Fantasy Pyare Rishte - Bhai Bahan Ki Pavitra Prem Ka Ek Safar (part 1 and 2 completed) part 3 in running

[Dark Devil]

Shahar se bahar wale ghar m ni bhai sonam wale ghar m.

Nai Bhai jaha wo raat ko ruke
Jo Ghar unki MAA ne banaya tha
Wo shayad ab waha rahenge
In future ye laga mujhe

 

[Siraj Patel]

Update no :- 73
Karan abhi dhyan m betha hua tha , vo kafi time tak parabrahm sadashiv k dhyan m raha .

Lekin kuch samay baad uska dhyan bar bar tutne laga , esa ek do bar ni kayi baar ho raha tha.

Kaaran ye tha ki use baar baar apni maa k accident ka wahi scene dikhayi dene laga tha apne dhyan me .

Karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki esa kyu ho raha h , vo ab vapas se ashant hone laga tha or baar bar apni maa ki mrityu ka vo drishya dikhne se uski ankhe nam ho gayi thi.

Karan :- ye kya ho raha h , he mahadev , ye baar bar mujhe us bhayanak durghatna ka drishya dikha , yu apne bhakt ko pida kyu de rahe h aap.


Karan fir ek baar dhyan me bettha h lekin fir vahi sab , karan ko kuch kuch baat ab samjh ane lagi thi.

Karan :- kahi , mere dhyan me is drishy ka baar bar aana , mahadev ka koi sanket to ni.

Ha avashya hi ye koi sanket h jo mahadev mujhe dena chahate h , per vo. sanket ho kya sakta h.

Karan ek baar fir dhyan me betha , or is bar fir vohi drishya use dikha , lekin usne is baar pure drishy ki ek ek gatividhi ko dhyan se dekha.

Or usne ek baat pakad hi li , usko ek jagah kuch ajib lagi , or sath sath kuch gadbad bhi.

Karan :- ye kya kya mane jo baat notice ki h kya vo sach h , ager ye sach h to bahut badi sajish hui thi meri maa k khilaf , mujhe shighra hi is baare m pata lagana hoga.

Ye baat than vo time dekhta h to pata h , ki raat ki 1.30 baj rahe h , to vo bhi waha se uth vapas us jhule wale bed p jyoti k pass jaa ke let jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k vo so jata h.

Agle din aankh pahale jyoti ki khuli or vo jese apni ankh khol dekhti h to vo khud ko karan ki baho m pati h.

Jyoti (man me ) :- haaye ! Sote hue to or bhi jyada cute lagte h bhaiyaa , man to kerta h sari jindagi ese hi inki baho m rahu or apni jaan ko yu niharti rahu.

Per kya karu bhai to samjhte hi ni mere is pyaar ko ya yu kaho jan k bhi anjaan bante h.

He mahadev vo din kab aayega jab mere bhai mere sache prem ko svikar ker apne hriday ki baat mujhe bolenge.

M janti hu mahadev ye samaj ki drishti m ghor apradh h prabhu , parantu aap bhi ye jante h ki prem p kisika vash kaha h bhagvan , isliye he mahadev apni is putri ki sahayta kijiye prabhu

Fir kuch der yu hi jyoti khud se man hi man bate kerti rahi fir usne karan k hoto ko halke se chum liya or jaldi se piche ho gayi or sharmane lagi.

Jyoti ki is harkat se karan ki bhi nind khul gayi , or ankh khulte hi sabse pahale use jyoti ka muskurata hua chahara dikha , jisse wo apni raat ki tension bhul gaya .


Karan(jyoti k gaal chumte hue) :- good morning sweety .

Jyoti :- good morning ! Bhai.

Karan or jyoti fir uth k usi jhule p beth jate h , fir karan bola .

Karan :- raat ko ache se to nind aayi na gudiya.

Jyoti :- ha bhai , aapki lori ka hi kamal tha , jo aajtak ki sabse achi nind mili mujhe .

Karan kuch ni bola bas muskurata h , fir dono bhai bahan ghar k ander ja ke fresh hote h or naha dhoke teyar ho jate h.

Fir dono bhai bahan vahi bane chote se shiv mandir (jaha pichli baar un dono ko apni maa mili thi ) ja ker puja kerte h.

Fir karan ko achanak se shivani ka dhyan aata h , or ab usko khud sharam aane lagu ki , vo apne gusse m itna andha ho gaya ki use apni choti bahan ka dhyan hi ni raha

Karan :- chal gudiya hume ab jaldi se ghar chalna chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu bhai , jab vaha koi hamari parwah kerne wala h hi ni to hum kyu parwah kare unki.

Karan :- ni gudiya , tum shayad bhul rahi ho ek h waha jise humari parwah aaj bhi h or humse prem bhi , hamari pyari shivani choti .

Jyoti bhi shivani ka naam sun tension m aagayi , wo bhi bhul hi gaye the , pichli raat ki ghatna k baad shivani ki kya halat hogi.

Jyoti :- ha bhai aapne sahi kaha , hum shivani k baare m bhul hi gaye , hume jaldi se nikalna hoga.

Fir karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or . Karib adhe ghante m vo dono apne ghar pahunch gaye .

Karan or jyoti jese hi apne ghar pahunche to paya ki ghar p koi ni h .

Unhone apni kam wali bai se pucha to pata chala ki ghar p sirf shivani hi h , jo abhi apne kamre m so rahi h.

Karan or jyoti fir shivani k kamre ki or bhade , jaha jake jeSe hi unhone shivani ko dekha to unhe bahut dukh hua.

Shivani k pyare or gore chahre p aasuo k nishan ban gaye the,jise dekh saf pata chal raha tha ki wo bahut royi h.

Karan jake pyaar se shivani ko jagata h , shivani jese hi jag k karan ko apne samne dekhti h to jhat se uske sine lag rone lagi.

Shivani (rote hue) :- bhaiya aap kaha chale gaye thee , mane aapko bahut dhunda raat ko ghar m aap kahi ni mile, mujhe laga ki aap mujhe kal hi chod k chale gaye .

Karan abhi kuch bolne ki halat me ni tha , kyunki ghar chodne ka fesla to usne ker liya tha , per use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo is baare m shivani ko kese samjhaye.vo bas shivani ko shant kerne m laga raha.

Shivani thoda shant hoke boli :- bhai kya aap sach me ghar chod k chale jaoge .

Karan :- meri gudiya , bhala kon apna vo ghar khushi khushi chodna chahega , jis ghar m usne janm liya , jis ghar se uski itni yaade judi ho.

Per ab halat hi ese ho gaye h ki hume esa kerna pad raha h , jis ghar m kisi samay sabse jyada prem or apna pan mila kerta tha , ab us ghar k sadasyon ye bhi fark ni padta ki hum jiye ya mare. Jis ghar m kabhi swarg sa aanand mila aaj wahi ghar m hume nark se bhi bhayanak mansik yatnaye mil rahi h.

Tu hi bata gudiya kal k hadse k baad bhi hamara is ghar m rahana sahi rahega , tera jo bhi fesla hoga , wo hi humara final decision hoga.

Shivani kuch der karan ki baato p gor kiya or fir boli.

Shivani :- ni bhai , aap bilkul sahi bol rahe ho , kal jo bhi hua usme dosh aapka ni meri hi mummy ka tha, unhonne na sirf aapke aatmsaman ko thes pahuchayi , balki unhonne badi maa ko bhi bura bhala bola .

Or jaha hume samman na mile , waha rahana mrityu se bhayanak kashtdayi hota h bhai , aapne sahi kaha bhai yaha sirf aapko dukh or kasht hi Mile h , or m ni chahati ki mere bhaiya or di ko ab or kasht jhele , isliye bhai m aapke is decision ka pure tarike se support kerti hu.

Shivani ye sab bol udaas ho gayi , jise dekh jyoti uske paas aa use gale laga boli.

Jyoti :- are meri princess aap udaas kyu ho rahi ho , hum konse aaj ja rahe h ,abhi ek mahina h. Or uske baad bhi hum aapse roj mila karenge na mera bacha

Shivani khush hote hue :- sachi didu.

Jyoti ;- muchi meri gudia. Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao , school k liye late ho raha h na.

Fir shivani jaldi se teyar ho jati h , fir 3no bhai bahan teyar ho nikal jate h , karan or jyoti shivani ko. School drop ker pahunch jate h sonam k pas.

Karan jese hi ghar m enter kerta h to pata h ki sonam naha dhoke ladoo gopal ji ko bhog laga rahi h khir ka

Karan :- are bhai, ager krishna ji ja bhog ho gaya ho to apne bhaiya ko bhi thoda bhog laga do.

Sonam karan ko dekh khush ho jati h or use gale laga k boli.

Sonam :- are bhaiya didi aap kab aaye.

Jyoti :- bas abhi abhi aaye sonu

Karan :- vese kheer bahut tasty lag rahi h gudiya , jara mujhe bhi taste kara na

Sonam :- jara kyu bhai , jitna chaho khaiye na ,aapke liye hi to h ye

Fir karan or jyoti dono kheer ko khate h , tabhi karan ka chahara serious ho jata h

Sonam :- kya hua bhai , kheer achi ni bani kya.

Karan :- ni kheer achi ni h

Sonam ye sun thoda udaa hi gayi

Karan fir se bola

Karan :- khir achi ni , bahut jyada achi bani h gudiya

Ye bol karan sonam k hatho ko chum leta h , jisse sonM sharma jati h .

Tabhi ac bhi aajata h , jiska order karan ne kal kiya tha or wo use sonam k kamre m lagwa deta h.

Kitna adhbhut charitra h karan ka , is ac k pese ikhate karan ne apne or jyoti k room m ac lagwane k liye kiye the, kyunki garmiyo k time dono bhai bahan ko kafi pareshani hoti thi or wo apne papa se pese ni mangna chahate the , isliye wo pichle sal se pese ikathe ker rahe the.

Per unhonne sonam ki sehat or uski khushi k liye , unhonne khud ka ac ka khayal ko chodne m minute bhi na lagaye or unhonne ac sonam k liye kharid liya.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- rampur.

Naina apna saman pack ker rahi thi , pandit ji bahut hi prasiddh the to unhe bahut se bade bade seth log , kafi bhari rakam dan dete the or unke paas jamino ki bhi koi kami ni thi.

Isliye naina ne apne safar k kharche k liye , apni kuch jamin bech di thakur ko , jiski usne madad ki thi .

Thakur ne bhi puri imandari se use jamin ki bilkul sahi kimat di thi .

Per sawal ye tha ki naina 15 din se pahale hi kese safar k liye teyar ho gayi thi aaiye jante h.

Short flashback .

Pichli raat jab naina so rahi thi to uske sapne me pandit ji aaye.

NainA(nam ankho se ) baba.

Itna bol sapne me hi pandit ji k gale lag gayi or rone lagi .

Pandit :- mat ro meri bachi , tu to janti h na , tu roti h to taklif mujhe hoti h , kya tu chahati h tere baba ko taklif ho

Naina ansu pochte:- ni ni baba , ab m kabhi bhi ni roungi , per baba aap mujhe yu akela chod kyu chale gaye.

Pandit ji :- beti m kaha gaya hu , mera prem or ashirwad to tumhare sath hamesha h.

Beti ab samay aagaya h us dusht samraat ka ant or megha bahan ki mukti ka, tumhe kal hi apni yatra p nikalna hoga

Naina :- per baba 15 din se pahale , m ye sab kese karu, kya ye uchit hoga .

Pandit ji :- meri bachi tumhara kahana bhi uchit h ,lekin mane jesa kaha h vo hi vidhi ka vidhan h , ye aadesh mujhe maa (mahakali) ne hi diya h , ki m tumhe unka ye sandesh du.

Naina :- jesa aap kahe baba , m maa ki icha ko kese tal sakti hu. M kal hi apne safar p nikal jaungi.

Per baba m shuruat kaha se karu .

Pandit ji :- beta hamare ganv se lagbhag 100 km dur ek brihaspur nam ka ganv h , vaha ek maha aghauri aaye hue h , wahi tumhara marg darshan karenge .

Or ha beti is nishan ko bhulna mat ye nishan hi tumhe tumhari manjil tak pahuchayega , ya yu kaho ye hi tumhari manjil h .

Pandit ji k bolne k sath hi hava me ek nishan banta h , jo kuch esa tha.





Pandit :- acha beti ab mujhe jana hoga , apna dhyan rakhana meri bachi.

Naina pandit ji ko rokne ki koshis kerti h per itne m wo jag jati h.

Flashback end.

Naina k hath me ek photo thi , jo megha ki thi , jo use megha k us saman se mili thi , jise pandit ji ne aaj tak sambhal k rakha tha.

Or unhone apne ant samay m jate jate yah bata diya tha ki , us saman m ye photo milegi , jo uski maa ki thi.

Naina apni jeep me bethi apni ma ki photo ko dekh boli.

Naina(nam ankho se) :- maa , aapki beti aarahi h apko us dhusht ki ked se mukt karwane . Bas kuch samay or maa fir m aapko kabhi apne se alag ni hone dungi.

Fir gusse se boli.

Naina ;- intezaar khatam hua samraat tera kaal ab aaraha h tera ant ker , apni maa ko chudane .

Maa mahakali ki saugandh tere pure kul ka nash na kiya to , m apne swargiya baba ki beti ni.

Ye bol naina ek akhiri baar jeep se utar maa k darshan kiye , phir apni jeep m bet nikal padi apne safar per

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

Stay tuned.

Super duper update bhai bole to ekdum jhakaas mind blowing​

 

[Dark Devil]

Shahar se bahar wale ghar m ni bhai sonam wale ghar m.

K iska Matlab wo lag ab Sonam
k saath rahenge
Ab dekhna ye hai ki samraat ka
Ant kab aur kaise hoga aur
Karan ND Jyoti Naina se kàb aur
Kaise milenge?
Kya Karan aur Jyoti bhi Naina
Ka saath denge samraat se ladayi mein?


Congrats for the 400 pages

 

[Ravi jha]

Jhakkas update bhai

 

[KOHINOOR]

Congratulation bhai for 400 pgs

 

[ULTRA]

Update no :- 72

Location :- ek haveli (unknown place)

Ye ek bahut badi haveli thi , jo dikhne to ek aam haveli jesi hi thi , lekin koi ni kah sakta tha, ki is haveli ka maalik danvo ki us prajati ka sahansha h , jisse pret, pishach or dayane bhi darte h.

Ji ha dosto ye haveli kisi or ki thi , trityao k badshah samraat ki thi , jo tez kadmo k sath ek kamre ki or badh raha tha, or kamre k pass pahunch wo gate kholta h.

Wo room sirf kahane ka hi kamra tha , lekin sachai to ye thi , wo itna bada tha ki , usme 2 ghar sama jaye

Samraat ne us kamre m har ek suvidha rakhi hui thi , jo ek aalishan banglo m hoti h . Wo bhi sirf ek orat k liye.ye uski shaktiyon k liye mamuli sa kaam tha.

Lekin wo orat us sare esh or aaram ko tyag , waha bane ek bagiche k niche bane chabutre p hi bethi rahati .

usne us dusht ki maaya se bane us bhog vilas ki vastuo ki or dekha bhi ni tha. Wo bilkul vese hi jivan yapan ker rahi thi , jese ki maa sita ne ravan ki lanka m bani ashok vatika m nivas kiya tha.

Samraat uske pass jata h or bola h.

Samraat :- kab tak tu apni hat per adi rahegi , mane sab kuch to chin liya tera , tera parivar tera sab kuch , yaha tune bachne k liye us pandit ka sahara liya tha , use apna muh bola bhai bana k , tab bhi tujhe mane khoj hi liya , tere kahane p mane apni pravarti k virudh ja use maaf bhi kiya .

isi se sabit hota h kitna prem kerta hu tujhse , lekin tu h ki manti hi ni .

Ji haa dosto ye koi or ni megha thi, jise itne saalo se us dusht ne bandhi bana rakha tha.

Megha tana marne wali ki hasi k sath :- prem ,

Fir khud ki hasi rokte hue :- shama kerna samraat , tumhare mukh se prem shabd sun khud ko rok ni payi.

Wo kya h na tum jese dusht ot danav k mukh se prem jesa shabd sun ,khud ko rok na payi

Wo kya h na samraat tum jeso k mukh me prem shabd shobha ni deta . Isliye prem jese mahan bhavna ko badnaam na kero.

Samraat (gusse se ) ;- kahana kya chahti h tu

Megha :- yahi ki jise tu prem ka naam de raha h na dusht , wo keval teri havas h. Tere is kale samrajya me rah m tere bare m bahut kuch jan chuki hu samraat.

Ki kese hi tune apne is sunder insani roop se or apni mithi mithi baato se fasa kitni ladkiyo ki jindagi nasht ker di h.na hi Tera maksad kabhi safal hoga samraat na tere us bhagwan kaal bhanu ka.

Or tune soch bhi liya ki tu ek parivarta nari ko apna bana lega, tu mujhe ni apni mrityu ko laya h dusht.

Samraat haste hue :- satya kaha , samraat apni mrityu ko bhi ese hi kaidi bana chuka h .


Megha :- has le murk , jitna has sakta h , shighra hi tu royega , apni jindagi ki bhik mangte hue, or tere ko bachane wala koi na hoga.




Samraat ye sun aag babula ho jata h or ek shakti prahar usper kerta h , lekin megha k takrane se pahale hi vo shakti apne aap nasht ho jati h.

Samraat :- kon marega mere ko bata , ager mujhe jan liya h , to meri shaktiyon k bare m bhi tune sun hi liya hoga , m sarvashaktiman hu , manushy, bhut pret dayan , bhi mere naam se kamptee h.

Megha :- murk is sansar m. Sarv shaktiman sirf wo mahadev h , jiski tum dhul baraber bhi ni ho.

Mujhe mere bhole nath per pura vishwas h , vo jarur mujhe teri is ked se mukt karwayege.

Samraat :- yahi to tum insNo ki sabse badi kami h , vo sirf ek pathar ko murat h , murk stree wo kuch ni ker sakta . 16 saalo se tu mere yaha bandi h , kaha h tera vo shiv bol.

Megha :- kaha ni h mere shiv , wo to sarvavyapi h , is sansaar k kan kan m h vo , or rahi baat meri raksha ki to samay aane pe vo bhi ho jayega samraat , meri mukti or tera ant ek sath hi hoga

Samraat :- m bhi dekhta hu kon aayega tere ko bachane ko murkh nari .

Ye bol wo waha se chala gaya .Or megha wapas udi ped k niche aake beth gayi.

Megha man me :- jitna dushthta dikha sakta h dikha le dusht , jis din meri beti jis din yaha aayegi us din tere sare samrajya ka ant hoga.

Fir wo naina k baare m sochti h.

Megha man me :- kesi hogi meri bachi , ab to kitni badi ho gi meri bachi , kya bhaiya ne use sahi se pala hoga.

Are chi chi ye kya m sochne lagi , apne hi bhai k bare m . Mujhe to pura bharosa hona chahiye ki bhaiya ne use bahut ache sanskar diye honge or us prashikshit bhi kiya hoga ache se .

Ab jaldi se aake apni maa ko yaha se leja meri bachi , teri maa tadaf rahi h apni santan ko hriday se lagane k liye , apna pyaar lutane k liye. Ab ye duriya bardasht ni hoti meri bachi , ab aabhi ja na meri bachi.

Abhi yeh sab soch rahi thi , ki use kuch or baate bhi yaad aati h , jisko yaad ker megha or jor jor se rone lagti h.
Tabhi ek orat jo thi to rakshasi lekin dil ki saf thi , jise samraat ne megha k liye waha rakha tha .

Wo aayi or megha ko gale laga ker shant karane lagi , kuch der m megha kuch shant bhi ho gayi.

Back to the hero.

Karan jyoti ka hath pakd k ghar k bahar nikla , gussa uski ankho m saf saf najar aaraha tha.

Karan geraj m gaya or apni bike nikali , or jyoti ko piche bethne ka ishara kiya.jyoti chup chap bole beth gayi bike p dono or tange ker .

Karan ne apni bike doda di ek or jyoti piche se karan se bikul chipak gayi , jese uske gale lag rahi ho.

Jisse karan ab dhire dhire thoda shant hone laga , ye dekh jyoti thodi himmat ker boli.

Jyoti :- bhai hum itni raat ko kaha ja rahe h.

Karan jyoti ki aawaz m ghule mile dar ko bhanp gaya or bike chalate hue bola.

Karan pyar se :- are meri gudiya , tu kabse mujhse darne lagi pagli , tu to mera pran h , m tere se thodi na gussa tha.

Or rahi baat hum kaha jaa rahe h to suno , hum waha jaa rahe h gudiya jaha hume kuch der shanti or apna pan ka anubhav ho sake.

Jyoti samjh jati h ki uska bhai kaha jane ki baat ker raha h , usike sath hi uske chahre p khushi bhari muskaan fel jaati h.

Or thodi der m vo shahar k bahar apni sabse priya jagah p pahunch jate h.

Yani ki unka dusra ghar , vahi pyara sa chota sa ghar , jise sath unke bachpan ki sabse madhur yaade judi thi , wahi ghar jisko unki maa ne bade pyaar se apne bacho k liye banwaya tha.

Karan or jyoti jeSe hi waha pahunche to , karan ka sara krodh swatah hi shant ho gaya purn roop se .

Karan or jyoti dono ek dusre ka hath pakde , pahale ghar k ander jate h or karan lights on kerta h.

Karan ne shimla jane se pahale hi yaha ka sara kaam kerva diya tha dosto ,usne ghar ki chat pe solar penol lagwa diya the , jiske chalte bijli ka no tension .

Fir karan or jyoti ghar m ghum ghum k har , bhut kal m bitaye yaha apne har ek pal ko yaad ker rahe the

Tabhi jyoti ko desk k niche giri hui ek photo dikhti h , jiska corner dikh raha tha.

Jyoti us tasveer ko utha ker dekhti h to jor jor se hasne lagti h karan ki or dekh ker .

Karan :- are kya baat h choti , esa kya dekh liya jo itna has rahi h , mujhe bhi dikha.

Jyoti hasi ko control kerte hue , wo pic karan ki or kerti h , lekin uske hatho m ni deti .

Karan jese hi us pic ko dekhta h pahale to sharm se laal ho jata h , fir jhuta gussa dikhate hue.

Karan :- e chipkali , ye pic kaha se aayi tere pas, la idher de mere ko.

Jyoti haste hue :- are ni ese kese , ye pics to m rohan bhai or sab ko dikhaungi , aakhir unhe bhi to pata chale ki , bachpan m mere bhaiya , uff sorry sorry bhaiya ni meri didi kitni beautiful dikhti thi.

Karan pic lene k liye us per jhapta lekin jyoti teyar thi , or wo bhagne lagi , or karan bhi uske piche piche doda.

Esa kya tha us pic m aaiye jante h.

Short and cute flashback.

Ye baat tab ki h jab asha jinda thi , ek baar wo apne dono bacho k sath isi ghar m aayi hui thi .

Jesa ki har maa ko ek shok hota h apne chote bacho k sath chote mote experiment kerke masti kerne ka , vesa hi asha ko bhi tha, ek baar use ek masti sujhi .

Wo karan k pass ek new frock leke gayi or boli.

Asha :- babu , jara idher aao dekho Mumma aapke liye new dress layi h, jara idher to aayo , m pahanake to dekhu apne betu ko kesi h.

Karan new dress ka naam sun fat se bhaga bhaga asha k pass pahuncha or bola.

Karan :- new dless (dress) , kidal h mumma dikhao na.

Asha :- ha mela bacha ,ye dekho.

Karan :- pal mumma ye to ladkiyo ki dless h na , jesi choti pahanti h, fil m kese pahanu.

Asha pyar se uske gal khichte hue ,

Asha :- ale to kya hua mela bacha , aapki choti bhi to kabhi kabhi aapki pants pahanti h na , to isne kya buaryi h , chalo ab jaldi se pahano ni to mumma aapse nalaj ho jayegi.

Jyoti :- ha bhaiya pahal lo na, aap bahut pyale lagoge.

Karan ko jyoti or apni maa ki baat manni padi , fir asha kese na kese apni hasi control ker karan ko wo frock pahanati h or ladkiyo ki tarah thoda sa makeup bhi ker deti h.




Fir karan jese hi pura teyar ho jata h to wo asha se masumiyat se pucha .

Karan :- mumma m keta lag laha hu.

Asha :- awww so cute , kisi ki najar na lage mere babu ko , bahut cute lag rahe ho mele betu aap.

Karan khush hote hue :- sachi mumma.

Asha gal chumte hue :- muchi mela bacha.

Jyoti us time se hi khub hoshiyar thi or wo apni mummy ki masti ko achi tarah samjh rahi thi.

Jyoti :- mumma bhaiya itne hi pyale lag lahe h , to inki ek photo to lo na.

Asha :- ha ha kyu ni .

Fir karan ko asha ek ladki jese pose m khada ker uski pic leti h , apne camera se.

Pic lene k baad dono maa beti , jinhone itni der hasi control ki hui thi , ab or control ni ker payi or wo jor jor se hasne lagi.

Karan ko pahale to kuch samjh ni aata , fir jab samjh aata h ki uski mumma or bahan uspe has rahi h to , wo rone laga or se bahar ja us jhule p beth gaya.

Asha ye dekh samjh gayi ki uska babu gussa ho gaya.

Wo or jyoti bhi uske pas gati or asha usko gale se laga k boli .

Asha :- ale ale mela bacha ro kyu
raha h

Karan asha se alag hone ki koshis kerte hue bola .

Karan :- aap jaiye laha se , mujhe aapse baat ni kelni, aap gande ho , aapne mujhe ladkiyo ki dless bhi pahanayi or majak bhi udaya.

Asha :- ale mera bacha to apni mumma se ruth gaya , beta m kaha hasi , hasi to ye chipkali thi na.

Jyoti apne kamr pe hath rakh boli :- mumma aap muje kyu fasa rahi ho ,plan to aapka hi tha na.

Karan ye sun asha se alag ho dusri side muh ker leta h.

Asha :- acha sorry na babu , apni mumma ko maaf bhi kal do na.

Karan :- ni .

Asha :- acha fir to mera pass ek hi rasta bacha h.

Jyoti :- wo tya mumma

Asha jyoti ko ankh marke boli :- ale wo hi wala.

Jyoti samjh jati h or uske chahare p shararati hasi aajati h,or dono maa beti karan p tut padi or gud gudi kerne lagi.

Asha :- ab bolo ab bhi ni kaloge maaf apni mumma ko.

Karan :- hahaha muma plede luk jao , luk jao , kiya maaf.


Fir asha karan ko gudgudi kerna chod use gale se laga k boli.

Asha :- bus beta , hamesha ese hi haste raha kero , tumhari ankho m ansu mujhe ache ni lagte , or apni mumma se ese kabhi nalaj bhi na hua kelo, m kuch bhi bardasht ker sakti hu per apne babu ki narajgi ni.

Or mahadev hi jane mele pass or kitna time bacha h apne bacho k sath rahane ka, isliye beta ese hasi majak p gussa ni hua kerte .

Karan or jyoti jese hi asha ka last sentence sunte h to dar jate h or apni maa k gale lag bole.

Dono :- mumma, aap hume chol k chali jaogi , ni mumma hum aapko kahi ni jane denge , kahi bhi ni.

Asha jab apne bacho ko yu rote hue dekhi to use apni bhul ka ahasas hota h ki vo galti se bhavnao m bahaker vo bol diya , jiska usko jikra bhi ni kerna chahiye tha.

Asha jaldi se karan or jyoti ko shant karwati h or boli.

Asha :- ale ale mele bacho , aap dono lone kyu lage , m kahi ni jane wali aap dono ko chod k mera bacha. M bhala kyu jane lagi apne pyale babu or gudiya ko chod k .

Jyoti :- sachi na mumma.

Asha :- ha mera bacha , chalo ab apne mote mote asu bahana band kero or ye batao mele sath icecream kon kon khayega.

Dono icecream ka nam sun khush ho gaye or dono ek sath bole.

Dono :- mai.

Asha :- chalo thik h fir chalo .

Karan :- mumma m wo badi wali , chocolate ice cream khaunga.

Asha :- thik h meli pyali gudiya .

Ye bol dono maa beti fir se hasne lagi , or karan ko bhi ahasas hota h ki vo abhi bhi usi frock m hi h.

Karan sharmate hue :- mumma , ab ye kaple badal bhi do na, mujhe ice cream bhi khane jana h.

Jyoti :- haye , meli didi to sharmate hue ol bhi pyali lag lahi h , h na mumma.

Asha haste hue :- ha , m to kahati hu ese hi chalo na babu oh sorry meli baby.

Karan chidte hue :- mumma .

Asha :- ale acha acha kerti hu babu , gussa kyu kerte ho.

Fir asha karan ko wapas normal kapde pahanati h or fir 3no waha se nikal pade ice cream khane.

Flashback end .

Karan abhi bhi jyoti k piche laga hua tha , kyunki jyoti k hath me wahi uski frock wali pic thi, jo shayad wahi gir gayi hogi .

Dono bhagte bhagte us jhule k pass aagye , karan ne kese na kese pakad hi liya jyoti ko or usse pic le hi li.

Jyoti :- bhai , wese aap sahi m bahut cute lage the the us time , aapke samne to priya bhi kuch ni lag rahi is pic me.

Kaho to ek apni frock du kya abhi , fir se pahan ke dekho na , kasam se ab to aap hat heroine ko takkar doge.

Ye bol jyoti fir se hasne lagi ,or karan usko ek chapat lagate hue bola

Karan :- hat jhali, kuch bhi bolti h , wo to m chota tha , to tune or mummy ne mujhe bhula bahalakr pahana di.

Or ye bol karan bhi hasne laga , apne bachpan k bholepan pe.

Jyoti :- kitne ache din the na wo bhai , jab mummy hamare sath thi , hamse kitna pyaar kerti thi wo or ab dekho, hume apno k bartaav ki vajah se apna hi ghar chodna pad raha h.

Ye bol uske ankho m aaj ki sari ghatna yaad ker aasu , aagaye .

Per karan ni roya , ab usne than liya tha khud ko majbut banane ka , usne jyoti ko gale lagate hue bola

Karan :- shant ho ja meri gudiya , shant ho ja , kyu un logo k liye apne kimti aasu baha rahi h, jinke liye hamari koi kimat ni h , na hi unka hamse koi lagav h.

Wo sirf ab humare kahane k liye hi apne rahe h, to ese logo k liye rona sirf bevkoofi h gudiya , ab hume khud ko majbut banana h. Taki hum apni nayi life ki shuruat ker sake ache se.

Jyoti :- aapne sahi kaha bhai , per aapne ek mahine ka kyu bola, hum to kal bhi ghar chod hi sakte the ,or ghar to hamare pass h hi na , sonu wala.

Karan jhula numa bed se uthata h or jyoti ko jhula jhulate hue bola

Karan ;- ha gudiya per ye sab itna bhi aasan ni h , hume sab kuch soch samjh k hi kerna hoga na gudiya , pahale to hume ye sochna hoga ki hum apne kharche kese niklenge, kuch to kerna hi hoga na aage ki life ko survive kerne k liye job wagerah kuch to dhundna hoga na .

Jyoti :- ha bhai sahi kaha aapne.

Fir karan or jyoti kuch der yu hi pyar bhari baste kerti h , to achanak se jyoti ko kisi bhavishya m aane wale sankat ka ahasas hone laga or wo karan se chipak gayi.

Karan :- kya hua choti , tu achanak se ese ghabrane kyu lagi.

Jyoti :- bhai mujhe abhi abhi kisi sankat ka ahasas hua , esa laga ki wo sankat kahi hume ek dusre se dur na ker de.

Karan pyaar se uske sir p hath pherte hue bola.

Karan :- dar mat meri gudiya , esa duniya m koi bhi musibat ya koi esi shakti ni h , jo mujhe meri gudiya se dur ker sake .

Or rahi baat us sankat ki , to jo bhi sankat aane wala h , uska samna hum dono mil ker karenge gudiya, or mujhe apne mahadev p pura bharosa h , vo apne bhakto ka kabhi ahit ni hone denge.

Fir karan jyoti ko kuch der m shant ker deta h , lekin thodi bahut tension abhi bhi thi jyoti k dil m.

Karan :- chal gudiya ab so jaao , kafi late ho gaya h.

Jyoti :- bhai nind ni aarahi .

Ye sun karan muskurata h or bola .

Karan :- chal gudia , hamesha se tu yaa maa hi mujhe lori gaake sunate the na , aaj mera no bhi aahi gaya.

Jyoti :- bhai aap ?

Karan :- ha bhai kyu , itna bhi bura ni gata m yaar.

Jyoti :- to sunao na bhai.


Karan jyoti k sir ko apni god m rakh k gane laga.


Karan :-

tu hi hai meri sakhi saheli..
tujh bin tarse ye naina...
jag se hai sanjha tera sahara..
tu mere jeevan ki dhara...

sapna saja tu..
lori mai gau...
aaj tu beta, mai teri maiya..
sapna saja tu..
lori mai gau...
aaj tu beta, mai teri maiya.

Karan ki madhur awaj or pyaar apna asar dikhati h or jyoti jald hi nind ki wadiyo m kho jati h.

Fir karan uska sir takiye p rakh use dhang se sula deta h or uth ker pass k talab k kinare beth jata h or khud se bola.

Karan :- tu chinta mat ker meri gudiya , tera bhai jab tak jinda h tab tak chahe ishwer bhi dharti p aajaye ,wo bhi hume ek dusre se alag ni ker payenge .

Or bahut hi jald tera bhai , humare sare dukh or preshani bhi jarur dur karega , or apni gudiya ki har ek khawaish har ek sapna pura karega.


Or ye bol karan kuch der waha dhyan lagane lagta h , taki wo khud k ashant man ko shant ker sake.

Aaj k liye bas itna hi.

Stay tuned

awesome

k n j ki purani yade taza ho gyi


kis kis ko real me ghar walo ne bachpan me ladki ka getup diya tha ?

 

[RAAZ]

Update no :- 73
Karan abhi dhyan m betha hua tha , vo kafi time tak parabrahm sadashiv k dhyan m raha .

Lekin kuch samay baad uska dhyan bar bar tutne laga , esa ek do bar ni kayi baar ho raha tha.

Kaaran ye tha ki use baar baar apni maa k accident ka wahi scene dikhayi dene laga tha apne dhyan me .

Karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki esa kyu ho raha h , vo ab vapas se ashant hone laga tha or baar bar apni maa ki mrityu ka vo drishya dikhne se uski ankhe nam ho gayi thi.

Karan :- ye kya ho raha h , he mahadev , ye baar bar mujhe us bhayanak durghatna ka drishya dikha , yu apne bhakt ko pida kyu de rahe h aap.


Karan fir ek baar dhyan me bettha h lekin fir vahi sab , karan ko kuch kuch baat ab samjh ane lagi thi.

Karan :- kahi , mere dhyan me is drishy ka baar bar aana , mahadev ka koi sanket to ni.

Ha avashya hi ye koi sanket h jo mahadev mujhe dena chahate h , per vo. sanket ho kya sakta h.

Karan ek baar fir dhyan me betha , or is bar fir vohi drishya use dikha , lekin usne is baar pure drishy ki ek ek gatividhi ko dhyan se dekha.

Or usne ek baat pakad hi li , usko ek jagah kuch ajib lagi , or sath sath kuch gadbad bhi.

Karan :- ye kya kya mane jo baat notice ki h kya vo sach h , ager ye sach h to bahut badi sajish hui thi meri maa k khilaf , mujhe shighra hi is baare m pata lagana hoga.

Ye baat than vo time dekhta h to pata h , ki raat ki 1.30 baj rahe h , to vo bhi waha se uth vapas us jhule wale bed p jyoti k pass jaa ke let jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k vo so jata h.

Agle din aankh pahale jyoti ki khuli or vo jese apni ankh khol dekhti h to vo khud ko karan ki baho m pati h.

Jyoti (man me ) :- haaye ! Sote hue to or bhi jyada cute lagte h bhaiyaa , man to kerta h sari jindagi ese hi inki baho m rahu or apni jaan ko yu niharti rahu.

Per kya karu bhai to samjhte hi ni mere is pyaar ko ya yu kaho jan k bhi anjaan bante h.

He mahadev vo din kab aayega jab mere bhai mere sache prem ko svikar ker apne hriday ki baat mujhe bolenge.

M janti hu mahadev ye samaj ki drishti m ghor apradh h prabhu , parantu aap bhi ye jante h ki prem p kisika vash kaha h bhagvan , isliye he mahadev apni is putri ki sahayta kijiye prabhu

Fir kuch der yu hi jyoti khud se man hi man bate kerti rahi fir usne karan k hoto ko halke se chum liya or jaldi se piche ho gayi or sharmane lagi.

Jyoti ki is harkat se karan ki bhi nind khul gayi , or ankh khulte hi sabse pahale use jyoti ka muskurata hua chahara dikha , jisse wo apni raat ki tension bhul gaya .


Karan(jyoti k gaal chumte hue) :- good morning sweety .

Jyoti :- good morning ! Bhai.

Karan or jyoti fir uth k usi jhule p beth jate h , fir karan bola .

Karan :- raat ko ache se to nind aayi na gudiya.

Jyoti :- ha bhai , aapki lori ka hi kamal tha , jo aajtak ki sabse achi nind mili mujhe .

Karan kuch ni bola bas muskurata h , fir dono bhai bahan ghar k ander ja ke fresh hote h or naha dhoke teyar ho jate h.

Fir dono bhai bahan vahi bane chote se shiv mandir (jaha pichli baar un dono ko apni maa mili thi ) ja ker puja kerte h.

Fir karan ko achanak se shivani ka dhyan aata h , or ab usko khud sharam aane lagu ki , vo apne gusse m itna andha ho gaya ki use apni choti bahan ka dhyan hi ni raha

Karan :- chal gudiya hume ab jaldi se ghar chalna chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu bhai , jab vaha koi hamari parwah kerne wala h hi ni to hum kyu parwah kare unki.

Karan :- ni gudiya , tum shayad bhul rahi ho ek h waha jise humari parwah aaj bhi h or humse prem bhi , hamari pyari shivani choti .

Jyoti bhi shivani ka naam sun tension m aagayi , wo bhi bhul hi gaye the , pichli raat ki ghatna k baad shivani ki kya halat hogi.

Jyoti :- ha bhai aapne sahi kaha , hum shivani k baare m bhul hi gaye , hume jaldi se nikalna hoga.

Fir karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or . Karib adhe ghante m vo dono apne ghar pahunch gaye .

Karan or jyoti jese hi apne ghar pahunche to paya ki ghar p koi ni h .

Unhone apni kam wali bai se pucha to pata chala ki ghar p sirf shivani hi h , jo abhi apne kamre m so rahi h.

Karan or jyoti fir shivani k kamre ki or bhade , jaha jake jeSe hi unhone shivani ko dekha to unhe bahut dukh hua.

Shivani k pyare or gore chahre p aasuo k nishan ban gaye the,jise dekh saf pata chal raha tha ki wo bahut royi h.

Karan jake pyaar se shivani ko jagata h , shivani jese hi jag k karan ko apne samne dekhti h to jhat se uske sine lag rone lagi.

Shivani (rote hue) :- bhaiya aap kaha chale gaye thee , mane aapko bahut dhunda raat ko ghar m aap kahi ni mile, mujhe laga ki aap mujhe kal hi chod k chale gaye .

Karan abhi kuch bolne ki halat me ni tha , kyunki ghar chodne ka fesla to usne ker liya tha , per use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo is baare m shivani ko kese samjhaye.vo bas shivani ko shant kerne m laga raha.

Shivani thoda shant hoke boli :- bhai kya aap sach me ghar chod k chale jaoge .

Karan :- meri gudiya , bhala kon apna vo ghar khushi khushi chodna chahega , jis ghar m usne janm liya , jis ghar se uski itni yaade judi ho.

Per ab halat hi ese ho gaye h ki hume esa kerna pad raha h , jis ghar m kisi samay sabse jyada prem or apna pan mila kerta tha , ab us ghar k sadasyon ye bhi fark ni padta ki hum jiye ya mare. Jis ghar m kabhi swarg sa aanand mila aaj wahi ghar m hume nark se bhi bhayanak mansik yatnaye mil rahi h.

Tu hi bata gudiya kal k hadse k baad bhi hamara is ghar m rahana sahi rahega , tera jo bhi fesla hoga , wo hi humara final decision hoga.

Shivani kuch der karan ki baato p gor kiya or fir boli.

Shivani :- ni bhai , aap bilkul sahi bol rahe ho , kal jo bhi hua usme dosh aapka ni meri hi mummy ka tha, unhonne na sirf aapke aatmsaman ko thes pahuchayi , balki unhonne badi maa ko bhi bura bhala bola .

Or jaha hume samman na mile , waha rahana mrityu se bhayanak kashtdayi hota h bhai , aapne sahi kaha bhai yaha sirf aapko dukh or kasht hi Mile h , or m ni chahati ki mere bhaiya or di ko ab or kasht jhele , isliye bhai m aapke is decision ka pure tarike se support kerti hu.

Shivani ye sab bol udaas ho gayi , jise dekh jyoti uske paas aa use gale laga boli.

Jyoti :- are meri princess aap udaas kyu ho rahi ho , hum konse aaj ja rahe h ,abhi ek mahina h. Or uske baad bhi hum aapse roj mila karenge na mera bacha

Shivani khush hote hue :- sachi didu.

Jyoti ;- muchi meri gudia. Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao , school k liye late ho raha h na.

Fir shivani jaldi se teyar ho jati h , fir 3no bhai bahan teyar ho nikal jate h , karan or jyoti shivani ko. School drop ker pahunch jate h sonam k pas.

Karan jese hi ghar m enter kerta h to pata h ki sonam naha dhoke ladoo gopal ji ko bhog laga rahi h khir ka

Karan :- are bhai, ager krishna ji ja bhog ho gaya ho to apne bhaiya ko bhi thoda bhog laga do.

Sonam karan ko dekh khush ho jati h or use gale laga k boli.

Sonam :- are bhaiya didi aap kab aaye.

Jyoti :- bas abhi abhi aaye sonu

Karan :- vese kheer bahut tasty lag rahi h gudiya , jara mujhe bhi taste kara na

Sonam :- jara kyu bhai , jitna chaho khaiye na ,aapke liye hi to h ye

Fir karan or jyoti dono kheer ko khate h , tabhi karan ka chahara serious ho jata h

Sonam :- kya hua bhai , kheer achi ni bani kya.

Karan :- ni kheer achi ni h

Sonam ye sun thoda udaa hi gayi

Karan fir se bola

Karan :- khir achi ni , bahut jyada achi bani h gudiya

Ye bol karan sonam k hatho ko chum leta h , jisse sonM sharma jati h .

Tabhi ac bhi aajata h , jiska order karan ne kal kiya tha or wo use sonam k kamre m lagwa deta h.

Kitna adhbhut charitra h karan ka , is ac k pese ikhate karan ne apne or jyoti k room m ac lagwane k liye kiye the, kyunki garmiyo k time dono bhai bahan ko kafi pareshani hoti thi or wo apne papa se pese ni mangna chahate the , isliye wo pichle sal se pese ikathe ker rahe the.

Per unhonne sonam ki sehat or uski khushi k liye , unhonne khud ka ac ka khayal ko chodne m minute bhi na lagaye or unhonne ac sonam k liye kharid liya.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- rampur.

Naina apna saman pack ker rahi thi , pandit ji bahut hi prasiddh the to unhe bahut se bade bade seth log , kafi bhari rakam dan dete the or unke paas jamino ki bhi koi kami ni thi.

Isliye naina ne apne safar k kharche k liye , apni kuch jamin bech di thakur ko , jiski usne madad ki thi .

Thakur ne bhi puri imandari se use jamin ki bilkul sahi kimat di thi .

Per sawal ye tha ki naina 15 din se pahale hi kese safar k liye teyar ho gayi thi aaiye jante h.

Short flashback .

Pichli raat jab naina so rahi thi to uske sapne me pandit ji aaye.

NainA(nam ankho se ) baba.

Itna bol sapne me hi pandit ji k gale lag gayi or rone lagi .

Pandit :- mat ro meri bachi , tu to janti h na , tu roti h to taklif mujhe hoti h , kya tu chahati h tere baba ko taklif ho

Naina ansu pochte:- ni ni baba , ab m kabhi bhi ni roungi , per baba aap mujhe yu akela chod kyu chale gaye.

Pandit ji :- beti m kaha gaya hu , mera prem or ashirwad to tumhare sath hamesha h.

Beti ab samay aagaya h us dusht samraat ka ant or megha bahan ki mukti ka, kal hi apni yatra p nikalna hoga

Naina :- per baba 15 din se pahale , m ye sab kese karu, kya ye uchit hoga .

Pandit ji :- meri bachi tumhara kahana bhi uchit h ,lekin mane jesa kaha h vo hi vidhi ka vidhan h , ye aadesh mujhe maa (mahakali) ne hi diya h , ki m tumhe unka ye sandesh du.

Naina :- jesa aap kahe baba , m maa ki icha ko kese tal sakti hu. M kal hi apne safar p nikal jaungi.

Per baba m shuruat kaha se karu .

Pandit ji :- beta hamare ganv se lagbhag 100 km dur ek brihaspur nam ka ganv h , vaha ek maha aghauri aaye hue h , wahi tumhara marg darshan karenge .

Or ha beti is nishan ko bhulna mat ye nishan hi tumhe tumhari manjil tak pahuchayega , ya yu kaho ye hi tumhari manjil h .

Pandit ji k bolne k sath hi hava me ek nishan banta h , jo kuch esa tha.





Pandit :- acha beti ab mujhe jana hoga , apna dhyan rakhana meri bachi.

Naina pandit ji ko rokne ki koshis kerti h per itne m wo jag jati h.

Flashback end.

Naina k hath me ek photo thi , jo megha ki thi , jo use megha k us saman se mili thi , jise pandit ji ne aaj tak sambhal k rakha tha.

Or unhone apne ant samay m jate jate yah bata diya tha ki , us saman m ye photo milegi , jo uski maa ki thi.

Naina apni jeep me bethi apni ma ki photo ko dekh boli.

Naina(nam ankho se) :- maa , aapki beti aarahi h apko us dhusht ki ked se mukt karwane . Bas kuch samay or maa fir m aapko kabhi apne se alag ni hone dungi.

Fir gusse se boli.

Naina ;- intezaar khatam hua samraat tera kaal ab aaraha h tera ant ker , apni maa ko chudane .

Maa mahakali ki saugandh tere pure kul ka nash na kiya to , m apne swargiya baba ki beti ni.

Ye bol naina ek akhiri baar jeep se utar maa k darshan kiye , phir apni jeep m bet nikal padi apne safar per

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

Stay tuned.

Zabardast update bro... keep it up.
Ab lagta hai Samraat ka cou tdown start ho gaya hain aur shayd megha ke azaad ho e sai kai rehasya pe se parda uthay udhar shayad ab karan apni maa ki accident ya murder mystrey ko solve kar sake.

 

[ShivaRam]

bhai

 

[JAY WALKER]

Nice update bro.Saamne ke khatra ko samla korne kile maine acche se seat belt bad lia hai.Aur aapne?

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[Naughtyrishabh]

Sabse pahle to 400 pages pure hone PR dher sari badhaiyan Bhai.

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update Bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To hint mil hi gya ki karan ki ma ka accident hua nahi tha apitu vo ek sazish thi.
Lekin kya ??
Karan shivani or jyoti ki batcheet bhi kafi dilchasp rahi.
Udhar naina bhi nikal chuki h .
Dekhe kya anzaam hota h ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjar