Fantasy Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai ~ Ajab Sa Risk Hai ~ Reload (Completed)

[nain11ster]

Page 766 Se 775 tak har panne par update hai.

Final closing update on page:-792


Issi ke sath Ishq Risk reloaded ka ye season poora hua. Next fantasy journey announce ho jayegi. Ummid hai pahle

"Arymani:- The Pure Alfa Between Two World's."

Yahi aaye... Jo bhi hoga purv suchna mil jayegi... Fihlaal end enjoy karenge... Aur kahani ka poora safar kaisa rahega wo ek baar jaroor sajha karen...


Filhaal Abhi vyast hun ek pure romantic journey par....

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

Aap sab ka hai udhar. Kahani par pahunchne ke liye story title par ulgi karne ka...

<<<< Too Young !! Too Old >>>>​

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..javo ki maut sabko dikhayi ..
baby dragon to mast gaana gaate hai jo nandani ne sikhaya hai ..
aur ek ka naam gopal bhi rakha hai par kisne rakha uska naam ? .
shwetna ne sahi faisla sunaya aur kuch ko fansi to kuch ko tadipar kar diya .

 

[Asif khan]

Main notification board par chhota sa notice chipka deta hun... Redere choice le leta hun ek baar

OK as u wish

 

[Asif khan]

Update:-74 ​

Shwetna ne jaise hi dhyan upar aakash me kee, aaschrya se uski aankhen badi ho gayi… muh khula ka khula rah gaya... "Ab ye kya hai?????"


Nischal aur Jivisha ke badan ek dusre me pura samaye the. Jivisha, Nischal ke gardan me haath dal'kar uss se poora chipki hui thi... Aur Nischal apna ek hath Jivisha ke kamar ke upar aur dsura hath uski pith par dale, khud se poora chipkaye huye tha…


Hotnth, honth se lage huye the… Dono ke badan ke darmiyan inch bhar ki bhi jagah nahi thi.… Lekin dono ke thik sar par, kafi alokik raushni ho rahi thi... Aisi raushni Zoren grah par pahle bhi dekhi ja chuki thi, Jab Nischal aur Jivisha ne apni jodi banayi thi...


Lok kahtaon ki maane to Viggo apne jode ka nishan ek dusre ke chhati par lagate hain.... Aur unke prem jode ki raushni wahin se nikalti hai.… Chunki Nandni, Ansh aur Shwetna teeno hi yah kahani jante the, isliye upar phail rahi raushni ka source Shwetna bhi dhundh rahi thi...


Nandni:- Dono ek dusre se chipke hai... Sina se raushni nahi nikal rahi...


Shwetna:- Haan main bhi wahi dhundh rahi thi… fir iss divya raushni ka source...


Nandni:- Inke anguthe me jo naag dansh samaya hai ussi se nikal raha...


Shwetna:- Dono ke prem ko hi samjhna muskil hai Nandni... Sath rahte hain to ek dusre se jyada hum sab ke liye prem dikhta hai... Aur yahan dekho...


Nandni:- Haan main bhi wahi soch rahi thi… Viggo itihaas ke hisab se to Viggo ka dil milne aur sacchi chahat ki raushni to purn jivan kaal me ek hi baar dekhi ja sakti hai na...


Un dono ke kandhe se Serin lagti... "Haan lekin dono ke sine se sacchi chahat ki chhap chali gayi thi aur mere khyal se iss baar Bhabhi ke sine par bhi ek sath chhap aayi hai...


Shwetna aur Nandni, Serin ko sawaliya najron se ghurti... "Matlab"..


Serin:- Matlab wo hriday jo ek Viggo ki sacchi chahat ko mehsus kare... Tab ja'kar kisi anya samuday ke partner ke sine par bhi wo nishan aane shuru ho jate hain.... Ek sath hriday par sacchi chahat ke nishan ka matlab hai, bhabhi bhi apne sathi ke liye komal hridayni hai aur... aur uska hriday bhi ek Viggo ke jaisa hi hai jo apne…


Ansh:- Bus aage nahi samjhao... Aur un dono ke fevicol ka jod hatao...


Serin:- Rahne bhi do... Kabhi kabhi to dono ek dusre se pyar jatate hain..


"Ye taali taali aanthe"….
"Ye gole gole gaal"….

Fuuuuuuhhhhh.… Fuhhhhhhhhhh...

"Alle gaana ga lahe... Aad kahe bhalka lahe"…..

"Ye gana Nandu masi ne nahi sikhaya... Sab katar me aaooo.. Sab ek sath gayenge aur har koi shararti bitti aur uski toli ko pakad kar rakho... Chalo ab gao"..

"Hawa ke jhonke aaj mausamon se rooth gaye Gulon ki shokhiyaan jo bhanwre aake loot gaye"

"Hav ke dhoke aad mamon te looth gaye"

"Humala pulana dana tahi tha"
"Tab wahi gao.. gole gole gaal wale"…


Jivisha ke dragon babies ki kachhi-pakki aawaj jaise hi Jivisha ke kaan me padi.. wah hont ko chhodti hui alag hui... Idhar sar ke upar totli boli me lagbhag sabhi dragon babies bol rahe the...


Achanak hi mahol khamosh. Itni badi baahn uthi jisme sabhi dragon babies sama gaye... Sabhi chahakne lage.. Jivisha muskurati hui sabko thoda bahon me samti, aisa ki apne sine se laga rahi ho... "Kitna pyara bolte ho... Kisne sikhya"


Ande se nikla phla dragon baby Gopal... "Aap to gumsum rahti thi hume nandni massi ne sikhaya"…


Tabhi wahan kayi sari totli boli ek sath nikalne lagi... Ek gopal ko chhod diya jaye to lagbhag sabhi dragon babies tutla rahe the…. Ek sath 8400 totli awaj..... "Ek dum khamosh.... Ja'kar khelo... Machhli bajar mat banao"… Nischal jhunjhlate huye kahne laga..


Jivisha, aur baki sab Nischal ki haalat par jor-jor se hansne lage…. "Mere sath bahut laad pyar dikha liye... Jao ab tum log khelo.. Yahan hum kuchh jaroori kaam kar rahe"…


Shayad ye baat kisi bhi dragon babies ko achhi nahi lagi... Ek baar fir se wo sab Jivisha ke sar par mandrane lage.. kacche pakke totli boli me 2 shabd gaate aur gardan hawa me kar'ke… aag, pani, hawa muh se jis chij ka spray nikalta, nikal lete..


Jivisha hansti hui un sab ko daanti aur aakar Nandni ke gale lagti... "Maasi haan... Aur kitna cute bolte hain na bacche"…


Nandni:- Tu to meri bahan hai... Nischal se rista gahra hai iska ye matlab thode na hota hai ki tujhse kamjor hai...


Shwetna:- Areee jahilon... Kahin bhi romance, kahin bhi emotion aur jhagre ka to puchho hi mat... Pahle ranbhumi ka kaam samapt kar len... Ya wapas se sab apne apne sathi ke sath, chonch me chonch mila'kar chipakne wale ho...


Nandni:- Tu bhi chipak ja Lin ke sath... Humse chhipane ki kya jaroorat hai ki dono pyar me nahi...


Shwetna:- Chuppp ho jaooo sabhi... Warna poore grah se main sab ko tadipad kar dungi... Aur ek shabd nahi counter reply me...


Shwetna jaise hi garji waise hi sab apne apne muh par tala laga'kar, apna aasan grahan kar liye... Jaise hi mahol shant hua Shwetna HuYu se..... "HuYu poore universe ko connect karo"…


Lagbhag ghante bhar baad middle aur dark Universe ko connect kiya ja raha tha... Sabhi grah bilkul suspence me the lekin jaise hi visuals aaye aur fate huye lashon ka dher dikha... Middle Universe wale khushi se jhum uthe aur Dark universe wale bilkul fati aankhon se dekh rahe the...


Shwetna apna naag dansh liye… poore abhimana aur Swabhiman ke sath khadi hui... "Jaisa ki main pahle kahi thi, mutthi bhar gundey... Ab sun lo Astak.. 2400 caror tumhare joker ho ya 24000 carore... Bhale hi sab tarah-tarah ke kala me maharat hasil kyon na kiye ho, aur bhale hi unke sharir ko hum kisi bhi astr ya shastr se bhed na paye… lekin yahan aakar tumhare sabhi sainikon yahi anjaam hoga... Hum uske sarir ko faad kar tumhe yah sandesh denge ki.… Zoren na kabhi kamjor tha aur na wo kabhi kamjor rahega... Bus apne logon ke liye jhuka tha"

"Tujhe to dhanywaad kahna chahiye iss Universe ki ek mahan sena nayika Serin ka, jisne tumhare gande aur ghatiye mansikta wale vansaj ko dard bhari maut se bacha liya warna tu dekhega... Bol tu dekhega kaise humne inhe dard bhari maut di hai... Vish-Jivisha, iss badjaat ko niche bhumi par aane djiye... Aur yahan baithe sab log apna kaan band kar lijiye"…


Jivisha ne jaise hi Javo ko mukt ki, uska vishalkay sharir niche dhamnn se gira.. jaise hi wo niche gira... Teji se khada ho'kar apne viman ke ore bhagne laga... Lekin bhumi se saanp nikale aur Javo ke paun ki bediyan ban gaye...


"Astak humari dahsat ko mehsus kar apne iss bhagte vansaj ko dekh'kar... Aur ab pesh hai humari darindgi... Nilbhut yodhha humla"…


Jaise hi Shwetna humla kahi... Fir to wo 700 fit ka vishalkay sharir, jamin par aundhe muh gira... Jaan bachane ke liye wah apne hath se vayu ke enegry se humla karna chah raha tha. Lekin wo asahay sa tha aur sabse pahle uske dono haath hi bandhe the…


Uske baad jo hua fir to Dark Universe aur Astak ke liye aisa sabak tha, jise dekh'kar uske ahankar ki dhajjiyan hi udd gayi... Javo ke har dard bhari chhat'patahat par Shwetna ki wo khufnak dahar aur aakhir me Adrishi janvaron dwara jab uske sarir ko hi khinch'kar faada ja raha tha....


"Tere aur tere vansajon ke liye to bhayanak maut intzar kar rahi hai Astak... Koi dusra dushman hota to hum uske sine me khanjar utar dete... Lekin tum to abhedi ho na jiske sharir ko koi bhed nahi sakta... Isliye apne bhavishya ki maut apne aakhon se dekh le"…


Jaise hi wo aakhri lash giri... Shwetna l ne HuYu ko ishara kiya aur sare visuals band... "Aise hi sabhi log khamosh achhe lag rahe ho... Mujhe aap sab ki maujoodgi me ek aur aham kaam nipta lene do chalo sath me"…


Shwetna sabko le'kar sabha bhavan pahunchi jahan pahle se hi hazaron logon ko doshiyon ki jagah khada kiya gaya tha, jisme sabse aage Jatin hi tha... Yun to Jatin, Nischal, Jivisha, Ansh aur Nandni ka kafi madad'gar raha tha aur Mahamahim ke pass se, Jivisha ko quid se chhudane ki aham kadi tha... Tabhi to Zoren ke Dirdh Aayu rastr ke satta ki kaman Jatin aur uski bahan Baby ko mili thi...


Chunki Shwetna ne shakt hidayat dee thi isliye sab chup hi the. Shwetna ek baar Serin ko dekhi, dono ke aankhon ke bich kuchh sahmati sa banne ke baad, Shwetna ne faisla sunana shuru kiya...


Shwetna ne satta me rahkar pure rastr ko khatre me dalne ke liye 800 logon ko tatkal faansi ki saja de di. Wahan ke tatkal shashak Jatin aur Baby ko wahan ke satta se hata'kar, poore Zoren ko Shwetna apne shashan me le lee.


Issi ke sath Jatin, 2000 aala adhikari aur Sena ke 20 lakh lonon ko planet se tadipad kar dee, jisne na to pahle surkasha ke intzamat kiye aur na hi vipatti ke samay yojna bana'kar bahar se aaye gundon ko apne rastr se bhaga sake... Ulta poore middle universe me apne viman bhej'kar afratafri ka mahol paida karwaya… Aur kisi any rastr ke svabhiman ko iss sabha bhavan me beejat hota dekhe...


Hakani jin 800 satta dhariyon ko maut ki saja hui, wo sabha me upasthit wo badi hastiyan the jinke dimag ko Surpmarich ne control nahi kiya tha fir bhi wo bejjat hote dekhte rahe... Kuch khamosh rahe to kuchh maze lete rahe...


Wahin tadipad wale list me takriban 100 bade aise naam the jisnka dimag control tha aur bakiyon ko chup rahne athva Surpmarich ke sath mil'kar galat me haami bharne ki saja mili thi...


Un sab tadioadon ko, 20 sal ke liye desert planet par visham paristithi me khud ko jinda rakhne aur wahan jivan basane ke liye bhej diya gaya... Tadipad logon ko 3 mahine ke anaj ke sath mulbhut suvidha ke sath bheja jane ke aadesh mile, taki kuchh mahino me usse viran planet par apne rahne aur khane ka intzam kar le...


Shwetna issi ke sath sabse aakhri farman jaari ki.… "Mamahim se ladai samapan ke baad ek narbhakshi ko maaf karna aur bina jane usse satta ka sarvochya banana ek bahut badi galti thi... Aur issi galti ka bhugtan na sirf Zoren ne kiya, balki 2 lakh narbhakshiyon ke sath 1 lakh Adrishi jaanvar prithvi ki seema me pahunche. Yah ek gair jimmedarana faisla tha."


Serin, kuchh bolne hi wali thi uss se pahle hi Nischal aur Jivisha ne usse hath dikha'kar shant rahne kaha... "Humari saja kya hai Shashika"…


Shwetna:- "Jabtak saja ka purn bhugtan nahi hota, Zoren ke har musibat me, pahli khabar ke sath hi yahan dono ko upasthit hona hoga... Humse sada sampark me rahenge… Dono kisi bhi planet ke satta aur shasan ke mamle me hatschhep nahi karenge"…

"10000 Nilbhut aur 10000 Dridh Aayu ke log aapke sath rahenge... Unme se jyadatra sainik hain... Kuch doctors aur kuchh scientist... Apne sath rakh'kar unhe trained karna hoga... aur jab wo trained ho jaye to yahan chhod dijiyega... Aur agla 20 hazar logon ko lekar jaeyega"...


Nischal aur Jivisha jab'tak samne doshiyon ki jagah par aa chuke the… dono Shwetna ke samne apna sar jhukate.… "Hume manjoor hai.. aur koi saza"…


Shwetna:- Aap dono wahan khade na ho... Aaj ki sabha samapt hoti hai...


Jaise hi sabha samapt hui... Shwetna daud'kar dono ke pass pahunchi... Nischal aur Jivisha dono muskura rahe the...


Nischal:- Ye 20 hazar angrakshak dene ka matlab... 20 hazar kya main to poore fauj ko sanyukt abhyas karwane wale tha Aizem ke fauj ke sath...


Shwetna:- Mujhe aap dono ke safar ke bare me pata hai... Issi bahane humare 20 hazar log trained bhi ho jayenge aur main thoda sukoon me bhi rahungi...


Jivisha:- Pagal ladki..


Shwetna:- Ziddi aap bhi kam nahi...


Jivisha:- Waise haan galti to hui thi mujhse... Shayad main saja kee hakdar hun, bura bus Nischal ke liye lag raha hai...


Nandni:- Kisi ko koi bura maan'ne ki jaroorat na hai, galti ka bhugtan aise hi sar jhuka'kar karo baccha... Waise Kasak aur Sahil nahi dikh rahe yahan...


Jivisha:- Main nahi chahti thi ki Jatin aur Kasak ka aamna-samna ho... Isliye usse Viggo viman me hi sabke saath runkne bol di thi…


Thodi der baat-chit ke baad sabhi Viggo viman ke ore hi nikle... Viggo viman par sabhi baithe, antriksh aur jamin par huye ladai ke baare me hi charcha kar rahe the... Jaise idhar se sabhi pahunche... Kasak.… "Kya tum dono (Jivisha aur Shwetna) ne chhadi ghumayi thi, wo aag wala stunt kafi romanchak tha"…


Nischal, hanste huye Kasak ke dono gaal khinchte.… "Tumhara pani aur lohe ka hathoda wala idea bhi adbhut tha... Ab to hum apne sare viman water proof karwane wale hain"…


Kasak:- Achha ab samjhi... Issi ladai ke liye yahan jaldi jaldi me aaye the na tum sab...


Jivisha:- Nahi hume to kahin aur jana hai
.. shayad 2-3 mahine ki uddan hogi, jab uss raste par honge... Lekin haan uss se pahle 3-4 planet ho'kar jayenge…


Luna:- Abhi ek gahra dard Astak ko diya hai... Hum Middle Universe nahi chhod sakte...


Serin:- Hmmm baat to sahi hai Luna... Aaj se main apni service se khud ko relief karti hun... Aizem ki total battlian control ke sath, organisations of miidle universe planets ki Air commandent chief tum ho…


Luna:- Lekin main..


Nischal:- Apne sub ordinate dhundh lo... Kyonki raaj parivar ke log hi sarvochya pad par rahe wo din chale gaye... Lobhu se hum baat kar lenge..


Luna:- Kya main apne husband ko apne mayke le ja sakti hun...


Luna ki baat par sabhi hasne lage issi bich Kasak... "Ab main bhi ye udd-udd kar bore ho gayi hun... Main aur Sahil bhi, Luna ke sath chipak jate hain... Itni badi post par hai.. maan swagat to waise bhi hoga...


Ert:- Mera bhi Aizem ghumne ka mann hai..


Abhishek:- Fir main akela thode na in sab ke sath jaunga...


Ert:- Jodi akele ghumne ke liye thode na banayi hai... Dono sath mil'kar nagin dance karenge...


Nischal:- Hmmm ! Ek kaam karo fir sena ka training aur aur total command control mere sahar me hi develope kar lo... Issi bahane Rajdhani aur Lobhu ke sar se kuchh bhar bhi kam ho jayega aur mere mahal ko rennovate karwa lo... Wahin tum sab rahna...


Luna ki badi badi gol aakhen hairani se Nischal ko dekhti... Serin Adhmya ko le'kar Luna ki padesani samjhti hui... "Aree chidiyaghar ke itne bhanti-bhanti prakar ke janvar ja rahe hain... Adhmya to bilkul khush ho jayega"…


Nischal:- Ek kaam kar na Serin, Adhmya aur uske parivar ko le hi aao... Main kuchh waqt uske sath bitana chahta hun. Soch raha hun usse sath rakhun…


Serin:- To sab sath me hi chalte hain... Kuchh din Aizem me ruk'kar wahin se niklenge...


Iss baar hairan hone ki bari Nischal ki thi... Lekin Jivisha ke shabd jaise amritvani ban'kar nikle ho... "Nahi Zoren par hum kuchh din rukenge.. tum Adhmya ke pariwar ko le bhi aana aur wahan ruk'kar Aizem ko poora dekh bhi lena"…


Serin kutil hansi hansti…. "Jaisa tum chaho bhabhi... Thik hai fir na jane wale log iss viman se utar jayen... Hum abhi nikalte hain"…


Wahan kewal 4 log bach gaye baki sab Aizem ke liye nikal gaye... Unogon ke jane ke baad Jivisha, Nischal, Nandni aur Ansh ke sath Nilbhut rajya pahunchi... Jahan poore garm joshi ke sath swagat kiya gaya...


Wo madhur sa bajta inka dhun aur sab kuchh bhul'kar jhumte, nachte log... Issi bich ek baar fir Nilbhut Samuday ki ladkiyon ne Nischal ko gher liya... Haan lekin iss baar kewal Nischal hi nahi ghira tha, balki Ansh bhi ghir gaya tha... Jivisha jor se hooting karti hui... "Khub nachao mere jiju ko"…


Idhar se Nandni bhi hooting karti... "Nischal ko to chhodna mat"…


Pichhe se Shwetna ki awaj aayi.… "Kisi ne naag phaans ka istamal kiya to usse suli par taang dungi aur ye mera wada hai... Isliye apne armano ko masti aur mazak tak hi samete rahna... Aur jab'tak main in dono ke sath thodi masti karti hun"…


Shwetna, Jivisha aur Nandni ko le'kar bich me aa gayi... Jaise hi wo bich me pahunchi.. teeno ko hi kayi parivaron ne gher liya... Sabke bich Shwetna, Nandni aur Jivisha masti bhikherti hui nachne lagi... Nachne ke kram me Jivisha ko dragon baby ka dhyan aaya. Wo praty se nikal'kar, wahin kuchh dur aage aa'kar ret par baith gayi aur muskurate huye... "Mere baal gopal kidhar hain"…


Turant hi jhund ke jhundh dragon baby wahan pahunchne lage…. Nischal bhi ladkiyon ke bich se nikal'kar Jivisha ke pass baith gaya. Apne pass Nischal ko baithe dekh, Jivisha uske honth par pyar bhara apne hont ka chhota sa sparsh deti.… "Baby sorry, meri vajah se tumhe bhi doshi samjha gaya"…


Nischal:- Wo to main hoon hi... Mujhe Jatin ko maar dena chahiye tha... Uska hriday parivatan iss baat ki bharpai nahi kar sakta tha ki usne bhi jinda maans noche tha..


Jivisha, apna sir Nischal ke kandhe se tika di.. aur apne hath ke pass aaye dragon baby ke upar pyar se hath pherti... "Galtiyon se hi to sikhte hain... Hum bhagvan thode na ban sakte hain"


Unke pichhe se Ansh aa'kar dono ke gale me hath daalte.… "Aaj raat jhil ka kinara mera hai... Isliye please tum dono wahan mat aana"…


Jivisha aur Nischal hanste huye....


"Doc chinta nahi... Aadhi raat ke baad main, Jivisha, Nandu aur Shwetna sab uss Surpmarich ke mahal jayenge… wahan ke tilishm ko aaj raat tod'kar, wahan dekhna hai ki aisi kaun si siddhi hai jiske bute par Zoren ko wo baar-baar apne control me le leta hai"…

Very nice action very nice romance very good conversation

 

[Naina]

Ye lo yahan supadi di ja rahi hai ... Ab yahi baki rah gaya tha

 

[Naina]

Hahaha Sahi kaha wese bhi mujhe apsyu kuch jachta nahi h kabab Mai hadi

Sabbash.... bahot khub

 

[Naina]

Aap bhi haan me haan mila diye ... Kamal hai

Sabhi jaante hai ki wo nibba apsyu ek kida makode se zyada kuch nahi.. phir bhi ju ne ushe is story pe le aaye.. pratibaad hona swabhavik hai

 

[11 ster fan]

Ye nishchal ko aur jivisha ko saja kyo mili ..why?????is story par to sabhi saja hi sunane lage hai pahle wo chamgadar ki shakal ka apasyu ne saja sunai phir ye bhundi si shakal ke chimkandi ne saja suna di ...iss pure update me ek hi rahat wali baat thi ki ABHISHEK AUR ART NAGIN DANCE KARNE WALE HAI Ab aayega na Maja bhidu. Ooooo yeeee brooo....ab to lag rha hai ki nishchal aur jivisha ek anant yudhh me phans rhe hai Jo ki tabhi khatm hoga jab ye story the end ho jayengi...

 

[Dgadkari]

Update:- 74 Posted 0n page 544... Check the index ... And don't forget to Like, Comment and Share

Please choice any one of the story... Both in Romantic Genera

1) Too Old Too Young

Slow romance with full of emotional drama and action)

2)
Aryamani ~ A Pure Alfa Between Two Worlds
Or
A Pure Alfa And Two Worlds
(Title abhi decide nahi hai)

A supernatural romantic action pack...

2)
Aryamani ~ A Pure Alfa Between Two Worlds
Or
A Pure Alfa And Two Worlds

 

[nain11ster]

2)
Aryamani ~ A Pure Alfa Between Two Worlds
Or
A Pure Alfa And Two Worlds

Aap to comment marte nahi.... Fir ye kahani likhne ka hausla da himmat kahan se milega... Bole to energy...

Khali vote nahi support bhi karna parta hai.. ..

 

[Naik]

Update:-71 ​

"Ab bardast nahi hota Nischal.. Ye bhumi mujhe dhikkar rahi hai... Mujhe ab bus badla chaiye... HuYu kahan hai bulao usse... Aur bhej do sandesh Dark Universe me.… Hum jald hi uski jamin par honge..… Yahan liye gaye har jivan ka hisab karne"...


Wah hatash thi. Wah nirash thi. Jis barbarta ka parichay Dark Universe walon ne diya tha Jivisha bilkul toot chuki thi...


Sabhi log wahan se sidhe Dridh Aayu Rastr me pahunche... Jahan Jivisha sabse kati-kati gahre sok me dubu hui thi. Yah thik ussi prakar ka dard tha jo kabhi Jivisha ne Aarsi ki bahan sapna ke jane ke baad mehsus kiya tha. Bus frak sirf itna tha ki iss baar kisi insan ko wo apni aankhon se jinda chabati hui dekh rahi thi...


Nischal Sabha bhavan me pahunchte hi, Organization of middle Universe ke mukhyalay, Gleto Planet par Zoren me hui sabhi gahtan ki footage bhej diya. Jisme Dark Unverse ki kartut aur Nischal dwara di gayi saja bhej diya gaya tha... Na sirf Middle Universe me yah khabar Nischal bhej chuka tha, balki Dark Universe par bhi poori footage bhej chuka tha...


Vansaj sena ki kururta aur Zoren par usse di gayi saza, aag ki tarah pure universe me fail gayi thi. Middle Univese sangathan, Astak aur Dark Universe ke against farman jari karte huye, unke viman ko kisi bhi grah ke orbit me ghusne se pahle hi Universe me hi maar girane ke order jari kar chuke the, taki jamini yudhh jaisi koi sbhavna hi na ho... Aur idhar Dark Universe me...


Dark Universe ke core planet me matam sa pasra hua tha.… Pahle se Astak ke liye Vansaj planet sambhalna kafi muskil ho raha tha, upar se Koyyi aur Moyi ke sath huye bhayavah maut ko sabhi Vansaj Planet dekh rahe the.…


Jaise hi Koyyi aur Moyi ke maut ki khabar faili thi, Astak ka control bhi khatm hua. Core aur 4,5 vansaj planet ko chhod diya jaye to takriban 2000 palnet se 40 carore bade aur medium size viman paglon ki tarah Zoren par humle ke liye nikal chuke the…


Sabhi ke sabhi viman dark universe ke uttri seema se, aage-pichhe bina kisi sena commander ke nikle... Jaise hi dark universe ke viman Wishper Planet ke aage badhe, khabar aag ki tarah fail chuki thi ki Drak Universe se fauji viman ki badi si tukdi Zoren par humle ke liye nikal chuki thi...


Middle Universe Organisation ne turant hi ek khabar jari karte huye, sabhi planet ke sabhi country ke pass sandesh bhej'kar Zoren planet par hawai madad bhejne ke orders jari kar diye, jo ek sena commandent Serin ke ander kaam karti...


Khair Middle Univeser organization se madad milti ki nahi milti, Aizem ke 1 carore Sanya viman aur Zoren ke bache takriban 12 lakh viman agle din hi poore Zoren ke Air Space ko ghere huye the… Earth par apni kabliyat sabit karne ke baad First commandent Luna bani hui thi aur 22 commander ke adhin tha pura oreder pranali...


Lagbhag 2 din tak unverse ke alag-alag grah se, takriban 80 lakh bade sainya viman ki madad pahunch chuki thi... Middle Universe ke sath-sath Drak Universe bhi poora najar baanye huye the...


Astak apne core planet par baitha... "Kya lagta hai Messa, humri vansaj sena kitni safalta hasil karegi"…


Messa:- Vasnaj sena yadi kisi ke bhumi par kadam rakh de to humara ek viman uss pure planet ke liye kafi hai... Lekin Middle Universe wale unite hai aur unki kosis hai ki sabhi viman ko Universe me hi dhwast kar dena… kyonki sabko pata chal chuka hai ki hum purani technology istamal karte hain... Aur ek baat... ..


Astak:- Kya???


Messa:- Jitni viman Dark Universe ke bahar gayi hai, bina kisi command ke gayi hai... Na to pahle kisi yudhh me samil huye hain aur naa hi sabhi viman ek sath unite honge... Sab apne hisab se ladenge aur Universe me vansaj sena ka sharir khtam ho jayega..


Astak:- Aur wo Javo...


Messa:- Javo ke pass ran'niti to hai aur ussi par ummid bhi hai... Baki sabhi mare bhi jaye to humare liye fayda hi hai...


Astak:- Ye Surpmarich humare kitne kaam ka hai….


Messa:- Jahan tak kaam ki baat hai to wo Arhcemia se jyada kaam ka hai lekin bahut jyada dhurt hai... Ek din ke kaam ko jaan bujh'kar 1 saal ka samay diya hai... Wo kuchh to apna maksad sadh raha hai…


Astak:- Main janta hun usse kya chahiye... Arhcemia ke sath usse core planet bulao... Hume Arhcemia chahiye warna itna lamba faila samrajya mujhe sikudta hua najar aa raha hai.… Aur ek baat..


Messa:- Kya...


Astak:- Beron ki fauj lekar tum Hella ki madad ke liye prithvi jao... Hum Hella ko kho nahi sakte hain... Prithvi par Orja ko dhundho aur pakad kar lao... Dhyan rahe mujhe tum dono yahan Dark Universe me jinda chahiye... Yahan Surpmarich se jaise hi baithak samapt hogi wo prithvi par humari poori madad karega...


Messa:- Baba ek baat kahun… Prithvi par aap Namia aur uske Vansaj ko bhi to bhej sakte ho...


Astak:- Meri raniyan bahut kimti hai... Aur unke baad tum teeno (Hella, Messa aur Orja) ho... Dobara khyal rahe… Raniyon ko yuddh me bhejne ka vichar bhi na aaye...


Messa "Haan" me apna sar hilata wahan se ek Vansaj Planet Noren par nikal gaya. Ye un 5,6 planet me se ek tha, jo Astak ke hukm ke bina koi kaam nahi karta tha… aur ye Middle unverse ke sabse pass ka planet the jahan se Messa any prajati ke sainikon ke sath apni muhim ko aage badhata tha...


Astak apne bade se screen ke aage baith'kar apne vansaj sena ko aage badhte dekh raha tha.… Serin ko idhar vansaj sainikon ke pal-pal ki khabar milti ja rahi thi... Settelite viman, Universe ke kayi hazar kilometer tak, chappe-chappe par najr dale huye thi.…


Kasak:- Yaar Luna… ek baat bata... In logon ke viman jo Universe me malwa banege to unme baithe fauj ka kya hoga...


Abhishek:- Tujhe universe me fenk'kar dekh lete hain kya hota hai...


Luna:- Hona kya hai, pura sharir chhilka ban'kar udne lagega... Fir pata bhi nahi chalega ki kaun sa aisa skin tha jise koi hathiyar bhed nahi sakti thi...


Asis:- Aisa kya hota hai Universe me...


Luna:- Wahan ka Tapman jo anant minuse digree me hota hai... Aur uss Tapman me koi skin kaam nahi aata hai... Bus ek baar uss Tapman ke cotanct me aa gaye fir khud ke sharir ko parat dar parat Universe me samate huye pate hain…


Abhishek:- Fir to in maans'bhakshi ko main pyaj ki tarah chhilte dekhunga aur mera hi highest score hoga…


Kasak:- Oye Luna ki bacchi mujhe na ek aisa missile de jo pani loaded ho aur uske sath hi ek aur missile nikle. Kewal lohe ka hathoda type missile... Baki main aaj inki nani yaad dila dungi...


Sahil:- Baby bomb se to unka viman bhi tootega lekin unpar pani barsakar aur hathoda maar'kar kya pahle varsha se swagat aur baad me dhol pitogi..


Kasak:- Yahan highest socre chahiye ki nahi to bus khamosh raho aur dekhte jao...


Luna apni team ko turant inform karti, Viggo viman me load pani ko empty missile me load kar'ke Kasak ke command button me de dee, aur sath hi sath kayi sare dummy missile bhi load kar dee jo hathoda ka kaam karte... Jaisa ki kasak ka demand tha…


Kasak ke iss idea par kisi ko yakin tha ki nahi tha, lekin Luna ko Kasak ke idea par itna bharosa hua, ki usne turant Serin se discuss karke, saman dhone wale viman ko bhej'kar Zoren se pani khinch liye aur apne command me bhi aise kayi lakh pani aur dummy missile load kar liye.…


Hansi mazak ke bich 5 din nikal gaye jab pure fauj ko hi alert kiya gaya... Dushman ke viman bade-bade badal saman, jahan se guajar rahe pure hawai kshetr ko ghere aage badh rahe the... 3000 kilometer ki manak duri se unke karwaan ko rokna tha… Serin ne poori fauj ko alert par dala....


Serin ne Astak ke fauj ka poorn jayja liya aur apne aankhen badi karti... "Ye kya musibat hai"…


Viman ki sankhya dekh'kar hi kayi sare Planet ke commander ki haalat kharab ho gayi... Inke 1 viman se ladne ke liye Dark universe ke lagbhag 20 se 21 viman the. Aur aisa bhi nahi tha ki wo chhote-chhote viman me aaye the... Unka medium size viman bhi Middle unverse ke large viman se 2 guna bara tha… Eklauta Viggo viman chhod'kar jiske barabar to kya aadhe ke barabar bhi koi nahi tha…


Jahan 22 commander me se 8 other planet ke commander the unki ghabrahat aur sawal jawab aise hawi huye, ki Serin command sambhalti hui kahne lagi.… "Yahan ke poori sena ki kaman mere hath me hai aur ladai ke waqt ghabra jane wale sainik mere command me nahi chahiye, jinhe dar lag raha ho abhi chale jayen... Luna tum apni report do...


Luna:- 2000 ke dayre par ladenge... Ghera banana mera sujhao hai...


Serin:- Thik hai fir 6 commnder ki team ko tum lead karte huye bhago yahan se... Issi prakar 6,6 aur commander ki team ko Zoren ki vayu seema se tod diya gaya aur unhe seperate command de diya gaya... Seperate command milte hi wo log bade bade viman ke sath charo ore diaperse ho gaye...


Unhe disperse hote dekh vansaj sena ke hausle buland ho gaye... Tabhi Viggo viman me sandesh aana shuru hua... "Majah mutthi bhar fauj hai mere samne… tik nahi paoge kiron-makodon. Ya to raste se hato ya marne ko taiyar ho jao...


Serin:- Abe harami Astak ke faltu ki paidaish... Astak ke school me ek galat path bade jodon se padhaya jata hai... Wo hai khud ko shresth maan'na. Iss se pahle wo tera Dreda, baad me Hella, fir wo judwaa bahan Koyyi aur Moyi... Ab tu... Wada hai tumse, jab ye ladai samapt hogi... Tab tumhare Dark Universe se ek chepter hata diya jayega... Hum hi sarvshresth hain... ..


Baton ke dauran hi Vansaj fauj 3000 kilometer ki duri paar kar chuki thi... Serin ne sab ko hold kiya... HuYu apne seperate viman me baitha lagatar keyboard par apni ungliya chalaye ja raha tha... Dushman badi teji ke sath pass aa rahe the...


Serin:- Prithvi se aaye humare sathi, sabhi ko pahla mauka score banane ka.… Baki sabhi sainya daste hold karenge...


Kasak:- Ye hui na baat..… Sahil jaldi se shuru ho jao... Target lock karo...


Idhar, Abhishek aur Asis ke pass unki patniyan nahi thi... Luna apna fauji jattha le'kar nikal chuki thi aur Ert Zoren grah par hi thi, isliye ye dono ab sath kam kar rahe the.…


Asis:- Abhi bhai kya kahte ho, inhe pahle kis chij ka maza diya jaye...


Abhishek:- Wo Chocklet missile ka command do... Inki anti-blastik missile system ko jarra jhatka den... .


Serin apni aankhen badi karti…. "Dono Chor, mera idea tum dono ne churaya hai... Kasak tum gawah rahna iss baat ka... Main to Luna aur Ert ko bataungi.... Kaise dono me mere choclet missile istamal kiya...


Asis:- Jealous girl... Chalo ab jarra hume score karne do...


Asis target lock karta gaya aur Abhishek button press kar raha tha... Ek sath 10 missile alag-alag target par chala chuke thr… Jaise hi unke missile 1000 km ki duri par the, tabhi Vansaj fauj ki anti-blastik missile se uske sabhi missile takraye... 2 missile ke bich takkad se Asis dwara bheje sabhi mssile ka cover dhwast ho gaya...


Har missile dhwadt to hua, lekin unke missile me barud tha nahi jo fat jata. Barud ke jagah ek bade missile ke ander, syring numa chhote-chhote 2 fit ke missle bhade the, jo aadhe se jyada barbaad hone ke baad bhi, 1 missile me se kam se kam 50 syring nikle honge, aur har syring ko dobara command diya gaya... Ye siyring 40 ke jhund me wapas se 10 alag alag target ko ore chal diye…


Unhe rokne ke liye fir 200 se 300 anti blastik missile aur chalti… Jab'tak vansaj sena 2 baar me 200 se 300 anti-blastik missile chalate, pichhe se 10-10 ke set me Asis aur Abhishek aur missile ka chhod dete... Fir se wahi sab hota, lekin in sab ke bich Serin ke team se bheje gaye 10 missle me unke 210 se 310 anti blastik missile lagne shuru ho chuke the...


Idhar HuYu lagatar apne haath chalate huye finally key board par enter dabate... "Pure visuals ab humare control me hai... Koi bhi palnet iss yudhh ko dekh nahi payega... Shuru ho jao ek set humle ke liye"…


Idhar jaise hi HuYu ne Serin se jankari sajha ki Serin hansti hui... "Mere pass aao HuYu tumhe chumne ka mann kar raha. Abhi gurumata ka humla to dekh lun uske baad command deti hun"…


Kasak:- Haan kar rahi hun meri humshakal pahle abhi dekhne to do kahan humla karna hai...


Serin:- Main hint deti hun... Niche pendi me... Thik viman ke bich me engine ka ek section hota hai, wahan ka external layer patla hota hai, poore viman ki apeksha… aur sath me wahan par engine ka air space bhi rahta hai, jis se viman ke ander ghusa ja sakta hai...


Kasak:- Thanks humshakal…


Itni info kafi thi… Kasak ne Missile daga... Uske missile ke sath bhi wahi hua... Raste me hi dwast kar diya gaya. Lekin har missile se uske bhi 2 kilo pani ka pouch lohe ke gol box me band... Ghinghinate huye aage badhne laga...


3000 se 2000 km ke bich me aane tak kewal 2 log hi humla karte rahe aur unke anti blastik missiles ke stock ki dhajjiyan udda chhuke the... Iss baat par bhannaye vansaj sena ne anti-blastik missile ke sath-sath apna missiles ke bhi humla shuru kar diya aur har kisi ka nishan viggo viman…


HuYu:- Ye Shikar to chara nigal gaya Serin... Sala kitne bewkoof hai...


HuYu ki baat par Serin bhi hansne lagi. Vansaj sena ke arbon missile ek sath Viggo viman par chale the. Ye sankhya itni jyada thi ki Serin se sabhi 4 tukdi milkar bhi ek sath anti-blastik missile chalati to bhi lakhon missile ek sath Viggo viman se takra'kar uski dhajjiyan uda deti.


Lekin aage jo hua wo kisi chamtkar ki tarah tha, jo Astak Sena ke humla ka balatkar kar chuka tha. Sabhi missile poora hawa ko dakti chali to thi Viggo viman par humla karne, lekin 200 km tak ka safar karne ke baad har missile ek chhote se virtual point par humla kar raha tha… Astak fauj ke viman ke 200 km aage jakar arbon missile aise blast kar rahe the ki uske dhamakon ki dahsat se khud vansaj sena ke viman dahsat me aa rahe the...


Sabhi vansaj sena ne aanan fanan me dobara humla shuru kiya... Fir teesra chautah... Lagatar humala kiye ja rahe the aur aage badh rahe the lekin unka humla mano Viggo viman me na lag'kar sab aapas me hi takra gaye ho...


Bhannaye kuch viman ne apne humle ka target badal diya ab wo Viggo viman ko chhod'kar anya viman me nishana lagane lage... "Not bad enemies… lekin salon bahut der kar diye"…


Darasal Viggo viman ki virtual frequency set ki gayi thi... Jiska virtual point kayi hazar km dur ek chhote se point ko bana diya gaya tha... Ye log paglon ki tarah ek sath arbon missile aise chhodte ki anant brahmand ka khulla hissa bhi missile se poora dhaka hua najar aa raha tha. Lekin Sabhi missile ek chhote se point par aise dhwast ho rahe the ki teji se badhne wala Astak Vansaj ke viman apni jagah ruk'kar humla karne par vivash the kyonki matr 200 km par unhi ke missile aise blast ho rahe the ki unki Chapet me khud unka viman aa jata...


Ek to aage badhne ka abhiyan ruk gaya upar se paglon ki tarah missile par missile dagne ke karan unke 70% missile khatm ho chukr the… haan lekin ye apni 30% kshmta me bhi in logon se kayi guna jyada missiles rakhte the...


Jaise hi Vansaj ke kuch viman ne Serin ke dusre viman ko target kiya, tab kahin jakar Anti blastik missile chalaya gaya... Haan lekin ab Serin ke liye samasya badhne wali thi..


Serin sabhi viman ke anti blastik missile ke sath apni sabhi 4 commander tukdkiyon ko humla karne ka order deti hui... "Sabhi disperse team ek sah alag-alag disha se close range humla karo…. Yadi inke sabhi viman humari team par ek sath humla karte hain, fir humare pas ek waqt me utni sari anti-blastik missile nahi hogi...


Sabhi commander ek sath... "Don't worry... Hum postion par hai"…


Luna ko jaise hi apne Aizem ke 6 tukdi ka command mila, bade viman ko chhod'kar sab ke sab chhote ladake viman me pahle se sawar the... Takriban 18 lakh chhote viman aur 18 lakh fauji command ke intzar me...


Luna single command oreder deti... "Sabhi ek sath close range me aaj unhe dikha do ki Universe ke hero humare siwa koi nahi"


Luna ke sabhi viman ghum'kar thik unke pichhe pahunch chuki thi… 18 lakh viman apni purn gati se madrane lage... Jaise hi wo unke karib aane lage... Vansaj sena pichhe ke ore humla karne ki sochte uss se pahle hi dayen, bayen aur samne se humla shuru ho gaya...


Aur samne ka humla me iss baar Viggo viman apni purn kashmta me humla kar chuka tha... Pani ke pouch ke piche lohe ke utne hi bade gole, toot'kar jab unke viman ke nichle hisse se takraye… pahle to enegine jama aur baad me lohe ki ball aise bhed rahi thi mano koi kanch ko lohe ki ball bhed raha ho...


Wahin dusri ore wo syring jaise hi viman ke diwaar se takarati, uske ander ka acid jamne se pahle viman ke chhat ko damage kar jata aur ek sath 40, 50 acid chhat me aise surakh bana jate, ki fir to Universe ka temperature hi ander sab kuch jama jata... Emergency exit se nikalne wale jitne bhi panel the, fir to unpar bhi wahi humle hone lagte...


Abhi itna sitam kam tha ki Luna ke ek ishare par 300 se 400 meter ki duri par close range se humle hone lage... Ye humla itna kaargar tha ki unke anti bilastik missile tak kaam na aaye... Idhar Aizem ke chhote viman par jab humla hota aur wo blast karti, tab'tak pilot emergency panel me sawar aur fir un emergency exit panel ko wapas se bade viman dwara khinch liya jata...


Luna ki puri team restless thi aur koi viman blast bhi hota to pilot wapas se apne naye aur chhote viman me sawar ho jata... Dekhte hi dekhte 40 caror ki tadat jab kamti hona shuru hui tab uska poora najara universe ko dikhaya jane laga...


Ab chhote missile ki jagah bade-bade kargar missile dage ja rahe the... Kyonki unke anti blastik missile to ho chuke the khatm...


Charo ore se jab shikast hasil shuru ho gayi, ussi bich 5 carore ka ek bada viman ka jhund khud ko tabah karte huye aage badhne laga..


Ye Javo ki tukdi thi jo kuchh vansaj sena ke tukdi ke sath cordinate karke aage badhne lage... Aisa laga jaise ab aakhri dav khelne nikle ho... Na humla kar rahe the na humla se bach rahe the .. Apne bich me 10000 viman ko safe rakhte huye utni hi teji se badh rahe the...


Dekhte hi dekhte ye itni teji se karib panhunche ki takriban 2000 viman Zoren ke vayumandaliya kshter me the... Jisme takriban 5 lakh vansaj sena, Joyo ke command wali force thi… Jab wo Zoren me ghus rahe the tabhi Serin ne unhe sandesh bhej diya...


"Hawa ka swad to humne chakhya... Jamin ka swad ab Nilbhut aur Dridh Aayu Rastr ke log tumhe chakhayenge... Aur unke shashak aur Shashika jab tumhe maut ke darshsn karwayege, tab aaj tum mishrit paidaish ko apna vansaj kahne wale Astak ke dil me bhi khauff paida ho jayega.… Jao maut tumhari pratiksha me hai"..

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