Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[nain11ster]

bhai maza agay khami
Padhkar
Amezing skil he bhai apke likhne
Ki
Bus ese hi likhte jaiye
???

: james leon ji ....

aise hi maza karte rahiye aur .. apne pyare pyare sandesh dete rahiye .. aap pathkon ki wajah se hi humara wajood hai ...

waise aap ka naam mujhe mere 2 fav story ke kirdaron ko yad dila gaya ... james .. harry potter ke pita james potter aur .. leon .. apne resident evil ka leon ... .. ummid hai kahani ke sath jude rahenge .... aur aise hi pyare pyare commnt karte rahiyega..

 

[nain11ster]

kal dekhunga abhi to apun lavni aur aarav ka scene dekhing

ha ha ha ..matlab puri raat usi khyal me bitaya hai ladka

apun bas read karing..
story likhne ka kam tum hi sambhalo

ohk thik hai ... shukriya .. compitation khatam ...

kidhar ke update

aage ke update

 

[nain11ster]

bhai ji aapnE to mere mann ki baat kah di ye last line wali ki kya apsayu raat me madira ke nashe me kahi sanchi ke sath next step tak to nhi ghum aaya.

Adbhut prashansniya update bhai ji achchha laga padkar
Waiting for the next update.

next step bole to aage ke update aa he rahe hain ... sab clear ho jayenge

 

[nain11ster]

rg pari ko na bhulne wala hai..

koi na ... ek aur episode rg ka prakashit karna hoga mujhe

hum na bhi sambhal paye to tum to ho hi sambhal lena

sab sare patte hathy me ho aur baji ki surwat aur anth sab apne hi hath me ho fir dar apne aap hi khatam ho jata hai .. samjhe babua ...

 

[nain11ster]

Bhai eiii ka bawal ho gaya yeh dono baap bete pee kar tun hai samjh aata hai lekin subha sanchii ke sath bistar par kaise pahoch gaya yeh toh lafda hai aur samjh kuch na aa raha hai ek update aur mangta hai apne ko aaj waiting for update

... is lafde ko samjhne ke liye aap ko intzar karna hoga ... next update me sab kuch hai .. ya shayad nahi bhi kise pata wo aap tay kar lijiyega.. mera kaam hai kacha pakka kaise bhi kar ke update dena .. aur aap ka kaam hai decide karna .. so jald hi bataeyega update padh kar

 

[nain11ster]

acha to sab mile huai ho.
to aap ye bhi bata di jiye panaga lena chahe hai ya patli gali pakad ke nikal jana chahe hai

.. ye to khuli chunauti hai

 

[nain11ster]

Apasyu and Sinha ji are in full mood. Well Apasyu rightly said, nowadays people pretend a lot. Today's update was very fun. Much has been learned about Ami and Sinha ji, a family-like relationship. I am desperate to know the past. I did not understand the last paragraph of the update. Maybe This plan by Saachi and Kunjal.?

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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kahani aage badhegi to bahut si baten aur clear bhi hoti chali jayengi .... filhaal rahi baat last line ki .. ya para ki .. to wo aap ko agle ya uske agle ya tab tak samjh me na aaya to shayad ye point bhul jaeyega .. haan lekin kabhi na kabhi samjh me to aa hi jayega

 

[nain11ster]

waitnig bhai

Waiting

bus reply khatam karke deta hun update

 

[nain11ster]

Congrats Nain Sir,
Seems ur story is hit between readers n writers...

ji .. su swagatam ...
aap ka dhnaywad
haan pahle to hit hi thi .. aap ke aane se kahin blockbustor bhi ho jaye

 

[nain11ster]

Starts Today ...
Review aftr finishing some updates till then keep it up Sir.

i am waiting