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Story ka sabse Intense aspect aapko kya lagta hai?

  • Ashar aur Sana ki khufia chemistry aur tension.

    Votes: 20 50.0%
  • Sofia aur Sabiha ki nangi baatein aur raaz.

    Votes: 14 35.0%
  • Ashar ka apni fantasies ko poora karne ka junoon.

    Votes: 18 45.0%
  • Ghar ke sukoon ke peeche chhupi hui Darkness.

    Votes: 12 30.0%
  • Laibha ghar mein baith kar sana ka raaz par nazar rakhe hue hai

    Votes: 7 17.5%
  • wating for incest turn between bhai behan.

    Votes: 21 52.5%
  • waiting for ashar sabhia real encounter.

    Votes: 18 45.0%

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Update - 21

Kitchen mein bartan saaf karne ki awaz ke sath sath Sabiha aur Laiba ki behes bhi jaari thi. Laiba apne nakhun saaf karte hue nihayat be-rukhi se boli.

Laiba: Mummy! Kitna sukoon hai na ghar mein? Usey kuch din udhar hi rehne dein, hamari jaan chouti rahegi.

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Sabiha: (Sanjidagi se) Aisi baatein nahi karte Laiba, tumhari behen hai wo. Kuch to khayal karo, wo bechari beemar parri hui hai udhar.

Laiba: (Tanziya hansi hanste hue)"Kyun? Kya hua usey? Zaroor drama kar rahi hogi udhar. Usey pata hai ke wahan aap ki tarah koi nakhre uthane wala nahi hai na, is liye beemari ka bahana bana liya hoga.

Sabiha: Ye tumhari bhool hai... sab se zyada jo uske nakhre uthata hai wo udhar hi hai. Sabiha ka ishara Ashar ki taraf tha.

Laiba: Haan! Isi liye to tang aa gaye hain do din mein hi us se... jo aap ko baar baar bula rahe hain ke apni anokhi ladli ko aa kar le jao.

Sabiha: Koi nahi hamain bula raha, hum khud ja rahe hain usey lene. Hamari beti hai wo to khayal bhi hum ne hi rakhna hai, jaise tumhara aur tumhare bhaiyon ka rakhte hain.

Laiba: (Aik dum karvi awaz mein) Haan! Bohot rakhte hain khayal! Aik bhai ko to do saal se ghar se nikala hua hai.

Sabiha ke hath ruk gaye. Unho ne gusse se Laiba ki taraf dekha.

Sabiha: Kuch sharam karo! Kya bol rahi ho? Wo apni marzi se gaya tha study karne ke liye.

Laiba: To kyun jane diya aap ne? Idhar bhi to apni study continue kar sakta tha. Aik wo hi to tha is ghar mein jo mera khayal rakhta tha, mera sath deta tha.

Sabiha: Haan! Itna hi khayal rakhta tha to rok leti usay... ab mera dimaag na khao, jao ja kar apna koi kaam karo!

Sabiha ne rukh pher liya, magar Laiba ki ankhon mein aik ajeeb si nami thi. Usey Salman ki yaad ke sath sath Sana par mazeed gussa aa raha tha.
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Ashar aur Sana park ki thandi hawa mein walk kar rahe thae. Ashar ka dimaag abhi bhi un uljhano ka shikar tha jo usay raat se pareshan kar rahi thin. Wo Sana ke normal behavior se confuse tha.

Jab wo ghar aia tha tu door sana na hi khola tha wo bhut khush ho kar mili usa se jisa uska wait kar rae ho. Woh kaafi khush aur beparwah si nazar aa rahi thi, jaise pehle hoti thi.

Sana ka behavior na usey thoda sukoon dia tha. Woh samajh raha tha ke usey raat ka kuchh yaad nahi. Lekin usko apne aap se bohot sharmindagi, uljhan aur gussa tha.

Dinner ka bad Sofia usey bata chuki thi ke kal bhabi aur bhai usey lene aa rahe hain. Ashar jaldi Sana se baat karna chahta tha ise laia wo usa walk kerne ka bahna bhir la aia.

Sana: kin sochoon mein gum hain? Jab se office se aaye hain theek se baat bhi nahi kar rahe mere saath.

Ashar: Hmm... isi liye tumhein saath laya hoon taake sukoon se baat kar sakoon.

Sana: Boliye… main sun rahi hoon.

(Woh uske saath chalte hue usey ek ada se dekhti hui boli)

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Ashar: Sana, sab se pehle to mera us raat wala behavior... I mean, I am sorry.

Sana: (Baat kaat te hue) Wo to aap ne kal hi bol diya tha aur maine accept bhi kar liya tha. Us mein meri bhi utni hi galti thi.

Ashar ke qadam wahin jam gaye. Uska dil dharakna bhool gaya.

Ashar (Socked): WTF! Isay sab yaad hai? Isay pata hai ke raat ko bed par kya hua tha... aur ye phir bhi itni normal hai?

Sana: Kya hua? Aap aise kyun dekh rahe hai?

Ashar: Tum... tum mujhe pagal kar dogi Sana.

Sana: (Masoomiyat se) Ab maine kya kiya? (Usay Ashar ki baat ki samajh nahi aayi)

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Ashar: Yeh hi toh masla hai… tum kuchh samajhti nahi ya samajhna chahti nahi ho?

Idar Ashar ko laga ke Sana raat wale incident ki baat kar rahi hai, magar Sana ke dimaag mein wo wali video baat thi.

Sana: aap video ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain. Wo... mujhe nahi pata kaise bani. I am sorry Main bohot sharminda hoon. I promise dobara aisa nahi hoga.

Ashar ne foran palti maari.

Ashar: Tumhare sharminda hone se kya hota hai? Tumhein pata bhi hai agar wo video kisi aur ke haath lag jati to kya hota.

Sana ab thoda phir se sad ho gayi thi. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye thay jin ko dekh kar Ashar soft ho gaya.

Ashar ne Sana ko bataya ke kaise us larke ne trap bichaya tha aur kaise usne watchman ko paise dekar wo video hasil ki aur delete karwayi. Sana yeh sun kar hairaan aur pareshan ho gayi. Usay us ladke par bohot gussa aa gaya.

Ashar uske face ke expression se Sana ki condition samajh gaya.

Mostly ladke aise hi hote hain… particular teen age mein. Lekin ladkiyon ko khayal karna padta hai. Limit cross nahi karne deni hoti. Lekin tum…

Woh itna bol kar chup kar gaya (uska mind mein yeh khayal bhi aa gaya tha ke kal Sana ne usey bhi nahi roka tha).

Sana puzzled ho gayi thi. Usay samajh nahi aa raha tha kya bola.

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Ashar: Ab tum badi ho gayi ho. Feelings sab mein hoti hain, male aur female dono mein... magar khud par control rakhna seekho. Ye sab cheezein sirf kisi khaas insaan ke liye hoti hain. Har kisi ko advantage lene ki ijazat nahi di jati.

Sana ko ye sun kar aisi insult feel hui jaise Ashar usay characterless samajh raha ho. Usay laga ke Ashar keh raha hai ke koi bhi larka dekh kar pighal jati hai.

Woh toh soch kar aayi thi ke Ashar ko bolegi baba ko aane se mana kar de… woh kuchh din aur reh le idhar. But ab usne jaana hi munasib samjha.

Ashar: Yeh is topic par hamari pehli aur last conversation hai. Main ab kabhi tumhare affairs mein nahi bolunga… tumhari life hai… tum jo marzi karo.

Sana jo itni khush thi, Ashar ki itni rude baaton se woh sad ho gayi thi. Woh phir se murjha si gayi thi. Wo khamoshi se Ashar ke peeche chalne lagi. Ashar ne to apna bojh halka kar liya, magar usne Sana ke andar ke us jazbe ko qatal kar diya tha jo kal raat jaaga tha.

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Raat ke waqt Laiba apne bed par leti hui thi. Uska chehra utra hua tha aur wo baar baar mobile ki screen dekh rahi thi. Usne dukh mein call milayi. Salman ne pehli hi ring par call pick kar li.

Salman: Oho! Aaj to bada jaldi yaad kar liya haddi ne. Khairiyat?

Laiba: (Udaas aur thandi saans bharte hue) Bhai... kal wo wapis aa rahi hai.

Salman: Wo kaun? Harry Potter? Ya koi bhoot?

Laiba: (Chir kar) Bhai! Mazaq mat karein. Sana aa rahi hai kal... Ammi aur Abu usey lene ja rahe hain. Mera to sukoon abhi se khatam ho gaya hai.

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Salman: Acha to ye dukh hai? Yaar Laiba, wo tumhari behen hai, koi dushman nahi. Do din mein hi tum itni selfish ho gayi ke usay wapis hi nahi aane dena chahti?

Laiba: (Gusse mein) Aap ko kya pata! Aap to wahan sukoon se hain. Ab phir se wahi cheekhna chillana, wahi bad-tameezian, aur ammi ka har waqt usey support karna. Main ne socha tha kuch din aur sukoon rahega.

Salman: Dekho Laiba, tum badi ho. Thoda bada dil rakho. Shayad is baar wo thodi badal kar aaye, Ashar phupha ne usay handle kiya hai na.

Laiba: Wo kabhi nahi badalne wali! Aap hamesha uski side lete hain! Jab se call ki hai, bas Sana... Sana kar rahe hain. Jayein, mujhe aap se baat hi nahi karni.

Salman: Acha baba, sorry! Maine kab uski side li? Meri sab se pyari, sab se samajhdar aur sab se sundar behen meri Princess sirf tum ho.

Laiba: (Abhi bhi thoda nakhre se) Maska mat lagayein. Aap ko sirf Sana ki fikar hai.

Salman: Bilkul nahi! Suno... tumhara wo favorite chocolate wala brand? Maine dhoond liya hai. Aur wo pink shade ki lipstick? Wo bhi le li hai.

Laiba ki ankhon mein aik chamak aayi, magar usne apni hansi dabai. Sachi?

Salman: Haan sachi! Aur suno, agar wo aakar tumhein tang kare, to bas mujhe aik message kar dena. Main wahan se usay aisi virtual dant pilaunga ke wo seedhi ho jayegi. Deal?

Laiba: (Muskurate hue) Deal! Aap waqayi bohot ache hain bhai... kabhi kabhi.

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Mahool ab light ho chuka tha. Salman ne shararat se camera ke qareeb chehra laya.

Salman: Waise... wo meri shirt abhi tak pehni hui hai tum ne? Dekho Laiba, agar is par tum ne koi nishan lagaye... to saare gifts cancel!

Laiba: (Zabaan chidate hue) Oh please! Ye shirt ab meri hai. Aur waise bhi, aap ki pasand itni buri hai ke ye mujh par hi achi lagti hai.

Salman: Acha acha! Rehne do, kahin phir shoulder se sarak gayi to? Wo bhi meri galti hogi?

Laiba: (Tamatar ki tarah surkh hokar) BHAI! Aap bohot gande hain! Sharam karein abhi tak yaad hai wo aap ko? Shirt ka gala bada hai, aur aap ki nazar hamesha wahin kyun jati hai?

Salman: (Zordar qahqaha lagate hue) Arrey, isme sharam kaisi? Nazar nahi jati, dikh jata hai. Itni badi shirt pehan kar ghoomogi to waise accidents ho sakte hain.

Laiba: Aap ko to bas mauka chahiye mujhe tang karne ka.

Salman: (Shararat se aankh marte hue) Tum ho hi itni careless. Aur waise bhi wo shoulder... hamesha hi slip hone ke bahane dhoondta hai. Tum ab badi ho gayi ho, kapre sambhal kar pehna karo.

Laiba: (Ankhian nikal kar) Bhaiiiii... aap na... bohot hi zyada bigar gaye hain wahan ja kar.

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Salman: Hahaha! Chalo ab so jao, kal Tsunami ka samna karna hai tum ne. Himmat ikathi karo.

Laiba: Goodnight bhai! Love you

Salman: Love you too, Haddi!

Laiba call cut kar ke bed par let gayi. Uska chehra abhi bhi thoda laal tha. Woh soch rahi thi Bhai kitna ganda ho gaya hai… lekin phir bhi uske saath baat karne mein kitna maza aata hai. Shirt ka collar phir se sarakne wala scene usey sharminda kar raha tha, lekin saath hi ek chhoti si smile bhi aa rahi thi.

Salman phone side par rakh kar muskuraya. Laiba ki woh sharmili reaction dekh kar usey maza aa raha tha. Woh soch raha tha Ab badi ho gayi hai… lekin abhi bhi utni hi careless hai.
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Dosto, Ya Tha Aj ka update -- Ashar ne apne guilt mein aakar Sana ka dil tod diya hai... lekin kya ye faasla unhein door kar dega ya ye dard unhein aur kareeb layega let's see Ap coments main batayein aaj ka part kaisa laga?
 

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Sana shower lekar fresh ho chuki thi aur dono lounge mein baith kar nashta kar rahi thin. Mahool pehle se kafi normal lag raha tha.

Sofia: (Dheeray se) Sana... us raat ko tum ne khud ko washroom mein kyun band kar liya tha? Kya Ashar ne tumhein mara tha?

Sana nashta karte hue aik dum thithak gayi. Usey samajh nahi aaya kya jawab de. Phuphi... aap ye kya bol rahi hain? Mara kyun hoga unho ne?

Sofia: Kyunke tum bohot zyada dari hui thin... tumhari garden par nishan thae.

Sana: Phuphi... please, main pichle do din jo hua us bare mein koi baat nahi karna chahti.

Sana ne baat taal di to Sofia ne bhi sukoon ka saans liya. Usey darr tha ke kahin Sana ye shikayat apne maa-baap se na kar de.

Sana: (Rawani mein) Ashar kab gaya hai?

Sofia hairat se ruk gayi. Kal tak jo larki Ashar ka naam tak nahi sunna chahti thi, aaj itni be takallufi se uska naam le rahi thi.

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Sofia: Tumhare phupha... wo to subah jaldi hi nikal gaye thae, kuch zaroori kaam tha. Wo tum se bohot pyar karte hain, apne bachon ki tarah khayal rakhte hain, tum bhi unki waisa hi respect kiya karo.

Sofia ko Sana ka yun Ashar ko naam se bolna kabhi bhi acha nahi lagta tha, lekin kabhi-kabhi woh follow mein ya Sofia ko tang karne ke liye bol deti thi.

Sana: Ji… bilkul. Thank you… aap ne mera bohot khayal rakha.

(Usko pata tha Sofia ko bura laga hoga lekin woh anjaane mein bol gayi thi.)

Sofia: Meri bhai aur bhabi se baat ho gayi hai, wo shayad kal aayenge tumhein lene.

Ye sun kar Sana thodi khamosh ho gayi. Kal tak wo yahan se bhaagna chahti thi, magar ab uske dil mein aik ajeeb si attraction paida ho rahi thi jo usay rukne par majboor kar rahi thi.

Breakfast finish kar ke Sana room mein aa kar let gayi, raat ke manzar ek ek kar ke uski ankhon ke samne Flashback ki tarah aane lage. idea ho raha tha ke raat ko kuchh unusual hua tha.

Ashar ka usay zor se hug karna... uski garden ke paas uski saansein... aur phir bed par uska poora wajood Sana ke upar...

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Wo sab sach tha? Koi khwab nahi tha? Sana ne mehsoos kiya ke jab Ashar uske upar leta tha, to usay kitna sukoon mila tha. Usne takiye ko zor se seene se laga liya aur aankhein band kar ke us touch ko mehsoos karne lagi, jaise wo takiya nahi balki Ashar khud ho.

Usay apni is harkat par thodi sharam aa gayi. Ek dilkash si sharmili smile uske face par thi.Ya main kya soch rahi hoon? Usne khud se question kiya.

Sofia ki ek baat (woh tum sab se bohot pyar karte hain) Isi liye meri woh wali video dekh kar Ashar itna gusse mein aa gaya tha? Uff… kya sochta hoga mera baare mein.

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Phir aik sawal uske zehan mein kante ki tarah chubha: Lekin wo video Ashar ke paas aayi kaise? Wo to pehli baar hi hua tha...

Sana pareshan hui, magar phir raat wali narmai yaad aayi to uska darr kam ho gaya. Nahi... ab wo gussa nahi honge. Aur main ab kuch aisa karungi bhi nahi jis se unhein gussa aaye. Wo unhi khayalon mein gum, Ashar ki ghar wapsi ka intezar karne lagi.

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Dosta ya tha aj ka update feedback deta rahin --- Next update mein Sana aur Ashar ek baar phir aamne-saamne honge! Kya ye confrontation unhein aur kareeb layega ya door kar dega?
Fantastic Update -- Sana tu ready lag rae action ka liya
 

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Bht badiya and exciting updates… waiting for more…
1. Sana ka dil change ho jaye Kal..aur na jaye apne ghar
2. Salman ko phir se shoulder dikh jaye lemon ab intentionally
 

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Update - 21

Kitchen mein bartan saaf karne ki awaz ke sath sath Sabiha aur Laiba ki behes bhi jaari thi. Laiba apne nakhun saaf karte hue nihayat be-rukhi se boli.

Laiba: Mummy! Kitna sukoon hai na ghar mein? Usey kuch din udhar hi rehne dein, hamari jaan chouti rahegi.

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Sabiha: (Sanjidagi se) Aisi baatein nahi karte Laiba, tumhari behen hai wo. Kuch to khayal karo, wo bechari beemar parri hui hai udhar.

Laiba: (Tanziya hansi hanste hue)"Kyun? Kya hua usey? Zaroor drama kar rahi hogi udhar. Usey pata hai ke wahan aap ki tarah koi nakhre uthane wala nahi hai na, is liye beemari ka bahana bana liya hoga.

Sabiha: Ye tumhari bhool hai... sab se zyada jo uske nakhre uthata hai wo udhar hi hai. Sabiha ka ishara Ashar ki taraf tha.

Laiba: Haan! Isi liye to tang aa gaye hain do din mein hi us se... jo aap ko baar baar bula rahe hain ke apni anokhi ladli ko aa kar le jao.

Sabiha: Koi nahi hamain bula raha, hum khud ja rahe hain usey lene. Hamari beti hai wo to khayal bhi hum ne hi rakhna hai, jaise tumhara aur tumhare bhaiyon ka rakhte hain.

Laiba: (Aik dum karvi awaz mein) Haan! Bohot rakhte hain khayal! Aik bhai ko to do saal se ghar se nikala hua hai.

Sabiha ke hath ruk gaye. Unho ne gusse se Laiba ki taraf dekha.

Sabiha: Kuch sharam karo! Kya bol rahi ho? Wo apni marzi se gaya tha study karne ke liye.

Laiba: To kyun jane diya aap ne? Idhar bhi to apni study continue kar sakta tha. Aik wo hi to tha is ghar mein jo mera khayal rakhta tha, mera sath deta tha.

Sabiha: Haan! Itna hi khayal rakhta tha to rok leti usay... ab mera dimaag na khao, jao ja kar apna koi kaam karo!

Sabiha ne rukh pher liya, magar Laiba ki ankhon mein aik ajeeb si nami thi. Usey Salman ki yaad ke sath sath Sana par mazeed gussa aa raha tha.
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Ashar aur Sana park ki thandi hawa mein walk kar rahe thae. Ashar ka dimaag abhi bhi un uljhano ka shikar tha jo usay raat se pareshan kar rahi thin. Wo Sana ke normal behavior se confuse tha.

Jab wo ghar aia tha tu door sana na hi khola tha wo bhut khush ho kar mili usa se jisa uska wait kar rae ho. Woh kaafi khush aur beparwah si nazar aa rahi thi, jaise pehle hoti thi.

Sana ka behavior na usey thoda sukoon dia tha. Woh samajh raha tha ke usey raat ka kuchh yaad nahi. Lekin usko apne aap se bohot sharmindagi, uljhan aur gussa tha.

Dinner ka bad Sofia usey bata chuki thi ke kal bhabi aur bhai usey lene aa rahe hain. Ashar jaldi Sana se baat karna chahta tha ise laia wo usa walk kerne ka bahna bhir la aia.

Sana: kin sochoon mein gum hain? Jab se office se aaye hain theek se baat bhi nahi kar rahe mere saath.

Ashar: Hmm... isi liye tumhein saath laya hoon taake sukoon se baat kar sakoon.

Sana: Boliye… main sun rahi hoon.

(Woh uske saath chalte hue usey ek ada se dekhti hui boli)

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Ashar: Sana, sab se pehle to mera us raat wala behavior... I mean, I am sorry.

Sana: (Baat kaat te hue) Wo to aap ne kal hi bol diya tha aur maine accept bhi kar liya tha. Us mein meri bhi utni hi galti thi.

Ashar ke qadam wahin jam gaye. Uska dil dharakna bhool gaya.

Ashar (Socked): WTF! Isay sab yaad hai? Isay pata hai ke raat ko bed par kya hua tha... aur ye phir bhi itni normal hai?

Sana: Kya hua? Aap aise kyun dekh rahe hai?

Ashar: Tum... tum mujhe pagal kar dogi Sana.

Sana: (Masoomiyat se) Ab maine kya kiya? (Usay Ashar ki baat ki samajh nahi aayi)

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Ashar: Yeh hi toh masla hai… tum kuchh samajhti nahi ya samajhna chahti nahi ho?

Idar Ashar ko laga ke Sana raat wale incident ki baat kar rahi hai, magar Sana ke dimaag mein wo wali video baat thi.

Sana: aap video ke bare mein baat kar rahe hain. Wo... mujhe nahi pata kaise bani. I am sorry Main bohot sharminda hoon. I promise dobara aisa nahi hoga.

Ashar ne foran palti maari.

Ashar: Tumhare sharminda hone se kya hota hai? Tumhein pata bhi hai agar wo video kisi aur ke haath lag jati to kya hota.

Sana ab thoda phir se sad ho gayi thi. Uski aankhon mein aansu aa gaye thay jin ko dekh kar Ashar soft ho gaya.

Ashar ne Sana ko bataya ke kaise us larke ne trap bichaya tha aur kaise usne watchman ko paise dekar wo video hasil ki aur delete karwayi. Sana yeh sun kar hairaan aur pareshan ho gayi. Usay us ladke par bohot gussa aa gaya.

Ashar uske face ke expression se Sana ki condition samajh gaya.

Mostly ladke aise hi hote hain… particular teen age mein. Lekin ladkiyon ko khayal karna padta hai. Limit cross nahi karne deni hoti. Lekin tum…

Woh itna bol kar chup kar gaya (uska mind mein yeh khayal bhi aa gaya tha ke kal Sana ne usey bhi nahi roka tha).

Sana puzzled ho gayi thi. Usay samajh nahi aa raha tha kya bola.

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Ashar: Ab tum badi ho gayi ho. Feelings sab mein hoti hain, male aur female dono mein... magar khud par control rakhna seekho. Ye sab cheezein sirf kisi khaas insaan ke liye hoti hain. Har kisi ko advantage lene ki ijazat nahi di jati.

Sana ko ye sun kar aisi insult feel hui jaise Ashar usay characterless samajh raha ho. Usay laga ke Ashar keh raha hai ke koi bhi larka dekh kar pighal jati hai.

Woh toh soch kar aayi thi ke Ashar ko bolegi baba ko aane se mana kar de… woh kuchh din aur reh le idhar. But ab usne jaana hi munasib samjha.

Ashar: Yeh is topic par hamari pehli aur last conversation hai. Main ab kabhi tumhare affairs mein nahi bolunga… tumhari life hai… tum jo marzi karo.

Sana jo itni khush thi, Ashar ki itni rude baaton se woh sad ho gayi thi. Woh phir se murjha si gayi thi. Wo khamoshi se Ashar ke peeche chalne lagi. Ashar ne to apna bojh halka kar liya, magar usne Sana ke andar ke us jazbe ko qatal kar diya tha jo kal raat jaaga tha.

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Acha Turn ha sana is acting as teenage ashar as mature guy,slow burning main maza ha bhai itni jaldi sex nae hona chaie.
 
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