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Village politics ko is story me kaise likhu? politics aap kehisab se kis par par based honi chahiye?

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Me sab logo ko batana chahunga ki story me me kuch chije real incident hai jese ki politics baaki aap log kya real n
ahi hai ye jaan hi sakte hai , aur politics aane bohot time hai lekin uske liye kuch chije change karni pad jayengi poll ke hisab se, aur me naya hoon likhne me to kuch galtiyaa hui ho to jarur batana.




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Neha kutri ahe. Zawadi Suraj chya dushman la jaun milale ahe. Mitra Tila tar thokach pan tichya aai bahinila tichya samor thik. Dakhav Suraj cha ahankar Ani lavady Rahul chi aai baap falavnar ahe kiti janankhali ani ha Suraj chya vatet yeto. Yachi aai bahin bhi yachyasamor thokayachiye. Bhadavya chulatyacha lavada kamat ghalav. Surajchi aai dusryakhali denar ahe. Aai bahinini hi nishthavan dakhav Suraj barobar dusaryacha vichar hi tyachya manat nako Yeun deu. Sarv familly til striyan ni keval Suraj lach sarvasv manale pahije. Rahul la sarv familly samor kayamacha nirlajya banav. Aai bahini aatya Ani chulativar vait najar thevnara banav Ani he bap Ani beta Rahul Ani tyachya bapal sarpunch Ganesh Yana namard banav jenekarun Suraj chya aai bahinivar vasna zali nahi pahije.
 

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Mene sarita se baat karne ke baad phone rakh diya . phir me andar aaya , thodi der bad priti aa gayi un sab ke bich me bor hone unke sath maa bhi baat kar rahi thi , rahul bhi ghar par nahi tha , shayad vo bahar gaya tha , neha kuch der baad bahar chali gayi .
mujhe kuch shak hua , mujhe neha ka bahar jana dara raha tha ki kahi ye rahul ke passto nahi jayegi ,iss liye kuch der baad mein bhi sarita ke picche chala gaya , rahul ka ghar ab band tha andar se ab mujhse rha nhi gaya aur mene darvaja thodasa khol diya , vaha par koi nhi tha mujhe andar ke kamre se baate karne ki aavaj aa rahi thi .

mene bahar khidki se unki baate sunne i koshish ki .

neha - kya tumhe sachme lagata hai ki suraj aisa kuch kar sakta hai .

ye dono mere baare me kya baat kar rahe hai .

rahul - haa ye baat bilkul sach hai , tumne uss ladki ki baat to suni hi hogi na , mujhe to kahte vakt bhii sharam aati hai ki vo hamara bhaai hai .

neha - koi insaan kitna gir sakta hai kisi ladki se pyaar ka natak kar ke use shoshit karna aur kisi vastu ki tarah dosto me baat de.

rahul - haa , me to kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki hamare parivaar ka sadasya aisa ar sakta hai .

ab mujhe samajh aa gaya ki neha mere sath aisa bartav kyu kar rahi hai , vese to usne mujhase jab mili thi to acche se baat ki thi lekin jab se ghar aai hai uska mere prati hav bhav hi badal gaya tha , lekin kiss ladki baat ho rahi hai jarur koi hogi isne hi phasakar use mere khilaf kiya neha ko patane ke liya lekin neha usase dur baithi isase hi mujhe thodi rahat ki sans mili.

rahul - mujhe kitna bura lagata hai jab koi hamare pariver ke bare me kuch kahta hai ladkiya to mujhse baat bhi nahi karti sab ko lagta hai ki me bhi suraj ki tarah hu .

kitna natak karta hai sala , aise baat kar raha thi ki ise mujhse sach me farak padta ho .
rahul ko is tarah dekhakr neha usake pass baith gayi aur rahul ki pth par hath rakh diya , ab mjhe bohot jyada taklif hone lagi .

rahul - is liye mene tumhe usase dur kardiya , me tumhare sath iss tarah kuch nahi hone de sakta .

neha -chodo uski baato ko us jese insaan ko to hm sabak sikhayenge hi , usane kisi ladki kE sath anyay kiya hai, uski saja to denge hi use , tumne kya socha hai iss bare me.

rahul - mujhe lagta hai ki usase tumhe khatra ho sakta hai , mene bataya tha na ki usne tumhare baare me sunny ke sath gandi bte ki hai, me tumhe kuch nahi hone de sakta neha.

mujhe is rahul ka kuch karna hi hoga lekin idhar us chacha ne gadar macha rakha hai , inka to kuch karna hi padega.baap bete bohot hi jyada , inko to mein sabak Sikha Unga
mere is tarah se sochne me shyam ho gayi , me in sab baato ko soch raha tha ki kaise in sab ka plan kharab karu , priti , chachi , sarita ko bachana hai , maa ko to vo kuch nahi sakte mere jite ji lekin baakiyo ka kya , idhar neha bhi rahul se fasti jaa rahi hai , jise me oyar karta hoo , mere sath hi aisa ky hota hai, pahle divya phir neha , kya me sachche pyar ke kbil nahi hu ,
Mai phir niche aa gaya
 

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Main niche aa gaya,
Main - maa sab log kaha gaye sirf tum hi ho ghar me ,

Maa - are vo tere Chachi ki bahan aur jija aaye hai aur unki ladki bhi,

Main - Chachi ki bahan bhi he
(Ladki ke naam se hi me khush ho gaya )

Main - phir aap kyu nahi gayi vaha par

Maa - main jaakar hi aayi hu , vo sab jaane de mene unhe hamare ghar bhi chai ke liye bulaya hai , aayenge kuch der me.


Tabhi sunny bhi aa gaya , me uske sath ghumane chala gaya

Sunny - aur kya khabar hai phir

Main - are kya karu yaar in baap beto ne ghode laga diye hai ,

Sunny - haram jade rahul ne bhi kuch kiya hai kya ab ,

Main - haa na yaar, Neha ko usne bhadkaya hai ki mene kisi ladki ko pyar me fasa kar uska istemaal kar raha hu

Sunny - vo to sahi baat kah rahi hai ,

Main - abe me majak ke mood me nahi hoo yaar , use lagta hai ki mene ye kiya kyuki use rahul ne kisi ladki se baat karayi ki uski jindagi mene barbad ki aur to aur vo mujhe sabak bhi dikhana chahti hai ,

Sunny - are kon hogi vo ladki aur neha ko bhi to samjhna chahiye na ki tu to gao me nhi tha itne vakt se ,

Main - kya pata usne kya Patti padai he Neha ko to lekin bohot sir ke upar se paani jaa raha hai mujhse nhi dekha jata yaar Neha ko kisi aur ke sath.

Sunny - tu tension mat le ,mere hisab se vo rahul ki hi girlfriend hogi , use vo bohot dino se blackmail kar raha hai , use mene us ladki ko bohot baar rahul ke dosto ke sath bhi dekha hai ,

Main - mujhe ek baar us ladki ko milva de me sab kuch thik kardunga bad me

Fir hamne kuch der baat ki aur me Ghar aa gaya, baad me chhat par gaya aur tabhi Sarita ka phone aaya

Sarita - hello ,

Main - haa bolo, kuch pata chala

Sarita - haa tumhari Chachi ke Ghar par jo unke jijaji aaye hai vahi Ganesh hai ,aur vo aaj sirf khana khane aane vale hai ,

Main - haa to thik hai , kuch krte hai unki asli chaal janne ne ke liye kuch ,

Sarita - jaanu ,tum aa nahi sakte kya Milne mujhe ,

Main - nahi na , roj roj thodi aa sakunga , lekin ab shadi ki tayyari ke liye tumhare hi ghar par rahunga to milna hota rahega

Sarita - haa ,phir thik hai , tumhe jesa lage vaisa thik samjho ,mujhe jitna Mila itne me hi khush hu

Tabhi mere piche koi khada tha to mene mood ke dekha

Main - Sarita tum call rakho me kisi se niptata hu ab.

Ye baat mene bhari lahaje me kahi thi kyuki mere saamne Divya khadi thi ,
use dekhte hi mujhe dard se jyada gussa aane laga kyuki meri jindagi se vo mit gayi thi ,lekin usne mujhe bich raaste par chod diya tha , ab phir se aa gayi thi , lekin kaise,

Divya - kaise ho

Main - kyu aai ho yaha par ,

Divya - me to meri mausi ke ghar aayi thi niche hi mere mata pita hai , kya tum mausi ke jethani ke ladke ho .

( main niche jaane vala tha lekin khudko itna kamjor bhi nhi manta tha ki iska samna kar saku )

Divya - main tumse milke bohot khush hu

Main - khush , itna bhi jhuth mat bolo tum, ab kya karogi meri jindagi puri barbad krne kaa irada hai kya ,

Divya - meri baat tum tab bhi nahi samjhe the aur naa hi samjh rahe ho , me kyu krongi tumhe barbad ,
Main - kisi ko bich raste me chhod kar chale jaana aur kahna ki me tumhara kabhi bura nahi karungi

Divya - mene to bass alag hone ki baat ki thi , mujhe shahar se door Jana tha , mere papa ka karanja me transfer ho gaya tha , phir hamara milna mushkil tha , to me to sirf tumhe free Dom dena chahti thi ki mere naa rahte vakt tum he kisi ki jarurat pad sakti hai

Main - mujhe yaa tumhe, ab dedi n freedom to fir hamara rishta bhi khatam

Divya - me tumhe us vakt barabr samjha nhi paayi thi , isliye ye galti ho gayi thi , ye sirf mere baare me nahi thi , hame ek sath hue bohot din ho gaye the agar kuch din ek dusre dur rahenge to thik rahega , hamara rishta , aur bhi nikhar sakta hai ye soch kar mene vo baat kahi thi lekin me tab vo baat rakh nhi paayi barabr,

yah sab kahte hue uske aansu chehre se niche utarne lage

Main - tum ab kuch bhi kaho ab ham ek nhi ho sakte , tumhe andaja bhi nhi hai , ki tumhare jaane ke baad me kitna toot gaya tha, me fail hogaya tha exam me , main itna toot gaya ths ki ab me exam tak nhi de raha , to hamara rishta dubara to kabhi nhi Jud sakta.main kaise bharosa Karu tum par ab,

Tabhi sidiyo par kisi ki aavaj aai


 

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Mene sarita se baat karne ke baad phone rakh diya . phir me andar aaya , thodi der bad priti aa gayi un sab ke bich me bor hone unke sath maa bhi baat kar rahi thi , rahul bhi ghar par nahi tha , shayad vo bahar gaya tha , neha kuch der baad bahar chali gayi .
mujhe kuch shak hua , mujhe neha ka bahar jana dara raha tha ki kahi ye rahul ke passto nahi jayegi ,iss liye kuch der baad mein bhi sarita ke picche chala gaya , rahul ka ghar ab band tha andar se ab mujhse rha nhi gaya aur mene darvaja thodasa khol diya , vaha par koi nhi tha mujhe andar ke kamre se baate karne ki aavaj aa rahi thi .

mene bahar khidki se unki baate sunne i koshish ki .

neha - kya tumhe sachme lagata hai ki suraj aisa kuch kar sakta hai .

ye dono mere baare me kya baat kar rahe hai .

rahul - haa ye baat bilkul sach hai , tumne uss ladki ki baat to suni hi hogi na , mujhe to kahte vakt bhii sharam aati hai ki vo hamara bhaai hai .

neha - koi insaan kitna gir sakta hai kisi ladki se pyaar ka natak kar ke use shoshit karna aur kisi vastu ki tarah dosto me baat de.

rahul - haa , me to kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki hamare parivaar ka sadasya aisa ar sakta hai .

ab mujhe samajh aa gaya ki neha mere sath aisa bartav kyu kar rahi hai , vese to usne mujhase jab mili thi to acche se baat ki thi lekin jab se ghar aai hai uska mere prati hav bhav hi badal gaya tha , lekin kiss ladki baat ho rahi hai jarur koi hogi isne hi phasakar use mere khilaf kiya neha ko patane ke liya lekin neha usase dur baithi isase hi mujhe thodi rahat ki sans mili.

rahul - mujhe kitna bura lagata hai jab koi hamare pariver ke bare me kuch kahta hai ladkiya to mujhse baat bhi nahi karti sab ko lagta hai ki me bhi suraj ki tarah hu .

kitna natak karta hai sala , aise baat kar raha thi ki ise mujhse sach me farak padta ho .
rahul ko is tarah dekhakr neha usake pass baith gayi aur rahul ki pth par hath rakh diya , ab mjhe bohot jyada taklif hone lagi .

rahul - is liye mene tumhe usase dur kardiya , me tumhare sath iss tarah kuch nahi hone de sakta .

neha -chodo uski baato ko us jese insaan ko to hm sabak sikhayenge hi , usane kisi ladki kE sath anyay kiya hai, uski saja to denge hi use , tumne kya socha hai iss bare me.

rahul - mujhe lagta hai ki usase tumhe khatra ho sakta hai , mene bataya tha na ki usne tumhare baare me sunny ke sath gandi bte ki hai, me tumhe kuch nahi hone de sakta neha.

mujhe is rahul ka kuch karna hi hoga lekin idhar us chacha ne gadar macha rakha hai , inka to kuch karna hi padega.baap bete bohot hi jyada , inko to mein sabak Sikha Unga
mere is tarah se sochne me shyam ho gayi , me in sab baato ko soch raha tha ki kaise in sab ka plan kharab karu , priti , chachi , sarita ko bachana hai , maa ko to vo kuch nahi sakte mere jite ji lekin baakiyo ka kya , idhar neha bhi rahul se fasti jaa rahi hai , jise me oyar karta hoo , mere sath hi aisa ky hota hai, pahle divya phir neha , kya me sachche pyar ke kbil nahi hu ,
Mai phir niche aa gaya
Nice update Bhai
 

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Mene sarita se baat karne ke baad phone rakh diya . phir me andar aaya , thodi der bad priti aa gayi un sab ke bich me bor hone unke sath maa bhi baat kar rahi thi , rahul bhi ghar par nahi tha , shayad vo bahar gaya tha , neha kuch der baad bahar chali gayi .
mujhe kuch shak hua , mujhe neha ka bahar jana dara raha tha ki kahi ye rahul ke passto nahi jayegi ,iss liye kuch der baad mein bhi sarita ke picche chala gaya , rahul ka ghar ab band tha andar se ab mujhse rha nhi gaya aur mene darvaja thodasa khol diya , vaha par koi nhi tha mujhe andar ke kamre se baate karne ki aavaj aa rahi thi .

mene bahar khidki se unki baate sunne i koshish ki .

neha - kya tumhe sachme lagata hai ki suraj aisa kuch kar sakta hai .

ye dono mere baare me kya baat kar rahe hai .

rahul - haa ye baat bilkul sach hai , tumne uss ladki ki baat to suni hi hogi na , mujhe to kahte vakt bhii sharam aati hai ki vo hamara bhaai hai .

neha - koi insaan kitna gir sakta hai kisi ladki se pyaar ka natak kar ke use shoshit karna aur kisi vastu ki tarah dosto me baat de.

rahul - haa , me to kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha ki hamare parivaar ka sadasya aisa ar sakta hai .

ab mujhe samajh aa gaya ki neha mere sath aisa bartav kyu kar rahi hai , vese to usne mujhase jab mili thi to acche se baat ki thi lekin jab se ghar aai hai uska mere prati hav bhav hi badal gaya tha , lekin kiss ladki baat ho rahi hai jarur koi hogi isne hi phasakar use mere khilaf kiya neha ko patane ke liya lekin neha usase dur baithi isase hi mujhe thodi rahat ki sans mili.

rahul - mujhe kitna bura lagata hai jab koi hamare pariver ke bare me kuch kahta hai ladkiya to mujhse baat bhi nahi karti sab ko lagta hai ki me bhi suraj ki tarah hu .

kitna natak karta hai sala , aise baat kar raha thi ki ise mujhse sach me farak padta ho .
rahul ko is tarah dekhakr neha usake pass baith gayi aur rahul ki pth par hath rakh diya , ab mjhe bohot jyada taklif hone lagi .

rahul - is liye mene tumhe usase dur kardiya , me tumhare sath iss tarah kuch nahi hone de sakta .

neha -chodo uski baato ko us jese insaan ko to hm sabak sikhayenge hi , usane kisi ladki kE sath anyay kiya hai, uski saja to denge hi use , tumne kya socha hai iss bare me.

rahul - mujhe lagta hai ki usase tumhe khatra ho sakta hai , mene bataya tha na ki usne tumhare baare me sunny ke sath gandi bte ki hai, me tumhe kuch nahi hone de sakta neha.

mujhe is rahul ka kuch karna hi hoga lekin idhar us chacha ne gadar macha rakha hai , inka to kuch karna hi padega.baap bete bohot hi jyada , inko to mein sabak Sikha Unga
mere is tarah se sochne me shyam ho gayi , me in sab baato ko soch raha tha ki kaise in sab ka plan kharab karu , priti , chachi , sarita ko bachana hai , maa ko to vo kuch nahi sakte mere jite ji lekin baakiyo ka kya , idhar neha bhi rahul se fasti jaa rahi hai , jise me oyar karta hoo , mere sath hi aisa ky hota hai, pahle divya phir neha , kya me sachche pyar ke kbil nahi hu ,
Mai phir niche aa gaya
Nice update
 

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Main niche aa gaya,
Main - maa sab log kaha gaye sirf tum hi ho ghar me ,

Maa - are vo tere Chachi ki bahan aur jija aaye hai aur unki ladki bhi,

Main - Chachi ki bahan bhi he
(Ladki ke naam se hi me khush ho gaya )

Main - phir aap kyu nahi gayi vaha par

Maa - main jaakar hi aayi hu , vo sab jaane de mene unhe hamare ghar bhi chai ke liye bulaya hai , aayenge kuch der me.


Tabhi sunny bhi aa gaya , me uske sath ghumane chala gaya

Sunny - aur kya khabar hai phir

Main - are kya karu yaar in baap beto ne ghode laga diye hai ,

Sunny - haram jade rahul ne bhi kuch kiya hai kya ab ,

Main - haa na yaar, Neha ko usne bhadkaya hai ki mene kisi ladki ko pyar me fasa kar uska istemaal kar raha hu

Sunny - vo to sahi baat kah rahi hai ,

Main - abe me majak ke mood me nahi hoo yaar , use lagta hai ki mene ye kiya kyuki use rahul ne kisi ladki se baat karayi ki uski jindagi mene barbad ki aur to aur vo mujhe sabak bhi dikhana chahti hai ,

Sunny - are kon hogi vo ladki aur neha ko bhi to samjhna chahiye na ki tu to gao me nhi tha itne vakt se ,

Main - kya pata usne kya Patti padai he Neha ko to lekin bohot sir ke upar se paani jaa raha hai mujhse nhi dekha jata yaar Neha ko kisi aur ke sath.

Sunny - tu tension mat le ,mere hisab se vo rahul ki hi girlfriend hogi , use vo bohot dino se blackmail kar raha hai , use mene us ladki ko bohot baar rahul ke dosto ke sath bhi dekha hai ,

Main - mujhe ek baar us ladki ko milva de me sab kuch thik kardunga bad me

Fir hamne kuch der baat ki aur me Ghar aa gaya, baad me chhat par gaya aur tabhi Sarita ka phone aaya

Sarita - hello ,

Main - haa bolo, kuch pata chala

Sarita - haa tumhari Chachi ke Ghar par jo unke jijaji aaye hai vahi Ganesh hai ,aur vo aaj sirf khana khane aane vale hai ,

Main - haa to thik hai , kuch krte hai unki asli chaal janne ne ke liye kuch ,

Sarita - jaanu ,tum aa nahi sakte kya Milne mujhe ,

Main - nahi na , roj roj thodi aa sakunga , lekin ab shadi ki tayyari ke liye tumhare hi ghar par rahunga to milna hota rahega

Sarita - haa ,phir thik hai , tumhe jesa lage vaisa thik samjho ,mujhe jitna Mila itne me hi khush hu

Tabhi mere piche koi khada tha to mene mood ke dekha

Main - Sarita tum call rakho me kisi se niptata hu ab.

Ye baat mene bhari lahaje me kahi thi kyuki mere saamne Divya khadi thi ,
use dekhte hi mujhe dard se jyada gussa aane laga kyuki meri jindagi se vo mit gayi thi ,lekin usne mujhe bich raaste par chod diya tha , ab phir se aa gayi thi , lekin kaise,

Divya - kaise ho

Main - kyu aai ho yaha par ,

Divya - me to meri mausi ke ghar aayi thi niche hi mere mata pita hai , kya tum mausi ke jethani ke ladke ho .


( main niche jaane vala tha lekin khudko itna kamjor bhi nhi manta tha ki iska samna kar saku )

Divya - main tumse milke bohot khush hu

Main - khush , itna bhi jhuth mat bolo tum, ab kya karogi meri jindagi puri barbad krne kaa irada hai kya ,

Divya - meri baat tum tab bhi nahi samjhe the aur naa hi samjh rahe ho , me kyu krongi tumhe barbad ,
Main - kisi ko bich raste me chhod kar chale jaana aur kahna ki me tumhara kabhi bura nahi karungi

Divya - mene to bass alag hone ki baat ki thi , mujhe shahar se door Jana tha , mere papa ka karanja me transfer ho gaya tha , phir hamara milna mushkil tha , to me to sirf tumhe free Dom dena chahti thi ki mere naa rahte vakt tum he kisi ki jarurat pad sakti hai

Main - mujhe yaa tumhe, ab dedi n freedom to fir hamara rishta bhi khatam

Divya - me tumhe us vakt barabr samjha nhi paayi thi , isliye ye galti ho gayi thi , ye sirf mere baare me nahi thi , hame ek sath hue bohot din ho gaye the agar kuch din ek dusre dur rahenge to thik rahega , hamara rishta , aur bhi nikhar sakta hai ye soch kar mene vo baat kahi thi lekin me tab vo baat rakh nhi paayi barabr,

yah sab kahte hue uske aansu chehre se niche utarne lage

Main - tum ab kuch bhi kaho ab ham ek nhi ho sakte , tumhe andaja bhi nhi hai , ki tumhare jaane ke baad me kitna toot gaya tha, me fail hogaya tha exam me , main itna toot gaya ths ki ab me exam tak nhi de raha , to hamara rishta dubara to kabhi nhi Jud sakta.main kaise bharosa Karu tum par ab,

Tabhi sidiyo par kisi ki aavaj aai
Behtreen update
 

Raja maurya

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Main niche aa gaya,
Main - maa sab log kaha gaye sirf tum hi ho ghar me ,

Maa - are vo tere Chachi ki bahan aur jija aaye hai aur unki ladki bhi,

Main - Chachi ki bahan bhi he
(Ladki ke naam se hi me khush ho gaya )

Main - phir aap kyu nahi gayi vaha par

Maa - main jaakar hi aayi hu , vo sab jaane de mene unhe hamare ghar bhi chai ke liye bulaya hai , aayenge kuch der me.


Tabhi sunny bhi aa gaya , me uske sath ghumane chala gaya

Sunny - aur kya khabar hai phir

Main - are kya karu yaar in baap beto ne ghode laga diye hai ,

Sunny - haram jade rahul ne bhi kuch kiya hai kya ab ,

Main - haa na yaar, Neha ko usne bhadkaya hai ki mene kisi ladki ko pyar me fasa kar uska istemaal kar raha hu

Sunny - vo to sahi baat kah rahi hai ,

Main - abe me majak ke mood me nahi hoo yaar , use lagta hai ki mene ye kiya kyuki use rahul ne kisi ladki se baat karayi ki uski jindagi mene barbad ki aur to aur vo mujhe sabak bhi dikhana chahti hai ,

Sunny - are kon hogi vo ladki aur neha ko bhi to samjhna chahiye na ki tu to gao me nhi tha itne vakt se ,

Main - kya pata usne kya Patti padai he Neha ko to lekin bohot sir ke upar se paani jaa raha hai mujhse nhi dekha jata yaar Neha ko kisi aur ke sath.

Sunny - tu tension mat le ,mere hisab se vo rahul ki hi girlfriend hogi , use vo bohot dino se blackmail kar raha hai , use mene us ladki ko bohot baar rahul ke dosto ke sath bhi dekha hai ,

Main - mujhe ek baar us ladki ko milva de me sab kuch thik kardunga bad me

Fir hamne kuch der baat ki aur me Ghar aa gaya, baad me chhat par gaya aur tabhi Sarita ka phone aaya

Sarita - hello ,

Main - haa bolo, kuch pata chala

Sarita - haa tumhari Chachi ke Ghar par jo unke jijaji aaye hai vahi Ganesh hai ,aur vo aaj sirf khana khane aane vale hai ,

Main - haa to thik hai , kuch krte hai unki asli chaal janne ne ke liye kuch ,

Sarita - jaanu ,tum aa nahi sakte kya Milne mujhe ,

Main - nahi na , roj roj thodi aa sakunga , lekin ab shadi ki tayyari ke liye tumhare hi ghar par rahunga to milna hota rahega

Sarita - haa ,phir thik hai , tumhe jesa lage vaisa thik samjho ,mujhe jitna Mila itne me hi khush hu

Tabhi mere piche koi khada tha to mene mood ke dekha

Main - Sarita tum call rakho me kisi se niptata hu ab.

Ye baat mene bhari lahaje me kahi thi kyuki mere saamne Divya khadi thi ,
use dekhte hi mujhe dard se jyada gussa aane laga kyuki meri jindagi se vo mit gayi thi ,lekin usne mujhe bich raaste par chod diya tha , ab phir se aa gayi thi , lekin kaise,

Divya - kaise ho

Main - kyu aai ho yaha par ,

Divya - me to meri mausi ke ghar aayi thi niche hi mere mata pita hai , kya tum mausi ke jethani ke ladke ho .


( main niche jaane vala tha lekin khudko itna kamjor bhi nhi manta tha ki iska samna kar saku )

Divya - main tumse milke bohot khush hu

Main - khush , itna bhi jhuth mat bolo tum, ab kya karogi meri jindagi puri barbad krne kaa irada hai kya ,

Divya - meri baat tum tab bhi nahi samjhe the aur naa hi samjh rahe ho , me kyu krongi tumhe barbad ,
Main - kisi ko bich raste me chhod kar chale jaana aur kahna ki me tumhara kabhi bura nahi karungi

Divya - mene to bass alag hone ki baat ki thi , mujhe shahar se door Jana tha , mere papa ka karanja me transfer ho gaya tha , phir hamara milna mushkil tha , to me to sirf tumhe free Dom dena chahti thi ki mere naa rahte vakt tum he kisi ki jarurat pad sakti hai

Main - mujhe yaa tumhe, ab dedi n freedom to fir hamara rishta bhi khatam

Divya - me tumhe us vakt barabr samjha nhi paayi thi , isliye ye galti ho gayi thi , ye sirf mere baare me nahi thi , hame ek sath hue bohot din ho gaye the agar kuch din ek dusre dur rahenge to thik rahega , hamara rishta , aur bhi nikhar sakta hai ye soch kar mene vo baat kahi thi lekin me tab vo baat rakh nhi paayi barabr,

yah sab kahte hue uske aansu chehre se niche utarne lage

Main - tum ab kuch bhi kaho ab ham ek nhi ho sakte , tumhe andaja bhi nhi hai , ki tumhare jaane ke baad me kitna toot gaya tha, me fail hogaya tha exam me , main itna toot gaya ths ki ab me exam tak nhi de raha , to hamara rishta dubara to kabhi nhi Jud sakta.main kaise bharosa Karu tum par ab,

Tabhi sidiyo par kisi ki aavaj aai
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