Romance Humnawa

[Impure]

Hey friends a new update is posted... please read and share your reviews

 

[Casinar]

Chehel pehel se bhari humari Rajdhani Delhi me Nandita kisi ulti Ganga se kam nahi... har roz subah mai aur wo ek hi metro station se office ke liye rawana hote hai... office me 10 feet duriyon par rakhi desk par baith kar 8 ghante kaam karte hai... ate waqt bhi ek hi raaste se chalkar metro station pohonchte hai aur ek hi metro me chadh kar wapas ghar laut te hai.. par fir bhi aj tak koi humari koi jaan pehchan nahi ho payi...

Reminds me of someone

December ka mahina tha... karake ki thaand me Delhi ki adhi janta jahan jhulte huye daftar jaa rahi thi... wahi kuch log Christmas ke utsah me dub kar jhasn manane me lage the... Metro me us din kuch jyada hi bhir thi... na chahte huye bhi meri nazrein station se hi Nandita ka peecha kar rahi thi... use ladies ke hisse me seat mil gayi... aur mai gate ke pass khada tha...

love the way in few words you described several things

Wo ek taraf dekhte huye badi pyari si lag rahi thi us din... uski badi badi ankhein... jaise kisi kalakar ki kayi unsoyi raaton ka nateeja ho... hothon ko kisine aese tarasha ho ki banane wala apni hi hunar ka deewana ho jaye... gaalon ki masumiyat jaise sardiyon ki subah ki oos ki tarah anchhuyi... par baalon ko najane kyun ye ladki aese berahmi se kaid kar deti hai... aur aese hi hamesha gum-sum si rehti hai...

i just love this description....

Ajkal jab bhi mai use dekhta hoon... mujhe accha lagta hai... is polution bhari Delhi me wo mere liye ek aesi khushboo ban chuki thi jise mai jee bhar ke seene me bhar leta hoon... bhale hi lab na bole par ab mai uski ankhon ki bhasha padhna seekh gaya tha!

wow, lovely update. I love your descriptive narration. It's a pleasure to read. After a very long time, I am reading something which is pleasing me this much. will eagerly wait for the next update.

 

[rgcrazyboy]

rone vali story
har pahlu ko itna acha kese likha diya.
aye se thodi hota hai ye to chiting hai.
agar koi rone vale hise ko ignore karna chahai to bhi uske aage wala hissa story ke purane vale se connected ho ye to galt baat hai.
story.

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Mai aur meri tanhayi aksar ye baatein kiya karte hai.

 

[Blade axel]

Nice update....

 

[Axba]

wonderful update dost

 

[Samurai]

Keep rocking

 

[Casinar]

Where are the updates??!!

 

[Casinar]

Last update was posted on Sunday!! Eisa nahin chalega update karo

 

[Impure]

Last update was posted on Sunday!! Eisa nahin chalega update karo

It seemed very less are interested in the story... so i stopped making any efforts... but letsl see will resume today