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For completing 400 pages on your thread
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Awesome update bhai,
behad hi shandaar aur lajawab update hai bhai,
karan ko dhyan me hints mil gaya hai ki uski maa ka accident karwaya gaya tha,
aur ab usne nischay kar liya hai ki vo uss insaan ka pata laga kar hi rahega,
jyoti ne subah subah hi karan ko kiss karke apne din ki shuruat ki hai,
shivani ko bhi un dono ne bata diya hai ki vo ghar chhod kar jaane wale hai,
aur use mana bhi liya hai,
sonam ke room me bhi karan ne A/C lagwa diya hai,
vahi dusri taraf raat ko naina ke sapne me pandit ji aaye the aur unhone use kaha hai ki ab samrat ke ant ka samay aa gaya hai,
naina apne naye safar ke liye nikal gayi hai,
ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai,
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Abhi mein ne tumare saare update pade karan bhai .

Sach me kamal ki story likhi hai.
Tumne
jaise mein story padhna chahata tha yeh story bilkul vaise hii hai .


Vaise shuru me mujhe yeh story bilkul pasand nahi aae

Kiuki mein ne pyare riste story phele padi hue thi

Or vo story mujhe bilkul bhi achi nahi lagi
Har readers ki apni apni soch hoti hai kisi ko story achi lagti hai kisi ko nahi.

Isliye mein ne negative vote kiya tha

Please bhai yeh personal mat lena kiuki mujhe jaisa lagta hai mein sach bolta hue mein upar upar se nice update ya fantastic update bol kar bina pasand kiye review nahi deta hu
Mera jo bhi review hota hai vo mann or bhawnao se hota hai
Kiuki writer ke sath reader ke bhi bhawanae us story se jud jati hai.
Or jaise acha lagta hai readers vaise comment karte hai.
Vo acha bhi ho sakta hai or bura bhi


Kiuki ek writer story isliye likhta hai ki vo yeh pata kar sake ki kya mere ander vo kabliyat hai ki mein ek fantastic story likhu or reader unki story padh kar bataye ki jo mein ne apni mehnat se story likhi hai vo kesi hai

Or jaruri nahi ki sab ko vo story pasand aae.


Vaise mujhe pata hai yeh aap ki first story hai to likhne me thodi problem bhi hoti hai.
Kisi readers ko story achi lagti hai kisi ko nahi


Magar jab mujhe roshni he bataya ki yeh story bohot achi hai apne isme negative review kiu diya
Jab mein vaishnu devi me tha to usne khud meri id se vo negative review hata diya or bohot achi story wale vote par dal diya.

Fir mujhe laga ki apki story age padhni chahiye or age padhte padhte mere yeh story puri tarha se change lagi.


Har update age padhte padhte intersting hote chale gae.


Har update ko apne bohot hii khubsuraat tarike se likha hai.

Karan or jyoti ka mazak or pyaar bohot hi ache tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Or mata sati or mahadev ki story mein ne pehle bhi padi hai .
Magar apne vo yaad bhi taza kara di


Or yeh karan or jyoti kdf ka hii ansh hai.

Or us chudel ka khel ko bohot fantastic tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Or uska ant bhi bohot alag or mazedaar tha.

Ab pret bhi story me aa gaye hai.
Or unka ant bhi bohot shandaar tarike se dikaya gaya hai.

Drugs ke mafiyo ko karan ne jo ek jhatke mein khatam kiya vo bhi unexpected tha.

Or karan or jyoti ka pyaar bohot hii sacha or honest hai.

Mujhe jyoti or karan ka character bohot pasand aya .

Vaise rohan ka bhi charector bohot acha hai.


Overall kahu to ek bohot zabardast story likhi hai apne
Aise hii likhe raho bhai.

Apki mehnaat kabiliye tarif hai.

Yeh baat story padhkar dikai deti hai.

Jaha karan or jyoti apne lakhye ki taraf aage bad rahe hai

Vahi narad jii or kdf ki baate bohot hii romanchak dikai hai apne

Ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.

Asha hai ki age ke update bhi karan bhai aap jabardast hii likhoge

Vaise abhi mein ne 68 update hii pade hai abhi tak jo apne index mein deye hue tha
Jaise hii time milta hai next update ka review deta hu.


Your friend
Rohan

mujhe y post bahut pasand aya

 

[Jitu kumar]

bhai for 400 pages

 

[Dark Devil]

Update no :- 73
Karan abhi dhyan m betha hua tha , vo kafi time tak parabrahm sadashiv k dhyan m raha .

Lekin kuch samay baad uska dhyan bar bar tutne laga , esa ek do bar ni kayi baar ho raha tha.

Kaaran ye tha ki use baar baar apni maa k accident ka wahi scene dikhayi dene laga tha apne dhyan me .

Karan ko samjh ni aaraha tha ki esa kyu ho raha h , vo ab vapas se ashant hone laga tha or baar bar apni maa ki mrityu ka vo drishya dikhne se uski ankhe nam ho gayi thi.

Karan :- ye kya ho raha h , he mahadev , ye baar bar mujhe us bhayanak durghatna ka drishya dikha , yu apne bhakt ko pida kyu de rahe h aap.


Karan fir ek baar dhyan me bettha h lekin fir vahi sab , karan ko kuch kuch baat ab samjh ane lagi thi.

Karan :- kahi , mere dhyan me is drishy ka baar bar aana , mahadev ka koi sanket to ni.

Ha avashya hi ye koi sanket h jo mahadev mujhe dena chahate h , per vo. sanket ho kya sakta h.

Karan ek baar fir dhyan me betha , or is bar fir vohi drishya use dikha , lekin usne is baar pure drishy ki ek ek gatividhi ko dhyan se dekha.

Or usne ek baat pakad hi li , usko ek jagah kuch ajib lagi , or sath sath kuch gadbad bhi.

Karan :- ye kya kya mane jo baat notice ki h kya vo sach h , ager ye sach h to bahut badi sajish hui thi meri maa k khilaf , mujhe shighra hi is baare m pata lagana hoga.

Ye baat than vo time dekhta h to pata h , ki raat ki 1.30 baj rahe h , to vo bhi waha se uth vapas us jhule wale bed p jyoti k pass jaa ke let jata h or jyoti ko apne sine se laga k vo so jata h.

Agle din aankh pahale jyoti ki khuli or vo jese apni ankh khol dekhti h to vo khud ko karan ki baho m pati h.

Jyoti (man me ) :- haaye ! Sote hue to or bhi jyada cute lagte h bhaiyaa , man to kerta h sari jindagi ese hi inki baho m rahu or apni jaan ko yu niharti rahu.

Per kya karu bhai to samjhte hi ni mere is pyaar ko ya yu kaho jan k bhi anjaan bante h.

He mahadev vo din kab aayega jab mere bhai mere sache prem ko svikar ker apne hriday ki baat mujhe bolenge.

M janti hu mahadev ye samaj ki drishti m ghor apradh h prabhu , parantu aap bhi ye jante h ki prem p kisika vash kaha h bhagvan , isliye he mahadev apni is putri ki sahayta kijiye prabhu

Fir kuch der yu hi jyoti khud se man hi man bate kerti rahi fir usne karan k hoto ko halke se chum liya or jaldi se piche ho gayi or sharmane lagi.

Jyoti ki is harkat se karan ki bhi nind khul gayi , or ankh khulte hi sabse pahale use jyoti ka muskurata hua chahara dikha , jisse wo apni raat ki tension bhul gaya .


Karan(jyoti k gaal chumte hue) :- good morning sweety .

Jyoti :- good morning ! Bhai.

Karan or jyoti fir uth k usi jhule p beth jate h , fir karan bola .

Karan :- raat ko ache se to nind aayi na gudiya.

Jyoti :- ha bhai , aapki lori ka hi kamal tha , jo aajtak ki sabse achi nind mili mujhe .

Karan kuch ni bola bas muskurata h , fir dono bhai bahan ghar k ander ja ke fresh hote h or naha dhoke teyar ho jate h.

Fir dono bhai bahan vahi bane chote se shiv mandir (jaha pichli baar un dono ko apni maa mili thi ) ja ker puja kerte h.

Fir karan ko achanak se shivani ka dhyan aata h , or ab usko khud sharam aane lagu ki , vo apne gusse m itna andha ho gaya ki use apni choti bahan ka dhyan hi ni raha

Karan :- chal gudiya hume ab jaldi se ghar chalna chahiye.

Jyoti :- kyu bhai , jab vaha koi hamari parwah kerne wala h hi ni to hum kyu parwah kare unki.

Karan :- ni gudiya , tum shayad bhul rahi ho ek h waha jise humari parwah aaj bhi h or humse prem bhi , hamari pyari shivani choti .

Jyoti bhi shivani ka naam sun tension m aagayi , wo bhi bhul hi gaye the , pichli raat ki ghatna k baad shivani ki kya halat hogi.

Jyoti :- ha bhai aapne sahi kaha , hum shivani k baare m bhul hi gaye , hume jaldi se nikalna hoga.

Fir karan or jyoti nikal pade apne ghar ki or . Karib adhe ghante m vo dono apne ghar pahunch gaye .

Karan or jyoti jese hi apne ghar pahunche to paya ki ghar p koi ni h .

Unhone apni kam wali bai se pucha to pata chala ki ghar p sirf shivani hi h , jo abhi apne kamre m so rahi h.

Karan or jyoti fir shivani k kamre ki or bhade , jaha jake jeSe hi unhone shivani ko dekha to unhe bahut dukh hua.

Shivani k pyare or gore chahre p aasuo k nishan ban gaye the,jise dekh saf pata chal raha tha ki wo bahut royi h.

Karan jake pyaar se shivani ko jagata h , shivani jese hi jag k karan ko apne samne dekhti h to jhat se uske sine lag rone lagi.

Shivani (rote hue) :- bhaiya aap kaha chale gaye thee , mane aapko bahut dhunda raat ko ghar m aap kahi ni mile, mujhe laga ki aap mujhe kal hi chod k chale gaye .

Karan abhi kuch bolne ki halat me ni tha , kyunki ghar chodne ka fesla to usne ker liya tha , per use samjh ni aaraha tha ki vo is baare m shivani ko kese samjhaye.vo bas shivani ko shant kerne m laga raha.

Shivani thoda shant hoke boli :- bhai kya aap sach me ghar chod k chale jaoge .

Karan :- meri gudiya , bhala kon apna vo ghar khushi khushi chodna chahega , jis ghar m usne janm liya , jis ghar se uski itni yaade judi ho.

Per ab halat hi ese ho gaye h ki hume esa kerna pad raha h , jis ghar m kisi samay sabse jyada prem or apna pan mila kerta tha , ab us ghar k sadasyon ye bhi fark ni padta ki hum jiye ya mare. Jis ghar m kabhi swarg sa aanand mila aaj wahi ghar m hume nark se bhi bhayanak mansik yatnaye mil rahi h.

Tu hi bata gudiya kal k hadse k baad bhi hamara is ghar m rahana sahi rahega , tera jo bhi fesla hoga , wo hi humara final decision hoga.

Shivani kuch der karan ki baato p gor kiya or fir boli.

Shivani :- ni bhai , aap bilkul sahi bol rahe ho , kal jo bhi hua usme dosh aapka ni meri hi mummy ka tha, unhonne na sirf aapke aatmsaman ko thes pahuchayi , balki unhonne badi maa ko bhi bura bhala bola .

Or jaha hume samman na mile , waha rahana mrityu se bhayanak kashtdayi hota h bhai , aapne sahi kaha bhai yaha sirf aapko dukh or kasht hi Mile h , or m ni chahati ki mere bhaiya or di ko ab or kasht jhele , isliye bhai m aapke is decision ka pure tarike se support kerti hu.

Shivani ye sab bol udaas ho gayi , jise dekh jyoti uske paas aa use gale laga boli.

Jyoti :- are meri princess aap udaas kyu ho rahi ho , hum konse aaj ja rahe h ,abhi ek mahina h. Or uske baad bhi hum aapse roj mila karenge na mera bacha

Shivani khush hote hue :- sachi didu.

Jyoti ;- muchi meri gudia. Chalo ab jaldi se ready ho jao , school k liye late ho raha h na.

Fir shivani jaldi se teyar ho jati h , fir 3no bhai bahan teyar ho nikal jate h , karan or jyoti shivani ko. School drop ker pahunch jate h sonam k pas.

Karan jese hi ghar m enter kerta h to pata h ki sonam naha dhoke ladoo gopal ji ko bhog laga rahi h khir ka

Karan :- are bhai, ager krishna ji ja bhog ho gaya ho to apne bhaiya ko bhi thoda bhog laga do.

Sonam karan ko dekh khush ho jati h or use gale laga k boli.

Sonam :- are bhaiya didi aap kab aaye.

Jyoti :- bas abhi abhi aaye sonu

Karan :- vese kheer bahut tasty lag rahi h gudiya , jara mujhe bhi taste kara na

Sonam :- jara kyu bhai , jitna chaho khaiye na ,aapke liye hi to h ye

Fir karan or jyoti dono kheer ko khate h , tabhi karan ka chahara serious ho jata h

Sonam :- kya hua bhai , kheer achi ni bani kya.

Karan :- ni kheer achi ni h

Sonam ye sun thoda udaa hi gayi

Karan fir se bola

Karan :- khir achi ni , bahut jyada achi bani h gudiya

Ye bol karan sonam k hatho ko chum leta h , jisse sonM sharma jati h .

Tabhi ac bhi aajata h , jiska order karan ne kal kiya tha or wo use sonam k kamre m lagwa deta h.

Kitna adhbhut charitra h karan ka , is ac k pese ikhate karan ne apne or jyoti k room m ac lagwane k liye kiye the, kyunki garmiyo k time dono bhai bahan ko kafi pareshani hoti thi or wo apne papa se pese ni mangna chahate the , isliye wo pichle sal se pese ikathe ker rahe the.

Per unhonne sonam ki sehat or uski khushi k liye , unhonne khud ka ac ka khayal ko chodne m minute bhi na lagaye or unhonne ac sonam k liye kharid liya.

Wahi dusri or

Location :- rampur.

Naina apna saman pack ker rahi thi , pandit ji bahut hi prasiddh the to unhe bahut se bade bade seth log , kafi bhari rakam dan dete the or unke paas jamino ki bhi koi kami ni thi.

Isliye naina ne apne safar k kharche k liye , apni kuch jamin bech di thakur ko , jiski usne madad ki thi .

Thakur ne bhi puri imandari se use jamin ki bilkul sahi kimat di thi .

Per sawal ye tha ki naina 15 din se pahale hi kese safar k liye teyar ho gayi thi aaiye jante h.

Short flashback .

Pichli raat jab naina so rahi thi to uske sapne me pandit ji aaye.

NainA(nam ankho se ) baba.

Itna bol sapne me hi pandit ji k gale lag gayi or rone lagi .

Pandit :- mat ro meri bachi , tu to janti h na , tu roti h to taklif mujhe hoti h , kya tu chahati h tere baba ko taklif ho

Naina ansu pochte:- ni ni baba , ab m kabhi bhi ni roungi , per baba aap mujhe yu akela chod kyu chale gaye.

Pandit ji :- beti m kaha gaya hu , mera prem or ashirwad to tumhare sath hamesha h.

Beti ab samay aagaya h us dusht samraat ka ant or megha bahan ki mukti ka, tumhe kal hi apni yatra p nikalna hoga

Naina :- per baba 15 din se pahale , m ye sab kese karu, kya ye uchit hoga .

Pandit ji :- meri bachi tumhara kahana bhi uchit h ,lekin mane jesa kaha h vo hi vidhi ka vidhan h , ye aadesh mujhe maa (mahakali) ne hi diya h , ki m tumhe unka ye sandesh du.

Naina :- jesa aap kahe baba , m maa ki icha ko kese tal sakti hu. M kal hi apne safar p nikal jaungi.

Per baba m shuruat kaha se karu .

Pandit ji :- beta hamare ganv se lagbhag 100 km dur ek brihaspur nam ka ganv h , vaha ek maha aghauri aaye hue h , wahi tumhara marg darshan karenge .

Or ha beti is nishan ko bhulna mat ye nishan hi tumhe tumhari manjil tak pahuchayega , ya yu kaho ye hi tumhari manjil h .

Pandit ji k bolne k sath hi hava me ek nishan banta h , jo kuch esa tha.





Pandit :- acha beti ab mujhe jana hoga , apna dhyan rakhana meri bachi.

Naina pandit ji ko rokne ki koshis kerti h per itne m wo jag jati h.

Flashback end.

Naina k hath me ek photo thi , jo megha ki thi , jo use megha k us saman se mili thi , jise pandit ji ne aaj tak sambhal k rakha tha.

Or unhone apne ant samay m jate jate yah bata diya tha ki , us saman m ye photo milegi , jo uski maa ki thi.

Naina apni jeep me bethi apni ma ki photo ko dekh boli.

Naina(nam ankho se) :- maa , aapki beti aarahi h apko us dhusht ki ked se mukt karwane . Bas kuch samay or maa fir m aapko kabhi apne se alag ni hone dungi.

Fir gusse se boli.

Naina ;- intezaar khatam hua samraat tera kaal ab aaraha h tera ant ker , apni maa ko chudane .

Maa mahakali ki saugandh tere pure kul ka nash na kiya to , m apne swargiya baba ki beti ni.

Ye bol naina ek akhiri baar jeep se utar maa k darshan kiye , phir apni jeep m bet nikal padi apne safar per

Aaj k liye bas itna hi .

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Awesome update bhai
Karan ND Jyoti ab jaldi hi us
ghar ko chodd denge
Aur wohi shehar see bahar wale
ghar mein shift bhi ho jayenge
Karan ND Jyoti ka faisla sahi
Hai us Ghar ko choddne ka
Aisi jagah na to jaana chahiye
Rehna chahiye haha samman na mile
Karan ND Jyoti apna kharcha chalane
K liye Kya karenge wo dekhna hoga
Karan ko baar baar ek hi drishya dikh
Raha tha aur usne aisa Kya dekh liya
Us drishya mein jispe usne pehle kabhi
Gaur nai Kiya aur kaisi saajish ki bàat Kar
Raha tha Karan

Naina ko MAA MAHAKAALI ka adesh
Aur aashirwaad dono mil Gaye hai
Ab aage Kya hoga dekhna hoga..


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Awesome update bhai
Karan ND Jyoti ab jaldi hi us
ghar ko chodd denge
Aur wohi shehar see bahar wale
ghar mein shift bhi ho jayenge
Karan ND Jyoti ka faisla sahi
Hai us Ghar ko choddne ka
Aisi jagah na to jaana chahiye
Rehna chahiye haha samman na mile
Karan ND Jyoti apna kharcha chalane
K liye Kya karenge wo dekhna hoga
Karan ko baar baar ek hi drishya dikh
Raha tha aur usne aisa Kya dekh liya
Us drishya mein jispe usne pehle kabhi
Gaur nai Kiya aur kaisi saajish ki bàat Kar
Raha tha Karan

Naina ko MAA MAHAKAALI ka adesh
Aur aashirwaad dono mil Gaye hai
Ab aage Kya hoga dekhna hoga..


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Shahar se bahar wale ghar m ni bhai sonam wale ghar m.