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Thanks a lot bro.action aur emotion aur aayenge
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Nice update bhai.. .. Ajnabi sukoon ki zindagi jeena chahta hai lekin uske dushman uska pich chod nhi rahe.. .. Uske pariwar hi saat nhi de rahe.. ..ajnabi unka samna kaise karega.. . Akash ke pariwar waalon ko agar sachai pata chalega to wo kya karenge.. . . Varun to khatarnaak lag rah hai
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Aakash apne purane zindagi se hatkar naye tarike se jeena chahta hai
Lekin shlok ko uspe nazar rakhne ke liye bheja gaya hai
Jabki varun ka aakash ke saath purana hisab hai aur koi to hai jisne pavitra ko bheja hai aakash ko khatam karne saath rahiye
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Golu school jaane ke liye local train se utarkar ek sunsaan gali se nikalne laga tabhi use ek ajeeb sa aadmi dikhai diya
"Hello Goku??kaise ho??"aadmi muskurate hue aage aaya aur taash ke patte ko hawa me uchhalta aur lapakta
"Koun ho tum??aur mujhe kaise jaante ho??"golu bola
"Hmm eh eh eh,jaante nahi hai hum.bas naam pata hai,aur tumhe khatam karna hai"aadmi bola
Golu samajh chuka tha ki uski jaan khatre me hai.wo ulte pair bhaga aur kaafi dur a gaya bhaagte bhaagte
Ek jagah ruk kar haamfne laga wo
"Ch ch ch kitna bhagna padta hai,hai na??lekin shouji se bachkar aajtak koi nahi bhaag paaya"bol kai taash ke patto ko hawa me uchal diya usne aur aankhen band karke apne ek haath se taash ke patto ko hawa me hi dhakel diya
Hawa me taash ke paate bijli ki tezi se udte hue golu ke sharir me ghaste gaye
KHACHHHHHHH
"Uhgggg"bol golu let gaya,sharir me ghuse hue taash ke paate wapas sharir se nikalakar hawa me lahraye hue shouji ke paas a gaye
"Aaj fir se khoon saaf karna padega,kitna kaam katwate ho tum log.....haan waise agar zinda raha to aakash ko bolna shouji ne hi bola hai"bol ulte paanv chala gaya shouji
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Aakash ko class me khabar mili aur daudte hue hospital chala gaya
"Icu me hai beta"bol golu ki maa ka ro ro kar bura haal tha
Aakash ne apne aankhon se aansu ponche aur dilasa dene laga golu ki maa ko
"Ye saza mili tere saath dosti nibhane ki"shlok bola
Aakash ne chaunkar shlok ki aur dekha
"Tujhe kya lagta hai??hum logo ka is jagah par aam zindagi jeena aasan hai???wo log a chuke hai aur tere sabhi karibi logo ko nishana banayenge"bol shlok chala gaya
Aakash dekhta raha shlok ko jaate hue.llekin aankhon me aansu liye wo bebas dekhta raha shlok ko jaate hue,aankhen band kiya usne aur ateet me chala gaya
"Mat maro dard hota hai"ek ladki ne rote hue gidgidaya tha
"Pata hai na tujhe mai koun hoon??andhera mera gulam hai,tere dost ne mere saamne jhukne se mana kar diya tha na??ab bhugat"aakash ne kaha tha
"Isme mera kya kasoor hai?use boliye na mujhe chor diji......AKKKKKKK"
DHAMMMMMM
ek zordar ghoosa maara tha us ladki ke pet me aakash ne
"Uski galti ki saza isliye mil rahi hai tujhe,kyunki wo tera dost hai"aakash bola
Ladki behosh hokar neeche gir gayi
Aur aakash seeti bajata hua aage chala gaya
Aakash ne aankhen kholi
Samane vriddh bouddh bhikshu baithe hue the
"Karm"vriddh bhikshu bole
Aakash ne vriddh ki aur dekha
"Karm ki saza har kisi ko milta hai,chahe aaj karo ya kal,acha karoge to acha,bura karoge to bura"vriddh muskurate hue bole
"To ab mai kya karun??"aakash bola
"Apne paapo ka prayashchit"bol vriddh chale gaye uthkar
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Ragini aur shlok raaste me ja rahe the .golu ki haalat sunkar ragini ka mood off tha
"Golu bhaiyya par kisne hamla kiya hoga shlok??kitni bedardi se maara hai"ragini boli
Shlok chup raha
"Golu bhaiyya ki to kisi ki dushmani bi nahi hai,hai na??"ragini boli
"Dushmani to Teri bhi hamare saath nahi lekin fir bhi tu maregi"ek awaz ne ragini aur shlok ko chaunka diya
Peeche kaale kapdon me ek shaks khada tha jiska muh dhaka hua tha aur aankhen band thi
Shlok ke muh se achanak nikla
"NINKU"
"Hello Goku??kaise ho??"aadmi muskurate hue aage aaya aur taash ke patte ko hawa me uchhalta aur lapakta
"Koun ho tum??aur mujhe kaise jaante ho??"golu bola
"Hmm eh eh eh,jaante nahi hai hum.bas naam pata hai,aur tumhe khatam karna hai"aadmi bola
Golu samajh chuka tha ki uski jaan khatre me hai.wo ulte pair bhaga aur kaafi dur a gaya bhaagte bhaagte
Ek jagah ruk kar haamfne laga wo
"Ch ch ch kitna bhagna padta hai,hai na??lekin shouji se bachkar aajtak koi nahi bhaag paaya"bol kai taash ke patto ko hawa me uchal diya usne aur aankhen band karke apne ek haath se taash ke patto ko hawa me hi dhakel diya
Hawa me taash ke paate bijli ki tezi se udte hue golu ke sharir me ghaste gaye
KHACHHHHHHH
"Uhgggg"bol golu let gaya,sharir me ghuse hue taash ke paate wapas sharir se nikalakar hawa me lahraye hue shouji ke paas a gaye
"Aaj fir se khoon saaf karna padega,kitna kaam katwate ho tum log.....haan waise agar zinda raha to aakash ko bolna shouji ne hi bola hai"bol ulte paanv chala gaya shouji
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Aakash ko class me khabar mili aur daudte hue hospital chala gaya
"Icu me hai beta"bol golu ki maa ka ro ro kar bura haal tha
Aakash ne apne aankhon se aansu ponche aur dilasa dene laga golu ki maa ko
"Ye saza mili tere saath dosti nibhane ki"shlok bola
Aakash ne chaunkar shlok ki aur dekha
"Tujhe kya lagta hai??hum logo ka is jagah par aam zindagi jeena aasan hai???wo log a chuke hai aur tere sabhi karibi logo ko nishana banayenge"bol shlok chala gaya
Aakash dekhta raha shlok ko jaate hue.llekin aankhon me aansu liye wo bebas dekhta raha shlok ko jaate hue,aankhen band kiya usne aur ateet me chala gaya
"Mat maro dard hota hai"ek ladki ne rote hue gidgidaya tha
"Pata hai na tujhe mai koun hoon??andhera mera gulam hai,tere dost ne mere saamne jhukne se mana kar diya tha na??ab bhugat"aakash ne kaha tha
"Isme mera kya kasoor hai?use boliye na mujhe chor diji......AKKKKKKK"
DHAMMMMMM
ek zordar ghoosa maara tha us ladki ke pet me aakash ne
"Uski galti ki saza isliye mil rahi hai tujhe,kyunki wo tera dost hai"aakash bola
Ladki behosh hokar neeche gir gayi
Aur aakash seeti bajata hua aage chala gaya
Aakash ne aankhen kholi
Samane vriddh bouddh bhikshu baithe hue the
"Karm"vriddh bhikshu bole
Aakash ne vriddh ki aur dekha
"Karm ki saza har kisi ko milta hai,chahe aaj karo ya kal,acha karoge to acha,bura karoge to bura"vriddh muskurate hue bole
"To ab mai kya karun??"aakash bola
"Apne paapo ka prayashchit"bol vriddh chale gaye uthkar
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Ragini aur shlok raaste me ja rahe the .golu ki haalat sunkar ragini ka mood off tha
"Golu bhaiyya par kisne hamla kiya hoga shlok??kitni bedardi se maara hai"ragini boli
Shlok chup raha
"Golu bhaiyya ki to kisi ki dushmani bi nahi hai,hai na??"ragini boli
"Dushmani to Teri bhi hamare saath nahi lekin fir bhi tu maregi"ek awaz ne ragini aur shlok ko chaunka diya
Peeche kaale kapdon me ek shaks khada tha jiska muh dhaka hua tha aur aankhen band thi
Shlok ke muh se achanak nikla
"NINKU"
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Bahut chota update bhai.. . Padne se pahile hi kayam hogaya.. .. Kam se kam ek scene to katm kar dete. .. . Nice update.. . Akash ke karm ke pal dusron ko mil raha hai.. .. Golu ke sath bahut bura hua.. . Ab ragini ke sath kya hoga.. .. Kya shlok use bacha payega
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Review ke liye thanks bro
Actually update late ho raha tha isliye ise de diya
Waise aapne sahi kaha, aakash ke karmo ka fal use aur doosro ko mil raha hai
Lekin aakash ka sabr ka baandh kab tak rahega???
Saath rahiye