Romance Three Girls of My Life

[Yug Purush]

nice update ...itne bade update me hero ka naam hi pata nahi chal paaya ..
aaj hero shayad nivedita rani jo uski senior hai usko propose karnewala hai .
par uska dost ved use aisa karne se rokta hai ..
ved ka character bhi comedian type hai ..lift me ghusne ki jagah gaane sunkar dance karna ,phir ek ladki se baate karte rehna ..aur jab lift full ho gayi to pair me dard ka bahana banana ( par aaj wo kaamiyab nahi hua ) .

nivedita ko propose karne ki baat par hero ka chocolate fenk diya ved ne ..

aur hero bhi bahut bolta hai jaise armaan ka character tha ..
ek example ke liye kitni baate batayi ki nivedita phool hai to ved cactus ka kaanta ..( aur bhi sab example )..

aur hero ne ye kyu kaha ki aaj ke din uske saath bura honewala hai ( usko


se nikalna nahi tha ,accident ho jata etc.) ..

Isliye kyunki bura hone wala hai

nice update ..to ved par chillakar apna raub office ke logo par rakhna chahta hai hero ..
aur ved bramastra hai hero ka ,wo kisi bhi musibat me fansne par hero ko nikal leta hai ..

nivedita ne koi ishara nahi kiya lift me jab bhukamp aaya tha wo keh rahi thi office jaldi aana hai ..
nivedita shadishuda hai aur ab talakh ho chuka hai ,,phir bhi hero ka dil uspe aa gaya ..

sexy doha mast tha ..

Thanks

How innocent is our hero... and Ved is like Chaddi buddy, mischievous friend. The elevator scene was awesome, we never had such an opportunity, although our hero is crazy for Niv, What will happen when his heart breaks? Hearing his way of speaking, had a smile on my face.

The story seems realistic, so my interest is growing. Throughout the update, it was revealed that the bumble-bee is hovering behind a flower. What does the last line of the update mean, the storm is coming later?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

Thanks. I wil

SGP bhai for starting a new story thread_______
Three girls of my life title to kafi intresting hai and I'm sure ki story bhi itni hi intresting hogi_______

abhi kya stamp pe likh ke du wese aaj raat ko pakka padunga

Ab to stamp pe hee likhw

Fantastic start bhai. Dono update padhe tab ja ke bheje me kuch ghusa. Maine pahle hi pm me bola tha ki dimaag ka dahi ho jayega to bas wahi baat hai. Abhi to start hai is liye jyada kuch kah pana possible nahi hoga_______
In dono updates me ye samajh aaya ki first person apni story suna raha hai aur wo apni boss Nivedita par lattu hai. Uska junior hai ved jo use Nivedita ke character ke bare me bata kar usse door rahne ki salaah de raha hai lekin wo ab maanne wala nahi hai kyo ki uske dil me Nivedita nivi ke roop me ghar kar chuki hai. First update aur second update me bhi is baat ko dikhaya gaya ki Kaash main waha se bhaag jata to shayad wo na hota jo hone wala tha. Ab sawal hai ki aisa kya hone wala tha_______
Sgp bhai bhejne wale ne agar bheje me bheja daal kar bheja hoga to mujhe bhi story ke andar ke saat ya tathya samajh me aa hi jayege. Baaki upar wale ki ichha_______

Thabks for such a pleasant review

अपडेट 3

तो महाशय जी और इंतजार करवा रहे निवेदिता रानी को और 5 min मांग लिए ।

खैर सभी वर्क जो कम्पलीट किये सबकी डिटेल लेकर पहुंच ही गए निव के केविन में ।

प्राणिपत्र ???

तो महाशय का नाम है अथर्व
सोचा था उसके काम के बाद निव का प्रमोशन पक्का हो जाएगा पर ये क्या प्रमोशन तो पहले ही हो गया

सुनकर अच्छा लगा अथर्व को कि वो इंदौर ब्रांच का मैनेजर बन सकता है पर दुख तो तब हुआ जब निवेदिता रानी ने कहा उसके प्रमोशन के साथ ट्रांसफर भी हुआ है

बेचारे का दिल टूट से गया । खुद से बातें करता है अथर्व और फाइनली उसकी जुबान फिसलने लगती है खुद व खुद पहले डेट और फिर आई लव यू.....

और फिर निवेदिता का रिप्लाई : - “I don’t think that was a nice thing to say… everything was good until you said that… why did you do that…”

( बेचारे का लोल हो गया सब अरमान ठंडे हो गए निव का उत्तर सुनकर । जल्ददी से अगला अपडेट दो तभी आगे बात पता लगे क्या हुआ उसके बाद....!!!! )​

Wo dhyan nahi diya edit karte waqt... Laptop me ek a dabane par kabhi kabhi double a type ho jaata hai.. Wo प्रणीपात tha

nice update ..chalo ek baat sahi hai ki hero ka naam atharva hai pata chal gaya ..
lekin aisa lagta nahi ki hero ne i love you kaha aur nivedita ne accept kar liya ..wo naraj ho gayi aisa lagta hai ..

nivedita ko promotion ke saath transfer bhi ho gaya hai ..

Ju bahut khush lag rahe niv ke transfer se

Chalo ye to pata chala ki hero ka naam Atharva hai naam se hi banda cool lagta hai
bas mujhe janna hai ki kya tum dono ek dusare ka naam dekhkar dost bane the kya...? Atharva-Ved
Kya thakela joke mara aise joke par hasi kam or muh se galiya jyada nikalti hai
Khair chhodo mudde ki baat ye hai ki nivi ko atharva k aur ved ki childhood friendship k baare me pata kaise chala
Bechare atharva ne itni mehnat ki k uske wajah se nivi ko promotion mil jaye par yaha toh nivi ka promotion already ho gaya hai aur to aur uska transfer bhi hone wala hai
Kehte hai na jab jindgi k L lagne wale hote hai toh sab sath chhod jate hai aur yaha to khud atharva ki juban ne uska sath chhod diya aur anjane me uske muh se o sabdh nikal gaye jiski wajah se lagta hai atharva ki life agey chal k zand hone wali hai
Dekhte hai nivi iss par kya kehti hai aur ye kahani agey chal k konsa mod leti hai
for next update

Wo joke se jyada question tha Niv ka, shayad
Anyway

Kal raat ko update nahi pad paya tha , to review bhi nahi kar paya.... Phir aaj subha se cricket match dekha.. aur team india ne itihas rach diya.. iska ek fayda aur ek nuksan huya, fayda yeh ki hum jeet ke baad sham ko party karne gaye... Aur nuksan yeh... Ki kahani pad nahi paya sahi time par ab padne ki kousis kar raha hu but need aarahi hai...

To aakhirkar atharva ne propose kar diya...
Iska nateeza kya hoga , nivedita rani to Indore chod ke Nagpur jane wali hai...
Nagpur se ek lagab sa hogaya hai...

Ganga Jamuna chalna padega fir toh

निवेदिता..... नायक की बाॅस , तलाकशुदा और उम्र में भी तीन साल बड़ी ।
नायक को ऐसी युवती से प्यार हुआ.....वो भी पहली बार दिल की गहराइयों से । लिफ्ट से " हाय - हैलो " से जो आकर्षण शुरू हुआ , भुकंप के झटकों ने उसे निवेदिता के और करीब ला दिया ।

होता है । जब प्यार होता है तो न उम्र की सीमा होती है और न ही जन्म का कोई बंधन होता है ।

लिफ्ट वाली घटना काफी बढ़िया थी । भुकंप के झटकों से उसे कोई परेशानी नहीं थी क्योंकि वो कोलियरी में रह चुका है जहां ओपन कास्ट प्रोजेक्ट में अक्सर डायनामाइट के द्वारा विस्फोट कर कोयला निकाला जाता है । लेकिन निवेदिता को परेशानी हुई और उसे नायक का सपोर्ट लेना पड़ा । और फिर नायक इस मुगालते में रहा कि वो उसे चाहने लगी है ।

फिलहाल तो यही लग रहा है कि दोनो तरफ से ही नायक की मिट्टी पलीत ही होने वाली है .... निवेदिता की हां हो तब भी और ना हो तब भी ।

और हां ! निवेदिता ने क्या मदद की नायक के दोस्त की नव विवाहित पत्नी की । वाह ! क्या कहने !

आप ने ये बिल्कुल सही कहा.... चश्मा पहनने के बाद उसे आंखों पर जब तब सेट करना पड़ता है । खास तौर पर कम्प्यूटर चलाते वक्त ।

बेहतरीन अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।
आप की अपडेट्स बिल्कुल ' बिहारी ' के दोहे के समान है....देखन में छोटन लगे , घाव करे गंभीर ।

Kya line maari bhai.. Last me.. Ghav to aapne kar diya us ek line se. aur aap colliery area me rah chuke ho shayad....

ऐसा नाम तो मां बाप अपने दो बच्चों का रखते हैं.... अथर्व वेद ।
चार वेदों में एक ।
निहारिका इनके नामों से उन्हें चाईल्डहुड फ्रैंड बोली ।
अथर्व ने पांच पांच मिनट का इशारा करके कहीं निहारिका को नाराज तो नहीं करा दिया ? बड़ी मुश्किल से तो प्रपोज किया लेकिन निहारिका की बातों से तो गाड़ी पटरी से उतरती हुई दिख रही है ।
और निहारिका फिलहाल किसी के साथ फ्रैंड विथ वेनिफीट में नहीं है..... ये अथर्व साहब इतना कांफिडेंस से कैसे बोल रहे हैं ?

एक और बेहतरीन अपडेट ज्ञानी भाई ।

और हां ! वर्षा ऋतु नाम पहले यूं ही रख दिया था लेकिन जब पता चला कि ये तो बहुत गड़बड़ हो गया है ( लड़कों के अनाप-शनाप मैसेज आने लगे थे )
तब जाकर नाम चेंज करवाया । वैसे ये नाम कुछ बचपन की यादें हैं और फिर बरसात का मौसम मुझे बहुत पसंद है , इसलिए यही नाम रख लिया था ।

Thanks.

Thank you everyone........

 

[Aakash.]

Finally we came to know the name of the hero. Atharva is a very cute good name. At first I thought that the desires of the heart would be buried in the heart but It is said that whatever in the heart, it comes on the tongue and happened to Atharva. Now Niv's response would be worth watching, although I think she would say yes, but there is also a fear in my mind that if something went wrong.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[Naina]

Update-3​

....ki tabhi uski nazar mujhpar padi aur hazar tonnes ka jhatka mujhe laga... wo toh mera force & equilibrium ka concept clear hai, warna main seedhe dhadam se ulta girta... Nivedita mujhe dekh muskurayi aur paanch ungaliya hawa me lahra kar ishara kiya ki... kya mera paanch minute abhi tak pura nahi hua...? jiske jawab me maine bhi apni paancho ungaliya hawa me lahrakar use 5 aur minute rukne ke liye kaha... matlab maine use fir nakaar diya. Koyi aur aisa karke dekhe toh...? karna toh door ki baat, koyi aisa karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta... warna, kulhadi.. uske tango ke beech-o-beech padegi aur banda lahu-luhan hokar pada rahega... Mere dwara paanch minute aur.. ka ishaara paate hee Niv ek baar fir apna sar hilate hue muskura kar rah gayi aur kuch der muskurate hue mujhe dekhti rahi.... maine aankho se ishara karke bina kuch kahe puchha bhi ki wo aise kyun ghoor rahi hai... jiske jawab me wo apne saamne rakhi files ko taakne lagi.

kehna bhi kya ye nain anjaan se jaa mili.. par woh anjan nahi balki uski boss hai.. so ankh mein choli na khele toh behtar hai uske liye aur boss se pe try nahi unki tarif karni chahiye apna matlab nikalne ke liye .. chahe jhuthi hi sahi ..

Us raat ... yani colleague ki wedding reception waali raat... main Niv ki akelepan ko bhaanp gaya tha kyunki uske huaband se related kayi chije maine uske bedroom me dekha tha... ab lover toh tha nahi Niv ka koyi... toh usi ke husband ki wo sab chize hongi , maine aisa andaza lagaya. Uske akelepan ke sath-sath main uske mann ko bhi bhaanp chukka tha… jitni meri samajh hai , jitna main soch sakta hoon, uske according use ek launde ki shakt jaroorat hai, is samay. Niv, is samay akeli thi... matlab uski love life zero thi aur kisi ke sath friends with benefits wala bhi rishta nahi tha… bole toh 100 % shuddh single, meri tarah… isliye main uske sath mingle hona chahta tha.



Isliye maine last 2 working days me jitni sites clear hui thi , unki reports.. files aur pendrive dono me lekar Nivedita Rani ke cabin me ghusa… pahle toh mann kiya ki goggle-voggle laga ke, collar upar karke , beedi peete hue role me andar ghusu par fir socha ki......... anyway, Niv is samay khidki se neeche dekh kuch soch rahi thi…

“pranipaatra ”dono hath jodkar Niv ka aadar satkar karte hue main dheemi aawaz me bola

wo apne khayalo me itni khoyi hui thi ki meri ye dheemi aawaz ne bhi Nivedita ko jhakjhor kar rakh diya… wo wahi baithe-baithe kaanp uthi.... mujhe bhi use dekh kar kaanp jaana chahiye tha ya waha se seedhe neeche kood jaana chahiye tha. par kisi bhi haal me waha nahi rukna chahiye tha. par main ruka aur waha baitha bhi.

“Atharva, tum ho… baithiye mahashay… toh abhi pura hua aapka 5 minute…”

Oh toh mahasay ka naam atharva hai...
Arre Arman ka naam bhi toh A se suru..

“ye arrange kar raha tha…”pahle file maine ekdum role me uske table par feki aur fir uske upar pendrive rakhte hue garv se bola “ye do din se pending tha aur aapko report bhi bhejna tha upar… taki upar wale aapke promotion me koyi upari rukawat na daale… promotion toh ab hoke rahega”

“I got it… Atharva..”

“yeah, you got it right… we have to work hard… we will nail the…”

“I got the promotion, Atharva”mujhe beech me chup karakar Niv boli

“proooo..motion.. you … you got the promotion? Promotion wala promotion na…”

“aur mujhe Indore branch ki site manager ke liye kinhi do senior colleague ka naam suggest karne ke liye bola gaya hai… aaj sham tak. Dusare naam ka toh abhi pata nahi par pahla naam tumhara hoga…”

“thankkk....”

“par sirf ek shart par.... tumhare left eyebrow ke upar sar par jo nishan hai, wo kaise laga… katayi zehar lagte ho…”main thank you kahta uske pahle hee bol padi

“thank you, mam…” jis nishan ka jikra Niv ne kiya tha, uspar ungaliya firate hue main bola “ kahani bahut lambi hai aur samay bahut kam… fir kabhi…?”

“waise, ab taiyar ho jao… bahut mehnat karni hai, aane wale dino me… khaskar ke tab, jab mere yaha se jaane ke baad yadi Ericsson walo ne tumhe site manager banaya toh… tumhe apne colleagues se kaam nikalwana aana chahiye… fir chahe method koyi bhi ho…”

“tumhare... matlab aapke jaane ke baad….? Iska kya matlab ? ”

“matlab promotion ke sath-sath… transfer bhi hua hai. Ericsson ke Nagpur branch me”



Mann toh udas hua ye sunkar ki Nivedita ka transfer ho raha hai, par kar bhi kya sakte hai... wo kaun se mere kahne ya mere udas hone par apna promotion chhod kar yahi Indore me sadegi.

“Nagpur me kaha…? humara ek senior waha ke pagalkhane me tha...”haste hue maine kaha…

“exact address nahi maloom…”kahte hue Niv wo file , jo maine abhi-abhi uske saamne rakhi thi usko uthakar uske panne paltane lagi…

So usko promotion milne wala hai aur sath hi nivedita ko bhi.. lekin ek interesting twist yeh ki nivedita ko promotion ke sath sath transfer bhi mili hai... lo... hero ka dil iske sath hi tut gaya

Idhar… Niv file ke panne palta rahi toh udhar mera dil palat raha tha… uski baaton se. kyunki Nivedita ab yaha se jaane wali thi, isliye main ab confusion me tha ki isse wo kahu bhi ya nahi… jo main aaj kahne wala tha. Pahla raasta ye tha ki main Niv. Se wo kah du… jo main kahne ke liye aaj ghar se nikla tha, par problem ye thi ki Yadi ab kahta hu toh wo pakka naa karegi kyunki ab toh wo yaha se jaa rahi hai aur mujhe lekar use koyi feeling hogi bhi toh wo daba degi… mujhe bhi aisa karna chahiye… main bhi apni feelings ko daba deta hu , fir chahe zindagi bhar yahi malal rahe ki …. Kash us din kah deta.

Dusara raasta jo tha wo chup-chap jis tarah muskurate hue main yaha aaya tha waise hee muskurate hue yaha se nikal jaun… taki Niv site manager ke promotion ke liye mera name suggest kare aur uske jaane ke baad ye puri branch mere under me… yaha ka pura maal mera… ye bada sa alishan cabin bhi mera… jaha main ek mast screen lagwaunga aur mast sofe me pasar kar bf dekhunga… cricket dekhunga, satta bhi khelunga. fir meri life set hai.

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“Par nahi yar….”kuch der tak khud se vad-vivad karne ke baad main is niskarsh par pahucha ki try toh marna hee chahiye…

Par kaise….? Seedhe… I Love you from deep of my heart…. Bol du kya… nahi, ye sahi nahi rahega… pahle date ke liye puchhata hu.

“good work…”file ke panne palat-te hue Niv boli

“thank You mam… aap dat…day… date…”

“date…? aaj ki date….? 18”

“thank you…”khud par gussa hote hue maine bade pyar se kaha

“excellent…”file band karke wahi neeche rakhte hue Niv. Boli “ye pd last time ki tarah data corrupted toh show nahi karne wali na…?”

“arey wo…. Wo… wo toh Veeeeeeeed…. Ki galtiiiiii............. nahi thi, wo actually meri galti thi. isliye main check karke laya hu… wo Ved ki galti nahi thi… infact, jo site kal clear nahi hui hai, uske liye maine aaj Ved ko sabke saamne harasse bhi kiya hai, jaisa ki aapne mujhe sikhaya tha.”

“drop the act, Atharva… I know, you both are good friends since childhood... bas mujhe janna hai ki kya tum dono ek dusare ka naam dekhkar dost bane the kya...? Atharva-Ved.. this is cool, in a sense”

Aur jaise hee Niv ne ye kaha, main kuch pal ke liye coma me chala gaya… matlab kaise… kab… kisne ise bataya. Ved toh ise batane se raha, maine bataya nahi aur office me kisi se ye bina kaam ke koyi baat karti nahi... fir Niv ko kaise pata chala…? Matlab refrence toh Ved ke resume me mera hee tha, par Nivedita ne childhood word ka istemaal kiya… matlab ise maloom kaise chala ki main aur Ved bachpan se ek hee thali ke chattu battu hai….

Haan yeh toh sochne wali baat hai ki ushe kaise pata..... wait a minute... kahi koi thrill aur suspense toh nahi chupi hai is baat mein...

“you can go now…”mere khayalat me ghuste hue Niv boli….

“wo mam….mmmm…..”

“haan bolo…”

“wo… dayyyt… date..”main dusari baar apni is harqat par khud par gussaya

“bataya toh 18th…”

“actually… wo… date nahi”

“clearly bolo na…kya bolna chahte ho”

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“kya bolu main…”jab mere muh se lakh koshisho ke bawjood bhi kuch nahi nikla toh hathiyaar dalte hue maine bhari mann se kaha… aur mayusi bhari nazro se Niv ki taraf dekha, par use toh koyi fark hee nahi pad raha tha.

“you okay, Atharva… ? you look exhausted…. Aaj jaldi ghar jao.. par uske pahle ye file….”ek file mujhe pakdate hue wo boli… “in sites ki data abhi tak mere paas nahi aaye, toh jinki jimmedari thi, unko bolo… ok... aur aisa bolna ki ye kaam is samay unhe unki zindagi ka sabse important kaam lage..”

“ok and I LOVE YOU….”maine jaise hee file Nivedita ke hath se li mere muh se apne aap hee ye nikal gaya… kamal hai, jab tak khud se bolna chahta tha, tab tak I LOVE YOU, ka I tak nahi nikla aur ab… achanak se…. madarchod... gaya kaam se…

Nivedita Rani mujhe dekhti rahi, ghoorti rahi... uske chehre ke expression mujhe I Love You Too , bolne waale nahi lag rahe the... use dekhkar yahi lag raha tha ki wo andar hee mere maa-behan ko yaad kar rahi hai. par dignity maintain karni thi... use bhi aur mujhe bhi... main toh nahi bolne wala tha, wo toh apne aap kahi se nikal gaya aur wo apna chashma set karte hue thodi der baad mujhse boli...

“I don’t think that was a nice thing to say… everything was good until you said that… why did you do that…”apna sar pakad kar mayoos hote hue Nivedita Rani boli…

Maybe nivedita ko pata hai ki arthava ka pyar, pyar nahi bas mahaz tharak hai.. isliye na kar diya.. udhar hero ka dil joh transfer ke naam par tut gaya tha, thoda aur tut gaya.. iski prem ya joh bhi kahani hai woh suru hone pehle hi khatam..
Maybe ab ye tute huye dil ke sath sharab pina suru kar de..
par jaane kyun is nivedita pe shaq hai... actually daal mein kuch Kala hai... I think is nivedita k wajah se arthava kahin bahot badi musibat mein fanshne wala hai..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill gyani sir

 

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[harshit1890]

Update 1 ....

Jabar bhai... Jabar shuruwat, matlab apne three girls of my life ki kahani bilkul change kar di hai. Arman ko aap hatana chahte the jaisa apa keh rhe the jiske baad aap ved ko le aye aur jo hi main wala kirdar hai abhi naam samne nahi aya hai vaise itni sidhikahani hogi nahi bhale hi apne start sidha diya ho

Lekin fadd shuruwat jaise ki aapki adat hai, har jagah choti choti chiz mein maza dila dete ho. Lift wala scene awesome tha wahan ek ada laundia ad ho jati to aur rangeen ban jata Lekin gazab tha, ved ne bechare 'main' ko sala purpose na karne diya, aise kamine dost hote hain tabhi ladkiyan nahi ati paas acha bhala chance marwa diya. Gyani bhai maza aa gaya mafi thoda late aya meko to malum hi nahi tha ki apne update dene shuru kar diye warna pehle hi din aa gaya hota Lekin ab mein kuch din baad hi aunga monday se hazri dunga lekin filal koi predict nahi kar sakta aur na hi kahani pehle se judi hui nazar ayi. Office aa gaya na sidha... aur offcie mein maza kara dia apne.

Sahi mein gyani bhai kuch bahut tagda sochela lagta hai apne.... Mein intezar to us ka kar raha hun ki kab kahani mein aap turn aur twist hume de maroge isliye sala shuru se hi dhayan se padna padta hai Awesome shuruwat gyani bhai

Aage jaldi padunga bhai.... jaldi milunga

 

[Yug Purush]

Update-4​

Nivedita Rani mujhe dekhti rahi, ghoorti rahi... uske chehre ke expression mujhe I Love You Too , bolne waale nahi lag rahe the... use dekhkar yahi lag raha tha ki wo andar hee mere maa-behan ko yaad kar rahi hai. par dignity maintain karni thi... use bhi aur mujhe bhi... main toh nahi bolne wala tha, wo toh apne aap kahi se nikal gaya aur wo apna chashma set karte hue thodi der baad mujhse boli...

“I don’t think that was a nice thing to say… everything was good until you said that… why did you do that…”apna sar pakad kar mayoos hote hue Nivedita Rani boli…

Usne ye kaha toh bade shant tarike se tha… par uska response inta depressing aur disapproving tha ki mano, wo kah rahi ho ki… uski nazro me main gir gaya hu… usne mujh jaisa gira hua insaan aaj tak nahi dekha aur aaj ke baad wo meri chhaya tak dekhna pasand nahi karti aur yadi uska bas chale toh abhi ke abhi mujhe fansi lagwa de... Vagerah-vagerah...

“aisa kya bol diya maine… pata nahi, shayad main hee chutiya hu… Ved sahi bol raha tha…”is tarah Niv ke sath main bhi deperess hone laga… infact, main khud apni nazar me ab gir chuka tha….

Iske baad Kuch der tak hum dono me se koyi kuch nahi bola… aur fir Niv boli ya fir ye kahu ki first time usne apne Manager hone ka mujhe abhaas ke sath-sath ahsaas bhi karaya….

“Atharva…. Get out…”

“kaaa…kya mam..”mujhe apne kaano par yakin hee nahi hua ki wo ye mujhse bol rahi hai...

“get lost… ab sunayi diya ? and please consider yourself out for the site manager post, I’m not gonna forward your name to superiors after this incident…”

“sorry, mam…”

“Atharva, please get the hell out of here…. And never talk to me in this life…”

“yes mam….. ok mam… sorry mam…”ye bolte hue… repeat karte hue.... main utha aur Niv ke cabin ke sath-sath office se bhi seedhe nikal gaya, apne flat ke liye... how unlucky I am….

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is ghatna ke baad mujhe pel ke khush hona chahiye tha, pure shahar me dhindhora pitwaana chahiye tha... ya fir pure desh me. mujhe khushi se nanga naach karna chahiye tha par haqiqat bilkul iske ulat thi.. main had se jyada dukhi aur us se bhi jyada udas tha.

Apne room pahuchkar maine sabhi kamro ki sabhi lights band ki aur tv par ek jhaat jaisi horror movie dekhne laga… kyunki ye meri aadat hai ki jab bhi mujhe koyi chiz buri ya kharab lagti hai toh main use dusari feelings me dabane ki koshish karta hoon aur dar se strong bhala kaun si feeling hogi.....? Meri puri koshish thi ki ye horror movie mere udasi ko bhi horrify kar de… ye kabhi-kabhi toh kaam karta hai par kabhi-kabhi mujhe aur kharab lagne lagta hai specially jab horror movie dekh ke meri fat jaati hai… tab main andhere me akele udas hone ke sath-sath, dara-dara bhi rah jata hoon.

Jo aaj mere sath hua matlab jo maine aaj apne sath kiya... ye mere sath first time nahi hua hai… pahle bhi aisi milti julti ghatnaye mere sath ghat chuki hai aur har baar main soch me pad jata hu ki mere sath hee aisa kyun hota hai… matlab main direct propose nahi karta ki... first time pyar aur second time ikrar... aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.... maa kasam. line ladkiya bhi deti hai aur fir jab main dene lagta hu toh… pata nahi ladkiyo ko kya ho jata hai… wo fir bhav khane lagti hai aur aise acting karne lagti hai ki jaise kuch jaanti hee na ho… meri puri life ko yadi nichoda jaaye toh yahi saar niklega… main kayi relation me raha par end ek ka bhi dhang se nahi hua aur aaj …. Us list me ek aur milestone jud gaya tha aur hamesha ki tarah main ek horror movie ke aage aankhe gadaye, tv dekhe ja raha tha, par dekh nahi raha tha… kyunki meri aankho ke saamne aur dimag ke andar ab bhi Nivedita Rani ka wo alishan cabin tha aur usme chutiya bana baitha main.



“ Matlab…………….. ladkiya chahti kya hai mujhse… kyun mera kaat deti hai har baar… sala har baar khud ki nazro me gir jata hu. Ab maine soch liya hai… ek-ek ke upar case karunga… harassment ka. Sali, pahle line dengi aur fir jab main usi line ko aage badhane ko koshish karta hu toh wo line hee ekdum se mita deti hai… achcha hua india me arrange marriage ab bhi hoti hai, warna main toh sari zindagi kunwara hee rah jaata…. Aur ye sala horror movie wale itna gates kyun thokte hai… salo, ek movie bana do gates pe, yadi doors itne hee pasanad hai toh… title bhi main de deta hoon... The Game of Doors….”main chillaya, gala fadkar chillaya

“abey lawde.... kholegaaaaaaa gate… ya suicide kar liya….” aur tab mujhe samajh aaya ki aawaz tv ke gate se nahi balki mere gate se aa rahi thi… matlab mere room ke gate se.

“Ved….”darwaja kholte hue maine kaha…

“mutth maar raha tha kya be… Nivedita Rani ko sochkar...? Yaa fir Tera doorbell kharab hai …?”

“tune hee toh last time ukhada tha, daru peeke…”

“kya Manager banoge lawda… le pakad”Duvel ka pura ek peti beer mujhe pakdate hue Ved bola “abey tere baju me kya maal rahti hai be… aaj dekha main... jab tu gate nahi khol raha tha toh, wo bahar aayi thi… use dekh kar main muskuraya aur mujhe dekh kar wo muskurate hue stupid boli.... abey pakad na jaldi, mutna hai mujhe…. 2 botal main pahle see hee maar chuka hu…”

Maine duvel ka peti uthaya aur tv ke saamne table par rakh diya aur ek botal nikalkar daanto se dhakkan khol peene laga….. thodi der me Ved bathroom se nikalkar tv ke paas aaya aur apne jute nikal kar wahi se main gate ki taraf feka aur fir apni pant utarkar sofe me rakha... shirt , chaddi aur moje pahane hue wo sofe me apne pant ke upar baithkar bola...

“pant bahut tight hai madarchod, mujhe bhi de ek….”Ved ne beer mangi…

“cartoon lag raha hai… tu…”use dekh haste hue maine kaha

“aye tu beer dena na… aur mujhe aise kya dekh raha hai… chusega kya mera… tu dimag kharab mat kar yar, beer de… badhiya movie hai ye…”

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“waise aaj wahi 18 tarikh hai… 18… tera Gupta ji wala birthday aaj hee hai, jo tune school me us-se bachne ke liye jhooth-mooth ka aaj ke din ko apna birthday bata diya tha… taaki wo tujhe naa pele. waise kya boli… teri Niv…? bina bataye chala aaya…”

“maine bola hee nahi kuch…”

“chal lawde… sach sach bata kya boli…”

“I don’t think that was a nice thing to say… everything was good until you said that… why did you do that, Atharva… bas itna hee boli… aur jo mera name wo site manager ki post ke liye recommend karne wali thi, wo bhi ab wo nahi karne wali…. Aur mujhe get lost lost kaha, sath hee ye bhi ki is puri zindagi me main us-se kabhi dobara baat na karu… bas itna hee boli , jyada kuch nahi”beer ki botal hontho se sparsh karate hue main bola

“ toh usne kulhadi maar hee di… faad diya na taang, what a great day for both of us…”beer ki dhakkar daant se kholne ke baad Ved bola…

“tere sath kya hua…”

“kuch nahi, main toh yaha tere liye aaya tha…”

“chal lawde, sach sach bata kya boli…”

“kaun… meri maal…? Wo kya bolegi, jo bolna tha… wo maine hee bola, usne toh bas mujhe block kiya… fb se, insta se, whatsapp se… apne ghar se, apne dil se…”

“really, what a great day for both of us… cheers.. ”

“indeed…”

“waise hua kya...?”Ved ko apni tarah luta-pita dekh mujhe bahut sukoon mil raha tha aur... aur adhik sukoon ki chah me maine usse ye sawal puchha...

“uski family aayi thi kuch din pahle... salo ne naukar bana ke rakh diya tha. Din bhar… bitiyachod , ye lao…wo lao… yaha jao, waha jao… aise khao, ye khao… ye karo, wo mat karo… isko yaha le jao, usko waha le jao. apun free spirit wala aadmi hai, tujhe toh pata hee hai… fir bhi uske liye main ye sab sah gaya… aur aaj jab office ke baad sari tension door karne ke liye 2 beer markar shanti se apne flat par yaani ki.... uske flat par gaya…. toh Lawda, wo chillane lagi… par dheere-dheere taki… kisi aur ko pata naa chale. par mera matha thanak chuka tha aur fir thodi der baad Mira ka baap mujhse bolta hai ki… beta mere liya socks kharid ke le aao…”

“interesting… aage kya hua… ab maja aayega”

“main bola… chillakar bola… ki… lawda nahi jayega mera, kahi. Kuch nahi bol raha toh chodu samajh ke rakhe ho ka be….”

“fir kya hua… ab aur maja aayega…”

“ mere itna bolte hee , sabki fat ke hath me aa gayi… fir meri maal ke baap ne situation sambhalte hue apne jhat barabar ladke ko paise dekar use socks lane ke liye kaha… aur jab wo mere bike ki chabhi magne aaya toh, maine use kaha ki ….. lawda tu bhi nahi jayega kahi, aur jayega toh paidal ja… theka nahi le rakha hai maine tum logo ka… aur fir breakup….”

“ab kuch achchha feel ho raha hai….”kahte hue maine dusari beer ki botal uthayi….

“main kya bolta hu, chal… chalke , Nivedita Rani ke ghar ke bahar mutth visarjan karte hai… aur fir jab dobara khada hoga toh meri waali ke ghar ke baahar... aur muthiyate hue video bana ke un dono ko send kar denge... gadiya fat jayegi un dono ki hamara ye karishma dekh kar... ”

“abeyyy… ab bade ho gaye hai hum dono aur ab wahi karenge… jo bade log karte hai… daru piyenge aur sad songs sunenge... iske sath hee Sunayana mam wali sexy kahani ko aage badhayenge…”maine ek aur sip maarte hue kaha aur tv a volume thoda kam kiya

“tujhe lagega ki mujhe chadh gayi hai, par kabhi gaur kiya ki duniya ki sari … sari problem ka ilaaj kya hai…?" dono hath me botal liye apne hath failate hue Ved puchha

“daru…?”

“exactly …. Sukhi hai toh daru, gam me hai toh daru…. Paas hue toh daru, fail hue toh bhi daru… koyi paida hua toh daru, koyi mar gaya tab bhi daru… naukri lagi tab bhi daru aur nahi lagi tab bhi daru, india match jeeti, tab bhi khul ke daru aur yadi india match haar gayi, tab bhi daba ke daru… koyi dost saalo baad mile tab bhi daru aur yadi koyi dost chhod ke jaa raha hai, tab bhi daru… aur toh aur… ladki haan bole tab bhi daru aur naa bole tab bhi daru….”

“wo sab toh thik hai, par kabhi-kabhi sochta hoon ki hum dono ka kya hoga be… kaun ladki humlog ke sath rahegi…”

“arrange marriage hogi hum dono ki… tension mat le”Ved bola…

“wo toh thik hai, par sale hum dono ke sath koyi ladki tik nahi payegi… vishwas nahi toh itihaas utha ke dekh le….”

“toh …”

“mere ko abhi just ek idea aaya hai…. Mujhe lagta hai ki maine ladki ke mamle me jo galti aaj tak ki hai… wo maine Niv ke sath bhi ki aur shayad aage bhi karunga… isliye ab mujhe janna padega ki actual me meri kya galti thi, kis angle par, kis point par mujhse chuk hui hai…”

“ye bhai ek line me bata na…”

“main un-un ladkiyo se jakar milunga… jinse mere aaj tak relation rah chuke hai… aur unse puchunga ki aisa maine kya kiya… jo unhone mujhe reject kiya ya relationship khatm kiya….”

“pagal hai kya… waise bhi mohabbat, sharab ki tarah hoti hai... ek waqt ke baad utar jaati hai... ”

“tu samajh nahi raha… main baar –baar wahi galtiya kar raha hu… isliye baar-baar mere sath wahi ho raha hai… kyunki yadi mistake same toh result bhi same”

“aur yaha apni Rani Nivedita ko kya bolega…”

“kuch nahi… just awol ho jaunga … achanak se gayab, waise bhi mujhe ab ye toh janna hee hai….”

“tu serious hai…”Ved ne puchha aur ab wo serious ho gaya tha kyunki aadhi bhari botal usne ab table par rakh diya tha “ ladkiyo se milne jayega kaise…”

“interceptor… “

“fir main bhi chalunga….”chaddi pahane hue Ved ekdum se khada hua

“tu mat ja… kuch hee mahine hue hai tujhe join kiye hue…. Aise gayab hoga toh nikal denge tujhe….”

“toh tu bhi Ericsson chhodne ki dhamki de dena…” jaldbaji me pant pahante hue Ved bola, maano hum dono abhiyech nikalne wale the.

“main dhamki dunga toh Niv khushi-khushi mera resignation accept kar legi aur thank you bolegi… wo alag”

“toh khushi-khushi hum dono kisi aur company me join karenge… chal khada ho chalte hai…”

“kaha…”

“wahi jaha tera itihaas dafan hai….”

“abhi… raat me…”

“aur nahi toh kya….”apne mobile ka sim slot nikalte hue Ved ne kaha… aur apne mobile ki sim nikalkar wahi saamne table par rakh di…

“tu bhi apna mobile de… ye sim daal kar rakhega toh call aate rahenge…”

“mammi-papa ka phone aayega toh…”

“dusara sim le lenge … kahe tension leta hai… tujhe ghar ka number yaad hai na ..? nahi toh mujhe yaad hee hai tere bapu ka purana waala mobile number.. chal ab... nikalte hai”

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[Naina]

Update-4​

Usne ye kaha toh bade shant tarike se tha… par uska response inta depressing aur disapproving tha ki mano, wo kah rahi ho ki… uski nazro me main gir gaya hu… usne mujh jaisa gira hua insaan aaj tak nahi dekha aur aaj ke baad wo meri chhaya tak dekhna pasand nahi karti aur yadi uska bas chale toh abhi ke abhi mujhe fansi lagwa de... Vagerah-vagerah...

“aisa kya bol diya maine… pata nahi, shayad main hee chutiya hu… Ved sahi bol raha tha…”is tarah Niv ke sath main bhi deperess hone laga… infact, main khud apni nazar me ab gir chuka tha….

Iske baad Kuch der tak hum dono me se koyi kuch nahi bola… aur fir Niv boli ya fir ye kahu ki first time usne apne Manager hone ka mujhe abhaas ke sath-sath ahsaas bhi karaya….

“Atharva…. Get out…”

“kaaa…kya mam..”mujhe apne kaano par yakin hee nahi hua ki wo ye mujhse bol rahi hai...

“get lost… ab sunayi diya ? and please consider yourself out for the site manager post, I’m not gonna forward your name to superiors after this incident…”

“sorry, mam…”

“Atharva, please get the hell out of here…. And never talk to me in this life…”

“yes mam….. ok mam… sorry mam…”ye bolte hue… repeat karte hue.... main utha aur Niv ke cabin ke sath-sath office se bhi seedhe nikal gaya, apne flat ke liye... how unlucky I am….

Lagta hai kuch zyada hi bhadak gayi thi...
lol Khatiya kadi kar di isne toh...

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is ghatna ke baad mujhe pel ke khush hona chahiye tha, pure shahar me dhindhora pitwaana chahiye tha... ya fir pure desh me. mujhe khushi se nanga naach karna chahiye tha par haqiqat bilkul iske ulat thi..

writer sahab khud apne hi creation ke jalo pe namak with mirch lagaye

main had se jyada dukhi aur us se bhi jyada udas tha.

Aur isse yeh zyada dukhi ho jaye.. aur bechara hero apne creator writer sahab ko reham ki guhar lagaye ki baks de ushe..
waise sach mein kaafi udas hai....

Apne room pahuchkar maine sabhi kamro ki sabhi lights band ki aur tv par ek jhaat jaisi horror movie dekhne laga… kyunki ye meri aadat hai ki jab bhi mujhe koyi chiz buri ya kharab lagti hai toh main use dusari feelings me dabane ki koshish karta hoon aur dar se strong bhala kaun si feeling hogi.....? Meri puri koshish thi ki ye horror movie mere udasi ko bhi horrify kar de… ye kabhi-kabhi toh kaam karta hai par kabhi-kabhi mujhe aur kharab lagne lagta hai specially jab horror movie dekh ke meri fat jaati hai… tab main andhere me akele udas hone ke sath-sath, dara-dara bhi rah jata hoon.

Great idea... btw harshit sahab ki haunted series bhi padh sakte hai ye janab
dar ka naya ehsaas milega isko..
Maybe nivedita ko bhi bhool jaye

Jo aaj mere sath hua matlab jo maine aaj apne sath kiya... ye mere sath first time nahi hua hai… pahle bhi aisi milti julti ghatnaye mere sath ghat chuki hai aur har baar main soch me pad jata hu ki mere sath hee aisa kyun hota hai… matlab main direct propose nahi karta ki... first time pyar aur second time ikrar... aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai.... maa kasam. line ladkiya bhi deti hai aur fir jab main dene lagta hu toh… pata nahi ladkiyo ko kya ho jata hai… wo fir bhav khane lagti hai aur aise acting karne lagti hai ki jaise kuch jaanti hee na ho… meri puri life ko yadi nichoda jaaye toh yahi saar niklega… main kayi relation me raha par end ek ka bhi dhang se nahi hua aur aaj …. Us list me ek aur milestone jud gaya tha aur hamesha ki tarah main ek horror movie ke aage aankhe gadaye, tv dekhe ja raha tha, par dekh nahi raha tha… kyunki meri aankho ke saamne aur dimag ke andar ab bhi Nivedita Rani ka wo alishan cabin tha aur usme chutiya bana baitha main.

इसलिए इसलिए
ये भटकाव अच्छा नहीं इश्क बुरी बला होती है लग जाये तो आसानी से पीछा नहीं छूटता। हम पाठक गण आपको मना तो नहीं कर सकते पर इतना जरुर कहेंगे की प्रीत का स्वाद जो चखा जुबान ने फिर बेगाने हुए जग से समझो.....
bhool jaye ushe aur aage badh jaye .

“ Matlab…………….. ladkiya chahti kya hai mujhse… kyun mera kaat deti hai har baar… sala har baar khud ki nazro me gir jata hu. Ab maine soch liya hai… ek-ek ke upar case karunga… harassment ka. Sali, pahle line dengi aur fir jab main usi line ko aage badhane ko koshish karta hu toh wo line hee ekdum se mita deti hai… achcha hua india me arrange marriage ab bhi hoti hai, warna main toh sari zindagi kunwara hee rah jaata…. Aur ye sala horror movie wale itna gates kyun thokte hai… salo, ek movie bana do gates pe, yadi doors itne hee pasanad hai toh… title bhi main de deta hoon... The Game of Doors….”main chillaya, gala fadkar chillaya

Kya pata.. kahi koi toh hogi joh iski sachhi jivan sangini banegi.. tab tak intezaar kare.. jaise readers update ka intazar karte hai

“abey lawde.... kholegaaaaaaa gate… ya suicide kar liya….” aur tab mujhe samajh aaya ki aawaz tv ke gate se nahi balki mere gate se aa rahi thi… matlab mere room ke gate se.

“Ved….”darwaja kholte hue maine kaha…

“mutth maar raha tha kya be… Nivedita Rani ko sochkar...? Yaa fir Tera doorbell kharab hai …?”

“tune hee toh last time ukhada tha, daru peeke…”

“kya Manager banoge lawda… le pakad”Duvel ka pura ek peti beer mujhe pakdate hue Ved bola “abey tere baju me kya maal rahti hai be… aaj dekha main... jab tu gate nahi khol raha tha toh, wo bahar aayi thi… use dekh kar main muskuraya aur mujhe dekh kar wo muskurate hue stupid boli.... abey pakad na jaldi, mutna hai mujhe…. 2 botal main pahle see hee maar chuka hu…”

Maine duvel ka peti uthaya aur tv ke saamne table par rakh diya aur ek botal nikalkar daanto se dhakkan khol peene laga….. thodi der me Ved bathroom se nikalkar tv ke paas aaya aur apne jute nikal kar wahi se main gate ki taraf feka aur fir apni pant utarkar sofe me rakha... shirt , chaddi aur moje pahane hue wo sofe me apne pant ke upar baithkar bola...

“pant bahut tight hai madarchod, mujhe bhi de ek….”Ved ne beer mangi…

“cartoon lag raha hai… tu…”use dekh haste hue maine kaha

“aye tu beer dena na… aur mujhe aise kya dekh raha hai… chusega kya mera… tu dimag kharab mat kar yar, beer de… badhiya movie hai ye…”

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“waise aaj wahi 18 tarikh hai… 18… tera Gupta ji wala birthday aaj hee hai, jo tune school me us-se bachne ke liye jhooth-mooth ka aaj ke din ko apna birthday bata diya tha… taaki wo tujhe naa pele. waise kya boli… teri Niv…? bina bataye chala aaya…”

“maine bola hee nahi kuch…”

“chal lawde… sach sach bata kya boli…”

“I don’t think that was a nice thing to say… everything was good until you said that… why did you do that, Atharva… bas itna hee boli… aur jo mera name wo site manager ki post ke liye recommend karne wali thi, wo bhi ab wo nahi karne wali…. Aur mujhe get lost lost kaha, sath hee ye bhi ki is puri zindagi me main us-se kabhi dobara baat na karu… bas itna hee boli , jyada kuch nahi”beer ki botal hontho se sparsh karate hue main bola

“ toh usne kulhadi maar hee di… faad diya na taang, what a great day for both of us…”beer ki dhakkar daant se kholne ke baad Ved bola…

“tere sath kya hua…”

“kuch nahi, main toh yaha tere liye aaya tha…”

“chal lawde, sach sach bata kya boli…”

“kaun… meri maal…? Wo kya bolegi, jo bolna tha… wo maine hee bola, usne toh bas mujhe block kiya… fb se, insta se, whatsapp se… apne ghar se, apne dil se…”

“really, what a great day for both of us… cheers.. ”

“indeed…”

“waise hua kya...?”Ved ko apni tarah luta-pita dekh mujhe bahut sukoon mil raha tha aur... aur adhik sukoon ki chah me maine usse ye sawal puchha...

“uski family aayi thi kuch din pahle... salo ne naukar bana ke rakh diya tha. Din bhar… bitiyachod , ye lao…wo lao… yaha jao, waha jao… aise khao, ye khao… ye karo, wo mat karo… isko yaha le jao, usko waha le jao. apun free spirit wala aadmi hai, tujhe toh pata hee hai… fir bhi uske liye main ye sab sah gaya… aur aaj jab office ke baad sari tension door karne ke liye 2 beer markar shanti se apne flat par yaani ki.... uske flat par gaya…. toh Lawda, wo chillane lagi… par dheere-dheere taki… kisi aur ko pata naa chale. par mera matha thanak chuka tha aur fir thodi der baad Mira ka baap mujhse bolta hai ki… beta mere liya socks kharid ke le aao…”

“interesting… aage kya hua… ab maja aayega”

“main bola… chillakar bola… ki… lawda nahi jayega mera, kahi. Kuch nahi bol raha toh chodu samajh ke rakhe ho ka be….”

“fir kya hua… ab aur maja aayega…”

“ mere itna bolte hee , sabki fat ke hath me aa gayi… fir meri maal ke baap ne situation sambhalte hue apne jhat barabar ladke ko paise dekar use socks lane ke liye kaha… aur jab wo mere bike ki chabhi magne aaya toh, maine use kaha ki ….. lawda tu bhi nahi jayega kahi, aur jayega toh paidal ja… theka nahi le rakha hai maine tum logo ka… aur fir breakup….”

“ab kuch achchha feel ho raha hai….”kahte hue maine dusari beer ki botal uthayi….

“main kya bolta hu, chal… chalke , Nivedita Rani ke ghar ke bahar mutth visarjan karte hai… aur fir jab dobara khada hoga toh meri waali ke ghar ke baahar... aur muthiyate hue video bana ke un dono ko send kar denge... gadiya fat jayegi un dono ki hamara ye karishma dekh kar... ”

“abeyyy… ab bade ho gaye hai hum dono aur ab wahi karenge… jo bade log karte hai… daru piyenge aur sad songs sunenge... iske sath hee Sunayana mam wali sexy kahani ko aage badhayenge…”maine ek aur sip maarte hue kaha aur tv a volume thoda kam kiya

“tujhe lagega ki mujhe chadh gayi hai, par kabhi gaur kiya ki duniya ki sari … sari problem ka ilaaj kya hai…?" dono hath me botal liye apne hath failate hue Ved puchha

“daru…?”

“exactly …. Sukhi hai toh daru, gam me hai toh daru…. Paas hue toh daru, fail hue toh bhi daru… koyi paida hua toh daru, koyi mar gaya tab bhi daru… naukri lagi tab bhi daru aur nahi lagi tab bhi daru, india match jeeti, tab bhi khul ke daru aur yadi india match haar gayi, tab bhi daba ke daru… koyi dost saalo baad mile tab bhi daru aur yadi koyi dost chhod ke jaa raha hai, tab bhi daru… aur toh aur… ladki haan bole tab bhi daru aur naa bole tab bhi daru….”

“wo sab toh thik hai, par kabhi-kabhi sochta hoon ki hum dono ka kya hoga be… kaun ladki humlog ke sath rahegi…”

“arrange marriage hogi hum dono ki… tension mat le”Ved bola…

“wo toh thik hai, par sale hum dono ke sath koyi ladki tik nahi payegi… vishwas nahi toh itihaas utha ke dekh le….”

“toh …”

“mere ko abhi just ek idea aaya hai…. Mujhe lagta hai ki maine ladki ke mamle me jo galti aaj tak ki hai… wo maine Niv ke sath bhi ki aur shayad aage bhi karunga… isliye ab mujhe janna padega ki actual me meri kya galti thi, kis angle par, kis point par mujhse chuk hui hai…”

“ye bhai ek line me bata na…”

“main un-un ladkiyo se jakar milunga… jinse mere aaj tak relation rah chuke hai… aur unse puchunga ki aisa maine kya kiya… jo unhone mujhe reject kiya ya relationship khatm kiya….”

“pagal hai kya… waise bhi mohabbat, sharab ki tarah hoti hai... ek waqt ke baad utar jaati hai... ”

“tu samajh nahi raha… main baar –baar wahi galtiya kar raha hu… isliye baar-baar mere sath wahi ho raha hai… kyunki yadi mistake same toh result bhi same”

“aur yaha apni Rani Nivedita ko kya bolega…”

“kuch nahi… just awol ho jaunga … achanak se gayab, waise bhi mujhe ab ye toh janna hee hai….”

“tu serious hai…”Ved ne puchha aur ab wo serious ho gaya tha kyunki aadhi bhari botal usne ab table par rakh diya tha “ ladkiyo se milne jayega kaise…”

“interceptor… “

“fir main bhi chalunga….”chaddi pahane hue Ved ekdum se khada hua

“tu mat ja… kuch hee mahine hue hai tujhe join kiye hue…. Aise gayab hoga toh nikal denge tujhe….”

“toh tu bhi Ericsson chhodne ki dhamki de dena…” jaldbaji me pant pahante hue Ved bola, maano hum dono abhiyech nikalne wale the.

“main dhamki dunga toh Niv khushi-khushi mera resignation accept kar legi aur thank you bolegi… wo alag”

“toh khushi-khushi hum dono kisi aur company me join karenge… chal khada ho chalte hai…”

“kaha…”

“wahi jaha tera itihaas dafan hai….”

“abhi… raat me…”

“aur nahi toh kya….”apne mobile ka sim slot nikalte hue Ved ne kaha… aur apne mobile ki sim nikalkar wahi saamne table par rakh di…

“tu bhi apna mobile de… ye sim daal kar rakhega toh call aate rahenge…”

“mammi-papa ka phone aayega toh…”

“dusara sim le lenge … kahe tension leta hai… tujhe ghar ka number yaad hai na ..? nahi toh mujhe yaad hee hai tere bapu ka purana waala mobile number.. chal ab... nikalte hai”

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Oh ho toh ved mahashay bhi kand karke aaya hai...
abhi Sharab pi raha hai.. aur subhah inke sar dekhenge that's it
Sharab hi sabhi problems solution nahi hai...
waise koun kahta hai ki har din bura hoga.. achhe din aayenge definitely
well .. waise lage ki yeh nivedita ka kissa abhi khatam nahi hua hai... kuch toh hai... koi mystery..
Kuch chupi huyi baat... koi anhoni...
Kya pata aisa ho bhi na..
Btw promotion ko leke kaafi sapne dekhe the usne par afsos honi ko koun taal sakta hai..
Khair update kaafi dilchasp tha... aur comedy ka tadka apne apme bemisaal...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills gyani sir

 

[Moon Light]

Update 4

Bechara atharv use apne kano pr yaqeen nhi ho raha ki niv ne use ese bola
yaqeen tb ho jata h jb wo fir se bolti h " Get Lost "

Itni beijjati hone ke bad bhla kisko achha lgega
aa gaye mhasay apne room pr office chhodkar
aur gam bhulane ke liye horror movie dekhne lge

Ved ka bhi sem hal h, wo bhi aaj lut kr aya h
Har marz ki dawa h Daru
dono pite h aur apna dimag dodaane lgte h

Apne rejection ka raz janne ke liye dono niklenge ab

Bdiya update
mAzaa aa gyaa pdkar ​

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

nice update ..par atharva ne aisa kya bola jo itni bhadak gayi niv ,,,sirf i love you to bola to itna frustrate kyu hona ..aur ye keh diya ki promotion nahi karungi ,,apna mooh mat dikhana ..
kuch gadbad type hai ye nivedita rani ,,shayad hero ka promotion rokne ke liye usko jaal me fasa rahi thi ..

waise khush hone ki kya baat hai ki shahar ya desh me dhindora pitne ki soch raha tha ..
to gum bhulane ke liye horror movie dekhta hai hero ..

aur ved ka bhi break up ho gaya par wo bhi hero jaisa hai sab lightly bata diya ..
kaun… meri maal…? Wo kya bolegi, jo bolna tha… wo maine hee bola, usne toh bas mujhe block kiya… fb se, insta se, whatsapp se… apne ghar se, apne dil se…”

ab sab ladkiyo ne kyu reject kiya ye jaanne ke liye un sab ladkiyo se milne jaane ki soch raha hai atharva aur ved bhi taiyar ho gaya ..aur kapde bhi pehen liye aur sum card nikal diya ,,lagta hai hero se jyada ved excited hai ..
ab dekhte hai inke itihas kaha aur usme kya dafan hai ..

 

[Aakash.]

Niv became very angry, Get lost, I thought she would agree. It feels bad when something happens against our expectations, despair surrounds us, it's normal, If have friends like Ved, sedness also turns into happiness, Daru has an important role, it lightens the mind. The talk between the two is very funny and the Ved isn't less than anyone, he also created a spectacle.
It seemed that a new twist or new journey was beginning in the story. I enjoy reading the updates.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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