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Me sab logo ko batana chahunga ki story me me kuch chije real incident hai jese ki politics baaki aap log kya real n
ahi hai ye jaan hi sakte hai , aur politics aane bohot time hai lekin uske liye kuch chije change karni pad jayengi poll ke hisab se, aur me naya hoon likhne me to kuch galtiyaa hui ho to jarur batana.




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Gajab story hai dost, chhodo yaar neha ko, usko bas tadapne do ki usne rahul ki baat aakhir kyu maan li, aashu theek hai, apne hero ke liye,
Divya bhi shayad rahul se contact me hai aisa lagta hai, maja aa rha hai, aise hi aage badhate raho story, badhiya , request h ki update thoda bada do yaar
 

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Divya ka ekdum se vapas aana aur upar se , uski is tarah ki baate mujhe bohot gussa dila rahi thi , lekin me ghar me bakheda nhi Krna chahta tha , is liye niche chala gaya , aur bister par let gaya .

Bhalehi me bohot koshish kar raha tha khudko majbooot rakhne ki itne dino se ,lekin sach to ye meri problem aur apeksha jo dusro ki mujhpar thi me use jhel nahi paa raha tha ,aur ab saari baate ek ek karke mere samne aa gayi ,jo mujhe shayad pahale dard nhi de rahi thi lekin ab ,

Neha ka mujhase dur rahna ,Divya ke aane ke sath sath purane jakhmo ka taja karna mujhe rula raha tha , me is liye nahi ro raha thi ki , me jisase pyar karta aur karta tha un sab ne mujhe dard diya , balki itne saal padhai ke baad yu haar kar vapas aana aur ab mujhe jo chije solve hoti najar aa rahi thi vo nahi hona, mujhe khudpar kisi bhi tarah ka vishwas nhi tha ,

chacha ki to me kabhi barabari nahi kar sakta,usne jindagi me buri chije bhi badi honahari se ki thi ,aur me, me to khud pe ahankar kaise kar sakta hu ,me ab dil me hi rone laga , pura dard andar simatata chala gaya ,
Tabhi darwaje ke pass koi aaya ,mene kuch dhyan nahi Diya pet ke bal lete raha,

Ashu didi - Suraj , kya hua itni jaldi kyu so rahe ho abhi to khana bhi nahi khaya hoga ,

Didi mere pass aayi aur sar par hath rakh ke uthane ki koshish ki

Ashu didi - ese Shobha deta hai kya , bahar sab mehman the , aur tum ho ke andar aa gaye, baat karni chahiye mehmano ke sath ,

Didi ki baat aur unka mujhe yu sahlana,kaam kar gaya aur mere aansuo ka bandh Tut gaya aur didi ki taraf muh karke rote hue

Main- didi ,me kisi bhi kaam ka nahi hu , mujhe kuch bhi nahi aata ,
Ashu didi meri esi halat dekh Naa payi , aur mujhe khud sine se laga diya ,


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Aur meri dhadkane jo rone ke vajah se tej thi vo didi ki dhadkane milte hi vo bhi rone lagi , shayad koi ro raha ho aur agar ham unhe apne sine se lagate hai to apne dukh bina bataye hi baat diye jaate hai , aur samne vala bhi rone lagta hai ,didi mujhe rone diya aur pith par hath rakh kar shant karne lagi ,phir jab meri saanse thodi shant hui ,mujhe didi ka yu gale lagana sukun de raha tha , shayad me bohot dino se kisi ke gale lagkar roya nahi tha , ab me puri tarah se shant ho gaya tha , mujhe to ab mujhse jyada dukhi didi lag rahi thi , kuch vakt aisa hi raha ,ab mujhe sukun ke sath sath vo ub mil rahi thi ,kabhi kuch chije juban se nahi samjhai ja sakti vo us insan ke sparsh se samaj jati hai , uske aalingan se samaj jati hai , ab ye didi ki mere liye mamata thi ya pyar tha e to nahi samaj paya , lekin unhe bhi dukh hua itna to samaj gaya tha ,
Ab unhone bhavna vo me aakar mere baalo ko sahlaya aur sar ko chum liya ,


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Phir me khando par hath phera aur alag hoke puchha

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Ashu didi - ab batao kya hua hai aur tumhe kyu lagta hai tum kisi bhi kaam ke nahi ho .

Main - ( me baat ko talna chahta tha ,lekin mere dil me umad rahi bhavana ko bhi me ab dil me nahi rakh sakta tha)didi me sach me kisi kabil nahi hu , mai exam tak pass nahi kar paya ,

Ashu didi - ab sirf paper hi batayega ki tu kis kabil hai

Main -sirf paper ki baat hoti to kuch nahi lekin jindagi me bhi kuch nahi ,aap hi dekho sunny khet ke kaam achche se karta hai , rahul bhi kuch na kuch to kar hi sakta hai ,lekin mai to kisi bhi kabil nahi hu .

Ashu didi - tujhe kyu lagta hai ki tu kisi kabil nahi , agar tu mujhe puchega to tumse kabil insan mene nahi dekha .tu agar khudko kamjor samjhta rahega to kamjor nhi hai to bhi kamjor ho jayega .
Didi ki baat shayad sahi lag rahi thi ,

Main - achcha aap hi batao , ki mujhme aur rahul me aapko kon kabil insan najar aata hai .

Ashu didi - tu meri maar khayega , mene kaha na ki tujhse kabil insan mere liye koi nahi hai , aur rahul ko kyu bich me Lata hai , uski aur teri tulna ho hi nahi sakti .
Main - lekin vo Neha to ...mera matlab tha ki aap hi dekhiye na bua ,Neha har koi uski hi tarif karta hai .

Ashu didi - haa haa tujhe Teri bua aur neha se hi tarif Sunni hai , bakiyo ka to tujhe koi farak nahi padata .

Main - vesi baat nahi hai .

Ashu didi - ( Didi ke dimag ab kya baat aayi unko chehra ekdum se fika pad gaya)achcha kahi girlfriend se dokha to nahi mila tujhe Jo is tarah ki baat kar raha hai ,

Main - aisi baat nahi , aur aap ko bataya na ki meri koi girlfriend nahi hai to kyo is tarah ke sawal puch rahi hai aap ,

Ashu didi - aisehi teri udasi dekh kar laga , vaise koi agar exam aur bhavishya ke liye rota hai ussase achcha insan koi nahi hai , pyar ke liye har koi rota hai , lekin bhavishya ke liye nahi rota , lekin rone se kuch nahi hota , mehnat bhi jaruri hoti hai , jo mujhe pura vishwas hai ki tu karega ,

Hamari baate chal hi Rahi thi ki maa mere kamre me aa gayi ,

Maa - me vahi soch rahi thi ki , Suraj ke sath kon andar baat kar raha hai , kya baate chal rahi hai .

Ashu didi - kuch nahi mami ye bhavishya ke bare me soch kar udas tha to me samjha hi rahi thi , ki to soch raha hai yahi hamare liye badi baat hai aaj kal kon itna sochta hai , har koi masti ke baare me sochta hai ,aage se achchi mehnat Krna jo bhi hoga vo dekha jayega.

Maa - (mere chehre ko pakdkar)Ashu tumne ekdum thik kaha , beta itna pareshan nahi hote tujhe to ab tere pitaji bhi kuch nahi kah rahe hai ,tu tension mat le Jo hoga achcha hi hoga ,paramatma bure dino ke baad achche din bhi late hi hai ,

Main - haa maa main ye baat dhyan rakhunga,vese khane ko kya banaya hai , aur komal didi kaha gayi .

Maa - komal aur shweta bahar hi hai ,aur (mere sar pe hath ferte hue) me tumhe abhi khana parosti hu ,aaja jaldi .

Phir maa bahar gayi , mujhe ab thoda bura lag raha tha didi ko lag raha tha ki me sirf padhai ke liye ro raha hu par asal me pyar aur dokhe ki vajah se bhi ro raha tha ,

Main - didi aapse ek baat puchu bura mat manana .

Ashu didi - puchh.

Main - me vaise puchna nhi batana chahta hu ki ,padhai ke sath sath mujhe ek aur tension hai
e ek ladki se pyar karta hu (ye kahte hi didi ka chehra dukhi ho gaya)lekin vo mujhse nafrat karti hai isliye mujhe aur bhi kamjor feel ho Raha hai .
Didi ko kya hua kya malum , unhone aankhe band krli aur sar ko niche karliya,
Ab mujhe dar lag raha tha ki didi mujhpar ghussa Na ho jaye , ki ab tak unhone meri tarif ki lekin me chahta tha ki vo mere bare me jane unka aaj yu mujhe samjhana aur sine se lagana ese lag raha tha ki vo mujhe samajh sakti hai,
Kuch der Tak shant rahi phir sans ko ekdum se andar liya ab mujhe dar bhi lagne laga tha ,

Ashu didi -(gusse me) kon hai vo ladki vo batao pahale .

Main - aap gussa mat hoiye , meri baat samjhiye me to aap ko isliye bata raha hoo ki aap meri kuch madat kare , aur aap hi to mujhe samaj sakti hai achche se ,

Ashu didi - me koi gussa nahi kar rahi hoo .tu bata to sahi kon hai baad me, me tumhe bataungi kya karna hai ,

Main - aap gussa to nahi karogi na

Ashu didi - haa me nahi karungi gussa .

Main - aap meri kasan khaiyee pahale ,ki ye kisiko nahi bataogi aur gussa bhi nahi karengi

Ashu didi - mujhe yu kasam mat Diya kar mujhe nahi pasand hai ye sab

Main - didi nahi pahale aapko Leni padegi

Ashu didi-(lambi sans lete hue )teri kasam, nahi krungi gussa ab bata, aur sach sach bata tujhe bhi meri kasam hai .

Main - Neha

Meri baat sunte hi Didi ab ekdum se bhavhin ho gayi ,fir achanak se apne ghar chali gayi ,mujhe samaj nahi aaya ki didi ko kya hua agar gussa aaya to daatati lekin is tarah se chale jana samaj nhi aaya .

Phir mene khana khaya aur ab mere pitaji bahar aangan me mahmano ke sath baithe hue the aur andar me tv ke samne baithkar soch raha tha kahi mene didi ko batakar galat to nahi kardiya , kahi vo mujhase baat karna hi na band karde , nahi nahi vo iss baat pe baat Krna kyu band kregi aur vese bhi bua ki ladki se to shadi hoti hi hai bohot logo ki, to isme kya hai, lekin didi ka baat n karna mere thik nahi hai , vahi to meri baat ko samjti hai ,kitni parvah karti hai , kahi unhe to mujhase pyar nahi ho gaya, nahi mujhase kyu hoga me unse umar Chhota hu , aur kyu mujhse vo pati ki tarah pyar karna chahengi ,bhalehi unhone mujhe kabil mana hai ,lekin in sab ke liye nahi nahi , lekin me kyu soch raha hu agar vo mujhase pyar karti bhi hai to mai to nahi krta , lekin unka yu jana mujhe pareshan kar Raha tha , tabhi maa mere pass baith gayi ,

 

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Divya ka ekdum se vapas aana aur upar se , uski is tarah ki baate mujhe bohot gussa dila rahi thi , lekin me ghar me bakheda nhi Krna chahta tha , is liye niche chala gaya , aur bister par let gaya .

Bhalehi me bohot koshish kar raha tha khudko majbooot rakhne ki itne dino se ,lekin sach to ye meri problem aur apeksha jo dusro ki mujhpar thi me use jhel nahi paa raha tha ,aur ab saari baate ek ek karke mere samne aa gayi ,jo mujhe shayad pahale dard nhi de rahi thi lekin ab ,

Neha ka mujhase dur rahna ,Divya ke aane ke sath sath purane jakhmo ka taja karna mujhe rula raha tha , me is liye nahi ro raha thi ki , me jisase pyar karta aur karta tha un sab ne mujhe dard diya , balki itne saal padhai ke baad yu haar kar vapas aana aur ab mujhe jo chije solve hoti najar aa rahi thi vo nahi hona, mujhe khudpar kisi bhi tarah ka vishwas nhi tha ,

chacha ki to me kabhi barabari nahi kar sakta,usne jindagi me buri chije bhi badi honahari se ki thi ,aur me, me to khud pe ahankar kaise kar sakta hu ,me ab dil me hi rone laga , pura dard andar simatata chala gaya ,
Tabhi darwaje ke pass koi aaya ,mene kuch dhyan nahi Diya pet ke bal lete raha,

Ashu didi - Suraj , kya hua itni jaldi kyu so rahe ho abhi to khana bhi nahi khaya hoga ,

Didi mere pass aayi aur sar par hath rakh ke uthane ki koshish ki

Ashu didi - ese Shobha deta hai kya , bahar sab mehman the , aur tum ho ke andar aa gaye, baat karni chahiye mehmano ke sath ,

Didi ki baat aur unka mujhe yu sahlana,kaam kar gaya aur mere aansuo ka bandh Tut gaya aur didi ki taraf muh karke rote hue

Main- didi ,me kisi bhi kaam ka nahi hu , mujhe kuch bhi nahi aata ,
Ashu didi meri esi halat dekh Naa payi , aur mujhe khud sine se laga diya ,


image
Aur meri dhadkane jo rone ke vajah se tej thi vo didi ki dhadkane milte hi vo bhi rone lagi , shayad koi ro raha ho aur agar ham unhe apne sine se lagate hai to apne dukh bina bataye hi baat diye jaate hai , aur samne vala bhi rone lagta hai ,didi mujhe rone diya aur pith par hath rakh kar shant karne lagi ,phir jab meri saanse thodi shant hui ,mujhe didi ka yu gale lagana sukun de raha tha , shayad me bohot dino se kisi ke gale lagkar roya nahi tha , ab me puri tarah se shant ho gaya tha , mujhe to ab mujhse jyada dukhi didi lag rahi thi , kuch vakt aisa hi raha ,ab mujhe sukun ke sath sath vo ub mil rahi thi ,kabhi kuch chije juban se nahi samjhai ja sakti vo us insan ke sparsh se samaj jati hai , uske aalingan se samaj jati hai , ab ye didi ki mere liye mamata thi ya pyar tha e to nahi samaj paya , lekin unhe bhi dukh hua itna to samaj gaya tha ,
Ab unhone bhavna vo me aakar mere baalo ko sahlaya aur sar ko chum liya ,


davydoff-love-2
Phir me khando par hath phera aur alag hoke puchha

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Ashu didi - ab batao kya hua hai aur tumhe kyu lagta hai tum kisi bhi kaam ke nahi ho .

Main - ( me baat ko talna chahta tha ,lekin mere dil me umad rahi bhavana ko bhi me ab dil me nahi rakh sakta tha)didi me sach me kisi kabil nahi hu , mai exam tak pass nahi kar paya ,

Ashu didi - ab sirf paper hi batayega ki tu kis kabil hai

Main -sirf paper ki baat hoti to kuch nahi lekin jindagi me bhi kuch nahi ,aap hi dekho sunny khet ke kaam achche se karta hai , rahul bhi kuch na kuch to kar hi sakta hai ,lekin mai to kisi bhi kabil nahi hu .

Ashu didi - tujhe kyu lagta hai ki tu kisi kabil nahi , agar tu mujhe puchega to tumse kabil insan mene nahi dekha .tu agar khudko kamjor samjhta rahega to kamjor nhi hai to bhi kamjor ho jayega .
Didi ki baat shayad sahi lag rahi thi ,

Main - achcha aap hi batao , ki mujhme aur rahul me aapko kon kabil insan najar aata hai .

Ashu didi - tu meri maar khayega , mene kaha na ki tujhse kabil insan mere liye koi nahi hai , aur rahul ko kyu bich me Lata hai , uski aur teri tulna ho hi nahi sakti .
Main - lekin vo Neha to ...mera matlab tha ki aap hi dekhiye na bua ,Neha har koi uski hi tarif karta hai .

Ashu didi - haa haa tujhe Teri bua aur neha se hi tarif Sunni hai , bakiyo ka to tujhe koi farak nahi padata .

Main - vesi baat nahi hai .

Ashu didi - ( Didi ke dimag ab kya baat aayi unko chehra ekdum se fika pad gaya)achcha kahi girlfriend se dokha to nahi mila tujhe Jo is tarah ki baat kar raha hai ,

Main - aisi baat nahi , aur aap ko bataya na ki meri koi girlfriend nahi hai to kyo is tarah ke sawal puch rahi hai aap ,

Ashu didi - aisehi teri udasi dekh kar laga , vaise koi agar exam aur bhavishya ke liye rota hai ussase achcha insan koi nahi hai , pyar ke liye har koi rota hai , lekin bhavishya ke liye nahi rota , lekin rone se kuch nahi hota , mehnat bhi jaruri hoti hai , jo mujhe pura vishwas hai ki tu karega ,

Hamari baate chal hi Rahi thi ki maa mere kamre me aa gayi ,

Maa - me vahi soch rahi thi ki , Suraj ke sath kon andar baat kar raha hai , kya baate chal rahi hai .

Ashu didi - kuch nahi mami ye bhavishya ke bare me soch kar udas tha to me samjha hi rahi thi , ki to soch raha hai yahi hamare liye badi baat hai aaj kal kon itna sochta hai , har koi masti ke baare me sochta hai ,aage se achchi mehnat Krna jo bhi hoga vo dekha jayega.

Maa - (mere chehre ko pakdkar)Ashu tumne ekdum thik kaha , beta itna pareshan nahi hote tujhe to ab tere pitaji bhi kuch nahi kah rahe hai ,tu tension mat le Jo hoga achcha hi hoga ,paramatma bure dino ke baad achche din bhi late hi hai ,

Main - haa maa main ye baat dhyan rakhunga,vese khane ko kya banaya hai , aur komal didi kaha gayi .

Maa - komal aur shweta bahar hi hai ,aur (mere sar pe hath ferte hue) me tumhe abhi khana parosti hu ,aaja jaldi .

Phir maa bahar gayi , mujhe ab thoda bura lag raha tha didi ko lag raha tha ki me sirf padhai ke liye ro raha hu par asal me pyar aur dokhe ki vajah se bhi ro raha tha ,

Main - didi aapse ek baat puchu bura mat manana .

Ashu didi - puchh.

Main - me vaise puchna nhi batana chahta hu ki ,padhai ke sath sath mujhe ek aur tension hai
e ek ladki se pyar karta hu (ye kahte hi didi ka chehra dukhi ho gaya)lekin vo mujhse nafrat karti hai isliye mujhe aur bhi kamjor feel ho Raha hai .
Didi ko kya hua kya malum , unhone aankhe band krli aur sar ko niche karliya,
Ab mujhe dar lag raha tha ki didi mujhpar ghussa Na ho jaye , ki ab tak unhone meri tarif ki lekin me chahta tha ki vo mere bare me jane unka aaj yu mujhe samjhana aur sine se lagana ese lag raha tha ki vo mujhe samajh sakti hai,
Kuch der Tak shant rahi phir sans ko ekdum se andar liya ab mujhe dar bhi lagne laga tha ,

Ashu didi -(gusse me) kon hai vo ladki vo batao pahale .

Main - aap gussa mat hoiye , meri baat samjhiye me to aap ko isliye bata raha hoo ki aap meri kuch madat kare , aur aap hi to mujhe samaj sakti hai achche se ,

Ashu didi - me koi gussa nahi kar rahi hoo .tu bata to sahi kon hai baad me, me tumhe bataungi kya karna hai ,

Main - aap gussa to nahi karogi na

Ashu didi - haa me nahi karungi gussa .

Main - aap meri kasan khaiyee pahale ,ki ye kisiko nahi bataogi aur gussa bhi nahi karengi

Ashu didi - mujhe yu kasam mat Diya kar mujhe nahi pasand hai ye sab

Main - didi nahi pahale aapko Leni padegi

Ashu didi-(lambi sans lete hue )teri kasam, nahi krungi gussa ab bata, aur sach sach bata tujhe bhi meri kasam hai .

Main - Neha

Meri baat sunte hi Didi ab ekdum se bhavhin ho gayi ,fir achanak se apne ghar chali gayi ,mujhe samaj nahi aaya ki didi ko kya hua agar gussa aaya to daatati lekin is tarah se chale jana samaj nhi aaya .

Phir mene khana khaya aur ab mere pitaji bahar aangan me mahmano ke sath baithe hue the aur andar me tv ke samne baithkar soch raha tha kahi mene didi ko batakar galat to nahi kardiya , kahi vo mujhase baat karna hi na band karde , nahi nahi vo iss baat pe baat Krna kyu band kregi aur vese bhi bua ki ladki se to shadi hoti hi hai bohot logo ki, to isme kya hai, lekin didi ka baat n karna mere thik nahi hai , vahi to meri baat ko samjti hai ,kitni parvah karti hai , kahi unhe to mujhase pyar nahi ho gaya, nahi mujhase kyu hoga me unse umar Chhota hu , aur kyu mujhse vo pati ki tarah pyar karna chahengi ,bhalehi unhone mujhe kabil mana hai ,lekin in sab ke liye nahi nahi , lekin me kyu soch raha hu agar vo mujhase pyar karti bhi hai to mai to nahi krta , lekin unka yu jana mujhe pareshan kar Raha tha , tabhi maa mere pass baith gayi ,
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Gajab story hai dost, chhodo yaar neha ko, usko bas tadapne do ki usne rahul ki baat aakhir kyu maan li, aashu theek hai, apne hero ke liye,
Divya bhi shayad rahul se contact me hai aisa lagta hai, maja aa rha hai, aise hi aage badhate raho story, badhiya , request h ki update thoda bada do yaar
Update bada dene ki puri koshish karunga , aaj ka update barabr tha ki nahi jarur batana
 
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