Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Yug Purush]

I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.

 

[LightingEel]

Update bhai..

 

[Yug Purush]

Update-73​

... ki tabhi Jafar ke jo dost waha bagal me pade-pade aankh band kiye apna sharir sahla rahe the… unme se ek ne mujhe peechhe ki oor dhakka maara, Jafar ko maarne ke chakkar me main ekdum kinaare par tha aur dhakka lagte hee main peechhe hua... Par peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi, peechhe toh seedhiya thi...

Isliye is baar...... main seedhiyo se gulati khate hue neeche girne laga… pahli baar jab main seedhiyo se neeche gira tha tab sirf meri gardan ka pichhla bhag aur peeth hee chhili thi, lekin abki baar… ? abki baar....main gira hee sar ke bal tha aur fir seedhiyo ke nukile bhag se apna sar takrate hue teji se neeche ghisatne laga. Beech me ek jagah rukne ke prayas me maine railing ko pakadna chaha aur apna hath railing ki taraf badhaya... Jisse main thoda tirchha hua aur railings me hath takrate hue ek jagah railing ko pakad kar main ruk gaya.


"Hath me maar harami, bhatti ke..."

par agle hee pal,Jafar ke wo do dost jo shuru se lekar abhi tak ladayi me shaamil the... Wo ab uth khade hue the... Unhone mere hath ko apne juto se dabaya, kuchla aur tab tak masla jab tak maine railings ss apna hath nahi hata liya.


Fir unhone mujhe barabar seedhiyo par litaya aur ek ne kaskar ek laat mere thobde me maara toh wahi dusre ne mujhe fir se neeche dhakel diya... Jisse abki main seedhiyo par roll karte hue neeche girne laga... Is dauran seedhiyo par roll karte hue mere sharir ka ek bhi bhag aisa nahi bacha tha jo seedhiyo se na takraya ho… main kabhi ek taraf ki deewar se takrata toh kabhi seddhiyo se aur neeche girte tak me mere pran nikalne lage… sath me khoon bhi. Pata nahi kaha se.. Par meri shirt me khoon ke nishan the aur ye nishan har second me dugune hue jaa rahe the. Shayad mera chehra bhi khoon se san chuka tha… mere peechhe Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se railings ke sahare mujhe maarne neeche aaye…. Jafar shayad behosh ho gaya tha aur wahi par upar pada hua tha, jaha maine uska sar farsh par patak -patak kar fod diya tha


“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola aur main neeche khoon se sana hua past tha…. ab mujhme hilne tak ki himmat nahi thi… isliye maine un dono ko ek aakhiri baar dekha aur bina koyi harkat kiye sirf aur sirf aate hue dekhta raha....


Main abki baar seedhiyo se neeche farsh par jab gira tha toh sar ke bal gira tha… aur mera sar itni jor se takraya tha ki dhamm ki aawaz kuch door tak gunj uthi thi, ya fir sirf mere kaan itne jor se baje the... Waha neeche thodi door me maujood ladke-ladkiyo me se turant kuch log Saxsena ke cabin me ghuse.... jaha se turant hee 2-3 teacher nikle… baki ke teachers lagta hai ab bhi lunch karne bahar hotel me gaye the..?? ya fir Compressor ki tej aawaz ki vazah in sabse anjaan neeche wale ground ke paas bane staff room me mast A.C. ki hawa kha kar ek -dusre se batiya rahe the.. Unhe bhanak tak nahi thi ki unke peeth pichhe school me kitna bada kaand ho chuka tha.



Khair Saxsena ke cabin se un teachers ke peechhe bio wali mam bhi nikli aur unke peechhe -peechhe Ved aur Mini bhi…. Tab tak Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se utar kar neeche mere paas pahuch chuke the… unhone sidhe..khulla... teachers ko dhamkaya ki yadi wo dono beech me aaye toh…. wo un dono ki bhi maa chod denge… teacher naye naye the… dar gaye saale aur waha se door jakar kisi ko phone karne lage… shayad Saxsena ko ya fir police ko… lekin waha Ved bhi tha aur mujhe neeche lahuluhan pada dekh bina kuch soche samjhe wo dauda.... shayad mujhe khoon me sana dekh use Ranjan ki dead body ki yaad aa gayi thi…


"Madarrr...chodo..tum sabki maa chod dalu..."wo daudte hue aaya aur abhi -abhi neeche utre Jafar ke dosto par toot pada...


Itni der me thak toh Jafar ke dost bhi chuke the aur kuch Ved ka gussa bhi tha… jiski vazah se Ved un dono ko wahi gira kar kutto ki tarah maarne laga…. Jafar ke dosto ko neeche girakar tarike se maarne ke liye Ved ne turant apna chamde ka belt nikala aur usi samay do-teen purane teacher… jaise ki Bhagwan Das Gupta , Bulla ityadi waha main gate se school ke andar dakhil hue aur saamne ka nazara dekh Bulla light ki speed se palak jhapakte hee Ved ke paas bahut jaldi pahuch gaya aur uska belt chheen kar use un do ladko se alag kiya…. Thodi der baad Saxsena ji bhi waha gand me phone lagaye... I mean.. Kaan me phone lagaye pahuche aur saamne ki haalat dekh turant kisi ko call kiya jaur thodi hee der baad neeche pade -pade mujhe siren ki aawaz sunayi di....


Bio wali mam… ek taraf jaha sanitizer se kapda bhigo kar mera sar pochh rahi thi aur wahi Ved mere paas baitha mujhe dekh raha tha….

“mam, ye marega toh nahi naa…”Ved ne bio wali se puchha….

“nahi... be…”maine jawab diya

Bio wali mam ne eyebrow ke paas jaha mera matha foota tha waha cotton lagakar halka dabaye hue thi…

“Ved ghhaaatee khhholo…”Bio wali mam boli… aur badi hee ajeeb aawaz me boli,

“aawaz… aapki...aise.....kaise…” maine bio wali mam se puchha…

“sore throat since morning.”wo boli..


Aur ye sunne ke baad main apna chhati pakad kar wahi zameen me pade-pade jor se agal bagal dolte hue hasne laga… is dauran saans thik se naa le paane ke kaaran mujhe khasi bhi hui aur laar ke sath chehre se tapakta hue khoon ka mixture mere khasne ke kaaran bio wali mam ke chehre par pada... Kyunki wo thik mere face ki saamne aur bilkul mere paas thi. par meri hansi fir bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur naa hee meri khaansi. Paagl ho gaya kya main...?


Tabhi kisi ne upar seedhiyo se Jafar ke liye aawaz di aur Jafar ka naam sunte hee bio wali mam,gaand utha ke seedhiyo ki taraf bhag khadi hui. Ambulance se stretcher lekar do aadmiyo ne mujhe stretcher par litaya aur mere sath Gupta ji ko ambulance me bheja… Gupta ji aage baithe aur Ved mere sath ambulance me peechhe baitha , peechhe jo log mujhe stretcher me uthakar laye the wo dono bhi baithe the aur unme se ek cotton ek jagah mere mathe par rakhkar mere sar ko dabaye hue tha aur dusara dusre cotton se mere chehre se khoon saaf kar raha tha.


“tu hasa kyu tha…”Ved mujhse puchha.. “jab Bio wali ne sore throat kaha toh…”

Jis-se ek baar main fir hasne laga….

“bata na… mujhe bhi hasna hai… dimag chuda hai mera pura us din se… please… bata na bhai…”

“wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”


Ye sunkar pahle Ved halka sa muskuraya lekin jab mujhe stretcher par utha ke laane wale hasne lage toh Ved apni hasi nahi rok paya aur unke sath main bhi hasa …. Jor se… khaste hue.... Muh se khoon fekte hue.

“itne dino me ab jake achchha lag raha hai, kuch”Ved bola “neeche main jab un dono ko maar raha tha toh aisa lag raha tha jaise Ranjan ke qatil ko maar raha hu… ekdum sukoon sa mila unhe maarne ke baad… ab chahe toh school se suspend kar de bhosdi wale…. Koyi fikar nahi”

“Gupta ji aage baithe hai… tu unhe patane ka jugad jama… kuch nahi hoga…”

“kamal hai...lawda tu bhi. sochta kaha se hai be... Ye sab"

"As i said earlier, If Deception is an Art, then I...AM...THE... FUCKING... ARTIST"

"… just don’t die before me…”

“le... chus fir….”
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“Pee-peep… Pee-peep…”Ved bike chalate hue ab bhi muh se aawaz nikal kar bakchodi kiye jaa raha tha aur jab se rewa pahuche the… tab se kuch jyada hee pee-peep kar raha tha.

“abey, road me koyi nahi hai… ab kise pee-peep kar raha hai..”

“Oscar level ki acting performance toh deni padegi na bhai… koyi ho chahe na ho… chahe hazar log dekh rahe ho ya fir koyi ek bhi nahi… ek artist hone ka kartvya toh nibhana padega na warna fans kya kahenge…”

“tu kis chiz ka artist hai be…..”

“lawde ka…. Moot-te hue painting bana deta hu main… kal raat hee teri painting banayi thi moot-te hue…”

“ye kya hai be….. rok toh…”maine Ved ko Vindhyancha Society ke paas rukwaya, jaha Vindhya Hospital tha aur kisi jamane me main yaha Riya ki mom se milne aaya tha... Jaha se Riya Rose mujhe fir Starbeans lekar gayi thi...

“kya hai…”

“ye Vindhayanchal me ye kya khul gaya… ye kahe ki dukan hai… kasayi khana lag raha ye toh mujhe…. The Sword That Killed….? Sahi hai , aajkal Rewa bhi Hollywood ho ja raha hai.. kasayi khane ka aisa English naam… khair mujhe kya main toh vegetarian hu…”

“museum hai be … chodu…”Ved kohni se mere pet me maarte hue bola… “last year khula hai ye… yaha Rewa Riyasat ke sabhi rajao ki talwar ke bare me info hai… ki kiski talwar kitni badi thi, kitni bhari thi, un talwaro se kisko-kisko niptaya gaya… kuch original hai toh kuch unki exact copy . tum toh lawda 2 saal se ghar hee nahi aaye aur iske pahle aaya bhi toh sirf ghuse rah gaya ghar me. isliye maloom nahi tujhe…”

“toh museum subtitle likhna chahiye na main title ke neeche… waise naam badhiya hai... The Sword That Killed.... aaunga kisi din…. le gadi Big-Bang ki taraf ghuma de…”



Main Vindhya Hospital ke samne se jab gujra to gate ke andar us jagah ko dekhne laga... Jab main Riya ki maa ke liye fruits lene baahar aaya tha,lekin paisa naa hone ki vajah se yahi uljhan me tha..tab pichhe se Riya aayi thi. Jaha mere hath -pair ke sath mere aankh tak me jhunjhuni chadh gayi thi... Saala 10 saal beet gaye usko, samay bhi bada jatil hai.. 10 saal beete yaa 100 saal... Kam hee lagta hai. Ummid to minus me hai,par yadi abhiye isi hospital ke andar se Riya Rose nikal jaaye toh...?? Wo bhi toh doctor ban gayi hogi ab tak.
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P.S.1: jaha ladayi hui yaani upar..waha sirf 11th, 12 th ki class lagti hai.. Pahle maine bataya hai starting me hee. Isliye tamash dekhne wale sirf 11th, 12 th ke the.

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

P.S. fir jab Atharva ne jab Jafar & Co ko maarna chalu kiya to Jafar ke dost kyun nahi aaye..?? Kyunki jaise hee khoon kaa aagman hua khud jafar ka ek dost jo atharva ko pakde hue tha.. Wo hee atharva ko chhodkar fati me nikal liya..fir naye kaha se aayenge, jo shuru se hee nahi the..jab ladayi normal thi.

Aur intezar rahegaa next update ka vo bhi jabar wale.

Waiting

abhi tak update nahi aaya Yug Purush saheb

Yug Purush update kab ayega

 

[Sasha!]

Update-73​

Isliye is baar...... main seedhiyo se gulati khate hue neeche girne laga… pahli baar jab main seedhiyo se neeche gira tha tab sirf meri gardan ka pichhla bhag aur peeth hee chhili thi, lekin abki baar… ? abki baar....main gira hee sar ke bal tha aur fir seedhiyo ke nukile bhag se apna sar takrate hue teji se neeche ghisatne laga. Beech me ek jagah rukne ke prayas me maine railing ko pakadna chaha aur apna hath railing ki taraf badhaya... Jisse main thoda tirchha hua aur railings me hath takrate hue ek jagah railing ko pakad kar main ruk gaya.


"Hath me maar harami, bhatti ke..."

par agle hee pal,Jafar ke wo do dost jo shuru se lekar abhi tak ladayi me shaamil the... Wo ab uth khade hue the... Unhone mere hath ko apne juto se dabaya, kuchla aur tab tak masla jab tak maine railings ss apna hath nahi hata liya.


Fir unhone mujhe barabar seedhiyo par litaya aur ek ne kaskar ek laat mere thobde me maara toh wahi dusre ne mujhe fir se neeche dhakel diya... Jisse abki main seedhiyo par roll karte hue neeche girne laga... Is dauran seedhiyo par roll karte hue mere sharir ka ek bhi bhag aisa nahi bacha tha jo seedhiyo se na takraya ho… main kabhi ek taraf ki deewar se takrata toh kabhi seddhiyo se aur neeche girte tak me mere pran nikalne lage… sath me khoon bhi. Pata nahi kaha se.. Par meri shirt me khoon ke nishan the aur ye nishan har second me dugune hue jaa rahe the. Shayad mera chehra bhi khoon se san chuka tha… mere peechhe Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se railings ke sahare mujhe maarne neeche aaye…. Jafar shayad behosh ho gaya tha aur wahi par upar pada hua tha, jaha maine uska sar farsh par patak -patak kar fod diya tha


“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola aur main neeche khoon se sana hua past tha…. ab mujhme hilne tak ki himmat nahi thi… isliye maine un dono ko ek aakhiri baar dekha aur bina koyi harkat kiye sirf aur sirf aate hue dekhta raha....


Main abki baar seedhiyo se neeche farsh par jab gira tha toh sar ke bal gira tha… aur mera sar itni jor se takraya tha ki dhamm ki aawaz kuch door tak gunj uthi thi, ya fir sirf mere kaan itne jor se baje the... Waha neeche thodi door me maujood ladke-ladkiyo me se turant kuch log Saxsena ke cabin me ghuse.... jaha se turant hee 2-3 teacher nikle… baki ke teachers lagta hai ab bhi lunch karne bahar hotel me gaye the..?? ya fir Compressor ki tej aawaz ki vazah in sabse anjaan neeche wale ground ke paas bane staff room me mast A.C. ki hawa kha kar ek -dusre se batiya rahe the.. Unhe bhanak tak nahi thi ki unke peeth pichhe school me kitna bada kaand ho chuka tha.



Khair Saxsena ke cabin se un teachers ke peechhe bio wali mam bhi nikli aur unke peechhe -peechhe Ved aur Mini bhi…. Tab tak Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se utar kar neeche mere paas pahuch chuke the… unhone sidhe..khulla... teachers ko dhamkaya ki yadi wo dono beech me aaye toh…. wo un dono ki bhi maa chod denge… teacher naye naye the… dar gaye saale aur waha se door jakar kisi ko phone karne lage… shayad Saxsena ko ya fir police ko… lekin waha Ved bhi tha aur mujhe neeche lahuluhan pada dekh bina kuch soche samjhe wo dauda.... shayad mujhe khoon me sana dekh use Ranjan ki dead body ki yaad aa gayi thi…


"Madarrr...chodo..tum sabki maa chod dalu..."wo daudte hue aaya aur abhi -abhi neeche utre Jafar ke dosto par toot pada...


Itni der me thak toh Jafar ke dost bhi chuke the aur kuch Ved ka gussa bhi tha… jiski vazah se Ved un dono ko wahi gira kar kutto ki tarah maarne laga…. Jafar ke dosto ko neeche girakar tarike se maarne ke liye Ved ne turant apna chamde ka belt nikala aur usi samay do-teen purane teacher… jaise ki Bhagwan Das Gupta , Bulla ityadi waha main gate se school ke andar dakhil hue aur saamne ka nazara dekh Bulla light ki speed se palak jhapakte hee Ved ke paas bahut jaldi pahuch gaya aur uska belt chheen kar use un do ladko se alag kiya…. Thodi der baad Saxsena ji bhi waha gand me phone lagaye... I mean.. Kaan me phone lagaye pahuche aur saamne ki haalat dekh turant kisi ko call kiya jaur thodi hee der baad neeche pade -pade mujhe siren ki aawaz sunayi di....


Bio wali mam… ek taraf jaha sanitizer se kapda bhigo kar mera sar pochh rahi thi aur wahi Ved mere paas baitha mujhe dekh raha tha….

“mam, ye marega toh nahi naa…”Ved ne bio wali se puchha….

“nahi... be…”maine jawab diya

Bio wali mam ne eyebrow ke paas jaha mera matha foota tha waha cotton lagakar halka dabaye hue thi…

“Ved ghhaaatee khhholo…”Bio wali mam boli… aur badi hee ajeeb aawaz me boli,

“aawaz… aapki...aise.....kaise…” maine bio wali mam se puchha…

“sore throat since morning.”wo boli..


Aur ye sunne ke baad main apna chhati pakad kar wahi zameen me pade-pade jor se agal bagal dolte hue hasne laga… is dauran saans thik se naa le paane ke kaaran mujhe khasi bhi hui aur laar ke sath chehre se tapakta hue khoon ka mixture mere khasne ke kaaran bio wali mam ke chehre par pada... Kyunki wo thik mere face ki saamne aur bilkul mere paas thi. par meri hansi fir bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur naa hee meri khaansi. Paagl ho gaya kya main...?


Tabhi kisi ne upar seedhiyo se Jafar ke liye aawaz di aur Jafar ka naam sunte hee bio wali mam,gaand utha ke seedhiyo ki taraf bhag khadi hui. Ambulance se stretcher lekar do aadmiyo ne mujhe stretcher par litaya aur mere sath Gupta ji ko ambulance me bheja… Gupta ji aage baithe aur Ved mere sath ambulance me peechhe baitha , peechhe jo log mujhe stretcher me uthakar laye the wo dono bhi baithe the aur unme se ek cotton ek jagah mere mathe par rakhkar mere sar ko dabaye hue tha aur dusara dusre cotton se mere chehre se khoon saaf kar raha tha.


“tu hasa kyu tha…”Ved mujhse puchha.. “jab Bio wali ne sore throat kaha toh…”

Jis-se ek baar main fir hasne laga….

“bata na… mujhe bhi hasna hai… dimag chuda hai mera pura us din se… please… bata na bhai…”

“wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”


Ye sunkar pahle Ved halka sa muskuraya lekin jab mujhe stretcher par utha ke laane wale hasne lage toh Ved apni hasi nahi rok paya aur unke sath main bhi hasa …. Jor se… khaste hue.... Muh se khoon fekte hue.

“itne dino me ab jake achchha lag raha hai, kuch”Ved bola “neeche main jab un dono ko maar raha tha toh aisa lag raha tha jaise Ranjan ke qatil ko maar raha hu… ekdum sukoon sa mila unhe maarne ke baad… ab chahe toh school se suspend kar de bhosdi wale…. Koyi fikar nahi”

“Gupta ji aage baithe hai… tu unhe patane ka jugad jama… kuch nahi hoga…”

“kamal hai...lawda tu bhi. sochta kaha se hai be... Ye sab"

"As i said earlier, If Deception is an Art, then I...AM...THE... FUCKING... ARTIST"

"… just don’t die before me…”

“le... chus fir….”
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“Pee-peep… Pee-peep…”Ved bike chalate hue ab bhi muh se aawaz nikal kar bakchodi kiye jaa raha tha aur jab se rewa pahuche the… tab se kuch jyada hee pee-peep kar raha tha.

“abey, road me koyi nahi hai… ab kise pee-peep kar raha hai..”

“Oscar level ki acting performance toh deni padegi na bhai… koyi ho chahe na ho… chahe hazar log dekh rahe ho ya fir koyi ek bhi nahi… ek artist hone ka kartvya toh nibhana padega na warna fans kya kahenge…”

“tu kis chiz ka artist hai be…..”

“lawde ka…. Moot-te hue painting bana deta hu main… kal raat hee teri painting banayi thi moot-te hue…”

“ye kya hai be….. rok toh…”maine Ved ko Vindhyancha Society ke paas rukwaya, jaha Vindhya Hospital tha aur kisi jamane me main yaha Riya ki mom se milne aaya tha... Jaha se Riya Rose mujhe fir Starbeans lekar gayi thi...

“kya hai…”

“ye Vindhayanchal me ye kya khul gaya… ye kahe ki dukan hai… kasayi khana lag raha ye toh mujhe…. The Sword That Killed….? Sahi hai , aajkal Rewa bhi Hollywood ho ja raha hai.. kasayi khane ka aisa English naam… khair mujhe kya main toh vegetarian hu…”

“museum hai be … chodu…”Ved kohni se mere pet me maarte hue bola… “last year khula hai ye… yaha Rewa Riyasat ke sabhi rajao ki talwar ke bare me info hai… ki kiski talwar kitni badi thi, kitni bhari thi, un talwaro se kisko-kisko niptaya gaya… kuch original hai toh kuch unki exact copy . tum toh lawda 2 saal se ghar hee nahi aaye aur iske pahle aaya bhi toh sirf ghuse rah gaya ghar me. isliye maloom nahi tujhe…”

“toh museum subtitle likhna chahiye na main title ke neeche… waise naam badhiya hai... The Sword That Killed.... aaunga kisi din…. le gadi Big-Bang ki taraf ghuma de…”



Main Vindhya Hospital ke samne se jab gujra to gate ke andar us jagah ko dekhne laga... Jab main Riya ki maa ke liye fruits lene baahar aaya tha,lekin paisa naa hone ki vajah se yahi uljhan me tha..tab pichhe se Riya aayi thi. Jaha mere hath -pair ke sath mere aankh tak me jhunjhuni chadh gayi thi... Saala 10 saal beet gaye usko, samay bhi bada jatil hai.. 10 saal beete yaa 100 saal... Kam hee lagta hai. Ummid to minus me hai,par yadi abhiye isi hospital ke andar se Riya Rose nikal jaaye toh...?? Wo bhi toh doctor ban gayi hogi ab tak.
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P.S.1: jaha ladayi hui yaani upar..waha sirf 11th, 12 th ki class lagti hai.. Pahle maine bataya hai starting me hee. Isliye tamash dekhne wale sirf 11th, 12 th ke the.

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

P.S. fir jab Atharva ne jab Jafar & Co ko maarna chalu kiya to Jafar ke dost kyun nahi aaye..?? Kyunki jaise hee khoon kaa aagman hua khud jafar ka ek dost jo atharva ko pakde hue tha.. Wo hee atharva ko chhodkar fati me nikal liya..fir naye kaha se aayenge, jo shuru se hee nahi the..jab ladayi normal thi.

Bio wali mam to chha gayi

Pran jaye par humor na jaye.

wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”

Sach me siri se girne ke scene padh ke mujhe apna experience yaad aa gaya

Great update

 

[mashish]

Update-73​

Isliye is baar...... main seedhiyo se gulati khate hue neeche girne laga… pahli baar jab main seedhiyo se neeche gira tha tab sirf meri gardan ka pichhla bhag aur peeth hee chhili thi, lekin abki baar… ? abki baar....main gira hee sar ke bal tha aur fir seedhiyo ke nukile bhag se apna sar takrate hue teji se neeche ghisatne laga. Beech me ek jagah rukne ke prayas me maine railing ko pakadna chaha aur apna hath railing ki taraf badhaya... Jisse main thoda tirchha hua aur railings me hath takrate hue ek jagah railing ko pakad kar main ruk gaya.


"Hath me maar harami, bhatti ke..."

par agle hee pal,Jafar ke wo do dost jo shuru se lekar abhi tak ladayi me shaamil the... Wo ab uth khade hue the... Unhone mere hath ko apne juto se dabaya, kuchla aur tab tak masla jab tak maine railings ss apna hath nahi hata liya.


Fir unhone mujhe barabar seedhiyo par litaya aur ek ne kaskar ek laat mere thobde me maara toh wahi dusre ne mujhe fir se neeche dhakel diya... Jisse abki main seedhiyo par roll karte hue neeche girne laga... Is dauran seedhiyo par roll karte hue mere sharir ka ek bhi bhag aisa nahi bacha tha jo seedhiyo se na takraya ho… main kabhi ek taraf ki deewar se takrata toh kabhi seddhiyo se aur neeche girte tak me mere pran nikalne lage… sath me khoon bhi. Pata nahi kaha se.. Par meri shirt me khoon ke nishan the aur ye nishan har second me dugune hue jaa rahe the. Shayad mera chehra bhi khoon se san chuka tha… mere peechhe Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se railings ke sahare mujhe maarne neeche aaye…. Jafar shayad behosh ho gaya tha aur wahi par upar pada hua tha, jaha maine uska sar farsh par patak -patak kar fod diya tha


“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola aur main neeche khoon se sana hua past tha…. ab mujhme hilne tak ki himmat nahi thi… isliye maine un dono ko ek aakhiri baar dekha aur bina koyi harkat kiye sirf aur sirf aate hue dekhta raha....


Main abki baar seedhiyo se neeche farsh par jab gira tha toh sar ke bal gira tha… aur mera sar itni jor se takraya tha ki dhamm ki aawaz kuch door tak gunj uthi thi, ya fir sirf mere kaan itne jor se baje the... Waha neeche thodi door me maujood ladke-ladkiyo me se turant kuch log Saxsena ke cabin me ghuse.... jaha se turant hee 2-3 teacher nikle… baki ke teachers lagta hai ab bhi lunch karne bahar hotel me gaye the..?? ya fir Compressor ki tej aawaz ki vazah in sabse anjaan neeche wale ground ke paas bane staff room me mast A.C. ki hawa kha kar ek -dusre se batiya rahe the.. Unhe bhanak tak nahi thi ki unke peeth pichhe school me kitna bada kaand ho chuka tha.



Khair Saxsena ke cabin se un teachers ke peechhe bio wali mam bhi nikli aur unke peechhe -peechhe Ved aur Mini bhi…. Tab tak Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se utar kar neeche mere paas pahuch chuke the… unhone sidhe..khulla... teachers ko dhamkaya ki yadi wo dono beech me aaye toh…. wo un dono ki bhi maa chod denge… teacher naye naye the… dar gaye saale aur waha se door jakar kisi ko phone karne lage… shayad Saxsena ko ya fir police ko… lekin waha Ved bhi tha aur mujhe neeche lahuluhan pada dekh bina kuch soche samjhe wo dauda.... shayad mujhe khoon me sana dekh use Ranjan ki dead body ki yaad aa gayi thi…


"Madarrr...chodo..tum sabki maa chod dalu..."wo daudte hue aaya aur abhi -abhi neeche utre Jafar ke dosto par toot pada...


Itni der me thak toh Jafar ke dost bhi chuke the aur kuch Ved ka gussa bhi tha… jiski vazah se Ved un dono ko wahi gira kar kutto ki tarah maarne laga…. Jafar ke dosto ko neeche girakar tarike se maarne ke liye Ved ne turant apna chamde ka belt nikala aur usi samay do-teen purane teacher… jaise ki Bhagwan Das Gupta , Bulla ityadi waha main gate se school ke andar dakhil hue aur saamne ka nazara dekh Bulla light ki speed se palak jhapakte hee Ved ke paas bahut jaldi pahuch gaya aur uska belt chheen kar use un do ladko se alag kiya…. Thodi der baad Saxsena ji bhi waha gand me phone lagaye... I mean.. Kaan me phone lagaye pahuche aur saamne ki haalat dekh turant kisi ko call kiya jaur thodi hee der baad neeche pade -pade mujhe siren ki aawaz sunayi di....


Bio wali mam… ek taraf jaha sanitizer se kapda bhigo kar mera sar pochh rahi thi aur wahi Ved mere paas baitha mujhe dekh raha tha….

“mam, ye marega toh nahi naa…”Ved ne bio wali se puchha….

“nahi... be…”maine jawab diya

Bio wali mam ne eyebrow ke paas jaha mera matha foota tha waha cotton lagakar halka dabaye hue thi…

“Ved ghhaaatee khhholo…”Bio wali mam boli… aur badi hee ajeeb aawaz me boli,

“aawaz… aapki...aise.....kaise…” maine bio wali mam se puchha…

“sore throat since morning.”wo boli..


Aur ye sunne ke baad main apna chhati pakad kar wahi zameen me pade-pade jor se agal bagal dolte hue hasne laga… is dauran saans thik se naa le paane ke kaaran mujhe khasi bhi hui aur laar ke sath chehre se tapakta hue khoon ka mixture mere khasne ke kaaran bio wali mam ke chehre par pada... Kyunki wo thik mere face ki saamne aur bilkul mere paas thi. par meri hansi fir bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur naa hee meri khaansi. Paagl ho gaya kya main...?


Tabhi kisi ne upar seedhiyo se Jafar ke liye aawaz di aur Jafar ka naam sunte hee bio wali mam,gaand utha ke seedhiyo ki taraf bhag khadi hui. Ambulance se stretcher lekar do aadmiyo ne mujhe stretcher par litaya aur mere sath Gupta ji ko ambulance me bheja… Gupta ji aage baithe aur Ved mere sath ambulance me peechhe baitha , peechhe jo log mujhe stretcher me uthakar laye the wo dono bhi baithe the aur unme se ek cotton ek jagah mere mathe par rakhkar mere sar ko dabaye hue tha aur dusara dusre cotton se mere chehre se khoon saaf kar raha tha.


“tu hasa kyu tha…”Ved mujhse puchha.. “jab Bio wali ne sore throat kaha toh…”

Jis-se ek baar main fir hasne laga….

“bata na… mujhe bhi hasna hai… dimag chuda hai mera pura us din se… please… bata na bhai…”

“wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”


Ye sunkar pahle Ved halka sa muskuraya lekin jab mujhe stretcher par utha ke laane wale hasne lage toh Ved apni hasi nahi rok paya aur unke sath main bhi hasa …. Jor se… khaste hue.... Muh se khoon fekte hue.

“itne dino me ab jake achchha lag raha hai, kuch”Ved bola “neeche main jab un dono ko maar raha tha toh aisa lag raha tha jaise Ranjan ke qatil ko maar raha hu… ekdum sukoon sa mila unhe maarne ke baad… ab chahe toh school se suspend kar de bhosdi wale…. Koyi fikar nahi”

“Gupta ji aage baithe hai… tu unhe patane ka jugad jama… kuch nahi hoga…”

“kamal hai...lawda tu bhi. sochta kaha se hai be... Ye sab"

"As i said earlier, If Deception is an Art, then I...AM...THE... FUCKING... ARTIST"

"… just don’t die before me…”

“le... chus fir….”
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“Pee-peep… Pee-peep…”Ved bike chalate hue ab bhi muh se aawaz nikal kar bakchodi kiye jaa raha tha aur jab se rewa pahuche the… tab se kuch jyada hee pee-peep kar raha tha.

“abey, road me koyi nahi hai… ab kise pee-peep kar raha hai..”

“Oscar level ki acting performance toh deni padegi na bhai… koyi ho chahe na ho… chahe hazar log dekh rahe ho ya fir koyi ek bhi nahi… ek artist hone ka kartvya toh nibhana padega na warna fans kya kahenge…”

“tu kis chiz ka artist hai be…..”

“lawde ka…. Moot-te hue painting bana deta hu main… kal raat hee teri painting banayi thi moot-te hue…”

“ye kya hai be….. rok toh…”maine Ved ko Vindhyancha Society ke paas rukwaya, jaha Vindhya Hospital tha aur kisi jamane me main yaha Riya ki mom se milne aaya tha... Jaha se Riya Rose mujhe fir Starbeans lekar gayi thi...

“kya hai…”

“ye Vindhayanchal me ye kya khul gaya… ye kahe ki dukan hai… kasayi khana lag raha ye toh mujhe…. The Sword That Killed….? Sahi hai , aajkal Rewa bhi Hollywood ho ja raha hai.. kasayi khane ka aisa English naam… khair mujhe kya main toh vegetarian hu…”

“museum hai be … chodu…”Ved kohni se mere pet me maarte hue bola… “last year khula hai ye… yaha Rewa Riyasat ke sabhi rajao ki talwar ke bare me info hai… ki kiski talwar kitni badi thi, kitni bhari thi, un talwaro se kisko-kisko niptaya gaya… kuch original hai toh kuch unki exact copy . tum toh lawda 2 saal se ghar hee nahi aaye aur iske pahle aaya bhi toh sirf ghuse rah gaya ghar me. isliye maloom nahi tujhe…”

“toh museum subtitle likhna chahiye na main title ke neeche… waise naam badhiya hai... The Sword That Killed.... aaunga kisi din…. le gadi Big-Bang ki taraf ghuma de…”



Main Vindhya Hospital ke samne se jab gujra to gate ke andar us jagah ko dekhne laga... Jab main Riya ki maa ke liye fruits lene baahar aaya tha,lekin paisa naa hone ki vajah se yahi uljhan me tha..tab pichhe se Riya aayi thi. Jaha mere hath -pair ke sath mere aankh tak me jhunjhuni chadh gayi thi... Saala 10 saal beet gaye usko, samay bhi bada jatil hai.. 10 saal beete yaa 100 saal... Kam hee lagta hai. Ummid to minus me hai,par yadi abhiye isi hospital ke andar se Riya Rose nikal jaaye toh...?? Wo bhi toh doctor ban gayi hogi ab tak.
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P.S.1: jaha ladayi hui yaani upar..waha sirf 11th, 12 th ki class lagti hai.. Pahle maine bataya hai starting me hee. Isliye tamash dekhne wale sirf 11th, 12 th ke the.

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

P.S. fir jab Atharva ne jab Jafar & Co ko maarna chalu kiya to Jafar ke dost kyun nahi aaye..?? Kyunki jaise hee khoon kaa aagman hua khud jafar ka ek dost jo atharva ko pakde hue tha.. Wo hee atharva ko chhodkar fati me nikal liya..fir naye kaha se aayenge, jo shuru se hee nahi the..jab ladayi normal thi.

super se bhi update

 

[Naina]

Update-73​

Isliye is baar...... main seedhiyo se gulati khate hue neeche girne laga… pahli baar jab main seedhiyo se neeche gira tha tab sirf meri gardan ka pichhla bhag aur peeth hee chhili thi, lekin abki baar… ? abki baar....main gira hee sar ke bal tha aur fir seedhiyo ke nukile bhag se apna sar takrate hue teji se neeche ghisatne laga. Beech me ek jagah rukne ke prayas me maine railing ko pakadna chaha aur apna hath railing ki taraf badhaya... Jisse main thoda tirchha hua aur railings me hath takrate hue ek jagah railing ko pakad kar main ruk gaya.


"Hath me maar harami, bhatti ke..."

par agle hee pal,Jafar ke wo do dost jo shuru se lekar abhi tak ladayi me shaamil the... Wo ab uth khade hue the... Unhone mere hath ko apne juto se dabaya, kuchla aur tab tak masla jab tak maine railings ss apna hath nahi hata liya.


Fir unhone mujhe barabar seedhiyo par litaya aur ek ne kaskar ek laat mere thobde me maara toh wahi dusre ne mujhe fir se neeche dhakel diya... Jisse abki main seedhiyo par roll karte hue neeche girne laga... Is dauran seedhiyo par roll karte hue mere sharir ka ek bhi bhag aisa nahi bacha tha jo seedhiyo se na takraya ho… main kabhi ek taraf ki deewar se takrata toh kabhi seddhiyo se aur neeche girte tak me mere pran nikalne lage… sath me khoon bhi. Pata nahi kaha se.. Par meri shirt me khoon ke nishan the aur ye nishan har second me dugune hue jaa rahe the. Shayad mera chehra bhi khoon se san chuka tha… mere peechhe Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se railings ke sahare mujhe maarne neeche aaye…. Jafar shayad behosh ho gaya tha aur wahi par upar pada hua tha, jaha maine uska sar farsh par patak -patak kar fod diya tha


“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola aur main neeche khoon se sana hua past tha…. ab mujhme hilne tak ki himmat nahi thi… isliye maine un dono ko ek aakhiri baar dekha aur bina koyi harkat kiye sirf aur sirf aate hue dekhta raha....


Main abki baar seedhiyo se neeche farsh par jab gira tha toh sar ke bal gira tha… aur mera sar itni jor se takraya tha ki dhamm ki aawaz kuch door tak gunj uthi thi, ya fir sirf mere kaan itne jor se baje the... Waha neeche thodi door me maujood ladke-ladkiyo me se turant kuch log Saxsena ke cabin me ghuse.... jaha se turant hee 2-3 teacher nikle… baki ke teachers lagta hai ab bhi lunch karne bahar hotel me gaye the..?? ya fir Compressor ki tej aawaz ki vazah in sabse anjaan neeche wale ground ke paas bane staff room me mast A.C. ki hawa kha kar ek -dusre se batiya rahe the.. Unhe bhanak tak nahi thi ki unke peeth pichhe school me kitna bada kaand ho chuka tha.



Khair Saxsena ke cabin se un teachers ke peechhe bio wali mam bhi nikli aur unke peechhe -peechhe Ved aur Mini bhi…. Tab tak Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se utar kar neeche mere paas pahuch chuke the… unhone sidhe..khulla... teachers ko dhamkaya ki yadi wo dono beech me aaye toh…. wo un dono ki bhi maa chod denge… teacher naye naye the… dar gaye saale aur waha se door jakar kisi ko phone karne lage… shayad Saxsena ko ya fir police ko… lekin waha Ved bhi tha aur mujhe neeche lahuluhan pada dekh bina kuch soche samjhe wo dauda.... shayad mujhe khoon me sana dekh use Ranjan ki dead body ki yaad aa gayi thi…


"Madarrr...chodo..tum sabki maa chod dalu..."wo daudte hue aaya aur abhi -abhi neeche utre Jafar ke dosto par toot pada...


Itni der me thak toh Jafar ke dost bhi chuke the aur kuch Ved ka gussa bhi tha… jiski vazah se Ved un dono ko wahi gira kar kutto ki tarah maarne laga…. Jafar ke dosto ko neeche girakar tarike se maarne ke liye Ved ne turant apna chamde ka belt nikala aur usi samay do-teen purane teacher… jaise ki Bhagwan Das Gupta , Bulla ityadi waha main gate se school ke andar dakhil hue aur saamne ka nazara dekh Bulla light ki speed se palak jhapakte hee Ved ke paas bahut jaldi pahuch gaya aur uska belt chheen kar use un do ladko se alag kiya…. Thodi der baad Saxsena ji bhi waha gand me phone lagaye... I mean.. Kaan me phone lagaye pahuche aur saamne ki haalat dekh turant kisi ko call kiya jaur thodi hee der baad neeche pade -pade mujhe siren ki aawaz sunayi di....


Bio wali mam… ek taraf jaha sanitizer se kapda bhigo kar mera sar pochh rahi thi aur wahi Ved mere paas baitha mujhe dekh raha tha….

“mam, ye marega toh nahi naa…”Ved ne bio wali se puchha….

“nahi... be…”maine jawab diya

Bio wali mam ne eyebrow ke paas jaha mera matha foota tha waha cotton lagakar halka dabaye hue thi…

“Ved ghhaaatee khhholo…”Bio wali mam boli… aur badi hee ajeeb aawaz me boli,

“aawaz… aapki...aise.....kaise…” maine bio wali mam se puchha…

“sore throat since morning.”wo boli..


Aur ye sunne ke baad main apna chhati pakad kar wahi zameen me pade-pade jor se agal bagal dolte hue hasne laga… is dauran saans thik se naa le paane ke kaaran mujhe khasi bhi hui aur laar ke sath chehre se tapakta hue khoon ka mixture mere khasne ke kaaran bio wali mam ke chehre par pada... Kyunki wo thik mere face ki saamne aur bilkul mere paas thi. par meri hansi fir bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur naa hee meri khaansi. Paagl ho gaya kya main...?


Tabhi kisi ne upar seedhiyo se Jafar ke liye aawaz di aur Jafar ka naam sunte hee bio wali mam,gaand utha ke seedhiyo ki taraf bhag khadi hui. Ambulance se stretcher lekar do aadmiyo ne mujhe stretcher par litaya aur mere sath Gupta ji ko ambulance me bheja… Gupta ji aage baithe aur Ved mere sath ambulance me peechhe baitha , peechhe jo log mujhe stretcher me uthakar laye the wo dono bhi baithe the aur unme se ek cotton ek jagah mere mathe par rakhkar mere sar ko dabaye hue tha aur dusara dusre cotton se mere chehre se khoon saaf kar raha tha.


“tu hasa kyu tha…”Ved mujhse puchha.. “jab Bio wali ne sore throat kaha toh…”

Jis-se ek baar main fir hasne laga….

“bata na… mujhe bhi hasna hai… dimag chuda hai mera pura us din se… please… bata na bhai…”

“wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”


Ye sunkar pahle Ved halka sa muskuraya lekin jab mujhe stretcher par utha ke laane wale hasne lage toh Ved apni hasi nahi rok paya aur unke sath main bhi hasa …. Jor se… khaste hue.... Muh se khoon fekte hue.

“itne dino me ab jake achchha lag raha hai, kuch”Ved bola “neeche main jab un dono ko maar raha tha toh aisa lag raha tha jaise Ranjan ke qatil ko maar raha hu… ekdum sukoon sa mila unhe maarne ke baad… ab chahe toh school se suspend kar de bhosdi wale…. Koyi fikar nahi”

“Gupta ji aage baithe hai… tu unhe patane ka jugad jama… kuch nahi hoga…”

“kamal hai...lawda tu bhi. sochta kaha se hai be... Ye sab"

"As i said earlier, If Deception is an Art, then I...AM...THE... FUCKING... ARTIST"

"… just don’t die before me…”

“le... chus fir….”
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“Pee-peep… Pee-peep…”Ved bike chalate hue ab bhi muh se aawaz nikal kar bakchodi kiye jaa raha tha aur jab se rewa pahuche the… tab se kuch jyada hee pee-peep kar raha tha.

“abey, road me koyi nahi hai… ab kise pee-peep kar raha hai..”

“Oscar level ki acting performance toh deni padegi na bhai… koyi ho chahe na ho… chahe hazar log dekh rahe ho ya fir koyi ek bhi nahi… ek artist hone ka kartvya toh nibhana padega na warna fans kya kahenge…”

“tu kis chiz ka artist hai be…..”

“lawde ka…. Moot-te hue painting bana deta hu main… kal raat hee teri painting banayi thi moot-te hue…”

“ye kya hai be….. rok toh…”maine Ved ko Vindhyancha Society ke paas rukwaya, jaha Vindhya Hospital tha aur kisi jamane me main yaha Riya ki mom se milne aaya tha... Jaha se Riya Rose mujhe fir Starbeans lekar gayi thi...

“kya hai…”

“ye Vindhayanchal me ye kya khul gaya… ye kahe ki dukan hai… kasayi khana lag raha ye toh mujhe…. The Sword That Killed….? Sahi hai , aajkal Rewa bhi Hollywood ho ja raha hai.. kasayi khane ka aisa English naam… khair mujhe kya main toh vegetarian hu…”

“museum hai be … chodu…”Ved kohni se mere pet me maarte hue bola… “last year khula hai ye… yaha Rewa Riyasat ke sabhi rajao ki talwar ke bare me info hai… ki kiski talwar kitni badi thi, kitni bhari thi, un talwaro se kisko-kisko niptaya gaya… kuch original hai toh kuch unki exact copy . tum toh lawda 2 saal se ghar hee nahi aaye aur iske pahle aaya bhi toh sirf ghuse rah gaya ghar me. isliye maloom nahi tujhe…”

“toh museum subtitle likhna chahiye na main title ke neeche… waise naam badhiya hai... The Sword That Killed.... aaunga kisi din…. le gadi Big-Bang ki taraf ghuma de…”



Main Vindhya Hospital ke samne se jab gujra to gate ke andar us jagah ko dekhne laga... Jab main Riya ki maa ke liye fruits lene baahar aaya tha,lekin paisa naa hone ki vajah se yahi uljhan me tha..tab pichhe se Riya aayi thi. Jaha mere hath -pair ke sath mere aankh tak me jhunjhuni chadh gayi thi... Saala 10 saal beet gaye usko, samay bhi bada jatil hai.. 10 saal beete yaa 100 saal... Kam hee lagta hai. Ummid to minus me hai,par yadi abhiye isi hospital ke andar se Riya Rose nikal jaaye toh...?? Wo bhi toh doctor ban gayi hogi ab tak.
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P.S.1: jaha ladayi hui yaani upar..waha sirf 11th, 12 th ki class lagti hai.. Pahle maine bataya hai starting me hee. Isliye tamash dekhne wale sirf 11th, 12 th ke the.

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

P.S. fir jab Atharva ne jab Jafar & Co ko maarna chalu kiya to Jafar ke dost kyun nahi aaye..?? Kyunki jaise hee khoon kaa aagman hua khud jafar ka ek dost jo atharva ko pakde hue tha.. Wo hee atharva ko chhodkar fati me nikal liya..fir naye kaha se aayenge, jo shuru se hee nahi the..jab ladayi normal thi.

to wohi hua jiska dar tha..... atharva ne un dono ko nazar andaz karke bahot badi galti kar di.... un dono kamino ko bhi mauka mil gaya .. natiza atharva seedhiyo se lukdakta hua sir ke bal niche jaa gira... usne bich mein relling pakad ke khud ko bachane ke ki bhi koshish ki niche ludakne se... par afsos un dono ne milke uske mein lath maarke ushe niche girne par majbur kiya....
lekin sawal ye hai ki wo dono itni jald thik kaise ho gaye... matlab seedhiyo se wo bhi to ludak kar niche gire the na aur sabse badi baat girte waqt atharva ka bajan unpe tha to chhote zyada aayi hogi... phir bhi itni jald thik hoke phir se ladayi mein kud para... Shayad gussa medicine ka kaam kiya ho...

So....... jab atharva had se zyada jakhmi hua aur khoon se lat path tab jaake hosh aaya un teacher aur us sexsehna ko
sidhi si baat hai hai ye sab us Jafar se mile huye hai jab dekha ki mamla hath se nikal jayega to waha aa gaye....

Dono ladko ne sirf naye teachers ko hi daraya yahin prove hai ki gupta bhi mila hua hai inse... warna wo log ved ko aise nhi rokte....
ab is matter mein aur kya hi bolu.... atharva aur ved ko chhod ke sab ke sab doshi hi lage.... students se leke teachers tak..

Well... kya ladka hai... muh se khoon ke chinthe tak nikal gaya phir bhi baaz nahi aata
are pehle thik ho lo phir mazak udate phiro.. udhar ved bhi hansha.... waise uske dil ko bhi sukun mila.....
aur bhala kyun na mile... wo bhi to ushi dard bhare daud se gujar raha tha jis daud se atharva....
lekin jo bhi ho jaise ho....... jo kand hua us din aur jo baatein kahi Jafar ne..... ye evidence hai ki murderer Jafar hi hai.... aur ye baat uske group wale sabhi jaante hai... kisika khoon karna Jafar, mini, madhu, Riya rose, bio wali teacher aur un gundon jaise dosto ke liye koi badi baat nahi..

“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola

Ye log jis tarah se bol rahe hai.... yahi evidence hai ki ye log pehle bhi kayi baar kayi logo ka khoon kar chuke hai...
Agar veda nahi hota to shayad atharva ke sath kuch ho sakta tha us... Kuch bhi se matlab kuch bhi..... seriously injured ya jaan jane ka khatra... Kyunki teachers mein se koi help karne nahi aaya..
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present mein rewa to aa gaya par abhi manjil tak pahuchana baaki hai... yani ki big bang chayi dukan...
Abhi aur waqt shayad story present mein puri tarike se chalne ke liye...
Maybe flashback khatam 2 ya 3 ghatanao ke sath ho....
lekin abhi aur kya baaki reh gaya hai.... Sanjana ne lagbhag baatein karna bandh kar di hai, Riya rose ne dhokha, ranjan nahi raha aur sath hi uske pita bhi, school mein planning tahat atharva ko jaan se maarne ki koshish..... ab itna kuch ho jaane ke baad aur kya bachta hai...

Lekin Jafar ke un mutthi bhar logo se dar gaye kam se kam 70- 80 students

Lekin in sab ke bich ek sabse badi khushi ki baat ye huyi ki..... JAFAR KO MAAR MAAR KE ADHMARA KAR DIYA ATHARVA NE AKELE HI.....
waise jaan se maar deta to kaleje ko thandak mil jaati ki chalo ek to negative kirdaar ka kissa khatam hua story se hi...

Khair....
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Yug Purush

 

[Naina]

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

wah kya bahadur dost the jo khoon ke kuch bund dekhke bhaag nikle

 

[Naina]

ab kuch sawal jawab ho jaye
1) Yug Purush sahab aap bol rahe the ki atharva ke mom dad ko pata nahi ye baat ki atharva apne dono dosto ke sath kya gul khila rahe hai school mein.....
Okay... ye bhi sahi hai
to ye jo kand hua hai kya iske baare mein bhi khabar nahi denge koi uske mom dad ko.... jarur denge....
tab uske mom dad ko pata chalega, Jafar ke sath huyi kayi baar ladayi se leke ranjan ki maut ki wajah se atharva kis daud se gujar raha tha haalhi ke dino mein... in baaton jaankari mil jaani tab ye dono kya karenge....
2) khabar Jafar ke ghar tak jayegi uske bhi **** maa baap aayenge hospital...
ab in dono ke parents kya karenge police case karenge,? school bhi ghatiya fatua hai isliye dono naam katwa denge...? inlogo ke bich bhi jhagda hoga tu tu main main wala hospital mein hi?
Ya phir sab great atharva aur haramkhor Jafar thik ho jayenge to inko school se nikal denge without tc ke sath?

3) ye important sawal hai.... aaj ya kal subhah tak chahiye jawab... Yug Purush saheb......
Jafar ab mar jayega
Agar by chance jinda bach bhi gaya...
To kitne saal ki jail ki saza milegi... ?
jahir si baat hai itne logo ke samne wo aur uske dost ne atharva ko gher ke ranjan ki tarah jaan se maarne wale the...

 

[Naina]

Waise upor title ke sath murder aur kill dono tag hai.... lead character ranjan ka murder kar diya Jafar & party ne.... lekin abhi tak kill nahi hua kisiki bhi....
to kya main ye maan ke chalu ki atharva ke reaction mein jo hamla kiya tha Jafar pe... Is hamle jo jakhm external internal mile hai usse survive nahi kar paya aur wo negative kirdaar expire ho gaya...
tab jaake ye kill tag sahi sabit ho

 

[Mr Sinister]

Update-73​

Isliye is baar...... main seedhiyo se gulati khate hue neeche girne laga… pahli baar jab main seedhiyo se neeche gira tha tab sirf meri gardan ka pichhla bhag aur peeth hee chhili thi, lekin abki baar… ? abki baar....main gira hee sar ke bal tha aur fir seedhiyo ke nukile bhag se apna sar takrate hue teji se neeche ghisatne laga. Beech me ek jagah rukne ke prayas me maine railing ko pakadna chaha aur apna hath railing ki taraf badhaya... Jisse main thoda tirchha hua aur railings me hath takrate hue ek jagah railing ko pakad kar main ruk gaya.


"Hath me maar harami, bhatti ke..."

par agle hee pal,Jafar ke wo do dost jo shuru se lekar abhi tak ladayi me shaamil the... Wo ab uth khade hue the... Unhone mere hath ko apne juto se dabaya, kuchla aur tab tak masla jab tak maine railings ss apna hath nahi hata liya.


Fir unhone mujhe barabar seedhiyo par litaya aur ek ne kaskar ek laat mere thobde me maara toh wahi dusre ne mujhe fir se neeche dhakel diya... Jisse abki main seedhiyo par roll karte hue neeche girne laga... Is dauran seedhiyo par roll karte hue mere sharir ka ek bhi bhag aisa nahi bacha tha jo seedhiyo se na takraya ho… main kabhi ek taraf ki deewar se takrata toh kabhi seddhiyo se aur neeche girte tak me mere pran nikalne lage… sath me khoon bhi. Pata nahi kaha se.. Par meri shirt me khoon ke nishan the aur ye nishan har second me dugune hue jaa rahe the. Shayad mera chehra bhi khoon se san chuka tha… mere peechhe Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se railings ke sahare mujhe maarne neeche aaye…. Jafar shayad behosh ho gaya tha aur wahi par upar pada hua tha, jaha maine uska sar farsh par patak -patak kar fod diya tha


“bali denge aaj is suar ki … jaanta nahi ye hume"un dono me se ek bola aur main neeche khoon se sana hua past tha…. ab mujhme hilne tak ki himmat nahi thi… isliye maine un dono ko ek aakhiri baar dekha aur bina koyi harkat kiye sirf aur sirf aate hue dekhta raha....


Main abki baar seedhiyo se neeche farsh par jab gira tha toh sar ke bal gira tha… aur mera sar itni jor se takraya tha ki dhamm ki aawaz kuch door tak gunj uthi thi, ya fir sirf mere kaan itne jor se baje the... Waha neeche thodi door me maujood ladke-ladkiyo me se turant kuch log Saxsena ke cabin me ghuse.... jaha se turant hee 2-3 teacher nikle… baki ke teachers lagta hai ab bhi lunch karne bahar hotel me gaye the..?? ya fir Compressor ki tej aawaz ki vazah in sabse anjaan neeche wale ground ke paas bane staff room me mast A.C. ki hawa kha kar ek -dusre se batiya rahe the.. Unhe bhanak tak nahi thi ki unke peeth pichhe school me kitna bada kaand ho chuka tha.



Khair Saxsena ke cabin se un teachers ke peechhe bio wali mam bhi nikli aur unke peechhe -peechhe Ved aur Mini bhi…. Tab tak Jafar ke dono dost bhi seedhiyo se utar kar neeche mere paas pahuch chuke the… unhone sidhe..khulla... teachers ko dhamkaya ki yadi wo dono beech me aaye toh…. wo un dono ki bhi maa chod denge… teacher naye naye the… dar gaye saale aur waha se door jakar kisi ko phone karne lage… shayad Saxsena ko ya fir police ko… lekin waha Ved bhi tha aur mujhe neeche lahuluhan pada dekh bina kuch soche samjhe wo dauda.... shayad mujhe khoon me sana dekh use Ranjan ki dead body ki yaad aa gayi thi…


"Madarrr...chodo..tum sabki maa chod dalu..."wo daudte hue aaya aur abhi -abhi neeche utre Jafar ke dosto par toot pada...


Itni der me thak toh Jafar ke dost bhi chuke the aur kuch Ved ka gussa bhi tha… jiski vazah se Ved un dono ko wahi gira kar kutto ki tarah maarne laga…. Jafar ke dosto ko neeche girakar tarike se maarne ke liye Ved ne turant apna chamde ka belt nikala aur usi samay do-teen purane teacher… jaise ki Bhagwan Das Gupta , Bulla ityadi waha main gate se school ke andar dakhil hue aur saamne ka nazara dekh Bulla light ki speed se palak jhapakte hee Ved ke paas bahut jaldi pahuch gaya aur uska belt chheen kar use un do ladko se alag kiya…. Thodi der baad Saxsena ji bhi waha gand me phone lagaye... I mean.. Kaan me phone lagaye pahuche aur saamne ki haalat dekh turant kisi ko call kiya jaur thodi hee der baad neeche pade -pade mujhe siren ki aawaz sunayi di....


Bio wali mam… ek taraf jaha sanitizer se kapda bhigo kar mera sar pochh rahi thi aur wahi Ved mere paas baitha mujhe dekh raha tha….

“mam, ye marega toh nahi naa…”Ved ne bio wali se puchha….

“nahi... be…”maine jawab diya

Bio wali mam ne eyebrow ke paas jaha mera matha foota tha waha cotton lagakar halka dabaye hue thi…

“Ved ghhaaatee khhholo…”Bio wali mam boli… aur badi hee ajeeb aawaz me boli,

“aawaz… aapki...aise.....kaise…” maine bio wali mam se puchha…

“sore throat since morning.”wo boli..


Aur ye sunne ke baad main apna chhati pakad kar wahi zameen me pade-pade jor se agal bagal dolte hue hasne laga… is dauran saans thik se naa le paane ke kaaran mujhe khasi bhi hui aur laar ke sath chehre se tapakta hue khoon ka mixture mere khasne ke kaaran bio wali mam ke chehre par pada... Kyunki wo thik mere face ki saamne aur bilkul mere paas thi. par meri hansi fir bhi nahi ruk rahi thi aur naa hee meri khaansi. Paagl ho gaya kya main...?


Tabhi kisi ne upar seedhiyo se Jafar ke liye aawaz di aur Jafar ka naam sunte hee bio wali mam,gaand utha ke seedhiyo ki taraf bhag khadi hui. Ambulance se stretcher lekar do aadmiyo ne mujhe stretcher par litaya aur mere sath Gupta ji ko ambulance me bheja… Gupta ji aage baithe aur Ved mere sath ambulance me peechhe baitha , peechhe jo log mujhe stretcher me uthakar laye the wo dono bhi baithe the aur unme se ek cotton ek jagah mere mathe par rakhkar mere sar ko dabaye hue tha aur dusara dusre cotton se mere chehre se khoon saaf kar raha tha.


“tu hasa kyu tha…”Ved mujhse puchha.. “jab Bio wali ne sore throat kaha toh…”

Jis-se ek baar main fir hasne laga….

“bata na… mujhe bhi hasna hai… dimag chuda hai mera pura us din se… please… bata na bhai…”

“wo jabbbb....mam boli.... ki… sore throat toh.....uuhhhhh....main... main bolne wala tha ki… kya hua mam, kisi ne.... lawda de diya kya muh me raat ko… jo gala baith gaya hai… par bol nahi sakta tha, isliye haskar kaam chala liya. ”


Ye sunkar pahle Ved halka sa muskuraya lekin jab mujhe stretcher par utha ke laane wale hasne lage toh Ved apni hasi nahi rok paya aur unke sath main bhi hasa …. Jor se… khaste hue.... Muh se khoon fekte hue.

“itne dino me ab jake achchha lag raha hai, kuch”Ved bola “neeche main jab un dono ko maar raha tha toh aisa lag raha tha jaise Ranjan ke qatil ko maar raha hu… ekdum sukoon sa mila unhe maarne ke baad… ab chahe toh school se suspend kar de bhosdi wale…. Koyi fikar nahi”

“Gupta ji aage baithe hai… tu unhe patane ka jugad jama… kuch nahi hoga…”

“kamal hai...lawda tu bhi. sochta kaha se hai be... Ye sab"

"As i said earlier, If Deception is an Art, then I...AM...THE... FUCKING... ARTIST"

"… just don’t die before me…”

“le... chus fir….”
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“Pee-peep… Pee-peep…”Ved bike chalate hue ab bhi muh se aawaz nikal kar bakchodi kiye jaa raha tha aur jab se rewa pahuche the… tab se kuch jyada hee pee-peep kar raha tha.

“abey, road me koyi nahi hai… ab kise pee-peep kar raha hai..”

“Oscar level ki acting performance toh deni padegi na bhai… koyi ho chahe na ho… chahe hazar log dekh rahe ho ya fir koyi ek bhi nahi… ek artist hone ka kartvya toh nibhana padega na warna fans kya kahenge…”

“tu kis chiz ka artist hai be…..”

“lawde ka…. Moot-te hue painting bana deta hu main… kal raat hee teri painting banayi thi moot-te hue…”

“ye kya hai be….. rok toh…”maine Ved ko Vindhyancha Society ke paas rukwaya, jaha Vindhya Hospital tha aur kisi jamane me main yaha Riya ki mom se milne aaya tha... Jaha se Riya Rose mujhe fir Starbeans lekar gayi thi...

“kya hai…”

“ye Vindhayanchal me ye kya khul gaya… ye kahe ki dukan hai… kasayi khana lag raha ye toh mujhe…. The Sword That Killed….? Sahi hai , aajkal Rewa bhi Hollywood ho ja raha hai.. kasayi khane ka aisa English naam… khair mujhe kya main toh vegetarian hu…”

“museum hai be … chodu…”Ved kohni se mere pet me maarte hue bola… “last year khula hai ye… yaha Rewa Riyasat ke sabhi rajao ki talwar ke bare me info hai… ki kiski talwar kitni badi thi, kitni bhari thi, un talwaro se kisko-kisko niptaya gaya… kuch original hai toh kuch unki exact copy . tum toh lawda 2 saal se ghar hee nahi aaye aur iske pahle aaya bhi toh sirf ghuse rah gaya ghar me. isliye maloom nahi tujhe…”

“toh museum subtitle likhna chahiye na main title ke neeche… waise naam badhiya hai... The Sword That Killed.... aaunga kisi din…. le gadi Big-Bang ki taraf ghuma de…”



Main Vindhya Hospital ke samne se jab gujra to gate ke andar us jagah ko dekhne laga... Jab main Riya ki maa ke liye fruits lene baahar aaya tha,lekin paisa naa hone ki vajah se yahi uljhan me tha..tab pichhe se Riya aayi thi. Jaha mere hath -pair ke sath mere aankh tak me jhunjhuni chadh gayi thi... Saala 10 saal beet gaye usko, samay bhi bada jatil hai.. 10 saal beete yaa 100 saal... Kam hee lagta hai. Ummid to minus me hai,par yadi abhiye isi hospital ke andar se Riya Rose nikal jaaye toh...?? Wo bhi toh doctor ban gayi hogi ab tak.
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P.S.1: jaha ladayi hui yaani upar..waha sirf 11th, 12 th ki class lagti hai.. Pahle maine bataya hai starting me hee. Isliye tamash dekhne wale sirf 11th, 12 th ke the.

P.S.2: upar se neeche jaane ke do raaste the, ek jagah tih jafar, atharva lad hee rahe the..dusra raasta math wali class ke just saamne se tha, jaha jafar ke dost khade the aur kisi ko jaane nahi de rahe the.

P.S. fir jab Atharva ne jab Jafar & Co ko maarna chalu kiya to Jafar ke dost kyun nahi aaye..?? Kyunki jaise hee khoon kaa aagman hua khud jafar ka ek dost jo atharva ko pakde hue tha.. Wo hee atharva ko chhodkar fati me nikal liya..fir naye kaha se aayenge, jo shuru se hee nahi the..jab ladayi normal thi.

Bio wali aise bhagi jaise Jafar uska aur sexana kaa naajayez beta ho.. ..bc
Sali chinala kar rahi thi..
Khair ab itnee din kaa anger , frestration, aur Anxiety thi too bhai kahi too niklegii..

Teachers ki bhi phat gyi thi..
Ab jabtak hero maar nahi khayegaa ..too maza nahi ayegaa..naa
Ab Jafar aur nagdi gang kaa too gangbang ho chukaa h..school me..
Ab dekhnaa ho gaa uss brainless bimbo riya kaa kyaa reaction hoga..

Ab apne ved babu rewa aagye h..
Aur 2 Kandd bhi ho gye h..
Maybe story ab present me aage badegii..Aur past ka kuch part aage chal kar pata chale gaa..
Kuch bhi kaho joo bhi Illie bio walo ke pichwade me thii wo nikal chuki hogi..

Khair ekk umdaa update bhai..
Intezar rahegaa next update kaaa..

 

[ragish7357]

jabardast update bro