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[Shivani guptaa]

Mujhe neend aa rhi main chali sone

 

[Shivani guptaa]

Bye

 

[Black]

To chomu tu kaun sa parayi aurat se baat kar raha tha? Batata na ki dost hai apna. Bada aaya lugai ko neeche rakhne waala. Maar lees tumhari...

You don't know the power of lugai men shadi hone de phir pata chalega

 

[Black]

Mujhe neend aa rhi main chali sone

Bye

Ju ka pati kahan

 

[Laila Ali Khan]

Gilli Chummi...
Wet hot lips on my ..

don't try anymore

 

[_ABHAY]

don't try anymore

You don't like me at all...

Akhir kya hai usme Jo mere pass nahi...

 

[Laila Ali Khan]

You don't like me at all...

Akhir kya hai usme Jo mere pass nahi...

fir kyun bole.. chilli 🌶

 

[Anatole]

Anatole reviews band kyu kar diye men

Ab padhunga, personal problems chalu hai to mood me nahi tha review dene ke, likhunga ek sath.

 

[Elon Musk_]

Spoiler

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Haraamiyo ke saath haraamiyat nahi krte..

Meetha tha aam
Vo bhi khatta ho gaya
Ek hi to dost tha mera
Vo bhi burchatta ho gaya

 

[Mrxr]

Kon offend ho gaya aapke review se jara uss person
Ka naam bataiye baat karte hai usse bhai se

Mera toh hamesha se manna hai Agar koi aap ko praise karta toh aap easily accept karte ho
But criticise kare toh offend
This is wrong way
Every Coin has two sides

Agar mein koi story likh ta hu wo mere liye shayad achi ya perfect hogi kyuki wo meine likhi hai uske sath emotions hote hai aur emotions mein chhoti chhoti mistake ignore reh jati

Par ek reader review deta uska uss story se emotions nahi hote usse jo dikhata hai wo bol deta hai

Rahi rating ki baat ki 4.5 agar aaj aap wo story post karte toh mein 5.5 deta .
Aab contest mein jiss tarah se aage badh raha hai ek sahi idea aa gaya ki rating kis hisab se dena hai

Aur rating itna matter nahi karta hai review mein jo details likhi wo matter karta hai

Chhodo bhai ush baat ko jane do.... Aur teen hi toh review di tension hain main ne