Incest Waqt ne rishtey badal diye ( maa bete ka chodan with family members)

[will_of_d]

superb and awesome story .. keep it

 

[Love India]

Waiting

 

[prasha_tam]

Outstanding Brilliant Story

Superb Fantastic Update

Please keep it up

 

[Mass]

Ashu yeh story band ho gaya hain kya? Bahut dinon se koi update nahi hain..

 

[aryansharma.1992]

Hau yar... Writer logo ko smjh ni aata

 

[Raj2157]

Story acchi he but jis tarah se update diya he accha nahi laga

 

[Raj2157]

Khich khich ke 20 page tk la di .

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

In kuch dino main mujhe ashu ne ye to ehsaas kara he diya tha ki wo mere Humsafar hai mere proctor hai meri jaan ban gye hai par apni he beti se mujhe compitition mil raha hai par ab mujhe maa hone ka farz bhi nibhana hai
Mujhe ashu se accha damad kaha se milega kirti ke liye is liye mujhe piche hatna hoga aur Ashu ko kirti ke karib lana hoga yehi ek acchi maa ke farz hote hai .
Tabhi
Ashu - jyada dimag chalane ki jarurat nahi hai Anushka
Ye sun kar maine Ashu ko dekha to wo muskura rahe the

Main - matlab
Ashu - matlab tu sub samajh rahi hai agar tujhe lagta hai ki tu mere se bach sakti hai to teri galatfehmi hai ye aur mujhe khich kar apne se chipka liya.
Main abhi bhi soch rahi thi ki kya ashu ne mere mann ki baat padh li hai.
Hum ne taxi ki aur hotel aa gye jaha bari bari se fresh huye aur kapde change kiye
Aur Ashu hame dekhte rahe par unki nazar mere liye gandi wali thi matlab pati patni wali par kirti ke liye ek dum normal' wali .

Pata nahi kya such main kirti badal gai thi ya ye koi uska plan tha pata nahi pad raha tha.

Par haan itna tha ki ashu mere karib aate ja rahe the aur main bhi par kirti ab mujhe rok rahi thi kyu ki mere liye ab ashu aur kirti dono ka future jyada important tha na ki mera .

Par mere raja to kuch aur he paln kar ke baithe the kyu ki jab hum naha liye to Ashu kuch der main aata hu bol kar chale gye maine kafi pucha par nahi bataya par karib 3 ghante ke baad unki call aai ki bacchiyo ko le kar niche aa jao jaha is number ki taxi hogi wo tum logo ko mere pass le kar aa jayegi maine pucha bhi par nahi bataya aur hum karib 40 minutes ke baad ashu ke pass pahuch gye jo ek mandir sa tha jaha pandit ji the main kuch samjhi nahi par Ashu ne pata nahi kirti aur rashmika ko kya kaha wo mujhe le kar rahi par ek room main aa gai aur mujhe tyar karne lagi ek dulhan ke jode main.
Main puchti rahi par wo kuch nahi boli aur jab main bahar aai to Ashu bhi dulhe ke jode main the toh maine Kirti aur rashmika ko dekha to

Kirti- aj abhi ap ki aur papa ki shadi hai maa aur hum dono betiya kitni khushkismat hai ki apne ye maa papa ki shadi kara rahi hai aur mujhe ashu ke pass le jane lagi par main kirti ko dekh rahi thi kyu ki uska chehra udas tha par wo khush hone ka natak kar rahi thi .
Jab main ashu ke pass pahuchi to

Ashu - Qayamat lag rahi ho meri jaan


Ye sun kar main sarma gai par kirti wali baat
pandit ji ke hone ki bajah se maine Ashu se kuch nahi kaha aur uske baad wo hua jo duniya main kahi nahi hota ek maa bete ki shadi betiyo ke samne hue mere bete ne meri mang sindur se bhari aur apne naam ka mangalsutra mere gale main pehna diya aur main kisi dulhan ki tarah unke pairo main jhuk gai unke aashirwad ke liye toh unhone mujhe sub ke samne apne gale se laga liya aur uske baad ek family photograph ka program hua phir hum ghar aaye matlab hotel aaye is pure raste mujhe wahi ehsaas hua jo ek dulhan ko apni sasural aate waqt hota hai


Aur sub se shocking tha hotel room ka kisi suhagraat ke kamre ki tarah decoration hona .
Jisse dekh kar maine Ashu ko dekha par
Ashu - ye mera nahi teri dono betiyon ka idea tha Anushka ye sun kar maine un dono ko dekha to wo muskura di aur srif itna boli
Enjoy your honeymoon maa and papa aur hum se gale mili aur room se bahar jane lagi
Main - tum kaha ja rahi ho
Rashmika - ab kya honeymoon par bhi ap ke sath rahe
Papa ne dusra room book Kara Diya hai Goa he ap ka honeymoon destinations hai jo ap ka sapna tha to enjoy kar milte hai dinner thodi der main ap ko serve ho jayega
Now enjoy and bye aur room ka darwaja band kar diya aur main ashu ki ankho main dekh rahi thi jaha srif aur srif khusi ka ehsas tha

Tha to mere andar bhi par mujhe thoda dukh kirti ka ho raha tha par usse jyada Khushi apni shadi ko le kar thi jo mere Ashu se hue thi aur main phir se suhagan ho gai thi apne bete ki suhagan.

Bhai story end ho gayi kya

 

[gop1]

Bhai story end ho gayi kya

Lagta to esa hi h

 

[Story Collector]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words tak ho sakti hai. Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. . Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writers ko Awards k alawa Cash prizes bhi milenge jinki jaankaari rules thread mein dedi gayi hai, Total 7000 Rupees k prizes iss baar USC k liye diye jaa rahe hain, sahi Suna aapne total 7000 Rupees k cash prizes aap jeet shaktey hain issliye derr matt kijiye or apni kahani likhna suru kijiye.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 28th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar shakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Rules Check karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Rules & Queries Thread

Contest ke regarding Chit Chat karne ke liye is thread ka use karein — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	3000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
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Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

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