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For starting new story thread.....
Nice introduction.....
for new story
for another story bhai.
ह्या कथेतील कदाचित मी दोन तीन भाग वाचलेले... खूप छान लिहिली होती कथा.... पण अपूर्ण राहिल्यामुळे रसच निघून गेला... आणि आता ती तुम्ही पुन्हा लिहीत आहात हे वाचून आनंद झाला... पण मित्रा.. निदान रोज एक भाग देत जा... धन्यवाद
awesome update
Nice update....
Congrats for your new story...![]()
for new great thread Qaatil
Congratulations bro for new story![]()
Brilliant story![]()
Nice and superb update.....
Another master piece. Congratulations for new one.![]()
Nice update
Nice update.....
kahani ki shuruwat zabardast ki hai ..neelam ko sapne aana jisme kuch aawaje aati hai aur 2 3 din se kuch chehre bhi dikhai de rahe hai .
ye kaunsi devtao ki sena hai jo hamesha haarti hai aur ye ente d zyre kaun hai jiska jikr neelam ke sapne me hota hai wahi 999 saal ho gaye aur sena usi naam ka jai jaikar kar rahi hai .
kya koi adrishya shakti neelam ke gusse ko dekhkar us aadmi ko maarne aayi..par neelam ke haath par khoon kaise aaya .
Bahot behtareen shaandar update
Both were great updates and congratulations for new story.
I hope you are writing a book or something, you are really good at creating plots and if you can make story telling more dramatic and charismatic especially when you are describing about surrounding or environment then it will be cherry on the top.
Best of luck for this story Qaatil bhai.
New story ke liye bro bohot bohot mubarkbad.asha karta hu yeh story bi apki pichli stories ki tarha behtreen hogi![]()
New Update "sparks of fate 1" posted checkout