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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani

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Saya ek chudel ki prem kahani. Part 1




 
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Shameer ki tarah Veer ki jindgi bhi mast ja rahi thi. Balki us se bhi mast. Tanya to uske pas nahi thi. Magar kabhi vo karishma ki baho me hota to kabhi Varnika ki. Sath me moka milta hi raheta. Anita shalma.
Veer ke lie koi rok tok nahi thi. Balki karishma ko bhi chaska lag gaya tha. Veer ke sath kisi ko dekhne ka. Veer apne mahel ke bahar khada kuchh soch me duba huaa tha. Abhi tak na uski maa ki khabar aai.
Na hi Tanya ki. Use har ladhai se dur rakha ja raha tha. Use koi bhi ladhai ladhne nahi di ja rahi thi. Use pata hi nahi chala kab uske pas karishma akar beth gai.

Karishma ; kya soch rahe ho.

Veer ne ghum kar dekha to saji dhaji sundar uski biwi karishma bethi hui thi. Aur mushkurate hue use hi dekh rahi thi.
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Veer : (smaile) wow.. bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Karishma halka sa hasti he. Haste hue vo aur jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi. Karishma sharma gai. Aur veer se najre churane lagi.

Karishma ; (sharmate hue) fir bhi to tumhe koi na koi aur chahiye hi.
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Veer joro se hasne laga aur karishma ke karib aa gaya. Karishma ki god me zuk kar apna chahera uske chahere ke ekdam karib le gaya.

Veer ; (shararat) muje kisi na kisi ke sath dekh kar maza to tumhe bhi aata he. Hmmm bolo???

Karishma sharma kar najre niche kiye mushkurane lagi. Tabhi Veer ki najar niche mahel se bahar Varnika par gai. Jo akeli bethi hui thi.
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Veer ; vo vaha kya kar rahi he??

Karishma ne bhi jab Varnika ko dekha to vo samaz gai ki Varnika attraction de rahi he. Khud ke lie. Veer ko apne karib bulane ki kosis.

Veer ; ruko milkar aata hu.

Veer Varnika ke pas jane laga. Magar us wakt karishma ko achha nahi laga. Kyo ki karishma khud Veer ke sath kuchh pal bitana chahti thi. Vo bas unhe dekhti hi rahi.
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Vahi Varnika ka man sambhog ka kar raha tha. To vo aur kis ke pas jati. Saj dhaj kar akarshit roop lie vo janbuchkar Veer ke samne aai. Veer Varnika ke pas pahoch gaya.

Veer ; kya bat he. Itna garm joshi se mera intjar.

Varnika bade hi nashile andaz me bolti he.

Varnika ; (nashilpan) pyas lagi thi.

Veer hasne laga.

Veer ; kis ki khoon ki???

Varnika bade kamukh andaz me zuk gai. Aur Veer ki ankho me dekhne lagi.

Varnika ; (nashilpan) pyas... Tumhari pyas
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Veer ne Varnika ka hath pakada aur use mahel ke andar lejane laga. Karishma ne dekha. Use bura bhi laga. Magar vo kuchh boli nahi.

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Khel kuchh aur bhi ho raha tha. Jab Veer Varnika ko lekar apne nahi kisi aur hi mahel me pahocha. Use bhi pata tha ki karishma ka mood kharab jarur hoga. Aur shameer apni biwi miyomi se pyar kar ke free huaa.

Shameer ; abhi tak shusi nahi aai.

Miyomi ; vo aa jaegi. Tum shant raho.

Shameer ; kese shant rahu. Hato chalo.

Shameer khada ho gaya. Khute se apne kapde utare aur bahar jane laga.

Miyomi ; mat jao kahi. Bahar kuchh bhi ho sakta he.

Shameer ; jab tum yaha nahi thi. Tab me har jagah ghum chuka hu. Akele.

Miyomi shameer ko kese samzati ki use kabhi akele chhoda hi nahi gaya. Jab miyomi nahi hoti tab uske pas har wakt shusumi hoti. Shameer kuchh suna nahi aur sidha mahel se nikal kar chal diya. Miyomi bhi uske pichhe hi thi. Par chhup kar.
Shameer apne mahel se bahot kam hi nikal raha tha. Najane kyo use esa mahesus ho raha tha ki jese us se kuchh chhupaya ja raha he. Vo vahi pahoch gaya jaha Veer tha. Shameer ke kadam apne aap usi mahel ki taraf chale gae. Par andar jakar usne ho dekha. Vo dekh kar shameer herat me pad gaya.
Din ka ujala. Aur khuli hui window se usne shusumi ko dekha. Jo puri nangi bad par leti hui kisi ko dekh rahi thi.
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Shameer ka dimag kharab ho gaya. Darasal uska dimag shetan ghuma raha tha. Kyo ki shameer me bas thode se gun pishaji the. Baki puri tarike se vo inshan hi tha. Shameer ko shikar bana na ashan tha. Is lie is bar hosh me hi shetan ne shameer ke dimag par asar dala. Shameer ko Varnika ki jagah shusumi dikh rahi thi. Vahi Varnika ko kisi ke hone ki ahat hui. Use laga ki vo karishma he.
Shetan jo karna chahta tha. Usme kamyab ho gaya. Shameer dekhna chahta tha ki shusumi kis ke sath milkar shameer ko dhokha de rahi he. Usne dekha koi usi ki umar ka ladka shusumi ke karib aaya aur tut pada. Vo bahot buri tarah se shusumi ko chod raha he.
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Shusumi bhi uska pura sath de rahi he. Miyomi bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki shameer kya dekh raha hei. Vo pichhe thi. Is lie shameer ke anshu nahi dekh saki. Jab Veer palta tab vo sock hi ho gaya. Reeta ke dost hone ke nate vo Veer se badla bhi nahi le sakta tha. Par ek dost hokar dost ke sath itna bada dhokha. Shameer ekdam sock tha.

Use bharosa hone laga ki shetan sahi bol raha tha. Shusumi shameer se bahot kuchh chhupa rahi he. Shameer ne apne anshu pochhe. Vo sock tha. Vo ghum kar vapas chal diya. Miyomi ko bhi ye nahi pata chala ki shameer ne kya dekha. Use bhi nahi pata thi ki shetan ne shameer ko bahot badi galatfehmi ka shikar bana liya hai.
Saare ke saare paart jabrdst hain, ek saath kayi stories likhna aur sb men quality maintain karnaa aap ke hi bas ki baat hai
 

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Saare ke saare paart jabrdst hain, ek saath kayi stories likhna aur sb men quality maintain karnaa aap ke hi bas ki baat hai
Thankyou very very much कोमलजी
 

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Mast update,

Kamini ka role to kaafi bura rahaa fiza ka poora istemaal kiya aur wah USKE kaam bhi aai AUR jab MATLAB nikal gaya to kamini nebek tareh SE fiza ko must ke ghaat utaar diya

Pichle updates me deepika kaamini , reeta aur raja ke saamne hi ziyara ko maarkar apne bhai jeet ko lekar nau do gyaareh ho gayi AUR wah sab khade khade tamaasha dekhte rahe jabki kaamutra sabse powerful chudail hai, aur reeta me kai pishaacho ko maara hai, uske baawjood bhi aur jagga ne kai special training SE trained hai, yeh baat kuchh bhi hazam nahi huyi, kaamini redta in dono bitches me is story ke bhaag 2 me bahut hi jyada drama dikhaya aur poora randipana dikhaya, dimaag kharaab kar diyaa
 

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Mast update,

Kamini ka role to kaafi bura rahaa fiza ka poora istemaal kiya aur wah USKE kaam bhi aai AUR jab MATLAB nikal gaya to kamini nebek tareh SE fiza ko must ke ghaat utaar diya

Pichle updates me deepika kaamini , reeta aur raja ke saamne hi ziyara ko maarkar apne bhai jeet ko lekar nau do gyaareh ho gayi AUR wah sab khade khade tamaasha dekhte rahe jabki kaamutra sabse powerful chudail hai, aur reeta me kai pishaacho ko maara hai, uske baawjood bhi aur jagga ne kai special training SE trained hai, yeh baat kuchh bhi hazam nahi huyi, kaamini redta in dono bitches me is story ke bhaag 2 me bahut hi jyada drama dikhaya aur poora randipana dikhaya, dimaag kharaab kar diyaa
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दीपिका के भागने के बिच जग्गा उर्फ़ राजाशाब भी हे. शक ना हो तो कहानी शैतान की कैसे हो सकती है. फ़िज़ा जिन्दा है. मरी नहीं है अब तक. पर पत्ते तो मे शो होने से पहले कभी नहीं खोलती.

To kya kamini aur fizaa me planning ki ki kamini fiza ka khoon choos ke use fek de aur deepika use le jaaye jisse deepika Ku safari jaankaari fiza ke jariye amini ko milti rahe,
Shishumi AUR kamini ek jaise hai unke log ( gulaam etc) unke liye jaan ki baazi tak lagaa de unhe iski parvaah nahi unhe to sirf apna swaarth nazar aata hai,

Deepika character ko aapne kuchh jyada hi badhaa chadhaa kar dikhaya hai is story me
Kya aapki favourite actress deepika padukone to nahi?

Ek hakim ke peechhe itna bada game khela ( jokhim bhara) jiki Marne ki khushi me yeh sab daavat bhi kar rage hai, jabki Hakeem to bas ek mamooli sa insaan thaa, kamini chalaak hai magar itni nahi jitna use hone chahiye
 
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To kya kamini aur fizaa me planning ki ki kamini fiza ka khoon choos ke use fek de aur deepika use le jaaye jisse deepika Ku safari jaankaari fiza ke jariye amini ko milti rahe,
Shishumi AUR kamini ek jaise hai unke log ( gulaam etc) unke liye jaan ki baazi tak lagaa de unhe iski parvaah nahi unhe to sirf apna swaarth nazar aata hai,

Deepika character ko aapne kuchh jyada hi badhaa chadhaa kar dikhaya hai is story me
Kya aapki favourite actress deepika padukone to nahi?

Ek hakim ke peechhe itna bada game khela ( jokhim bhara) jiki Marne ki khushi me yeh sab daavat bhi kar rage hai, jabki Hakeem to bas ek mamooli sa insaan thaa, kamini chalaak hai magar itni nahi jitna use hone chahiye
Hakim ke pichhe game khelna pada. Nahi to vo kabhi bahar aata hi nahi. Hakim me power nahi tha. Par vo kamina no 1 tha.

Muje Deepika nahi pasand.


Bina patte khole me raaz bata kese du. Kahani aage badhne ka intjar kare.
 

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दीपिका के भागने के बिच जग्गा उर्फ़ राजाशाब भी हे. शक ना हो तो कहानी शैतान की कैसे हो सकती है. फ़िज़ा जिन्दा है. मरी नहीं है अब तक. पर पत्ते तो मे शो होने से पहले कभी नहीं खोलती.

Kai baar mere se spelling mistake ho jaati hai yeh mobile keyboard ke vajeh se Jo automatically common world use kar leta hai English ke ur kai baar jaldi type karne ke vajeh se,

Kamini be ek tareh se fiza ko maut ke ghaat utaar diya MATLAB Marne ke kagaar par
 
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Kai baar mere se spelling mistake ho jaati hai yeh mobile keyboard ke vajeh se Jo automatically common world use kar leta hai English ke ur kai baar jaldi type karne ke vajeh se,

Kamini be ek tareh se fiza ko maut ke ghaat utaar diya MATLAB Marne ke kagaar par
Ha ye to he hi. Ek tarike se to mar hi diya. Magar vo bach gai. Dushmano ne use bacha liya.


Fast type karne ki kosis me bhi esa hota he
 
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