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Adultery Broken by Her! (Story of a man) suspense thriller,incest adultery

Kya salil pervert ban payega/story other characters ke perspective se bhi chale

  • Nahi banega

    Votes: 32 11.6%
  • Ban jayega

    Votes: 36 13.0%
  • Sirf hero ke perspective se

    Votes: 36 13.0%
  • Yes other characters ke perspective se bhi

    Votes: 11 4.0%
  • Hero and writer ke perspective se

    Votes: 17 6.1%
  • Hero ko power milni chahiye

    Votes: 83 30.0%
  • Power nhi milni chahiye kahani reality world me chale

    Votes: 25 9.0%
  • Which type sex do you want

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Hard

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Hardcore +

    Votes: 12 4.3%
  • Bdsm

    Votes: 10 3.6%
  • Humiliation

    Votes: 13 4.7%
  • I don't want sex

    Votes: 2 0.7%

  • Total voters
    277
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A cheater wife can make him pervert.


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ye kahani aek sidhe sadhe ladke ki hai ...kaise vivah ke baad uski life me toofan ate hai kya wo unse lad payega or haar man ke ghutne tek dega..
 
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Creepy story

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Bro age brhao story Ko or apni health ka bhi khyl rkho
Take care

Creepy story Bhai next part jaldi post karna please

Eagerly waiting for part 2 brother
Pls Post it ASAP

Wow Finally part 1 kahtam ho gaya, what a wonderful journey, Hopes part 2 coming soon 🙏
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Thank you Creepy Sir
Thnkxx gyz..

Part two me time lagega ab sab log chor journey of thief par aajao wo story regular rahegi
 
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Ant bhala to sab bhala. Harsh ko kya power mili wo to danav hi ban gaya, sharir se hi nahi, balki mann se bhi. Yeh koi excuse nahi hai ki mere baap ne meri bibi ke saath jo kiya weh main bhi unki sab betiyon ke saath karunga.
Exactly usme hawas thi bas..
Ladayi bahut rochak thi. Sabse maza tab aaya jab Samar ne apni betiyon ke saath ghoda khel kar Charan das ko murkh bana kar use apne dimag se nikal diya aur phir Mona ne uske dimag me ghus kar jo uska sirr deewar se pitwaya, weh climax tha. Dono Kyara madam chillate rahe, par Kyara ne koi hastakshep nahi kiya, yeh baat samajh me nahi aayi. Pehle to mujhe laga tha ki Kyara Salil me apne bhai Arya ko mehsus kar ke Salil ko kuch nahi kar rahi hai, lekin baad ke scenes padh kar aisa nahi laga. Weh bhi ab Surya ke vash me aa gayi hai..

Nahi vro kyara ne usse ye kaha tha ki rolex bhi uske bhai arya ki tarah sacchai ke liye ladhne wala tha..
Harsh ko maarna, phir Maharaj aur Charan Das ka ant, aur aakhir me nana ji ke haathon hi Bhairav ka katal, ant me nana ji ko bhi paar laga dena, sab bade hi rochak tareeke se likha tha..

Thnxx vro
Kuch vyang ka chidkaav bhi dekhne ko mila, Goongi jis tarah se Jhamela ke peeche padi hai, padh kar hansi aa gayi..

Hahaha
Sani ke peeche sab pade hain, lekin weh to Captain ki deewani hai. Jhamela ne abhi tak dil se Anu ko maaf nahi kiya hai. Sab theek ho gaya tha, lekin weh bhikari, mujhe lagta hai Sam hai. Pehle to aisa laga ki kahin yeh purana wala Sam to nahi hai jo Akshi ke peeche pada tha. lekin aage padh kar aisa nahi lagta hai. Yeh koi naya character hai.
Wo sam usi me mar gaya tha..
Kyara bilkul badal gayi hai, ab weh majburi me ya phir ab uska nature hi aisa ho gaya hai. Ek naya villain aur aa tapka, Dinesh. Lekin Samar ko bahut jaldi marwa diya..
Vro part two ka villian yahi hai sam ke baad..
Dusre part ke scenes bahut bhayanak the. Mere favourite character Salil, Sahir, Saumya, Aashana is story me the aur dusri ke Arya, Akansha, Akshi aur Shree (the best of all) hain. Akhir Arya aur Shree to dikh gaye, shayad hospital me Akansha bhi mil jaaye. Ab sabse pehle is Surya ko thikane lagana hai aur phir Dinesh ko.
Isme vro time hai arya pata chal gaya kon hai to iske piche ki back story bhi ayegi...abhi kuch dino me jo sympathy ka end reh gaya hai use complete kar dunga.uske baad billionaire par kaam shuru
Narsimha kuch keh raha tha, ki uske peeche bahut badi shaktiyan hain, usko maar kar kuch nahi hoga. Dekhte hain ki agla part kaise chalta hai. Haan, Salil ka Mask bhi Sam ke pass chala gaya, ab usko heal hone me samay lagega. Wo jo dusre grah ke jaanwar ne use kaata tha, uska asar heal hone me kyon nahi ho raha.

Wo rolex nahi arya tha jiske dusre grah ke parjibi ne kata tha.
Arjun ko Saumya aur shayad Sona mil gayi hain. Ab yeh kaise hua, suspense hi rahega. Iska bhi ilaaz jaldi karwana padega. Aur Jhamela kahan hai....

Ye sari gutthiya 2nd part me khulegi
Abse impotant baat, apni sehat ka dhyan rakhein aur gayab hone ke bajaye har hafte ek baar apne kushal-mangal ki baat bata diya karein.
Vro thik hone par bata deta hon.

Ab chor a journey of thief par milna vro
 

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HAppy ending dena hi nahi ata sab khatam kar ke nahi chood sakte the nahi tumhe to acchi khasi ending ki band bajani thi be happy
Sympathy ka end first part happy ending ki thi jo kisi ko pasand nahi aayi
 

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Thaxx gyz..for your support..halanki bhut kam tha fir bhi thxxxx...


Ab jo mere loyal readers hai wo chor a journey of thief par ajaye nahi ate tab bhi koi baat nahi..



 
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Thaxx gyz..for your support..halanki bhut kam tha fir bhi thxxxx...


Ab jo mere loyal readers hai wo chor a journey of thief par ajaye nahi ate tab bhi koi baat nahi..



Bhai vo bhi padenge
Par
Iska second part ka kya situation hai, kab start kar rahe ho
Eagerly waiting, iska bhi kuch bol do
 
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