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नेहा लौट आई है पर इस बार वो इतनी ताकतवर है कि उसे कोई भी जान से मार ही नहीं सकता । उसकी मृत्यु नहीं हो सकती ।इस बार वो अभौतिक रूप में प्रकट हुई है । एक रूह के रूप में । एक आत्मा के रूप में जिसके शरीर के साथ जघन्यतम अपराध किया गया था ।
इसकी झलक दामिनी को मिल चुकी है पर उन्हें इसका एहसास नहीं हैं । घर में काम करने वाले मंगलु को भी मिल चुकी है पर वो भी दारू के नशे के कारण समझ नहीं रहा है ।
नेहा का अपराधी सिर्फ उसका चाचा ही नहीं बल्कि चाची , आशिश , पारूल , इंस्पेक्टर शाह और वो डॉक्टर है जिसने उसके लाश का पोस्टमार्टम किया था ।
पहला शिकार आशिश बना । नेहा ने सबसे पहले उसे इस फानी दुनिया से रुखसत किया । आशिश मरने से पहले समझ चुका था कि वो किस वजह से मर रहा है और उसे मारने वाला कौन है ।
अर्पिता और मेहुल अपनी तरफ से सच्चाई का पता लगाने का पुरा प्रयास कर रहे हैं । ये उनकी अच्छाई और सच्ची दोस्ती है पर उन्हें पता नहीं है कि वो किन हरामखोरो से उलझने की कोशिश कर रहे हैं । उनके साथ भी गलत हो सकता है । पर चूंकि नेहा वापस लौट आई है तो शायद इनके साथ कुछ गलत न हो ।
रामसे ब्रदर्स ने बहुतों हाॅरर मूवी बनाई थी जिसमें कुछ तो सुपर हीट भी हुई । पर सभी फिल्मों में थोड़ा बहुत कामेडी और एरोटिक सिन का भी समावेश किया था ।
इस कहानी में इन दोनों चीजों की गुंजाइश बन सकती थी । इसके अलावा बहुत जल्दी ही नेहा का रिवेंज शुरू हो गया जो कुछ रूककर होना चाहिए था । किरदारों के कैरेक्टर को भी थोड़ा सा और डेवलप करना चाहिए था ।
आप बहुत ही बेहतरीन लिख रहे हैं पर थोड़ा सा कंसंट्रेशन इस कहानी के पटकथा पर और होता तो मजा आ जाता ।
बहुत ही बेहतरीन और आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट अंकुर कुमार भाई ।
इसकी झलक दामिनी को मिल चुकी है पर उन्हें इसका एहसास नहीं हैं । घर में काम करने वाले मंगलु को भी मिल चुकी है पर वो भी दारू के नशे के कारण समझ नहीं रहा है ।
नेहा का अपराधी सिर्फ उसका चाचा ही नहीं बल्कि चाची , आशिश , पारूल , इंस्पेक्टर शाह और वो डॉक्टर है जिसने उसके लाश का पोस्टमार्टम किया था ।
पहला शिकार आशिश बना । नेहा ने सबसे पहले उसे इस फानी दुनिया से रुखसत किया । आशिश मरने से पहले समझ चुका था कि वो किस वजह से मर रहा है और उसे मारने वाला कौन है ।
अर्पिता और मेहुल अपनी तरफ से सच्चाई का पता लगाने का पुरा प्रयास कर रहे हैं । ये उनकी अच्छाई और सच्ची दोस्ती है पर उन्हें पता नहीं है कि वो किन हरामखोरो से उलझने की कोशिश कर रहे हैं । उनके साथ भी गलत हो सकता है । पर चूंकि नेहा वापस लौट आई है तो शायद इनके साथ कुछ गलत न हो ।
रामसे ब्रदर्स ने बहुतों हाॅरर मूवी बनाई थी जिसमें कुछ तो सुपर हीट भी हुई । पर सभी फिल्मों में थोड़ा बहुत कामेडी और एरोटिक सिन का भी समावेश किया था ।
इस कहानी में इन दोनों चीजों की गुंजाइश बन सकती थी । इसके अलावा बहुत जल्दी ही नेहा का रिवेंज शुरू हो गया जो कुछ रूककर होना चाहिए था । किरदारों के कैरेक्टर को भी थोड़ा सा और डेवलप करना चाहिए था ।
आप बहुत ही बेहतरीन लिख रहे हैं पर थोड़ा सा कंसंट्रेशन इस कहानी के पटकथा पर और होता तो मजा आ जाता ।
बहुत ही बेहतरीन और आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट अंकुर कुमार भाई ।
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Aapke tippani ekdam satyavachan hai. Vaise, yeh mere bhavishya me aane wale anya kahaniyo me se ek hain.
Aage aage aur bhi dilchasp kirdar aur kahaniya aate rahenge mere taraf se.
Khair, kahani ko itna prem dene ke liye shukriya and to be honest, jab bhi readers se analytical reviews aate hain, tab lekhak aur bhi zyada encouraged mehsoos karte hain! Because there is always room for improvement!
Kahani ke saath yunhi bane rahiye!
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Bhaag 10
"Oh no! Kitna bura hua yaar! Aashish ki maut is tarah??" Parul apne saheliyon ke saath canteen me subah se is vishay pe baat kar rahi thi. Voh khud kaafi hairan thi Aashish ke is tarah maare jaane se.
Saheli 1 : yaar, Aashish ka to vaise College me koi khaas dushmani to thi nahi! Phir...
Saheli 2 : lekin, itna seedha bhi nahi tha!
Saheli 3 : Ek baar to kisi ladki ko khud fasaya tha aur shaq bechare Mehul pe chala gaya tha!
Saheli 1 : hmmm bechara Mehul! Jab se Neha lapata hui hai...voh to..
Parul : (Neha ke naam sunte hi chid jaati hain) anyway! Jo ho gaya so ho gaya!
Vaise mann hi mann Parul sach me kaafi khush thi, kyonki Neha ke na hone par, is baar Bandminton ke finals mein use maat dene vali, shayad hi koi hogi.
Parul : (khushi khushi) Ab yeh purani baaton ko jaane do, are haan! Teri voh lip gloss kaun si hai....
Saheli 1 : (beech me se) Parul! Tu Mehul ko seduce kyon nahi kar leti? Ab to voh tanha akela....pyasaa..you know!
Parul : Mehul?? (Bhav khaake) eehh! Not my choice!
Saheli 2 : bas bas! Parul...tu isliye keh rahi hai, kyonki voh tujhe bhav nahi deta...bas! Itni si baat hai! (Parul ki kamar ko dabake)
Parul : ufff! Tum log chup raho! Baat lip gloss ki ho rahi thi....yeh Mehul ka topic kyon laa rahi hai! (Chid ke)
Saheli 3 : chal thik hai! Tujhe lip gloss dungi, ek shart par! Tujhe Mehul ko seduce karni hogi aur use apne aur khichni hogi! Done?
Parul : voh pagal?? Jo abhi bhi shayad us Neha ki khayal me khoya hua hai! Na baba na! Pehli baar life me, koi shart haar jaungi! (Aina nikal ke khud ko dekhti hui)
Saheli 2 : tu apni jalwa to dikha use! Tu aisi bala hai ke...ek vakt pe to voh Aashish bhi lattoo ho gaya tha tujh par.
Aashish ke zikr se Parul ko us din godown me ki gayi harkat ke yaad karne lagi. Neha ki jitni baar zikr hotie, voh uthi hi baar chid jaati thi, isliye Aashish se chutkaara paake Parul khush thi. "Accha hua mar gaya, idiot!".
Phir Mehul ke baare me sochke Parul apni saheliyon ko dekhkar muskurayi aur apni sunehri gulabi nakhuno pe hawa phoonkti hui puchne lagi "vaise..shart kitne kitne ki hai?"
Saheli 2 : hmmmmm...(ek aur saheli ko dekhke)
Saheli 1 : 10,000 ki! Okay?
Parul : 10,000? Excuse me! Parul itni bhi cheap nahi hai! (Itrake)
Saheli 2 : chal thik hai 20,000 ki! Bol, manzoor hai?
Parul : (honton ko apas me ragadke Mehul ke baare me sochke) hmmmmm okay, Done!
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Vaha dusre aur, Manglu pichle raat ke ghatnao se kaafi pareshan sa tha, aur ab akhbaar me Aashish ke baare me padke aur bhi zyada pareshan ho gaya. Baar baar use aise lagne laga ke jaise jo ladki use pareshan kar rahi thi, voh kahin Neha to nahi. Lekin, yeh anhonee ho kaise sakti hain! Phir jaise hi use Prakash ka khayal aaya, uska shaq yakeen me badalne laga.
Vaha, akhbaar padke Prakash bhi thoda hairan reh gaya, lekin Aashish ke maut se use ek faida hua ke, Neha ke balatkaar ke dauran, voh ek matr gavah tha. "Chalo bala tal hi gaya!" Khud se kehke jaise Prakash apne bar tak jaane wala tha, tabhi darwaje ki chaukhat pe Manglu khada ho gaya.
Prakash : Manglu! Tu is vakt? Kya ho gaya?
Manglu : sahb! Yeh.... Aashish babu, vohi hai na, jo us din...
Prakash : tujhse matlab? Saaf saaf bata!
Manglu : sahab! Aap maane ya na maane! Is katal me..........ek hi hai, jiski haath hai!
Prakash : kiski baat kar raha hai? (Jam bharte huye)
Manglu : Sahab! Main...(bahut zyada gambhir hoke)..Nn.. Neha bitiya ki baat kar raha hoon!
Prakash table pe apne glass ko zor se table par patak deta hain aur halke se ghusse me Manglu ki aur dekhne laga.
Prakash : dimaag to thik hai tera??? bakwas kam kiya kar! Neha mar chuki hai! (Ghusse me)
Manglu : maaf kijiye sahab! Main....kehna to nahi chahta tha.. lekin Aashish babu pe agar koi itna krodhit ho sakti hain, to voh sirf Neha bitiya hain! Aur us din...aap dono ne jo uske sa....(ghabrake ruk jaata hain aur niche dekhne lagta hain)
Prakash ghusse me kuch kehne hi wala tha ke tabhi Damini vaha prakat hoti hain. Prakash jo pehle se hi chida hua tha, apne patni ki aur dekhne laga "Tum mujhe chup mat dilao! Damini!! Iske bakwas bahut sun chuka hoon main! Aur sun (Manglu ko) naukri pyari hai, to zubaan bandh rakhna sikh!".
Damini : (Prashant ko shant karke) Manglu, isliye kehti hoon ke sharab kam piya kar! Neha ab is duniya main nahi rahi!
Manglu : sahab! Memsab! Pehle aap thik se meri baat ek dafa sun lijiye!
Prakash : bak! Kya bakna chahta hai?? (Ghusse ko kabu karne ki koshish me)
Damini ab gaur se Manglu ko dekhne lagi.
Manglu : memsahab! Chota mooh, badi baat! Mujhe malum hai Neha bitiya is duniya me nahi rahi... lekin, voh ab ek aisi duniya main jaa chuki hain, jahaa ....voh insano se kahin zyada takatvar ho chuki hain!
Prakash : (ghusse ko chorke, ab haske) accha! Kaun si duniya? Mangal graha?? Ya kisi aur prithvi me nivas kar rahi hai?
Manglu : (bahut gambhir swar me) pret aatmao ki duniya! chudailo aur dayano ki duniya! Ek aisi duniya jahaan pe insaani shamta khatam ho jaata hain aur shaitaan daman tham leta hain!
Prakash bas jaam peete huye sunta gaya, lekin use in baaton me dhakoslepan ke alava kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha thq. Dusre aur, Damini ab gaur se Manglu ko dekhne lagi, jaise uske mann me in baaton ka kuch asar ho rahi ho.
Manglu : (Prakash ko dekhke, haath jodte huye) Sahab, mera kehna maniye, to bitiya ke laash ko us jungle ke zameen se nikalke, kahin aur dafna dijiye, ya phir koi pavitra sthan pe jala dijiye!! (Mathe se pasina pochke) Jab tak voh laash us bargad ke ped ke tale rahegi...bahut gadbad hone vala hai!
Prakash : (Sakti se) Manglu, agar tujhe teri naukri pyari hai, to ainda yeh bakwas apne paas rakh! Murde kabad se vapas nahi aaya karte! (Ghusse me) ab nikal yaha se! Idiot.
Manglu bina baat ko aage badaye, vaha se chala jaata hain aur Damini hairani se Prakash ki aur dekhne lag, biwi ki ghabrahat wali chehre ko dekhke Prakash thoda chid jaata hain.
Prakash : darling, ab tumhe kya ho gaya? Yeh chehra kyon utra hua hain?
Damini : Manglu ki baaton me kahin koi sacchai to nahi? Aaj tak Manglu ne kabhi is tarah ki baatein nahi ki! Aur......(yaha se vaha ghoomke) Yeh aaj achnak Neha ki zikr kyon kar raha hai??
Prakash : (haste huye) pagal ho gaya hai saala! Bhoot preto ke kahani padh raha hoga! Lekin.....(sip leke) He is an idiot! Haan, shayad Neha ki maut se voh abhi bhi ghabraya hua hain! (Phir ek sip leke) khair, agli baar main uske badtameezi bardasht nahi karunga! Lekin (Damini ko dekhke) tum uske baaton me kyon aa rahi ho?
Damini achanak us raat ke ghatnao ko yaad karne lagi, voh darwaze par dastak, voh ajeeb sapna, aur to aur paani bharte samay, voh ajeeb si khilkhilahat. Lekin voh Prakash se faltu me bahas nahi karna chahti thi. Voh janti thi uska pati kaafi rational hai.
Prakash : main kuch puch raha hoon baby!
Damini : nahi, bas aise hi! Anyway, make me a drink!
Prakash muskurate huye apne biwi ke liye drink banane lag jaata hain, lekin sach to yeh hai ke Damini thik se muskura bhi nahi paa rahi thi. Aadhi raat ke ajeeb anubhav aur Manglu ke behki behki baatein uski dimaag me baar baar ghoom rahe the.
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Dekhte hi dekhte, Raat ke kareeb 1.30 baj jaate hain. Sanatte aur kutto ke siskiyon ke alava kuch aur sunayi nahi de raha tha hamesha ke tarah.
Ek taraf jahaan Prakash aur Damini chain ke neend so rahe the, vaha dusre aur Manglu ko aaj zara sa bhi neend nahi aa raha tha. Raat ka yeh sanatta ek ajeeb darr paida kar raha tha uske dil mein.
Pichle raat ke ghatnao se Manglu kaafi pareshan tha. Aaj koshish karke bhi voh Prakash ko mana nahi paya us laash ko us abhishapt jagah se hatane ke liye. "Kya Neha bitiya sach me vapas aa gayi hai??. Manglu sochta gaya, sar khujata gaya.
Manglu : (khud se) Nahi!! Kabhi nahi! Main aur anarth hone nahi dunga.... sahab ka raksha karna, mera farz banta hai! Agar sahab aise hi chup bethe, to us laash ko aaj raat main khud vaha se hata dunga!
Khud se baatein karte karte, Manglu mann hi mann Neha ki laash ko us jungle ke zameen me se hatane ka thaan leta hain aur foran ek bottle kholke peene lag jaata hain.
Tabhi, kuch ajeeb si baat ghati!
Bottle se jaam mooh ke andar gaya hi tha ke, Manglu ko achanak ek ubki si aane laga, jaise kuch ajeeb zayka mooh ke andar chala gaya ho. Foran, agle hi pal me Manglu jaam ko thook deta hain aur jab zameen pe phaile jam ko dekhne laga, to hairan reh gaya.
Zameen pe bikhre huye katre sharab ke nahi, balki khoon ke the. Manglu chaunk gaya is baat pe ke bottle me jaam khoon me kaise badal gaya aakhir. Tabhi phir ek baar vohi khilkhilane ki awaaz uske kaano tak aane laga.
"Hehehhehheehehe hehehe"
Manglu hairan hoke ekdam se chaunk jaata hain aur apne ird gird dekhne lagta hain, kyonki hansi ki awaaz ekdam kareeb se aa rahi thi. "Kaun??? Bahaar aa, saame aa saali chinaal kahin ki!" Is baar Manglu takiye ke niche se apna khanjar nikalke apne kamre ka moina karne laga. Aaj phir ek baar, kamre ke saare battiya jalne me nakamyab ho rahe the. Is baat me aur zyada ghussa hoke Manglu apne khanjar liye kamre ke kona kona chaan maara, lekin koi bhi nazar nahi aaya ya aayi.
Tabhi, achanak ekdam se, hansi ki awaaz ruk jaati hain aur ekdam se pure kamre me sanatta. Sanatte ko dekhke, Manglu kuch halka mehsoos karne lagta hain, lekin khanjar abhi bhi haath me barkarar. Lekin, is himmat me bhi kahin na kahin khauff aur darr bhi shamil tha.
Isliye, ek om ka taveez bhi dusre haath me leke, yaha vaha dekhne lag jaata hain.
Tabhi achanak hua yun ke kamre ka darwaja bahut hi haule se khul jaata hain aur bahaar se dhund hi dhund andar pravesh karne lag jaata hain. Darwaze ke bahaar chaand ki roshni aur kamre ke andar aate dhund ko dekhke Manglu ekdam se hairan ho jaata hain aur uske dil ki dhadkan tez hone lag jaata hain.
Tabhi us dhund ke sannate me se ek awaaz sunayi di "Manglu bhayiaa...."
Is jaani pehchaaniawaaz ko sunke Manglu ekdam se ghabra jaata hain. Use aisa lagne ke jaise Neha use dhund ke us paar se bula rahi thi.
"Manglu bhayiaa.....idhar aao! ....."
Manglu chaukanna hoke, uth jaata hain aur Neha ki awaaz sunke, apne hi aap uske mooh se nikal jaata hain "Nnn Neha aa bbbeti....beti, tu hai kya??". Is anhonee ko yakeen hi nahi kar pa raha tha Manglu, lekin Neha ki awaaz bhi to nazarandaaz nahi kar sakta tha voh.
"Manglu bhaiyya.....aao na! Jaldi Aaao!" Awaaz me masoomiyat barkarar thi.
"Nehaa! Neha bitiya???" Manglu darr darr ke kehte huye, dhire dhire darwaje ke kareeb jaane laga. Bahaar se dhund itni tezi se kamre ke andar aa raha tha ke, darwaza khud dhundhla nazar aane laga Manglu ko, lekin phir bhi dhire dhire aage badhta gaya.
Dhund ke us paar kya rahasya chipi hai aakhir? Yeh soch Manglu ko khaye jaa raha tha, lekin voh aage aage chalta gaya khule darwaze ki aur.
"Oh no! Kitna bura hua yaar! Aashish ki maut is tarah??" Parul apne saheliyon ke saath canteen me subah se is vishay pe baat kar rahi thi. Voh khud kaafi hairan thi Aashish ke is tarah maare jaane se.
Saheli 1 : yaar, Aashish ka to vaise College me koi khaas dushmani to thi nahi! Phir...
Saheli 2 : lekin, itna seedha bhi nahi tha!
Saheli 3 : Ek baar to kisi ladki ko khud fasaya tha aur shaq bechare Mehul pe chala gaya tha!
Saheli 1 : hmmm bechara Mehul! Jab se Neha lapata hui hai...voh to..
Parul : (Neha ke naam sunte hi chid jaati hain) anyway! Jo ho gaya so ho gaya!
Vaise mann hi mann Parul sach me kaafi khush thi, kyonki Neha ke na hone par, is baar Bandminton ke finals mein use maat dene vali, shayad hi koi hogi.
Parul : (khushi khushi) Ab yeh purani baaton ko jaane do, are haan! Teri voh lip gloss kaun si hai....
Saheli 1 : (beech me se) Parul! Tu Mehul ko seduce kyon nahi kar leti? Ab to voh tanha akela....pyasaa..you know!
Parul : Mehul?? (Bhav khaake) eehh! Not my choice!
Saheli 2 : bas bas! Parul...tu isliye keh rahi hai, kyonki voh tujhe bhav nahi deta...bas! Itni si baat hai! (Parul ki kamar ko dabake)
Parul : ufff! Tum log chup raho! Baat lip gloss ki ho rahi thi....yeh Mehul ka topic kyon laa rahi hai! (Chid ke)
Saheli 3 : chal thik hai! Tujhe lip gloss dungi, ek shart par! Tujhe Mehul ko seduce karni hogi aur use apne aur khichni hogi! Done?
Parul : voh pagal?? Jo abhi bhi shayad us Neha ki khayal me khoya hua hai! Na baba na! Pehli baar life me, koi shart haar jaungi! (Aina nikal ke khud ko dekhti hui)
Saheli 2 : tu apni jalwa to dikha use! Tu aisi bala hai ke...ek vakt pe to voh Aashish bhi lattoo ho gaya tha tujh par.
Aashish ke zikr se Parul ko us din godown me ki gayi harkat ke yaad karne lagi. Neha ki jitni baar zikr hotie, voh uthi hi baar chid jaati thi, isliye Aashish se chutkaara paake Parul khush thi. "Accha hua mar gaya, idiot!".
Phir Mehul ke baare me sochke Parul apni saheliyon ko dekhkar muskurayi aur apni sunehri gulabi nakhuno pe hawa phoonkti hui puchne lagi "vaise..shart kitne kitne ki hai?"
Saheli 2 : hmmmmm...(ek aur saheli ko dekhke)
Saheli 1 : 10,000 ki! Okay?
Parul : 10,000? Excuse me! Parul itni bhi cheap nahi hai! (Itrake)
Saheli 2 : chal thik hai 20,000 ki! Bol, manzoor hai?
Parul : (honton ko apas me ragadke Mehul ke baare me sochke) hmmmmm okay, Done!
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Vaha dusre aur, Manglu pichle raat ke ghatnao se kaafi pareshan sa tha, aur ab akhbaar me Aashish ke baare me padke aur bhi zyada pareshan ho gaya. Baar baar use aise lagne laga ke jaise jo ladki use pareshan kar rahi thi, voh kahin Neha to nahi. Lekin, yeh anhonee ho kaise sakti hain! Phir jaise hi use Prakash ka khayal aaya, uska shaq yakeen me badalne laga.
Vaha, akhbaar padke Prakash bhi thoda hairan reh gaya, lekin Aashish ke maut se use ek faida hua ke, Neha ke balatkaar ke dauran, voh ek matr gavah tha. "Chalo bala tal hi gaya!" Khud se kehke jaise Prakash apne bar tak jaane wala tha, tabhi darwaje ki chaukhat pe Manglu khada ho gaya.
Prakash : Manglu! Tu is vakt? Kya ho gaya?
Manglu : sahb! Yeh.... Aashish babu, vohi hai na, jo us din...
Prakash : tujhse matlab? Saaf saaf bata!
Manglu : sahab! Aap maane ya na maane! Is katal me..........ek hi hai, jiski haath hai!
Prakash : kiski baat kar raha hai? (Jam bharte huye)
Manglu : Sahab! Main...(bahut zyada gambhir hoke)..Nn.. Neha bitiya ki baat kar raha hoon!
Prakash table pe apne glass ko zor se table par patak deta hain aur halke se ghusse me Manglu ki aur dekhne laga.
Prakash : dimaag to thik hai tera??? bakwas kam kiya kar! Neha mar chuki hai! (Ghusse me)
Manglu : maaf kijiye sahab! Main....kehna to nahi chahta tha.. lekin Aashish babu pe agar koi itna krodhit ho sakti hain, to voh sirf Neha bitiya hain! Aur us din...aap dono ne jo uske sa....(ghabrake ruk jaata hain aur niche dekhne lagta hain)
Prakash ghusse me kuch kehne hi wala tha ke tabhi Damini vaha prakat hoti hain. Prakash jo pehle se hi chida hua tha, apne patni ki aur dekhne laga "Tum mujhe chup mat dilao! Damini!! Iske bakwas bahut sun chuka hoon main! Aur sun (Manglu ko) naukri pyari hai, to zubaan bandh rakhna sikh!".
Damini : (Prashant ko shant karke) Manglu, isliye kehti hoon ke sharab kam piya kar! Neha ab is duniya main nahi rahi!
Manglu : sahab! Memsab! Pehle aap thik se meri baat ek dafa sun lijiye!
Prakash : bak! Kya bakna chahta hai?? (Ghusse ko kabu karne ki koshish me)
Damini ab gaur se Manglu ko dekhne lagi.
Manglu : memsahab! Chota mooh, badi baat! Mujhe malum hai Neha bitiya is duniya me nahi rahi... lekin, voh ab ek aisi duniya main jaa chuki hain, jahaa ....voh insano se kahin zyada takatvar ho chuki hain!
Prakash : (ghusse ko chorke, ab haske) accha! Kaun si duniya? Mangal graha?? Ya kisi aur prithvi me nivas kar rahi hai?
Manglu : (bahut gambhir swar me) pret aatmao ki duniya! chudailo aur dayano ki duniya! Ek aisi duniya jahaan pe insaani shamta khatam ho jaata hain aur shaitaan daman tham leta hain!
Prakash bas jaam peete huye sunta gaya, lekin use in baaton me dhakoslepan ke alava kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha thq. Dusre aur, Damini ab gaur se Manglu ko dekhne lagi, jaise uske mann me in baaton ka kuch asar ho rahi ho.
Manglu : (Prakash ko dekhke, haath jodte huye) Sahab, mera kehna maniye, to bitiya ke laash ko us jungle ke zameen se nikalke, kahin aur dafna dijiye, ya phir koi pavitra sthan pe jala dijiye!! (Mathe se pasina pochke) Jab tak voh laash us bargad ke ped ke tale rahegi...bahut gadbad hone vala hai!
Prakash : (Sakti se) Manglu, agar tujhe teri naukri pyari hai, to ainda yeh bakwas apne paas rakh! Murde kabad se vapas nahi aaya karte! (Ghusse me) ab nikal yaha se! Idiot.
Manglu bina baat ko aage badaye, vaha se chala jaata hain aur Damini hairani se Prakash ki aur dekhne lag, biwi ki ghabrahat wali chehre ko dekhke Prakash thoda chid jaata hain.
Prakash : darling, ab tumhe kya ho gaya? Yeh chehra kyon utra hua hain?
Damini : Manglu ki baaton me kahin koi sacchai to nahi? Aaj tak Manglu ne kabhi is tarah ki baatein nahi ki! Aur......(yaha se vaha ghoomke) Yeh aaj achnak Neha ki zikr kyon kar raha hai??
Prakash : (haste huye) pagal ho gaya hai saala! Bhoot preto ke kahani padh raha hoga! Lekin.....(sip leke) He is an idiot! Haan, shayad Neha ki maut se voh abhi bhi ghabraya hua hain! (Phir ek sip leke) khair, agli baar main uske badtameezi bardasht nahi karunga! Lekin (Damini ko dekhke) tum uske baaton me kyon aa rahi ho?
Damini achanak us raat ke ghatnao ko yaad karne lagi, voh darwaze par dastak, voh ajeeb sapna, aur to aur paani bharte samay, voh ajeeb si khilkhilahat. Lekin voh Prakash se faltu me bahas nahi karna chahti thi. Voh janti thi uska pati kaafi rational hai.
Prakash : main kuch puch raha hoon baby!
Damini : nahi, bas aise hi! Anyway, make me a drink!
Prakash muskurate huye apne biwi ke liye drink banane lag jaata hain, lekin sach to yeh hai ke Damini thik se muskura bhi nahi paa rahi thi. Aadhi raat ke ajeeb anubhav aur Manglu ke behki behki baatein uski dimaag me baar baar ghoom rahe the.
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Dekhte hi dekhte, Raat ke kareeb 1.30 baj jaate hain. Sanatte aur kutto ke siskiyon ke alava kuch aur sunayi nahi de raha tha hamesha ke tarah.
Ek taraf jahaan Prakash aur Damini chain ke neend so rahe the, vaha dusre aur Manglu ko aaj zara sa bhi neend nahi aa raha tha. Raat ka yeh sanatta ek ajeeb darr paida kar raha tha uske dil mein.
Pichle raat ke ghatnao se Manglu kaafi pareshan tha. Aaj koshish karke bhi voh Prakash ko mana nahi paya us laash ko us abhishapt jagah se hatane ke liye. "Kya Neha bitiya sach me vapas aa gayi hai??. Manglu sochta gaya, sar khujata gaya.
Manglu : (khud se) Nahi!! Kabhi nahi! Main aur anarth hone nahi dunga.... sahab ka raksha karna, mera farz banta hai! Agar sahab aise hi chup bethe, to us laash ko aaj raat main khud vaha se hata dunga!
Khud se baatein karte karte, Manglu mann hi mann Neha ki laash ko us jungle ke zameen me se hatane ka thaan leta hain aur foran ek bottle kholke peene lag jaata hain.
Tabhi, kuch ajeeb si baat ghati!
Bottle se jaam mooh ke andar gaya hi tha ke, Manglu ko achanak ek ubki si aane laga, jaise kuch ajeeb zayka mooh ke andar chala gaya ho. Foran, agle hi pal me Manglu jaam ko thook deta hain aur jab zameen pe phaile jam ko dekhne laga, to hairan reh gaya.
Zameen pe bikhre huye katre sharab ke nahi, balki khoon ke the. Manglu chaunk gaya is baat pe ke bottle me jaam khoon me kaise badal gaya aakhir. Tabhi phir ek baar vohi khilkhilane ki awaaz uske kaano tak aane laga.
"Hehehhehheehehe hehehe"
Manglu hairan hoke ekdam se chaunk jaata hain aur apne ird gird dekhne lagta hain, kyonki hansi ki awaaz ekdam kareeb se aa rahi thi. "Kaun??? Bahaar aa, saame aa saali chinaal kahin ki!" Is baar Manglu takiye ke niche se apna khanjar nikalke apne kamre ka moina karne laga. Aaj phir ek baar, kamre ke saare battiya jalne me nakamyab ho rahe the. Is baat me aur zyada ghussa hoke Manglu apne khanjar liye kamre ke kona kona chaan maara, lekin koi bhi nazar nahi aaya ya aayi.
Tabhi, achanak ekdam se, hansi ki awaaz ruk jaati hain aur ekdam se pure kamre me sanatta. Sanatte ko dekhke, Manglu kuch halka mehsoos karne lagta hain, lekin khanjar abhi bhi haath me barkarar. Lekin, is himmat me bhi kahin na kahin khauff aur darr bhi shamil tha.
Isliye, ek om ka taveez bhi dusre haath me leke, yaha vaha dekhne lag jaata hain.
Tabhi achanak hua yun ke kamre ka darwaja bahut hi haule se khul jaata hain aur bahaar se dhund hi dhund andar pravesh karne lag jaata hain. Darwaze ke bahaar chaand ki roshni aur kamre ke andar aate dhund ko dekhke Manglu ekdam se hairan ho jaata hain aur uske dil ki dhadkan tez hone lag jaata hain.
Tabhi us dhund ke sannate me se ek awaaz sunayi di "Manglu bhayiaa...."
Is jaani pehchaaniawaaz ko sunke Manglu ekdam se ghabra jaata hain. Use aisa lagne ke jaise Neha use dhund ke us paar se bula rahi thi.
"Manglu bhayiaa.....idhar aao! ....."
Manglu chaukanna hoke, uth jaata hain aur Neha ki awaaz sunke, apne hi aap uske mooh se nikal jaata hain "Nnn Neha aa bbbeti....beti, tu hai kya??". Is anhonee ko yakeen hi nahi kar pa raha tha Manglu, lekin Neha ki awaaz bhi to nazarandaaz nahi kar sakta tha voh.
"Manglu bhaiyya.....aao na! Jaldi Aaao!" Awaaz me masoomiyat barkarar thi.
"Nehaa! Neha bitiya???" Manglu darr darr ke kehte huye, dhire dhire darwaje ke kareeb jaane laga. Bahaar se dhund itni tezi se kamre ke andar aa raha tha ke, darwaza khud dhundhla nazar aane laga Manglu ko, lekin phir bhi dhire dhire aage badhta gaya.
Dhund ke us paar kya rahasya chipi hai aakhir? Yeh soch Manglu ko khaye jaa raha tha, lekin voh aage aage chalta gaya khule darwaze ki aur.
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parul bas khud ke liye jeeti hai... matlabi aur swarthi to hai hi sath hi emotionless bhi hai... usko koi matlab nahi koi jeeye ya mare... Even wo to khush hsi uske ashiq ashish ke marne par... ki chalo bala tali... lekin wo is baat se Anjan ki neha wapas aa chuki hai un sabhi ko saza dene jinki wajah se uski maut huyi thi...
Dusri aurr Ashish ki maut se to Prakash bhi khush hai kyunki ashish hi ek matra gabah tha....
Lekin ashish ki maut ke bare mein sun manglu zyada dara hua hai, ushe yakin hai ki ye jarur neha ne hi ki hai.. usne Prakash ko samjhana chaha, par jo niyati hai ushe koi badal nahi sakta... Prakash ne uski baat na sun kar khud ki maut par muhar laga diya....
wohi Damini ne ye baat jahir to nahi hone di ki Prakash ke samne ki ushe viswash hai manglu ki baaton par lekin andar hi andar wo bhi Dari huyi hai, raat raat bhar ghatne wali ghatanaye ushe sochne par majbur kar diya hai ye sab jo anchahi ghatanaye ghat rahi hai, kahi na kahi uske piche neha hi hai..
To next shikar manglu banne wala hai.... waise usne jindagi mein bahot se paap aur Galtiya ki hai Prakash ke sath reh, reh kar... Jo kshama yogya nahi...
Shayad ab manglu ka ant nazdik hai...
Khair let's see what happens next
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Bhaag 11
Dhund ke us paar se Manglu baar baar apna naam pukare sunta gaya, aur ab dhire dhire darwaze tak aage badhta gaya. Bhale hi dil aur haath, pair kaamp rahe the, lekin voh apne aap ko rokke bhi nahi rakh paa raha tha.
"Aao na!....aaaaoo...." Neha ki mithi si awaaz aakhirkar Manglu ko darwaze ki chaukhat tak laa hi diya, lekin chaukhat pe koi nazar hi nahi aayi.
"Neha bitiya?" Kehke Manglu darwaze ko pura kholke, ab us dhundle mahol me, kamre se bahaar jaane laga. Bahaar bagiche ke ird gird keval sanatta aur halka halka dhund dikhayi de par raha tha. Bade ajeeb nazara tha charo aur! Ek gehri dhund, jo pehle kabhi bhi aise bagicha ya quarter ke paas nazar nahi aaya tha, aaj achanak pure mahol me phail gaya tha.
Hairanjanak hoke Manglu, khanjar ko pant ke belt me ghusa ke, apne mobile ke torch ko jalaye, aage aage badhta gaya. Aage aage chalte, uske aankhen yaha se vaha, aage piche, dekhta gaya. Seene me tez dhadkan aur kampte huye haath aur pair liye, Manglu kadam badhata gaya. Shant mahol ko dekhke, ek pal ke liye voh sochne laga ke kya Neha vakayi me yaha thi ya nahi.
Lekin kuch doori pe achanak ek rone ki awaaz sunayi diya Manglu ko. Siskiyon ko sunke, use aise laga jaise Neha hi ro rahi thi. Is awaaz ko sunke, Manglu ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga, use kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, ke yeh sab kya ho raha hain. Tabhi, kuch aage chalte huye, use yeh ehsaas hone laga ke un siskiyon ki awaaz bagiche ke kone me, kisi ped ke aas paas se aaa rahi thi.
Manglu : (us ped ki aur badta hua) NNN Neha bitiya?? Tu hai kya?
Lekin keval siskiyon ki, aur koi bhi awaaz nahi aa rahi thi. Phir bhi, Manglu himmat karke aage badta gaya aur jaise jaise voh aage aata gaya, siskiyaan aur bhi zyada sunayi di gayi. Dekhte hi dekhte Manglu ekdam ped ke nazdeek pahuch jaata hain aur tabhi achanak kuch aisa hua, jisse uske pairo tale zameen khisak gaya.
Ped ke shaakha pe achanak ek ladki ki tasveer banne lagi, jaise ke ped me kisi ka chehra chupa hua ho. Manglu hairan hoke us chehre ko dekhne laga.
Chehra Neha ki hi thi!
"Nnnnaaahhhiii!!!!! Naaahi yyeh to Nehaaaa bbbitiya hai!!" Manglu hairani se us ped par bane chehre ko dekhne laga aur maano jaise, uske pairo tale zameen khisak raha ho.
Ped ke andar se Neha ki chehra tabhi ek shaitani muskaan deti hain aur foran tabhi ped ke ird gird chote mote shakhayen hilchul karne lag gaye, jise dekhke Manglu ghabrake vaha se bhaagne hi wala tha ke, tabhi voh chote mote shakhayen uske dono haathon ko kass ke jakad leta hain aur use vohi ke vohi rokke rakhta hain.
Haathon pe daaliyon ke jakad mehsoos karke Manglu ekdam se ghabra gaya "nnnahiiiiii bitiya!!!! Jaane de mujheeee NAAAHI!!"
Manglu ki yeh haal dekhke, ped me base Neha ki chehra mastmagan hoke hasne lag gayi. Jaise jaise Manglu apne aap ko churane ki koshish karta gaya, vaise vaise shakhaon ka jakad buland hota gaya aur vaise vaise Neha hasti gayi.
"Uuurrgghh bbitiya jaane de mujhe!!!!!!!! Uuuuuurgghh aaaaah!"
Manglu hairan reh gaya ke ped ke shakhao me itni zor kab se aane laga. Teen se chaar daaliyan mazbooti se uske kandhe se leke kohni tak kass ke jakad chuke the, jisse khud ko churana Manglu ke liye behad mushkil nazar aa raha tha.
Bechare ki halat dekhke Neha hasti gayi aur tabhi uski aankhe ekdam se tez bhav leene lag gayi, jaise ki unme bahut krodh aur ghussa ho!
Uske aankhon se tapte krodh ke karan hua yun ke voh daaliyon ki takat itni badh gayi ke Manglu ke haddiyon tak kadakne laga aur uske mooh se dard ki sisak nikalta gaya. Neha ki aankhe aur badi hoti gayi aur vaise vaise Manglu ke haath, kandhe aur kohni pe daaliyon ke giraft bhi.
Phir, kuch yun hua ke Neha apne hasi ko rokke, ek krodhit bhav pure chehre pe laati hain, jisse voh daaliyan ek tagde se jakad se Manglu ke haath ke haddiyan tod dete hain.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhh!!!!!!!!!" Manglu ke dono kohni ki haddiyan itne dhile pad jaate hain ke jaise jaise voh khud ko churane ki koshish karta gaya, vaise vaise uske dono kohni uske jism se phaadke alag ho jaane ke avastha me aane laga, yaha tak ki haddiyon ke kadakne ka bhi awazen aana shuru ho gaya tha. Manglu pagalo ki tarah cheekhta gaya dard se ke tabhi, kohniyo ke haddiyan tut ke alag ho jaate hain aur ek lambi siskari dete huye, voh khud unhe alivida kehke niche zameen par gidne laga.
Dard se bilbilata hua Manglu apne dono ke dono haathon ko kate avastha me dekhke khauff me aagya aur phir apne kohniyon aur hatheli ko vohi daali par latakte huye dekhne laga. Ped me se Neha gayab ho chuki thi aur Manglu apne kante huye haath liye, dard me siskiyan dete hue, vaha se bhaag jaata hain apne quarter ke aur.
Kisi bhi haal me quarter pahuchke, voh bistar pe let jaata hain aur laakh koshish karta gaya, apne dard ko thaamne ki, lekin haath ka ukhad jaana koi mamuli baat thodi hi tha. Lekin, haathon ke ukhad jaane se bhi bhayankar baat thi voh ped pe Neha ki pratibimb nazar aana!
Neha ko uske dafnaye gaye jagah se hatane ka irada mahez ek irada hi reh gaya Manglu ke liye.
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Agle subah Sunday ka din tha, aur aas paas ke jitne bhi log aur aas padosi the, sab Mehra Bunglow ke vaha bhid bana lete hain, ambulance ke andar Manglu ko ghuste dekhte huye.
Ambulance ke andar Prakash bhi ghus jaata hain aur Manglu ko gaur se dekhne lag jaata hain, kohni ke kate jaane se, haath ke tute huye hisse se abhi bhi khoon pe khoon bahe jaa raha tha aur safed se chaadar pe lal dhabbe banaye jaa raha tha.
Prakash : Manglu!!! Yeh sab hua kaise???? (Hairan hoke)
Manglu : (dard me) uuhhhhhh sahab! Vvv..vvvoh..uhhhhhsss
Tez dard ke maare Manglu kuch keh bhi nahi paa raha tha aur Prakash bhi chup rehna ho thik samjha. Khair, dekhte hi dekhte ambulance hospital pahuch jaata hain. Vaha, Prakash ka mulaqat Dr Dalal se hota hain, jo khud Manglu ke is hashar par hairan reh gaya.
Vaha, cabin me :
Dr Dalal : vaise, yeh Manglu aapke bahut bharose ke aadmi hai, right?
Prakash : haan! Lekin ek number ka bewakoof bhi hai! Aadhi raat na jaane kisse pagla leliya...aur natija yeh!
Dr Dalal : haathon ko dekhke to aisa lag raha hai jaise, bahut hi taqat aur behrehmi se ukhada gaya hain...baap re! (Chashme ko khulke, vapas adjust karke pehnte huye) anyway, aap mujhse kuch silsilay me baat karna chahte the?
Prakash : (muskurate huye) oh yes Dr Dalal! Aaj shaam ko mere ghar me ek chota sa get together hai! Aap zaroor ayiyega.
Dr Dalal : (muskurake) kahin aap apne bhatiji ki nakli body ke post mortem ke khushi me to nahi bula rahe hain?
Prakash : (haste huye) jee haan! Sahi farmaya aapne!
Dono mard yunhi yaha vaha ke baatein karne lage, aur kuch pal ke baad Dr Dalal ko alvida kehke Prakash vapas ghar aajata hain aur ghar pahuchte hi, ek double peg banake peene laga.
Ghoont pe ghoont pite huye baar baar, Manglu ke saath huye is bhayanak hadse ke baare me sochne laga. Itni buri tarah se kisi ka haath ukhada bhi jaa sakta hai bhala? Aur yeh hoga bhi kyon?..yeh saare sawal Prakash ko khaye jaa raha tha, lekin koi jawab saamne nahi aaya.
Kuch doori pe bethi Damini, apni iphone kam dekh rahi thi aur soch zyada rahi thi.
Damini : Prakash, yeh Manglu ko achanak se.....baap re! Uske dono ke dono kohni ukhad diye gaye haathon se??? Aisi haiwaniayat kaun kar sakta hai???
Prakash : darling! (Sip leke) mujhe to lagta hain ke....yeh koi aadhi raat pe ladai jhagadne ka natija hai! Tumhe to malum hai na, voh apna Varmaji ka driver, pados me.... Aksar Manglu ka usse jhagda hota tha. That son of a bitch! Usi ne kiya hoga yeh sab!
Damini : par, voh aisa kyon karega??? Aur ek hi raat me jhagda kya is mod tak aa sakta hai??
Prakash : samajh nahi aata! Aakhir hua kya hoga! Iske baare me to voh idiot Manglu hi bata sakta hai!
Prakash yeh sab soch hi raha tha ke tabhi, darwaze ki ghanti baj utha. Prakash ka mood ko dekhte huye, Damini khud jaake darwaza kholti hain.
Darwaza kholte hi, voh hairan reh gayi. Chaukhat pe Mehul aur Arpita the! Unhe dekhke Damini puch pari
"Tum dono?? Yahaa, achanak..."
Arpita : kya hum andar sakte hain?
Damini unhe andar le aati hain aur tabhi bar me betha hua Prakash ke nazar unme pad jaata hain. Un dono ko dekhke Prakash hairani se puchne laga "are, tum dono??. Puri koshish karke Prakash vinamrata se pesh aane laga unke saath.
Mehul : Prakash sahab, (sakht swar me) ummeed karta hoon aap mere sawal ka sahi jawab denge!
Prakash : (gambhir hoke) konsa sawal?
Mehul : (ekdam sakht hoke) Neha kahaan hai?
Is sawal se dono mia biwi ascharya chakit ho jaate hain aur Prakash andar hi andar ghussa hone laga.
"Kya matlab, Neha kahaan hai! Yeh kya behuda sawal hai, tumhe malum nahi Neha ki accident me maut ho chuki hai!" Krodhit swar me Prakash apne jaam ko table pe patakke kehne laga.
Damini : (Arpita ki aur) beti, kyon humare ghav khurdne aayi ho! (Banavti andaz me) Neha ko hum kab ke kho chuke hain! Aur ab...
Arpita : Mrs Mehra, aap ke dhong karne se hum dono me se koi bhi sahanbhuti nahi dikhne wale! (Tez swar liye)
Prakash : (ghusse me) SHUT UP!! himmat kaise hui tumhari, meri patni se aise baat karne ki! (Phir Mehul ko dekhke) tum dono, abhi ke abhi yaha se niklo, GET LOST!
Mehul (jaake Prakash ke ekdam nazdik khada ho gaya) : paisewale ho, iska matlab kuch bhi kar sakte ho? Prakash seth, mujhe shaq nahi yakeen hai, Neha ki maut me tumhara hi haath hai!
Prakash : (Mehul ke collar ko jakadke) Haramzaade! Aankh kisko dikhata hai?? Tum dono ke career ko barbad karne me, mujhe sirf ek phone call chahiye bas!
Tabhi Damini apne pati ko door le jaati hain aur khud aage aa gayi.
Damini : tum dono hosh me to ho? Police ne yeh baat saabit kar di hain ke Neha accident me mar chuki hain! Phir aaj itne dino ke baad achanak......please, hum vaise hi apne bhatiji ki maut se pareshan aur dukhi hai...aur...
Mehul (haste huye) : vaah! Madam...kamal ka dukh manaya jaa raha hai ghar me! Bhatiji ko mare huye ek mahina bhi nahi huya aur chacha chachi peg pe peg piye jaa rahe hain!
Arpita : hmmm vahi to! Kaafi modern family malum hota hai...
Prakash : tum dono yaha se abhi ke abho niklo! Aur haan! Agli baar bhaunke se pehle, koi saboot le aana! Now, GET OUT!
Mehul baat ko aage badane hi wala tha, ke tabhi Arpita use rok leti hain.
"Ofcoarse Mr Mehra! Agli baar saboot leke hi darwaza khat khatayenge! Chalo Mehul."
Dono vaha se chal padte hain aur Prakash Damini ke taraf normally dekhne laga "darling! Fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi! Saboot hoga to layenge na! Aisi jagah laash ko dafnaya hai, ke inke saat pushte bhi nahi dhoondh payenge"
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Arpita aur Mehul bahaar nikal padte hain ke tabhi unke nazar Jaggu pe pad gaya, jo ek aur aadmi ke saath Manglu ke vishay pe baat kar raha tha.
Jaggu : are are bechare Manglu bhayiaa! Lagta hai kisi pehelwan ke saath panga le liya tha!
Dusra Aadmi : haan bhai! Sach kahat ho! Humka biswas hi nahi hovat ke Manglu ka eee haal hoi gava! More maiya!
Un dono ki baaton ko sunke Arpita unke kareeb jaane lagi use dekhke dono aadmi uski taraf ghoom jaate hain. Mehul bhi vaha pahuch jaata hain.
Arpita : yeh aap log kisi ke baare me maat kar rahe the?
Jaggu : are madam, aap se matlab?
Arpita : jee, dekhiye... Prakashji mere muh bole chacha hain, aur Manglu ko main bachpan se janti hoon!
Jaggu : oh! Accha...ji dekhiye, zyada to nahi malum mujhe, lekin haan..kal raat ko uske cheekhne ki awaaz maine suna tha! Lekin apne adde se nahi nikal paya, kahin saala mujhse lad na pade!......khair, subah utha to dekha ghar ke bahaar ambulance hai aur main bhi chupke chupke haspatal tak gaya...lekin...vaha..
Jaggu Arpita ko Manglu ke sharirik avastha ke baare me batane lagta hain aur haath ke ukhad jaane wali baat sunke Arpita aur Mehul, dono hairan reh jaate hain. Darasal Arpita ki mulaqat Manglu se Neha ki party me hi ho chuki thi anjaane me.
Kuch aur baat karke Arpita aur Mehul Manglu ke hospital ka pata karte hain aur phir vaha se chal padte hain.
Kya Manglu se mulaqat safal hoga? Kya Mehul aur Arpita koi suraag dhoondh nilakenge?
Jawab keval samay hi de sakta hai.
Dhund ke us paar se Manglu baar baar apna naam pukare sunta gaya, aur ab dhire dhire darwaze tak aage badhta gaya. Bhale hi dil aur haath, pair kaamp rahe the, lekin voh apne aap ko rokke bhi nahi rakh paa raha tha.
"Aao na!....aaaaoo...." Neha ki mithi si awaaz aakhirkar Manglu ko darwaze ki chaukhat tak laa hi diya, lekin chaukhat pe koi nazar hi nahi aayi.
"Neha bitiya?" Kehke Manglu darwaze ko pura kholke, ab us dhundle mahol me, kamre se bahaar jaane laga. Bahaar bagiche ke ird gird keval sanatta aur halka halka dhund dikhayi de par raha tha. Bade ajeeb nazara tha charo aur! Ek gehri dhund, jo pehle kabhi bhi aise bagicha ya quarter ke paas nazar nahi aaya tha, aaj achanak pure mahol me phail gaya tha.
Hairanjanak hoke Manglu, khanjar ko pant ke belt me ghusa ke, apne mobile ke torch ko jalaye, aage aage badhta gaya. Aage aage chalte, uske aankhen yaha se vaha, aage piche, dekhta gaya. Seene me tez dhadkan aur kampte huye haath aur pair liye, Manglu kadam badhata gaya. Shant mahol ko dekhke, ek pal ke liye voh sochne laga ke kya Neha vakayi me yaha thi ya nahi.
Lekin kuch doori pe achanak ek rone ki awaaz sunayi diya Manglu ko. Siskiyon ko sunke, use aise laga jaise Neha hi ro rahi thi. Is awaaz ko sunke, Manglu ka dil zoron se dhadakne laga, use kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha, ke yeh sab kya ho raha hain. Tabhi, kuch aage chalte huye, use yeh ehsaas hone laga ke un siskiyon ki awaaz bagiche ke kone me, kisi ped ke aas paas se aaa rahi thi.
Manglu : (us ped ki aur badta hua) NNN Neha bitiya?? Tu hai kya?
Lekin keval siskiyon ki, aur koi bhi awaaz nahi aa rahi thi. Phir bhi, Manglu himmat karke aage badta gaya aur jaise jaise voh aage aata gaya, siskiyaan aur bhi zyada sunayi di gayi. Dekhte hi dekhte Manglu ekdam ped ke nazdeek pahuch jaata hain aur tabhi achanak kuch aisa hua, jisse uske pairo tale zameen khisak gaya.
Ped ke shaakha pe achanak ek ladki ki tasveer banne lagi, jaise ke ped me kisi ka chehra chupa hua ho. Manglu hairan hoke us chehre ko dekhne laga.
Chehra Neha ki hi thi!
"Nnnnaaahhhiii!!!!! Naaahi yyeh to Nehaaaa bbbitiya hai!!" Manglu hairani se us ped par bane chehre ko dekhne laga aur maano jaise, uske pairo tale zameen khisak raha ho.
Ped ke andar se Neha ki chehra tabhi ek shaitani muskaan deti hain aur foran tabhi ped ke ird gird chote mote shakhayen hilchul karne lag gaye, jise dekhke Manglu ghabrake vaha se bhaagne hi wala tha ke, tabhi voh chote mote shakhayen uske dono haathon ko kass ke jakad leta hain aur use vohi ke vohi rokke rakhta hain.
Haathon pe daaliyon ke jakad mehsoos karke Manglu ekdam se ghabra gaya "nnnahiiiiii bitiya!!!! Jaane de mujheeee NAAAHI!!"
Manglu ki yeh haal dekhke, ped me base Neha ki chehra mastmagan hoke hasne lag gayi. Jaise jaise Manglu apne aap ko churane ki koshish karta gaya, vaise vaise shakhaon ka jakad buland hota gaya aur vaise vaise Neha hasti gayi.
"Uuurrgghh bbitiya jaane de mujhe!!!!!!!! Uuuuuurgghh aaaaah!"
Manglu hairan reh gaya ke ped ke shakhao me itni zor kab se aane laga. Teen se chaar daaliyan mazbooti se uske kandhe se leke kohni tak kass ke jakad chuke the, jisse khud ko churana Manglu ke liye behad mushkil nazar aa raha tha.
Bechare ki halat dekhke Neha hasti gayi aur tabhi uski aankhe ekdam se tez bhav leene lag gayi, jaise ki unme bahut krodh aur ghussa ho!
Uske aankhon se tapte krodh ke karan hua yun ke voh daaliyon ki takat itni badh gayi ke Manglu ke haddiyon tak kadakne laga aur uske mooh se dard ki sisak nikalta gaya. Neha ki aankhe aur badi hoti gayi aur vaise vaise Manglu ke haath, kandhe aur kohni pe daaliyon ke giraft bhi.
Phir, kuch yun hua ke Neha apne hasi ko rokke, ek krodhit bhav pure chehre pe laati hain, jisse voh daaliyan ek tagde se jakad se Manglu ke haath ke haddiyan tod dete hain.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhh!!!!!!!!!" Manglu ke dono kohni ki haddiyan itne dhile pad jaate hain ke jaise jaise voh khud ko churane ki koshish karta gaya, vaise vaise uske dono kohni uske jism se phaadke alag ho jaane ke avastha me aane laga, yaha tak ki haddiyon ke kadakne ka bhi awazen aana shuru ho gaya tha. Manglu pagalo ki tarah cheekhta gaya dard se ke tabhi, kohniyo ke haddiyan tut ke alag ho jaate hain aur ek lambi siskari dete huye, voh khud unhe alivida kehke niche zameen par gidne laga.
Dard se bilbilata hua Manglu apne dono ke dono haathon ko kate avastha me dekhke khauff me aagya aur phir apne kohniyon aur hatheli ko vohi daali par latakte huye dekhne laga. Ped me se Neha gayab ho chuki thi aur Manglu apne kante huye haath liye, dard me siskiyan dete hue, vaha se bhaag jaata hain apne quarter ke aur.
Kisi bhi haal me quarter pahuchke, voh bistar pe let jaata hain aur laakh koshish karta gaya, apne dard ko thaamne ki, lekin haath ka ukhad jaana koi mamuli baat thodi hi tha. Lekin, haathon ke ukhad jaane se bhi bhayankar baat thi voh ped pe Neha ki pratibimb nazar aana!
Neha ko uske dafnaye gaye jagah se hatane ka irada mahez ek irada hi reh gaya Manglu ke liye.
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Agle subah Sunday ka din tha, aur aas paas ke jitne bhi log aur aas padosi the, sab Mehra Bunglow ke vaha bhid bana lete hain, ambulance ke andar Manglu ko ghuste dekhte huye.
Ambulance ke andar Prakash bhi ghus jaata hain aur Manglu ko gaur se dekhne lag jaata hain, kohni ke kate jaane se, haath ke tute huye hisse se abhi bhi khoon pe khoon bahe jaa raha tha aur safed se chaadar pe lal dhabbe banaye jaa raha tha.
Prakash : Manglu!!! Yeh sab hua kaise???? (Hairan hoke)
Manglu : (dard me) uuhhhhhh sahab! Vvv..vvvoh..uhhhhhsss
Tez dard ke maare Manglu kuch keh bhi nahi paa raha tha aur Prakash bhi chup rehna ho thik samjha. Khair, dekhte hi dekhte ambulance hospital pahuch jaata hain. Vaha, Prakash ka mulaqat Dr Dalal se hota hain, jo khud Manglu ke is hashar par hairan reh gaya.
Vaha, cabin me :
Dr Dalal : vaise, yeh Manglu aapke bahut bharose ke aadmi hai, right?
Prakash : haan! Lekin ek number ka bewakoof bhi hai! Aadhi raat na jaane kisse pagla leliya...aur natija yeh!
Dr Dalal : haathon ko dekhke to aisa lag raha hai jaise, bahut hi taqat aur behrehmi se ukhada gaya hain...baap re! (Chashme ko khulke, vapas adjust karke pehnte huye) anyway, aap mujhse kuch silsilay me baat karna chahte the?
Prakash : (muskurate huye) oh yes Dr Dalal! Aaj shaam ko mere ghar me ek chota sa get together hai! Aap zaroor ayiyega.
Dr Dalal : (muskurake) kahin aap apne bhatiji ki nakli body ke post mortem ke khushi me to nahi bula rahe hain?
Prakash : (haste huye) jee haan! Sahi farmaya aapne!
Dono mard yunhi yaha vaha ke baatein karne lage, aur kuch pal ke baad Dr Dalal ko alvida kehke Prakash vapas ghar aajata hain aur ghar pahuchte hi, ek double peg banake peene laga.
Ghoont pe ghoont pite huye baar baar, Manglu ke saath huye is bhayanak hadse ke baare me sochne laga. Itni buri tarah se kisi ka haath ukhada bhi jaa sakta hai bhala? Aur yeh hoga bhi kyon?..yeh saare sawal Prakash ko khaye jaa raha tha, lekin koi jawab saamne nahi aaya.
Kuch doori pe bethi Damini, apni iphone kam dekh rahi thi aur soch zyada rahi thi.
Damini : Prakash, yeh Manglu ko achanak se.....baap re! Uske dono ke dono kohni ukhad diye gaye haathon se??? Aisi haiwaniayat kaun kar sakta hai???
Prakash : darling! (Sip leke) mujhe to lagta hain ke....yeh koi aadhi raat pe ladai jhagadne ka natija hai! Tumhe to malum hai na, voh apna Varmaji ka driver, pados me.... Aksar Manglu ka usse jhagda hota tha. That son of a bitch! Usi ne kiya hoga yeh sab!
Damini : par, voh aisa kyon karega??? Aur ek hi raat me jhagda kya is mod tak aa sakta hai??
Prakash : samajh nahi aata! Aakhir hua kya hoga! Iske baare me to voh idiot Manglu hi bata sakta hai!
Prakash yeh sab soch hi raha tha ke tabhi, darwaze ki ghanti baj utha. Prakash ka mood ko dekhte huye, Damini khud jaake darwaza kholti hain.
Darwaza kholte hi, voh hairan reh gayi. Chaukhat pe Mehul aur Arpita the! Unhe dekhke Damini puch pari
"Tum dono?? Yahaa, achanak..."
Arpita : kya hum andar sakte hain?
Damini unhe andar le aati hain aur tabhi bar me betha hua Prakash ke nazar unme pad jaata hain. Un dono ko dekhke Prakash hairani se puchne laga "are, tum dono??. Puri koshish karke Prakash vinamrata se pesh aane laga unke saath.
Mehul : Prakash sahab, (sakht swar me) ummeed karta hoon aap mere sawal ka sahi jawab denge!
Prakash : (gambhir hoke) konsa sawal?
Mehul : (ekdam sakht hoke) Neha kahaan hai?
Is sawal se dono mia biwi ascharya chakit ho jaate hain aur Prakash andar hi andar ghussa hone laga.
"Kya matlab, Neha kahaan hai! Yeh kya behuda sawal hai, tumhe malum nahi Neha ki accident me maut ho chuki hai!" Krodhit swar me Prakash apne jaam ko table pe patakke kehne laga.
Damini : (Arpita ki aur) beti, kyon humare ghav khurdne aayi ho! (Banavti andaz me) Neha ko hum kab ke kho chuke hain! Aur ab...
Arpita : Mrs Mehra, aap ke dhong karne se hum dono me se koi bhi sahanbhuti nahi dikhne wale! (Tez swar liye)
Prakash : (ghusse me) SHUT UP!! himmat kaise hui tumhari, meri patni se aise baat karne ki! (Phir Mehul ko dekhke) tum dono, abhi ke abhi yaha se niklo, GET LOST!
Mehul (jaake Prakash ke ekdam nazdik khada ho gaya) : paisewale ho, iska matlab kuch bhi kar sakte ho? Prakash seth, mujhe shaq nahi yakeen hai, Neha ki maut me tumhara hi haath hai!
Prakash : (Mehul ke collar ko jakadke) Haramzaade! Aankh kisko dikhata hai?? Tum dono ke career ko barbad karne me, mujhe sirf ek phone call chahiye bas!
Tabhi Damini apne pati ko door le jaati hain aur khud aage aa gayi.
Damini : tum dono hosh me to ho? Police ne yeh baat saabit kar di hain ke Neha accident me mar chuki hain! Phir aaj itne dino ke baad achanak......please, hum vaise hi apne bhatiji ki maut se pareshan aur dukhi hai...aur...
Mehul (haste huye) : vaah! Madam...kamal ka dukh manaya jaa raha hai ghar me! Bhatiji ko mare huye ek mahina bhi nahi huya aur chacha chachi peg pe peg piye jaa rahe hain!
Arpita : hmmm vahi to! Kaafi modern family malum hota hai...
Prakash : tum dono yaha se abhi ke abho niklo! Aur haan! Agli baar bhaunke se pehle, koi saboot le aana! Now, GET OUT!
Mehul baat ko aage badane hi wala tha, ke tabhi Arpita use rok leti hain.
"Ofcoarse Mr Mehra! Agli baar saboot leke hi darwaza khat khatayenge! Chalo Mehul."
Dono vaha se chal padte hain aur Prakash Damini ke taraf normally dekhne laga "darling! Fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi! Saboot hoga to layenge na! Aisi jagah laash ko dafnaya hai, ke inke saat pushte bhi nahi dhoondh payenge"
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Arpita aur Mehul bahaar nikal padte hain ke tabhi unke nazar Jaggu pe pad gaya, jo ek aur aadmi ke saath Manglu ke vishay pe baat kar raha tha.
Jaggu : are are bechare Manglu bhayiaa! Lagta hai kisi pehelwan ke saath panga le liya tha!
Dusra Aadmi : haan bhai! Sach kahat ho! Humka biswas hi nahi hovat ke Manglu ka eee haal hoi gava! More maiya!
Un dono ki baaton ko sunke Arpita unke kareeb jaane lagi use dekhke dono aadmi uski taraf ghoom jaate hain. Mehul bhi vaha pahuch jaata hain.
Arpita : yeh aap log kisi ke baare me maat kar rahe the?
Jaggu : are madam, aap se matlab?
Arpita : jee, dekhiye... Prakashji mere muh bole chacha hain, aur Manglu ko main bachpan se janti hoon!
Jaggu : oh! Accha...ji dekhiye, zyada to nahi malum mujhe, lekin haan..kal raat ko uske cheekhne ki awaaz maine suna tha! Lekin apne adde se nahi nikal paya, kahin saala mujhse lad na pade!......khair, subah utha to dekha ghar ke bahaar ambulance hai aur main bhi chupke chupke haspatal tak gaya...lekin...vaha..
Jaggu Arpita ko Manglu ke sharirik avastha ke baare me batane lagta hain aur haath ke ukhad jaane wali baat sunke Arpita aur Mehul, dono hairan reh jaate hain. Darasal Arpita ki mulaqat Manglu se Neha ki party me hi ho chuki thi anjaane me.
Kuch aur baat karke Arpita aur Mehul Manglu ke hospital ka pata karte hain aur phir vaha se chal padte hain.
Kya Manglu se mulaqat safal hoga? Kya Mehul aur Arpita koi suraag dhoondh nilakenge?
Jawab keval samay hi de sakta hai.
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Bhaag 12
Usi din dophar ko, Class me na Mehul ka mann lag raha tha aur nahi Arpita ki. Dono ke dono Manglu se milne ke liye bechain the. Khair, Mehul kuch soch hi raha tha ke tabhi uske whatsapp pe ek message aata hain.
Message mein ek dil ka animation tha, jisme se kuch shabd nikal pade :
'Doori ko kam kardo! Faaslo ko mita hi dedo!'
Foran is likhayi ke aane ke baad ek bade se lal honton ka chumne ka clip play hota hain. Mehul kuch hairan hoke card clip ko dekhta gaya.
Aur tabhi, aakhri mein ek 'P' naam aake ruk jaati hain, jise dekhke Mehul ko samajhne me vilamb nahi hua ke yeh harkat Parul ki hi hain. "Lekin bhala, use mera number mila kahaan se??" Sochte huye Mehul message ko ignore karke, apne kitab me dekhne laga. Use dekh piche bethi Parul pen ko honton ke ird gird ghumake, jawab ka intezar karne lagti hain.
Vaise bhi Parul ko khaag dilchaspi thi Mehul mein, lekin sawal shart jeetne ki thi aur vaise bhi ladko se attention lena, uski guilty pleasure thi. Filhal use Mehul ko seduce karni hi thi, kisi bhi haal me. Jab Mehul se koi bhi jawab nahi aaya, to voh kuch naraz hui, lekin voh dharya nahi khona chahti thi, bas dhime se aage badhna chahti thi.
Khair, classes khatam hone ke baad jaise hi recess shuru hua, Mehul ek table fix karke, Arpita ki intezar karne lagta hain. Ab aadat yun ho gaya tha ke jab tak Neha ke vishay pe Arpita ke saath koi alochona na ho, tabtak Mehul ko shanti nahi milta tha. Aakhirkar kuch hi pal me Arpita vaha kuch hi doori pe dikhayi di jaati hain.
Mehul Arpita ko dekhke haath hilata hain aur jaise hi voh chalti hui Mehul ke paas aa rahi thi, tabhi achanak Parul haath me kuch kitab aur copy liye ekdam se Mehul ke saamnewale kursi pe beth jaati hain, jise dekhke Arpita hairan hoke, vahi ke vahi ruk gayi. Parul ko saamne bethe dekh Mehul thoda sa hairan ho jaata hain.
Mehul : Parul tum? ...kuch kaam tha?
Parul : Mehul! Actually.....notes me kuch (kuch jhukke bethi hui) madat chahiye thi, haan! Agar time ho to!
Parul ke jhuke jaane se, uski madmast stan ke daaar shirt me se saaf saaf dikhayi de raha tha Mehul ko, lekin voh apne aap ko kabu me rakhne ka faisla kiya.
Mehul : ummm (stan ki daraar ko ignore karta hua) sure! Batao kya baat hai...
Mehul darasal jald se jald Parul ko bhagana chahta tha, lekin Arpita dono ko ese ek saath dekhke, hairan reh gayee thi aur vahi ke apni jagah pe rukke Parul ke jaane ki intezar karne lagi, ya yun kahiye ke voh Parul ki harkaton ko chupke se dekhne lagi.
Jaise jaise Mehul notes ki aur uljha raha, Parul apni gulabi nakhuno ko uske ungliyon pe phirane lag jaati hain, jisse hua yun ke, Mehul apna haath hatake, vapas adjust hoke bethne lagta hain, jise dekh Parul, is baar apni sunheri tangon ko niche se Mehul ke pairo pe ghissne lagti hain.
Ab ki baar Mehul thoda aur adjust hoke bethne laga aur Parul khud ko rokti hui, normally hi beth jaati hain, vaise bhi Mehul ko seduce karne me koi khaas jaldi nahi thi use.
Khair Mehul se notes leti hui, Parul apni rasile honton ko Mehul ke kareeb lati hain aur dhime se "bye" kehke vaha se matakti hui chali jaati hain.
Foran, vaha Arpita aajati hain aur Mehul ko gaur se dekhne lag jaati hain. Mehul use samjhane laga ke bas notes ke liye Parul aayi hui thi aur koi personal kaaran nahi tha.
Arpita : it's okay Mehul (muskurake) tumhe humara agla agenda to malum hai na?
Mehul : ofcoarse Arpita! Ab hume Manglu se milke, sachhai ka pata lagana hai!
Arpita haan main sar hilati hain. Voh bhali bhanti jaanti thi Mehul abhi bhi Neha ko apne dil ke kareeb rakhta tha, isliye kuch zyada kehna zaroori nahi samjha, lekin mann hi mann Parul ke harkaton pe bhi gaur karne lagi.
Khair, dono bethe apne agle kadam ko leke alochona karne lag jaate hain, aur voh tha Manglu se hospital me milna, taaki unke mann hi dhund kuch kam ho. Kuch pal aur yun baatein karke dono apne apne class chale jaate hain. Class tak jaate jaate, achanak rukke Arpita ek baar phir Parul aur Mehul ke baare me sochti hain, lekin fir bas chupchaap class jaane lagti hain.
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Dekhte hi dekhte, shaam ho jaata hain aur tair kiye gaye program ke anusar, Prakash apne ghar me ek chote se jashn ka ayojan kiya tha. Prakash ke kul milakar do khaas mehmaan the.
Ek chote se hari neeli rangat ki spotlight ko chorke, ghar ke baaki sab battiya bujhe huye the aur main hall me ek payal ki runjhun ki awaaz sunayi deti hain. Yeh payal ek madmast tang ki thi, jo ek banjaran poshak pehni hui ladki ki thi. Haath me sharab se bhare tray aur aankhon me masti liye, ek khubsurat si dhun pe itrake jhoomne lagi, naachne lagti hain.
Hare rang ki choli aur keval ghutno tak aaye lal rang ki skirt se voh banjaran, hall ke hari-neeli roshni me kamal ki lag rahi thi. Teeno ke teeno mard manmugdha the use dekhke. Jhoomte huye uski stan halki si tight si choli me bhi har ek thumak ke saath hil uthe aur kamar ki lachak bhi dekhne layak thi.
Tray leke jaake, voh banjaran ek ek karke teeno mardo ko drinks dene lag jaati hain aur apni thumke jaari rakhti hain. Sudol se kamar ke thumko ko dekhte huye teeno ke teeno jaam ko side me rakhke, jee bhar ke apne apne aankhen sekhne lag jaate hain aur voh banjaran kuch pal tak aur thumke lagane ke baad, sar ko jhukaye, vaha se chali jaati hain.
Phir, voh chote se light ke band hote, foran hall ke tamam lights on ho jaate hain aur teeno mard apne jaam utha lete hain haath mein.
"Cheers!" Prakash apne jaam ko apne do aziz mehmano ke saath pure shaan se peene lagta hain. Yeh do khaas mehmaan vohi the, jinhone Neha ke case ko rafa dafa karne me Prakash ki madat ki thi.
Sabse pehle shaks the Inspector Shah, jinhone Neha ki maut ko accident sabit kiya tha aur dusre the Dr Mahendra Dalal, jinhone ek anjaan ladki ko Neha batake, uski post mortem kar diya tha. Aaj ke din, yeh dono apne apne duty se mukt hoke, Prakash ke saath itminan se jaam pee rahe the aur Neha ki case ko hamesha ke liye rafa dafa karne ka khushi bhi mana rahe the.
Shah : bhai! Party ho to Prakash sahb ke style mein!
Prakash : (muskurate huye) thanks inspector, enjoy yourself! (Phir Mahendra ki aur dekhke) Dr Dalal, aapka bahut shukriya! Is kisse ko aapne hi khatam kar diya aakhir!
Mahendra : are shurkiya kis baat ka! Yeh to accha hua ke Mr Shah ne mujhe Miss Neha ki tasveer whatsapp kar diya tha, isliye maine bhi foran, jald se jald hubahu ek laash ka bandobast kar liya!
Inspector Shah apne tareef sunke, muskura utha aur jaam peene laga.
Prakash : bilkul! Vaise Shah sahab to manjhe huye actor nikle! (Haske) kyon Dr Dalal?
Mahendra : (sip leke) are, bilkul! Bilkul!
Shah : are nahi nahi, Hats off to you Doctor sahab! Is case par aakhri taala to aap hi ne lagvaya (Phir, Prakash ko dekhkar) Vaise, Mehra sahab, Yeh jo aapke bhatiji ke do khaas dost the, unhe convince karna aasan nahi tha....
Mahendra : (sip leke) exactly Mr Mehra! Morgue me bhi yeh dono aise bartav kar rahe the, ke maano samajh gaye ho ke laash kisi aur ka hai!
Prakash : bhai, phudakne do inhe, jitna phudakna hain! Aap log befikar rahiye (sip leke) aur haan, aap ke tamam promotions mere taraf se pakka hain, and let me assure you, Neha ke asli laash ka khabar, un dono ko kabhi nahi milne wala! Na is janam mein, aur nahi agle aanewale janmo mein! (Ek lamba ghont leke hasne lag jaata hain)
Dono doctor aur officer bhi haste muskurate huye, chain se beth jaate hain aur Damini apne liye aur teeno ke liye phir ek baar jaam bharne lagti hain. Vapas is baar charo beth jaate hain apne apne jaam ke saath.
Jaam peete peete aksar Shah Damini ki husn ko dekhta gaya, jo nile rang ki saree aur kaali rang ke sleeveless blouse me kamal ki lag rahi thi. Damini bhi mardo ke fitrat se waakif thi, isliye bas Shah ki aur dekhkar, muskurake beth jaati hain.
Mahendra : (Damini ki aur dekhke cheers karta hua) bhabhiji planning karna koi aapke pati se sikhe! Kamal ke planner hai yeh!
Shah : sarkar se mili pagar to bas thik thak hai! Lekin asli kamayi to aap jaise logon ke zariye hota hain! (Prakash aur Damini, dono ko baari baari dekhke)
Damini : vaise Mr Shah, (Shah ke tandarust jism ko dekhke) aap ne shaadi kyon nahi ki ab tak!
Shah : Daminiji, shayad aap jaisa koi mili nahi aab tak! (Gaur se Damini ko dekhke)
Shah ki baaton se Damini thodi sharma jaati hain tabhi Prakash ek aur jaam bharke Shah ko dete huye "vaise, inspector sahab, voh banjaran aapke choice ke liye kaise rahegi?"
Shah : (sip leke) daudegi!
Chaaro ke chaaro hasne lagte hain aur phir, thodi ldhar udhar ke baatein karne lag jaate hain aur dekhte hi dekhte dinner bhi kar lete hain.
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Vaha, apne apne hostelo se Mehul aur Arpita phir ek baar vartalab karne lag jaate hain.
Mehul : mujhe samajh nahi aa raha, yeh Manglu ke piche tum kyon padh gayi ho?
Arpita : Mehul, sunne me shayad bahut hi ajeeb lage tumhe, lekin mujhe aisa lag rahi hain ke shayad yeh Manglu kuch na kuch jaanta hain Neha ki silsilay me!
Mehul : I still don't get it! Aakhir voh kya suraag de payega?
Arpita : yeh to hospital jaane par hi samajh aayegi! Mehul...kal recess ke baad, hum classes bunk kar lenge...aur...
Mehul : samajh gaya, phir ek baar Holmes aur Watson banenge, right?
Arpita : right!
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Vaha hospital me, Manglu abhi bhi dard se bilbilaye ward me leta hua tha. Use abhi bhi is baat ka dukh tha ke Neha ko kabad se hatane ka irada pura chaupat ho chuka hain, kyonki ab kate huye haath liye, voh yeh kaam ko anjaam bilkul nahi de sakta tha.
Pichle raat ke ghatna ke baad, use pura yakeen ho gaya tha ke Neha ki aatma itni manhus ho chuki hain, ke voh kuch bhi kar sakti hain! Aur voh yeh bhi jaanta tha ke Aashish ke aise dardnak maut ke piche Neha ki hi haath thi.
Aaj chot khaane ke baad Manglu ko ehsaas hone laga ke kaash us janamdin ke party ke baad, voh Prakash ko rok leta. Na Neha ki balatkaar hoti, na uski dafnane ki naubat aati aur na yeh aafat shuru hoti. Lekin use malum tha ke sochke koi faida nahi tha, kyonki yeh aafat to shuru ho chuki thi.
Lambe lambe saanse liye Manglu sochne laga ke ab agla shikar kaun hoga.
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Vaha dusre aur, Inspector Shah aur Dr Dalal Prakash ko alvida kehke, apne apne ghar nikal padte hain. Shah itna piya hua tha ke, Mahendra ko use apne gaadi me chorna para.
Jaise hi Shah ka ghar aajata hain, Mahendra apna gaadi rokke, uske aur dekhne laga. Shah abhi bhi talli hoke hichkiya le raha tha.
Mahendra : lo Shah sahab, aapka ghar aagaya!
Shah : huhh! (Hichki leke) ohh! Thank you Doctor! Thank you....,(vapas ek hichki)
Mahendra : bhai, aap shaadi vaadi karlo, phir ghar bethe bethe bin piye hi nasha hoga! (Haske)
Shah : hmmm! Vaise aap khush hai apne shaadi se? (Hosh me aake, apne huliya thik karte huye)
Dr Dalal : bilkul! Voh meri better half hai! Laakhon mein ek! (Khushi se muskurake)
Shah : ok ok! Chaliye phir (gaadi se nikalke) aap jaake apne biwi se lipat jao, main takiye se lipat jaata hoon!
Dono ke dono hans dete hain, aur Shah ko apne ghar me ghuste dekh, Mahendra gaadi start karke apne ghar ke aur ravana ho jaata hain. Har din ki tarah aaj bhi use malum tha ke uski biwi besabri se uska intezar kar rahi hogi ghar pe.
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Vaha hostel mein :
Arpita se baatein karne ke baad Mehul apne kitab me uljha raha ke tabhi notes padte padte uska aankh lag jaata hain. Apne aankhe tatolke vapas kitab me dhyan dene ki koshish ki, lekin Mehul apne aankhe tez neend ke vajah se band kar deta hain........
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Phir kuch pal ke baad, jaise hi Mehul ke aankhe vapas khul gaya, voh charo aur sirf dhund hi dhund dekhne laga aur voh khud apne aap ko kisi sunsaan veeran jungle me khada hua paata hain. Hairan hoke voh yaha vaha dekhne lagta hain, ke tabhi door se koi shaks uske kareeb aane laga. Jab Mehul ne gaur se dekha to paya ke voh Manglu tha, jo kate huye haathon ko chaddar me chupaye, aaakar paas khada ho gaya.
Manglu : beta!!! Voh agayi hai..... agayi hai vapas.....VOH VAPAS AGAYI HAI!!! VOHH VAPAS AAGGAYI HAAII........
Manglu ke chehre me bahut khauff tha aur uske awaaz hawao me gunj utha.
Agle hi pal jaise Mehul ne palke jhapka, voh apne aap ko vapas apne hostel room me paata hain aur haath me kitab abhi bhi rakha hua tha. Foran glass me se kuch paani ke chinte apne aankho me liye, vapas kitab padhne lag jaata hain. Mann hi mann ab use yakeen hone laga ke shayad Manglu vakayi me bahut kuch jaanta tha Neha ke baare me aur shayad is chote se sapne me voh usi ka hi zikar kar raha tha.
Khair, gehri neend aane ke karan, kuch derh aur padke, voh lamp ko bujhake, so jaata hain.
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Aakhirkar, Dr Mahendra Dalal apne ghar ke chaukhat tak pahuch jaata hain aur gaadi ko park karke, jaise hi apne duplicate chabi ke zariye ghar ke andar pravesh kiya, voh foran apne pyare patni ko bulane lag jaata hain
"Anu? Kahaan ho darling??"
Tabhi ek kaali rang ki maxi pehnke ek sudol si aurat balkhati hui vaha aa jati hain. Yeh thi Anu Dalal, Mahendra ki biwi aur in dono ke rishta hamesha khushaali se bharpoor the. Khushali ke karan yeh bhi tha ke Anu kabhi bhi Mahendra ke karobarik zindagi me dakhal nahi deti thi, varna shayad apne pati ke baare me aur bhi kuch jaan sakti thi.
Khair, har ek din ki tarah, Mahendra ki nazre apne gadrayi si patni ko maxi me parakhne lage. Maxi to pairo tak thi, lekin bich ke katai ke vajah se kabhi kabhi sudol si taange bhi nazar me aa jaati thi.
Anu : aise kya dekh rahe hai aap?
Mahendra : hmmm! Tum is kaale maxi me gazab lagti ho! Ufff....
Anu : oh ho! Shaadi ke 15 saal ho gaye hain, abhi bhi mere jism ki taarif nahi jaati aap se!
Mahendra : (briefcase ko sofe pe rakhke, foran biwi ke piche lipat jaata hain) ufffff! To kya hua??? Ab to aur bhi pyar aa raha hain, in saalo me itni gadraye jo gayi ho! (Gaalon ko chumte huye)
Anu : ufff! Ho! Sabr bhi karo thoda.. (Alag hoke) yeh Bunty (dono ka beta) jabse hostel gaya hain, aap to kuch zyada hi romantic ho gaye ho!! Baap re...
Mahendra : (apne shirt ke button kholta hua) are kyon na hoon! Ab freedom hi freedom hai.... Aur mera dil keh raha hai....ke...(saare ke saare button kholke) aaj raat mera takkar kisi sherni se hone vaali hain!
Yeh sunke Anu buri tarah sharma jaati hain aur maxi tale, uski rasili bur geeli hone lag jaati hain. Akhirkar mia biwi apne bedroom tak pahuch jaate hain aur Dr Dalal apne patni ko bahon me leke, uske gaal, kaan aur gale ko chumne lag jaata hain. Tabhi achanak Anu use rok deti hain.
Anu : ufff...ho ek minit! Ruko zara, Main zara bathroom hoke aati hoon! Uffff sabr to kijiye thoda!
Mahendra : uff! Jaldi niptake ao! Yaa kaho to, main company dene...(rumani andaz me)
Anu : mere pyare doctor sahab, just shutup! Uff.. badtameezi koi aapse sikhe! Itne bade doctor hoke, chichore jaise harkatein karte hai aap! (Bathroom ki aur chalti huyi)
Jaise hi Anu gungunati hui bathroom ghuste jaati hain, Mahendra foran apne trouser kholke, bas ek pajama pehne bistar par lete huye, dil mein kahin umang aur tarane liye, voh apne patni ki intezar karne lagta hain.Yeh kuch nayi baat nahi thi, kyonki jab kabhi voh hospital se ghar laut ke aate the, tab tab Anu ko maxi me dekhke, aksar rumani ho uthte the, aur ab bete ko hostel bhejne ke baad, aur bhi azaadi se mia biwi rehne lage.
Khair, Mahendra apne bistar pe, dil mein umang liye, aur baar baar apne nazren bathroom ke andar hi tikaye rakha, lekin darwaze pe zara bhi hulchul nahi hui. "Darling, tum bahaar aati ho, ya main andar aajaoo!!!" Mahendra apne uttejna ko sambhal hi nahi paa raha tha.
Kuch pal aur beet jaate hain, ke tabhi bathroom ki darwaza haule se khulta hain aur Mahendra ko ek tez peeli roshni bathroom se aate huye nazar aata hain. Lekin voh roshni ke alava use aur kuch bhi nahi nazar aaya.
"Are darling! Ab kya maxi bhi utaarke hi ajaogi kya?" Maukaye dastoor ko is tarah zaya na karo baby!!! Jaldi aajao!!" Bade rumani andaz me kehke, Mahendra apne ubhar ko pajama me hi adjust karke, Anu ka intezar karne lag gaya. Tabhi, aakhirkar bathroom me se prakat hoti hai Anu! Hala ki is baar, uske chehre par ek bahut kamuk bhav thi, jise dekhke Mahendra khud aur uttejit ho raha tha.
Anu bistar ke baju khadi hoke, foran apni maxi ko kholne lag gayi. Yeh nazara akela hi tarse huye Mahendra ke taapman ko badhane ke liye kaafi tha. Uske lund ka ubhar thoda aur badh jaata hain. Maxi kholke, jaise hi niche gira deti hain, to keval kaali bra aur panty me Anu ko dekhke, uske pati ka ubhar aur sakht hone laga pajama ke andar.
Mahendra : aaj kahin katal karne ka irada to nahi tumhara? (Ubhar ko masalte huye)
Mahendra pehli baar apne patni ki aankhon mein itna hawas dekh raha tha. Us hawas aur nashilepan ko dekhke, voh khud bhi bahut uttejit ho jaata hain.
Keval bra aur panty pehne Anu bistar pe chad jaati hain aur apne pati ke chaati pe letke, apne chehre pe ek kaatilana muskaan laati hain aur haule se uske sawal ka jawab deti hain -
"Bilkul dear! Aaj katal karne ka hi irada hai!".
Usi din dophar ko, Class me na Mehul ka mann lag raha tha aur nahi Arpita ki. Dono ke dono Manglu se milne ke liye bechain the. Khair, Mehul kuch soch hi raha tha ke tabhi uske whatsapp pe ek message aata hain.
Message mein ek dil ka animation tha, jisme se kuch shabd nikal pade :
'Doori ko kam kardo! Faaslo ko mita hi dedo!'
Foran is likhayi ke aane ke baad ek bade se lal honton ka chumne ka clip play hota hain. Mehul kuch hairan hoke card clip ko dekhta gaya.
Aur tabhi, aakhri mein ek 'P' naam aake ruk jaati hain, jise dekhke Mehul ko samajhne me vilamb nahi hua ke yeh harkat Parul ki hi hain. "Lekin bhala, use mera number mila kahaan se??" Sochte huye Mehul message ko ignore karke, apne kitab me dekhne laga. Use dekh piche bethi Parul pen ko honton ke ird gird ghumake, jawab ka intezar karne lagti hain.
Vaise bhi Parul ko khaag dilchaspi thi Mehul mein, lekin sawal shart jeetne ki thi aur vaise bhi ladko se attention lena, uski guilty pleasure thi. Filhal use Mehul ko seduce karni hi thi, kisi bhi haal me. Jab Mehul se koi bhi jawab nahi aaya, to voh kuch naraz hui, lekin voh dharya nahi khona chahti thi, bas dhime se aage badhna chahti thi.
Khair, classes khatam hone ke baad jaise hi recess shuru hua, Mehul ek table fix karke, Arpita ki intezar karne lagta hain. Ab aadat yun ho gaya tha ke jab tak Neha ke vishay pe Arpita ke saath koi alochona na ho, tabtak Mehul ko shanti nahi milta tha. Aakhirkar kuch hi pal me Arpita vaha kuch hi doori pe dikhayi di jaati hain.
Mehul Arpita ko dekhke haath hilata hain aur jaise hi voh chalti hui Mehul ke paas aa rahi thi, tabhi achanak Parul haath me kuch kitab aur copy liye ekdam se Mehul ke saamnewale kursi pe beth jaati hain, jise dekhke Arpita hairan hoke, vahi ke vahi ruk gayi. Parul ko saamne bethe dekh Mehul thoda sa hairan ho jaata hain.
Mehul : Parul tum? ...kuch kaam tha?
Parul : Mehul! Actually.....notes me kuch (kuch jhukke bethi hui) madat chahiye thi, haan! Agar time ho to!
Parul ke jhuke jaane se, uski madmast stan ke daaar shirt me se saaf saaf dikhayi de raha tha Mehul ko, lekin voh apne aap ko kabu me rakhne ka faisla kiya.
Mehul : ummm (stan ki daraar ko ignore karta hua) sure! Batao kya baat hai...
Mehul darasal jald se jald Parul ko bhagana chahta tha, lekin Arpita dono ko ese ek saath dekhke, hairan reh gayee thi aur vahi ke apni jagah pe rukke Parul ke jaane ki intezar karne lagi, ya yun kahiye ke voh Parul ki harkaton ko chupke se dekhne lagi.
Jaise jaise Mehul notes ki aur uljha raha, Parul apni gulabi nakhuno ko uske ungliyon pe phirane lag jaati hain, jisse hua yun ke, Mehul apna haath hatake, vapas adjust hoke bethne lagta hain, jise dekh Parul, is baar apni sunheri tangon ko niche se Mehul ke pairo pe ghissne lagti hain.
Ab ki baar Mehul thoda aur adjust hoke bethne laga aur Parul khud ko rokti hui, normally hi beth jaati hain, vaise bhi Mehul ko seduce karne me koi khaas jaldi nahi thi use.
Khair Mehul se notes leti hui, Parul apni rasile honton ko Mehul ke kareeb lati hain aur dhime se "bye" kehke vaha se matakti hui chali jaati hain.
Foran, vaha Arpita aajati hain aur Mehul ko gaur se dekhne lag jaati hain. Mehul use samjhane laga ke bas notes ke liye Parul aayi hui thi aur koi personal kaaran nahi tha.
Arpita : it's okay Mehul (muskurake) tumhe humara agla agenda to malum hai na?
Mehul : ofcoarse Arpita! Ab hume Manglu se milke, sachhai ka pata lagana hai!
Arpita haan main sar hilati hain. Voh bhali bhanti jaanti thi Mehul abhi bhi Neha ko apne dil ke kareeb rakhta tha, isliye kuch zyada kehna zaroori nahi samjha, lekin mann hi mann Parul ke harkaton pe bhi gaur karne lagi.
Khair, dono bethe apne agle kadam ko leke alochona karne lag jaate hain, aur voh tha Manglu se hospital me milna, taaki unke mann hi dhund kuch kam ho. Kuch pal aur yun baatein karke dono apne apne class chale jaate hain. Class tak jaate jaate, achanak rukke Arpita ek baar phir Parul aur Mehul ke baare me sochti hain, lekin fir bas chupchaap class jaane lagti hain.
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Dekhte hi dekhte, shaam ho jaata hain aur tair kiye gaye program ke anusar, Prakash apne ghar me ek chote se jashn ka ayojan kiya tha. Prakash ke kul milakar do khaas mehmaan the.
Ek chote se hari neeli rangat ki spotlight ko chorke, ghar ke baaki sab battiya bujhe huye the aur main hall me ek payal ki runjhun ki awaaz sunayi deti hain. Yeh payal ek madmast tang ki thi, jo ek banjaran poshak pehni hui ladki ki thi. Haath me sharab se bhare tray aur aankhon me masti liye, ek khubsurat si dhun pe itrake jhoomne lagi, naachne lagti hain.
Hare rang ki choli aur keval ghutno tak aaye lal rang ki skirt se voh banjaran, hall ke hari-neeli roshni me kamal ki lag rahi thi. Teeno ke teeno mard manmugdha the use dekhke. Jhoomte huye uski stan halki si tight si choli me bhi har ek thumak ke saath hil uthe aur kamar ki lachak bhi dekhne layak thi.
Tray leke jaake, voh banjaran ek ek karke teeno mardo ko drinks dene lag jaati hain aur apni thumke jaari rakhti hain. Sudol se kamar ke thumko ko dekhte huye teeno ke teeno jaam ko side me rakhke, jee bhar ke apne apne aankhen sekhne lag jaate hain aur voh banjaran kuch pal tak aur thumke lagane ke baad, sar ko jhukaye, vaha se chali jaati hain.
Phir, voh chote se light ke band hote, foran hall ke tamam lights on ho jaate hain aur teeno mard apne jaam utha lete hain haath mein.
"Cheers!" Prakash apne jaam ko apne do aziz mehmano ke saath pure shaan se peene lagta hain. Yeh do khaas mehmaan vohi the, jinhone Neha ke case ko rafa dafa karne me Prakash ki madat ki thi.
Sabse pehle shaks the Inspector Shah, jinhone Neha ki maut ko accident sabit kiya tha aur dusre the Dr Mahendra Dalal, jinhone ek anjaan ladki ko Neha batake, uski post mortem kar diya tha. Aaj ke din, yeh dono apne apne duty se mukt hoke, Prakash ke saath itminan se jaam pee rahe the aur Neha ki case ko hamesha ke liye rafa dafa karne ka khushi bhi mana rahe the.
Shah : bhai! Party ho to Prakash sahb ke style mein!
Prakash : (muskurate huye) thanks inspector, enjoy yourself! (Phir Mahendra ki aur dekhke) Dr Dalal, aapka bahut shukriya! Is kisse ko aapne hi khatam kar diya aakhir!
Mahendra : are shurkiya kis baat ka! Yeh to accha hua ke Mr Shah ne mujhe Miss Neha ki tasveer whatsapp kar diya tha, isliye maine bhi foran, jald se jald hubahu ek laash ka bandobast kar liya!
Inspector Shah apne tareef sunke, muskura utha aur jaam peene laga.
Prakash : bilkul! Vaise Shah sahab to manjhe huye actor nikle! (Haske) kyon Dr Dalal?
Mahendra : (sip leke) are, bilkul! Bilkul!
Shah : are nahi nahi, Hats off to you Doctor sahab! Is case par aakhri taala to aap hi ne lagvaya (Phir, Prakash ko dekhkar) Vaise, Mehra sahab, Yeh jo aapke bhatiji ke do khaas dost the, unhe convince karna aasan nahi tha....
Mahendra : (sip leke) exactly Mr Mehra! Morgue me bhi yeh dono aise bartav kar rahe the, ke maano samajh gaye ho ke laash kisi aur ka hai!
Prakash : bhai, phudakne do inhe, jitna phudakna hain! Aap log befikar rahiye (sip leke) aur haan, aap ke tamam promotions mere taraf se pakka hain, and let me assure you, Neha ke asli laash ka khabar, un dono ko kabhi nahi milne wala! Na is janam mein, aur nahi agle aanewale janmo mein! (Ek lamba ghont leke hasne lag jaata hain)
Dono doctor aur officer bhi haste muskurate huye, chain se beth jaate hain aur Damini apne liye aur teeno ke liye phir ek baar jaam bharne lagti hain. Vapas is baar charo beth jaate hain apne apne jaam ke saath.
Jaam peete peete aksar Shah Damini ki husn ko dekhta gaya, jo nile rang ki saree aur kaali rang ke sleeveless blouse me kamal ki lag rahi thi. Damini bhi mardo ke fitrat se waakif thi, isliye bas Shah ki aur dekhkar, muskurake beth jaati hain.
Mahendra : (Damini ki aur dekhke cheers karta hua) bhabhiji planning karna koi aapke pati se sikhe! Kamal ke planner hai yeh!
Shah : sarkar se mili pagar to bas thik thak hai! Lekin asli kamayi to aap jaise logon ke zariye hota hain! (Prakash aur Damini, dono ko baari baari dekhke)
Damini : vaise Mr Shah, (Shah ke tandarust jism ko dekhke) aap ne shaadi kyon nahi ki ab tak!
Shah : Daminiji, shayad aap jaisa koi mili nahi aab tak! (Gaur se Damini ko dekhke)
Shah ki baaton se Damini thodi sharma jaati hain tabhi Prakash ek aur jaam bharke Shah ko dete huye "vaise, inspector sahab, voh banjaran aapke choice ke liye kaise rahegi?"
Shah : (sip leke) daudegi!
Chaaro ke chaaro hasne lagte hain aur phir, thodi ldhar udhar ke baatein karne lag jaate hain aur dekhte hi dekhte dinner bhi kar lete hain.
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Vaha, apne apne hostelo se Mehul aur Arpita phir ek baar vartalab karne lag jaate hain.
Mehul : mujhe samajh nahi aa raha, yeh Manglu ke piche tum kyon padh gayi ho?
Arpita : Mehul, sunne me shayad bahut hi ajeeb lage tumhe, lekin mujhe aisa lag rahi hain ke shayad yeh Manglu kuch na kuch jaanta hain Neha ki silsilay me!
Mehul : I still don't get it! Aakhir voh kya suraag de payega?
Arpita : yeh to hospital jaane par hi samajh aayegi! Mehul...kal recess ke baad, hum classes bunk kar lenge...aur...
Mehul : samajh gaya, phir ek baar Holmes aur Watson banenge, right?
Arpita : right!
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Vaha hospital me, Manglu abhi bhi dard se bilbilaye ward me leta hua tha. Use abhi bhi is baat ka dukh tha ke Neha ko kabad se hatane ka irada pura chaupat ho chuka hain, kyonki ab kate huye haath liye, voh yeh kaam ko anjaam bilkul nahi de sakta tha.
Pichle raat ke ghatna ke baad, use pura yakeen ho gaya tha ke Neha ki aatma itni manhus ho chuki hain, ke voh kuch bhi kar sakti hain! Aur voh yeh bhi jaanta tha ke Aashish ke aise dardnak maut ke piche Neha ki hi haath thi.
Aaj chot khaane ke baad Manglu ko ehsaas hone laga ke kaash us janamdin ke party ke baad, voh Prakash ko rok leta. Na Neha ki balatkaar hoti, na uski dafnane ki naubat aati aur na yeh aafat shuru hoti. Lekin use malum tha ke sochke koi faida nahi tha, kyonki yeh aafat to shuru ho chuki thi.
Lambe lambe saanse liye Manglu sochne laga ke ab agla shikar kaun hoga.
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Vaha dusre aur, Inspector Shah aur Dr Dalal Prakash ko alvida kehke, apne apne ghar nikal padte hain. Shah itna piya hua tha ke, Mahendra ko use apne gaadi me chorna para.
Jaise hi Shah ka ghar aajata hain, Mahendra apna gaadi rokke, uske aur dekhne laga. Shah abhi bhi talli hoke hichkiya le raha tha.
Mahendra : lo Shah sahab, aapka ghar aagaya!
Shah : huhh! (Hichki leke) ohh! Thank you Doctor! Thank you....,(vapas ek hichki)
Mahendra : bhai, aap shaadi vaadi karlo, phir ghar bethe bethe bin piye hi nasha hoga! (Haske)
Shah : hmmm! Vaise aap khush hai apne shaadi se? (Hosh me aake, apne huliya thik karte huye)
Dr Dalal : bilkul! Voh meri better half hai! Laakhon mein ek! (Khushi se muskurake)
Shah : ok ok! Chaliye phir (gaadi se nikalke) aap jaake apne biwi se lipat jao, main takiye se lipat jaata hoon!
Dono ke dono hans dete hain, aur Shah ko apne ghar me ghuste dekh, Mahendra gaadi start karke apne ghar ke aur ravana ho jaata hain. Har din ki tarah aaj bhi use malum tha ke uski biwi besabri se uska intezar kar rahi hogi ghar pe.
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Vaha hostel mein :
Arpita se baatein karne ke baad Mehul apne kitab me uljha raha ke tabhi notes padte padte uska aankh lag jaata hain. Apne aankhe tatolke vapas kitab me dhyan dene ki koshish ki, lekin Mehul apne aankhe tez neend ke vajah se band kar deta hain........
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Phir kuch pal ke baad, jaise hi Mehul ke aankhe vapas khul gaya, voh charo aur sirf dhund hi dhund dekhne laga aur voh khud apne aap ko kisi sunsaan veeran jungle me khada hua paata hain. Hairan hoke voh yaha vaha dekhne lagta hain, ke tabhi door se koi shaks uske kareeb aane laga. Jab Mehul ne gaur se dekha to paya ke voh Manglu tha, jo kate huye haathon ko chaddar me chupaye, aaakar paas khada ho gaya.
Manglu : beta!!! Voh agayi hai..... agayi hai vapas.....VOH VAPAS AGAYI HAI!!! VOHH VAPAS AAGGAYI HAAII........
Manglu ke chehre me bahut khauff tha aur uske awaaz hawao me gunj utha.
Agle hi pal jaise Mehul ne palke jhapka, voh apne aap ko vapas apne hostel room me paata hain aur haath me kitab abhi bhi rakha hua tha. Foran glass me se kuch paani ke chinte apne aankho me liye, vapas kitab padhne lag jaata hain. Mann hi mann ab use yakeen hone laga ke shayad Manglu vakayi me bahut kuch jaanta tha Neha ke baare me aur shayad is chote se sapne me voh usi ka hi zikar kar raha tha.
Khair, gehri neend aane ke karan, kuch derh aur padke, voh lamp ko bujhake, so jaata hain.
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Aakhirkar, Dr Mahendra Dalal apne ghar ke chaukhat tak pahuch jaata hain aur gaadi ko park karke, jaise hi apne duplicate chabi ke zariye ghar ke andar pravesh kiya, voh foran apne pyare patni ko bulane lag jaata hain
"Anu? Kahaan ho darling??"
Tabhi ek kaali rang ki maxi pehnke ek sudol si aurat balkhati hui vaha aa jati hain. Yeh thi Anu Dalal, Mahendra ki biwi aur in dono ke rishta hamesha khushaali se bharpoor the. Khushali ke karan yeh bhi tha ke Anu kabhi bhi Mahendra ke karobarik zindagi me dakhal nahi deti thi, varna shayad apne pati ke baare me aur bhi kuch jaan sakti thi.
Khair, har ek din ki tarah, Mahendra ki nazre apne gadrayi si patni ko maxi me parakhne lage. Maxi to pairo tak thi, lekin bich ke katai ke vajah se kabhi kabhi sudol si taange bhi nazar me aa jaati thi.
Anu : aise kya dekh rahe hai aap?
Mahendra : hmmm! Tum is kaale maxi me gazab lagti ho! Ufff....
Anu : oh ho! Shaadi ke 15 saal ho gaye hain, abhi bhi mere jism ki taarif nahi jaati aap se!
Mahendra : (briefcase ko sofe pe rakhke, foran biwi ke piche lipat jaata hain) ufffff! To kya hua??? Ab to aur bhi pyar aa raha hain, in saalo me itni gadraye jo gayi ho! (Gaalon ko chumte huye)
Anu : ufff! Ho! Sabr bhi karo thoda.. (Alag hoke) yeh Bunty (dono ka beta) jabse hostel gaya hain, aap to kuch zyada hi romantic ho gaye ho!! Baap re...
Mahendra : (apne shirt ke button kholta hua) are kyon na hoon! Ab freedom hi freedom hai.... Aur mera dil keh raha hai....ke...(saare ke saare button kholke) aaj raat mera takkar kisi sherni se hone vaali hain!
Yeh sunke Anu buri tarah sharma jaati hain aur maxi tale, uski rasili bur geeli hone lag jaati hain. Akhirkar mia biwi apne bedroom tak pahuch jaate hain aur Dr Dalal apne patni ko bahon me leke, uske gaal, kaan aur gale ko chumne lag jaata hain. Tabhi achanak Anu use rok deti hain.
Anu : ufff...ho ek minit! Ruko zara, Main zara bathroom hoke aati hoon! Uffff sabr to kijiye thoda!
Mahendra : uff! Jaldi niptake ao! Yaa kaho to, main company dene...(rumani andaz me)
Anu : mere pyare doctor sahab, just shutup! Uff.. badtameezi koi aapse sikhe! Itne bade doctor hoke, chichore jaise harkatein karte hai aap! (Bathroom ki aur chalti huyi)
Jaise hi Anu gungunati hui bathroom ghuste jaati hain, Mahendra foran apne trouser kholke, bas ek pajama pehne bistar par lete huye, dil mein kahin umang aur tarane liye, voh apne patni ki intezar karne lagta hain.Yeh kuch nayi baat nahi thi, kyonki jab kabhi voh hospital se ghar laut ke aate the, tab tab Anu ko maxi me dekhke, aksar rumani ho uthte the, aur ab bete ko hostel bhejne ke baad, aur bhi azaadi se mia biwi rehne lage.
Khair, Mahendra apne bistar pe, dil mein umang liye, aur baar baar apne nazren bathroom ke andar hi tikaye rakha, lekin darwaze pe zara bhi hulchul nahi hui. "Darling, tum bahaar aati ho, ya main andar aajaoo!!!" Mahendra apne uttejna ko sambhal hi nahi paa raha tha.
Kuch pal aur beet jaate hain, ke tabhi bathroom ki darwaza haule se khulta hain aur Mahendra ko ek tez peeli roshni bathroom se aate huye nazar aata hain. Lekin voh roshni ke alava use aur kuch bhi nahi nazar aaya.
"Are darling! Ab kya maxi bhi utaarke hi ajaogi kya?" Maukaye dastoor ko is tarah zaya na karo baby!!! Jaldi aajao!!" Bade rumani andaz me kehke, Mahendra apne ubhar ko pajama me hi adjust karke, Anu ka intezar karne lag gaya. Tabhi, aakhirkar bathroom me se prakat hoti hai Anu! Hala ki is baar, uske chehre par ek bahut kamuk bhav thi, jise dekhke Mahendra khud aur uttejit ho raha tha.
Anu bistar ke baju khadi hoke, foran apni maxi ko kholne lag gayi. Yeh nazara akela hi tarse huye Mahendra ke taapman ko badhane ke liye kaafi tha. Uske lund ka ubhar thoda aur badh jaata hain. Maxi kholke, jaise hi niche gira deti hain, to keval kaali bra aur panty me Anu ko dekhke, uske pati ka ubhar aur sakht hone laga pajama ke andar.
Mahendra : aaj kahin katal karne ka irada to nahi tumhara? (Ubhar ko masalte huye)
Mahendra pehli baar apne patni ki aankhon mein itna hawas dekh raha tha. Us hawas aur nashilepan ko dekhke, voh khud bhi bahut uttejit ho jaata hain.
Keval bra aur panty pehne Anu bistar pe chad jaati hain aur apne pati ke chaati pe letke, apne chehre pe ek kaatilana muskaan laati hain aur haule se uske sawal ka jawab deti hain -
"Bilkul dear! Aaj katal karne ka hi irada hai!".
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