Fantasy Kaisa Yeh Ishq Hai.... Ajab Sa Risk Hai...... (Completed)

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[Aakash.]

I liked the way you started the story. The hero of the story is Nischal and perhaps the heroine is Jivisha. I have seen this forced marriage many times and I do not like it. Jivisha is very beautiful and lovely.
One thing is not understood, why does Nischal not understand what someone is saying, or Nischal is mad. Jivisha is a good family girl. Seeing the love of Chirag and Jivisha makes my heart happy.
Everything was understood in a flashback from where it started. Jivisha's antics make me laugh, she is like a small child and is good in gimmick. Another story is being told to hide a story.
Sure, Jivisha is not giving up. Fortunately, the two are back once again. I request you, I am reading this story for the first time, so if you slow down the speed of the update, otherwise I will not be able to read it properly and review it.
All the updates I read so far were very good. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[nain11ster]

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[Chinturocky]

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For nawa story nain11ster for Hinglish ​

 

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[Chutiyadr]

Update:-1​

"Chay le lo chay, chay garam, chay garam" .... "Ek rupya de do sahab, mere bache bhuke hain.. aap ko dua lagegi".... "Vanita, mayapuri, oulook, sarita... magazine le lo magazine".... "Yatrigan kripya dhyan den, train no 12406, Mumbai-howrah mail apne nirdharit samay se ek ghanta der se chal rahi hai... aap ke hui aswidha ke liye hume khed hai"

"Ufff kitni bhid hai yahan... ye main kaun si grah par aa pahuncha, ye to chidiyakhana jaisa lag raha hai".....

Nischal, Kalyan junction ke platform no. 4 par khada wahan ki bhir ko dekh ascharya me par gaya. Ajib tarah ke mahol, ajib tarah ke log aur bhasha to bikul samjh se pare.

Tabhi koi train uss platform par aa kar ruki aur logon ki bhir utri.... ek aurat upar se niche bag lade, chillati hui kahne lagi.... "Ae khambe ki tarah raste me kyon khada hai, side hat na. Dikhta nahi bhari saman uthaye hun"

Nischal uss aurat ke ajib si baat ko samjh to nahi paya bas usse laga ki wo kuch kah rahi hai. Nischal hathon ke ishare me puchha "Kya hai"

Aurat.... Pagal hai kya hatne kah rahi hun to tujhe samjh me nahi aa raha hai kya....

Uski bhasha Nischal ke samjh se pare thi. Aur khada bas isharon me puchhne ki kosis kar raha tha ki wo kahna kya chahti hai.... anth me haar kar wo aurat he uske bagal se nikal gayi.

Wo aurat karib char kadam aage gayi hogi, Nischal ne samne dekha to uss aurat ka ek jhola sayad wahin chhut gaya tha... Nischal ne jhola liya aur teji se mura jhola usse wapas dene ke liye....


"Hey bhagwan ye mukhiya ji ke aadmi mujhe dhundhte yahan na aa jaye. Please bhagwan un kamino ki najar nahi pare mujh par, bacha lo prabhu... bacha lo"

Jabardasti shadi ho rahi thi, aur Jivisha shadi ke din he bhag aayi. Jab se train me baithi thi, usse ek he dar sata raha tha kahin mukhiya ji ke aadmi na dekh le, aur pakar kar uski jabardasti shadi na karwa de...

Dulhan ke libas me, upar se niche tak sazi Jivisha.... "Bhagwan-bhagwan" karti chali ja rahi thi.... tabhi... "Ticket... ticket"... karte huye T.T bhi pahunch gaya...

T.t ko dekh dekh kar Jivisha jor-jor se rone lagi. Halanki uski aankhon me aanshu to nahi the par awaz me rone wali siskiyan jaroor thi.

Kuch he der me bhir jama ho gayi..... "Kya hua bitiya, tum ro kyon rahi ho, tumhare sath wale log kahan gaye"

Bhir me se ek dayalu lady, Jivisha ko satwana deti puchhne lagi..... Jivisha apne naak aur aankh ponchhti kahne lagi..... "Mere sath koi bhi nahi. Pata nahi mere pati kahan chale gaye. Subah jab nind khuli to mere pass nahi the. Kab se unhe dhund rahu hun mil he nahi rahe. Ticket, paisa sab unhi ke pass hai... subah se bhukhi bhi hun, kuch khayi tak nahi".

T.t, wahan ke mahol ko dekh kar he nikal gaya. Usse samjh me aa gaya tha ki aage kuch kaha to public puri lapat paregi.

Train ke achhe bhale log, sab uss bechari akeli asahay ladki ko wahan se utha kar apne stah wali berth par le aaye. Pahle to khub khilaya pilaya, fir Jivisha ke pati ko 100 galiyan dete huye usse kosne lage.....

Train apni puri raftar se apne har paraw par rukti hui chal rahi thi. Jivisha ka safar achha katne laga, lekin tabhi lobby me najar gayi aur dar se Jivisha ka kaleja dhak-dhak karne laga. Mukhiya ji ke aadmi Jivisha ko dhundhte uss compartment me pahunch chuke the.

"Ab kya karun... Bhagwan kaha tha na thodi madad karo... nahi suni na aap ne"... Jivisha chupke se wahan se uthi aur ja kar bathroom me ghus gayi... idhar mukhiya ji ke aadmi usse pure compartment me dhundhte aage badh rahe the.... Tabhi Kalyan junction par train ruki aur Jivisha chhipte-chhipate bahar nikal gayi.....

Jisvisha mud-mud kar aage pichhe dekh rahi thi aur bari teji se aage badh rahi thi. Nischal uss aurat ka bag utha kar usse dene ke liye mura he tha... aur ussi waqt Jivisha mur kar train ko dekh rahi thi aur apne kadam aage badha rahi thi.....


"Dharam"....... Jivisha aur Nischal ki takkar ho gayi... Jivisha larkhara kar girne lagi. Tabhi Nischal ne uske kamar ko apne hathon me tham liya aur usse girne se bachaya....

Nischal ne aakhen munda... sara ghatnakarm usse slow motion me dikh raha tha.... uska murna... aur Jivisha ka kandha uske sine se takraya..

Uski gardan piche ki ore mure aur kadan aage tha.... uffff jhatke ke sath gardan ghumate aage muri... khubsurat se chehre par pura baal bikher gaye. Uske aage ka paun larkharaya, aur wo girne lagi...

Nischal ne apni aakhen khol diya... Jivisha ko ab bhi wo apne hathon me thame tha... aur Jivisha ka chehra pura balon se dhaka tha.... Jivisha apne chehre par aaye bikhre baal ko hatayi... "Uffff kya masoom, khubsurat si jhalak thi, aur ye dulhan ka libas iss roop me par aur char chand laga raha tha"

Nischal ke liye ye pal jaise tham sa gaya ho, aur najren bas Jivisha par he tiki rah gayi. Idhar Jivhsa khud ko balance nahi kar payi aur wo larkhara kar girne lagi. Bikhre baal sidhi karti wo jab uthne ki kosis kar rahi thi, tabhi samne Nischal ka wo khubsurat sa chehra tha....

Ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki ye chehra dil me utar raha hai. Par agle he pal jab wapas najren train ki ore gayi to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke aadmi issi taraf aa rahe hain....

Jivisha, Nischal ke kalai ka sahara le kar sidhi khari hui. Apne aeriyon ko unchi karti thodi upar hui aur Nischal ke gale me hath dal kar hont se hont laga diya. Jisvisha apna chehra chhipane ke liye Nischal ke hont se hont laga, usse chumna shuru kar di.... Nischal ki aankhen fati ki fati rah gayi... usse samjh me he nahi aaya ki ek he pal me ye kya ho gaya....

Jivisha hont se hont lagaye rakhi, aur najren utha kar dekh bhi rahi thi ki wo log unhe cross kiye kiye ya nahi. Aankhen khuli to pata chala ki mukhiya ji ke log bhi wahan khadey ho kar free ka show enjoy kar rahe hain.....

"Fas gayi Jivisha iss filmy trick ke chakkar me. Bhagwan ab aur kitne twist haan, kuch to raham karo. Kab tak main iss anjaan ke sath kiss karti rahun".

Jivisha aakhen kholti aur fir kiss continue karne lagti. Chhota kiss to samajh me bhi aata hai, logon ka dhyan nahi jaye. Lekin ye kiss to lamba, aur lamba he hota chala ja raha tha, aur logon ki puri bhir jama ho kar bas yahi najara dekh rahi thi.... tabhi Jivisha ke kano tak aawaz pahunchi....

"Chalo re inhe romamce kar lene do, lagta hai honeymoon bhi yahin mana kar jayenge. Chalo Jivisha ko ander train me he dhundhte hain"

Train ne horn dena shuru kiya aur mukhiya ji ke log nikal liye. Train jab badh chali to Jivisha, Nischal ke hont chhorti, yakkk-yakk karti apne hont ko rumal se pochh ne lagi....

Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....

e to bada filmy update tha
nischal aur jivasa
aise naam late kaha se ho , mujhe bhi ek list de do bhai , ye sala ajay , abhi , vijay yahi sab likh likh kar pak gaya hu

 

[Chutiyadr]

Update :-2

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Khud ko thik kar ke najar jab samne ghumayi... Nischal bari si aakhen kiye usse tukur-tukur dekhe ja raha tha.... Jivisha ke pass bhi koi sabd nahi the ki ab iss bechare ko kya jawab de jo kiss ke baad hakka-bakka khada tha.... Dono nisabd khadey bas ek dusre ko he dekh rahe the....


Jivisha.... Aise kya dekh rahe ho, jo bhi hua usse bhul jao aur bhago yahan se.

"O' Khudaya, kuch to aisa karo ki inki baat mujhe samjh me aa jaye. Khair baat samjh me aaye ki na aaye, inka andaz pasand aaya, issi ke sath chalta hun, kafi friendly nature hai iska".

Jisvisha.... Abhi tak yahin khare ho aur aise tukur-tukur kya dekh rahe ho. Ek baar kahi to samjh me nahi aa raha kya. Ab main kyon isse samjha rahi hun. Tum maro yahin main chali.


Jivisha, Nischal ko chhor kar platform se bahar jane lagi, aur Nischal bhi uske pichhe-pichhe chal diya. Jivisha pani bottol kharidne ek stall par ruki, tabhi Nischal bhi uske pass aa kar khada ho gaya...... Jivisha ki najar jaise he uss par gayi..... "Jivisha, pagal, jhalli, ullu... kis chipku ko kiss kar di duffer, pichha he nahi chhor raha".... bari si aankhen kiye bebas bhari najron se Jivisha, Nischal ko dekhte, hath jor kar kahne lagi.....

"Unnnnnhhhh huuuunnn hunnnn.... sorry baba wo jaan bachani thi isliye kiss kiya, mera pichha chhor do please. Dekho tum mera pichha chhor do to badle me main tumhe bahut sara rupya dungi"... Itna kah kar Jivisha ne kuch 500-1000 ke note aage badha diye...


"Bechari ladki, kitni musibat me hai, lekin ye bekar si chij mujhe kyon de rahi hai... Lagta hai issi wajah se paresan hai".... Nischal ne khud me jo samiksha karna tha kiya aur Jivisha ke hath se note le kar tukra-tukra kar diya....


Jivisha gusse me usse dekhti.... "Tum ye paise far kar kya dikhana chahte ho, bahut bare raish ho... huhhh. Dekho ab tak pyar se kah rahi thi lekin ab yadi pichha nahi chhora to police se pakrwa dungi"....


Nischal ko ab kya samjh me aaya ki wo kya kah rahi thi, wo bas haan me apna sir hila diya. Haan me usne jaise he sir hilaya, Jivisha halki muskurayi .... "chalo picha chhuta"... Jivisha ko muskurata dekh Nischal bhi muskuraya..... "Lagta hai ye bechari uss kachre ke wajah se paresan thi, ab khush lag rahi hai"


Jivisha muskurati bye ka ishara karte usse chhor kar jane lagi.... Nischal bhi hath hilata uske sath-sath chalne laga.... Jivisha mukurate huye usse fir dekhi aur kahne lagi...... "Darling abhi to kahe the ki tum mera pichha nahi karoge, fir mere sath kyon chal rahe ho... tum apne raste jao main apne raste"


Ek baar fir Nischal ne haan me sir hilaya... Jivisha ko fir laga ki ab ye apne raste jayega aur main apne raste.... wo apne kadam aage badhayi... aur fir se uske sath Nischal bhi chal diya....

Jivisha sir pit'ti wahin jamin par baith gayi aur nakiyate jor se chillayi..... "Mammiiiiiiiii"..... Agle he pal Jivisha khud ko kosne lagi... "wo kaun si manhush ghari jo main bhagi aur ye chipku mil gaya, na main bhagti aur na he ye chipku milta".....

Jivisha in flash back... kuch din pahle....



Buglow ke bahar ki jhalak... Main gate par Swarn Villa likha hua... ander uski pyari mom Priya Rajput apne pati Himanshu Rajput ke sath sofe par baithi hai... uske gode me pariwar ka sab se chhota sadasya yani ki unka pota Chirag Rajpur, apni dadi ke gode me baitha tha aur uski dadi pyar se usse seb khila rahi thi.

Samne se uski bahu Nandita Rajput apne hathon me chay ka tray liye aa rahi. Pahle apne saas sasur ko serve ki fir apne pati Ravi Rajput ki ore chay badha di. Pass me he uska ladla dever Avinash Rajput bhi baitha tha, usse bhi chay deti wo sab ke sath baith gayi....

Chay ki pahli chuski ke sath Papa Himanshu bole.... "Ab tak soyi he hui hai, ye bitte bhar ka bacha jaag gaya aur wo ladki ab tak so rahi hai"

Priya.... Jane do na ji, sone do. Kal der raat tak usne padhai ki hai....

Abhi..... Isliye kahta hun mom thoda bahut khud bhi padh liya karo. Aap ki ladli beti jasusi novel padh rahi thi... koi apne course ki kitab nahi padh rahi thi.

Priya.... Kuch bhi padh to rahi thi na. Wo nahi padhegi, nahi padhegi... shadi kar ke apne sasural jayegi, teri tarah to nahi hai... pura din apne awara doston ke sath ghumta hai aur bhar din mobile me laga rahta hai....

Nadita, hasti hui kahne lagi.... "Maa ji, dever ji ke mobile par to ladkiyon ke bhi phone aate hain"

Priya.... Kya ??? Dekha ji aapne... main shuru se kahti thi ye ladka kuch na krega gawn bhej do isse, wahin apna khet dekhega. Par iss ghar me meri koi sune tab na... dekhna kisi din kisi ladki ko bhaga le aayega to fir mujhe kuch mat kahna....

Abhi apni bhabhi ko ghurte huye dekhne laga.... tabhi bhai Ravi topic ko divert karte kahne lage.... "Bas bhi karo sab, yahan Jivisha ki baat ho rahi thi, aur tum sab Abhi ke pichhe he par gaye"....

Himanshu.... Ek minute tum sab jarra shant ho jao. Mujhe kuch jaruri baat kahni hai...

Sara pariwahe dhyan se Himanshu ki ore dekhne laga...... "Mere dost hai na Punya pratap singh, uska beta abhi-abhi foreign se lauta hai. Dikhne me smart hai, videsh se padh kar lauta hai, aur kuch din baad apne company ko chalayega.... Mujhe to Jivisha ke liye iss se achha rista kahin nahi milega... kya kahte ho tum sab".....

Pura pariwar "Haan-haan" kart charcha karne lage... tabhi chhotu ustad Chirag apni dadi ki gode se utar kar, chupke se apne bua ke kamre me chala aaya...

Jivisha, makhmal ke bistar par, takiye ko apne sine se lagaye muskurati so rahi thi. Chirag ne idhar-udhar dekha aur mej par rakha pani ka jug utha kar Jivisha ke upar pani pura urrel diya....

Jivisha harbara kar uthi aur uth kar baith gayi. Dhime se ek aankh kholi aur samne Chirag.... "Chhotku, tujhe to main aaj batati hun"

Jivisha jhapat kar dauri, wo pure kamre me idhar udhar bhagta raha aur Jivisha uske pichhe-pichhe bhag rahi thi... tabhi Jivisha ne usse pakra aur pakar kar bistar par patak di... "Saitan kahin ka aise jagate hain"

Jivisha usse pakar kar gudgudi karne lagi.... "Bol fir karega aisa... bata"

Chirag.... Heee heee heee ... bua chhoro bhi... bua...

Jivisha.... Bua bol kar chidha raha ruk tujhe abhi batati hun ....

Jivisha uske naak par dant katne lagi.....

Chirag.... Di bolo to maa marti hai, bua kaho to aap gussa karti ho... bhagwan main karun to kya karun....

Jivisha.... Nalayak tum mera beta hai ki apni maa ka. Jo main bolungi wahi karna kisi ki mat saun'na....

Chirag... Thik hai di, ab mujhe chhoro warna aap he fasogi....

Jivisha.... Ohhh ! Ye emergency wake up tha kya...

Chirag apna sir hilate.... Haan di, ye emergency wake up tha.... mukhiya ji aap ki shadi tay kar rahe hain....

Jivisha.... Mukhiya ji ki itni himmat... chal tu mere sath... aaj inki family meeting ki to fis-fis...

Jivisha, bahar hall me aayi... tab tak inki family meeting chal rahi thi aur sab log khusiyan mana rahe the... kyonki un sab ki ore se ye rista pakka ho gaya tha.....

Jivisha ko aate dekh, Priya..... "Bare achhe samay par aayi hai, sun beta har ladki ko ek na ek din"...

"Ek na ek din" par abhi baat chal he rahi thi ki Jivisha apni ek hath aage dikhati..... "Bas... to yahan mukhiya ji ke dekh rekh me puri panchyat bithayi gayi hai meri shadi ke liye. Lekin ek baat aap sab bhi sun lo, aur mukhiya ji khas kar aap... main abhi shadi nahi karungi"

Himanshu... Par kyon beta, itna achha rista hai.. hum sab ko pasand hai, fir tu kyon inkaar kar rahi hai.. dekh hum sab tera bhala he chahte hain....

Abhi.... Ye na karne wali hai shadi kyonki ye to pahle se he apna bf pasand kar chuki hai... main shuru se kahta tha ki iska aur Videh ka koi chakkar chal raha tab kaun tha jo mujhe naroow minded kahta tha....

Jivisha apni bhawen sikori... muh chamkayi..... "Bhaiya main aap ka khun kar dungi. Papa dekha na kaise awara ladkon ke sath rah-rah kar inki soch bhi gandi ho gayi hai. Chhi, aisi baten... aaj ke baad iss gandi soch wale se mera rista khatam. Main tumhe ab rakhi bhi nahi bandhungi"...

Abhi... Kaun sa free me bandhti hai. Last time scooty li thi bhul gayi. Main he tha jo sab se lar kar tujhe scooty diya tha. Abhi tu mujhe he suna rahi hai. Papa aap ne jaisa socha hai waisa he hoga...

Jivisha.... Nahi, main abhi shadi nahi karungi... yadi jabardasti kiye to main aap sab par police case kar dungi....

Himanshu.... Sab chup... beta yadi Abhi jhoot kah raha hai, aur tu ne kisi ko pahle se pasand nahi kiya to baat kya hai inkaar ki....

Jivisha ke chehre par faili muskaan .... wo tahalti hui apni baat kahne lagi....

"Nahi mera koi bf nahi aur koi hoga bhi nahi... mera to prince charm aayega... Jab wo aayega to hawa me ek ajib si khusbu hogi, mahol surmayi tarange bikherenge.... uska roop itna lubhawna hoga ki dil me utar jaye. Aur jab uss ko mujhe se pyar hoga to nile asman me wo I Love You likh dega... Dekhna wo pure himmat ke sath, aap sab ki aankhon me aankhen dal kar, mujhe aap sab se magne aayega... Bas ussi ke intzar me hun, aur main ussi se shadi karungi".....

Idhar Jivisha apne sapney me khoyi apni dil ki baat pure pariwar ko bata rahi thi, aur udhar uski maa ka B.P high hota ja raha tha......

ek no. gajab ka charecter banaya hai jivisha ka
aur ye nischal kisi dusare gole se aaya hai kya , ab paise ko faad raha hai to dusare gole ka hi hoga is gole me to sabhi paise ke diwane hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Update:-4​

Teen-char ladkiyan gayi Jivisha ke kamre tak, aur sabhi daurti hui wapas aa kar chillane lagi..... "Dulhan apne kamre me nahi hai, wo bhag gayi"......


Jivisha apne chhote se flashback ko yaad kar ke, niche baithi bas yahi soch rahi thi.... "Iss chipku se to jyada achha main uss chipku se he shadi kar leti, bhagwan sare twist aaj he de dena kal ke liye kuch mat chhorna"


Jivisha itna soch kar jaise he apne khyalon se bahar aayi, thik uske bagal me Nischal baitha tha...... Usse dekhte he Jivisha fir se thunakte huye jor-jor se rone lagi......


"Ab ye ladki ro kyon rahi hai, isse fir kya ho gaya. Mujhe yahan ki bhasha sikhni hogi, tabhi iss ladki se mujhe kuch fayda bhi milega..."


Nischal uske pass se utha aur ek side me chala gaya... high-tect yantr apne jeb se nikal kar uske wire apne sir ke dono side laga diya. Apne aankhen munda aur concentrate karte huye Serin.. Serin bar-barane laga..... Thodi he der me dusre ore se bhi respond hua....


Nischal..... Serin iss location ko trace karo aur yahan ki ajib si bhasha ko decode kar ke upload karo.

Serin.... Lightwave frequency to kafi dur ki lag rahi hai. Nischal tum itni dur pahunche kaise... aur yahan sab tumhe bhagode kyon kah rahe hain ?....


Nischal.... Jise jo kahna hai kahne do, mujhe kya karna hai. Tumhe jo kaha tum bas wahi karo....


Serin... Par Nischal...


Nischa.... Koi bahas nahi. Jitna kaha, utna chup-chap karo....


Jivisha ne jab rona shuru kiya, tabhi Nischal uth kar chala aaya. Usne jab aankhe kholi tab tak Nischal ja chuka tha.


"Thank god, jaan bachi... pahle he rone lagti to itna drama nahi hota. Ab jara main relax ho kar station se bahar niklun fir sochti hun aage kya karna hai"


Jivisha Kalyan junction ke bahar aayi. Raat andheri thi aur junction ke bahar ka mahol bhi kuch achha nahi, upar se ek akeli ladki jo dulhan ke vesh me upar se niche tak saji thi. Jivisha jab bahar nikli tab se he uska pichha hona shuru ho gaya.


Idhar Jivisha wahan se nikalte he sab se pahle kaam apna huliya badlne ka sochi. Wahin najdiki ek mall me ghusi aur apna huliya change kiya, aur bahar aa gayi.... "Huliya to change kar liya ab jarra pet puja ho jaye to kuch sochun aage kya karna hai"


Mast khana khayi, khate-khate usse khyal aaya..... "Mumbai me rahi to fasna pakka hai, kyon na kuch dino ke liye apne dost ke pass Indore chala jaye, aakhir uss par mere itne ehsaan bhi hai"... Fir kya tha Jivisha jaldi se khana khatam ki aur wapas Kalyan junction aa gayi.


Kismat, Kalyan junction par Indore jane wali train ka announcment bhi ho raha tha, Jivisha bhagi-bhagi train pakrne pahunch gayi. Lekin in sab ke bich usse pata bhi na chala ki usko lutne ki puri planning ban chuki hai, aur 5 gundey uske pichhe lage hain.


Idhar Saren se baat kar ke jab tak Nischal lauta, tab tak wo ja chuki thi. Afsos usse bahut hua, abhi-abhi to kisi se pahchan hui thi, wo bhi kahin gum ho gayi. Nischal bhi Kalyan junction par tab se Jivisha ko he dhund raha tha....


Jivisha, Indore jane ke liye bhagi, bhagi train pakrne ja rahi thi, uske pichhe-pichhe wo sare gundey, aur unke pichhe Nischal. Sabhi sleeper class me pahunche.


Jivisa compartment ke ander pahla kadam he dali thi ki usse wahi lady mil gayi jo pichhli train me thi. Jivisha ko dekhte he wo.... "Arre beta tum bhi Indore ja rahi ho kya, aur tumhare husband kahan hai, nahi mila kya ?"


"Bhagwan, yahan log kitne fursat me hote hain, isse to sab yaad hai"...... Jivisha ajib si jabardasti wali hansi, hasti hui kahne lagi..... "Pata nahi aunty kahan chala gaya. Koi aisa bhi karta hai kya, batao ?"


Jivisha apni kahani suna he rahi thi ki samne Nischal aa kar khada ho gaya..... "Hey bhagwan, ab to lagta hai main train se kud he jaun".


Jivisha man me apna rona ro rahi thi, Nischal thik uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya..... Nischal ko samne khada dekh wo lady uss se puchhne lagi..... "Kaun ho tum, yahan aa kar kyon khadey ho gaye. Ye humari reserve berth hai"


"Ye naye log mujh se kuch kah raha hai, sayad mere bare me puchh rahe honge... main isse isharon me batata hun ki main aur ye, hum dono ek dusre ko jante hain"..... Nischal ne apna he solution nikala aur uss lady se "Muaahhh... muahhhh" ka ishara karte batane laga ki Jivisha ne usse kiss kiya... wo usse janta hai"...


Bas fir kya tha, wo lady ko laga yahi hai Jivisha ka pati. Fir kya tha uss lady ka pura khandan toot para uss par...... "Aisa koi karta hai kya... apni biwi ko koi chhor kar jata hai kya ... ye wo, bla-bla"...


Nischal chup-chap sunta raha aur soch chuka tha, ab to kuch bhi ho jaye wo yahan se jayega nahi. Idhar Jivisha..... "Cool haan, to in logon ne ristedari bhi jor diya. Koi na main samjh gayi iss chipku se to ab Indore me he pichha chhutega. Jivisha beta go with flow, ab aur jyada yahan koi drama nahi".


Jivisha ne bhi sahmati dete huye, usse apna pati swikar kar li. Nischal ki harkaton ko bhanpte fir to Jivisha ne lambi chahuri kahani bana di...... "Mera pati bol aur sun nahi sakta. Ye mujhe bahut pyara lagta hai, isliye maine iss se shadi kar li"


Baton ka daur lamba he chalta gaya aur Jivisha bhi puri kahani par kahani banati rahi. Nischal ko to kuch samjh me aane se raha, sab ko dekh wo bas apna sir he hilata raha.


Idhar wo sare chor ussi berth ke dayen-bayen unki baton ko sun rahe the. Pati gunga, patni ke pass lakhon ka maal.... kaam to pahle se aasan tha, ab bas sone ka intzar ho raha tha.


Raat ke takriban 3 baje wo chor active huye aur Jivisha ka sara maal lootne ki kosis karne me lag gaye. Bare he chaturai se usne Jivisha ka bag urraya, aur urra kar chain pulling kar ke train se bahg gaye....


Train se jab wo niche utar kar aapas me apni saflta par khush ho rahe the tabhi samne se unhe Nischal dikha.... Nischal ko dekh kar sabhi chaunk gaye..... "Abe tu to so raha tha, yahan kya urri maar kar aaya"


Dusra aadmi.... "Tu bhi kahan gunge se baat kar raha hai. Ye sale... inka sixth sence kafi tej hota hai. Maar isse aur nikalte hain yahan se...


Sab ne marne par sahmati diya aur Nischal ki ore lapatne daure. Nischal ka dhyan to sirf uske hath me para Jivisha ke saman ke upar tha. Nischal ne kuch jyada mehnat nahi kiya. Wo log samne se aa rahe the, Nischal side se bhagta usse apne pichhe aane par majboor kiya... aur jab wo log Nischal ke pichhe bari teji se daur rahe the, tabhi wo ruk kar ek kadam pichhe hua aur jhappatta marta bag chhin kar fir se daur laga diya.


Nischal daudte huye chalti train me aaram se chadh gaya.... Jivisha aur baki sare log ab bhi so rahe the, Nischal ne bhi apni jagah pakar li. Nischal Jivisha ko dekhte huye sochne laga.... "Kuch alag he khinchaw hai iss ladki me. Aakhir mera itna jhukaw kyon ho raha hai. Jo bhi ho Saren jaldi yahan ki bhasa decode kare fir dekhte hain ye kitne kaam aa sakti hai ye".


Raat ko fir sabhi mast nind lene lage. Agle din train Indore pahunchi... Jivisha rahat ki sans leti sochne lagi.... "Ab to iss family aur iss chipku dono se chhutkara milega"


Bhid puri utarne me lagi thi, Nischal aur wo family jab utarne ke liye aage badhe, Jivisha teji dikhati hui dusre gate se utar gayi..... dusre gate se jaise he utri, uski najar apne dost Nandni par gayi....


"Aahhh bahgwan, kal se le kar aaj tak me yahi ek sahi kaam kiye ho. Thank you"... Jivisha bhag kar Nandita ke pass pahunchi aur uska hath pakar kar khinchti hui usse bahar ki taraf le jane lagi.


Pune ka koi dost, yun achanak se Indore station par, na kuch kaha, na kuch suna... sidha hath khinchte huye bahar le jane lage..... Shocking...


Nandni, Jivisha ka hanth khinch kar roki..... "Duffer, ye sab kya hai"


Jivisha..... Time nahi mere pass raste me puri baat batati hun.


Nandni.... Yaar meri puri family issi train se utar rahi hai.... main unhe receive karne aayi hun. Pata nahi tere baat par kya reaction dun. Ruk main unko receive kar ke tere sath chaliti hun...


Jivisha, uska hanth khinchti..... "Wo kya bache hain jo station par gum ho jayenge... main yahan itni musibat me hun... itna samjh ki yadi usne mujhe dekh liya to main mari jaungi...


Nandni.... Kyaaaa ????


Jivisha, fir se uska hanth khinchti.... "Tu ye shocking expression baad me bhi sakti hai, abhi tu chal na please. Ye mere zindgi aur maut ka sawal hai"


Baat ki gahrai ko samjhte, Nandni bhi uske sath teji se bahar ki ore nikli. Jivisha ko dilasha deti hui kahne lagi.... "Tu dar mat Indore me tujhe kisi baat ki chinta karne ki jaroorat nahi. Koi tere pichhe para hai ye baat tu phone par batati to ab tak uski band yahin baj jati",


Baat karte dono bahar aa gaye aur dono chal diye ghar ki taraf. Raste me jab Jivisha ne apni puri kahani usse bayan ki to Nandita apna sir pit'ti kahne lagi.....


"Jisa teri to. Kamini kahin ki, jahil gawar ullu. Tere melodrama ke chakkar me tu to fasti he hai, dusron ko bhi shock de deti hai. Waise ek baat bata tujhe jaroorat kya thi usse kiss karne ki... itne bare station par kahin bhi kona pakar leti".


Jivisha... Nandu situation he aisi thi, wo log itne pass aa gaye the ki mujhe majbooran kiss karna para. Khair tum nahi samjhegi....


Dono baat karte huye ghar pahunch gaye. Un dono ko pahunche 5 min bhi nahi huye honge ki pichhe se Nadni ka pura pariwar pahunch gaya.... Jivisha ke aankhon ke samne wahi pariwar jo train me mili thi, aur unke sath tha Nischal bhi....


Unhe dekhte he Jivisha ke muh se nikal gaya...... "Hey bhagwan"

gajab ki story building
to nishchal dusare gole se hi hai

 

[Chutiyadr]

Update:-5​

Unhe dekhte he Jivisha ke muh se nikal gaya...... "Hey bhagwan"


Jivisha ko dekhte he wo lady..... "Tum kya pagal ho, akal-wakal hai ki nahi. Khud to bhag jati ho, aur kal se kah rahi ho mere pati kahin chale gaye hain. Tum kya isse chhor kar bhagna chahti ho, mamla kya hai batao. Do apne ghar walon ka number, main unse baat kar ke tumhari harkaten batati hun. Pata nahi aaj kal ki ladkiyon ke dimag me kya chalte rahta hai".


Non stop wo lday bolti he rahi. Mamla sambhalte huye Nandni bol pari..... "Mom, stop it. Jo muh me aaye wo bake ja rahi ho. Ye station par gum ho gayi thi, ro rahi thi isliye main isse yahan par le aayi. Aap to janti he ho, akeli ladki aur bara sahar".


Nandita ki Maa Durga devi..... "Tu jyada wakalat na kar, mujhe abhi iske ghar walon ka number chahiye, warna main police me report karti hun. Mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha, jaroor koi baat hai. Crime petrol nahi dekhti kya. Ghatnayen aise he hoti hain"....


"Ye mother india to kafi chalu india lagti hai, jhanse me nahi aane wali. Hey bahgwan bacha lo, kal se kewal fasa he rahe ho".


Nandni, apni maa par chillati...... "Mom tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai. Ye crime scenes dekh-dekh ke aap har kisi ko criminal he samjhne lagti ho. Main isse bahut pahle se janti hun... ruko 2 min...


Nandni apne college ka album nikalti, apni maa ko dikhane lagi, jisme uski aur Jivisha ki tasveer thi. Uski maa har tasveer ko gaur se dekhne ke baad..... "Ye to samjh gayi ki ye teri dost hai, lekin tumhare har tasveer me ye ladka kaun hai"


Nandni, ghurti najron se Jivisha ko dekhi..... telepathy ke jariye jaise apna sandesh de rahi ho.... "Kamini tumhe bachane ke chakkar mein, main he na fas jaun, bhag yahan se"


Jivisha, minnat bhari najron se usse dekhti apne dono hath jor li... Durga devi ab bhi Nandni ko sawaliya najron se ghure ja rahi thi. Itne me Nandni ka bhai bolne laga.... "Mom, college hai… class me sath padhte honge. Inka apna group hoga.... chalo re sabha khatam karo. Sab safar se thak kar aaye hain jao sab fresh ho, khana khao... aaram se evening me baten karte hain".


Nandita ka bhai Ashis ne mamle ko rafa-dafa karte huye sab ko bhej diya. Nischal, wo to jaise wahan tha he nahi. Ashis usse apne sath apne kamre me le gaya, wahin fresh hone ke liye. Nischal bathroom me gaya he hoga ki uska device bajne laga..... Serin ka msg tha...


Wo samjh gaya yahan ki bhasha decode ho gayi hai. Language aur iss jagah ki sari information uplaod ho rahi thi.... Takriban aadhe ghantey me puri jankari uploaded thi..... Nischal jaldi se fresh hokar bahar nikla...


Idhar Jivisha, Nandni ke sath uske kamre me aa gayi...... "Kamini, to tu tab se meri he family ko pagal kah rahi thi. Tu bhag yahan se warna tere chakkar me main to pakka fasungi".


Jivisha..... Nandu, tu apni ekaluti dost ko bhaga rahi hai. Bhul gayi kitni madad ki thi tumhari maine. Meri sachi dosti ka aisa sila diya, mujhe he bhaga rahi hai....


Nandni.... Jisa jarra bataogi kis tarah ki madad ki thi mujh par. Main to aaj tak uss manhus ghadi ko kos rahi hun jab tu mujhe mili thi. Nahi chahiye tere jaise dost. Tujh se dosti nibhane se achha hai, main kisi kuyen me kud kar jaan de dun...


Jivisha..... Achhi baat hai Nandu, aaj mere bure waqt me tu bhi sath chhor de. Sach he kahte hain log, bure waqt me saya bhi sath chhor deta hai...


Nandni.... O madam ji, tujh par bura waqt nahi aata, balki tera sath jo deta hai uss par rahu, ketu aur sani teeno mandrane lagte hain. Bhul gayi ho to main yaad dila dun tumhe....


Jivisha.... Ye to sarasar ilzam hai my lord. Main to aap ki sachi sathi hun. Tu kya yaad dilayegi main batati hun... Bhul gayi jab wo ladkey aaye the tujhe chherne tab mere bhai ne tujhe bachaya tha. Wo professor wala case. Kitni jaldi bhul gayi tujhe uss Saroj ke chakkar se maine he nikala tha. Tere liya itna pain liya maine aur tu hai ki.... huhhhh !!!


Nandni.... Kya, kya, kya..... Sharm kar Jisa. Kaun se ladkey ke case me tere bhai ne mujhe bachaya tha. Ulta tera bhai mujh par line mar raha tha, aur college ke doston ne dekh liya tha to tere bhai ne ulta unhe pita. Huhhh ! Jab usse pata chala main teri dost hun to usne puri kahani he badal di. Professor ko challenge tune kiya, aur to aur mera, Saroj se break-up bhi karwa diya... Teri to, ek to sare kand tune mere he sath kee, uspar se mujhe ehsaan jata rahi hai. Ruk tere ghar abhi phone karti hun.....


Jivisha.... Bas baba samjh gayi, ab chhoro bhi purani baton ko Nandu. Bhul gayi we are friends till the end of life.


Nandni.... Tere sath deti rahi to waise bhi meri life ka jald hi the end ho jana hai. Chal bata tera ye drama ab aur kitne dino tak chalega...


Jivisha... What do you mean by drama Nandu...


Nandni.... Rahne de nautanki, teri ye bholi shurat aur jhoota expression kisi aur ko dikhana. 3 sal tujhe jhela hai, tere rag rag se wakif hun. Ab batayegi, tu yahan kitne din rahne wali hai taki main khud ko mentally prepare kar lun.


Jivisha.... Rahne de, lagta hai maine tujhe kuch jyada he pareshan kiya hai. Sorry Nandu, manf kar dena. Lekin haan jo bhi kee na wo jaan bujh kar nahi kee thi. Pune mein tujhe pahle hi bahut padeshan kiya hai, yahan bhi meri wajah se tum kyon paresan hogi.... main aaj he chali jaungi...


Nandni.... Tu seriously aaj he ja rahi hai....


Jivisha.... Haan Nandu... chal ab tu happy ho ja...


Nandni ko laga Jivisha fir se emotional hone ka natak kar rahi hai, par Jivisha ab usse sach me pareshan nahi karna chahti thi...


Iss baar Jivisha ne Nandni ko jarra bhi feel nahi hone diya ki wo uske ghar se ja rahi hai. Din ke waqt jab sab apne-apne kamron me the, Jivisha chupchap uss ghar se nikal gayi...


Thik ussi waqt Nischal, Ashis ke sath uske kamre me tha. Ashis apni gf se baat kar raha tha, aur Nischal khidki se bahar dekhte huye uski baat karne ka tarika samjh raha tha. Tabhi uski najar Jivisha par gayi, jo bari teji me gate se bahar ki ore ja rahi thi.


Nischal bhi uske pichhe-pichhe gaya. Jisvisha ghar se 10 kadam aage he gayi hogi ki uske samne Nischal khada tha...... "Ye bahar ghum raha tha.. pata nahi kaun se janam ka karj khayi hun, jo ye pichha he nahi chhorta. Iss se to kuch kahna he bekar hai"


Jivisha achanak se he bol pari..... "Chalo meri kismat, ab tumse to kah bhi nahi sakti ki please mera pichha chhod do.”


Nischal.... Tum har waqt mujh se aise kyon baat karti ho...


Jivisha shocked..... "Tum bol bhi sakte ho"


Nischal.... Haan, main to bol bhi sakta hun, aur tumhe samjh bhi sakta hun...


Jivisha, apne kadan ghar se dur badhati hui.... “To fir mera pichha kyon kar rahe ho. Tum se kaha na wo kiss maine tumse majboori me kiya tha. Tum kahin ke prince nahi jo main ek he jhalak dekh kar tum par mar mitun aur kiss kar dun...


Nischal.... Tu chilla kyon rahi hai. Ja kar apne ghar me chillana. Mujh par chillane walon ka main awaz band kar deta hun...


Jivisha... Badtamij, baat karne ka tarika nahi pata kya ? Kaise tu tarake se baat kar rahe ho. Mera chillana itna he bura lag raha hai tou bhago yahan se, kisne kaha meri awaz sun'ne ke liye. Jaan na pahchan main tera mehmaan. Kaminey tharki, shuru se sab kuch samajh rahe the, fir bhi situation ka maza liye ja rahe ho.


Nischal, Jivisha ka gala dabate..... "Jyada unchi awaz me baat ki tou fir kabhi baat karne ke layak nahi rahengi. Tum ho kaun jo main tumhe sunu.... tu bhag yahan se aur dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana."


Cold war jaise dono me chhir gaya ho. Dono sadak par he jungli ki tarah larne lage. Fir kya tha wahin se dono ke raste alag aur dono chal diye alag-alag disha me. Kahani kismat ki bhi ajib hoti hai.... kismat ne milaya tha, apne jid aur pagalpan se alag huye.... Hay re kismat.....





Idhar ek din pahle jab Jivisha bhagi thi.....


Mate shree Priya ka ro-ro kar bura haal tha, aur wo Jivisha par puri tarah se gussayi hui thi. Ravi aur Avinash dono he Jivisha ke pichha karte Pune se Kalyan tak bhi aaye the, par Kalyan ke baad to jaise wo lapata ho gayi.


Ravi aur Avisnash apni family ka utra hua chehra dekh rahe the aur sage sambandhi dilasa dene ke sath-sath unke ghar me aag bhi laga raha the. Agle din saam ke waqt jab sare ristedar ja chuke the tab Himanshu apne pariwar ke sath apne dost Punya ke yahan pahuncha....


Apne dost se manfi mangte huye Himanshu kahne laga..... "Hume jarra bhi pata nahi tha ki Jivisha aisa kiuch karegi, warna main ye shadi kabhi fix nahi karta"


Shresh.... Uncle kya Jivisha kisi aur ladke ko pasand karti thi?...


Himanshu..... Nahi beta aisi baat nahi hai. Wo bas abhi shadi nahi karna chahti thi....


Punya.... Had hai jab wo shadi nahi karna chah rahi thi, fir bhi uss bachi ke sath tum sab ne jabardasti kiya. Yaar jab nahi karna chahti to nahi karte, kyon itni jaldi thi tumhe shadi ki....

Priya, achanak he bol pari.... "Kisne kaha wo shadi nahi karna chahti. Shadi to karna chahti hai, par ajib sa bhoot sawar hai uske sar par, wo apne sapney ke rajkumar ka intzar kar rahi hai, jo ghode par sawar hokar aaye aur hum sabke samne uaka hanth mang kar, usse byah kar le jaye.”


Shresh.... Ha ha ha, samjh gaya main. Ek baat bolun, aap log please uss par naraj mat hona. Ab to uski shadi uske rajkumar se he hogi, aur main banuga uske sapney ka rajkumar....


Himanshu.... Aaj mujhe mere faisle par garv ho raha hai. Thanks beta.... main to himmat he nahi juta pa raha tha yahan aane kee.


Shresh.... Koi baat nahi uncle, ab bas itna bata dijiye ki wo aap sab se chhip kar ja kahan sakti hai.


Himanshu.... Wo Mumbai ke taraf to gayi thi, lekin usse Mumbai bilkul pasand nahi, isliye wo wahan rukegi nahi. Pata nahi kahan gayi hogi. Uske jitne dost the sab se pata kar liya par kisi ko uske bare me kuch pata nahi....

Shresh..... Koi baat nahi uncle, yadi wo apna mobile chhor kar gayi hai to mujhe de do. Jivisha kahan ja sakti hai, main yun pata kar lunga...


Shresh ki iss baat par Chirag tapak se bol para..... "Meri bua ka mobile le kar jasusi karoge. Abhi to aap kah rahe the ki main banuga unka rajkumar... to jao apni rajkumari ko apne dum par dhundho. Bua ka mobile nahi milega.


Nandita, Chirag ko aakhen dikhati kahne lagi..... "Mobile deta hai ya lagaun ek chapet... chal mobile de abhi"


Chirag.... Chhota hun na sab hukum jhar lo. Abhi Di nahi to sab sher ban rahe ho. Aane do unko fir hum dono mil kar aap sab ko batate hain....


Nandita.... Jyada natak nahi, chal de mobile abhi....


Chirag, apne hathon se mobile aage badhate..... "Lo, le lo mobile... aaj jit jao aap sab kal mera bhi waqt aayega".....


Shresh ke hathon me mobile thi.... Shresh mobile pura check karne ke baad..... "Iss phone me to koi deta he nahi, phone reset kiya gaya hai"


Nandita aankhen dikhati Chirag se kahne lagi..... "Ye jaroor teri he kartut hogi, chal ghar tujhe aaj main babati hun"


Chirag.... Mamma… papa aap ke pass mein baithe hain. Ye papa wala dialogue mujhe kyon chipka rahi ho. Ab mobile me kuch nahi to uska bhi ilzam mujh par he laga do. Jarra bhi akal-wakal hai ki nahi, wo jaymala ke baad bhagi thi, to khud he reset karke gayi hongi na. Warna unke phone ka to lock he nahi khulta...


Chirag ki baten sun kar Ravi aur Nandita, aur wahan maujood sabhi log tahake laga kar hasne lage...


Himanshu.... Chalo chhoro bhi. Shresh, beta tum paresan na ho, hum dhund lenge, aur yadi Jivisha kee koi khabar mili to tumhe turant inform kar denge. Ek baar fir se dhanywaad aap sab ka aur Jivisha abhi bachi hai, uske galti ke liye ek baar fir main manfi mangta hun.


Do char line ki aur dialoguebaji chalti rahi, fir sab log wahan se chalte bane. Jate-jate sab ko Shresh ne kaha... "Aap sab Jivisha ke bagne ko jyada seriously na le, hum sab milkar dhundhege usse"....

ye nischal achank se itana violent kaise ho gaya ?
kahi kisi movie ko to lod nahi kar liya dimag me

 

[Chutiyadr]

Update:-6​

After cold war :- Nischal aur Jivisha....

Dono alag-alag disha me nikal chuke the. Nischal jab Jivisha ko chhor kar aage badha to usse pata nahi kyon kuch achha nahi lag raha tha. Usse aisa laga jaise usne koi galti ki ho. Uske liye sayad zindgi me ye pahla ehsaas tha jab khud me wo kuch bura mehsus kar raha tha..... "Aakhir ye ladki hai kaun, iske liye mujhe kyon bura lag raha hai?"


Khair Nischal bhi aage chal diya. Idhar Jivisha bhi alag rasta pakar li. Wo bas chalti hui yahi soch rahi thi ki uske wajah se Nandni ka break-up ho gaya. Nandni ko kayi sari padesaniya uthani pari jab wo sath college me the.



Jivisha ko rah-rah kar ye feel hota raha. Tannnn.... jaise dimag ki batti jali ho. Turant cyber cafe me gayi aur fb account se Saroj ka number nikaal layi.... Jivisha, Saroj ko call lagati hui....


Saroj.... Hello kaun..

Jivisha..... Main hun Jivisha...

Saroj.... Jivishaaa !!! Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe call karne ki. Rakh phone...

Jivisha.... Wait, wait, wait... call disconnect mat karna. Ek jaroori information deni hai...

Saroj.... Jaldi bolo... mere pass time nahi...

"Kamina, samne se call kari to kitna bhaw kha raha hai".......... Jivisha.... "Nandu ab bhi tumhe chahti hai, aur tumhare liye usne aaj mujh se jhagra bhi kiya. Sorry meri bachkana harkaton se tum dono alag ho gaye.

Saroj.... Hmmm ! Iss baat ka ehsaas tumhe tab hua hota. Kash uss waqt tumhari buddhi itni bharsht na hoti, to aaj humari ek pyari si duniya hoti.

Jivisha.... Bas ussi pyari si duniya ke khatir call ki hun. Nandu ki shadi kal tay hone wali hai. Tum fatafat Indore aa jao aur bacha lo apne pyar ko. Tumhare bina to wo mar jayegi....

Saroj.... Nahi…. main aisa bilkul bhi nahi hone dunga. Tum fatafat adress likhwa do, main abhi Indore ke liye flight le raha hun.


Fir kya tha Jivisha ne Nandni ka adress likhwa diya, aur Saroj bhi Pune se Indore ke liye turant rawana ho gaya..... "Hmmm !! Chalo jo bigara tha, wo to sudhar diya, ab jarra main apne ghar ki bhi soch lun. Pata nahi wahan ka mamla kab tak sudhrega"...


Idhar Saam ko jab ghar me Nandni ne Jivisha ko dhundha to wo gayab thi. Nandni bahut jyada shocked thi, usse yakin nahi ho pa raha tha Jivisha ne bhi baton ko seriously lena sikh gayi hai. Usse rona aa gaya apni harkat par....


Wo apne kamre me baith kar ro rahi thi, tabhi uska bhai Ashis wahan aa pahuncha. Ashis ne Nandni ko rote dekh uss se puchh diya... Nandni ne bhi Jivisha ki tragic story roti hui suna di, kaise wo ghar se bhagi, fir Kalyan station ka har wakya.....


Ashish, usse dilasa dete huye kahne laga.... "Koi baat nahi abhi jyada waqt nahi hua hai, chal, chal kar dhundhte hain sayad Jivisha ab bhi Indore me he ho."....


Dono nikal gaye dhudhne un dono ko. Idhar Jivisha aur Nischal dono he bhatkte-bhatkte pahunch chuke the bus stand par. Bus stand k eek gate se Nischal to dusre gate se Jivisha nader ghus rahi thi. Dono lagbhag ek hi samay par alag-alag raste se bus stand mein kadam rakh rahe the, aur dono apne he dhun me chal rahe the...


Jisvisha ki wahi purani aadat, chal kahin aur rahi thi, dekh kahin aur... wahi haal Nischal ka bhi tha, wo chalet huye aas-pass ke logon ke baat karne ka tarika samjhte huye chala aa raha tha.... aur chalte huye fir se dono takra gaye...... Ek baar fir Jivisha, Nischal ke bahon me jhul rahi thi, aur Nischal uske kamar me hath dale usse thame hua tha.....


Jivisha.... Ab aise he pakre rahoge, ya main khadi ho jaun...

Nischal.... Pichhli baar aise situation me tumne mujhe kiss kiya tha, socha iss baar bhi kahin koi jugad lag jaye.

Jivisha..... Tum kyon mujhe itna paresan kar rahe ho. Kuch der pahle to kahe the ki tum meri shakal tak nahi dekhoge, aur mera pichha karte-karte yahan tak bhi pahunch gaye….

Nischal.... Tum ladkiyon ki problem kya hai, haan.... yahi baat main kahun to kaisa lagega... ki tum mera pichha kar rahi thi, main to apne raste tha...

Jivisha..... Tum itna akad kar mujh se kyon baat karte ho. Tumhe main pasand nahi aur mujhe tum, to baat he khatam karte hai na, baat badhane se kya fayda.

Nischal..... Mujhe aise he baat karni aati hai. Tumhe yadi problem hai to mujhe sikha do.

Jivisha..... Jab kah rahi hun ki baat badhane se koi fayada nahi, fir bhi jabardasti ka topic utha kar jabardasti lage pare ho. Main kyon tumhe kuch sikhaungi jungli. Wapas jao jis jungle se aaye ho. Chipku kahin ke, tum se to chillakar he baat karo to achha hai. Tabhi tum bhagoge.


Nischal.... Chilla kar to dekh, muh na tod dun tera...

Jivisha.... Sadak chhap kahin ke, bolne bhi nahi aata. Tamij he nahi ki khoobsurat ladkiyon se kaise baat karte hain.

Nischal.... Tujhe bahut tamij hai, isliye ladkon ki tarah chillati rahti hai. Tu ladki bhi hai kya ?

Jivisha.... Ab ek aur sabd bola to main tumhara khun pi jaungi....

Nischal.... Lagti he hai dayan ki tarah, tabhi to khun pine ki baat kar rahi ho... chudail kahin ki.


"Bas bahut hua band karo kutte-billi ki tarah ladna. Aise koi sadak par jhagra karta hai kya”. Nandni ko achanak hi bus-stand par dekh Jivisha soch me pad gayi…. “Ye achanak yahan kaise pahunch gayi, koi pir baba ka chamtkar hua tha kya".


Jivisha.... Bahut bara nautnaki hai ye Nandu. Ye bol bhi sakta hai aur sun bhi sakta hai, fir bhi situation ka maza utha raha tha. Mujhe to ye koi bahut bara fraud lagta hai.

Nischal.... Teri to, ye kya bakwas kiye ja rahi hai....

Itna kah kar Nischal ne to iss baar Jivisha ka collor he pakar liya. Sab shocked ho gaye... Public place upar se aisa tamasa, ek ladki ke kamij ka collar pakadna .... Ab to bhid ke sath-sath police bhi pahunchi wahan.


In dono ke jhagre me kai bus ruki pari thi. Sab ke nikalne ka time ho raha tha, par dono to uss jagah se hilne ka naam he nahi le rahe the. Upar se masaallah public, wo to chatkara maar kar iss jhagre ka luft utha rahe the.


Police bhid ko bhagati, dono ko apne sath le jane lagi. Ab to teeno ki he fat gayi.... Jivisha ne socha kahin police ne puchh-tachh aur I'D mangi to ghar par pata chal jayega... Jivisha turant he Nischal ke gale lagti, roni awaz me jor se chillane lagi....


"Hay daiyya, main lut gayi barbaad ho gayi... ek to mera pati mujhe chhor kar ja raha hai, upar se ye police wale, ye nahi ho raha ki mere pati ko samjhaye ki wo apni iss eklauti biwi ko chhor kar na jaye... to ulte hume he hawalat le jana chahte hain"


Bas fir kya tha, ladki ka rona dekh kar kai ladies ab Jivisha ke bachaw mein aa gayi. Haan fark itna tha ki police se sari ladies sirf itna kah rahi tui ki... "aise patiyon ki hawalat me le ja kar dande mar kar samjhana chahiye".


Kaun uljhe ladies se. Police bhi dono ko bhid se bahar la kar harkane lagi.... "Ghar ke jhagre ghar me kyon nahi suljhate. Chalo, tum dono ki baat main police station me he sunuga"....


Ashis..... Arre sir, kahan aap inhe hawalat me le jaoge. Ab aap ki bhi to shadi hui he hogi, to aap samjh he sakte ho, in patniyon ke jid. Bas issi baat par dono ki bahas hui, aur mera dost ruth kar bhagne laga.


Police.... Kamal ka banda hai ye to. Sach me daring wala hai. Biwi se ruth kar ja raha tha aur biwi yahan tak aayi manane ke liye. Wow yaar, iski ek photo lene do, main subah saam iss daringbaaz pati ki tasveer dekhunga. Lekin fir bhi, public place me humgama kiya hai to thane to le jana he hoga...


Ashish, 500 ka ek note badhate kahne laga .... "Sir ab to public place par humgame ka matter solve ho jayega na"...


Police..... Nah, manhgai badh gayi hai, itne se kya hoga. Par iss ladkey ki daring ke karan main itne paise me matter close karta hun. Jao sab ke sab ab bhago yahan se.


Sabhi bina ruke nikle wahan se. Charon ghar pahunche.... Nandni pure raste Jivisha ko bhrikuti (eyebrow) tane use ghurti hui aa rahi thi, mano kah rahi ho tug har chal tujhe main batati hun..... Lekin Nandni ke iss gusse par hall mein hi viram lag gaya jab uske mom-dad ne charon ko ek sath aate dekh liya…… "Tum sabhi kahan gaye the"


Iss sawal ke jawab me Nandni kuch bolti, uss se pahle he uske darwaja par knock hui.... Samne Saroj khara tha. Saroj ko dekh kar Nandni ki mano sasen he ruk gayi ho. Nandni shocked, ab ye yahan kaise tapak para. Nandni ki maa gate par khadey Saroj ko gaur se dekhti kahne lagi..... "Ye to wahi tasveer wala ladka hai"




Shock par shock.... Pune wale sare rahu-ketu ek sath ab Nandni ke ghar par the. Nandni bhrikuti tane, dono aakhen bari ki hui.... Jivisha ki taraf aise ghuri jaise wo abhi usse kha jayegi....


Idhar Nandni ki maa Durga devi Saroj ko gaur se dekhtey huye uske pass pahunch gayi.... Saroj ko ghurti hui kahne lagi.... "Tum Nandni ke sath padhte the na"


Nandni, Jivisha se fusfusate..... "Ye teri he harkat hai na duffer"


Jivisha, chhota sa muh banaye, haan me jor-jor se apna sir hila di. Mamala garbar hote dekh ek baar fir Jivisha ne dimag laga diya..... Teji se wo gate ke ore gayi aur Saroj ko dekh kar kahne lagi..... "Aunty ye mera bhai hai, aaj saam me jab baat hui to maine he isse bula liya"


Jivisha ki baat par Nandni ki maa kahne lagi...... "Tune saam ko bula liya aur ye urr kar yahan chala aaya. Tumhari koi gangue to nahi, jo ek-ek kar ke mere ghar pahunchoge aur loot kar nikal loge".

Jivisha.... Aap bhi na, achha mazak kar leti hain aunty ji.

Durga Devi.... Nahi main bilkul mazak nahi kar rahi. Tu gori chitti hai, aur ye sawla. Dono kahin se bhi dekhne me bhai bahan nahi lagte. Kal jab main tasveeren dekh rahi thi, tab to tumne nahi kaha ki ye tera bhai hai. Kuch to mujh se chhipaya ja raha hai. Ashis... Ashis....


Ashis..... Kya hua, chilla kyon rahi ho...


Durga devi.... Ashis jarra in dono ko dekh kar bata to, kya sakal se dono bhai-bahan lagte hain...


Ashis.... Ab isme bhai bahan nahi lagne jaisa kya hai. Sirf rang he nahi milta na, baki nain-naksh sab milte to hain. Chhote mamu to kitne kale lagte hain, to kya wo aap ke bhai nahi.... Aur Jivisha ko maine he kaha tha isse bula lene, bechari bahut miss kar rahi thi apne bhai ko.


Durga devi.... Mujhe sab garbar kyon lag raha hai. In dono ki shadi hui, aur pati-patni alag-alag the. Train me bhi iss ladki ko kai log dhundh rahe the, mujhe laga iski love marriage hui hai. Jab love marriage hui to ye apne bhai ko kaise bula sakti hai. Aur jab arrange marrige hui hai to ye dono bhag kyon rahe the.... Nah mujhe bilkul yakin nahi. Tum sab mile huye ho aur koi na koi khichdi pak jaroor rahi hai....


Ashis.... Haan khichdi pak rahi hai to aap usse pet bhar kar kha lo. Maa tum na budhape me sathiya gayi ho....


Durga devi.... Ab main he pagal ho gayi. Main he budhi ho gayi. Mujh par he chillayega....


Ashis.... Mom... mom... please mujhe 2 min do aur shanti se pahle baat sun lo... ye lo line par Jivisha ke papa hain...


Ashis ki baat sun kar sab shocked..... Idhar Nandni ki mom ne call pick kee .... udhar se...


"Sorry bahan ji mere wajah se aap sab ko taklif hui. Darasal meri beti ki jo shadi hui hai usse humare backward samaj walon ne kabool nahi kiya, aur wo un dono ko mar dena chahte hain. Isliye majboori me mujhe un dono ko bhagana para. Maine suna ki aap mujh se kuch baat karna chah rahi thi".....


Durga devi.... Haan, main baat karna chah rahi thi. Main bhi ek beti ki maa hun. Bache jab ghar se bhag jaye, upar se intne sandeh jab paida kar rahe ho to guardian se baat karna hi sab jyada sahi vikalp hai. Aap ko sunne ke baad mujhe bahut santusti mili, aur sare sandeh bhi dur ho gaye. Aap ke faisle par mujhe garv mehsus ho raha hai. Ek gunge-bahre ko aap ne apna jamai banaya, iss se bari insaniyan kya ho sakti hai.


Call disconnect aur Durga devi, Jivisha se hath jor kar manfi mangti hui kahne lagi....."Mujhe manf kar do beta, tum pahle se itni paresan thi aur maine tum par shaq kiya.... aao beta ander aao tum ab tak bahar kyon khare ho.... Jivisha beta tumhari shadi kal he hui hai na….. Jivisha "Haan" me sir hilane lagi....


Durga devi..... Haan to thik hai tumhare shadi ke baad ki rashmen hum yahan puri karenge. Yun samjho ki tum bhi meri he beti jaisi ho. Nandni, Ashis... Hum bahar ja rahe hain shadi ke baad ki rashmen jo hoti hai usse pura karne ke liye pandit ji ko bulane... dhyan rahe tab tak ye dono sath na rahe....


Durga devi apne pati ke sath ussi waqt market chali jati hai... idhar ghar me...


Ashis.... Koi batayega ye tum logon ka kya naya natak chal raha hai.. Nandni enough, main kab tak tumhe save karta rahunga..... hamesa tumhari he problem tumhari he tragedy... tumhare karan mujhe ghar me 100 jhoot bolne parte hain.


Nandni.... My sweet bhaiya, ab ek he to bahan hai tumhari to kya mujhe nahi bachaoge to apni gf ko bachaoge. Aur meri ek he to dost hai, haan thodi pagal hai par uske liye 7 khoon manf.


Ashis.... Aur in dono ladkon ka kya....


Saroj.... Mujhe to yahan Jivisha ne bulaya, kahi Nandni ki shadi tay ho rahi hai aur wo mere bina mar jayegi....


Ashis.... For your kind information Mr Saroj, Nandani ki shadi pahle se tay ho chuki hai, wo bhi ussi ke pasand ke ladkey se. Aur uske liye isne mujh se 100 tarah ke jhoot aur 200 tarah ke kukarm karwaye hain isne. Dusri baat ye ki tum ek bhai ke samne khade ho kar ye jata rahe ho ki tum uski bahan ko pasand karte ho. Tum ek reason batao ki main tumhara muh kyon na tod dun.


Jivisha, Ashish ki baten sunte he chupke se kadam badha kar wahan se khisakne lagi, tabhi wahan Ashis ki awaz gunji.... "Pichhe se aap kahan nikal rahi hain mohtarma"


Jivisha.... Maine socha aap ke aur Nandu ke bich baat chal rahi hai, bhala yahan mera kya kaam.


Nandni... Bhaiya, aap apna jarra sawal jabaw baad me karoge. Mujhe abhi thoda hisab kitab karna hai...


Ashis... Thik hai kar lo...


Nandni.... Jisa tu ghar se kyon gayi....


Jivisha.... Bas mujhe realise hua ki maine aaj tak tumhare liye kuch kiya nahi, ulte padesani khari karti aayi hun. Bas yahi soch kar chali gayi....


Nandni.... Jyada over smart ho gayi hai na... kuch bol diya mazak me to tere dil me chhed lag gaya.


Jivisha.... Bas baba sorry... ab to khush.. chal hans bhi de. Mujh se tu muh fula kar rahe ye mujhe achha nahi lagta....


Nandni.... Mera ego satisfy nahi hua, chal murgi ban fir mera ego satisfy hoga.


Jivisha charo ore najar ghumayi.... Ashis, Saroj, Nischal.. sab hall me he khadey the..... "Nandu, yahan sab ke samne"


Nandni.... Haan yahan, abhi... sab ke samne....


Jivisha.... Tu sach me serious hai....


Nandni.... Haan sach me serious hun, aur jis tarah se tune mera dil dukhaya hai, yadi murgi na bani to teri kasam main tere se baat nahi karungi.


Jivisha..... Huhh ! Aisa bhi kya ego... sab ke bich murgi ban'ne kah di... tumhe yahi achha lagega to yahi sahi...


Jivisha bhi tau me aati apne dono kaan pakar kar position me aane he wali thi ki tabhi Nandni ne usse roka..... "Bas baba, aur sorry jo tumhe uss waqt ulta bola aur abhi tumhe aisi saza di"


Jivisha.... Ab formality band bhi kar... aur mujhe ye bata ki teri shadi ho rahi aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahi....


Saroj, jo ab tak chup tha..... "Tum aise kaise kar sakti ho shadi, main tumhare liye he itni dur se aaya hun"


Ashish.... Tum dono ka bharat milap ho gaya ho to dono me se koi ye batayega ki ye ladka yahan kya kar raha hai....


Nandni, Jivisha ko aakhen dikhati.... "Ab tera ye kaun sa naya drama tha tu jarra samjhayegi. Subah tu aayi aur saam ko ye aa dhamka"


Jivisha.... Ab tune mujhe itna taunt kiya to mujhe laga mere wajah se tera pyar dur ho gaya, isliye maine Saroj ko call laga di. Kitna bhaw khaya ye jab maine isse call ki to. Lekin tere wajah se maine wo bhi sah liya....


Nandni apne hath jorti..... Sun meri maa aage se na tu meri yadi bhalai karna chahe to ek baar mujhe bata diya kar, ki main tere liye kuch achha karne ja rahi hun, taki main mentally prepare ho jaun ki mujh par koi bijli girne wali hai. Bhaiya iss namune ko kah do yahan se jaye.


Saroj.... Aisa to na kaho Nandni, tumhare liye main kitni dur se aaya hun.


Nandni.... Tumhe yahan aane ki jaroorat nahi thi Saroj, chup-chap wapas laut jao....


Saroj... Nandni ek baar meri baat to suno...


Ashis..... Suna na Nandni ne kya kaha, ab chup-chap bahar nikal jao....


Saroj.... Ye tum achha nahi kar rahi ho Nandni. Bilkul he galat ho raha hai ye....


Ashis usse ek thappad lagata...... Galat hai to galat he sahi, abhi tu nikal warna ab jute bhi parenge...


Saroj ko dhakke maar kar Ashis ne bahar kar diya. Nandni ke chehre par mayusi saaf najar aa rahi thi aur wo khud ke thake hone ka natak karti sidha sone chali gayi. Nischal bhi Ashis ke sath bahar nikal gaya, akeli bachi Jivisha...


Koi kaam nahi tha, Jivisha tv on kar ke baith gayi.... Tv jaise he on ki wahan bhi khabren Pune se he aa rahi thi.... Pune me kisi bhayanak jungli janwar ke lagatar humle ho raha tha, jisme 2 dino me 2 lashen mili thi. News ke anushar ab tak janwar pakda nahi gaya tha aur logon ko raat ke sannate mein ya kisi sunshan jagah na jane ki salah di jar ahi thi.

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