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Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)

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Great Update.
Excellent Change...
Phle lag rha tha ki Vo jo banda aaya h vo senoy ka roop le lega..
But Vo immortal Type lag rha h jo ki logon ki Life Energy SoKH leta hai...
Dekhte hai Hero Kya Kar Pata Hai...
 

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UPDATE 52










Thand bahut hi jyada lag rahi thi to Maine apne beg SE ek chhoti se bottle nikali and thode thode sip lete hue aage badne laga. Harry mujhe guide Kar raha tha ki kis taraf Jana hai.karib 2 ghanto Tak lagatar chalta raha tab Jake us jagah pahuch jaha Harry ne use locate Kiya tha. Ab jab baha pahuch to dekha ki baha to kuch bhi nahi hai. Charo taraf barf aalwa kuch bhi nahi hai. Maine sabhi jagah apni najare ghumayi lekin kuch nahi Mila baha per. Maine apne lences ko x-ray mode per Kiya and sari jagah ko scan karne laga. To sabhi jagah sir barf,Pani or pathar KE kuch bhi nahi dikha





Main- Harry Miya yaha to kuch nahi hai.




Harry- sir Maine use yahi aaspass hi dekha tha. Ab ya to vo yaha SE kahi bhag gya hai. Ya fir apne Naye sikar KE liye gya hai.





Main- tum aage ka area check karo. Me tab Tak yahi dekhta hu.




Harry- ok.




Maine fir se bahi dekhna chalu Kiya to or dheere dheere aage badne laga. Ki sayad kahi aage chhipa hua ho.



Me aage badta hua ja raha tha. Lekin kuch nahi Mila tabhi ek Meri najar ek chattan ke pass ruki.




Main- Harry ye chattan ke pass Kya hai.




Harry- sir koi cave lag rahi hai. Sayad isi cave me ho vo.




Main- Chalo dekhte hai.



Maine apni watch SE apna suit up Kiya and us cave ki taraf bad gya.jaise hi us cave ke darvaje per pahucha to usme Maine andar jhakne ka prayas Kiya lekin andar kuch nahi dikha kyuki bahut andhera tha. To Maine apne lences ko night mode per Kiya jisse mujhe thoda thoda dikhne laga. Or me usme andar bad gya.



Main- Harry dhyan rakhna. Agar kahi bhi lage ki yaha hai to batadena.




Harry- ok sir. Me aage badne laga vo gufa kafi gehri lag rahi thi. Me kafi der Tak usme chalta raha lekin uska ant hi nahi AA raha tha. Or usme itne to Bat the ki Kya batao.



Me aage badte hue ja raha tha ki aag mujhe kuch aahat sunai di.




Main- Harry aage hai koi.




Harry- ha sir sambhal Kar. Koi jaanbar na ho.




Main- ok bro.


Me fir aage bada or Maine bilkul bhi halchal nahi ki. Me Kam se Kam aawaj aane ki kosis Kar raha tha.me aage badta hua gya or jaise hi baha per pahucha jaha se aawaj aayi thi to dekha ki baha per vo aadmi to nahi hai. Balki kuch or hi mere samne khada hua tha.




Harry- sir yaha se bhagne me hi bhalai hai filhal.




Main- sahi keh rahe ho Harry lekin bhage kaise. Agar isne ek chhalang lagai to hi mujhe daboch lega.





Harry- sir abhi usko aapke hone ka ehsas sayad nahi hua hai. Verna abhi tak to AAP per jhapat hi padta.




Main- beta inki aankho me ready lence lage hue aate hai. Inhe raat or din me eksa dikhta hai. Or dekho ye mere samne hi khada hua hai. Or mujhe hi dekhe ja raha hai. Matlab usne mujhe dekh liya hai. Lekin ye hamla kyunahi Kar raha hai.






Harry- aapki baat sahi hai sir. Ab ye hamla kyunahi Kar raha hai iske bare me to yahi Bata sakta hai.




Main- to usse puchhna.




Harry- me kaise puchho aap hi puchho.




Main- me to pichhlu. Lekin mujhe WHITE LION ki language nahi aati hai.




Harry- to mujhe kinda aati hai.




Main- to jaldi seekh le.



Harry- mujhe naahi seekhna hai or na hi usse baat karni hai.




Main- Harry tu bahut pitega sale hamesha faswadeta hai.




Harry- sir ye sab baad me Kar Lena abhi kuch sochiye





Main- Ek kaam karte hai aage badte hai. Agar isne hamla Kiya to bhag chalenge. Or agar nhi Kiya to Mata Rani ki kripa.




Harry- jaisa aap theek samjhe.




Uske baad Maine uske side se aage badne laga. Bilkul dheere. Bina koi aahat kiye. Or Kamal ki baat to ye hai ki vo mere se najre hata hi nahi raha tha. Lekin mujhper hamla bhi nahi Kar raha tha. Pata nhi kyu. Bo bahi baitha raha. Or me usse bagal SE uske peeche aagya or Maine flash speed se aage ko thodi Doud laga di.



Me thodi door Jake ruka. To mudke Maine peeche dekha to vo lion baha nahi tha. To Maine chain ki saas li. Or me fir aage bad gya.or is aar me doudte hue hi aage badne laga. Or Maine isi prakar pori cave paar Kar di. Lekin. Mujhe vo aadmi nahi dikha. Us cave me. Or ye to achha tha ki is cave ka ik dusra Rasta bhi tha. Verna fir us Mufasa KE darsan ho jate.





Main- Harry ham kaha aagye hai.




Harry- pata nhi sir.




Main- Abe to check Kar na.




Harry- sir. Check Kar raha hu to hamari location ek pahad per hi dikh rahi hai. Lekin ham uske uper nahi balki neeche hai.





Main- Abe bheje me ghuse kuch aisa bol na.




Harry- sir bole to ham ek pahad KE andar hai. Jara uper dekhiye hame aasman nahi dikh raha hai.




Main- Abe ye kaise sambhav hai. Ek itni badi gufa hai. Or usse ham ek aise jagah per aagye hai Jo ki ek bade pahad ke andar bani Hui hai.




Harry- bilkul sir.




Main- to fit ek selfie to banti hai.




Harry- bilkul sir.



Maine apna mobile nikala or bahi per selfie lene laga. Alag alag pose me. Uske baad Maine apna mobile andar rakha and us jagah ko dekhne laga ki ye jagah hai Kya. Maine baha per aage badkar Charo taraf dekha. To mujhe baha per ek chhota SIMBA bhi mil gya.




Main- Harry lagta hai ye us lion ka Ghar hai or yaha usi ka parivar rehta hai.yr dekho usi ka bacha lagta hai or socho ki bacha yaha hai to MAA bhi yahi kahi hogi.




Harry- bilkul theek kaha aapne sir. Mere khayal se to yaha SE nikallena chahiye. Verna aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki ye sir us akele ka nahi balki uske jaise bahut sari ka Ghar ho.




Main- yaar to mujhe Dara mat. Or us pori jagah ko scan Kar achhe se. Or Bata yaha Kya my hai.




Harry-vok sir.






Thodi der baad Harry bola.




Harry-sir yaha per ek bhi insan nahi hai. Is pori jagah per. Kuch bhi nahi hai. Sivay Lion KE.




Main- kitne hai.




Harry- sir kamse Kam 10 to honge hi.




Or unko sayad aapki khushbu bhi aachuki hai. Isliye isi taraf bad rahe hai.




Main- pakka na yaha koi insan nahi hai.




Harry- 100% sir. Yaha koi bhi insan nahi hai.





Main- to nikalte hai yaha se.



Harry-jaldi.




Maine cave ke andar ki taraf speed se doud laga di. Or Meri kismat achhi thi ki jaise hi me us jagah SE hata baise hi ek see ne mere uper chhalang lagai thi. Vo to achha hua ki me hat gya Verna sabki aaj dawat ho jati. Me seedha doudta hua baha SE aage badne laga. Tabhi Maine samne dekha ki vo gufa Bala set bhi isi taraf doudta hua aaraha hai.sayad use apne sathiyo ka sandesa mil gya hoga.


Halaki me bahut hi tez speed me tha to use dikhne ka to chance hi nahi tha me usi KE baju se aage nikal gya or vo andar ki taraf hi doudta hua Chala gya or me baha se Bahar ki taraf hi badta hua aagya. Thodi hi der me main us cave se Bahar khada tha. Me thoda or doudte hue aage bada and ek chattan ke side me khada hogya or us taraf dekhne laga.ki kahi vo Bahar to nhi AA RAHE hai.





Harry- baise sir aaj pehli baar aapko jaan bachate hue bhagte dekha hai. Bada Maja aaya.




Main- Abe Harry me bhag to raha tha lekin apni jaan bachane bhi or sath me unki jaan bhi.




Harry- ohhho.




Main- sahi keh raha hu. Agar me unse ladta to kuch to mere hatho se pakka ghayal ho jate. Jo me nhi chahta tha. Kyuki ye matarani ka ilaka hai. Or yahi unke bahan ko chot pahuchana mujhe gabara nahi.





Harry- baise aapki daleel theek hi hai. Lekin ek Sach to yahi hai ki AAP baha SE bhage.





Main- Harry beta vo insan nahi hai. Vo lion hai. Achhe achho ki pent kharab ho jati hai. Agar ek baar samne dikh bhar jaye.me to fir bhi unke bagal SE nikal Kar aaya hu.samjhe. or ab agar tune fir SE ye baat dohrai to tujhe yahi barf me dafna Kar me nikal jaoga.




Harry- ok sir ab nahi bolne Bala.




Main- that's better. Baise bhi tum us insan ko to dhund nahi paye or bade aaye mujhse kehne bale.




Harry- ok sir ab nahi bolunga. Ab nikalte hai yaha se. Nahi to kahi or bhi jaanvar na aajaye samne. Or andhera bhi hone Wala hai.




Main- Chalo badiya hai. Hamare sikar ke bahar nikalne ka bhi time ho gya hai. Isliye Charo taraf wifi faila do. Kahi bhi agar thodi si bhi gadbad dikhe to foran mujhe batao.




Harry- done sir.



Uske baad Maine usi disha me Doud laga di jis taraf se me aaya tha. Or karib 20 sec. Me main road per aagya.or Maine Charo taraf dekha to sabhi taraf sannata hi chhaya hua tha. Or mujhe pata bhi tha ki yaha usko sayad hi sikar mile. Isliye vo sayad sehar ki taraf hi aayega. Isliye me bhi sehar ki taraf hi bad Gaya. Or sehar me Maine thodi hi der me sari galiya dekh li. Sabhi jagah per log gharo me ghus chuke the. Jo ki achhi baat thi. Ab intjaar tha to uske aane ka. Ab dekhna ye tha ki vo aata hai ya nahi. Isi intjaar me main. Ek jagah baith gya and uska wait karne laga ki kahi SE uski koi khabar mile to me aage Badu.



Tab Tak Maine Socha ki ask senoy ki lash mili hogi sabko dekhe Kya hua uske baad.




Maine apne mobile me local news channel lagaya or usko dekhne laga. Jisme bahi khabar aarahi thi ki aaj falana hotel me ek lash mili. Jisko pora Jala Diya gya. Uska chehra pehchanne me layak bacha hi nahi hai. Uske pass uska aadhar card Mila hai. Jisme uska naam Ashok mention hai. Or uska address Delhi ka hai. Ye sayad yaha chhuttiya manane aaya tha. LEkin kisi ne iski itni marmam hatya kardi. Uske seene me itna bada hole Mila hai. Jisse sabhi paresan hai ki ye kis chhez se hua hoga. Pata nahi. Police me pore city me high alert jari Kar Diya hai. And kisi bhi ajnabi aadmi his per shak Kiya ja sake use foran satark rehne ko kaha hai. And uski jaankari turant hi police ko Dene ko kaha hai.




Main- badiya Mara gya. Ek tension to Kam Hui. Ab isko dekhta hu. Ki ye Kya cheez hai. Me bahi ek building ke Terri's per baith gya. Ab khule me baith to gya lekin yha bahut hi jyada thand thi. Halaki Mera suit mujhe andar se garmahat de raha tha jisse mujhe jyada thand nahi lag rahi thi. Lekin thodi thodi to lag hi rahi thi




Karib 2 ghanto baad karib 10 baje Harry ne kuch bola. Halaki vo bhi sure nhi tha. Lekin Maine jyada chances na lete hue us taraf bad gya…….








To be countinue………..
 

Rahul0087@

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Great Update.
Excellent Change...
Phle lag rha tha ki Vo jo banda aaya h vo senoy ka roop le lega..
But Vo immortal Type lag rha h jo ki logon ki Life Energy SoKH leta hai...
Dekhte hai Hero Kya Kar Pata Hai...

Bilkul sahi Socha aapne Bhai vo pehle se hi immortal type lag raha hai. Ab sakl chahe kisiki bhi ho Kya Fark padta hai. Abhi aage dekhiye or bhi Maja aayega.....



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Rahul0087@

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Ye Kya hua Bhai ak hi jhtke me Khtm.. BTW nice update

Thanks Bhai..............



Ab Bhai jaisi situation bani usi hisaab se jaldi nipta Diya. Verna agar thoda tehalka machta baha per to logo me Surya ki sayad galat chhabi ban sakti thi. Isliye usne chuochap ye kaam Kar Diya. Baki ab dekhte hai aage Kya hota hai.........



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Rahul0087@

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too good dear
Waise agar yeh senoy ki chaal thi maza aane wala h aur agar nahi to double :D

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Yeh biwi wali baat to real life ae ittefak rakhti h :D

Bahot badiya ab aage dekhtwin h kya hota h :superb:

Bilkul sahi kaha Bhai aapne ye biwio wali baat to real life se si ittefaq rakhti hai. Baki aapka Maja me Kam nahi hone dunga. Chinta na Kare. Aapko double Maja jarur aayega......



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Rahul0087@

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Bhai ye toh dhasu kam ho gaya kab tak senoy jaise surya ko pareshan karte phirte

Waiting

Bas Bhai isi liye usko nipta Diya. Befaltu me ek tension bante ja raha tha.ab dekhte hai ki aage Kya hota hai...




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Rahul0087@

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Nice update bhai or mujhe kuch locha lagta hai senoy itani aashani se marne wala banda nahi hai

Bhai ab agar koi locha hoga bhi to bo to baad me hi samne aayega. Abhi filhal to hame yahi maanke chalna hai ki senoy mar Mar chuka hai. Baki jaisi jiski kismat......



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Badhiya update tha wesa shyad surya ny senoy ko na mara ho hosakta hy woh senoy ki hi karistani ho ab dekhty hy k Surya us ane wale nae Immortal ko kesa khatam krta hy
 

janu2016

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Gajabyaar.....
:applause:
Sahi kahun to aaj ke update m bas :pic: ki kami lagi...
Warnawarna update kamaal ka tha....
Aur kabhi-2 lagta h ki harry he dusra immortal h.... :D

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