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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

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Werewolf

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Bhai mazedar updare update
Action packed
maza aa gya bro
rongte khade ho gye action dekhkar....
Dhansu jawardast shandar update ......🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Dhanyavad.
Bro Veer pArijat Ghar (Rajsthan)Me Gyaa Hai
Kyaa Vandana KO Lekar Ya FIr Apne rEal Ghar (Mumbai) Me gaya Hai UskO Lekar ......
Nahi bhai. Waha kyu jaayega? Itni jaldi kaise pahuch jaayega waha? Rajat ka ghar hi Veer ne Parijaat ghar bana diya hai. Wahi par parijaat ki aurtein rehti hai. Agar bhool gaye ho toh kuchh updates peechhe jaa ke padhna padega. Nidhi ke divorce waale updates dekhna. Uske baad hi Veer ye sab karta hai.
Kya Trisha Bhi Veer ki Diwani HO Jaygi Ya fir Usko Pakadane ke Lie Or Pagal HO Jaygi ?
Trisha kis reason se Veer ki deewani hoyegi?? UIta ab toh woh Veer par aur bhi nigrani rakhegi.
Ab ye Raman kon hai koi purana dushman?
Raman nahi pata bhai? Kahani nahi padhe kya? Puraane updates bhool gaye kya? Slogan arc theek se nahi padhe hoge tabhi poochh rahe ho.
Slogan urf Sanjeev ki beti Swati kaise mari thi yaad hai? Pul se neeche gir gayi thi. Kishor (Kaera ke pita) se uska haath chhoot gaya tha. Toh uss waqt Slogan aur Kishor kaha gaye the? Wahi... Baba ji ke paas milne. Woh ek dhongi tha. Aur, usi ka chela tha Raman. Wahi hai yeh Raman. Baad me Slogan ne uss dhongi ko toh maar diya tha par Raman nahi mara tha. Yahi hai woh.

Agar, characters ke baare me bhool jao toh full characters guide me jaa ke dekha karo bhai. Isi liye toh banaayi hai woh. Upar link bhi de rakhi hai uski. Bas click karna hai tumko, woh redirect kar degi.
Update ekdum dhansu hai .

but Kahna to nahi chahiye per update late hone ki wajah se story ka reader se jo connection hota hai wo mujhe tutta hua mehsus hua.

Ab pahle jaisa ras nahi raha story padhne me. Aisa lagta hai har update per story dobara 1st update se padhni padegi tabhi story ki lay wapas aa paayegi.
Uss case me mein kuchh nahi kar sakta bhai. Wo reader par hi depend karta hai. Mein toh apne time ke hisaab se hi update de paunga. Jo readers zyada stories ek saath nahi padhte unki lay toh bani hui hai. Agar, tum do se adhik story ek baar me padh rahe ho toh ye toh fir hoga hi...
Dimag ek baar me kitna retain karega? Alag alag stories se characters mix hoyenge hi aur dimag baaki cheezon ko save karne ke liye kuchh cheezein hata dega. Yahi hota hai. Iss baare me mein kuchh nahi kar sakta. Ye tumhari apni problem hai man.

Kyunki, mein toh jab samay milega tabhi updates de paunga. Ab woh tumhare upar hai ki tum woh retain kar paate ho ya nahi.
Bro it just mind-blowing, Every scene was amazing in itself, the way you have written each scene in so much detail and paid attention to even the smallest details shows your writing skills and It shows your dedication towards your story.
Bro you killed it 🫡
Thanks a lot man. Keep supporting.
:bump::party::grouphug::woohoo:👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Zabrdst brother pari ko or strong banao ta k wo veer ko her mushkil sy easily Nikal saky jsy so call mom pari na nikala ta bki update ka to besabri sy intezar rahta ha bhi ab agy dakhty ha update ma kn c new chez dakhna ko milti ha thanks good luck 🤞 💯
Pari strong nahi hoti. System strong hota hai. System missions complete karne se apna level badhaata hai. Level badhne bhar se kuchh nahi hota. Achhi skills, cards, perks aur experience hona chahiye. Pari har situation se Veer ko easily nahi nikaal sakti. Woh koi bhagwan nahi hai. Dhanyavad.
Suder duper update
New villan raman kha se aa gaya
Iski veer se kya dushmani hai?
New villain nahi hai woh. Jaa ke full characters guide read karne ka. :approve:
Bhai yeh AI generated images mast lag rahy hain..
I think you should include them if they are not time taking..
Thoda time toh leti hai. Baaki maine decide kar liya hai already.
 
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Bindasss ek dum badass fight scenes maja aaya update padh kr(sabr ka fal metha tha).

Werewolf AI generated images kafi cool hai. But if you wanna hear my personal suggestion(as i reader) toh i will say don't waste time on them.
Novels and stories ki yahi toh ek cheez sabse zada pasand aati hai ki hum apne imagination se....
uske ho rahe pehlu lo feel karte hai dimagh mai movie ke jesa chalta hai sab word to word.
Although mein bhi images ka itna bada fan nahi hu. I stick to imagination as well. But abhi tak hum real life based images dekhte aaye hai. Toh aage bhi unka hi istemal hoga, I'll keep it subtle and jaha necessary hoga wahi par rakhi jayengi.
Agar impact ke liye dalna hi hai toh ap esse images dal sakte hai jesa apne veer and trisha ka banaya hai(veer with red eyes behind her before escaping the scene).
Kyuki esse moments pure update mai 1-2 hi hote hai to images dala ja sakta hai.
AI images ke baare me soch liya hai maine already. Mein bhi nahi chaahta ki usme zyada time waste ho. Waise soch toh pehle hi liya tha bas aise hi suggestions maang raha tha :laughing:

So, decide yahi kiya hai ki... Hum real life based images ke saath hi chalenge jaise chalte aaye hai. Mein jitni accurate images as per the scenes hongi utni unhe istenal karne ki priority high rakhunga. Jaha zaroorat hogi wahi post ki jaayengi. Rahi baat AI images ki toh... Free time me unhe mein generate karwa sakta hu but unhe post aise hi karunga jaise abhi kiya, i.e., update ke baad.

Iss se hoga ye ki jinhe AI images nahi pasand aur jo nahi chaahte ki unka readability me flow toote, toh woh nahi tootega. Aur jo chaahte hai ki unhe AI images bhi dikhe, toh wo update ke baad unhe dekh sakte hai aur firse scene ko imagine kar vividly use dekh sakte hai ki kitna unki imagination se match up hua. This is the right balance.
Baki multiple images agar dala gaya to story bounded si lagne lagegi or phir viewers sirf un images ke through hi process karenge story subconsciously or deliberately.
And that i will say is a major limitation and spoils the thrill
Yup. Isliye, opt out kar diya hai use.
Baki... dear readers time se target pura kardo likes ka next update is month mai chaheye toh 😝😝
If you're not meeting the expectations then why you will expect the writer to align with yours(ek hath de ek hath le)🫰🏻🫰🏻
Yup. Ab agar next update isi month chahiye to jitni jaldi target poora hoga utna better hai, kyunki abhi toh maine likhna start nahi kiya hai next update. Thanks btw.
 
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Zabardast update bro...
Jo situation jo scenario aap ne aaj ke update me dikhaya hai...aik thriller lover ko aur kia chahiye...
Hatttttsss offg👏👏
Dhanyavad bhai!
Kia hi bataon suspense aur dil ki dharkan tak tez ho gayi thi...
Yeh scene is se acha nahi likha jaa sakta tha...

Aik cheez ab saaf hai trisha ko pata lag chuka hai veer hi hai jo har incident ke peechy hai..us ka shaq to ab dur ho gaya ho ga..
Shaq door nahi hua bhai aur badh gaya hai. Kyunki Dhananjay Veer ka hi intezar kar raha tha waha aur Trisha me Veer ko waha nahi dekha fir bhi Dhananjay hooks par latka hua use mila. Iss se shaq aur gehra ho gaya hai.
Ab to vandna ko hosh aye ga to kuch aur pata chaly ga aur vandana ki veer ko le kar favorability itni ziada hona bhi strange hai..

Aur system ka aisey react karna bhi 1st time hua...laikin aik kaam veer kar sakta tha ke dhananjaye ko maarny ke bad us ne us ka status to check kia wo us ka past bhi dekh sakta tha shayad veer ko pata chal jata ke us ko kis ne bheja tha..
Next update me pata chalega ki Veer ne aisa kyu nahi kiya. Bas dekhte jao.
End pe aap ne hamay to bata dia is sub ke peechy raman hai...i think yeh slogan waly case me dhonki baba ke sath wala lagta hai..
But us ki direct veer se kia dushmani ho gi..
Yes, slogan ka chela. Wahi hai ye - Raman!
b aur naye sawalon ne janam le lia hai.. aagy ka intezar rahy ga besabri se..
Dhanyavad! Keep supporting!
Bhai yeh AI generated images mast lag rahy hain..
I think you should include them if they are not time taking..
Decide kar liya hai. :good:
 
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Dear Werewolf = Brother Aapne Jo Last Part Me Baba Ji ke bhesh me [ Raman ] Name Ke Saks ka Jikr Kiya h Yhe kahi Slogan ke Guruji ka Rite hand Raman to Nahi Kyoki Bo bhi Same Kaam karte the Logo ko thagna Aage Dekhte h kya Hota Baki Update Kafi Mazedaar tha Aapke Reply or Agle Update ka Intezar Rahega
Yes. Wahi hai ye- Raman!
Brother Stories to Kafi h Par Har koi Aapki Story ki tarah milti Nhi h Basically Readers taak Me rahte h ki Kab Update Aaye or Padh ke dusre Update ki Maag kare interesting Koi Chiz hoti h usi ke liye Marta h Human Dil pe mat liya kijiye Readers ki Choti choti baato ko Kyoki Aap Writer H Aap se Upar koi nhi Jo Upar Hota h uske liye yhe Choti baate Mayne nhi rakhti Pta nhi Kya likh rha hu comments padhe the usi ke Aadhar par yhe Likha h Thanks A once Again update ke liye Love you brother Ase hi Tarakki karo Or badiya badiya se update Post karte jao thoda jaldi jaldi 😆
Updates ki maang karne me koi dikkat nahi hai bhai. Daily yaha log waiting likhte hai.. Kya mein unko kabhi kuchh bolta hu? Nahi!
Par, updates ke baare me poochhne ka ek tareeqa hota hai. Ab tum agar aise puchhoge updates ka jaise tumne mujhe khareed ke rakha ho, toh udhar dimaag kharab hota hai. Aise readers par. Likhna inhe dhela bhar nahi hota review ke naam par. Usme mati marti hai inki. Par jab update ki maang ki baat aayegi toh ek taang par sabse aage khade honge. Ye frustrate karta hai mujhe bas.
 
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Fantastic as always. There is always a line that one should never cross, jo Dhananjay ne cross kr di aur yahi uski sabse badi galti thi. Well wo deserve bhi krta tha kyuki kisi ki bhi family sabse sensitive spot hoti hai jo kisiko touch nahi krna chahiye. Why tf vandana was happy?? 🧐
Aur is baar ka villain thoda confusing lag rha hai. So basically veer ne jise mara wo small fry tha and the main culprit is someone else.
You know I like these type of parts the most jaha aap ko brainstorming krni pare and yahi hamare wolfie ki specialty hai. Chalo agle update me kamse kam vandana ka kuch pata chalega aur meri curiosity thodi shaant hogi. That hook wala scene got me goosebumps fr.
Bina kisi Gore visuals warning ke ju me blockbuster update drop kr diya. Well veer ke liye next mission bhi line up me hai to it's gonna get interesting.
Thank you once more for such an amazing update.
 
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