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R_Raj

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Ye kahani hai Amit ki — ek aise ladke ki jo mohabbat me apna dil haar baitha, aur rishton ke bojh me apna sab kuch…
Gaon ki galiyon se leke nadiya ke kinare tak, uske har kadam par ek kahani, ek zakham likha gaya.
Mohabbat uske liye sirf khushi nahi thi, wo thi ek aisi aag, jisme usne apni muskaan, apna sukoon,
aur apne apno ka bharosa jala diya. Aur jab pyar ke saaye me chhupaa hua sach saamne aaya…
tab pata chala ki zakham sirf dil ko nahi lagte, rishton ko bhi lage hai

Main Characters​

  • Amit -
    Gaon ka ek begana sa ladka. Padhai me zyada mann nahi, par khayalon ka ek apna aasmaan. Uski aankhon me sapne, par dil me ek purana bojh.
    Baahon me maati ki khushboo, kadmon me bechaini ka saaya, aur dil me ek aawara manchala jo kabhi ek jagah tikta hi nahi — na sochon me, na jazbaaton me.

    amit
  • Anjali –
    Gaon ki ek seedhi-saadhi ladki, gareeb ghar ki, nichle tole ki. Uske chehre par ek anjaani udaasi ka rang, jo kabhi-kabhi uski muskaan ke peeche bhi jhalak jaata hai. Amit ke dil ka pehla sachcha rang, par apne khud ke raaz lekar chalne wali.

    anjali
  • Saroja -
    Amit ki maa. Khet ki mitti se lekar chulhe ki roti tak, har cheez sambhalne wali. Beta ki aawargi se pareshan, par maa ka dil hamesha duaon me bandha hua.

    maa
  • Rajveer Singh –
    Amit ke pitaji. Gaon ke mashhoor zamindar, jinke liye izzat sabse badi cheez hai. Purane zamane me unke ek gehre dost hua karte the — Balwant Rai— lekin waqt aur zameen ke jhagadon ne dosti ko dushmani me badal diya.Rajveer Singh ek rangeen mizaj aadmi hain; unke aas-paas kuch purani, kuch nayi rakhailen rahi hain, jo unke shauk ka hissa thi. Phir bhi, gaon ki izzat aur apni rudhivaadi soch ke mamle me woh lohe ki tarah sakht hain. Apne tarike se parivar ko jodne ki koshish karte hain, lekin unka anushasan kabhi-kabhi zanjeer ban jaata hai.

    papa
  • Raghubir –
    Amit ke chacha. Zubaan se hamesha taane maarne wale, par dil me apne bhatije ki gehri fikr chhupaye hue. Apni koi santan na hone ki wajah se, Amit ko dil se apna beta mante hain — uski har khushi, har chinta apne se judi samajhte hain.
    Apne bade bhai Rajveer Singh ke wafadar aur har faisle me unka saath dene wale. Unka pyaar zyada dikhai nahi deta, lekin chupke se diya gaya unka sahara aur samay par ki gayi madad rajveer/amit ke liye hamesha ek mazboot kandha ban jaati hai.
  • Kamla –
    Amit ki chachi. Ghar ke har chhote-bade raaz ki malika, jo chup rehkar sab dekh leti hain aur samay aane par sahi jagah sahi baat ka istimaal karna jaanti hain. Apni koi santan na hone ki wajah se, Amit ko apna hi beta manti hain — uske liye pyaar bhi rakhti hain aur apni taraf se chhupke se madad bhi kar deti hain.Lekin Kamla ke apne bhi kai raaz hain — kuch purane, kuch nayi kahaniyon se jude hue. Un raazon me mohabbat bhi chhupi hai, chhal bhi, aur aise rishte jo sirf andheron me hi zinda reh sakte hain.

    chachi
  • Rohan –
    Amit ka dost. Uski zindagi ka woh hissa jo hamesha sach bolta hai — chahe wo sach dard de ya rahat. Gaon me mashhoor apni bakchodi, chugalkhori, aur ladkibaazi ke liye. Dil se aawara aur manchala, jiska har din ek nayi kahani, ek naya chakkar le aata hai.Kabhi Amit ka saathi, kabhi uske liye musibat ka sabab, lekin dono ki dosti me ek aisa junoon hai jo na gaon ki baatein tod sakti hain, na waqt ki tez hawa.
  • Virendra ka Parivar –
    Tau Virendra aur tai Shakuntla, bhaiya-bhabhi, aur unki apni alag duniya. Gaon ki izzat, daulat, aur rajneeti ke beech apni jagah banaye rakhne ki koshish, lekin kahani purani chingari se shuru hoti hai.
    Amit ke dada ne zamindari apne chhote bete Rajveer ko di, kyunki Rajveer unke sapno aur mehnat par khare utarte the. Tai Virendra ko wo pasand nahi karte the, kyunki Virendra aiyaash, bewda, aur roz ghar pe shikayatein laane wale aadmi the. Isi faisle ne parivar me ek gehri daraar daal di — zamindari Rajveer ko milne se dono khandan alag ho gaye.


    Tai Shakuntla apne rang me ek alag hi shaksiyat hai — dil-fek aur thodi gadrai maal, jiska dil dono taraf rehta hai; apne parivar ki taraf bhi, aur Rajveer ke ghar ki taraf bhi, lekin apna fayda kabhi nahi bhoolti.

    tai

    Unka ek beta hai, Ajay, jo shehar me naukri karta hai. Uski shaadi ho chuki hai, patni ka naam Kamini hai — jo naam ke mutabiq kaafi tez, samajhdaar, aur kabhi-kabhi thodi chhupi hui chalak bhi hai.

    kamini
 
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Purwa gaon ka subah ka mahaul apne aap me ek kahani hai, Gaon ki galiyon me mitti ki khushboo, aur door kahin se mandir ki ghanti ki awaaz aa rahi thi, jaise poore gaon ko ek shanti ka ehsaas kara rahi ho.

Amit, hamara hero, aaj bhi subah maa Saroja ke daanton se din ki shuruaat karta hai.
Saroja: “Amit! Uth ja, din chadh gaya hai! Kab tak charpai todta rahega? Jaa, chara daal gay ko, phir rasan le aa bazaar se.”
Amit ne neend se bhari aankhon se bas palat ke dekha, lekin uthne ka mann nahi hua

Pitaji Rajveer Singh, jo gaon me apni zamindari ke liye mashhoor hain, aangan me hukkah peete hue bolte hain,
“Beta, naam sirf baap ka hota hai, izzat apne kaam se banani padti hai.”

Chacha Raghubir hansi dabate hue taana maar dete hain,
“Bade ghar ka ladka ho lekin kaam se bhaag ke, naam ka kya fayda?”

Amit ne mann hi mann socha ki ghar me har kisi ko bas use hi kaam ke liye yaad aata hai — kabhi gay ka chara, kabhi rasan, kabhi khet me paani.
Us din bhi majbooran usne bazaar jaake rasan liya, lekin dil me ek bojh sa tha. Bazaar se lautne ke baad school ki taiyari hui.

Amit school ke gate se andar ghusta hi tha ki peeche se ek awaaz aayi, “Oye Amit! Aaj fir late? Lagta hai raat ko gane sunte-sunte soya hoga!”
Yeh tha Rohan – Amit ka bachpan ka dost aur class ka sabse zyada shor machane wala ladka.
jo hamesha hasi mazaak karke Amit ka mood halka kar deta tha.

Amit hansi dabate hue bola, “Arre bhai, tu soch, subah subah gay ka chara daal, bazaar se rasan le aa… main school time pe aa jaaun to miracle hoga!”
Rohan ne kandhe pe haath rakh ke muskurate hue kaha, “Haan haan, tujhe dekh ke lagta hai tu padhai se zyada kheti ka champion banega.”
Amit ne mazaak me jawab diya, “Aur tu? Tu to lagta hai class me sirf attendance dene aata hai.”
Dono has pade, fir Rohan ne aankh maar ke kaha, “Attendance dene ke saath-saath ladkiyon ka attendance bhi le leta hoon main. Waise dekha, aaj Priya ne naya ribbon lagaya hai baalon me… mast lag rahi hai!”
Amit ne hans ke bola, “Bhai, tu kabhi sudhrega nahi… har waqt ladki, ladki, ladki!”
Rohan ne seedhe muh se kaha, “Arre yaar, school life ka asli maza isi me hai. Padhai to zindagi bhar hoti rahegi, par yeh baatein… yeh to bas abhi ki kahani hai.”
Amit ne mazaak udane wale andaz me bola, “Haan haan, aur fir kahani ban jaayegi ‘Rohan ka dil, har mahine naye chapter’.”
Rohan zor se hans ke bola, “Chup kar! Chal, class me chalte hain… aaj Priya ke bagal wali seat pe baithne ka plan hai.” Class ke bell bajte hi dono haste-haste andar chale gaye, jaise kuch hua hi na ho.

School khatam hote hi ghar wapas aate hi maa ne khet me paani dene ka kaam de diya. Dhoop tez thi, par kaam to karna hi tha. Lekin Amit ka mann khet me bilkul nahi lag raha tha, khet me paani dena start karke jungle ke taraf nikal gya.

Jungle ke paas ek purani nadi thi, jo hamesha halki-halki awaaz me behati rehti thi. nadi ke bagal me aam ke ped the, jin ki thandi chhaav me baith ke Amit aksar sochta rehta… wo aur uski tanhai, jo sirf wo aur yeh jungle jaante ho.
Fir aage jungle start ho jate hai.
Nadi ke Paani me sooraj ki antim kirnein chamak rahi thi. Aur pass me kuch bakriya char rahi thi.
Aur wahi, ek patthar par baithi hui thi Ek Ladki — safed salwar kameez me, apne lambe baalon ko sehlate hue.
Amit ne pehli baar usse dekha, aur samay jaise ruk gaya.

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1.

Purwa gaon ka subah ka mahaul apne aap me ek kahani hai, Gaon ki galiyon me mitti ki khushboo, aur door kahin se mandir ki ghanti ki awaaz aa rahi thi, jaise poore gaon ko ek shanti ka ehsaas kara rahi ho.

Amit, hamara hero, aaj bhi subah maa Saroja ke daanton se din ki shuruaat karta hai.
Saroja: “Amit! Uth ja, din chadh gaya hai! Kab tak charpai todta rahega? Jaa, chara daal gay ko, phir rasan le aa bazaar se.”
Amit ne neend se bhari aankhon se bas palat ke dekha, lekin uthne ka mann nahi hua

Pitaji Rajveer Singh, jo gaon me apni zamindari ke liye mashhoor hain, aangan me hukkah peete hue bolte hain,
“Beta, naam sirf baap ka hota hai, izzat apne kaam se banani padti hai.”

Chacha Raghubir hansi dabate hue taana maar dete hain,
“Bade ghar ka ladka ho lekin kaam se bhaag ke, naam ka kya fayda?”

Amit ne mann hi mann socha ki ghar me har kisi ko bas use hi kaam ke liye yaad aata hai — kabhi gay ka chara, kabhi rasan, kabhi khet me paani.
Us din bhi majbooran usne bazaar jaake rasan liya, lekin dil me ek bojh sa tha. Bazaar se lautne ke baad school ki taiyari hui.

Amit school ke gate se andar ghusta hi tha ki peeche se ek awaaz aayi, “Oye Amit! Aaj fir late? Lagta hai raat ko gane sunte-sunte soya hoga!”
Yeh tha Rohan – Amit ka bachpan ka dost aur class ka sabse zyada shor machane wala ladka.
jo hamesha hasi mazaak karke Amit ka mood halka kar deta tha.

Amit hansi dabate hue bola, “Arre bhai, tu soch, subah subah gay ka chara daal, bazaar se rasan le aa… main school time pe aa jaaun to miracle hoga!”
Rohan ne kandhe pe haath rakh ke muskurate hue kaha, “Haan haan, tujhe dekh ke lagta hai tu padhai se zyada kheti ka champion banega.”
Amit ne mazaak me jawab diya, “Aur tu? Tu to lagta hai class me sirf attendance dene aata hai.”
Dono has pade, fir Rohan ne aankh maar ke kaha, “Attendance dene ke saath-saath ladkiyon ka attendance bhi le leta hoon main. Waise dekha, aaj Priya ne naya ribbon lagaya hai baalon me… mast lag rahi hai!”
Amit ne hans ke bola, “Bhai, tu kabhi sudhrega nahi… har waqt ladki, ladki, ladki!”
Rohan ne seedhe muh se kaha, “Arre yaar, school life ka asli maza isi me hai. Padhai to zindagi bhar hoti rahegi, par yeh baatein… yeh to bas abhi ki kahani hai.”
Amit ne mazaak udane wale andaz me bola, “Haan haan, aur fir kahani ban jaayegi ‘Rohan ka dil, har mahine naye chapter’.”
Rohan zor se hans ke bola, “Chup kar! Chal, class me chalte hain… aaj Priya ke bagal wali seat pe baithne ka plan hai.” Class ke bell bajte hi dono haste-haste andar chale gaye, jaise kuch hua hi na ho.

School khatam hote hi ghar wapas aate hi maa ne khet me paani dene ka kaam de diya. Dhoop tez thi, par kaam to karna hi tha. Lekin Amit ka mann khet me bilkul nahi lag raha tha, khet me paani dena start karke jungle ke taraf nikal gya.

Jungle ke paas ek purani nadi thi, jo hamesha halki-halki awaaz me behati rehti thi. nadi ke bagal me aam ke ped the, jin ki thandi chhaav me baith ke Amit aksar sochta rehta… wo aur uski tanhai, jo sirf wo aur yeh jungle jaante ho.
Fir aage jungle start ho jate hai.
Nadi ke Paani me sooraj ki antim kirnein chamak rahi thi. Aur pass me kuch bakriya char rahi thi.
Aur wahi, ek patthar par baithi hui thi Ek Ladki — safed salwar kameez me, apne lambe baalon ko sehlate hue.
Amit ne pehli baar usse dekha, aur samay jaise ruk gaya.

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Story ki starting toh achhi hai . Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai.
 
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