Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Yug Purush]

I don’t know how many of you are still active here, but I’m going to complete this story.
The hardest part of restarting and finishing any story is revision...at least for me. But now I’ve done that. So there’s a 90% chance I’ll actually complete it.
I’m not giving false hope. It’s just hope… because I always come back even if it takes 4–5 years and I finish what I started.
Let’s see what happens this time.

 

[Aakash.]

Even though the beginning was not good but slowly the story was changing its colour and I was enjoying biting like dog After that he kicked him on the mouthmore Atharv was throbbing in anger, more relaxed I was...
If Zafar dies today I will not feel sad but my happiness will be doubled because of him Riya, Sanjana, Rajan all got away from us. The fight scene could not be completed, I am looking forward to see the end.

"Maa-behan ki chut pyaari hai toh chhuna mat koyi... Maaaadharchodo.. jab main maar kha raha tha toh apni behan chodne gaye the... Ab koyi aage aaya rokne ke liye... Toh.. Inko chhod kar main sabse pahle use hee maarunga aur maarne ke baad Gand me lund daal dunga...

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[mashish]

Update-71​

Ek baar Arman ne college me ek ladke ko buri tarah maarne ke dauran jab hostel waalo ne use rokna chaha toh usne kaha tha ki " lawda, main bahut selfish banda hoon, duniyadari kaa kaam duniya par chhod deta hoon. Jab mere jeene -marne se logo ko koyi fark nahi padta to fir bhala mujhe kyun unke jeene -marne se koyi fark padne laga.. Isliye ise toh main marunga, marte dum tak maarunga.".



So once again, Time Travel... Jaha main Past ke future ki conversation ko Interceptor ki kamaan sambhale Past ke bhi Past me use kar raha hoon... Confused..?? I'm Too. aur mujhe pata hai ki aisa karna future ke dialogue ko past me use kar lena samay ke santulan ko bigadna hai, fir bhi maine ye kiya.. Kyunki main ye kar sakta hoon. Afterall, I AM THE FUCKING NARRATOR.


Isliye jab Riya & Sanjana ko ab mujhse koyi matlab nahi toh fir mujhe kyon unse matlab hone laga. Main baahar se khud toh normal behave karta lekin school ke teachers aur students ko normal behave karta dekh unpar bahut gussa karta... raah chalte logo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school me bench ke neeche zameen me chalti hui cheetiyo ko dekhkar gussa aata, school ke pillars, playground ko dekhkar gussa aata… copy, pen, bag, bench, chair, board, deewar, gate khidki, ped-paudhe…. Sabhi jeevit chizo se lekar, sabhi nirjeev chizo par mujhe gussa aata. Un dino sirf ek hee line mere dimag thi wo ye ki bhaad me jaye sab, gand maraye sab….


Rahi baat competition ki toh Mini aksar lunch me mere aur Ved ke paas aati, aadatan kayi sawal karti, jisme se jo bahut jyada important the… uska jawab Ved deta aur fir ignore maar deta… mujhse toh Mini kuch puchhati bhi nahi thi. Kyunki use maloom tha ki main koyi jawab nahi dene wala… fir wo chali jati… ek baar usne hume kaha ki Principal sir, cabin me hum dono ko bula rahe hai… jispar hum dono class me hee rahe. Isliye aaj fir Saxsena ne apne cabin me hume bulaya tha….. Madarchod….


“chal, Saxsena ki gand me bamboo kar ke aate hai…”Ved ne kaha

“is madarchod ko ab kya puchhna hai… sab toh 10-10 baar puchh liya…. Betichod”

" tu toh aaj kal mere type baat-baat pe gaali dene laga hai... Waise, Bio wali ki moti gand me chull hoga… usi ne bulwaya hoga Saxsena se”

“randi madarchod… chodari, burchatti… hagandi, gookhani~गू खानी iski dayi ko chod dalu… bhadwi... Iske chut me hath daal kar bacha dani kheench lunga”

“aisa kya.... chal fir…”

“kaha…”

“yahaaaaaa…. 10 points…”


Ved ko point chadhata dekh main halka sa muskuraya aur bola ki wo aage-aage jaye main moot ke thodi der me aata hu… jiske baad Ved ne suggestion diya ki Bio wali mam ka muh hote hue bathroom me kyun jaana...usi ke muh me moot dena…. Jise maine thukra diya aur fir se kaha ki… tu jaa, main thodi der me aata hu.
Ved ke jaane ke lagbhag 5 minute ke baad main Saxsena ke cabin me jaane ke liye apni class se nikla… Jafar apni class ke saamne khada tha. ye sach bhi tha ya nahi, par mujhe pata nahi aisa kyun lagta tha ki Ranjan ki maut se kisi ko yadi koyi fayda hua hai toh wo Jafar hai… kyunki Ranjan ke murder ke baad main use har dam sirf haste hue , muskurate hue dekhta aur logo ki hasi se mujhe un dino itni nafrat ho gayi thi ki jise bhi haste hue dekhta , mann karta ki unke muh me lund de du…. Literally….


Mujhe pakka yakin tha ki Jafar ne hee apne aadmiyo ke dwara Ranjan ko marwaya hai, fir jab Ranjan ke papa beech me aaye toh unhe bhi raaste se hata diya. Waise bhi Ranjan aur uske papa itne heavy the ki kisi ek aadmi ke bas ki baat nahi thi, kisi ek ko toh wahi dono zinda kaat dete… ye ek se adhik logo ka kaam tha isliye meri conspiracy theory ka main Villain ab bhi Jafar hee tha.


Apni conspiracy theory ko apne dimag me naye-naye aayam tak pahuchakar, Jafar ko ghoorte hue main uski taraf badh raha tha, jaha wo apne do dosto ke sath khada kisi baat par hans raha tha aur pichhale kuch dino ki tarah Riya Rose, Mini aur Madhu ke sath wahi uske paas khadi thi. jab main uske najdeek pahucha toh uski bhi nazar mujh par padi… mujhe ghoorta hua paakar usne bhi mujhe gusse se ghoorna chalu kar diya aur jab uske paas se gujra toh peechhe railing par apne dono hath rakhkar style me khade hote hue wo mujhse bola...

“ghoor kya raha hai be, maarega kya…”

“chal khol… abhi maarta hu”bolkar main aage badh gaya

“Mere ek jhapad me moot maarega tu… ab Chitranjan nahi hai, tujhe bachane ke liye…. Jiske dam pe uchak raha tha naa itne dino se wo toh gaya, isliye ab apni aukaat me rahna... Warna pura khandan khatam kar dunga tera...."

"Very good....."sunkar main muskuraya par andar hee andar puri taqat ke sath chillaya... Mere sharir ki ek -ek nash gusse se thar-thar kaanpne lagi

"Paagal ho gaya hai kya be.."wahi khade Jafar ke ek dost ne mujhe muskurate hue kaanpta dekh hairan hokar kaha


Riya.... Madhu aur Mini ke sath waha se door chali gayi thi... Lekin thi ab bhi wahi corridor me, jaha se wo pura nazara dekh sakti thi.

"Teri saari gundayi main wahi ghusa dunga, jaha se tu nikla hai... Waise teri maa ko dard bahut hoga... Jab main aisa karunga toh.." muskurate hue, gusse se kaanpte hue maine, Jafar se kaha

"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha.. Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."


Itna bolkar Jafar chup ho gaya … jiske baad main chup-chap waha se aage badh gaya aur kuch kadam ki doori par jaha seedhiya neeche jaane ke liye shuru hoti thi waha pahuchkar main ruka yaa mere kadam apne aap ruk gaye....? Mujhe nahi pata... Kyunki chalte -chalte mere dimag ne Jafar ke shabdo par gaur kiya ki Jafar ne abhi kya bola hai aur uska kya matlab hai..... Mere kaano me Jafar dwara kahi gayi aakhiri line bajne lagi aur mere dimag ne usi line ke base pe mujhe green signal de diya


"Ranjan bhi yahi bola karta tha, Ab tu bhi yahi bol raha hai..."

Jafar ki is ek line ne meri conspiracy theory ko sahi saabit kar diya. Baaki gussa toh itne din se mere andar bhara hee hua tha, jise Jafar ki us ek line ne aur badha diya… Ranjan ke khoon hone ke baad maine raat-raat bhar jaag kar soch rakha tha ki yadi bychance kabhi Ranjan ka qatil mere saamne khada ho toh main uske sath kya karunga...?? Aur wo is waqt yahi mauzood tha, bilkul mere paas... Meri oor peeth kiye hue.


Seedhiyo ke paas khade rahkar maine apne jabde par pure sharir ka force apply kiya aur jor se silently chillaya par jab laga ki jabda toot kar neeche gir jayega toh silently chillana band kar diya, lekin mera dimag ghoom raha tha aur uske andar Jafar ke shabd bhi ghoom rahe the. Jiske baad mera sar bhi gusse me ghoomne laga aur fir ant me main bhi ghooma aur Jafar ki taraf badha…. Badha kya...sidhe dauda...


Jafar dusari taraf muda hua tha yani pahla prahar main jaise chahe waise kar sakta tha.. mujhe pata tha ki mere pahle prahar ke baad mere sath kya hoga… Wo bhi jab Jafar ke dost uske sath ho, upar se sab ke sab saale sports wale the, mere se jyada hatte-katte. Jafar ki taraf badhte hee main samajh gaya tha ki mere dwara prahar karte hee main bahut buri tarah maar khaane wala hoon. isliye main apne is pahle prahar ko hee aisa banana chahta thi Jafar ki khade-khade maiyya chud jaye… is ladayi me mere liye sirf ek plus point tha aur wo tha mera gussa.... Jo beet rahe har nano second ke sath badhta jaa raha tha. apne dahine hath ke kade ko dabate hue main Jafar ki taraf dauda aur kood kar pahle kohni se Jafar ke sar ke beecho-beech khopdi pe puri taqat se mara, taaki uska sar fat jaaye. Jafar mere maarte hee dono hatho se apna sar pakad kar buri tara cheekha... chillaya... Aur uski aawaz sunkar mujhe bahut hee achchha feel hua...


Kohni maarne ke turant baad main thoda peechhe hokar ek laat uske kamar par puri taqat se maara…. Jafar apne thik saamne jisse baat kar raha tha , mere laat maarne par wo dono thodi door tak aage ki oor ladkhadaye aur fir ladkhadate hue neeche gir gaye… Jafar neeche pade-pade chillate hue ab bhi apna sar dabaye jaa raha tha aur idhar main bhi ab apni kohni malne laga. Sala jab mujhe itna dard ho raha hai, toh use kitna ho raha hoga....


Mujhe toh laga tha ki maine Jafar ka khel khatm kar diya hai aur wo ab nahi uthega, lekin wo Apna sar dabate hue jald hee uth khada hua aur ab muskurate hue meri oor dekha.... Maano mujhse kah raha ho ki… yahi toh chahta tha main ki tu mujhse akele bhide sabke saamne aur fir ye uski jubaan par bhi aa gaya...


"Us din ki beijjati ka badla aaj lunga main... Jab inhi logo ke beech Ranjan ne tere kaaran mujhe maara tha... Uski aatma tadap uthegi teri pelayi dekhkar... " apna sar malte hue Jafar ne mere peechhe kisi ko aankho se ishara kiya...


Maine turant peechhe palat kar dekha, mere peechhe bahut ladke the aur kuch ladkiya bhi... ladke-ladkiya ab apni-apni class ke saamne khade ho gaye the is utsukta me ki ab aage kya hoga…. Jafar khada hua aur aur meri taraf teji se dauda, lekin maine toh physics padhi hui hai isliye Jafar ke impact ko kam karne ke liye maine apne sharir ka pura bal neeche transfer kar diya aur apne pairo ko majbooti ke sath zameen par dabaya… ki jaise hee ye aayage, isko jhuka kar iski peeth me kohni se fir maarunga


"Madarchhooo....." kisi ne achanak hee ek mukka mere jabde me mara, mujhe hawa tak nahi laga ki kisne maara aur kidhar se.


fir kisi aur ne turant usi waqt peechhe se meri gardan apne hath (forearm) se daboch li…. Meri gardan ko peechh se daboch kar wo log mujhe ghaseet kar aage Jafar ki oor le jaane lage aur jab Jafar daudkar mere paas aaya toh wo thoda ruka, apne hatho ko sahlaaya... Meri aankho me thodi der ke liye dekha aur fir apne dono hatho se mujhe gaaliya dete hue mere pet pe mukka maarne laga. bich -bich me jin do aur logo ne mujhe pakad rakha tha wo bhi kabhi mera baal pakad kar mere gaal par jhapad maarte toh kabhi -kabhi mere peeth par mukka jad dete aur maarne ke baad fir se mujhe pakad lete... Is dauran Jafar thoda pichhe khiska aur daudkar apne kandhe se mere seene me maara... Jafar ka majboot kandha mere seene me lagte hee Itna tej dard aur aisi ghabrahat hui us pal ki... Laga bas... Behan...chho..chod. ye mere is jiwan ka aakhiri samay hai, upar se pichhe se ek ladke ne gardan aur daba rakhi thi, jiske kaaran thik dhang se main saans tak nahi le paa raha tha.
Jafar ka impact itna tej tha ki mujhe pakdane wale ladke bhi kuch kadam peechhe kisak gaye… jiske baad mujhe pata chala ki mujhe do ladko ne nahi balki teen ladko ne peechhe se pakad rakha hai… Do logo ne mera ek-ek hath pakda hua tha aur ek mera gardan lagatar dabaye jaa raha tha, maano mera gala ghotkar maarne ka vichar ho uska…. Par ain waqt par mere dwara gardan idhar-udhar karne ke kaaran wo thik se meri gardan nahi daba paa raha tha.


Jafar mera baal pakadkar jor se kheencha aur fir mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhap di… Jafar ka hath mere gaal par padte hee main tamtama utha… maine aaj tak jitna khaya tha, jitna mere sharir me dam tha... utna pura jor laga diya , un teeno ki pakad se aazad hone ke liye… lekin siway unhe thoda sa idhar -udhar hilane ke main kuch nahi kar paya… Jafar ka jhapad padte hee meri aankho se usi samay aansu bhi nikale, ,kyunki jhapad padte hee mujhe achanak Ranjan ki yaad aa gayi thi

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P.S. feeling bad, upset...?? Isko padho maza aayega
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amazing update

 

[The_Punisher]

It is not fair at least fight scene to compete karna tha
Jo bhi ho dil khush ho gaya ye update padh ke bahut dinno baad aisa majedaar update aya hai jis taraha Atharva ne jafar ki halat ki dil garden garden ho gaya
next update

 

[Sasha!]

 

[mashish]

Update-72 ​

Meri aankho me kya, mujhe aisa dekh waha mauzood kuch ladkiyo ke aankho me bhi aansu aa gaye aur kuch ruwasi hokar apne class ke andar tak chali gayi… ladke jo iska virodh karne aage aaye the use Jafar ke dosto ne jo is ladayi ka hissa nahi the, unhone dhamki dekar ladayi shant karane aaye ladko ko door hee rok diya tha.. Sath me wo is par bhi nazar rakh rahe the ki kahi se koyi jaakar kisi teacher ko inform naa kar de. Yaani neeche jaane ke jo do entrance the..waha Jafar ke dost pahredar bankar khade the...

“maar madarchod ko… ruk kyun gaya ” jo vyakti mera gardan daba rakha tha wo Jafar par chillaya


Jiske baad Jafar ne ek aur jhapad mere gaal par mara aur fir uske baad lagatar bina ruke mere gaal ko laal karta gaya… har baar jab Jafar ki paancho ungaliya mere gaal par padti, main puri taqat laga deta khud ko un teeno se chhudane ki lekin sirf unko hila pata tha… is baar bhi jab Jafar ne ek aur baar mere gaal par kaskar ek jhapad chipkaya toh maine aaj tak jitna khaya piya tha, sab milakar gand ka pura jor laga diya aur un teeno ko apne sath ghaseet-te hue ek kadam aage khiskaya…. Lekin khud ko fir bhi nahi chhuda paya… mere ek kadam aage badhne par Jafar thoda peechhe gaya aur jaise hee mujhe jhapad maarne ke liye usne apna hath uthaya maine apna muh khol kar Jafar ke hath ko kaatne ke liye apni gardan ko thoda sa ghumaya…..


Jafar ka hath is baar mere gaal par nahi balki mere naak aur mere muh me pada... Lekin is beech uski jo do ungali mere daant par padi, unko maine turant daanto ke beech fasaya aur apni puri taqat lagakar daanto se dabaya.... Jafar apni do ungali mere muh me fasaye wahi khade-khade chhatpatane laga…. Wahi kudne laga…


“madarchod.madarchod.chhod madarchod... Chhod de re madarchod.”Jafar wahi kikiyane laga aur peechhe se uske dosto ne mujhe maarna shuru kar diya, mera gala aur majbooti se dabana shuru kar diya jiske kaaran majbooran mujhe Jafar ki ungali chhodni padi….


Jafar apni un do ungaliyo ko jise maine daanto se kat-te hue buri tarah chabaya tha, un par kabhi fook maarta toh kabhi fook maarke jor -jor se jhadakta, jisse khoon ki kuch boonde bhi uski ungaliyo se neeche tiles par chhitak jaati. Mujhe apne jeebh par bhi kuch taste hua, shayad wo jafar ki ungaliyo se nikla hua khoon tha... Is dauran mujhe pakadne wale ladke teen me se kam hokar do ho gaye the, kyunki ladayi me ab khoon ka aagman ho chuka tha,jisse shayad ek ladka dar gaya aur peechhe se hee kahi khisak liya. Jafar ko apne karib hee apni ungaliya dabate dekh maine apne shoulder ko mujhe pakade rahne wale dono ladke ke hatho me aur achche se fansaya, taaki neeche naa giru. Wo dono bhi badhiya mere shoulder ko jakadte gage aur jab mere shoulders ekdum thik dhang se fans gaye toh main Jafar ki taraf hawa me kudkar apna pair ghumaya jo seedhe jakar ungali dabaye hue Jafar ke sar se hote hue uske jabde me laga.



“maa chuda rahe ho tum dono… bhosdi walo…”thobde me laat khakar Jafar apne dosto par chillaya… main jaanta tha ki Jafar ab pahle se aur jyada mujhe maarega aur wo mere karib na aaye isliye main ab lagatar kudne laga… wo dono mujhe itna badhiya pakad ke rakhe the ki… mujhe koyi pareshani hee nahi ho rahi thi…


“side se maar madarchod ko…”usi bich un dono me se ek ne Jafar se kaha

“ghuma bhatti ki gand ko…”



wo dono mujhe sarkate hue tedha karne lage taki main kood kar bhi Jafar ko laat na maar saku… par aisa karke wo teeno jaha se neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya shuru hoti thi thi mujhe usi oor khiskane lage ….Jafar kinare se mujhe maarne ke liye aaya… jab se wo teesra meri gardan chhodkar bhaga tha, mujhe thodi chhoot mil gayi thi, warna pahle toh main hilta bhi tha toh meri gardan wo apne hath se dabane lagta.


Jab hum sab seedhiyo ke paas aa gaye toh main fir se ek baar kooda aur kud kar apne dono pair se Jafar ke kamar ko pakad liya aur pura jor lagakar khud ko peeche ki oor khud ko dhakela… jo do ladke mujhe peechhe se pakad kar khde the wo thoda peechhe hue lekin peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi ki wo peechhe ho sake… peechhe toh seedhiya thi….


Isliye Pahle wo dono seedhiyo par ulta sar ke bal gire , fir unke upar main aur mere baad Jafar… hum sab seedhiya par ghisate hue neeche gire…. Neeche se upar jaane ke liye seedhiya jo banayi gayi thi wo do part me divided thi… thodi door ke baad ek flat jagah thi jaha se seedhiyo ko turn dekar neeche ki oor moda gaya tha aur usi ke bich me wo flat jagah tha. Hum sab upar se seedhiyo par girte hue us flat jagah par aakar atke… jin do ne mujhe pahle pakad rakha tha wo buri tarah seedhiyo se gire the… neeche girte samay main, most of the time unke upar hee tha, jiske kaaran most of the time.. Mujhe kuch feel hee nahi hua. fir baad me jab wo seedhiyo par ghisat-te hue, girte hue idhar udhar hone lage tab mera sar aur peeth seedhiya ke sampark me aaya, jiske kaaran meri peeth aur sar me jalan ho rahi thi… Jafar toh audhe muh gira tha seedhiyo par aur waise hee neeche tak seedhiyo se takrate hue sarka tha. Uska sar mere pair ke thik paas flat jagah par aakar ruka aur baki sharir seedhiya par hee slope me tha… wo dono hath aur dono taang pasare audha padha hua hanf raha tha…. dard se karah raha tha


“teri maa ka bhosda...mahtarichod… ”Jafar ke sar me kaske ek laat markar main bola…


Lekin Jafar tas se mas naa hua, wo waisa hee pada raha... Jiske baad maine dusri baar kaskar ek laat uske sar par maara. Chhati chhilne aur sar upar se lekar yaha tak kayi seedhiyo se takrane ke kaaran shayad Jafar me khade hone ki taqat nahi bachi thi. Maine ek baar aur ek laat uske sar par maara, jisse ek pal ke liye uska sharir seedhiyo par kuch upar chadha par agle pal fir neeche khisak gaya. Ladke-ladkiya ab seedhi ke upar jhund banakar hume dekh rahe the… do-char log neeche bhi daude hume uthane ke liye , lekin unke pahuchne se pahle main uth kar baith gaya


"Maa-behan ki chut pyaari hai toh chhuna mat koyi... Maaaadharchodo.. jab main maar kha raha tha toh apni behan chodne gaye the... Ab koyi aage aaya rokne ke liye... Toh.. Inko chhod kar main sabse pahle use hee maarunga aur maarne ke baad Gand me lund daal dunga.......... Literally...."chillate hue maine seedhiyo ki taraf badh rahe ladko se kaha... Jiske baad jo jaha tha, wo wahi rook gaya


Main apni jagah se utha aur baal pakad kar jafar
ko railings ki bich me jo gap rahta hai usi me ghusane laga... Madarchod ko yaha se seedhe neeche fekunga, taaki sar ke bal gire aur mar jaaye... Yaha se sar ke bal girega toh sar foot jayega iska, bheja baahar aa jayega. Marega madarchod ye aaj...... Ghus behanchod.


Maine jafar ka baal kheechte hue railings ke beech usko kheencha Lekin Jafar railings ke bich se paar hee nahi ho raha tha.. Maine uski gardan pakad ke bhi aage dhakela, lekin uske kandhe fir se railings ke bich atak gaye...

"Madarchod........" gusse se main fir chillaya.
maine uske tirachhe pairo ko sidha kiya,is dauran uski peeth ko apne laat se kachara bhi aur fir se use pairo ki taraf se dhakel kar railings ke bich se paar karane ki koshish karne laga... Plan toh railing ke upar se sidhe neeche fekne ka tha mera,lekin mujhme utni taqat nahi bachi thi ki main,Jafar ke bhari-bharkam sharir ko utha saku.


Abki baar bhi Jafar ka kandha fir se atak gaya,isliye ab uske pichhwade par laat maar maarkar main Jafar ko andar ghusane laga... Main gusse me us waqt bhool hee gaya tha ki gap kitna kam hai aur Jafar ka sharir kitna bada... Aur jab mujhe samajh aaya toh uska baal pakad kar use seedhiyo se neeche ghaseeta. . Wo mari hui haalat me apne hath se mera hath chhudane ki koshish karte hue chillaya… uske dost neeche pade-pade sirf apna sharir malte hue flat jagah par daanye baaye ho rahe the.


Maine Jafar ko kheenchkar uske dosto ke bagal me litaya aur jaise usne kuch der pahle mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhapi thi, maine bhi uske gaal par paancho ungaliyo chhua kar ek jhapad maara... fir ek aur.. Fir ek aur... Uske baad ek aur… aur fir uske baad ek aur... jab Jafar ne dono hatho se apna chehra dhak liya toh main wahi uske paas kuch der baithkar haafne laga aur fir jab wapas thodi si jaan mere sharir me aayi toh uske hath me mukka maarne laga, jiske baad usne apne gaal se apna hath hataya aur main fir se use jhapad maarne laga …. Meri peeth aur gardan ka nichle hisse me seedhiyo par ghisatne ke kaaran tej jalan ho rahi thi lekin main Jafar ko maarne me itna magan tha ki mujhe uska anubhav hote hue bhi anubhaav nahi ho raha tha… main kabhi Jafar ke chehre par mukka marta toh kabhi chhati par… fir jab maarte hue mera gussa aur tej ho jata toh uska baal pakad kar uska sar wahi farsh par jor patak deta…. Jaisa ki main pahle bhi bata chuka hu, mujhe gussa nahi aata lekin jab aata hai tab main dayi chod deta hu. Fir saamne koyi bhi ho aur nateeja kuch bhi ho.



wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke karan... Karan...? Karan nahi... Karan toh madarchod hai... Kaaran. Wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke kaaran mere andar itni taqat nahi thi, warna jis hisab se main Jafaar ka sar farsh me patak raha tha , uska sar tahas-nahas ho jaana chahiye tha, use on the spot mar jaana chahiye tha… jo ladke hume uthane aaye the wo meri is harqat ke baad ab aur peechhe hatne lage… ladkiya toh sari rote hue apne -apne class me dubak gayi thi. Baaki ladke.. Wo ab Jafar ke sar se nikalne wale khoon se sane hue farsh ki taraf aana hee nahi chaahte the isliye wo bas pichhe hokar tamasha dekhne lage…. Koyi inform karne bhi nahi gaya, shayad ab Jafar ke sar se rista hua khoon farsh par failta dekh..sabki gand choke ho gayi thi... Koyi kuch karne,bolne laayak hee nahi bacha tha shayad.


“Ranjan ko tune hee marwaya na re mahtarichod….…”kahte hue maine abki baar Jafar ki chhati me kohni marne ka socha taki sale ki pasliya toot jaaye… mar hee jaaye ye bhosdiwala aaj.


kamal hai...? Maine ye pahle kyun nahi socha.... Koyi baat nahi.. Abhi tod deta hoon. Maine apni dono kohni se Jafar ki pasliya todne ke liye apna dono hath upar uthaya.......


...... ki tabhi Jafar ke jo dost waha bagal me pade-pade aankh band kiye apna sharir sahla rahe the… unme se ek ne mujhe peechhe ki oor dhakka maara, Jafar ko maarne ke chakkar me main ekdum kinaare par tha aur dhakka lagte hee main peechhe hua... Par peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi, peechhe toh seedhiya tha...





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superb update

 

[ragish7357]

aah atharv ne jafar ko bina ranjan ke hi pel diya
gjb chaa gya londa
wese uski ranjan ko jafar ke dwara marne ki theory kb puri hogi
or ye dekho 2-4 markar lgta h phir se sidhiyo se niche hi milega atharv
wese bhut hi behatrin update tha bde bhai

 

[Moon Light]

Update-72

Atharva ko pit'ta hua dekh kuch ldko ko hriday pighlaa pr himmat na hui jafar aur jafar ke dosto se fight krne ki... ladkiyon ka bhi same haal wo bhi kuch nahi kar pa rhi thi... jafar Atharvaa ko peet'te jaa rha tha aur usi bich Atharva Ne ungliyon ko chawa liya jafar ki jisse use dard hua aur us drd me hi wo thoda piche ghisak gya...
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Hath se khun bhi nikalne lga. jise dekh kar ek sthi to bhag khda hua Jafar ka... kher Atharva akela kab tk unka samna krta... thoda bahut usne bhi jor lgane ki koshish ki aur kamyab bhi hua ek bar jisse jafar aur uske dost sidiyo se niche girne lge aur sth me Atharva bhi unke upr rhte huye girne lga... chot to aayi pr jyada jafar aur uske dosto ko hi... jiska fayda uthakar Atharva jafar ko khub pitne lgtaa hai...ant me uska ek sathi uthkar Atharvaa sidiyo se niche dhakel deta hai...
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What happens Next....
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School administration ko ye bat pataa to lag hi jayegi ab qki khun kharaba hua hai... unka kya action hogaa ye dekhne wali bat hogi. wo Atharva ka paksha lete hain ya Jafar ki...
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Atharva ke dwara aaj jafar ko pitne se himmat to bakiyo me bhi aai hogi jo usse darte the aur jinko Jafar ne pitaaa hoga... wo shayad ab Atharva ki indirectly hi help krde... Ya fir Jafar ab Joshi ka saharaa lega qki Ranjan to hai nahi...
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Brilliant Update...
Waiting For Next​

 

[Naina]

Update-72 ​

Meri aankho me kya, mujhe aisa dekh waha mauzood kuch ladkiyo ke aankho me bhi aansu aa gaye aur kuch ruwasi hokar apne class ke andar tak chali gayi… ladke jo iska virodh karne aage aaye the use Jafar ke dosto ne jo is ladayi ka hissa nahi the, unhone dhamki dekar ladayi shant karane aaye ladko ko door hee rok diya tha.. Sath me wo is par bhi nazar rakh rahe the ki kahi se koyi jaakar kisi teacher ko inform naa kar de. Yaani neeche jaane ke jo do entrance the..waha Jafar ke dost pahredar bankar khade the...

“maar madarchod ko… ruk kyun gaya ” jo vyakti mera gardan daba rakha tha wo Jafar par chillaya


Jiske baad Jafar ne ek aur jhapad mere gaal par mara aur fir uske baad lagatar bina ruke mere gaal ko laal karta gaya… har baar jab Jafar ki paancho ungaliya mere gaal par padti, main puri taqat laga deta khud ko un teeno se chhudane ki lekin sirf unko hila pata tha… is baar bhi jab Jafar ne ek aur baar mere gaal par kaskar ek jhapad chipkaya toh maine aaj tak jitna khaya piya tha, sab milakar gand ka pura jor laga diya aur un teeno ko apne sath ghaseet-te hue ek kadam aage khiskaya…. Lekin khud ko fir bhi nahi chhuda paya… mere ek kadam aage badhne par Jafar thoda peechhe gaya aur jaise hee mujhe jhapad maarne ke liye usne apna hath uthaya maine apna muh khol kar Jafar ke hath ko kaatne ke liye apni gardan ko thoda sa ghumaya…..


Jafar ka hath is baar mere gaal par nahi balki mere naak aur mere muh me pada... Lekin is beech uski jo do ungali mere daant par padi, unko maine turant daanto ke beech fasaya aur apni puri taqat lagakar daanto se dabaya.... Jafar apni do ungali mere muh me fasaye wahi khade-khade chhatpatane laga…. Wahi kudne laga…


“madarchod.madarchod.chhod madarchod... Chhod de re madarchod.”Jafar wahi kikiyane laga aur peechhe se uske dosto ne mujhe maarna shuru kar diya, mera gala aur majbooti se dabana shuru kar diya jiske kaaran majbooran mujhe Jafar ki ungali chhodni padi….


Jafar apni un do ungaliyo ko jise maine daanto se kat-te hue buri tarah chabaya tha, un par kabhi fook maarta toh kabhi fook maarke jor -jor se jhadakta, jisse khoon ki kuch boonde bhi uski ungaliyo se neeche tiles par chhitak jaati. Mujhe apne jeebh par bhi kuch taste hua, shayad wo jafar ki ungaliyo se nikla hua khoon tha... Is dauran mujhe pakadne wale ladke teen me se kam hokar do ho gaye the, kyunki ladayi me ab khoon ka aagman ho chuka tha,jisse shayad ek ladka dar gaya aur peechhe se hee kahi khisak liya. Jafar ko apne karib hee apni ungaliya dabate dekh maine apne shoulder ko mujhe pakade rahne wale dono ladke ke hatho me aur achche se fansaya, taaki neeche naa giru. Wo dono bhi badhiya mere shoulder ko jakadte gage aur jab mere shoulders ekdum thik dhang se fans gaye toh main Jafar ki taraf hawa me kudkar apna pair ghumaya jo seedhe jakar ungali dabaye hue Jafar ke sar se hote hue uske jabde me laga.



“maa chuda rahe ho tum dono… bhosdi walo…”thobde me laat khakar Jafar apne dosto par chillaya… main jaanta tha ki Jafar ab pahle se aur jyada mujhe maarega aur wo mere karib na aaye isliye main ab lagatar kudne laga… wo dono mujhe itna badhiya pakad ke rakhe the ki… mujhe koyi pareshani hee nahi ho rahi thi…


“side se maar madarchod ko…”usi bich un dono me se ek ne Jafar se kaha

“ghuma bhatti ki gand ko…”



wo dono mujhe sarkate hue tedha karne lage taki main kood kar bhi Jafar ko laat na maar saku… par aisa karke wo teeno jaha se neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya shuru hoti thi thi mujhe usi oor khiskane lage ….Jafar kinare se mujhe maarne ke liye aaya… jab se wo teesra meri gardan chhodkar bhaga tha, mujhe thodi chhoot mil gayi thi, warna pahle toh main hilta bhi tha toh meri gardan wo apne hath se dabane lagta.


Jab hum sab seedhiyo ke paas aa gaye toh main fir se ek baar kooda aur kud kar apne dono pair se Jafar ke kamar ko pakad liya aur pura jor lagakar khud ko peeche ki oor khud ko dhakela… jo do ladke mujhe peechhe se pakad kar khde the wo thoda peechhe hue lekin peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi ki wo peechhe ho sake… peechhe toh seedhiya thi….


Isliye Pahle wo dono seedhiyo par ulta sar ke bal gire , fir unke upar main aur mere baad Jafar… hum sab seedhiya par ghisate hue neeche gire…. Neeche se upar jaane ke liye seedhiya jo banayi gayi thi wo do part me divided thi… thodi door ke baad ek flat jagah thi jaha se seedhiyo ko turn dekar neeche ki oor moda gaya tha aur usi ke bich me wo flat jagah tha. Hum sab upar se seedhiyo par girte hue us flat jagah par aakar atke… jin do ne mujhe pahle pakad rakha tha wo buri tarah seedhiyo se gire the… neeche girte samay main, most of the time unke upar hee tha, jiske kaaran most of the time.. Mujhe kuch feel hee nahi hua. fir baad me jab wo seedhiyo par ghisat-te hue, girte hue idhar udhar hone lage tab mera sar aur peeth seedhiya ke sampark me aaya, jiske kaaran meri peeth aur sar me jalan ho rahi thi… Jafar toh audhe muh gira tha seedhiyo par aur waise hee neeche tak seedhiyo se takrate hue sarka tha. Uska sar mere pair ke thik paas flat jagah par aakar ruka aur baki sharir seedhiya par hee slope me tha… wo dono hath aur dono taang pasare audha padha hua hanf raha tha…. dard se karah raha tha


“teri maa ka bhosda...mahtarichod… ”Jafar ke sar me kaske ek laat markar main bola…


Lekin Jafar tas se mas naa hua, wo waisa hee pada raha... Jiske baad maine dusri baar kaskar ek laat uske sar par maara. Chhati chhilne aur sar upar se lekar yaha tak kayi seedhiyo se takrane ke kaaran shayad Jafar me khade hone ki taqat nahi bachi thi. Maine ek baar aur ek laat uske sar par maara, jisse ek pal ke liye uska sharir seedhiyo par kuch upar chadha par agle pal fir neeche khisak gaya. Ladke-ladkiya ab seedhi ke upar jhund banakar hume dekh rahe the… do-char log neeche bhi daude hume uthane ke liye , lekin unke pahuchne se pahle main uth kar baith gaya


"Maa-behan ki chut pyaari hai toh chhuna mat koyi... Maaaadharchodo.. jab main maar kha raha tha toh apni behan chodne gaye the... Ab koyi aage aaya rokne ke liye... Toh.. Inko chhod kar main sabse pahle use hee maarunga aur maarne ke baad Gand me lund daal dunga.......... Literally...."chillate hue maine seedhiyo ki taraf badh rahe ladko se kaha... Jiske baad jo jaha tha, wo wahi rook gaya


Main apni jagah se utha aur baal pakad kar jafar
ko railings ki bich me jo gap rahta hai usi me ghusane laga... Madarchod ko yaha se seedhe neeche fekunga, taaki sar ke bal gire aur mar jaaye... Yaha se sar ke bal girega toh sar foot jayega iska, bheja baahar aa jayega. Marega madarchod ye aaj...... Ghus behanchod.


Maine jafar ka baal kheechte hue railings ke beech usko kheencha Lekin Jafar railings ke bich se paar hee nahi ho raha tha.. Maine uski gardan pakad ke bhi aage dhakela, lekin uske kandhe fir se railings ke bich atak gaye...

"Madarchod........" gusse se main fir chillaya.
maine uske tirachhe pairo ko sidha kiya,is dauran uski peeth ko apne laat se kachara bhi aur fir se use pairo ki taraf se dhakel kar railings ke bich se paar karane ki koshish karne laga... Plan toh railing ke upar se sidhe neeche fekne ka tha mera,lekin mujhme utni taqat nahi bachi thi ki main,Jafar ke bhari-bharkam sharir ko utha saku.


Abki baar bhi Jafar ka kandha fir se atak gaya,isliye ab uske pichhwade par laat maar maarkar main Jafar ko andar ghusane laga... Main gusse me us waqt bhool hee gaya tha ki gap kitna kam hai aur Jafar ka sharir kitna bada... Aur jab mujhe samajh aaya toh uska baal pakad kar use seedhiyo se neeche ghaseeta. . Wo mari hui haalat me apne hath se mera hath chhudane ki koshish karte hue chillaya… uske dost neeche pade-pade sirf apna sharir malte hue flat jagah par daanye baaye ho rahe the.


Maine Jafar ko kheenchkar uske dosto ke bagal me litaya aur jaise usne kuch der pahle mere gaal par apni paancho ungaliya chhapi thi, maine bhi uske gaal par paancho ungaliyo chhua kar ek jhapad maara... fir ek aur.. Fir ek aur... Uske baad ek aur… aur fir uske baad ek aur... jab Jafar ne dono hatho se apna chehra dhak liya toh main wahi uske paas kuch der baithkar haafne laga aur fir jab wapas thodi si jaan mere sharir me aayi toh uske hath me mukka maarne laga, jiske baad usne apne gaal se apna hath hataya aur main fir se use jhapad maarne laga …. Meri peeth aur gardan ka nichle hisse me seedhiyo par ghisatne ke kaaran tej jalan ho rahi thi lekin main Jafar ko maarne me itna magan tha ki mujhe uska anubhav hote hue bhi anubhaav nahi ho raha tha… main kabhi Jafar ke chehre par mukka marta toh kabhi chhati par… fir jab maarte hue mera gussa aur tej ho jata toh uska baal pakad kar uska sar wahi farsh par jor patak deta…. Jaisa ki main pahle bhi bata chuka hu, mujhe gussa nahi aata lekin jab aata hai tab main dayi chod deta hu. Fir saamne koyi bhi ho aur nateeja kuch bhi ho.



wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke karan... Karan...? Karan nahi... Karan toh madarchod hai... Kaaran. Wo toh itna maar khane aur seedhiyo se neeche girne ke kaaran mere andar itni taqat nahi thi, warna jis hisab se main Jafaar ka sar farsh me patak raha tha , uska sar tahas-nahas ho jaana chahiye tha, use on the spot mar jaana chahiye tha… jo ladke hume uthane aaye the wo meri is harqat ke baad ab aur peechhe hatne lage… ladkiya toh sari rote hue apne -apne class me dubak gayi thi. Baaki ladke.. Wo ab Jafar ke sar se nikalne wale khoon se sane hue farsh ki taraf aana hee nahi chaahte the isliye wo bas pichhe hokar tamasha dekhne lage…. Koyi inform karne bhi nahi gaya, shayad ab Jafar ke sar se rista hua khoon farsh par failta dekh..sabki gand choke ho gayi thi... Koyi kuch karne,bolne laayak hee nahi bacha tha shayad.


“Ranjan ko tune hee marwaya na re mahtarichod….…”kahte hue maine abki baar Jafar ki chhati me kohni marne ka socha taki sale ki pasliya toot jaaye… mar hee jaaye ye bhosdiwala aaj.


kamal hai...? Maine ye pahle kyun nahi socha.... Koyi baat nahi.. Abhi tod deta hoon. Maine apni dono kohni se Jafar ki pasliya todne ke liye apna dono hath upar uthaya.......


...... ki tabhi Jafar ke jo dost waha bagal me pade-pade aankh band kiye apna sharir sahla rahe the… unme se ek ne mujhe peechhe ki oor dhakka maara, Jafar ko maarne ke chakkar me main ekdum kinaare par tha aur dhakka lagte hee main peechhe hua... Par peechhe toh kuch tha hee nahi, peechhe toh seedhiya tha...

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ichha shakti woh vritti chakra hai jiske antargat pratyay, anubhooti, ichha, gati ya pravritti, shareer dharm sabaka yog rahata hai. jo sankalp ko saakaar karane ka maadhyam banti hai woh ichha shakti kahlaati hai. aisi balawati ichha ko jiski jyoti aharnish kabhee mand na ho, use dridh ichha shakti kahate hain.
ham sabake jeevan mein kayi baar aisi sthitiyaan aati hain, jab hame lagata hai ki sab kuch gadabad ho raha hai. kuch bahot bura hone wala hai iska purva anumaan ho jate hai... aisee sthiti mein ichha shakti hi aapko musibaton se ladane mein madad karati hai. is shakti ke antargat dridh nishchay, aatmavishvaas, kaarya karne ki anavarat cheshta aur adhyavasaay aadi gun aa jaate hain. Yehi ichha shakti jagrit huyi thi atharva mein us waqt, jab baar baar uske atma samman ko thes pahuncha rahe the weh log.... aur bhi kuch bura kare Jafar aur uske dost aain mauke par apni budhi, sahi vichar aur ichha shakti ke badaulat usne apne se zyada teen teen ladke ko seedhiyo ke niche gira diya maana ki uske liye khud ko bhi un logo ke sath hi girna para lekin jis maqsad unlogo ke ke kabze se nikalne ke liye koshish ki usne puri jor lagake usme kamyab hua..
Wait a minute..... abhi atharva ke topic rokte hai hum aur vichar aur sameekshaye kar lete hai anya kirdaar ko lekar....

chaliye maan lete hai 6th 7th 8th yahan tak ki 9th ke ladke ladkiya chhote the lekin koi murkh nahi... jaake principal ko bata sakte the....
lekin gaye nahi.... Kya main ye maan lu ki Jafar aur uska baap aur uske itne bade gunde hai ki ye students dar ke maare isliye nahi gaye complaint karne...
10th se leke 12th tak jaane kitne students honge... par kya itna prakop hai Jafar aur baap ka us school mein ki uske mutthi bhar gundon se dar gaye sabhi students...
kya hai sach... Main explain karti hu...
chaliye us school par bhi sameeksha kar lete hai...
Gupta sir jinhe har koi darta hai.... isliye school mein kand karne se students darte hai....
my foot... aahhh thuuu....
kya khak darte hai usse.. Agar darte to ye kand nahi hota...
Saxena sexshena whatever.... Kya isko principal ki post pe rehna chahiye?
Jafar jaise gundon ko school mein admission dete hai taaki bully kar sake... maar pit kar sake... kya pata aage chalke sexsehna nashile padarth bhi beche Jafar aur uske gundo ke sath school mein..
matlab saaf hai riya rose, madhu, mini Jafar ke sath har dum rehti hai... ab Jafar jaisa gunda hawasi thodi na hath pe hath rakhe baitha rahega... ye teeno bhi uske niche aa chuki hai...
dard si uthe dil mein us bichare atharva ko dekh jo dilo jaan se chaaha us riya rose ko par ushe pata nahi ki riya rose to gunda hawasi Jafar ki chinnar hai..... Shayad ved ko bhi andaza lag gaya tha ki riya rose kitni badi haaraman hai....

“maar madarchod ko… ruk kyun gaya ” jo vyakti mera gardan daba rakha tha wo Jafar par chillaya

“madarchod.madarchod.chhod madarchod... Chhod de re madarchod.”Jafar wahi kikiyane laga aur peechhe se uske dosto ne mujhe maarna shuru kar diya, mera gala aur majbooti se

ye jo gaaliya bak raha tha Jafar aur uske gunde
isme inki koi galti nahi hai, galti to inki parwaris mein hai....
agar ek gatar ki paidayas Jafar aisa hai to uske maa aur baap kaise honge...
uska khandaan kaisa hoga...
Chii......

Sabse dukh ki baat ye hai ki jaane anjane mein atharva,ranjan Sanjana aur ved jaise bhole bhale bachhe us school mein admission le liya...
Kayi silent readers sochte honge ki ye atharva aur ved kitne gandi baatein karte hai... are galti unlogo ki nahi, wo chaaro to masoom hai.. balki galti us school ki hai, waha ke haramkhor Jafar sath dene wale teachers hai aur wo principal saxsehna.... wo aur Jafar to ek hi thali ke chatte batte hai.... inki yahan party hoti hai to wo bio wali teacher party ki rounak badhane ke liye naachti hai.... sabse aham baat... Jafar ki private chinnar hai isliye to Atharva se nafrat karti hai wo aur akhiri sach bhi yahin hai...
........... Khair aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai....
jab jab atharva ne us kamine Jafar ko jakhm diya kaleje ko ek thandak mili... ek sukun jo bayan na kar saku... jab jab us Jafar ka khoon baha.... itni khushi... are kal to maine dinner hi kuch zyada kar li...
lekin afsos atharva thaka hua tha.... Jakhmi wo bhi tha... warna kal atharva apne fans readers ko khas kar mujhe niras nahi karta balki khwahishein jarur puri karta us Jafar ko niche sar ke bal faik ke....
us haramkhor ka sar fat jata khoon behta ushe padh ek vodka with chicken biriyani bhi hum gatak jate... par afsos us Jafar ke us kamine dost ne atharva ko dhakka maar diya... piche to seedhiya thi....
aate hai mudde ki baat par agar atharva ko kuch bhi matlab kuch bhi gehra jakham aaya ya kisi kaaran fansha kanooni dav pesh mein to baaki ke jitne negative kirdaar hai story pe unki Khair nahi... aur akhiri baat bhi yahin hai..
Khair...... Gyani sir kuch palon ke liye khushi deke khushi chin liya atharva ko phir se seedhiyon se niche gira ke...
well.... atharva ne jo action ka reaction dikhaya hai wo apne apme bemisaal hai
Kash uske paas koi hathiyar hota......
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

 

[Naina]

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ichha shakti woh vritti chakra hai jiske antargat pratyay, anubhooti, ichha, gati ya pravritti, shareer dharm sabaka yog rahata hai. jo sankalp ko saakaar karane ka maadhyam banti hai woh ichha shakti kahlaati hai. aisi balawati ichha ko jiski jyoti aharnish kabhee mand na ho, use dridh ichha shakti kahate hain.
ham sabake jeevan mein kayi baar aisi sthitiyaan aati hain, jab hame lagata hai ki sab kuch gadabad ho raha hai. kuch bahot bura hone wala hai iska purva anumaan ho jate hai... aisee sthiti mein ichha shakti hi aapko musibaton se ladane mein madad karati hai. is shakti ke antargat dridh nishchay, aatmavishvaas, kaarya karne ki anavarat cheshta aur adhyavasaay aadi gun aa jaate hain. Yehi ichha shakti jagrit huyi thi atharva mein us waqt, jab baar baar uske atma samman ko thes pahuncha rahe the weh log.... aur bhi kuch bura kare Jafar aur uske dost aain mauke par apni budhi, sahi vichar aur ichha shakti ke badaulat usne apne se zyada teen teen ladke ko seedhiyo ke niche gira diya maana ki uske liye khud ko bhi un logo ke sath hi girna para lekin jis maqsad unlogo ke ke kabze se nikalne ke liye koshish ki usne puri jor lagake usme kamyab hua..
Wait a minute..... abhi atharva ke topic rokte hai hum aur vichar aur sameekshaye kar lete hai anya kirdaar ko lekar....

chaliye maan lete hai 6th 7th 8th yahan tak ki 9th ke ladke ladkiya chhote the lekin koi murkh nahi... jaake principal ko bata sakte the....
lekin gaye nahi.... Kya main ye maan lu ki Jafar aur uska baap aur uske itne bade gunde hai ki ye students dar ke maare isliye nahi gaye complaint karne...
10th se leke 12th tak jaane kitne students honge... par kya itna prakop hai Jafar aur baap ka us school mein ki uske mutthi bhar gundon se dar gaye sabhi students...
kya hai sach... Main explain karti hu...
chaliye us school par bhi sameeksha kar lete hai...
Gupta sir jinhe har koi darta hai.... isliye school mein kand karne se students darte hai....
my foot... aahhh thuuu....
kya khak darte hai usse.. Agar darte to ye kand nahi hota...
Saxena sexshena whatever.... Kya isko principal ki post pe rehna chahiye?
Jafar jaise gundon ko school mein admission dete hai taaki bully kar sake... maar pit kar sake... kya pata aage chalke sexsehna nashile padarth bhi beche Jafar aur uske gundo ke sath school mein..
matlab saaf hai riya rose, madhu, mini Jafar ke sath har dum rehti hai... ab Jafar jaisa gunda hawasi thodi na hath pe hath rakhe baitha rahega... ye teeno bhi uske niche aa chuki hai...
dard si uthe dil mein us bichare atharva ko dekh jo dilo jaan se chaaha us riya rose ko par ushe pata nahi ki riya rose to gunda hawasi Jafar ki chinnar hai..... Shayad ved ko bhi andaza lag gaya tha ki riya rose kitni badi haaraman hai....


ye jo gaaliya bak raha tha Jafar aur uske gunde
isme inki koi galti nahi hai, galti to inki parwaris mein hai....
agar ek gatar ki paidayas Jafar aisa hai to uske maa aur baap kaise honge...
uska khandaan kaisa hoga...
Chii......

Sabse dukh ki baat ye hai ki jaane anjane mein atharva,ranjan Sanjana aur ved jaise bhole bhale bachhe us school mein admission le liya...
Kayi silent readers sochte honge ki ye atharva aur ved kitne gandi baatein karte hai... are galti unlogo ki nahi, wo chaaro to masoom hai.. balki galti us school ki hai, waha ke haramkhor Jafar sath dene wale teachers hai aur wo principal saxsehna.... wo aur Jafar to ek hi thali ke chatte batte hai.... inki yahan party hoti hai to wo bio wali teacher party ki rounak badhane ke liye naachti hai.... sabse aham baat... Jafar ki private chinnar hai isliye to Atharva se nafrat karti hai wo aur akhiri sach bhi yahin hai...
........... Khair aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai....
jab jab atharva ne us kamine Jafar ko jakhm diya kaleje ko ek thandak mili... ek sukun jo bayan na kar saku... jab jab us Jafar ka khoon baha.... itni khushi... are kal to maine dinner hi kuch zyada kar li...
lekin afsos atharva thaka hua tha.... Jakhmi wo bhi tha... warna kal atharva apne fans readers ko khas kar mujhe niras nahi karta balki khwahishein jarur puri karta us Jafar ko niche sar ke bal faik ke....
us haramkhor ka sar fat jata khoon behta ushe padh ek vodka with chicken biriyani bhi hum gatak jate... par afsos us Jafar ke us kamine dost ne atharva ko dhakka maar diya... piche to seedhiya thi....
aate hai mudde ki baat par agar atharva ko kuch bhi matlab kuch bhi gehra jakham aaya ya kisi kaaran fansha kanooni dav pesh mein to baaki ke jitne negative kirdaar hai story pe unki Khair nahi... aur akhiri baat bhi yahin hai..
Khair...... Gyani sir kuch palon ke liye khushi deke khushi chin liya atharva ko phir se seedhiyon se niche gira ke...
well.... atharva ne jo action ka reaction dikhaya hai wo apne apme bemisaal hai
Kash uske paas koi hathiyar hota......
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

Shayad revo chhota hai... aur bhi kuch add karu kya
naahh... I think.. kuch sameekshaye aur alochana Jafar & party (including principal, Gupta, bio wali, madhu mini riya etc.) ke liye agle update ke liye chhod du... aur wo karan naik bhi to hai.. uske upor bhi kuch critical sameekshaye aur alochana karni hai...

 

[Dj cheetah]

jafar ka khoon dekhkar ab sukoon mila