Adultery Simple shurvath

[Arti Joshi]

Need big update

 

[Imranpasha939393]

Faisal basically up se belong kartha hai . Lakin pichle 11 saal se banglore mai uski begum Zoya ke sath rehraha hai . Uski family up ke saharanpur mai ek rich family thi Lakin uska abbu sab kuch udachuka tha . Ab sirf ek ghar tha jisme uski ammi rehthithi faisal ki bhai Asif aur bahu (asif ki begum) ke sath. banglore mai uske salary tha tho acchi Lakin not enough to restore his family back to its former state . pehle Faisal bhi unki situation ko improve karneka bhohoth janun mai tha. Lakin ab wo kwab gayab tha. usko 1.5 l salary thi . salary achi thi Lakin uska kwab ko pura karnekeliye kafi nahi thi .
Company mai Faisal aur arif dono bohoth close the . Lakin Ajay ke saath uska utna nahi bantha tha . why? wo apko abhi patachel jayega .
Company mai Faisal ka role machinery ka repair and maintenance ka incharge tha.

Mohammad arif basically delhi ka tha . economically uska haal bhi Faisal jaisa hi tha. Lakin story bhohoth different tha . uska abbu ek bhoth hi nek dil insan tha . Lakin uske ek relative uske abbu ko tag ke sab kuch barbad kar chuka tha . ek ghar bacha tha Lakin uske upper bhi
25 lakh loan tha . jo ab arif chuka rahatha. loan uski behen ki shadi ki time Lena padatha usko .
Arif ki abbu ka health teek nahi thi . abbu aur ammi dono delhi mai thi.
Arif job profile tha quality incharge .
Ajay aur arif dono bohoth baar argue kar chuke the . Tho undone ki beech utna bantha nahi tha . Faisal arif ki bohoth kareeb tha tho uska bhi Ajay ke sath 2 to 3 baar argument ho chuka tha .

 

[Heena.]

ashadaran writing! Hats off

 

[Afruza]

bahut badhiya update

 

[kasif]

Just awesome and superb start! Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Please let there be slow and steady seductions by the main villain and heart and soul resistances by the female characters not to fall into villain's evil sex trap so easily. Please also add erotic and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. Please don't involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. Please let only one single male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. If you involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the conservative female characters like a cheap street slut, then the excitement and erotism of the story will be spoiled. It is just my suggestions. After all, it is your story and you have 100 percent right to write it according to your own way.

 

[Uzma Khan]

Just awesome and superb start! Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Please let there be slow and steady seductions by the main villain and heart and soul resistances by the female characters not to fall into villain's evil sex trap so easily. Please also add erotic and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. Please don't involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. Please let only one single male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. If you involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the conservative female characters like a cheap street slut, then the excitement and erotism of the story will be spoiled. It is just my suggestions. After all, it is your story and you have 100 percent right to write it according to your own way.

Agree

 

[Pramila Devi]

Just awesome and superb start! Please don't hurry up for early sex encounter. Please let there be slow and steady seductions by the main villain and heart and soul resistances by the female characters not to fall into villain's evil sex trap so easily. Please also add erotic and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. Please don't involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. Please let only one single male characters to seduce and fuck the female characters. If you involve multiple male characters to seduce and fuck the conservative female characters like a cheap street slut, then the excitement and erotism of the story will be spoiled. It is just my suggestions. After all, it is your story and you have 100 percent right to write it according to your own way.

U r right

 

[Imranpasha939393]

Jaise sushanth office enter huva usko ajay se mulakath huva . Ajay usko company ki bareme sab kuch samjaya. Tho dono company tour ke liye nikle .
Ajay ke sath bachit se sushanth current process ka jankari mil chuka tha aur sath mai ye bhi pata chalchukata ki company ko ek big order Mila hai tho ek aur production process ko abh use design karna hai .
Ajay usko sari department aur us department ka incharge koun bataya . Fir plant head ki office ki our le gaya .

Plant head ka naam siddesh
Siddesh ek normal plant head ki Tarah tha . Usne bhi sushanth ko uski role ki bare mai avagath karaya

Tho sushanth ne siddesh se new order ki bareme pucha. Tho siddesh usko sari details diya .
Sushanth apni cabin ki aur chala . Us din tho usko company current work ki bare mai padne aur samaj mai lag gaya .
Agle din se wo company ki current capacity aur agle ane wala order ki use wone wall capacity ki bareme plan karne laga .

Tho usi samay company mai ek important machine karab hone laga jiski wajese usko Faisal se mulakat huva .

Jab machine mai karabi ane lagi tho Faisal uska theek karne wala team ki sath Aya. Jaha Ajay pehle se mavjud tha .
Tho Ajay aur Faisal ki beech argument Shuru huva .
Asal mai huva hai is machine ki bareme Faisal pehle se Ajay ko bataya tha . Us machine ki jald refurbish karneko . Lakin Ajay us bath ko ignore Kiya tha aur ab wo Faisal se ye bath kar raha tha ki Faisal apna kaam theek se nahi kar raha hai . Tho Faisal ne bhi jawab Dene laga ki wo koi jadu tho nahi kar sakta aur wo pehle se is ki bare mai batayatha.

As incharge of production process sushanth ko iss problem solve karna tha . Jab wo Faisal ko iss machine ki bareme puchne gaya tho Faisal garam tha aur sushanth ke upper badakne laga . But sushanth tha bhi cool . Tho usne samadan se machine ki problem ki bareme puchne laga . Jab us ko Malum pada . Wo apni ek bande ko contact karne gaya .

Is beech bath siddesh thak paunch chookatha. To siddesh bhi wahi agaya tha . Aur wo bhi pareshan hone laga . Kyuki agar problem jald solve nahi huva tho entire company ki production line affect ho saktha tha .

 

[Kaalachan.]

Very nice update

 

[Uzma Khan]

Very nice build up