Romance Three Girls of My Life

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ...attitude dikha raha tha ladkiyo ko par koi dekhne ruka nahi ..
aur ye saap wala kaand mast kiya ..sab waha se hatt gaye aur atharva ne riya ki bottle lekar pani piya .
par shayad facebook id nahi maang paya jaldbaji me ..

 

[Mobography]

Hamesha ki hi tarah ek or shaandaar story ke sath hamare priye bhai Yug Purush padhar chuke hain,
Kafi achi story lagi abhi tak Or kafi refreshing bhi.
In 12 updates ko padhkar hi samajh aa gya ki writer kon hai.
Yug Purush bhai aapka jo tarika hai likhne ka usi ke hum murid hai.
8th semester pehli story thi jo mene padhi thi 2013 me usi ke chalte yeh story padhne ka silsila chalu hua tha or aaj bhi jari hai.

 

[Yug Purush]

ये तो सच में बड़ा ही खुराफाती लड़का है अथर्व..... संजना को परेशान करने का एक भी मौका नहीं छोड़ता है ।
लेकिन उसकी हरकतें प्यारी भी लगती है ।
स्कूल और कॉलेज में अक्सर लड़के आपस में अपने टीचर के नाम को बिगाड़ कर दुसरे नाम से पुकारते हैं ...बुल्ला ! क्लास टीचर ।
संजना से बात नहीं बनी तो अब रिया रोज के पीछे पड़ा है । जरूर इसके साथ भी कुछ न कुछ शरारती हरकतें करेगा और फिर से यहां भी उसका दिल टुटेगा ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।

BC kya tarika hai pani bharne ka sabko hata kar

Great bhai
Riya ki pyaas ab shayad ache se bhuj gayi hogi
BC kya tarika hai pani bharne ka sabko hata kar
Ab gupta ji class mai achuke hai dekhte hai ye kitne bade wale antique piece hai
Keep writing
Keep posting

Full antique hai.. Next update me aa rahe hai

I would have enjoyed it more if Gupta Ji beat Atharva.

Arey... Arey.... Ye kya aakash bhai
Waise pilne wala pal bhi aayega... I mean maar pit...

Riya is very beautiful, Our hero has gone mad and is lost in thoughts. By the way, Atharva jokes excessively and today he fooled everyone. I would have enjoyed it more if Gupta Ji beat Atharva.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Thank you

Update 5 - Riya rose

Gyani bhai ultimate, bole to ek dum ultimate fadu update the. Aisa lag raha tha jaise mein vakai mein 2009 ke kisi school mein hun. Vaise to skul time mei kabhi kisi laundiya se baat nahi ki lekin aisa lag raha tha mein ATHARVAA ke sath hi khadela hun. Kya describe mara hai apne Riya ko lekar maza aa gaya. EK number ka screenplay tha pura bhai. start se lekar end tak jo sama bandha purane dino ki yaad aa gayi. Atharva ved ke bich batein fir ved ka bich mein aa jana skul ke harami launde na khud pata patte the aur jiski patt rhi hoti thi use chedte the sab flashback ki tarh samne aa gaya... Ek number update the gyani bhai ye wala...Maza hi aa gaya....

Awesome awesome awesome bilady awesome writing bhai..... Reading nxt....

Dosto ki yahi pahchan hai... Jo khud ko naa mile wo dusaro ko bhi nahi milna chahiye... in a sense.

Update - 6

Bhai ..... Bhai ... Bhai... Bhai.... Ky likh rahe ho ye... Meko laga tha update 5 awesome thajo ki actually mein tha lekin isne to sabhi hadein paar kar di gyani bhai Mein pure update mein hansa hun aur itna sirf tab hansa tha jab 8th semester padh raha tha sahi mein apka koi jawab comparison nahi hai. Infact apke as pas tak koi nahi hai jo is tarah ki lehkhan ko pesh kar sakta hai. Sahi mein aap number one se bhi uppar koi number hai to le lo... This update by far is the best one sirf isliye nahi ki kyun ki likha bahut acha gaya hai balki isliye ki iska jo humor apne pakda hai sach mein mujhe aisa laga ki mein us humor mein kahin kho gaya hun, from the start till the end it was magnificent, totally out of the box aap kabhi kabhi lekar atte ho jaise is kahani mein aap naya pan lekar aye aur use shlok ke uppar apne bayan kiya hai.


mei pura update quote kar deta lekin kya kya kahunga unpar vo samajh nahi paunga par ye jo apne nayapan laye ho ye apne aap mein likhne men bahut dimag chahie jo aapne itni badiya tarah se lagaya hai ki kya kehna....

Gyani bhai mein is update ko tukdon mein bant kar bataun to kya farak padta hai aap to jante hi ho kya likha hai lekin fir bhi kahunga Apne jis tarah se sunayana mam ko describe kiya, ved ka answer dena, wahan ka reaction aurkhud atharva ka question puchna usscene mein ultimate bhai.. Ek ek chiz ultimate likhi hai apne... Ise kehte hain ek perfect story aur perfect update, neat and clear starting se lekar end tak.... Maza aa gaya gyani bhai... u r out of this world bhai... Apko to book likhni chahie sahi mein.... sala market hila degi... thanks for giving us such a amazing amazing story once again... U r bilady awesome awesome awesome awesome bhai

Reading next.....

Kal raat main update dene ke baad online nahi aaya.. Warna ek aur update de deta ye review padhkar
bhai

nice update ...attitude dikha raha tha ladkiyo ko par koi dekhne ruka nahi

sahi hai...

aur ye saap wala kaand mast kiya ..sab waha se hatt gaye aur atharva ne riya ki bottle lekar pani piya .
par shayad facebook id nahi maang paya jaldbaji me ..

Jhoothe botal se paani pine ke baad sab plan pela gaya

Hamesha ki hi tarah ek or shaandaar story ke sath hamare priye bhai Yug Purush padhar chuke hain,
Kafi achi story lagi abhi tak Or kafi refreshing bhi.
In 12 updates ko padhkar hi samajh aa gya ki writer kon hai.
Yug Purush bhai aapka jo tarika hai likhne ka usi ke hum murid hai.
8th semester pehli story thi jo mene padhi thi 2013 me usi ke chalte yeh story padhne ka silsila chalu hua tha or aaj bhi jari hai.

Pura padh liya ek sath anyway to goa, sigham....

Update 10 & 11

Esaa Kau Kartaa Hai
Phone Todne Ke Bad Usko Satana..

Wese Ek Honhar Student Ke saare Gud dikh rhe Athava me

Bina school Life Me masti kiye agar pass huye to kya Pass Hona

Riya Rose Ke Liye Sanp Tank me Sanp Btaakr bheed ko htakar uski bottle bharna aur Peena
Aur fir pataa lgnaa ki ye single use ke liye h


Kitna funny likhoge

Note : - Busy hu Fir bhi pad rhi taki pichhe naa rh jau

Biyah toh nahi ho raha tumhara

thank you everyone ​

 

[Moon Light]

Biyah toh nahi ho raha tumhara

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Kal Exam Hai... Uske Bad Free..

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Update -12​

Riya aaj bhi same to same kal ki tarah dikh rahi thi, matlab waise hee baal, wahi chamakte hue gaal aur kal ki hee tarah mere pure antarman ko madhosh kar deni waali uski khaal. bas antar sirf itna tha ki... aaj uske sar par wo gol topi nahi thi… maine apna gardan dheere-dheere ek oor jhukaya aur saamne se aati ladkiyo ko muskurate hue dekhta raha aur bas dekhta raha… jis par wo sab bhi muskurayi aur aapas me ek-dusare ko tali dekar, dhakka dekar , aapas me khusur-fusur karte hue hasne lagi…. Wo sab jab mere paas pahuchi, jab mere paas se gujri toh siway Riya ke un sabne mera naam lekar mujhse yaha aise baithne ka karan puchha… par maine sab ko ignore kiya matlab lagna chahiye ki ladke me attitude hai aur ektak sirf Riya ki taraf dekhta raha…. Riya ko dekhne me main itna magan ho gaya tha ki Riya ke jaane ke baad bhi main usi taraf deewar ko bahut der tak dekhta raha, jis oor se wo kuch der pahli aayi thi. yahi maankar ki Riya ab bhi wahi khadi hai … aur jab lunch khatm hone ki bell baji , tab mujhe hosh aaya...

“arey...MC”Main waha se utha aur jaldbaji me jaha RO laga tha , us oor bhaga…

Hamara school bahut lamba tha... matlab main gate ke baad ek playground , fir do manjila imarat, jiski upari manjil me 11th & 12th waalo ki class lagti thi... ye sab, yaani wo graund aur ye do manjila imarat thoda high elevation me tha , baki structure ke muqabale .... jin seedhiyo se abhi utarkar main yaha baitha tha , waha se kuch doori tak flat surface hone ke baad fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya bani hui thi... jo is do manjila imarat ke peechhe bane ek aur ground se jodne ka kaam karta tha aur ground ke charo oor waha bhi classes lagti thi aur un classes ke beecho-beech R.O. laga hua tha... ab jaha R.O. tha, waha se fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi aur fir bada sa ground aur uske baad fir uske chaaro taraf classes. 3500 launde-laundiya aise hee thodi padhte the. itna bada aur bhayankar school hone ke bawjood school do shift me chalta tha... taaki pure students sama jaaye. Seedhiyo se neeche utarkar main dusare waale ground me aaya aur dusare waale ground se thodi door me maujood R.O ke paas pahucha... waise ek R.O. upar bhi laga tha, par wo sirf teachers ke use ke liye tha ya fir jab ye waala kharab ho jaaye tab humare liye.... aur ek sabse neeche. Par waha tak jaane me aur fir paani peekar itni seedhiya chadhne me band baj jaati thi. Isliye ye Ground-2 ke paas wala R.O. humare liye better option tha + sabse jyada ladkiya bhi isi me aati thi toh ise best bhi kah sakte hai.

R.O. ke paas is waqt kafi bheed jama thi… jiska ek kaaran lunch time ka khatm hona bhi tha aur sab apni-apni tanki full karke, bottles me paani bharkar class me baithna chahte the… main wahi thodi door me rakhi ek bench me baith gaya, jaha humare school ka ek peon bhi aksar free hone par baitha karta tha… ya fir ye kahu ki students paani ke liye aapas me naa lad le… isliye bhi wo baitha karta tha. sahi suna... paani ke liye lad naa le. Jo haal bhavishya me paani ko lekar puri manav prajati ka hone wala hai, uski ek chhoti si jhalak aksar do-teen din me hume wahi dekhne ko mil jaati thi.


“aur bhaiya, kya haal chal….”mere wahi bench me baithne par wo peon mujhse puchha

“bas badhiya bhaiya… apun rapchik… ”

“ye... sar pe chot kaise lagi…”

“gir gaya tha, kal raaaaaaat meeee…”bolte hue aakhiri ke do shabdo ko maine thoda lamba kheencha aur fir ekdum se ruk gaya… kyunki jo jhund mujhe kuch der pahle seedhiyo ke paas mila tha , wo bhi yahi tha…. Yani Riya Rose bhi yahi thi aur is bheed me paani ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi…

“ye lunch time khatm hote hee sabko pyaas kyun lagti hai… ye bhi ek mystery hai… ab mujhe hee dekh lo…”peon ki taraf aankh maarkar maine ek ishara kiya… waise bhi ab jo main karne waala tha wo main ek-do baar already kar chuka tha….

Maine jaise hee aankh maari, peon thoda ghabra saa gaya... main bhi ghabrata yadi uski jagah hota toh... par, hakikat me main, main tha aur wo..wo... naa toh wo meri jagah tha aur naa hee main uski... isliye...


“ bhaiya, principal sir ne toh mana kiya tha na aapko ki… kisi ko RO ka paani nahi peene dena hai….”waha jami bheed ki taraf chillakar main bola

“mujhe toh kisi ne kuch nahi kaha…”

“arey kya baat kar rahe ho... jis tank ka paani is R.O. me aata hai, usme saanp mara hua mila tha subah….wo bhi sada hua... yuckkk... pata nahi ye janne ke baad bhi ye log kaise paani pee le rahe”abki baar main thoda aur tez aawaz me bola “ Isliye Principal sir ne sabke class me information pahuchwayi thi ki sabhi students upar staff ke liye jo RO laga hai, waha se tank ki safai hone tak paani piye”

“kya bola… saaaaanppp…”saanp ka naam sunte hee waha ikattha hui bheed me se ek ne mujhse puchha... uski haalat aisi thi, jaise saanp ne sach me use das liya ho.

“haan.. saanp.... wo bhi kariya wala….”

Saanp ka naam sunte hee waha mauzood do-teen ladkiya turant ochhar di aur ladke khanste hue paani apne andar se bahar karne lage… kuchh toh turant apne muh me ungali daalkar ulti karne ka prayaas bhi karne lage…. Is dauran RO ekdum khali ho gaya tha, studentes side ho chuke the aur main turant apni jagah se uthakar Riya ke hath se bottle chheena aur RO se paani bharne laga…

“par ye paani kharab hai…”Riya aise mayoos hokar boli, jaise use bahut joro ki bhookh lagi ho aur ration ki line me ghanto lagne ke bawjood bhi ration na milne par ek aam insaan ki hoti hai… matlab wo sach me bahut pyasi thi....

“sab sahi hai, Riya… wo toh bheed ko kam karna tha… isliye…”bottle bharte hue main dheere se bola aur fir jab bottle bhar gayi toh aaa karke matlab upar-upar se Riya ke bottle se paani peene laga

“areyyy… I always drink from that bottle…”mayoos aur aashcharya ke sath Riya mujhse boli...

“so what….no problem”main ek pal ke liye ruka aur fir se paani peene laga.

Meri pyaas bujh chuki thi par fir bhi main paani piye jaa raha tha taaki kuch pal aur aise waha khada rah saku... use dekh saku aur wo mujhe dekh sake...

“ with my lips touching that bottle…”

“WhAaAaAAAaaaaaAAAAAaaaaAaAaAAaaaaaaaAt….????????????”

“you shouldn’t have used that bottle, it’s used one…”fir se mayoos hote hue Riya boli



iske baad maine kuch nahi kaha aur chup-chap RO se full bottle bharkar Riya ko pakdaya… uski saheliyo ko toh jaise bhari maza aa raha tha in sabme… wo sab khilkhila ke hanse padi thi aur main… apna muh lekar waha se chup-chap khisak liya…

Kaha facebook id magne gaya tha aur kaha abbbbb……… ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai….



Main chup-chap class me aaya aur physics ke pure class me chup-chap hee raha…. Aaj toh Sunayana mam ko dekhkar bhi main excited nahi hua aur Sanjana ka jo mobile foda tha, use bhi main lagbhag bhool chuka tha… mere dimag me is waqt sirf aur sirf Riya ke shabd gunj rahe the… ye thi toh chhoti si baat , par ye kand mere sath hua tha aur mujhe pura school jaanta tha, isliye ye kand bhi kal tak pura school jaan jayega… aur fir meri hooting hogi.…. Nursery se ek hee school me padhne ka yahi nuksaan hai.

Inhi sab me main itna kho gaya ki Sunayana kab chali gayi aur next class me Bhagwan Das Gupta ji kab langdate-langdate chemistry ki class lene aa gaye hume pata hee nahi chala…. Yani.... mujhe pata nahi chala….

Bhagwan das ji, apni tarah ke eklaute teacher the… matlab antique piece. wo the toh param gyani, par dimag thoda khiska hua tha… kabhi bhi kuch bhi puchh lete the aur apne class ki alag se attendance register banaya hua tha. pure desh me shayad hee us samay aisa koyi school raha hoga jaha 5th class me students attendance dete rahe honge.. par humne diya hai. wo bhi har roj. hum bhale hee 12th me pahuch gaye the, par yadi unka dimag satakta toh wo pel bhi dete the… fir chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki….



“tu khade ho, bhains jaise sharir wale…”ek ladke ko ungali dikha kar unhone kaha

jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me gunji , main apne khayalo se wapas aaya…. Ye confirm karne ke liye ki kahi mujhe toh khada hone ke liye nahi bola hai, Gupta ji ne...? kya pata kisi ne shikayat kar di ho ki Saanp waale kaand ki. Par wo ladka main tha.. Gupta ji ne mujhe bhains nahi kaha tha...

“present sir…”khade hote hue wo ladka bola

“attendance nahi le raha main… chal ek sawal ka jawab de…”

“chuda, beta aaj ye… ” daant dikhate hue Ved fusfusaya…

क्या लिखूं ? क्या समीक्षा करूं ? इस स्टोरी का प्रत्येक अपडेट एक से बढ़कर एक है । जब जब पढ़ता हूं , सर से टेंशन दूर हो जाता है और एक नई दुनिया में पहुंच जाता हूं ।
इस तनाव भरी जीवनशैली में आपकी ये रचना मन मस्तिष्क को शीतलता प्रदान करती है । अब तो मुझे आप की सारी कहानियां पढ़नी है ।

इस एपिसोड ने भी मुस्कुराने को मजबूर कर दिया । अथर्व की हरकतें के लिए क्या कहूं.... एक नम्बर का चंचल और शरारती लड़का है । उसकी यही नहीं बल्कि सारी हरकतें चेहरे पर मुस्कान ला देती है ।

ग्रेट राइटिंग स्किल ज्ञानी भाई । आउटस्टैंडिंग ।

 

[Yug Purush]

Update-13​

jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me gunji , main apne khayalo se wapas aaya…. Ye confirm karne ke liye ki kahi mujhe toh khada hone ke liye nahi bola hai, Gupta ji ne...? kya pata kisi ne shikayat kar di ho ki Saanp waale kaand ki. Par wo ladka main tha.. Gupta ji ne mujhe bhains nahi kaha tha...

“present sir…”khade hote hue wo ladka bola

“attendance nahi le raha main… chal ek sawal ka jawab de…”

“chuda, beta aaj ye… ” daant dikhate hue Ved fusfusaya…

“kal tu bus stand ki gomti me cigarette pee raha tha na.…? bahut chhalle uda raha tha dhue ke ladkiyo ko dekh-dekh kar... chal bata cigarette lighter me kaun si gas use hoti hai…”saamne chair par sawar hote hue Gupta ji bole

“propane…. Shayad..”

“aa idhar….”ungaliyo se ishara karke Gupta ji ne use saamne aane ka nyota diya

“methane…”

“aa ja beta, mere paas aa…”

“Ethane….”ek baar fir apna luck ajmate hue wo bola….

“aa ja… aa ja … aa ja ab ...aur der mat kar….. jitna galat uttar dega utna jyada laat khayega. minus marking ka jamana hai”

Wo ladka dheere-dheere sahme hue Gupta ji ke paas pahucha aur jaise hee Gupta ji ke paas pahucha… Gupta ji ne turant uske sar ke baal jor se pakad kar us ladke ko wahi gol-gol ghumane lage…..

“saleeee…. Tum log….. apneeee…. Baaaap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe ho….. Butane gas hoti hai cigarette lighter me… kaun si gas hoti hai….”itna bolkar Gupta ji ne use chhoda

“Bueeee….tane…..”

“achchhe se bol….kaun si gas hoti hai…?”fir se uske sar ke baal ko kheench kar gol-gol ghumate hue Gupta ji bole….

“aaaaaa…… Butane….”

“basta pakad apna aur ghar jaa… kal apne baap se sign karwa ke lana….”

“sorry sir…”

“sorry nahi… basta pakad aur ghar nikal…”ek baar fir uska baal pakad kar ghumaate hue Gupta ji bole… “cigarette piyega, school ke paas… haayeee.. gunda banega tu… wo bhi Bhagwan Das ke rahte hue... tujhe aise hee chhod diya toh tu kal wahi baithkar chilam bhi sulgayega...? saale ganjedi..”

“galti ho gayi, sir…. Aaj ke baad nahi piyunga…”


Gupta ji ne us ladke ke baal ko chhoda aur baal chhodte hee ek jhapad gaal par khisiyate hue mara aur jab is-se unka mann nahi bhara toh mutthi baandh ke us ladke ko fir jhukaya aur diya daba ke ek mukka uski peeth par...

“aaayiiiiiii….”peeth par mukka khaate hee wo ladka tedha ho gaya

“jaa baith, nalayak kahi ka… school ke vatavaran ko dushit karte ho”



Gupta ji khud ko bahut bada gunda samajhte the aur ek gunde ke saamne kuch bhi karo par gundayi mat jhado… unse bachne ka yahi ek tarika tha. Baki unhe kisi aur chiz se koyi matlab nahi tha… chahe tum pass ho ya fail… bas unke saamne apna muh sil ke chup-chap baithe raho… par log ye baat samajh nahi paate aur Gupta ji ki baato par aksar hans dete hai ya josh-josh me koyi comment paas kar dete hai. Aur fir pela jaate hai… jaise ki abhi hone wala tha.. Gupta ji ne jab cigarette peene wale ko sari class ke saamne mara toh uske bagal me baithne wala ladka maje le-lekar hasne laga….

“kyun re dhor, bahut hasi aa rahi hai tujhe….”apni jagah se khade hokar uski taraf jaate hue Gupta ji bole….

“chal tu ye bata ki, copper sulphate ke solution se copper recover karne ke liye kaun sa metal use kiya jata hai…”

“IRON…” wo ladka jhatt se bola aur muskura utha… jisse Gupta ji ki aur sulag gayi…

“primary compound of natural gas bata….”

“methane….” Wo fir tapak se bola aur abki baar aur muskurane laga …. Abki baar toh Gupta ji ki jhant bilkul hee sulag gayi aur unhone apna brahmastra nikala…

“page number bata… kis page name number me likha hai…”

“page number... page number...? sir… wo toh nahiii...”

“page no. nahi pata… aye….”baal pakad kar Gupta ji ne us ladke ko jhukaya aur apni kohni dum lagakar uske peeth me mari…. Jiske baad wo ladka wahi chhatpata utha…

“book ka ek-ek shabd yaad hona chahiye… page number tak… sala, mere saamne gundayi karta hai… ruk tu…”ek kohni aur pelte hue Gupta ji bole….

Aur fir pure period hum sabko kuch padhane ki bajay dhikaarte rahe ki kaise hum log apne maa-baap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe hai aur hum logo ko chut bhar.. I mean... chullu bhar paani me doob kar mar jaana chahiye….

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“na be Atharva… jo iske yaha tution padhne jaata hoga, uska kya haal karta hoga ye….”chhutti hone ke baad class se nikalte hue Ved bola… “tune wo wali movie dekh li kya…”

“kaun wali…”

“yeeeeeeeee waliiii….”apne lund ki taraf ishara karke Ved cheekha “2 point…”

“kya hai… be… shant rah…”

“arey tension mat le…. Sanjana kuch din gussa rahegi… fir normal ho jayegi, tera shautan hai na Jafar…. wo de dega use naya mobile kharid kar…”

“arey main wo nahi soch raha….”

“achaa toh Riya wale incident ke bare me soch raha hai… waise thik hee toh hua hai aur sale thode attitude me raha kar… aise fati me rahega toh gand maar lenge log teri, ek ladka tha humare school me, ab passout ho gaya.. chal tujhe kuch dikhata hoon…”

“ab main tujhse puchhunga… ki… kya… kya dikhayega. toh tu fir se ~ yeeee… ~ bolke lawda dikhayega aur 3 point chadha dega….”

“wo toh hai… par main sach me tujhe kuch dikhane wala hu, chal mere sath….”



Ved mujhe pakad kar Principal office ki taraf le jaane laga , yaani long route se.. aaj wo railings se fisal kar direct neeche nahi gaya aur jab hum dono waha pahuch gaye toh usne Principal Office ke bahar lage 2 board ki taraf ishara kiya… ek board tha, jisme pure school me per year highest percentage wale ka naam aur uske us year kitne percentage the.. ye likha hua tha aur dusara board tha , har saal best student ka award jeetne wale ka aur har saal ye dono award alag alag student ko hee diye jaate the.. siwaay...



“mujhe kyun dikha raha hai….ye…. ”maine Ved se puchha...

“ye dekh… ye jo percentage wala section hai na… yaha naam aana aasan hai, sirf pel ke padhayi karni hai aur top karna hai, 3500 logo me. lekin jo ye dusara wala hai … isme naam aane ke liye sab chahiye… ye award usi ko milta hai, jo study me bhi faad de, sports me bhi chod de, other competitions me dusaro ki pond maar de aur teachers ki gaand bhi chaate…. Isliye aksar ye dono award aajtak kisi ek student ne nahi jeeta…….. kyunki 3500 students me top maarne waala ye sab baaki chije nahi kar paata aur jo baaki chije karta hai wo 3500 students me top nahi maar pata..... siway ek baar ke… siwaay ek ke...”dono board ke beech me khada hokar Ved bola “ye dekh….”

“Arman Suryavanshi, 98.76 % & student of the year, 2009……. And guess what…ye dono award usne 10th class me jeete the, jabki best student ka award 25 saal se sirf 12th ke student ko hee diya ja raha hai… siway us saal ke… aur maje ki baat toh ye hai ki teachers se uski banti bhi nahi thi.. infact usne ek teacher ko school me mara bhi tha…. fir bhi Principal ko ye dono award use dene pade.. kyunki baaki sab uske saamne moot barabar the. ”

“toh….?”

“toh ye ki mere bhai…. Thoda akad ke raho. nothing is permanent in this world, not even your failures… aaj fail hue, kal pass hoge.. aaj beizzati hui, toh kal izzat bhi mil jayegi... aaj ek gayi toh kal dusari milegi... tu bas apna apna concept clear rakh, meri tarah aur main jis ladki ko bolu usko pata... tere layak abhi ladki hai nahi school me... jab aayegi toh main khud setting karaunga teri... tu kya hai, tu thoda chutiya hai, toh... jo tujhe samajh jaaye aisi ladki chahiye tujhe. ye Riya , Sanjana ke bas ki baat nahi... ”

"chal lawde......"
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Main ghar pahuchne ke baad Ved ka intezaar kiya ki wo aaye aur hum dono FIFA 10 khele par wo nahi aaya aur main bore bhi ho raha tha. isliye main seedhe waha gaya… jaha, badhiya timepass hone ki guarantee thi plus mera mobile bhi usi ke paas tha… yaani Sanjana ke paas. Waise bhi Udta hua teer lene ki aadat hai thodi-thodi mujhe.. kyunki us teer ko pakad kar main teer ko saamne wale ke pichhwade me ghusane ki practice karta hoon. Toh bas isi uddeshya se pahuch gaya main... Sanjana ke ghar.... Maine Sanjana ke ghar ka darwaja aise khola , maano wo mera sasural ho... full role me, full josh me, full raub ke sath aur darwaja khulte hee mujhe Sunayana mam saamne dikhayi di...



“arey yar... lagta hai yahi gir jayega... itna kyun hot hai ye...”Sunayana mam ko dekh mere mann me khayal aaya

“Atharva , tummm....”

“Good Evening , mam….”

“Sanjana ka mobile tumne toda…”

“mam, aap kisi ki bhi kasam khila lo… main khane ke liye taiyar hoon…. Kasam se, maine Sanjana ka mobile nahi toda… infact yadi logically dekha jaye toh shuruat me Mobile Sanjana ne feka tha, meri taraf… maine nahi. Toh Sanjana ne khud apna mobile toda… ”

“Sanjana , upar apne room me hai…”

“kya kar rahi hai, mujhe maaregi toh nahi…?”

“that’s exactly what I’m seeking to know… in my opinion, beating you.. could be one of many possibilities…”

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..ye gupta ji ke saamne gundagardi nahi karni hai aur iske liye us ladke ko achche se pela gupta ne .
par us dusre ladko ko bewajah hi pita hai apni dabangai dikhane ke liye ...page number wo bhi 12th me kaun yaad rakhta hai ..

aur ye armam suryavanshi kaun hai jisne dono award jeete the ???? pehechan ka hai hamari ?? .

waise ved ke 2 point ho gaye ..
aur ved khud atharva ke liye ladki select karega ..sanjana aur riya kaabil nahi hai ..

waise jhooth kya safai se bola mam ko ki mobile usne nahi toda ..
ab sanjana pitati hai yaa nahi dekhte hai ...

 

[mashish]

Update -12​

Riya aaj bhi same to same kal ki tarah dikh rahi thi, matlab waise hee baal, wahi chamakte hue gaal aur kal ki hee tarah mere pure antarman ko madhosh kar deni waali uski khaal. bas antar sirf itna tha ki... aaj uske sar par wo gol topi nahi thi… maine apna gardan dheere-dheere ek oor jhukaya aur saamne se aati ladkiyo ko muskurate hue dekhta raha aur bas dekhta raha… jis par wo sab bhi muskurayi aur aapas me ek-dusare ko tali dekar, dhakka dekar , aapas me khusur-fusur karte hue hasne lagi…. Wo sab jab mere paas pahuchi, jab mere paas se gujri toh siway Riya ke un sabne mera naam lekar mujhse yaha aise baithne ka karan puchha… par maine sab ko ignore kiya matlab lagna chahiye ki ladke me attitude hai aur ektak sirf Riya ki taraf dekhta raha…. Riya ko dekhne me main itna magan ho gaya tha ki Riya ke jaane ke baad bhi main usi taraf deewar ko bahut der tak dekhta raha, jis oor se wo kuch der pahli aayi thi. yahi maankar ki Riya ab bhi wahi khadi hai … aur jab lunch khatm hone ki bell baji , tab mujhe hosh aaya...

“arey...MC”Main waha se utha aur jaldbaji me jaha RO laga tha , us oor bhaga…

Hamara school bahut lamba tha... matlab main gate ke baad ek playground , fir do manjila imarat, jiski upari manjil me 11th & 12th waalo ki class lagti thi... ye sab, yaani wo graund aur ye do manjila imarat thoda high elevation me tha , baki structure ke muqabale .... jin seedhiyo se abhi utarkar main yaha baitha tha , waha se kuch doori tak flat surface hone ke baad fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya bani hui thi... jo is do manjila imarat ke peechhe bane ek aur ground se jodne ka kaam karta tha aur ground ke charo oor waha bhi classes lagti thi aur un classes ke beecho-beech R.O. laga hua tha... ab jaha R.O. tha, waha se fir neeche jaane ke liye seedhiya thi aur fir bada sa ground aur uske baad fir uske chaaro taraf classes. 3500 launde-laundiya aise hee thodi padhte the. itna bada aur bhayankar school hone ke bawjood school do shift me chalta tha... taaki pure students sama jaaye. Seedhiyo se neeche utarkar main dusare waale ground me aaya aur dusare waale ground se thodi door me maujood R.O ke paas pahucha... waise ek R.O. upar bhi laga tha, par wo sirf teachers ke use ke liye tha ya fir jab ye waala kharab ho jaaye tab humare liye.... aur ek sabse neeche. Par waha tak jaane me aur fir paani peekar itni seedhiya chadhne me band baj jaati thi. Isliye ye Ground-2 ke paas wala R.O. humare liye better option tha + sabse jyada ladkiya bhi isi me aati thi toh ise best bhi kah sakte hai.

R.O. ke paas is waqt kafi bheed jama thi… jiska ek kaaran lunch time ka khatm hona bhi tha aur sab apni-apni tanki full karke, bottles me paani bharkar class me baithna chahte the… main wahi thodi door me rakhi ek bench me baith gaya, jaha humare school ka ek peon bhi aksar free hone par baitha karta tha… ya fir ye kahu ki students paani ke liye aapas me naa lad le… isliye bhi wo baitha karta tha. sahi suna... paani ke liye lad naa le. Jo haal bhavishya me paani ko lekar puri manav prajati ka hone wala hai, uski ek chhoti si jhalak aksar do-teen din me hume wahi dekhne ko mil jaati thi.


“aur bhaiya, kya haal chal….”mere wahi bench me baithne par wo peon mujhse puchha

“bas badhiya bhaiya… apun rapchik… ”

“ye... sar pe chot kaise lagi…”

“gir gaya tha, kal raaaaaaat meeee…”bolte hue aakhiri ke do shabdo ko maine thoda lamba kheencha aur fir ekdum se ruk gaya… kyunki jo jhund mujhe kuch der pahle seedhiyo ke paas mila tha , wo bhi yahi tha…. Yani Riya Rose bhi yahi thi aur is bheed me paani ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi…

“ye lunch time khatm hote hee sabko pyaas kyun lagti hai… ye bhi ek mystery hai… ab mujhe hee dekh lo…”peon ki taraf aankh maarkar maine ek ishara kiya… waise bhi ab jo main karne waala tha wo main ek-do baar already kar chuka tha….

Maine jaise hee aankh maari, peon thoda ghabra saa gaya... main bhi ghabrata yadi uski jagah hota toh... par, hakikat me main, main tha aur wo..wo... naa toh wo meri jagah tha aur naa hee main uski... isliye...


“ bhaiya, principal sir ne toh mana kiya tha na aapko ki… kisi ko RO ka paani nahi peene dena hai….”waha jami bheed ki taraf chillakar main bola

“mujhe toh kisi ne kuch nahi kaha…”

“arey kya baat kar rahe ho... jis tank ka paani is R.O. me aata hai, usme saanp mara hua mila tha subah….wo bhi sada hua... yuckkk... pata nahi ye janne ke baad bhi ye log kaise paani pee le rahe”abki baar main thoda aur tez aawaz me bola “ Isliye Principal sir ne sabke class me information pahuchwayi thi ki sabhi students upar staff ke liye jo RO laga hai, waha se tank ki safai hone tak paani piye”

“kya bola… saaaaanppp…”saanp ka naam sunte hee waha ikattha hui bheed me se ek ne mujhse puchha... uski haalat aisi thi, jaise saanp ne sach me use das liya ho.

“haan.. saanp.... wo bhi kariya wala….”

Saanp ka naam sunte hee waha mauzood do-teen ladkiya turant ochhar di aur ladke khanste hue paani apne andar se bahar karne lage… kuchh toh turant apne muh me ungali daalkar ulti karne ka prayaas bhi karne lage…. Is dauran RO ekdum khali ho gaya tha, studentes side ho chuke the aur main turant apni jagah se uthakar Riya ke hath se bottle chheena aur RO se paani bharne laga…

“par ye paani kharab hai…”Riya aise mayoos hokar boli, jaise use bahut joro ki bhookh lagi ho aur ration ki line me ghanto lagne ke bawjood bhi ration na milne par ek aam insaan ki hoti hai… matlab wo sach me bahut pyasi thi....

“sab sahi hai, Riya… wo toh bheed ko kam karna tha… isliye…”bottle bharte hue main dheere se bola aur fir jab bottle bhar gayi toh aaa karke matlab upar-upar se Riya ke bottle se paani peene laga

“areyyy… I always drink from that bottle…”mayoos aur aashcharya ke sath Riya mujhse boli...

“so what….no problem”main ek pal ke liye ruka aur fir se paani peene laga.

Meri pyaas bujh chuki thi par fir bhi main paani piye jaa raha tha taaki kuch pal aur aise waha khada rah saku... use dekh saku aur wo mujhe dekh sake...

“ with my lips touching that bottle…”

“WhAaAaAAAaaaaaAAAAAaaaaAaAaAAaaaaaaaAt….????????????”

“you shouldn’t have used that bottle, it’s used one…”fir se mayoos hote hue Riya boli



iske baad maine kuch nahi kaha aur chup-chap RO se full bottle bharkar Riya ko pakdaya… uski saheliyo ko toh jaise bhari maza aa raha tha in sabme… wo sab khilkhila ke hanse padi thi aur main… apna muh lekar waha se chup-chap khisak liya…

Kaha facebook id magne gaya tha aur kaha abbbbb……… ye sab mere sath hee kyun hota hai….



Main chup-chap class me aaya aur physics ke pure class me chup-chap hee raha…. Aaj toh Sunayana mam ko dekhkar bhi main excited nahi hua aur Sanjana ka jo mobile foda tha, use bhi main lagbhag bhool chuka tha… mere dimag me is waqt sirf aur sirf Riya ke shabd gunj rahe the… ye thi toh chhoti si baat , par ye kand mere sath hua tha aur mujhe pura school jaanta tha, isliye ye kand bhi kal tak pura school jaan jayega… aur fir meri hooting hogi.…. Nursery se ek hee school me padhne ka yahi nuksaan hai.

Inhi sab me main itna kho gaya ki Sunayana kab chali gayi aur next class me Bhagwan Das Gupta ji kab langdate-langdate chemistry ki class lene aa gaye hume pata hee nahi chala…. Yani.... mujhe pata nahi chala….

Bhagwan das ji, apni tarah ke eklaute teacher the… matlab antique piece. wo the toh param gyani, par dimag thoda khiska hua tha… kabhi bhi kuch bhi puchh lete the aur apne class ki alag se attendance register banaya hua tha. pure desh me shayad hee us samay aisa koyi school raha hoga jaha 5th class me students attendance dete rahe honge.. par humne diya hai. wo bhi har roj. hum bhale hee 12th me pahuch gaye the, par yadi unka dimag satakta toh wo pel bhi dete the… fir chahe wo ladka ho ya ladki….



“tu khade ho, bhains jaise sharir wale…”ek ladke ko ungali dikha kar unhone kaha

jaise hee ye aawaz mere kaano me gunji , main apne khayalo se wapas aaya…. Ye confirm karne ke liye ki kahi mujhe toh khada hone ke liye nahi bola hai, Gupta ji ne...? kya pata kisi ne shikayat kar di ho ki Saanp waale kaand ki. Par wo ladka main tha.. Gupta ji ne mujhe bhains nahi kaha tha...

“present sir…”khade hote hue wo ladka bola

“attendance nahi le raha main… chal ek sawal ka jawab de…”

“chuda, beta aaj ye… ” daant dikhate hue Ved fusfusaya…

good update

 

[mashish]

Update-13​

“kal tu bus stand ki gomti me cigarette pee raha tha na.…? bahut chhalle uda raha tha dhue ke ladkiyo ko dekh-dekh kar... chal bata cigarette lighter me kaun si gas use hoti hai…”saamne chair par sawar hote hue Gupta ji bole

“propane…. Shayad..”

“aa idhar….”ungaliyo se ishara karke Gupta ji ne use saamne aane ka nyota diya

“methane…”

“aa ja beta, mere paas aa…”

“Ethane….”ek baar fir apna luck ajmate hue wo bola….

“aa ja… aa ja … aa ja ab ...aur der mat kar….. jitna galat uttar dega utna jyada laat khayega. minus marking ka jamana hai”

Wo ladka dheere-dheere sahme hue Gupta ji ke paas pahucha aur jaise hee Gupta ji ke paas pahucha… Gupta ji ne turant uske sar ke baal jor se pakad kar us ladke ko wahi gol-gol ghumane lage…..

“saleeee…. Tum log….. apneeee…. Baaaap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe ho….. Butane gas hoti hai cigarette lighter me… kaun si gas hoti hai….”itna bolkar Gupta ji ne use chhoda

“Bueeee….tane…..”

“achchhe se bol….kaun si gas hoti hai…?”fir se uske sar ke baal ko kheench kar gol-gol ghumate hue Gupta ji bole….

“aaaaaa…… Butane….”

“basta pakad apna aur ghar jaa… kal apne baap se sign karwa ke lana….”

“sorry sir…”

“sorry nahi… basta pakad aur ghar nikal…”ek baar fir uska baal pakad kar ghumaate hue Gupta ji bole… “cigarette piyega, school ke paas… haayeee.. gunda banega tu… wo bhi Bhagwan Das ke rahte hue... tujhe aise hee chhod diya toh tu kal wahi baithkar chilam bhi sulgayega...? saale ganjedi..”

“galti ho gayi, sir…. Aaj ke baad nahi piyunga…”


Gupta ji ne us ladke ke baal ko chhoda aur baal chhodte hee ek jhapad gaal par khisiyate hue mara aur jab is-se unka mann nahi bhara toh mutthi baandh ke us ladke ko fir jhukaya aur diya daba ke ek mukka uski peeth par...

“aaayiiiiiii….”peeth par mukka khaate hee wo ladka tedha ho gaya

“jaa baith, nalayak kahi ka… school ke vatavaran ko dushit karte ho”



Gupta ji khud ko bahut bada gunda samajhte the aur ek gunde ke saamne kuch bhi karo par gundayi mat jhado… unse bachne ka yahi ek tarika tha. Baki unhe kisi aur chiz se koyi matlab nahi tha… chahe tum pass ho ya fail… bas unke saamne apna muh sil ke chup-chap baithe raho… par log ye baat samajh nahi paate aur Gupta ji ki baato par aksar hans dete hai ya josh-josh me koyi comment paas kar dete hai. Aur fir pela jaate hai… jaise ki abhi hone wala tha.. Gupta ji ne jab cigarette peene wale ko sari class ke saamne mara toh uske bagal me baithne wala ladka maje le-lekar hasne laga….

“kyun re dhor, bahut hasi aa rahi hai tujhe….”apni jagah se khade hokar uski taraf jaate hue Gupta ji bole….

“chal tu ye bata ki, copper sulphate ke solution se copper recover karne ke liye kaun sa metal use kiya jata hai…”

“IRON…” wo ladka jhatt se bola aur muskura utha… jisse Gupta ji ki aur sulag gayi…

“primary compound of natural gas bata….”

“methane….” Wo fir tapak se bola aur abki baar aur muskurane laga …. Abki baar toh Gupta ji ki jhant bilkul hee sulag gayi aur unhone apna brahmastra nikala…

“page number bata… kis page name number me likha hai…”

“page number... page number...? sir… wo toh nahiii...”

“page no. nahi pata… aye….”baal pakad kar Gupta ji ne us ladke ko jhukaya aur apni kohni dum lagakar uske peeth me mari…. Jiske baad wo ladka wahi chhatpata utha…

“book ka ek-ek shabd yaad hona chahiye… page number tak… sala, mere saamne gundayi karta hai… ruk tu…”ek kohni aur pelte hue Gupta ji bole….

Aur fir pure period hum sabko kuch padhane ki bajay dhikaarte rahe ki kaise hum log apne maa-baap ka paisa barbaad kar rahe hai aur hum logo ko chut bhar.. I mean... chullu bhar paani me doob kar mar jaana chahiye….

.

“na be Atharva… jo iske yaha tution padhne jaata hoga, uska kya haal karta hoga ye….”chhutti hone ke baad class se nikalte hue Ved bola… “tune wo wali movie dekh li kya…”

“kaun wali…”

“yeeeeeeeee waliiii….”apne lund ki taraf ishara karke Ved cheekha “2 point…”

“kya hai… be… shant rah…”

“arey tension mat le…. Sanjana kuch din gussa rahegi… fir normal ho jayegi, tera shautan hai na Jafar…. wo de dega use naya mobile kharid kar…”

“arey main wo nahi soch raha….”

“achaa toh Riya wale incident ke bare me soch raha hai… waise thik hee toh hua hai aur sale thode attitude me raha kar… aise fati me rahega toh gand maar lenge log teri, ek ladka tha humare school me, ab passout ho gaya.. chal tujhe kuch dikhata hoon…”

“ab main tujhse puchhunga… ki… kya… kya dikhayega. toh tu fir se ~ yeeee… ~ bolke lawda dikhayega aur 3 point chadha dega….”

“wo toh hai… par main sach me tujhe kuch dikhane wala hu, chal mere sath….”



Ved mujhe pakad kar Principal office ki taraf le jaane laga , yaani long route se.. aaj wo railings se fisal kar direct neeche nahi gaya aur jab hum dono waha pahuch gaye toh usne Principal Office ke bahar lage 2 board ki taraf ishara kiya… ek board tha, jisme pure school me per year highest percentage wale ka naam aur uske us year kitne percentage the.. ye likha hua tha aur dusara board tha , har saal best student ka award jeetne wale ka aur har saal ye dono award alag alag student ko hee diye jaate the.. siwaay...



“mujhe kyun dikha raha hai….ye…. ”maine Ved se puchha...

“ye dekh… ye jo percentage wala section hai na… yaha naam aana aasan hai, sirf pel ke padhayi karni hai aur top karna hai, 3500 logo me. lekin jo ye dusara wala hai … isme naam aane ke liye sab chahiye… ye award usi ko milta hai, jo study me bhi faad de, sports me bhi chod de, other competitions me dusaro ki pond maar de aur teachers ki gaand bhi chaate…. Isliye aksar ye dono award aajtak kisi ek student ne nahi jeeta…….. kyunki 3500 students me top maarne waala ye sab baaki chije nahi kar paata aur jo baaki chije karta hai wo 3500 students me top nahi maar pata..... siway ek baar ke… siwaay ek ke...”dono board ke beech me khada hokar Ved bola “ye dekh….”

“Arman Suryavanshi, 98.76 % & student of the year, 2009……. And guess what…ye dono award usne 10th class me jeete the, jabki best student ka award 25 saal se sirf 12th ke student ko hee diya ja raha hai… siway us saal ke… aur maje ki baat toh ye hai ki teachers se uski banti bhi nahi thi.. infact usne ek teacher ko school me mara bhi tha…. fir bhi Principal ko ye dono award use dene pade.. kyunki baaki sab uske saamne moot barabar the. ”

“toh….?”

“toh ye ki mere bhai…. Thoda akad ke raho. nothing is permanent in this world, not even your failures… aaj fail hue, kal pass hoge.. aaj beizzati hui, toh kal izzat bhi mil jayegi... aaj ek gayi toh kal dusari milegi... tu bas apna apna concept clear rakh, meri tarah aur main jis ladki ko bolu usko pata... tere layak abhi ladki hai nahi school me... jab aayegi toh main khud setting karaunga teri... tu kya hai, tu thoda chutiya hai, toh... jo tujhe samajh jaaye aisi ladki chahiye tujhe. ye Riya , Sanjana ke bas ki baat nahi... ”

"chal lawde......"
.



Main ghar pahuchne ke baad Ved ka intezaar kiya ki wo aaye aur hum dono FIFA 10 khele par wo nahi aaya aur main bore bhi ho raha tha. isliye main seedhe waha gaya… jaha, badhiya timepass hone ki guarantee thi plus mera mobile bhi usi ke paas tha… yaani Sanjana ke paas. Waise bhi Udta hua teer lene ki aadat hai thodi-thodi mujhe.. kyunki us teer ko pakad kar main teer ko saamne wale ke pichhwade me ghusane ki practice karta hoon. Toh bas isi uddeshya se pahuch gaya main... Sanjana ke ghar.... Maine Sanjana ke ghar ka darwaja aise khola , maano wo mera sasural ho... full role me, full josh me, full raub ke sath aur darwaja khulte hee mujhe Sunayana mam saamne dikhayi di...



“arey yar... lagta hai yahi gir jayega... itna kyun hot hai ye...”Sunayana mam ko dekh mere mann me khayal aaya

“Atharva , tummm....”

“Good Evening , mam….”

“Sanjana ka mobile tumne toda…”

“mam, aap kisi ki bhi kasam khila lo… main khane ke liye taiyar hoon…. Kasam se, maine Sanjana ka mobile nahi toda… infact yadi logically dekha jaye toh shuruat me Mobile Sanjana ne feka tha, meri taraf… maine nahi. Toh Sanjana ne khud apna mobile toda… ”

“Sanjana , upar apne room me hai…”

“kya kar rahi hai, mujhe maaregi toh nahi…?”

“that’s exactly what I’m seeking to know… in my opinion, beating you.. could be one of many possibilities…”

awesome update