Ab padhunga, personal problems chalu hai to mood me nahi tha review dene ke, likhunga ek sath.

Personal Reason ki vajah se likh nahi paaya. Family emergency ke vajah se gaav aaya hu, agar sab sort ho jaaye to likh dunga. Story likhne ke liye mood bhi hona chahiye.

Ye kya hai bhai?

Lore of the hardwork and sacrifice Positive: sabse pahle bravo👏🏼, itne bade vyaktimatv ke baare me kam shabdo me likhana bada mushkil hota hai lekin aapne vo karne ki bahut achhi koshish ki. aapki lekhni bahut hi satik aur saral hai. Chandgiram ji mehanat aur unki bhabhi ke tyag ko aapne is...

Mods ke alawa @Shetan ne ek biography likhi hai . Baaki jitni maine padhi unme se jitne vaali to lag nahi rahi.

Tarif sunke Laga hogi sach me masterpiece pata nahi tha ki aisa hoga.

Maine padhi thi Ye usase achhi thi, bass thukai thi isme.

Abhi tak kabhi jiti hai contest me

Kyuki maine abhi padhi, usne story nahi bass thukai hai.

SEX stories ke contest jitane ke kitne chances hai.

ONLY KHAPAKHAP Positive : A purely erotic story, only for Readers looking for pure erotica with great sensory detail elements will appreciate a direct, to-the-point approach.(Apni bhasha me only thukai) Negative: Lack of Emotional Depth – Without a narrative or character development, has made...

Positives: The setting of a horrifying, inescapable train adds tension and mystery, creating an eerie atmosphere. Horror and train has deeper meaning than surface level frights. And also meaning variation to loop also. Negatives: Despite great writing, horror doesn't have effect that should...

Positives: "Train That Never Stops" is a story written in a passionate and poetic way. The uses of words were beautiful. It has a great flow in its structure. The emotional imagery was spot on. Negatives: It should have explained in better way what stands between their love and how they achieve...

Achha, ye msg achha tha. Par shayad aapne Hania ki baju aur achhe se dikhayi hoti vo kis paristhiti me thi/hai to uska impact hota. Jaane do vaise Story aapki padhenge uski chinta mat karo, hai padhne vaale bahut, jo har ek kahani padhte hai contest ki.

Appreciation post hi tha.:applause: Baaki varsha vaala negative point nahi kah sakte bas meri personal complain samajh lo ki main aur janana chahta tha ki Varsha Amit ke baare me aur kya sochti hai.

Positives: Sambhog katha ko pavitrata ke sath dikhane me ye kahani safal rahi, jo baat itni sadharan nahi hai. Iska shrey lekhak ki bhasha shaili par jaata hai. Is kahani me prachinta aur bhavyata hai jiska karan Sankrit ke shabdo ka satik upyog . Aakhir me ye ek erotic story hone ke nate iska...

Positives: sabse pahli baat isme Hinglish ka upyog hua hai, isiliye shabd hame aaj ke urban society ki feel dene ki koshish karte hai. Ek feel good type ki ending. Negatives: Ravi aur Neha ke rishte me Jaan daalne me kami jo ki kahani ka mahatva purn hissa hai. Suggestion: Neha ne Ravi ko...

SARAL AUR Vastavikta se bhara PYAAR. Positives: kahani asli duniya se hai ye pahle kshan se hi hame dikhayi deta hai. Aapko ek feel good feeling deti hai. Thoda bura bhi mahsoos karati hai. Spelling mistakes naa ke barabar hai. Negatives: is kahani me kuch sangharsh hona chahiye tha. Kahani...

Futuristic thriller, Memory, entertainment,etc. Positives: har baar ki tarah ye kahani ka lekhan bhi ati uttam hai, angreji hokar bhi saralta aur pacing najar aati hai. Ham har ek line me vo tension feel kar sakte hai. Phir se great world building. @Adirshi bhai ne bahut kamal ka likha...

"चलता हूँ... अब सब समेटना है! अब हमें जाना है... अपने नए सफर पर!" Positive: har ek chij is kahani ki sundar hai.Varsha ka dard jadui andaj me prastut kiya hai.Shabdrachna ekdam laybadhha hai. Dil ke Jakhm kaise bujhte hai ye is kahani me ekdam sahi se bataya hai. Negatives: kuch kuch jagah...