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Kahani ke agle aur aakhri bhaag ke liye bane rahiye!
 

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Aakhri Bhaag

Agle subah :

Ramesh ke ghar ke huliya dekhke yeh tair tha ke kuch aafat zaroor aaya hoga pati patni par aur yeh baat Rohan samajh leta hain, jab voh zameen par pada hua Ramesh ke laash ko dekhta hain.

"My god!" Rohan hairan reh gaya Ramesh ke gardan ko mude huye dekhke. Usne apne team ko laash ko le jaane ke liye kaha, ke tabhi use siskiyon ki awaaz sunayi diya. Kuch doori pe jaate hi, use Shikha sofe pe apni peeth ke bal aadhi leti hui nazar aya.

Rohan : Mrs Sharma, yeh sab? I mean...Latika kaha hai?

Shikha : Mera pati ka khoon koi aur nahi, balki Latika ne hi Kiya!

Rohan ke aankhen chaude ho jaate hain aur voh hairan khada ka khada raha. Use Sapna se leke Atul aur Jaidev tak saare laashe nazar aaye apne mann me. Apne aap ko sambhalte huye, Rohan Shikha ke paas ek kursi leke beth jaata hain.

Rohan : Mrs Sharma, please Latika ke baare me aap jo kuch bhi jaanti hain, sach sach batayiye mujhe!

Shikha, jiska kamar tut chuki thi, aur dil bhi. Bas, ab zyada apne andar ek zara si baat bhi nahi rakhna chahti thi. Voh Rohan ko sab kuch vistaar se bata deti hain, ke kaise Latika ko ek jheel ke paas se unhone god liya tha aur kitna vichitra maahol tha us jheel ke aaspaas, sab kuch.

Yeh sab sunke Rohan ka dil safed ho utha aur voh nischit tha ke Latika koi sadharan insaan nahi thi. Aur vaise bhi Ramesh ke gardan pe usne vohi nishan dekhi thi, jo Sapna aur Atul pe the.

"Iska matlab, Latika hi voh jal rakshasni hai! My god...."

.............

Kuch din beet jaate hain aur Latika lapata ho jaati hain. Har gali, har kone me police phail jaate hain, us ladki ki khoj me, lekin Latika ki zara sa bhi ata pata nahi.

Deepshika in dino Rohan ko us case ko bhulane me madat karti gayi, apne andaz me. Kabhi use leke kahin bahaar jaana, ya Ghar me hi halke phulke romance karna. Ek dafa raat ko, sunehri music lagaye, Rohan aur Deepshika ek safed chaadar ke bheetar se ek dusre ko chumte, to kabhi ek dusre ke naak se naak aur gaal se gaal ragadte. Apne premi ke baahon me aake, Rohan sukoon ke din bitane lagta hain.

Lekin!

Phir ek din...

Ek din Rohan lagatar Deepshika ko subah se phone kiye jaa raha tha, lekin baar baar number switched off hi aa rahi thi. Ab jabki shaam ho chuka tha, Rohan sachme pareshan nazar aane laga.

"Shit, Deepshika ko ho kya gaya? Phone off kyon hai???"

Ab bina vilamb kiye, apne duty se off hoke, Rohan foran Deepshika ke ghar ke liye nikal jaata hain aur hairanjanak ghar khula hua tha.

"DEEPSHIKA?????? KAHAAN HO??"

Pure Ghar ke chakkar lagane ke baad bhi, Deepshika ki koi ata pata nahi!

Lekin Rohan jaise hi washroom pahucha, use vaha ka manzar kuch ajeeb sa laga...

Andar bathtub ke ird gird khoon ke dhabbe the aur yeh dekhke Rohan hairan reh gaya. Uske zehen me aaya ke kahin insab ke piche Latika ki to haath nahi. Aur agar hai, to use dhoondha kaha jaa sakti hai??

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Tabhi Rohan ko Shikha ki kahi hui jheel ki yaad aata hain, vohi ajeeb si sunsaan jheel, jahaan se Latika ko adopt ki gayi thi.

"Shit! Mujhe vaha jald se jald pahuchna hoga!"

Rohan bina deri ke, foran ravana ho jaata hain apne bike me, us jheel ki aur. Vaha pahuchte hi, Rohan bina kisi vilamb ke seedhe andar kudi maarta hain.

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Kuch pal tak andar tairte tairte, aakhirkar ek vibhatsya nazara dekhke Rohan hairan reh gaya. Uske aankhe chaude ho jaate hain!

"Latika???"

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Latika ki itni bhayank roop ko dekhke Rohan hairan reh gaya. Paani ke andar Rohan tairte huye apne santulan ko kayam rakhne ki koshish karne laga. Lekin Latika apni irado pe atal thi. Uski Octopus jaise lambe panjo ne Deepshika ke badan ko kass ke ghere huye the. Mote sakht panjo se ghere jaane se Deepshika ke badan me dard hone laga aur voh laakh koshish ki lekin khud ko chura na saki aur bas bebas hoke paani bulbulati gayi.

Lekin Rohan ne gaur kiya ke paani me hone ke bavajud, voh normally baatein kar paa raha tha. Use dekhke Latika kehne lagi...

"Rohan! Yeh chamatkar nahi, mera pyar hai! Mere saath aao, hum dono paani me raaj karenge umra bhar!"

Latika ki aankhon me ek aas thi, jise dekhke Rohan hairan reh gaya, kyonki yeh aas keval ek premi ki aankhon me hi nazar aata hain. Paani ke gehrayio me aaj ek ajeeb si stithi aa gayi thi Rohan aur Deepshika ki zindagi me aur jab jab Deepshika khud ko churane ki koshish karti, tab tab Latika apni panjo se uske badan ko aise kass leti, jisse ab Deepshika apni haddiyo ke tutne ka bhi aghaaz kar paa rahi thi.

Voh dard se aur paani bulbulane lagi aur Latika khilkhilane lagi yeh dekhke. Phir ek baar Rohan ki aur dekhke...

"Rohan! Main chahti to is kutiya ko ek jhatke me khatam kar sakti thi, ya phir ise zinda nighal sakti thi, lekin main ise batana chahti hoon, dikhana chahti hoon ke tum bas mere ho Rohan! Sirf MERE!"

Deepshika ki halat Rohan zyada der dekh nahi paa raha tha. Apne mann se baar baar kuch sujhav sujhne lagta hain, ke tabhi use Dr Saxena ki kahi ek khaas baat yaad aata hain..

"Yeh jal rakshasni har yug me paida hoti hain, kisi inaaani mard ko apne meet banake, apne duniya me laane ke liye. Aur maze ki baat yeh hai ke aisi jal rakshasniyo ka khatma kisi bhi auzaar se nahi ki jaa sakti! Balki jab unka dil apne aap tut jaata hain voh apne khaatma khud kar leti hain!"

Rohan ko dilasa aur upay dono mil chuka tha. Uske mann me ek choti si tarkeeb mandrane laga aur voh apne saare kapde paani me hi utaarke, apne kacche pehne keval, seedhe Latika ki aur tairne laga. Is drishya ko dekhke Deepshika ki aankhen badi badi ho jaati hain, lekin haan, Latika ki dil khushi se dhadakne lagi.

Latika : aao Rohan! Mere paas aao, jalpariyon ki duniya insaano se kahin zyada rangeen hoti hai!

Rohan : Latika! Oh Latika! Tum sahi keh rahi ho!

Rohan ke seene se Latika apni gondh jaisi chipchipi stan ko chipka deti hain aur apni pankh jaise haathon ko uske peeth pe kass leti hain aur apni neele honton ko uske hont se jod deti hain. Is drishya ko dekhke Deepshika ko ghinn aati hain aur uski dil toot si jaati hain, apne premi ko dhokebaazi karte dekh.

Kuch pal tak Latika Rohan ko choomti gayi aur agle pal Rohan ghinn ke maare apne chipchipe hont ko us rakshasni ke hont se azaad karta hain. Kuch pal tak dono ek dusre ko Prem se dekhte hain aur phir Latika ek nazar Deepshika ko dekhke, Rohan se kehne lagi...

"Rohan, is kutiya ab main chain se khatam kar sakti hoon! Ab iski hume koi zaroorat nahi!"

Deepshika gaur karti hain ke Latika ab apne tentacle ki zor se uski gardan haule haule dabochne lag jaati hain, ke tabhi Rohan himmat jutake Latika ki gaal par ek kass ke tamacha maarta hain.

Us tamacha ki gunj Latika ki dil me utar jaati hain aur voh hairani se Rohan ko dekhne lagi. Rohan ab uske gardan dabochne laga aur kehne laga zor awaaz me..

"TUJH JAISI BADSOORAT AURAT SE MAIN PYAR KARUNGA! tune yeh socha bhi kaise??? I hate you, samajh aayi tujhe??? I HATE YOU, YOU UGLY BITCH!"
 
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Jis ghinoni aur ghrina bhare andaaz se Rohan yeh sab kuch keh deta hain, usse Latika ki dil tut jaati hain aur uski har ang kamzor hone lagi. Deepshika bhi mehsoos karti hai ki uski ango me se tentacle ki giraft ab dheeli hone lagi. Dheeli hote hote, ekdam se pure badan me se azaad ho jaati hain aur Deepshika ek sukoon ki saas leti hain aur tairte huye foran Rohan ke paas jaake, usse kass jaati hain.

Latika ek nazar Rohan ko dekhti hain aur phir Deepshika ko, jo kasske Rohan se chipki hui thi. Ek aakhri baazi maarke Rohan apne honton ko apne saathi ke honton se mila deta hain, jiske jawab me Deepshika bhi uska saath dene lagti hain.

Yeh nazara dekhke Latika ki aashayen aur dil, dono tut si jaati hain aur voh nirash bhav se kehne lagi..

"Khush raho Rohan! Ab mera is dharti par koi astitva nahin rahi! Main hamesha ke liye tumhari zindagi se chali jaungi!"

Itna kehke Latika kuch mantr jaisi japti hain aur apni haathon ko phailake, aankhen munde intezar karne lagti hain. Rohan aur Deepshika bhi uski aur dekhne lage aur dono gaur karte hain ke Latika ki ird gird se dher saare piranha bahaar aate hain aur sab ke sab Latika pe tut padte hain, ek ek karke.

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Latika ki cheekh ahista ahista zyada se kam hoti gayi, jaise jaise piranho ne ek ek karke uski maas ko khaate gaye aur uski astitva mitate gaye. Aur dekhte hi dekhte Latika ki har maas aur pankh gayab ho jaate hain aur keval kaale rang ki haddiyan yaha vaha jhulne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte voh saare bhi gayab hone lage.

Paani ki gehrayio me ek ajeeb shaant maahol ban chuka tha aur is khamoshi ko dekhte huye Deepshika Rohan se gale lag jaati hain ek baar aur.

Dr Saxena ki research sach nikla tha. 'Rejection' hi Latika ki khilaf ek matra asthra thi.

...........

Kareeb ek saal ke baad :

Rohan aur Latika ki shaadi ko aaj ek saal ho gaye hain aur Deepshika ek sundar si beti ko janam dete hain. Apne bacche ko liye dono yunhi garden me ghoomne jaate hain aur baaton baaton me Rohan usse puchta hain..

"Deepu, iska naam kya rakhenge?"

Deepshika pyari si muskaan deke, kehti hain...

"Iska naam hum Latika rakhenge, aur haan! Voh ek aachi, kamyab aur safal ladki hogi zindagi me."

Is jawab se Rohan khush hua aur dono apne bacche se gupchup baatein karte huye aage aage tehelte gaye. Rohan mann hi mann apne beti ko dekhke yehi samajhne laga ke jaise Latika ne hi punar janam li ho, aur is naye rishte se uske chehre pe ek muskaan sama jaata hain.

Shayad kisi ne sach hi kaha hai, sacche pyar karne walo ko bhagwan to kya, shaitan bhi juda nahi kar sakta!


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Doston, is platform ka main shukar guzar hoon aur yeh vaada hai aapse ke is naye saal me, aur bhi romanchak kahaniya launga.

Tab tak ke liye, chota sa Alvida!
 
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Hello dear :hello:

This message is sent on behalf of XF admin team.
You are one of the best writers of XFORUM. And your story is also going very well. So we request you to write a short story for USC.
I hope aapki mehnat aur imagination is contest mein Char Chand laga degi aur XFORUM ke deewano ki list din doguni aur raat chauguni badhati rahegi, aur hum XF ko ek next level tak lekar jaayenge.Even Iss baar winners k liye
Cash Prizes bhi hain jo hum pehli baar leke aae hain so make sure you write a masterpiece.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 25th February 2022, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point par aate hain, jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap sabhi readers aur writers se meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap jarur participate kare aur apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut khushi hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar agar Review likhenge.

Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye aage bade aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 700 words aur maximum 7000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete karni hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.

I hope you will not disappoint me and participate in this ultimate story contest and write your story.


Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare ~ Entry Thread
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Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho ~
Rules & Queries Thread
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Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare ~
Review Thread
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Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare ~
Chit Chat Thread
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Aur aapne jo story likhi hai uske words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare ~ Characters Tool


Prizes

Position​
Benifits​
Winner​
1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)​
1st Runner-Up​
500 Rupees +2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)​
2nd Runner-UP​
5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership​
Best Supporting Reader​
Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership​
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof​
200 Likes for each report​


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Regards - XForum Staff.
 

Mr Sinister

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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).


"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.



Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes
Position Benifits
Winner 4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP 1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP 750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader 750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



Regards :- XForum Staff
 

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Annual Story Contest - XForum
Hello everyone!
We are thrilled to present the annual story contest of XForum!
"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

"Win cash prizes up to Rs 8500!"


Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 8000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 25th March ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th April 2025 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.

Important Links:
- Chit Chat Thread (For discussions)
- Review Thread (For reviews)
- Rules & Queries Thread (For contest details)
- Entry Thread (To submit your story)

Prizes
Position Rewards
Winner 3500 ₹ + image Award + 7000 Likes + 30-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up 2000 ₹ + image1 Award + 5000 Likes + 15-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-Up 1000 ₹ + 3000 Likes + 7-day Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-Up 500 ₹ + 3000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader (Top 3) 500 ₹ (Each) + image2 Award + 1000 Likes
Reporting Plagiarized Stories imag3 200 Likes per valid report


Regards, XForum Staff
 
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