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Romance Humnawa

Casinar

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Just finished the read. Lovely sweet update again. Bahot passand aya mujhe. Ab bechari ladki ne agar dil se ussko chahna shuru kar diya hoga to phir lo ek aur dil toota!!
Well, I love your descriptive sentences and the way you input unimagined things into the lines amazes me. And that brings beauty to the lines. So, okay next update will b awaited with eagerness.
 
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Impure

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Just finished the read. Lovely sweet update again. Bahot passand aya mujhe. Ab bechari ladki ne agar dil se ussko chahna shuru kar diya hoga to phir lo ek aur dil toota!!
Well, I love your descriptive sentences and the way you input unimagined things into the lines amazes me. And that brings beauty to the lines. So, okay next update will b awaited with eagerness.
Thank you sir for liking the update... agla update shaam tak... kahani me to saare dil toote toote hi hai... bas dekhna hai ye kab judte hai :love:
 
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Romeo 22

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Nice buildup:applause:
 
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Maine ek hi saans me sab kuch keh diya… dil ki dhadhkane tezz ho chali thi… kisi ladki ko subah 8 baje ganga ghat bula kar reject karne par jute chappal milne ka dar alag… ladki shayad raah chalte logon se dauda dauda kar pitwa de… maine badi himmat se Namrata ki aur dekha to wo meri teraf dekh mand mand muskura rahi thi…





“Bhai kamal hai… sahi bol raha tha Tarun… Rudra jaisa ladka lakhon me ek hai…”





Uski baat sunkar mai kuch samajh to nahi paya par pitne ke koi aasar nazar nahi aa rahe the to mai bhi nishchint hokar muskura diya…





“Tum please mujhe maaf kar do Namrata…”





“Are are… isme maafi ki kya baat hai… apse meri ek hi mulaqat huyi hai… aur us mulaqat me bhi mujhse jyada apka dhyan khane par tha… adha time to usdin apne menu select karne me… aur adha time khane me nuks nikalne me bita diye…”





“Kya karun… aesa hi hoon… ghar ke khane se itne pyar hai mujhe… bahar ka kuch pasand hi nahi ata…”





Maine sir khujate huye bola…





“Par ek baat mujhe tumhari bohot acchi lagi Rudra… humari us ek mulaqat ke khatir tum yahan tak aye… aur mujhe itna kuch bataya… tumhari jagah koi aur hota to ye ganimat kabhi na utha ta… ek phone ek message ya bina bataye hi furr ho jata… Mujhe khushi hai ki mai tum jaise insaan ki dost ban payi…





Aur jahan tak baat hai humare rishte ki… to haan ye to nahi kahungi ke ek mulaqat me mujhe tumse pyar ho gaya tha… par haan kuch aur mulaqaton ki iccha thi mujhe… par koi baat nahi… meri dua hai ki tumhe apni Nandita zaroor mile…”





“Uff… thank god… tumne ye sab keh kar mere man ka bojh halka kar diya… mai ab zindegi me dobara kabhi kisi ko bhul se bhi dukh nahi pohchana chahta… meri ye dua hai ke tumhe bhi ek bohot accha jeevan sathi mile…”





Namrata se kuch der meri kuch aur baatein huyi… Meri daftar ka waqt ho chala tha aur use bhi kaam par jaana tha.,.. use bus me Chadha kar mai daftar pohcha… Office se mujhe kayi dino se mujhe transfer ka offer diya jaa raha tha… mai na jane kyun tal raha tha…





Daftar se nikal kar mai Tarun ke ghar pohocha… wo bhi tabhi daftar se aya tha…





“Abe saale… ladki mili to dost ko bhul hi gaya tu to…”





Usne zor se meri pith par marte huye kaha…





“Are aesa kuch nahi hai… Namrata ek bohot acchi ladki hai… par meri baat use nahi ban sakti… maaf karna yaar…”





“Yaar ab paka mat… tu firse usi ladki ke peeche apni zindegi jhonk raha hai… kya karun mai tera..”





“Yaar aesa nahi hai… ki maine koshish nahi ki… par nahi ho raha… nahi samjha sakta mai… Nandita se jaise na hokar bhi mere sath hai… aur uske hote huye mai kisi aur ke baare me nahi soch sakta… mai Delhi wapas jaa raha hoon yaar…”





“Kya!! aur ye tu mujhe ab bata raha hai… ab us ladki ke liye tu mujhe akela chhod ke jaa raha hai??? aur tujhe kaise pata ki wo wahi milegi tujhe??? Internet ke zamane me wo tujhe Facebook Twitter me nahi mili… wo itne bade shehar me kaise milegi tujhe???”





“Pata nahi… bas dil keh raha hai… ki jaane anjane jaise mai uske shehar aake bas gaya hun… waese usne bhi mujh tak pohochne ki koi to koshish ki hogi…”





“Wah bhai wah! kya pyar hai… are ladki asliyat me ho fir bhi man leta mai… abet u to khayalon ke peeche laga hai bhai… suna tha ki pyar karne wale log pagal hote hai… saccha pyar andha hota hai wagehra wagehra… par aj dekh bhi liya… huh! aur kya kahun mai ab…”





“Kuch mat keh… khana khila… tere hath ke special mushroom… aur chawal…”





“Chal thik hai… khan eke sath mai aj tujhe apni wine collection me se sabse purani wine pilata hoon… tub hi kya yaad rakhega… tere ghum me aj dono bhai baithe piyenge…”





Itna bol kar Tarun khana bnanane kitchen me chala gaya… mai wahi sofe par pair pasar kart baith gaya… samne “The Hindu” padhi thi… aj suban Namrata se milne ki dhun me mai newspaper padhna bhul gaya… mai baith kar Hindu ke panne palat raha tha… kuch der baad meri nazar Delhi me hone wale ek bade Medical Event par padi… kuch line padhne ke baad meri mujhe ek jana pehchana sa nam dikha aur meri ankhein ummed se chamak uthi!!!







 

Blade axel

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very nice update....
 
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