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Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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Chutiyadr said:
nainu bhaiya nayi story ke liye congratulations :congrats:
poster to mast lag raha hai , jadu wadu hoga lag raha hai aur aapki story hai to romance to hona hi hai :superb:
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Yesssssssssssssss ... Complete fantasy romance hai.... Waise ek baat mai sidhe sidhe batana chahta hun ... Kewal crime thrill short story ko chhod diya jaye to baki koi bhi story bina love story ke purn nahi hoti :D ...

Likhte sabhi hai romance bus sabke romance dikhane ka apna taste hota hai :declare:
 
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:congrats: nain bhai purani story ko fir se start karne ke liye. wese mene aapki ye story pehle to nahi padhi thi par abhi 4 updates padh kar lag raha h ki story kafi kamal ki hone wali hai aur dusri baat ye hai ki likhne wale aap ho to uska to kuch kehna hi nahi.
 
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ye story chalu ho he gai.
par las time story ke main kirdar chirag ko bhut kam rol diya tha is baar ka kya irada hai.
chirag or uski gf ke kise vase he kam sune ko mile ge ki bechare ko aage bhi kuch role mile ga.
ab fear se shuru ki hai to aye se he comment mile ge.
kyu ki pahale pata nahi tha ki dono ko kam rol doya hai tum ne.
or haa jaldi ke chakar main tum ne story ko kaha se utha ke kaha pataka tha vo bhi yad hai.
chirag or uski gf ka kya huaa ye bataya he nhi or 2sal khani ko aage bhdha diya tha :bat:
fear uske baad kuch updates dene ke baad gayab ho gaye the :bat:
bach kar rahaba is baar kahe se bhi bicha main tapak kar aye se comment kar sakata hu main :D
 
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Raktranjitankururit ka naya updates plz :waiting:
or is title ke satha wala intro kaha gol kar gaye. :bat:
 
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Naina said:
sabke sab ek badhkar ek hai.... par hai bade pyaare kirdaar... inki nautanki bhi dil ko chu jaye... aur sabse bada natkhat woh chhota packet chirag uska kya kahne... baatein toh dekho chhotu ki... :D waise hath uthna yeh sahi baat nahin hai... aur yeh kya baat huyi.. Beti shaadi nahin karegi toh jahar hi kha legi... :sigh:

Khud ko kitni baar bolegi yeh same dialogue :D

Khair jivu ki sixth sense ne ushe shresh ko leke joh chetaavanee di hai woh galat nahin hai..
So old formula... udi maar li ghar se.. panchi bani udti phire mast gagan mein :D
let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :applause: :applause:
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:D ... hehe .. shukriya .. waise wahi dobara likhne par logon ki wapas se pratikriya lena.. khaskar aise readers ki jinhe aage ki kahani maloom hai.. apne aap me achievement hain... waise main janta hun ki aap ko comment karne ki jaroorat bhi nahi hai kyonki in sab par pahle bhi aap likh shuki hongi ... thanks for tremendous support .....

ha ha ha ... Jisa ne to abhi bolna hi shuru kiya hai .. aap bus counting kar lena is bar kitni bar khud ko wo ek hi dialogue se kosegi :D.... sixth sense hai hi kamal ki chij .... jisne bhi pahli awaz suni wo bach hi jata/jati hai :D..

thanks a lot .. aur sath bane rahiye :D
 
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Naina said:
ha ha ha ha :lol:
yaar jivu jaha bhi jaati hai problems uske piche piche... well shayad problem ke paas woh jaati hai... :D
Pehle nischal, phir train mein woh log, phir anjane mein hi chor logis ko davat de diya... phir wohi train wale log, phir nischal....
in sabhi dramatic situations aur twists mein nischal ko muk pati bhi maan liya. woh train wali family ne bhi us baat ko sach maan liya ... ek jhuth ko chupane ke ek ke baad ek jhuth..... phir nandini se milna..ushe ek tarah se ghasit ti huyi uske ghar le gayi ..... are yaar ek chij joh iski life normal huyi ho :doh: hamesha musibat mein fansh jaye, aise kaam hi kyun karti hai yeh.. ab dekho woh train mein mili woh family nandu ke ghar sath hi nischal bhi....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill nainu ji :yourock: :yourock:
waise nandu ne akhir Kar entry le hi li story mein :happy:
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abhi to kand ka shirshak shuru hua hai ... waise maine jab wapas se padha .. to main khud bhi isi baat ko lekar hans raha tha .. pata na uske kundli me kaun sa yog tha .. kisi baba ko pakdna padega :D... khair .. time to another next two update ... aur haan .. thanks a lot ... kyonki padhi hui story par dobara comment karne ka jajba .. kamal ka hai :thanks:
 
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kamdev99008 said:
:shocked: nain bhai apko kuchh galatfahmi hui hai
meine apki har kahani padhi thi wahan par...........aur yahan bhi padh raha hu..........triya charitr jo apne kuchh updates dekar adhuri chhod di wo bhi padhi hai meine

haan! comments jyada nahin honge............aur like ka option nahin tha xp mein........

ab aap batayein...................... tab xp par mein 100+ threads par daily visit karta tha....50-40 updates bhi padhta hi tha....kitne comment karta

ab yahan xf par ..................200+ stories par visit karta hu daily....100 ke aspas to updates bhi padhta hu....aur unhein story ke pichhle updates se link karta hu...dimag mein
comment na milne se fir bhi ap naraj hain...........to mere likes ko hi mera samarpan maan lijiye
itna dimag ghoomta hai ki apne updates likhte time bhool jata hu ki kya likhu..............

lekin......................padhta jarur rahunga
ye meri jindgi ka pahla shauk hai................aur akhiri bhi banaye rakhunga..........jab tak jinda hoon
baki...........hathiyar, nasha aur sambhog.............. ye bhi jab tak in par haavi rahne ki kshamta rahegi.........tab tak inka bhi maja leta rahunga
aur kuchh is nashwar sansar mein aisa nahin.................jiski chah ho
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:bow: :bow: :bow: .. maine galtfehmi me nahi balki khinchai ke irade se likha tha.... man me koi galatfehmi ya 2 rai nahi hai ki aap meri kahani nahi padhte hain.. awashya padhte hain .. lekin kya kare .. aap 200 kahani me kyon na uljha lo ... hum us premika ki tarah hain jise khas dhyan ki jaroorat hoti hai .. aam logon se hat kar dekhne wali feeling :D .. aur aisi hi feeling apni bhi rahte hai.. ab ek premika ke vash me to nahi ki wo premi ko kahin aur tarne se rok paye .. lekin uska sthan upar hai ye sabse jyada khushi ki baat hoti hai... ;)

aap kitna bhi kah lijiye comment nahi kar pata .. lekin hum to tane denge hi.. rishta hi kuch aisa hai :D
 
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