Ab padhunga, personal problems chalu hai to mood me nahi tha review dene ke, likhunga ek sath.

Personal Reason ki vajah se likh nahi paaya. Family emergency ke vajah se gaav aaya hu, agar sab sort ho jaaye to likh dunga. Story likhne ke liye mood bhi hona chahiye.

Ye kya hai bhai?

Lore of the hardwork and sacrifice Positive: sabse pahle bravo👏🏼, itne bade vyaktimatv ke baare me kam shabdo me likhana bada mushkil hota hai lekin aapne vo karne ki bahut achhi koshish ki. aapki lekhni bahut hi satik aur saral hai. Chandgiram ji mehanat aur unki bhabhi ke tyag ko aapne is...

Mods ke alawa @Shetan ne ek biography likhi hai . Baaki jitni maine padhi unme se jitne vaali to lag nahi rahi.

Tarif sunke Laga hogi sach me masterpiece pata nahi tha ki aisa hoga.

Maine padhi thi Ye usase achhi thi, bass thukai thi isme.

Abhi tak kabhi jiti hai contest me

Kyuki maine abhi padhi, usne story nahi bass thukai hai.

SEX stories ke contest jitane ke kitne chances hai.

ONLY KHAPAKHAP Positive : A purely erotic story, only for Readers looking for pure erotica with great sensory detail elements will appreciate a direct, to-the-point approach.(Apni bhasha me only thukai) Negative: Lack of Emotional Depth – Without a narrative or character development, has made...

Positives: The setting of a horrifying, inescapable train adds tension and mystery, creating an eerie atmosphere. Horror and train has deeper meaning than surface level frights. And also meaning variation to loop also. Negatives: Despite great writing, horror doesn't have effect that should...

Positives: "Train That Never Stops" is a story written in a passionate and poetic way. The uses of words were beautiful. It has a great flow in its structure. The emotional imagery was spot on. Negatives: It should have explained in better way what stands between their love and how they achieve...

Achha, ye msg achha tha. Par shayad aapne Hania ki baju aur achhe se dikhayi hoti vo kis paristhiti me thi/hai to uska impact hota. Jaane do vaise Story aapki padhenge uski chinta mat karo, hai padhne vaale bahut, jo har ek kahani padhte hai contest ki.

Appreciation post hi tha.:applause: Baaki varsha vaala negative point nahi kah sakte bas meri personal complain samajh lo ki main aur janana chahta tha ki Varsha Amit ke baare me aur kya sochti hai.