 

[janu2016]

Gajab yaar...
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Yeh wali fight ab tak ki best fight thi...

 

[Sharad97]

Jabardast update
Raat mein ek aur update

 

[Pintupaul]

Dhamaka

 

[MEHAR1234]

Badhiya update tha yeh kaal to bohat hi taqatwar nikla agar surya ka paas lens na hote to woh maar chuka tha

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[The king]

Bhai 1 request he aap index bana do