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Sci-FI Surya The Protector. (WAR Between Two Immortal.) (Completed)
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Badhiya update
Aur ye toh gambhir samasya hai surya ke samne
Uska suit ab jyada kaam aaye
Aur ye toh gambhir samasya hai surya ke samne
Uska suit ab jyada kaam aaye
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Nice update bhai or ye jo koi bhi hai uska koi tod jaldi nikalo or ho sake to electro ko surya ke sath mila do
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Bhai aaj maine ye story yaha tak padha
Bole to jabarjast
Kya story hai maza aa gaya
Aage ka intjaar
Bole to jabarjast
Kya story hai maza aa gaya
Aage ka intjaar
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UPDATE 51
Ham aise hi bate karte hue hotel Tak pahuch gye. And baha bhaiyo ne sabhi KE liye alag alag kamre book Kar diye the. Isliye me apne kamre me gya jaha Radha Mera hi wait Kar rahi thi.
Radha- Kya hua tha baha per.
Main- pata nhi yaar abhi Banglore me bhi baise hi kuch log mare the. Ab yaha bhi suru ho gye.
Radha- baise Kya lagta hai tumhe.
Main- mujhe to lagta hai ki koi in sab logo ko maar raha hai. Lekin kaise vo ye sab Kar raha hai ye nahi pata.
Radha- Matlab ab yahi rukoge.
Main- ha rukna padega iski the Tak Jane KE liye.
Radha- ok to me bhi yahi rukne wali hu.
Main- abhi jarurat nahi hai. Kyuki mujhe bhi pata nhi hai ki khatra bada hai ya chhota. Isliye tum Kal hi sabke sath bapis ja rahi ho.
Radha- nahi me nhi ja rahi. Samjhe. Me yahi rukne wali hu.
Main- maan Jai Meri baat. Kyuki yaha mujhe pahado per Jana padega. Or me tumhe kaha kaha Le Kar jaoga.isliye tum abhi Chalo jao. Agar mujhe kahi tumhari jarurat padegi to me tumhe bula lunga.
Radha- Kya yaar har baar tum aisa hi karte ho or mujhe bapis bhej dete ho.
Main- ab Kya hai na ki tum ab Meri wife ho or usse bhi badkar mere bacho ki Amma ho. Isliye me tumhe kisi bhi prakar KE khatre me nahi dalna chahta.
Radha- bade aaye Amma banane wale.
Main- maan Jao na pls.
Radha- theek hai lekin agar mujhe Jara bhi aabhas hua ki tum apna khayalo nhi rakh rahe theek se. To me foran hi yaha aajaogi.
Main- done.
Radha- theek hai to me Kal chali jaogi.
Main- thanks Meri jaan. Achha abhi to Puri raat Baki hai. Or thand bhi kafi hai.
Radha- to
Main- to thodi germi dedo mujhe.
Radha- nahi dungi.
Main- yaar ye Kya baat Hui.
Radha- ye bahi baat Hui. Tum mujhe apne sath nhi rehne dete. Isliye me bhi ab tumhe kuch nahi karne Dene wali.
Main- dekho yaar thand bahut hai. Kuch to reham Karo mujh garib per.
Radha- ahaha bade aaya garib Banda. Agar tumhare jaise garib hone lage to me Dua karungi ki sabhi tumhare jaise hi garib ho.
Main- vo sab karti rehna lekin abhi to kuch socho.
Radha- bola n ek baar. Ab bo baatcheet or chup chap so jao
Ye kehke vo bistar me ghus gyi. And me dekhta hi raha. Ab biwi ke samne kiski chali hai Jo Meri chalti. Isliye me bhi chupchap usi KE bistar me ghus gya or usse chipak Kar so gya.
Next day. Me utha or dekha to sabhi Jane KE liye ready the. Maine sabko bye bola. And Bhai or Rony sabhi ko leke seedha Mumbai nikal gye. And baha per bakio ko chhod Kar seedhe gaon nikal Gaye. Bakio ko leke. Sabhi ne ye 2 din khoob injoy Kiya tha. Or kafi thank bhi Gaye the isliye aaj bhi sabhi aaram hi karne wale the. Bahi me ready hoke baith gya
Main- to Harry Miya koi update hai ya nahi.
Harry- sir uski to koi khabar nhi hai. Lekin senoy Saab aaj Jammu me dikhe hai.
Main- badiya Sala ye bhi apne hi kisi maksad ko pura karne aaya hoga.
Harry- sayad usi aadmi ko apni taraf milane KE liye.
Main- ho sakta hai. Tum kisi tarike ki baat Kar rahe the uska Kya hua.
Harry- ha sir maine try Kiya lekin kuch pakki jaankari to nahi mili lekin ek doubt jarur utha hai.
Main- kaisa doubt.
Harry- sir mujhe lagta hai ye Jo Banda hai ye bhi kisi alag time line ya fir kisi alag dimensions se hi aaya hai.
Main- lekin kaise kahi per koi portal khula hi nahi hai us din KE baad.
Harry- sir uske baad nahi khula lekin vo portal to khula tha jisse electro bapis gya tha. Or hamne usper jyada dhyan nahi Diya lekin vo portal kuch jyada hi der Tak khula hua reh gya tha. Jisse mujhe Puri aasanka hai ki ye mahasay bhi usi portal se Bahar nikle hai.
Main- koi or clue.
Harry- sir ek to yahi ki sabse pehli ghatna Banglore me hi Hui thi. Or jis din electro bapis gya tha. Usi din se start Hui thi. Isi liye Mera sabse pehla doubt bahi ja raha hai.
Main- yaar Harry tumhari baat me point to hai. Baise tum recheck nahi Kar sakte ki baha per exactly hua Kya tha.
Harry- sir Maine check karne ki kosis ki thi lekin server error Bata raha hai us time per. Lagta hai vo portal khulne ki bajah se kuch fault aagya hoga.
Main- to ab Kya karna chahiye hame.
Harry- sabse pehle to mahasay ko dhundo or unse baatcheet Karo. Or agar maan Jaye to bapis bhej do nahi to seedha uper.
Main- Kya baat hai. Gajab. Theek hai yahi karte hai. Ab batao ki vo kaha ho sakta hai.
Harry- sir vo bahi usi pahad per kahi ho sakta hai. Uski exact location to nahi pata lekin agar dhundege to jarur mil jayega.
Main- sabse pehle to ye senoy ko thikane lagata hu. Sala nahi to kuch kuch na kand karta hi rahega. Abhi sayad usko ye pata nhi hai ki me bhi yahi hu.
Kya bolte ho
Harry- great idea sir.
Main- to dhundo kaha hai. Abhi chalte hai baha per.
Harry- ok sir.
Uske baad Harry lag gya senoy ki khoj me or usne bahut mehnat se akhir uska pata laga hi liya.
Harry- sir vo is waqt ek hotel me hai.
Main- Chalo to fir.
Harry- lekin jayenge kaise hamare liye to koi gadi chhod ke hi nahi gya hai.
Main- what……
Harry- ha sir aapki car bhi Ghar pahuch chuki hai.
Main- are yaar ye log bhi na. Ab ghumo texi me. Chalo book karo.
Harry- Kar di sir.
Main- to ab Chalo neeche.
Uske baad me hotel se Bahar aaya. To baha per ek texi khadi Hui thi. Maine use OTP bataya to usne confirm Kar Diya. Uske baad me usme baitha or ham nikal pade aage keep taraf.karib 15 min. Baad usne mujhe us hotel KE pass utar diya.
To Maine use uske paise Diye or us hotel KE andar Chala gya. Maine receptionist se kisi dusre insan ke bare me puchha to usne mujhe room no. Bata diya. Halaki jaldi nhi bataya. Lekin thodi bate ghuma Kar kahi to Bata diya. Maine senoy ka room no. Isliye nhi manga kyuki me use Marne ja raha tha or koi saboot nhi chhodna chahta tha. Baki Harry CCTV ko sambhal hi lega. Me lift SE uper gya and baha se senoy ke kamre ki taraf gya. Uska room second floor per tha.
Main uske room ke Bahar gya or room ko knock Kiya. To andar se uski aawaj aayi to Maine use house keeping ka bol Diya.
Usne thodi der baad room ka gate khola.
Or jaise hi khola or mujhe dekha to uski jaan hi halak ko as gyi.
Main- or senoy Saab kaise ho. Andar nahi bulaoge Kya.
To bo side ki ho gya.
Main andar aaya or bola.
Main- Kya baat hai. Badiya room hai.
Me bahi sofe per baith gya.
Senoy- tu yaha Kya Kar raha hai. Or mujhtak kaise pahucha.
Main- Abe Kam se Kam kuch khane peene ko to puchh pehle. Ki seedha hi sawal daag diye.
Senoy- Jo pucha uska jawab de.
Main- Abe gadhe Teri sakl ko Maine found per lagaya to tu mujhe Jammu airport per dikh gya. To aagya tujhse Milne. Or ab ye mat puchhna ki is hotel KE bare me kaise pata Chala.
Senoy- Kya chahte ho tum.
Main- ye to tu Bata ki Kya chahta hai. Kyu Bina bajah peeche pada hua hai.
Senoy- sale mere baap ko Mara hai tune. Ab uska badla nahi lu Kya me. Tune to pore world mafia ko saaf Kar Diya tha. Sirf tujhe shak tha tab. Or mujje to confirm pata hai to soch ki mujhe kyakarna chahiye.
Main- Jo bhi Kar bas mere raste me nahi aana chahiye.
Senoy- aaoga.
Main- to fir jinda nahi bachega.
Senoy- ab aisa nahi hone Wala.
Main- or vo bhala kyu.
Senoy- kyuki mujhe Tera tod mil gya hai.
Main- Kon vo Jo logo ki shakle bigad raha hai.
Senoy- ha beta bahi.
Main- baise Kya janta hai uske bare me.
Senoy- yahi ki Teri mout usi KE hath hogi.
Main- vo baad me. Abhi tu ye Bata ki uske bare me Kya janta hai. Kon hai kaha SE aaya hai.
Senoy- bhool ja ki me tujhe kuch bhi bataoga.
Main- fir to tujhe jinda rakh Kar Kya fayeda.
Senoy- to Kya marega mujhe.
Main- idea to yahi hai. Baki tu Bata.
Senoy- to mouka hai Tere pass maar de. Kyuki agar aaj tune mujhe chhoda to sayad Teri sabse Badi galti hogi.
Main- or mujhe galtiya Karne ka koi shok nahi hai.
Ye kehke Maine speed se uske Dil me itna powerful punch Mara ki Mera hath uske body ke aarpaar ho gya.use kuch karne ka mouka hi nahi Diya Maine.
Vo bas dekhta reh gya ki ye Kya hua. Mera hath uske sarir ko faad Kar aar paar nikal gya tha. Or thodi hi der me uski body me response karna band Kar Diya and vo Puri tarah se latak gya. To Maine apna hath bapis kheech liya. Or usi KE sath vo neeche gir gya.
Main- Sala. Mujhe marega.
Maine fir bahi tabel per daru ki bottle or lighter rakha hua dekha to Maine vo bottle uthai or lighter bhi. And uski body per Maine Puri bottle ko udhel Diya. And jaise hi bottle Khali Hui Maine lighter ko Jala Kar uske uper fek Diya. And uske body ne turant hi aag pakad li. And mere dekhte hi dekhte uski body Puri tarah se jal gyi.halaki us kamre se bahut hi bhari matra me dhua nikalne laga. To Maine baha se nikalne me hi bhalai samjhi. Or usi kamre ki khidki se neeche kood gya. Me hotel ke peeche ki taraf Koda jaha koi bhi nahi tha. USke baad me baha se nikal gya seedha main road ki taraf.or baha se texi leke nikal gya usi pahad ki taraf. Mere pass Mera suit akela hi tha Jo kafi tha. Halaki Harry ne use upgrade karke nano technology SE lase Kar Diya tha. Ab me us suit ko apni watch SE seedha pehan sakta tha. Jo ki mere liye achhi baat thi. Me usi pahad ke pass gya texi se. Baha per Maine use rukbaya and usko paise dekar ravana Kar Diya. Or dheere dheere us pahadi per chadne laga.
To be countinue……….
Ham aise hi bate karte hue hotel Tak pahuch gye. And baha bhaiyo ne sabhi KE liye alag alag kamre book Kar diye the. Isliye me apne kamre me gya jaha Radha Mera hi wait Kar rahi thi.
Radha- Kya hua tha baha per.
Main- pata nhi yaar abhi Banglore me bhi baise hi kuch log mare the. Ab yaha bhi suru ho gye.
Radha- baise Kya lagta hai tumhe.
Main- mujhe to lagta hai ki koi in sab logo ko maar raha hai. Lekin kaise vo ye sab Kar raha hai ye nahi pata.
Radha- Matlab ab yahi rukoge.
Main- ha rukna padega iski the Tak Jane KE liye.
Radha- ok to me bhi yahi rukne wali hu.
Main- abhi jarurat nahi hai. Kyuki mujhe bhi pata nhi hai ki khatra bada hai ya chhota. Isliye tum Kal hi sabke sath bapis ja rahi ho.
Radha- nahi me nhi ja rahi. Samjhe. Me yahi rukne wali hu.
Main- maan Jai Meri baat. Kyuki yaha mujhe pahado per Jana padega. Or me tumhe kaha kaha Le Kar jaoga.isliye tum abhi Chalo jao. Agar mujhe kahi tumhari jarurat padegi to me tumhe bula lunga.
Radha- Kya yaar har baar tum aisa hi karte ho or mujhe bapis bhej dete ho.
Main- ab Kya hai na ki tum ab Meri wife ho or usse bhi badkar mere bacho ki Amma ho. Isliye me tumhe kisi bhi prakar KE khatre me nahi dalna chahta.
Radha- bade aaye Amma banane wale.
Main- maan Jao na pls.
Radha- theek hai lekin agar mujhe Jara bhi aabhas hua ki tum apna khayalo nhi rakh rahe theek se. To me foran hi yaha aajaogi.
Main- done.
Radha- theek hai to me Kal chali jaogi.
Main- thanks Meri jaan. Achha abhi to Puri raat Baki hai. Or thand bhi kafi hai.
Radha- to
Main- to thodi germi dedo mujhe.
Radha- nahi dungi.
Main- yaar ye Kya baat Hui.
Radha- ye bahi baat Hui. Tum mujhe apne sath nhi rehne dete. Isliye me bhi ab tumhe kuch nahi karne Dene wali.
Main- dekho yaar thand bahut hai. Kuch to reham Karo mujh garib per.
Radha- ahaha bade aaya garib Banda. Agar tumhare jaise garib hone lage to me Dua karungi ki sabhi tumhare jaise hi garib ho.
Main- vo sab karti rehna lekin abhi to kuch socho.
Radha- bola n ek baar. Ab bo baatcheet or chup chap so jao
Ye kehke vo bistar me ghus gyi. And me dekhta hi raha. Ab biwi ke samne kiski chali hai Jo Meri chalti. Isliye me bhi chupchap usi KE bistar me ghus gya or usse chipak Kar so gya.
Next day. Me utha or dekha to sabhi Jane KE liye ready the. Maine sabko bye bola. And Bhai or Rony sabhi ko leke seedha Mumbai nikal gye. And baha per bakio ko chhod Kar seedhe gaon nikal Gaye. Bakio ko leke. Sabhi ne ye 2 din khoob injoy Kiya tha. Or kafi thank bhi Gaye the isliye aaj bhi sabhi aaram hi karne wale the. Bahi me ready hoke baith gya
Main- to Harry Miya koi update hai ya nahi.
Harry- sir uski to koi khabar nhi hai. Lekin senoy Saab aaj Jammu me dikhe hai.
Main- badiya Sala ye bhi apne hi kisi maksad ko pura karne aaya hoga.
Harry- sayad usi aadmi ko apni taraf milane KE liye.
Main- ho sakta hai. Tum kisi tarike ki baat Kar rahe the uska Kya hua.
Harry- ha sir maine try Kiya lekin kuch pakki jaankari to nahi mili lekin ek doubt jarur utha hai.
Main- kaisa doubt.
Harry- sir mujhe lagta hai ye Jo Banda hai ye bhi kisi alag time line ya fir kisi alag dimensions se hi aaya hai.
Main- lekin kaise kahi per koi portal khula hi nahi hai us din KE baad.
Harry- sir uske baad nahi khula lekin vo portal to khula tha jisse electro bapis gya tha. Or hamne usper jyada dhyan nahi Diya lekin vo portal kuch jyada hi der Tak khula hua reh gya tha. Jisse mujhe Puri aasanka hai ki ye mahasay bhi usi portal se Bahar nikle hai.
Main- koi or clue.
Harry- sir ek to yahi ki sabse pehli ghatna Banglore me hi Hui thi. Or jis din electro bapis gya tha. Usi din se start Hui thi. Isi liye Mera sabse pehla doubt bahi ja raha hai.
Main- yaar Harry tumhari baat me point to hai. Baise tum recheck nahi Kar sakte ki baha per exactly hua Kya tha.
Harry- sir Maine check karne ki kosis ki thi lekin server error Bata raha hai us time per. Lagta hai vo portal khulne ki bajah se kuch fault aagya hoga.
Main- to ab Kya karna chahiye hame.
Harry- sabse pehle to mahasay ko dhundo or unse baatcheet Karo. Or agar maan Jaye to bapis bhej do nahi to seedha uper.
Main- Kya baat hai. Gajab. Theek hai yahi karte hai. Ab batao ki vo kaha ho sakta hai.
Harry- sir vo bahi usi pahad per kahi ho sakta hai. Uski exact location to nahi pata lekin agar dhundege to jarur mil jayega.
Main- sabse pehle to ye senoy ko thikane lagata hu. Sala nahi to kuch kuch na kand karta hi rahega. Abhi sayad usko ye pata nhi hai ki me bhi yahi hu.
Kya bolte ho
Harry- great idea sir.
Main- to dhundo kaha hai. Abhi chalte hai baha per.
Harry- ok sir.
Uske baad Harry lag gya senoy ki khoj me or usne bahut mehnat se akhir uska pata laga hi liya.
Harry- sir vo is waqt ek hotel me hai.
Main- Chalo to fir.
Harry- lekin jayenge kaise hamare liye to koi gadi chhod ke hi nahi gya hai.
Main- what……
Harry- ha sir aapki car bhi Ghar pahuch chuki hai.
Main- are yaar ye log bhi na. Ab ghumo texi me. Chalo book karo.
Harry- Kar di sir.
Main- to ab Chalo neeche.
Uske baad me hotel se Bahar aaya. To baha per ek texi khadi Hui thi. Maine use OTP bataya to usne confirm Kar Diya. Uske baad me usme baitha or ham nikal pade aage keep taraf.karib 15 min. Baad usne mujhe us hotel KE pass utar diya.
To Maine use uske paise Diye or us hotel KE andar Chala gya. Maine receptionist se kisi dusre insan ke bare me puchha to usne mujhe room no. Bata diya. Halaki jaldi nhi bataya. Lekin thodi bate ghuma Kar kahi to Bata diya. Maine senoy ka room no. Isliye nhi manga kyuki me use Marne ja raha tha or koi saboot nhi chhodna chahta tha. Baki Harry CCTV ko sambhal hi lega. Me lift SE uper gya and baha se senoy ke kamre ki taraf gya. Uska room second floor per tha.
Main uske room ke Bahar gya or room ko knock Kiya. To andar se uski aawaj aayi to Maine use house keeping ka bol Diya.
Usne thodi der baad room ka gate khola.
Or jaise hi khola or mujhe dekha to uski jaan hi halak ko as gyi.
Main- or senoy Saab kaise ho. Andar nahi bulaoge Kya.
To bo side ki ho gya.
Main andar aaya or bola.
Main- Kya baat hai. Badiya room hai.
Me bahi sofe per baith gya.
Senoy- tu yaha Kya Kar raha hai. Or mujhtak kaise pahucha.
Main- Abe Kam se Kam kuch khane peene ko to puchh pehle. Ki seedha hi sawal daag diye.
Senoy- Jo pucha uska jawab de.
Main- Abe gadhe Teri sakl ko Maine found per lagaya to tu mujhe Jammu airport per dikh gya. To aagya tujhse Milne. Or ab ye mat puchhna ki is hotel KE bare me kaise pata Chala.
Senoy- Kya chahte ho tum.
Main- ye to tu Bata ki Kya chahta hai. Kyu Bina bajah peeche pada hua hai.
Senoy- sale mere baap ko Mara hai tune. Ab uska badla nahi lu Kya me. Tune to pore world mafia ko saaf Kar Diya tha. Sirf tujhe shak tha tab. Or mujje to confirm pata hai to soch ki mujhe kyakarna chahiye.
Main- Jo bhi Kar bas mere raste me nahi aana chahiye.
Senoy- aaoga.
Main- to fir jinda nahi bachega.
Senoy- ab aisa nahi hone Wala.
Main- or vo bhala kyu.
Senoy- kyuki mujhe Tera tod mil gya hai.
Main- Kon vo Jo logo ki shakle bigad raha hai.
Senoy- ha beta bahi.
Main- baise Kya janta hai uske bare me.
Senoy- yahi ki Teri mout usi KE hath hogi.
Main- vo baad me. Abhi tu ye Bata ki uske bare me Kya janta hai. Kon hai kaha SE aaya hai.
Senoy- bhool ja ki me tujhe kuch bhi bataoga.
Main- fir to tujhe jinda rakh Kar Kya fayeda.
Senoy- to Kya marega mujhe.
Main- idea to yahi hai. Baki tu Bata.
Senoy- to mouka hai Tere pass maar de. Kyuki agar aaj tune mujhe chhoda to sayad Teri sabse Badi galti hogi.
Main- or mujhe galtiya Karne ka koi shok nahi hai.
Ye kehke Maine speed se uske Dil me itna powerful punch Mara ki Mera hath uske body ke aarpaar ho gya.use kuch karne ka mouka hi nahi Diya Maine.
Vo bas dekhta reh gya ki ye Kya hua. Mera hath uske sarir ko faad Kar aar paar nikal gya tha. Or thodi hi der me uski body me response karna band Kar Diya and vo Puri tarah se latak gya. To Maine apna hath bapis kheech liya. Or usi KE sath vo neeche gir gya.
Main- Sala. Mujhe marega.
Maine fir bahi tabel per daru ki bottle or lighter rakha hua dekha to Maine vo bottle uthai or lighter bhi. And uski body per Maine Puri bottle ko udhel Diya. And jaise hi bottle Khali Hui Maine lighter ko Jala Kar uske uper fek Diya. And uske body ne turant hi aag pakad li. And mere dekhte hi dekhte uski body Puri tarah se jal gyi.halaki us kamre se bahut hi bhari matra me dhua nikalne laga. To Maine baha se nikalne me hi bhalai samjhi. Or usi kamre ki khidki se neeche kood gya. Me hotel ke peeche ki taraf Koda jaha koi bhi nahi tha. USke baad me baha se nikal gya seedha main road ki taraf.or baha se texi leke nikal gya usi pahad ki taraf. Mere pass Mera suit akela hi tha Jo kafi tha. Halaki Harry ne use upgrade karke nano technology SE lase Kar Diya tha. Ab me us suit ko apni watch SE seedha pehan sakta tha. Jo ki mere liye achhi baat thi. Me usi pahad ke pass gya texi se. Baha per Maine use rukbaya and usko paise dekar ravana Kar Diya. Or dheere dheere us pahadi per chadne laga.
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