Adultery Simple shurvath

[Ramesh]

Simply the best writing .

 

[The Barber]

Just awesome and superb start! Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Please let there be slow and steady seductions by the main villain and heart and soul resistances by the female characters not to fall into villain's evil sex trap so easily. Please also add erotic and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. Please don't involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. Please let only one single male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. If you involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the conservative female characters like a cheap street slut, then the excitement and erotism of the story will be spoiled. It is just my suggestions. After all, it is your story and you have 100 percent right to write it according to your own way.

Agree with you

 

[The Barber]

Ashadaran writing

 

[LENNY]

Just awesome and superb start! Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Please let there be slow and steady seductions by the main villain and heart and soul resistances by the female characters not to fall into villain's evil sex trap so easily. Please also add erotic and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. Please don't involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. Please let only one single male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. If you involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the conservative female characters like a cheap street slut, then the excitement and erotism of the story will be spoiled. It is just my suggestions. After all, it is your story and you have 100 percent right to write it according to your own way.

That will be extremely hot and erotic.

 

[The Dark Devil]

Excellent and amazing update. Hope you will post a big update soon.

 

[ZareenKhan]

Fantastic fabulous superb update

 

[kasif]

Waiting

 

[urc4me]

Shuruaat Romanchak. Pratiksha agle rasprad update ki. Writing par dhyan dene ki jarurat hai.

 

[Imranpasha939393]

Sidesh se bath katham karke wapas Jane ki waqt . Sushanth ka mulaqat Ajay se huva . Jo abh thoda garam response de rahatha .

Sushanth ko problem ki main party koun samaj achuka tha . Aur siddesh ki response aur uski Ajay ki aur kuch nahi bolneki bath notice Kiya tha . Usko sirf uski kaam se mathlab tha aur company politics jisme usko ek paise ki benefit nahi thi uss se koyi Lena Dena nahi tha .

Asal mai usko kisike sath kirik ( argument) karneki koyi shouk nahi tha . Tho usne Ajay ki bath ko zyada Dyan nahi diya . Usne Ajay ko cool se handle karke agge badha.

Wahase Jake usne Faisal se Mila. Jo abhi bhi badak raha tha. Sushanth ko abb Faisal se Milkar hi kaam karna tha . Tho usne Faisal ko leke Bahar hotel gaya coffee ke liye . Usse Faisal ko samjana tha ki ab replacement machine company ko lane ki pehele puri check karni hai aur machine refurbishment ke Liya Faisal ko job worker ke sath coordinate karna hai . Tho hotel janeki baad .

Sushanth: Faisal ko pucha . Q dost ajj bahuk garam lag raheho

Faisal : thum dek raheho na sushanth. I had already informed them . And now they wan put all responsibility on me . I did my job properly and it was thier job to carry forward there after .

Sushanth: take it easy bro . This things are common in this kind of situation.

Faisal : ah Lakin dekh yaar mai dusroki galti mere upper tho nahi le saktha na . Aur kya bath ho rahithi Ajay ki sath . Wo thumari sath bhi kush nahi lag rahatha .

Sushanth : casual bathe yaar . Puch raha tha koun hai wo job worker aur kaise jantheho usse etc etc

Faisal : itni casual nahi lag rahithi.

Sushanth: ha yaar aaj uski bath utni friendly nahi thi . Kair yaar mai sirf apni kaam kar rahahu. In sab cheez mai muje utni intrest nahi hai .

Faisal: ye bhi sahi hai . Batavo kya bath karni hai

Fir sushanth usko sari bath batayi
Agle din sushanth aur Faisal dono job worker factory paunchi. Waha sushanth ki dost (job worker) sandeep se milna huva . Faisal bhi wahi tha aur company mai replacement machine paunchaneki jaldi bhi thi tho sandeep se kuch zyada bacheet nahi huvi . Fir bhi faisal ne ye notice kiya sandeep aur sushanth kafi friendly the jo aksar aise case mai nahi hothe . Aksar company mai suppliers ko zyada Dyan nahi diya jatha hai compare to apni customers se .

( * friends this things might make you think like I am trying to drag story . But trust me this things are giving complete introduction to character in the story . Because after some time i will give a sudden twist in the story . And at that time I don't want you to think like I made it all out suddenly )



Aur evening tak replacement ki kaam karke company Laya gaya. Aur next day se refurbishment kaam mai dono sath milker kaam karne lage for next 4 days . Tho abb thak Faisal aur sushanth ek dusre se kaafi had thak comfortable ho chuke the .


Week end (mathlab Friday evening) mai sushanth apni gaav gaya tha . Uski gaav bengalore pune Mumbai ki national highway mai hi tha . Banglore se sirf 30 se 40 km dur thi . Sushanth ki farm house highway ki bagal mai hi tha .

Usko Saturday pura din farm pe kam karvanithi . Saturday evening jab wo farm se hiway ki tharaf dekha . Achank waha usse Faisal dikha . Jiska car Karab honeki Karan kada karna pada tha .

Ek aurath jo burka mai thi uske sath kadi thi aur ek 6 se 7 saal ki bacha undono ke sath tha .

Sushanth ko ye dekte hi jatka laga ....

 

[Imranpasha939393]

Hello friends .
I know what kind of story you want . Belive me it's going to be just what you all will like .
About update being short . I wan all of you to know I am just begginer. I need some time to just get used to . Later when I start giving updates every 4 to 5 days I will make updates bigger . And also my font size is less . I will adjust things as possible.