Fantasy El Meren - The Sorcerous Virtuoso [ Incest | Magic | Multi-Dimension | Sci-fi ]

[Qaatil]

kahani ki shuruwat zabardast ki hai ..neelam ko sapne aana jisme kuch aawaje aati hai aur 2 3 din se kuch chehre bhi dikhai de rahe hai .
ye kaunsi devtao ki sena hai jo hamesha haarti hai aur ye ente d zyre kaun hai jiska jikr neelam ke sapne me hota hai wahi 999 saal ho gaye aur sena usi naam ka jai jaikar kar rahi hai .
kya koi adrishya shakti neelam ke gusse ko dekhkar us aadmi ko maarne aayi ..par neelam ke haath par khoon kaise aaya .

Thank You so much Bhai aapke Review ke liye.

Nahi actually Jo Nilam ke sapno me sunayi diya wo "Ente D'Fyer" tha or Jo us Sena ne puakara wo "Ente D'zyer" Jo dono alag alag hote he yahi darshata he.

Next Update will be out at 8:30 Stay Tuned

 

[parkas]

Next Update will be out at 8:30 Stay Tuned

Intezaar rahega Qaatil bhai....

 

[Qaatil]

Vol. 1 "Diabolic Resurrection"

Chapter 1 : The Mystic Within

Awakening To The Arcane Part 2​

Raat ke 11 baje hue the, is waqt takk Nilam so jati thi lekin kuch dino se uski nind bhi udd ne lagi thi, wo apne kamre se nikal kar niche kitchen mein chali ayi, lekin usne dekha ke Neel gadi ki chabi lekar main door se bahar nikal raha tha, tabhi wo Neel ko awaz laga kar rok deti hai

Uski awaz sunkar Neel mudkar us se kehta hai "tum.... Tum soyi nahi abtak?"
Nilam uske paas akar jawab deti hai "nahi mujhe nind nahi arahi... Tum is waqt kaha ja rahe ho Bhai?"
Uske sawal par Neel haklate hue jawab dene ki koshish karta hai "wo.... Wo... Mai to...... Uhh dost se.... Milne"
Neel ki shakal dekh kar Nilam ko badi hasi arahi thi, aur wo samajh gayi ke Neel Shruti se milne ja raha hai to usne kaha "mai samajh gayi...... By the way ghar ki chabi to le li na? Jaldi to aaoge nahi ab" wo Neel ko teas karte hue kehti hai.
Tabb Neel sharmate hue jawab deta hai "aisa nahi hai wo to..... mai bass thodi der mai ajaunga" aur itna kehkar Neel waha se bahar nikal gaya. Nilam uspar haste hue pani pikar apne kamre mein jakar so gayi.


Waha Neel thodi der mai Shruti ke ghar pahoch gaya. Darasal Shruti yaha akele rehti thi, aur wo Neel ki College mein hote Junior thi, ye uska last year chal raha tha. aur Neel ki zindagi ka zyada tar waqt Nilam ke saath ya apne Papa ka kaam karne mein jata tha, aur fir Shruti se milne ke liye uske paas bass Raat ka hi waqt mil jata tha.

Door open karte hi Neel ko dekh kar Shruti use Kiss kar deti hai, aur Neel bhi uska chehra tham kar hardly kiss karne lagg jata hai. Shruti use andar khinch kar door band kar deti hai aur use bedroom mein le jakar bed par dhakka dekar uski Godd mein jakar beth jati hai aur apna chehra Neel ke kareeb lakar kehti hai "Baby tum na mujhe bahot satate ho, aise tadpa kar jaan nikalne mein maza ata hai tumhe?"
Tabb Neel uska chehra tham kar kiss kar deta hai aur kehta hai "maaf kar dena jaan.... Lekin tum janti ho na kitni bhagdaud hai mere Zindagi mein"
Uski baat par Shruti Muskurate hue Haa me sar hila deti hai aur apna Tshirt utarne lagg jati hai. Neel uske badan par apni ungliya fer raha tha aur kiss kiye ja raha tha jis se Shruti ka badan tapp ne laga, usne Neel ka shirt nikal kar fek diya aur zameen par ghutno par bethkar Neel ki Jeans utar di aur use Blowjob dene lagg gayi, Neel bhi gehri saas lekar apna sar piche kar ke maza lene laga, Neel har waqt kamo mein fasa hota tha, aur jab bhi Shruti ko mauka milta wo Neel ko ghar bula kar uski thakan dur kar deti thi. Kuch der takk Neel ko orally satisfy karne ke baad Shruti uthkar apni Pant utar kar Neel ke upar agayi, Neel uske Boobs ko sehla raha tha, uski neck par kiss kar raha tha Shruti apne honto ko daato ke bich badaye ja rahi thi, fir Neel ne deri kiye bina Shruti ko apne niche le liya aur agle dedh ghante takk dono ka sex chala aur fir dono apas mein lipat kar hi so gaye. Waise to Neel der raat jab Shruti so jati tabb waha se nikal kar apne ghar ajata tha, kyu ke use subah subah Nilam ko college chhorna hota tha. Lekin aaj wo bass thak kar chain se ao gaya.

Subah subah Nilam nind se uthkar tayar ho gayi aur dining room mein chali gayi jaha uski Maa Jyoti pareshan hokar kisi ko call kar rahi thi.

Nilam Jyoti ke paas akar puchti hai "kya hua Maa? Aap pareshan lagg rahi ho"
Jyoti fir se call lagate hue Nilam se kehti hai "Neel ko call kar rahi hu, pata nahi kaha chala gaya ye ladka"
Tabb Nilam ko yaad aya ke Neel kaha gaya hai "matlab bhai abtak ghar aya hi nahi"
Uski baat sunkar Jyoti us se puchti hai "tum janti ho wo kaha gaya hai"
Nilam use jawab dete hue kehti hai "wo..... Wo.... Kal raat Shruti se milne gaye the"
Nilam ki baat sunkar Jyoti apne mathe par hi haath maar leti hai "chalo.... Ye ladka bhi bigad gaya"
Nilam kitchen se Dining Table ke paas ate hue Jyoti se kehti hai "Ab jane bhi do na Maa.... Wo koi baccha nahi hai jo bigad jaye"
"Tum to rehne hi do.... Sari duniya galat ho sakti hai lekin tumhara bhai kabhi galat nahi ho sakta"
Jyoti ki baat par Nilam Muskurate hue kehti hai "bhai kabhi galat nahi ho sakta.... Atleast mere mamlo mein to bilkul nahi"
Nilam ko muskurata dekh Jyoti ko bhi behadd accha lagta hai.
Kuch der baad Nilam apne Papa ke saath College ke liye nikal padti hai, waha Neel ki aakhe khuli aur usne time dekha to wo bilkul bhokla gaya "Shit..... Mai raat mein yahi so gaya, no......" Wo jaldi jaldi kapde pehen kar Shruti ko bina jagaye uske mathe par chumkar waha se nikal gaya.

Ghar pahoch te hi uska samna apni Maa se hua.
Neel ko dekh kar Jyoti apne dono haath kamar par rakh kar uske samne ate hue kehti hai "kaha the raat bhar?"
Neel ghabrate hue use jawab deta hai "wo Maa..... Mai to... Dost.... Dost ke saath tha"
"Accha.... Aur dost ka Naam zarur Shruti hoga, nahi?"
Neel turant ye baat sunkar haar maan leta hai "Maa wo mai to bass...."
Neel aage kuch bolta us se pehle Jyoti kehti hai "beta hum sab jante hai tum Shruti se pyaar karte ho, mai to zamane se chahti hu ke tum dono ki shadi ho jaye lekin tum ho ki"
Uski baat sunkar Neel andar akar chair par beth te hue kehta hai "Maa, maine kaha na jabtak Nilam puri tarah se thik nahi ho jati, tabtak mai shadi wadi nahi karne wala"
"Lekin beta shadi karne mai kya problem hai?"
"Problem nahi Maa, yaha ek to Nilam ki halat sudharne ke bajay bigad rahi hai. Fir Nilam par dhyan kon dega? Mai apna sansar sambhalne mai lagg jaunga, Papa ko waise hi hazaro kaam hote hai, aur aap akele ghar sambhalogi ya Nilam ko?"
Neel ki baat sunkar Jyoti uske bagal mai bethkar Neel ka haath thamkar kehti hai "Beta ab bass ho gaya hum sabke liye jina..... Khud ke liye bhi jina shuru kar do, aur baat rahi Nilam ki to kya tumhare Papa ke liye Nilam se important apna kaam hai? Nahi na, to fir hum dono Nilam ka khayal rakh sakte hai, aur tum konsa shadi ke baad tum alag rehne wale ho? Saath hi rahoge na hum sabke"
"Maa aap samajh nahi rahi ho..... Aap bass jabtak Nilam thik na ho jaye tabtak meri shadi ki baat nahi nikalogi"
"Thik hai baba jesa tum kaho.... Lekin beta ye baat to tum mante ho na ke Nilam ki halat bigad rahi hai?"
Jyoti ki baat par Neel Haa mein jawab de deta hai.
"To beta mujhe aur tumhare Papa ko lagta hai ke Nilam par aise Psychiatric ke saath sessions se koi farak nahi padega, use hume Medical Treatment se hi thik karma hoga"
Uski baat sunkar Neel ko kafi gussa agaya aur wo behadd rukhe swaro mein Jyoti se kehta hai "aap ye kya keh rahi ho Maa..... Nilam ko bass ye sapne darate hai aur kuch nahi, wo koi Dimagi mariz nahi hai jo use Medical Treatment di jaye"
"Beta mai kuch bhi nahi soch rahi, lekin tum khud dekh rahe ho na ke Psychiatric se sessions ke bawajud uski halat nahi sambhali, aur mai keh rahi hu ke hum Hospital mai ek baar Nilam ki testing karwate hai jis se hume asani hogi uski halat mein sudhar lane mein"
Kahi na kahi Jyoti ki soch bilkul sahi thi, aur ye Neel bhi samajh raha tha, lekin wo janta tha ke agar Nilam ko wo log Medical Treatment dene ki baat kare to use kitna hurt hoga "Maa dekhiye aap Nilam se is bare mein kuch nahi kahogi" itna kehkar Neel apne kamre mein chala gaya.


Dur dur takk viran padi Jagah ke bich ek Bunker ki entry thi, dekhne se lagg raha tha jese World War ke samay use hue bunkers honge, lekin andar ka nazara kuch aur dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Andar Puri ki puri Reaserch Facility thi, ek Lab, ek Weapon rooms aur bhi bahot kuch. Waha ek cabin ke andar koi aadmi betha hua tha, uske chehre se lagg raha tha ke use koi pareshani hai.
Tabhi waha uska Junior Scientist Dr. Bill Ajata hai "Flamekin, Aap pareshan lagg rahe hai, koi baat hai?"
To cabin mein betha aadmi aur koi nahi balki us kaid Fauj ka is jung ke liye Leader tha.
Tabb Flamekin jawab dete hue kehta hai "pareshani wali bhi baat hai aur acchi bhi"
"Mai kuch samjha nahi"
"Dusre Ayaam (Dimension) ki Jadugarni El Meren aur wo Yoddha us Ayaam mein nahi hai, jo ek acchi baat hai. Lekin agar El Meren aur wo Yoddha humare 1000 saal pure hone ke baad humle ke waqt us Ayaam mein agaye to hum ye jung haar jayenge bhale humare paas hazaro ya lakho ki sena ho, aur humare ye hi-tech Weapons to us Ayaam mein bass dhul hi reh jayenge" Darasal Is Dimension ke koi Hatiyar dusri Dimension mein kaam karne ke liye nahi bane hote.
Ye sab sunkar Dr. Bill bhi chinta mein padd gaya "to kya aapko lagta hai wo Jadugarni is dimension mein hai?"
"Pata nahi, wo kisi aur Ayaam mein bhi ho sakti hai, agar wo is Ayaam mein hai to yuddh ke waqt wo ek 20 saal ki ladki hogi, lekin sari duniya se takatwar"
"Waise humne pehle hi is Dimension mein us Jadugarni ko dhund ne ka kaam shuru kar diya tha"
"Kya nateeja nikla?" Flamekin puchta hai.
"Abtak to uske yaha hone ka koi sabut nahi mila, humari search jari hai"
Nakamyabi ki baat sunkar Flamekin ko behadd gussa agay aur uske gusse mein table par haath marte hue kaha "agar wo Jadugarni is Ayaam mein hai, to mujhe wo kisi bhi halat meim chahiye.... Zinda, ya murda"


Dopeher ke waqt Neel Factory se sidha College chala jata hai Nilam ko lene ke liye, waha Nilam gate par hi uska intezar kar rahi thi, Neel waha Shruti ko dhund raha tha to Nilam andar beth te hue us se kehti hai "wo nahi ayi aaj college, warna break ke waqt canteen mein khana thus te dikh jati" Nilam ne Neel ko satane ke liye bol diya lekin Neel bass halka sa muskura diya.

Use dekh Nilam samajh gayi ke Neel kisi baat se pareshan hai "kya hua Bhai? Koi pareshani hai?"
Apne chehre par ayi chinta chupate hue Neel us se kehta hai "kya pareshani hogi? Wo to Maa ne subah subah mere shadi ke raag gana shuru kar diye the.... Bass wahi soch raha tha" uski baat par Nilam ko pura Vishwas to nahi hua lekin usne ispar zyada dhyan nahi diya. "Bhai mujhe Bahot bhuk lagi hai"
"Tumne kuch khaya nahi?"
Uski baat par Nilam bilkul baccho ki tarah muh banate hue kehti hai "Canteen mein wahi har roz ka menu hota hai, mein bore ho gayi ek hi chiz khate khate"
"Koi baat nahi, Maa ko call kar ke bata do hume ane mein late ho jayega"
Neel ki baat sunkar Nilam behadd khush ho gayi, aur use khush hota dekh Neel bhi khush ho gaya. Dono waha se Restaurant mein chale gaye aur Neel ne Nilam ko uske baad shaam takk bahar ghumaya. Aur is wajah se Nilam ka aaj ka din behadd hi accha tha.


Raat ke waqt Nilam ka khana khane ka mann nahi tha isliye wo TV dekhte hue bethi thi, aur baki tino Dining room mein khana kha rahe the, kuch der baad Nilam TV off kar ke apne kamre mein chali gayi.

Nilam ke jane ke baad Virendra Nilam ke ilaj ke bare mein baat karna shuru kar deta hai. Lekin Neel baar baar Nilam ko defend karte hue apne Maa Baap ko mana kar raha tha. Tabhi Nilam apna mobile lene ke liye niche ayi aur usne dining room mein ho rahi baate sun ni shuru kar di.

Virendra Neel ko samjha raha tha ke wo Nilam ko is ke liye tayar kare "Beta dekho Nilam ko agar maine ya tumhari Maa ne is bare mein kaha to wo gussa ho jati hai, tum use shanti se samjhao use bass kuch test karwane hai jis se hume asani hogi uske aage ki treatment ke liye" ab Nilam kafi Gussa ho gayi aur tezi se Dining room mein agayi "thik hai, ek kaam kijiye koi test karne ki zarurat nahi hai aap log mujhe Mental Hospital mein hi daal dijiye, at least aap ke sar ka bojh kam ho jayega"
Use shant karate hue Neel aage akar kehta hai "Nilam tum Papa ko galat samajh rahi ho wo to...."
Uski baat puri hone se pehle hi Nilam chillate hue kehti hai "aap ne mera dil toda hai..... Is duniya mein mujhe chahe koi kuch bhi kahe, lekin mein janti thi ke mere Bhai humesha mujhe samjhenge.... Aaj wo galat fehmi bhi dur ho gayi......"
"Nilam meri baat......"
"Shut Up........" Wo behadd zor se chillayi aur bass turant behosh hokar gir gayi.

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

Thank You so much Bhai aapke Review ke liye.

Nahi actually Jo Nilam ke sapno me sunayi diya wo "Ente D'Fyer" tha or Jo us Sena ne puakara wo "Ente D'zyer" Jo dono alag alag hote he yahi darshata he.

Next Update will be out at 8:30 Stay Tuned

ye english jyada samajh nahi aati aur naam bhi yaad nahi rehte iske liye sorry ..par aapki kahani dil se padh raha hu ..

 

[Dungeon Master]

First Of All thank you so much for your Review.
Darasal Font selection kafi limited he yaha par I thought this font style would be good choice, but next Update me koi or Font use karunga, give your opinion. And Update will be out at 8:30

Only issue with this font was it has slim, light and larger font, thoda muskil hota catch karne me reading pov se.

Font use karo jisse bold and dark lage, large bhi ho to chalega.

 

[Dungeon Master]

Vol. 1 "Diabolic Resurrection"

Chapter 1 : The Mystic Within

Awakening To The Arcane Part 2​

Raat ke 11 baje hue the, is waqt takk Nilam so jati thi lekin kuch dino se uski nind bhi udd ne lagi thi, wo apne kamre se nikal kar niche kitchen mein chali ayi, lekin usne dekha ke Neel gadi ki chabi lekar main door se bahar nikal raha tha, tabhi wo Neel ko awaz laga kar rok deti hai

Uski awaz sunkar Neel mudkar us se kehta hai "tum.... Tum soyi nahi abtak?"
Nilam uske paas akar jawab deti hai "nahi mujhe nind nahi arahi... Tum is waqt kaha ja rahe ho Bhai?"
Uske sawal par Neel haklate hue jawab dene ki koshish karta hai "wo.... Wo... Mai to...... Uhh dost se.... Milne"
Neel ki shakal dekh kar Nilam ko badi hasi arahi thi, aur wo samajh gayi ke Neel Shruti se milne ja raha hai to usne kaha "mai samajh gayi...... By the way ghar ki chabi to le li na? Jaldi to aaoge nahi ab" wo Neel ko teas karte hue kehti hai.
Tabb Neel sharmate hue jawab deta hai "aisa nahi hai wo to..... mai bass thodi der mai ajaunga" aur itna kehkar Neel waha se bahar nikal gaya. Nilam uspar haste hue pani pikar apne kamre mein jakar so gayi.


Waha Neel thodi der mai Shruti ke ghar pahoch gaya. Darasal Shruti yaha akele rehti thi, aur wo Neel ki College mein hote Junior thi, ye uska last year chal raha tha. aur Neel ki zindagi ka zyada tar waqt Nilam ke saath ya apne Papa ka kaam karne mein jata tha, aur fir Shruti se milne ke liye uske paas bass Raat ka hi waqt mil jata tha.

Door open karte hi Neel ko dekh kar Shruti use Kiss kar deti hai, aur Neel bhi uska chehra tham kar hardly kiss karne lagg jata hai. Shruti use andar khinch kar door band kar deti hai aur use bedroom mein le jakar bed par dhakka dekar uski Godd mein jakar beth jati hai aur apna chehra Neel ke kareeb lakar kehti hai "Baby tum na mujhe bahot satate ho, aise tadpa kar jaan nikalne mein maza ata hai tumhe?"
Tabb Neel uska chehra tham kar kiss kar deta hai aur kehta hai "maaf kar dena jaan.... Lekin tum janti ho na kitni bhagdaud hai mere Zindagi mein"
Uski baat par Shruti Muskurate hue Haa me sar hila deti hai aur apna Tshirt utarne lagg jati hai. Neel uske badan par apni ungliya fer raha tha aur kiss kiye ja raha tha jis se Shruti ka badan tapp ne laga, usne Neel ka shirt nikal kar fek diya aur zameen par ghutno par bethkar Neel ki Jeans utar di aur use Blowjob dene lagg gayi, Neel bhi gehri saas lekar apna sar piche kar ke maza lene laga, Neel har waqt kamo mein fasa hota tha, aur jab bhi Shruti ko mauka milta wo Neel ko ghar bula kar uski thakan dur kar deti thi. Kuch der takk Neel ko orally satisfy karne ke baad Shruti uthkar apni Pant utar kar Neel ke upar agayi, Neel uske Boobs ko sehla raha tha, uski neck par kiss kar raha tha Shruti apne honto ko daato ke bich badaye ja rahi thi, fir Neel ne deri kiye bina Shruti ko apne niche le liya aur agle dedh ghante takk dono ka sex chala aur fir dono apas mein lipat kar hi so gaye. Waise to Neel der raat jab Shruti so jati tabb waha se nikal kar apne ghar ajata tha, kyu ke use subah subah Nilam ko college chhorna hota tha. Lekin aaj wo bass thak kar chain se ao gaya.

Subah subah Nilam nind se uthkar tayar ho gayi aur dining room mein chali gayi jaha uski Maa Jyoti pareshan hokar kisi ko call kar rahi thi.

Nilam Jyoti ke paas akar puchti hai "kya hua Maa? Aap pareshan lagg rahi ho"
Jyoti fir se call lagate hue Nilam se kehti hai "Neel ko call kar rahi hu, pata nahi kaha chala gaya ye ladka"
Tabb Nilam ko yaad aya ke Neel kaha gaya hai "matlab bhai abtak ghar aya hi nahi"
Uski baat sunkar Jyoti us se puchti hai "tum janti ho wo kaha gaya hai"
Nilam use jawab dete hue kehti hai "wo..... Wo.... Kal raat Shruti se milne gaye the"
Nilam ki baat sunkar Jyoti apne mathe par hi haath maar leti hai "chalo.... Ye ladka bhi bigad gaya"
Nilam kitchen se Dining Table ke paas ate hue Jyoti se kehti hai "Ab jane bhi do na Maa.... Wo koi baccha nahi hai jo bigad jaye"
"Tum to rehne hi do.... Sari duniya galat ho sakti hai lekin tumhara bhai kabhi galat nahi ho sakta"
Jyoti ki baat par Nilam Muskurate hue kehti hai "bhai kabhi galat nahi ho sakta.... Atleast mere mamlo mein to bilkul nahi"
Nilam ko muskurata dekh Jyoti ko bhi behadd accha lagta hai.
Kuch der baad Nilam apne Papa ke saath College ke liye nikal padti hai, waha Neel ki aakhe khuli aur usne time dekha to wo bilkul bhokla gaya "Shit..... Mai raat mein yahi so gaya, no......" Wo jaldi jaldi kapde pehen kar Shruti ko bina jagaye uske mathe par chumkar waha se nikal gaya.

Ghar pahoch te hi uska samna apni Maa se hua.
Neel ko dekh kar Jyoti apne dono haath kamar par rakh kar uske samne ate hue kehti hai "kaha the raat bhar?"
Neel ghabrate hue use jawab deta hai "wo Maa..... Mai to... Dost.... Dost ke saath tha"
"Accha.... Aur dost ka Naam zarur Shruti hoga, nahi?"
Neel turant ye baat sunkar haar maan leta hai "Maa wo mai to bass...."
Neel aage kuch bolta us se pehle Jyoti kehti hai "beta hum sab jante hai tum Shruti se pyaar karte ho, mai to zamane se chahti hu ke tum dono ki shadi ho jaye lekin tum ho ki"
Uski baat sunkar Neel andar akar chair par beth te hue kehta hai "Maa, maine kaha na jabtak Nilam puri tarah se thik nahi ho jati, tabtak mai shadi wadi nahi karne wala"
"Lekin beta shadi karne mai kya problem hai?"
"Problem nahi Maa, yaha ek to Nilam ki halat sudharne ke bajay bigad rahi hai. Fir Nilam par dhyan kon dega? Mai apna sansar sambhalne mai lagg jaunga, Papa ko waise hi hazaro kaam hote hai, aur aap akele ghar sambhalogi ya Nilam ko?"
Neel ki baat sunkar Jyoti uske bagal mai bethkar Neel ka haath thamkar kehti hai "Beta ab bass ho gaya hum sabke liye jina..... Khud ke liye bhi jina shuru kar do, aur baat rahi Nilam ki to kya tumhare Papa ke liye Nilam se important apna kaam hai? Nahi na, to fir hum dono Nilam ka khayal rakh sakte hai, aur tum konsa shadi ke baad tum alag rehne wale ho? Saath hi rahoge na hum sabke"
"Maa aap samajh nahi rahi ho..... Aap bass jabtak Nilam thik na ho jaye tabtak meri shadi ki baat nahi nikalogi"
"Thik hai baba jesa tum kaho.... Lekin beta ye baat to tum mante ho na ke Nilam ki halat bigad rahi hai?"
Jyoti ki baat par Neel Haa mein jawab de deta hai.
"To beta mujhe aur tumhare Papa ko lagta hai ke Nilam par aise Psychiatric ke saath sessions se koi farak nahi padega, use hume Medical Treatment se hi thik karma hoga"
Uski baat sunkar Neel ko kafi gussa agaya aur wo behadd rukhe swaro mein Jyoti se kehta hai "aap ye kya keh rahi ho Maa..... Nilam ko bass ye sapne darate hai aur kuch nahi, wo koi Dimagi mariz nahi hai jo use Medical Treatment di jaye"
"Beta mai kuch bhi nahi soch rahi, lekin tum khud dekh rahe ho na ke Psychiatric se sessions ke bawajud uski halat nahi sambhali, aur mai keh rahi hu ke hum Hospital mai ek baar Nilam ki testing karwate hai jis se hume asani hogi uski halat mein sudhar lane mein"
Kahi na kahi Jyoti ki soch bilkul sahi thi, aur ye Neel bhi samajh raha tha, lekin wo janta tha ke agar Nilam ko wo log Medical Treatment dene ki baat kare to use kitna hurt hoga "Maa dekhiye aap Nilam se is bare mein kuch nahi kahogi" itna kehkar Neel apne kamre mein chala gaya.


Dur dur takk viran padi Jagah ke bich ek Bunker ki entry thi, dekhne se lagg raha tha jese World War ke samay use hue bunkers honge, lekin andar ka nazara kuch aur dastaan bayaan kar raha tha. Andar Puri ki puri Reaserch Facility thi, ek Lab, ek Weapon rooms aur bhi bahot kuch. Waha ek cabin ke andar koi aadmi betha hua tha, uske chehre se lagg raha tha ke use koi pareshani hai.
Tabhi waha uska Junior Scientist Dr. Bill Ajata hai "Flamekin, Aap pareshan lagg rahe hai, koi baat hai?"
To cabin mein betha aadmi aur koi nahi balki us kaid Fauj ka is jung ke liye Leader tha.
Tabb Flamekin jawab dete hue kehta hai "pareshani wali bhi baat hai aur acchi bhi"
"Mai kuch samjha nahi"
"Dusre Ayaam (Dimension) ki Jadugarni El Meren aur wo Yoddha us Ayaam mein nahi hai, jo ek acchi baat hai. Lekin agar El Meren aur wo Yoddha humare 1000 saal pure hone ke baad humle ke waqt us Ayaam mein agaye to hum ye jung haar jayenge bhale humare paas hazaro ya lakho ki sena ho, aur humare ye hi-tech Weapons to us Ayaam mein bass dhul hi reh jayenge" Darasal Is Dimension ke koi Hatiyar dusri Dimension mein kaam karne ke liye nahi bane hote.
Ye sab sunkar Dr. Bill bhi chinta mein padd gaya "to kya aapko lagta hai wo Jadugarni is dimension mein hai?"
"Pata nahi, wo kisi aur Ayaam mein bhi ho sakti hai, agar wo is Ayaam mein hai to yuddh ke waqt wo ek 20 saal ki ladki hogi, lekin sari duniya se takatwar"
"Waise humne pehle hi is Dimension mein us Jadugarni ko dhund ne ka kaam shuru kar diya tha"
"Kya nateeja nikla?" Flamekin puchta hai.
"Abtak to uske yaha hone ka koi sabut nahi mila, humari search jari hai"
Nakamyabi ki baat sunkar Flamekin ko behadd gussa agay aur uske gusse mein table par haath marte hue kaha "agar wo Jadugarni is Ayaam mein hai, to mujhe wo kisi bhi halat meim chahiye.... Zinda, ya murda"


Dopeher ke waqt Neel Factory se sidha College chala jata hai Nilam ko lene ke liye, waha Nilam gate par hi uska intezar kar rahi thi, Neel waha Shruti ko dhund raha tha to Nilam andar beth te hue us se kehti hai "wo nahi ayi aaj college, warna break ke waqt canteen mein khana thus te dikh jati" Nilam ne Neel ko satane ke liye bol diya lekin Neel bass halka sa muskura diya.

Use dekh Nilam samajh gayi ke Neel kisi baat se pareshan hai "kya hua Bhai? Koi pareshani hai?"
Apne chehre par ayi chinta chupate hue Neel us se kehta hai "kya pareshani hogi? Wo to Maa ne subah subah mere shadi ke raag gana shuru kar diye the.... Bass wahi soch raha tha" uski baat par Nilam ko pura Vishwas to nahi hua lekin usne ispar zyada dhyan nahi diya. "Bhai mujhe Bahot bhuk lagi hai"
"Tumne kuch khaya nahi?"
Uski baat par Nilam bilkul baccho ki tarah muh banate hue kehti hai "Canteen mein wahi har roz ka menu hota hai, mein bore ho gayi ek hi chiz khate khate"
"Koi baat nahi, Maa ko call kar ke bata do hume ane mein late ho jayega"
Neel ki baat sunkar Nilam behadd khush ho gayi, aur use khush hota dekh Neel bhi khush ho gaya. Dono waha se Restaurant mein chale gaye aur Neel ne Nilam ko uske baad shaam takk bahar ghumaya. Aur is wajah se Nilam ka aaj ka din behadd hi accha tha.


Raat ke waqt Nilam ka khana khane ka mann nahi tha isliye wo TV dekhte hue bethi thi, aur baki tino Dining room mein khana kha rahe the, kuch der baad Nilam TV off kar ke apne kamre mein chali gayi.

Nilam ke jane ke baad Virendra Nilam ke ilaj ke bare mein baat karna shuru kar deta hai. Lekin Neel baar baar Nilam ko defend karte hue apne Maa Baap ko mana kar raha tha. Tabhi Nilam apna mobile lene ke liye niche ayi aur usne dining room mein ho rahi baate sun ni shuru kar di.

Virendra Neel ko samjha raha tha ke wo Nilam ko is ke liye tayar kare "Beta dekho Nilam ko agar maine ya tumhari Maa ne is bare mein kaha to wo gussa ho jati hai, tum use shanti se samjhao use bass kuch test karwane hai jis se hume asani hogi uske aage ki treatment ke liye" ab Nilam kafi Gussa ho gayi aur tezi se Dining room mein agayi "thik hai, ek kaam kijiye koi test karne ki zarurat nahi hai aap log mujhe Mental Hospital mein hi daal dijiye, at least aap ke sar ka bojh kam ho jayega"
Use shant karate hue Neel aage akar kehta hai "Nilam tum Papa ko galat samajh rahi ho wo to...."
Uski baat puri hone se pehle hi Nilam chillate hue kehti hai "aap ne mera dil toda hai..... Is duniya mein mujhe chahe koi kuch bhi kahe, lekin mein janti thi ke mere Bhai humesha mujhe samjhenge.... Aaj wo galat fehmi bhi dur ho gayi......"
"Nilam meri baat......"
"Shut Up........" Wo behadd zor se chillayi aur bass turant behosh hokar gir gayi.

awesome update bhai.

I hope neel and nilam dono ek dusre ke complementary ho dono ke paas kuch powers ho.

Shruti ka character thoda doubtful ho raha hai is update me, darker side may be.
Parents as usual deai type lag rahe h . Baaki kahani bahut badia khul rahi hai.

Waiting tor next update

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..to neel aur shruti ke bich bahut kuch ho chuka hai ..
aur koi alag jagah wo sena ke log research kar rahe hai aur kisi jadugarni ko khoj rahe hai jinda ya murda ..us jadugarni ki wajah se unpe musibat aa sakti hai .
neel to apni behan ko defend kar raha hai par neelam ka gussa shant hone ka naam nahi le raha ,par usko itna gussa aata kyu hai iska bhi koi reason hoga .

 

[Qaatil]

awesome update bhai.

I hope neel and nilam dono ek dusre ke complementary ho dono ke paas kuch powers ho.

Shruti ka character thoda doubtful ho raha hai is update me, darker side may be.
Parents as usual deai type lag rahe h . Baaki kahani bahut badia khul rahi hai.

Waiting tor next update

Thank You so much for your Review. And baki, baate to dhire dhire khulti jayengi
Next Update will be out Soon. Stay Tuned

 

[KnightAngel]

Both were great updates and congratulations for new story.

I hope you are writing a book or something, you are really good at creating plots and if you can make story telling more dramatic and charismatic especially when you are describing about surrounding or environment then it will be cherry on the top.

Best of luck for this story Qaatil bhai.

 

[Mk1]

Superb update